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04-21-2008, 10:32 PM
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A story about when Jake and Haley face their last days on VMK, Based on The Characters on The Homepage

Main Characters:

Jake is the Main Male Character of the Story, His Favorite Food is Pizza, has Access to the Virtual Magic Kingdom Homepage, VMK's MOST HIDDEN ROOM! He is VERY jealous that PMFan seems to have more appearances then Jake and Haley's appearances added together, He Seems to be Crushing on Haley...

Haley is the Main Female character of the story, Her Favorite Color is Pink and Purple, She also has access to the VMK Homepage, Her Favorite Food is Ice Cream, Her Favorite Flavor of Ice Cream is Cookies and Cream, Her Best Friend is Jake, She is very Nice though she has the rarest thing of all: Green Sandals!

Sparky (First Appearance: Episode 14) is the Villian of the Story, He's Trying to Take Over VMK before it even closes, No One, Not Even Jake nor Haley Know His Secret, Not even YAVN! His Schemes have been effecting VMK, Not even YOU Know about.. His Schemes about... OOPS, Almost Spilled It!

PMFan is a Secondary Character that Usually appears. He has the biggest secret of all, Yavn Knows about it but shhh.... He Won't Spill, I'll Tell You.... He Is VMK's hero Lightning_Crash

Lightning_Crash ( First Apperance: Episode 8 ) is VMK's Hero! He Has Saved Many VMK Citicens from the Dangers of Crashing and Lag, Can He Save VMK It Self Though...
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Episode 1: The Announcement
( One Day, Jake is reading the newsletter Yavn sent and then.... )
Jake: Hey Haley, Have you heard VMK is Closing?
Haley: Yeah, VMK was Launched as a Promotion for Disneyland's 50th Celebration
Jake: Wah!!
Haley: Dont Cry Jake.. other people are sad..
PMFan: Not helping..
Jake: But I Want More Stuff!
Haley: There is alot of unrealeased stuff like.. MAGIC!
PMFan: Magic..
Jake: Gimme Gimme Gimme!
Haley: Just say cool then we'll leave
Jake: Cool!
Haley: Ok Let's Go!
( Jake and Haley Leave, PMFan was going to until VMK_Opal comes in! )
VMK_Opal: Hey! PMFan your not an infamous Duo but well known..
PMFan: What! I'm They're Friend!
VMK_Opal:Just dont come here ever again
PMFan: Hey.. arent you fired for using VMK Pal
VMK_Opal: No! That's 99.99% False
PMFan: Do You even work on VMK??
VMK_Opal:.. Who Told You!
PMFan: - Takes off wig and it's Alphagarry -
PMFan: Hey.. i can report you for that!
Alphagarry: Ah! Gotta Go!
PMFan: -_-

( Later on VMK News! )

Mandy: Welcome to your Local news! Today's top story: Virtual World Closes! Disney is to close Virtual Magic Kingdom, a virtual game! Currently there is an outcry! You may be you but I'm Mandy Mad!

( On VMK )

Jake: Hey Alphagarry
HOST_Tony: Who's he??
Jake:-_- ( takes off wig )
2starTagregory: -_- Not cool
Alphagarry: Hey! That was my disguise
HOST_Richer: Well at least im the real HOST!
Haley:.. Woah! a Host! - Haley takes off Richer's wig -
Yavn: Aww Come On! Is This going to be a running gag in the series??
PMFan: Idk.. Will you give me a Bird Hat
Yavn: No..
PMFan: Then.. - takes off wis and it's Yavn.. again! -
Yavn: Awkward
HOST_Lily: Silly Lily is..
Yavn: - pulls out wig but it's really Lily! -
HOST_Lily: Dont do that!
( Yavn gets banned )
PMFan: Awkward..

Episode 2: VMK Mailfunction!
Jake: - sigh -
Haley: What's Wrong??
Jake: Nothing...
Haley: It's ok, You Can Tell Me Tell me :smile:
Jake: Ok.. My friend left VMK!
Haley: Who?
Jake: I Don't Know!
( Jake,Haley and everyone crashes for some unknown reason )
Mandy Mad: Today's Top Story, VMK's Link Removal Causes Weird Things to happen on VMK!
Jake ( Outside VMK ): What was that all about?
( The next day, Haley comes in VMK just to find All VMK items cost 100000000 credits now )
Haley: Wow! Mandy Mad was right, VMK does have some bugs
( Jake comes out to find out he has 10 star Inferno Magic )
Jake: Inferno! ( Spell lasts for 10 minutes )
Haley: Wow... 10 star!
Jake: Wow. I Even have a Limited Edition Yavn Pin!
( VMK_Red comes in )
Jake: Hi VMK_Red!
VMK_Red: Hi
Jake: Have you heard weird things happening on VMK?
VMK_Red: Yes i have!
Jake: well then, Red , 2 weird things happened to me, 1: I Have 10 star Dancing Inferno Magic, and 2 I Have a.. ( Jake Crashes )
Haley: Well.. at the shops, ALL ITEMS cost like a billion credits
VMK_Red: We'll Look up into that.

( Later on VMK News )
Mandy Mad: VMK is to look up in the weird problems following link removal, I know your you and I'm Mandy Mad!

