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View Full Version : Special Prince Of Hawks Sneak Peek! (the book I'm writing) KEBSD 03-03-2006, 04:48 AM Mods close this. KEBSD KEBSD 03-03-2006, 04:58 AM Sorry for double post but... if anyone wants to hear more I have more to write. KEBSD acenima 03-03-2006, 05:12 AM when is it out in stores and how much will it be? KEBSD 03-03-2006, 05:15 AM LOL. It hasn't been published. KEBSD EyeBK 03-03-2006, 05:17 AM when is it out in stores and how much will it be? :eek: Hopefully, in the near future. KEBSD 03-04-2006, 12:29 AM I updated the sneak peek. Just say if you want more. KEBSD FantasyBlueBoy 03-04-2006, 12:33 AM Sounds like a good story! katgal 03-04-2006, 12:41 AM Wow nice so far.. I would love to read more.. :) DarknessGirl 03-04-2006, 12:45 AM cool, but i am more into eerie stuff... I put stories on here and No One Responded and it made me feel bad, but atleast ur getting good advice and wat-not! bunnygoogles 03-04-2006, 12:47 AM that is so tottally awesomeness KEBSD i can't wait to hear more! jackanddabeat 03-04-2006, 12:57 AM Well I have a writing fever and i have to post on somthin the next part jackanddabeat 03-04-2006, 01:00 AM I then look behind me, nothing. I continued looking at the mirrior my- refletion was not there! Instead the was a boy, with pale blue skin , coal black hair, and eyes as red a night. "Hello" me said. I screamed running away out the room. I went to bed that night, but coulnt get the boy out of my mind. Was it really haunted? Why was he there? I decided to go back to the mirror. I looked back into the mirror. Nothing. Just a trick played by my eyes. Probly the light. "Light?" "Wow you really are slow" I heard. "Gah! where are you!" "I am everywhere" Then The boy appred in the mirror again Only his face was even more pale than before, and he had fangs and glove HUGE gloves that were clwed at the end. He then mutterd a few words and dissaperd. I still looked in the mirror. I was no longer a person. I was a hawk. Yeah! i like that cliffy! come on this is gold! A few typos but gold baby! KEBSD 03-04-2006, 02:48 AM I wrote more :) KEBSD Poohdent 03-04-2006, 03:38 AM very good key you are very talented :xmas24: |