View Full Version : My Farewell Poem to VMK


Deeda
05-22-2008, 02:18 AM
Someday I think I’ll realize the reality of your absence
Some day I think I’ll realize you’re gone
But I can always think of you as being here beside me
So I can love you while still moving on

I’ll miss the way you always seemed to think that
Flaws and faults never mattered anyway
I used to wonder if you ever had them
But now I know you do ‘cause you won’t stay

In my time of darkness you were always shining bright
You made me clearly realize that there is more to life
The times we shared I won’t forget until the time is right
Your memory will guide me through the night

It's not very good because I wrote it in like 5-10 minutes, but I hope you enjoy it and it reflects your emotions on VMK's closure. Or something.

2starTagregory
05-22-2008, 02:23 AM
I like it :)

Deeda
05-22-2008, 02:26 AM
Thanks! As I was writing it I kept thinking about Carly Simon. o_0

2starTagregory
05-22-2008, 02:32 AM
Heres mine:

It's not right, its not fair,
To take away your ability to share.
Your wonderful theme parks, taken away
Cause all you want is more mon-ay

Thats not good, you arent nice,
Taking away all these memories, you'll pay the price
You've been bad before, but now you got bored
And took it out on the kids only way to explore
Your wonderful theme parks, without leaving home.
You now have less visits, and more to Rome.

VMK was our escape from the bad of real life,
You've taken that away and you'll pay the price

GenieLovato
05-22-2008, 02:33 AM
I luved it!

Deeda
05-22-2008, 10:07 PM
Heres mine:

It's not right, its not fair,
To take away your ability to share.
Your wonderful theme parks, taken away
Cause all you want is more mon-ay

Thats not good, you arent nice,
Taking away all these memories, you'll pay the price
You've been bad before, but now you got bored
And took it out on the kids only way to explore
Your wonderful theme parks, without leaving home.
You now have less visits, and more to Rome.

VMK was our escape from the bad of real life,
Youve taken that away and you'll pay the price
ou a
That's kind of funny. "more mon-ay!" It really says how upset you are about this whole thing. It's really good.

AverageBlueGirl
06-01-2008, 10:05 PM
I really like the poem it really opens my heart because VMK is closed

Shartruse
06-02-2008, 01:46 AM
I really like your poem(Haha better poet than I'll ever be in a lifetime O_O) and it does tell the truth for many :)