Episode 3: Club 33 news!
PMFan:Hi!
Jake:Hi!
PMFan:Hi!
Jake:Hi...
( This goes on for like 10 minutes counting the times when VMK Told them to be quiet )
PMFan: Guess what!
Jake:What?
PMFan: I'm Going to Club 33!
Jake: No way!
PMFan: Apparantly, VMK is having a " Goodbye Party " on May 4th
Jake: -_- ill find my own club
( HOST_Phinny comes )
HOST_Phinny: Im throwing a " Before VMK Closes you will be invted to Club 33 Party because it's one of your goals " Party..
PMFan: We Know
Jake: Let me check.. - pulls mickey ears off -
HOST_Phinny: Jake , why did you have to do that??
Jake: What! Have you heard people are impersonating staff??
HOST_Phinny: Just because PMFan made it a running gag!
PMFan: -_-
Jake: I'll take 2 please, 1 for me and 1 for Haley ( Jake looks at a picture of Haley and If you look closely, you can see small hearts in his eyes... )
(HOST_Phinny gives Jake the tickets )
PMFan: Hey you with the computer.. That's giving you a hint to something!
HOST_Phinny: Who is he talking to?
PMFan: No one :Question:
HOST_Phinny: There is alot of VMK Staff going around giving free tickets to Lily's Room! All Staff will be there
( HOST_Lily comes in the room ) It's Silly Lily!
HOST_Lily: PMFan, your some other friend are invited to my party!
PMFan: Now... Who am I Taking....
(HOST_Lily gives PMFan the tickets )
PMFan: Thanks,
HOST_Lily: Np!
PMFan: Well i wonder if My Friend Would Like To Come
( PMFan messages his friend )

( Later on VMK News )

Steve Stern: On May 4th, HOST_Lily is to throw gigantic party in honor of it's closing now back to you Mandy Mad!
Mandy Mad: I feel bad for you so here's Mandy Mad saying... I Feel sorry for you! Now You might be you but I'm Mandy Mad!

Episode 4: Weird messages..
( a few days later when yavn gets unbanned.. )

Yavn: caffdawg, i g2g do something real quick so if i can just..
caffdawg: No! My keyboard!
yavn: caffdawg, you want a fight ill give you a fight...
( Ninja music starts playing while yavn and caffdawg fight over a keybored... while VMK keeps getting weird messages thanks to them )
( On VMK )

Jake : Hold on, i just got a message!
( Jakes message says: *mfk )
Jake: Awkward..
Haley: Wow VMK is getting weird messages!
( People get more messages saying stuff like " givemememe " and " 404errorah " )
PMFan: wow.. yavn and dog are wild!
( Back to the fight )

Yavn : come on! give me the..

( VMK News live )

Mandy Mad: This is Mandy Mad on location! There is currently a fight between 2 VMK Staff members over a ( snickers ) keyboard ( laughs alot )

caffdawg : Lady! Watch out!
( The fight pushes Mandy Mad to the cameraman causing the camera itself to break )

Steve Stern: Hello? Anyone there? Oh well...

( Back on VMK )

Jake : Woah! VMK'ers shouldn't be using language like that...
( people in backround start laughing )
Jake: This isn't Hannah Montana!
Haley: Wow.. ipod.. fireworks.. anything they would put on messages
( PMFan gets a message, it says: Give me back that keyboard you.. )
PMFan: OK.. a little mild language here...
Jake: Yeah, yavn should win he just got unbanned by that Lily incident..
( Jake looks back.. )
Haley: Yeah that was funny!

(Back on yavn's fight)
( yavn and caffdawg breathe heavily )
Yavn: ok.. you will have it *holds up white flag* i give up!
caffdawg: really? Thanks!
( yavn faints )

( Back on VMK News )

Steve Stern: Ok, here's a fight recap, yavn and caffdawg needed a keyboard then they started fighting and then sent weird VMK messages with bad language, then Mandy Mad got.. well hurt, then later yavn - gulp - gave up... See ya!
( End )

Episode 5: Club 33
( It's May 4th 2008, A Club 33 party is going on.. )

( In Queue )
PMFan: I Can't Wait!
Jake: Me 2!
Haley: Me 3!
( In Club 33, Vienna comes to Jake and... )
Vienna: Can I Have your 10 star inferno Jake?
Jake: No.
Vienna: Please
Jake: No!
( this went on for like another hour )
Vienna: Ok fine...
tiedyegirl: Hey, VMK_Red? Can I Take a pic
VMK_Red: Sure
( they take a pic )
(Alphagarry enters the room, you remember him!)
PurpleBeforeCorner: Hey! Your the one who Impersonated VMK_Opal!
Alphagarry: What? Come on! He or She is a fake!
( an angry mob chases him )
PMFan: The angry mob better not...
( the angry mob runs over PMFan )
PMFan:.. run... over.. me..
tiedyegirl: Hey HOST_Lily, Can I Take a Pic?
HOST_Lily: Sure!
( they take a pic )
HOST_Lily: Hugs with ammo!
PMFan: I think im going to like this party...
( People on VMK are still chasing Alphagarry when Acefredfred enters the room )
Alphagarry: Ah!!
( everyone in Mob laughs at Acefredfred then keeps chasing Alphagarry )
Alphagarry: Wow! a 10 second head start!
( an VMK news person under disquise enters )
MegaMandyMad: Wow! This is live MegaMandyMad Live!
Alphagarry: PMFan! Dude! You have got to help me!
PMFan: Well... because VMK Opal never was on VMK...
( HOST_Lily comes in to Clear everything )
HOST_Lily: Alphagarry, Please stop impersonating staff, maybe that will stop those ( In louder voice ) Annoying Mobs!
( Angry Mob stops chasing Alphagarry )
HOST_Lily: Thank You ( leaves )
Jake: HOST_Lily, i think my 10 star infeno should be no more, here ( gives HOST_Lily 10 Star Dancing Inferno )
HOST_Lily: Thanks
Vienna: Aww.. bye bye inferno :Unhappy:
Haley: It was only from a glitch :Unhappy:
tiedyegirl: Can I Take a picture with you...
(tiedyegirl gets booted, got to crazy with staff )
Jake: That was weird
PMFan: Oh Boy, 1 more minute until VMK Closes..
( Everybody counts down from 10 until 1 and then VMK Closes.. leaving a blank screen )
( Later on VMK News )
Mandy Mad: There you have it! A Party with a countdown to end, but the adventure is not over yet :Wink:

Episode 6: The Host, the frog, and the producer :
( One day, a " HOST_Violet " was walking down with Yavn enjoying a beautiful day when suddenly.... HOST_Violet turns Yavn into a frog! )
HOST_Violet: hehe..
( Later on VMK News )
Steve Stern: Woah! For a Breif second there we thought Yavn was a frog! Oh Well, according to Yavn, He is also in the fight to stop VMK From Closing.... Good Luck all you VMK'ers out there!
( Back On VMK, PMFan and Jake are having some random conversation about.... )
PMFan: This yavn is a fake!
Jake: No he isn't
PMFan: No he isn't!
Jake: Yes He is!
PMFan: Haha Cought Ya!
Jake: Argh!!
( Yavn comes in the room )
Yavn: Hello Kids!
PMFan: Hello ' Yavn ' or should i say.. (tries to get wig of but it's not a wig )
Jake: :Oh!
Yavn: Do that 1 more time and you will be banned!
PMFan: Wow. he's real!
Jake: With Haley on vacation and caffdawg banned due to a fight
( Flashback at that fight )
Caffdawg: Do You want a piece of me...
( Caffdawg gets banned, back to the present )
PMFan: Wow
Jake: I Got It! We need this ( holds up a full bottle of : Remove-A-Spell )
PMFan: Just dump some on that yavn and see that it's...
( Jake dumps some RAS and " Yavn " transforms back into prinsess_chloe!! )
prinsess_chloe: Oh Drat!
( The Yavn Frog comes in the room, Jake dumps the rest of the RAS and the frog becomes Yavn again )
Yavn: prinsess_chloe. time for you to get banned!
prinsess_chloe: -_-
( prinsess_chloe gets banned until the last day! )

Episode 7: 10 Star Flying Carpets??
( One day StitchMayhem was walking down the glitchy magic shop, when he got some kind of glitch earning him....)
StitchMayhem: 10 star Flying Carpet Magic?!?! Woosh!
( StitchMayhem activates the magic )
Jake: that reminds me when i got 10 star inferno.
StitchMayhem: Wow.. but this more rarer! ( laughs evily )
( PMFan comes in and says.. )
PMFan: You Got 10 STAR Flying Carpet Magic?!?!
( goes crazy then faints )
Haley : What?? ( does the same )
StitchMayhem: Yeah! I Hope i dont lose it like when Jake Did..
Jake: I Gave it to Lily! Silly
( HOST_Lily comes in and StitchMayhem hides his magic )
HOST_Lily: I Can see it!
StitchMayhem: Ah!
( StitchMayhem goes through a bunch of stuff to get away from HOST_Lily but she goes there anyway )
StitchMayhem: Whew!
( The Next Day... )
StitchMayhem: I Better not see HOST_Lily...
HOST_Lily: Hello! ( evil laugh )
StitchMayhem: Ah!
( StitchMayhem runs again )
StitchMayhem: That was close
( The Same Thing Happened for a few hours so.. to make the episode shorter ill have a conversation with me and Jake )
Jake: Why am i not really in the story???
PMFan: Because It cant be all about you and Haley
Jake: Oh..
( Back to the story )
StitchMayhem: Ah!
HOST_Lily: Gimme!
( StitchMayhem Runs until he and Jake bump in to each other making Jake him Faint )
( HOST_Lily takes the magic )
StitchMayhem: Drat!!
HOST_Lily: I Can ban you for that
( HOST_Lily leaves )
StitchMayhem: Why!!
( Trumpet Music Plays )
PMFan: Moral: Never Under-estimate Lily's Power
StitchMayhem: There is no Moral!
( StitchMayhem goes crazy and faints )
PMFan: Why do People keep fainting??
Jake: I Dont Know
( PMFan holds a sign that says The End )
Jake: I Dont Remember that happening in the other episodes
( PMFan Pushes Jake of the screen and keeps holding the sign )
THE END!

Episode 8: Lightning_Crash
( one day, a mysterious Player named Lightning_Crash Comes to VMK...)
Lightning_Crash: Hello
Jake: Hi..
Lightning_Crash: I'm New but not new at the same time...
Jake: Alternate account?
Lightning_Crash: hmm.. something like that
Jake: Ok.. Well " Welcome " to VMK.
Lightining_Crash: Thanks
( Lightning_Crash feels something dangerous )
Lightning_Crash: I Feel DANGER...
Jake: Huh?
( Haley Comes In )
Haley: Hi Jake
Jake: Hi
( Lightning_Crash sees the LAG MONSTER! )
Lightning_Crash: Lag can't beat the power of.. ( Deep Voice ) LIGHTNING CRASH!
( Lightning_Crash zaps the Lag Monster like a cog, having him explode, then Lightning_Crash Jumps Down from Mid-Air as if the fight was on a building )
Jake: Yo.. You saved our lifes from lag..
( Lightning_Crash Disappears, Behind Jake and Haley )
Jake: What was that??
Haley: I Don't Know
Jake: Let's go to the castle, I Need more VMK not Mysterys
Haley: Ok
( Lightning_Crash Remains in the room, thus having him zap back to PMFan without anyone noticing )
PMFan: VMK has a new hero...

( Later on VMK News )
Steve Stern: VMK has a new hero named Lightning_Crash. This is NOT a mystery.. just Who Is He and How Did He Get in VMK??
( Lightning_Crash flies through a cloud, making the cloud transform into the words " THE END.. FOR NOW " )

Episode 9: Leaving VMK!
( One day, Jake was feeling a little sad, thinking then deciding.. it was time! )
Haley: What! You Can't Leave VMK Jake
Jake: Sorry, but it's time I have to go Haley
Haley: But Remember all the good times!
( Jake thinks of a montoge of the great times they had )
Jake: Sorry Haley, but, I have to go....
Haley: Please ( Grabs him by the legs ) Don't go!
Jake: Sorry but i have to..( Leaves Room)
( Later in the day, Jake opened a room saying that he's leaving VMK)
Haley: Please Don't Go!
Jake: Sorry, but I Have to!
( HOST_Hurricane comes in)
HOST_Hurricane: You know, if you leave you can never come back
Jake: Uh oh... I might want to come back :Unhappy:
Haley: Well Then Stay! I know you want to...
Jake: Ok! But under one condition..
( Later in the day, Jake gets Flying Carpet Magic)
Jake: Yay! Ok I'll stay
Haley: Yay, I was going to leave also!
Jake: At least we're staying... I Wonder what's in store for us.....
( A Portal in Fantasyland Opens... )

Episode 10: The Portal
( One Day a Mysteryous portal had appeared in VMK... )
( Jake walks down at the castle gate then he notices some weird Toons on VMK)
Jake: Hello?
Sparkle Sparkleflip: Hello!
Haley: Wow! VMK is teaming up with..
( Captian Rockhopper comes from another portal )
Captian Rockhopper: Arggh.. What is this??
PMFan: Aren't you supposed to be in club peinguin?
Captian Rockhopper: Arggh! VMK is closing so i might as well... come here
PMFan: At least i finally meet him ;)
Haley: What's Next?? We see...
Hannah Montana: What's Up VMK!
Haley:--- Hannah Montana...
PMFan and Jake: Hannah Montana!!
( More and more people come from a portal )
( Stitch steals Jake's 10 Star Inferno!)
Jake: Hey! That's Mine!
( Stitch gives the inferno back )
Kim Possible: What's The Sitch??
Jake: What's next? I see Jake Long?
Jake Long: That's excactly what happens!
PMFan: Wow! A portal leading to other worlds before VMK Closes
Yavn: We Won't close it.... but i wont relaese...
( An angry mob chases yavn )
Yavn: OK!
Cory: Wow... VMK Looks tight!
Mickey: Wow.. sadly the hidden me quest is over!
PMFan: Wow.. this is a running gag!
Goofy: I Have Gags! Running gags, gross gags, and my favorite: funny gags ( Throws A Pie at Jackson )
Jackson: -_-
Hannah Montana : Thank you! Good night everybody ( switches to Miley Stewert )
Sparkle Sparkleflip: Cogs better not come here!
PMFan: Well................. This is so weird
yavn: I have GOT to get this portal closed..
( another angry mob chases yavn )
HOST_Lily: Wow, What's Next??
Rodger Rabbit: This is next! ( throws a pie at silly lily )
HOST_Lily : Tastes like apple pie...
PMFan : What other suprizes await us VMK? What other surprizes?

( Later on VMK News )
Steve Stern: Today's top story: VMK has a strange portal opening to other Disney Worlds. Will it be a threat to VMK? Or is it a treat?? See ya!

Episode 11: Cogs are Taking Over!
( On VMK, you can see Jake, Haley, and PMFan just walking on Main Street when suddenly.. )
Cog 1: You Must Surrender.....
( Jake and Haley Scream Like a Girl )
PMFan: LOL
( Jake and Haley Push PMFan into the Gog )
PMFan: I'll Get Help...
( PMFan goes behind the building and turns into... )
Lightning_Crash: LIGHTNING!
( Lightning_Crash Crashes the Cog back into Toontown )
yavn: That Portal is getting Intense!
( Ferb from " Phineas and Ferb " Nods )
Phineas ( Ghost ): Hey.. You're Not my Long Lost Brother
( Lightning_Crash notices that more cogs are a commin' )
Lightning_Crash: Time to take this.. Personally!
( Lightning_Crash gets Zapped Up, Ready to destroy all cogs in VMK )
Lightning_Crash: Bye Bye Cogs!
( Lightning_Crash does his most powerful Lightning Strike causing all cogs but 1 to explode in the sky )
Lightning_Crash: Explode....
( The Cog Explodes )
Lightning_Crash: There..
Lightning_Crash: O.o
( Yavn points to the guy next to him )
( on the spot the explosion happened... there was someone PMFan himself knew )
Lightning_Crash: Huh.....
( The Person goes away )
(Lightning_Crash goes in the same building and turns back into PMFan )
PMFan: So Anything Happen
Jake: Why does this story revolve around you...
PMFan: Uh... What Story
( PMFan pulls a sheet down that says " The End " but... )
Jake: I Guess you don't want to see Miley Cyrus also..
PMFan: What Miley Cyrus...
Jake: I Guess You should take a rest
PMFan: What Rest?
Jake: Your Brainwashed again aren't you?
PMFan: What Brainwash?
( THE END )

Episode 12: An Empty Feeling
( One Day. Jake Felt So.. So Lonley, ( Note: This Happened during the story " Oh No! I'm Trapped in VMK " ) Haley hasn't been talking to him, PMFan and HOST_Sparky was missing... what else could go wrong?? )
Jake: ( Sighs ) When will something happen? If Do Something Bad??
( VMK Staff Come by )
VMK_Toni,VMK_Tiger, VMK_Cat ,Host_Harmony ,HOST_Hula, HOST_Phinny, and Yavn: You're Gonna Do Something Bad??
Jake: NO!
( The Staff leave )
( Jake sighs and walks to the Snow White Forest )
Jake: PMFan told me this was the best place to just.. get away from it all.. when it's empty ( voice echos )
Jake: If Only Haley was Here.. we would do something
( Jake thinks of all the good times they had and ends up going to sleep )
Haley: Jake.. Jake?? Hello???
Jake: Huh? Where am I??
Haley: The Remains of VMK...
( Jake and Haley look at what was left of VMK: A Tree )
Haley: Yes Yes... Muahahahahaha!
Jake: Haley.. What are you...
( Haley is seen Nowhere.. but an EVIL yavn is at her place )
( Jake is surprized )
Jake: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( Jake wakes up screaming : NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! )
yavn: Ok Ok. We Get It, now time for you to be BANNED...
Jake: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( Jake wakes up AGAIN! Screaming the same thing: NO!!!! )
caffdawg: Dude, stop screaming or else....
( Jake Screams again.. You know how it goes )
Jake: At Least This revolves around ME!
( Jake gets in a number for himself )
Director: No Musical Numbers!
Jake: Ok Ok! Sheesh.
( Jake sighs then walks to the forecourt, it's near VMK's Closure for the day anyway... )
( Jake Starts Dancing.. alone.. starts his magic alone... Saying goodbye ALONE )
Jake: ( sigh ) it's days like this when I wish VMK would stay forever
( a minute before VMK Closes and Haley... appears... )
Haley: I Just dropped of to say hi.. and bye...
( Haley joins him half a minute before the kingdom closes, just doing the most random things. thus ending the day )

Episode 13: AH! Bad Luck!
( Uh Oh.. Ever since That Portal has opened, BAD LUCK HAS BEEN HAPPENING! *runs around screaming* )
Jake: STOP IT!
Director/Narrator: Fine!
( At The most unluckeist plase in VMK! THE..... DUNGEON )
PMFan: Uh.. eh...
( Fire is comming his way )
PMFan: AH!!!!
( PMFan gets out of the room in an instant )
PMFan: Omg! That was...
( PMFan Looks in his Inventory )
PMFan: WHERE IS MY INFERNO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( He Lost his DANCING INFERNO! )
( In Jake's Room )
Jake: Why can we say words not in the dictionary
Haley: It's a story, It's not like the VMK Dictionary got disabled.
Jake: So...
Haley: - gasp - HOW DARE YOU!
( Haley slaps Jake and pushes him in the fountian )
Jake: Ugh..
( In The Magic Checkers )
( Jake is walking through the room, people keep losing and their credits keep getting drained )
PMFan: Dude! Do Ya Know What's Happening????
Jake: Wait??
PMFan: Guess VMK Broken
Jake: Wat??
PMFan: Said, VMK Dictionary Stopped Working
( Haley busts in )
Haley: Just Heard! VMK stopped Working Dictionary
Jake: Yeah!
PMFan: Must... Find.. Way...
( Later, Jake and Haley busts into Yavn's HQ )
Jake: Yavn, Did ya know that---
Yavn: VMK Has Gone Glitchy with bad luck, THAT'S EVEN EFFECTED ME!
Jake: Wow... I Knew U Weren't Evil!
Yavn: Who Said I Was Evil??
( Jake Points to a few pictures of players )
Yavn: Oh....
Haley: So Can Ya'll do it for me ( in a sweet voice ) Please???
Yavn: Actually, Im still working on it
Haley: Yes!
( The Next Day )
Yavn: Ok Fixed It!
Jake and Haley : YAY! Thx Yavn, u the best!
Yavn: I No Right!
( PMFan holds a sign that says FIN! )

Episode 14: 10 Star Magic Glitch
( Prologe: Before The 1st apperance of the 10 Star Magic Glitch)
( A Mysteryous Player Only Known as " Sparky " is making a new glitch! )
Sparky: At Last! It Is Finished! The NEVER TO BE RELEASED 10 Star Magic! Muahahaha!
( Something falls on the Vac-Q Robot making it go crazy, forcing it to go inside but it sneezes causing the glitch to go into the glitch box never to be opened or else VMK will be at it's Glitchiest )
Narratior: Hahahaha! Oops.. Erm,Her-Her-Herm... Anyways....
( When 3 HOSTS Find out about some glitch.. here's what happened )
HOST_Hula: Lily?
HOST_Lily: Hula?
HOST_Hula:Phinny?
HOST_Phinny:Lily?
HOST_Lily:Phinny?
All 3 HOSTs: It's Time!
( Back at The Central Plaza )
Jake: For What?
Haley: For 10 Star Magic Glitch to effect ALL of VMK!
MooMooFarm: Omg! Omg! Omg! 10 Star Carpet Magic!
Haley: MooMooFarm??
Jake: LOL!
PinkGirlAwesome: Did You Hear about the New Nemo Magic??
McPinkyPink: I have the new " Turn into Rock Star " Magic!
TottalyAwesomeBoi: So.. Much.. Stars....
PMFan: They Accepted my Idea for Turn Into Turkey Magic? Yay ( Does his Happy Dance )
( PMFan buys 15 pins )
PMFan: So.. What Did I Miss??
Jake: Anyway.. any other Magic??
Goofy: There is the following for sale:
Autopia Pins Off Road: Pink, Blue, Yellow, and Green ,Autopia Pins On Road: Pink, Blue, Yellow, and Green ,Buried In Treasure,Confetti, Cursed Storm, Dancing Inferno, Deep Sea Diving Blue , Fireworks, Flying Carpet, Inner Space Pins: Blue,Pink,Green,Red, and Yellow, Invisibility , Levitation , Lightning, Mr. Toad's Car, Pirate, Snowman, Stitch Spaceship, Stitch Space Vehicle ( Same as above but different spelling ), Teleportation, Test Track Car, Turn Into Bat, Turn Into Cloral, Turn Into Shark, X2 Spaceship Magic, Sword In The Stone, Treasure Detector, Pirate's Treasure Key: Bronze, Silver, and Gold, Checkers: Cut into 2, Levitation, Optical Illusion, Disappearing Act, and Slight of Hand, Turn Into Rock Star, Turn Into Turkey, Turn into Nemo, Dance: Kuzco Dance, Robot, Hula, Disco, Replacement's Dance, Turn Into Bunny, Cut Into Two Magic, Cowboy, Haunted Mansion : Black and Gray, Tower of Terror, Turn Into Cat, Turn Into Dog, Turn Into Wildcat, VMK Staff, Turn Into Mouse, Turn Into Duck!, and last but not least..Turn Into Hero Magic!
Everyone: That's Alot!
Goofy: Exactly!
( The HOSTS come in )
HOST_Lily: EVERYBODY OUT!
( Everyone screms, with HOST_Lily taking their 10 Star Magic
( the 3 Hosts go around getting all 10 star magic from all of VMK )
Jake: And now ya know
Haley: Why we hate Hosts So Much
PMFan: LOL ( Gets pushed off )
Jake and Haley: Fin!

Episode 15: It's Orange, It's White! It's a VMK Holiday
( Once In May, VMK woke up to a surprizing surprize: VMK's Main Street Room Keep Changing! )
( Jake enters VMK and is in a normal room )
Jake: Why is Yavn saying that it's a holiday??
( Jake Goes to Different Room )
( Haley Enters a Halloween Room )
Haley: Ah!!!!! This Ain't much of a Holiday 0-0
( PMFan enters a Christmas Room )
PMFan: w00t! A Holiday!
( PMFan sings and dances )
( Jake, Haley, and PMFan Message Eachother at the SAME TIME! )
Jake To Haley: Did You Know It's NOT a Holiday??
PMFan to Jake : IT'S CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haley to Jake: Happy Halloween.. Who0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0
PMFan to Haley: Look at Ned's Shop!
Jake To PMFan: You are NOT the leader of the story!
( All come to Ned's Shop )
All: WOW... l00k at the Tiki and the Christmas Stuff!
PMFan: Look at the ICE CREAM!
Jake, Haley, and Ned: GET OUT!
( Ned kicks PMFan out )
PMFan: You'll Hear From my Lawyer!
( back in the shop )
Ned: EVERYTHING is for SALE too! 50% Off!
Jake and Haley: EVERYTHING???
Ned: Yes! Everything
( PMFan goes to Fantasyland, discovering that the SPELL ROOM IS BACK! )
PMFan: WOOHOO!
( PMFan Tries out all the spells not knowing they're Poison! )
( When PMFan Gets out )
PMFan: Ugghh... I Dont Feel So Well....
( PMFan logs out of VMK )
( Sparky Comes Back )
Sparky: That's because I Put ESSANCE OF POISON APPLE!
( Duh Duh Dun!!!!! )
Sparky: Would you stop that?!?!,
Now VMK Will BOW TO IT'S KNEES and it will LEND ME VMK if I Dont close it... MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
And now... you know my plan, TO TAKE OVER VMK!
Muahahahahahahaha ahahahahaha hahahaha ahahahahahahahaha *cough cough*
Sorry...

Episode 16th: The Glitchiest Store Of All
( One day at the Emporium, Something Was Happening... )
Sparky: Muahaha! Yavn Will Get So.. Ah! Here They Come!
( The VMK Players Enter )
PinkyPrettyGirl: Oh... Ah...
AwsomeTragicExtreme: Woah!
All VMK Players: Simba Hat, Gray Mansion, Purple Superhero, and Brown Cowboy for 1 CREDIT????
Sparky: Here Comes The Fun Poofer...
( Yavn Enters )
Yavn: What's Happening?
Players: Nothing Yavn...
( Yavn Leaves )
( Players go Crazy )
PMFan: I Never Knew there was a Simba Hat!
Jake: Awesome!
Haley: NO WONDER I GET UP EARLY!
Jake: PMFan, Get Out of the store!
PMFan: Why do you loathe me so much??
Jake: 'Cause, Your Greedy and you dont share
PMFan: I DO SHARE!
( Jake and PMFan get in a fight so big that they get out of the store and yavn comes in )
Sparky: NOW here it comes....
Yavn: AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT YOU ALL OUT!
( Sparky Wakes Up )
Sparky: AH! Oh Ok... The Yavn part was a DREAM!
( something stares at sparky )
Haley: Yo Sparky! Ya Buyin' or what???
( Yavn Comes In )
Sparky: This is a dream, this is a dream, this is a dream
Yavn ( Mimicking Sparky's Tone ): This ain't a dream, This ain't a dream, This ain't a dream
PMFan: Would yavn EVER be that evil??
Jake: YES!
PMFan: NO!
Both: It's ON!
( Both of them start fighting again but Haley breaks them up )
Yavn: I Have heard reports of items on sale for a cheap price... I WANT ALL OF THEM!
( An angry mob forms )
Yavn: CALM DOWN! CALM DOWN! Sheesh, Why does this happen to me??
Jake: 'Cause ur evil
Yavn: I AM NOT! Wait... didnt u agree that i wasnt evil??
Jake: I Felt Bad for u
Yavn: FINE. Ill just higher the prices
Jake: Typical...
PMFan: Hey, He Aint Evil!
Yavn: Ok... See ya in a few days... Bye
( yavn logs off )
Sparky: Drat! This Close!

Episode 17: Sparky's Attack
Sparky: I MUST Take Over VMK,
Its near my last chance... I Have used my alternate account for this second to last,
I Also MUST get my enemy out of the picture... LIGHTNING CRASH! Muahahahaha
ahhahahahahaahahhhaaahahahahaha..ha..ah....
( Outside The Castle Forecourt )
Jake: Hey l00k! It's Lightning Crash!
Lightning_Crash: How Do??
Jake: Alright
Haley: Hurry Up Jake! The HOST Event that everyone is invited to will be on in less then a minute
Lightning_Crash: Sounds cool, but I Hear DANGER...
Jake: Well Ok, See Ya
Lightning_Crash: Bye...
( At HOST_Sparky's Event )
HOST_Sparky: GREETINGS my fello VMK'ers, What's gonna happen might make some slight.. make that GIGANTIC, GI-NORMUS, ANYTHING THAT MEANS BIG.. CHANGES!
(HOST_Sparky Hypnotices all VMK'ers but Lightning_Crash/PMFan)
( HOST_Sparky turns back into Sparky )
Sparky: Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha--- ahahahahahahahahahaha----hahahahahaha....haha...aha...ha......a....
( Sparky continues laughing )
Lightning_Crash: Did i hear ya say.. EVIL??
Sparky: You'll never defeat Me. or my army of VMK'ers, now I RULE VMK AND NO ONE CAN EVER CLOSE MY KINGDOM *laughs again* VMK'ers, ATTACK CRASH
( One Milisecond Later, Sparky is tied on to a rocket to nowhere )
Sparky: Ban You Lightning Crash! Ban You so that you cant go on VMK Ever A----
( The Rocket starts flying )
Sparky: GAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNN....
---kaboom---
( Lightning_Crash Deactivates the Hypno-Machine )
Jake: Woa, Thanks LC, We would have been under a HOST to be Fired..
( In The Distiance )
Yavn: Sparky! You Are FIRED!
Sparky: Who Cares! Ill Be..
( 1 second later )
Sparky:( Tied Up ) I Will Get My Vengance! Oh Yea... I Will Get My.. -He gets pushed down somewhere deep -
Sparky:Vaaaannnnngggaaannncccccceee......
--thump--
Sparky: Im Ok,Just some Pillows
( On The Screen )
Jake: Care to do the honors Light?
Lightning_Crash: Gladly...
( Lightning Crash Dims the lights and makes a poster out of Thunder Bolts Saying " End " )
Haley, Jake, and Lightning_Crash: See ya Soon!

Episode 18: That Whale!
( on VMK News )
Mandy Mad: News Reports saying that there is a New NPC on VMK.. Who is it??
( On VMK )
( Monstro Blows Water at PMFan )
Jake: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
( Donald Duck aims the whale's water to Jake )
PMFan: No Comment...
Haley: Uh.. Donald...
( Donald laughs )
( A Note From The Author )
Author: Uh.........
PMFan: *pushes author* This Episode is to promote other episodes and...
( The Monstro Comes in and throws him into Neverland )
PMFan: I have GOT to work on my speaches
( Back to Monstro )
Monstro: ( Monstro makes Noices )
Tagmann: Please dont pay attention to the boy and go back to the episode
Monstro: ( Makes More Noise )
Tagmann: Yo, Please Get out... NO I WILL NOT GET OUT
Monstro: ( Makes more noises )
Tagmann: I'm Translating, no one speaks Whale Monstro
Monstro: Well I Can speak CLEAR ENGLISH
Tagmann: -_-
( Back to the Episodes )
Sparky: I Have nothing to do with it..
( Sparky Cuts the Episode Short )
Sparky: END! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Episode 19: Haley-Trend Setter
( One day, Jake and Haley was in Haley's Room when... HOST_Lily enters the room )
HOST_Lily: Haley!
Haley: Yes?
HOST_Lily: I Mean ONLY Haley
Jake: Why should I leave??
( HOST_Lily gives Jake " THE LOOK " )
Jake: Uh... OK!
( Jake Leaves Nervously )
Haley: What is it?
HOST_Lily: Great News!
Haley: What?
HOST_Lily: You know that reseme you sent in to become VMK's next Fasion Trend Setter?
Haley: Yeah..
HOST_Lily: Well... You Just Might Be VMK's New Trend Setter
( Haley gets a very joyful look on her face )
( The Next Day )
( In an article of Yavn Speaks! Yavn is encouraging all girls to get Pigtails, Purple VMK Shirts, Pink Pants, and Green Sandals. )
( Haley Enters VMK )
Haley: Woah...
Jake: Look At That!
( Jake and Haley look at all the girls in the room, there are dressed same as Haley, )
GirlPattyGirl: OMG! It's Really Haley
AwesomelyShyHannah: Hi Haley!
( Girls crowd around Haley )
Jake: Take a good look at her profile! She likes Ice Cream!
( Girls ask her questions )
( In The Snow White Forest )
PMFan: Why So Glum Jake?
Jake: I'm Feeling like im losing my best friend over some STUPID TREND!
PMFan: Here Jake, Tell Me ALL ABOUT IT
( Back at Haley's Room )
( Haley Is Strugguling to get some privacy )
Haley: CAN'T I HAVE SOME TIME ALONE BY MY SELF SOME TIME?!?!
( Haley Slams the door and boots the fans )
Haley: I Have to get out of this craze....
( The Next Day, on VMK News )
Steve Stern: HALEY DOES SCANDAL!
Mandy Mad: She has just done VMK's Biggest Scandal: Scam People... *faints*
Steve Stern: She is now no longer VMK's Trend Setter... JAKE IS :-P
( On VMK )
Jake: Ok.. Take it easy now
PMFan: I Once Did your look a few times, we were a-jokin' they were like " I KNOW YOU! "
Jake: *gulps*
HOST_Lily: Ze Fin...

Episode 20: Sparky's Last Warning
( On VMK, There was one final VMK Staff message saying " As you know, VMK will close in 24 hours, but it's not to late, Today at 5:00pm EST ( 3:00pm PST ) you can deside... whether I take over VMK or WE close it , your choise.... MUAHAHAHAHAHA *cough cough* )
Jake: Who SENT THIS MESSAGE??
( In VMK Staff HQ )
HOST_Hula: Warning! HACKING SYSTEMS ARE DISABLED!
VMK_Mocha: It's time to bring on the BIG... Lasers
( HOST_Hula stares at her in a weird way )
VMK_Mocha: No, I'll leave it that way
HOST_Lily: We have a possible subject! PMFan!
( Hosts and Staff wonder how he did it )
HOST_Phinny: But why would he do it?
HOST_Hula: -_- *whispers in HOST_Phinny's ear
HOST_Phinny: Oh...
VMK_Mocha: We have GOT TO TAKE DIRECT ACTION by..... *voice gets deeper* BANNING HIM UNTIL THE LAST DAY!
( The rest of the staff agrees )
( In PMFan's Modern Party )
PMFan: Hm... could use a little....
( PMFan disappears in a puff of smoke )
( later at 3:00pm PST, Sparky has Hacked PMFan's account and is doing pure EVIL in it )
Sparky ( Disquised as PMFan but hidden in the shadows ) : Choose Carefully *does an evil laugh, coughs then becomes shocked*
Lightning_Crash: Yes... I mean.. DON'T Do It! *pushes Sparky out of PMFan and PMFan disapears and secretly morphs in Lightning_Crash*
Sparky: It's YOU again...
Lightning_Crash: You'll never catch me!
*Sparky has Just learned something: Lightning_Crash and PMFan are the SAME PERSON*
Sparky: Oh YES... I... WILL....
Jake: Haley, Meet Me behind the Castle, I Have some planning to do...
Haley: Ok... *starts thinking Jake's crazy*
Jake: I HEARD THAT!
Haley: Sorry
Jake: 0_-
( Back on the castle, Lightning_Crash is FINALLY tied on ropes )
Sparky: Any last words??
( Jake Comes in and Takes Sparky's Ban Button, and presses it )
( a Void Comes up to take Sparky to the " Never Go On VMK Ever Again World " )
Jake: Any last words SPARKY that is NOT STAFF
Sparky: No.. Last Actions...
( Sparky takes Lightning_Crash's Wig revealing his TRUE Identity
PMFan: Jake?? *looks up to find that his Wig is gone*
PMFan: Ah! Uh.. er... NOTHING TO SEE HERE!
Jake: It's Ok PM *leaves without any word*
Haley: Jake???
( Haley tries following Jake but turns out Jake has logged out for the day )
PMFan: Let him go, he needs some time alone
( PMFan logs of, regarding the fact he's still tied up and his Alter-Ego Identity is revealed so he might not go on VMK for the last Day )
Haley: Uh... might as well go off
( Everyone but VMK Staff, not really shocked that Sparky was the one who hacked VMK and has unbanned PMFan, logs off early )

Episode 21st: So Long VMK! 2005-2008
( It's The Final Day of VMK Many People seem REAL SAD, as people say goodbye to their VMK Friends, Jake and Haley are at the Snow White Forest, saying their goodbyes and exchanging gifts )
Jake: Here Haley,
( Jake Gives Haley Dancing Inferno Magic)
Haley: Wow! Dancing Inferno! How did you know?
Jake: You've wanted it all your VMK Life..
Haley: Here's my present
( Haley Gives Jake Black Mickey Ears )
Jake: Wow Haley! This is the missing hat in my collection!
Haley: It's Yours
Jake: Haley, I Have something to say
Haley: Jake, Me Too!
( Both say the following with Hearts in their eyes ) I...
( PMFan shuts the door )
PMFan: 3.. 2... FIREWORKS TIME!
:firewrks3: :fireworks1: :firewrks3: :fireworks1: :firewrks3: :fireworks1: :firewrks3: :fireworks1:
defre: Wow, That's ALOT of fireworks
PMFan: I Know Right??
:firewrks3: Jake: I'll Miss You
Haley: I'll Miss You Too!
( Jake and Haley Hug then, as the time gets near, people start counting down 'till the end of VMK, with staff on their side, THE END OF THE SERIES )

Cast ( VMK Names or the names they regestered in ) :
2starTagregory
Alphagarry
Vienna
tiedyegirl
StitchMayhem
PMFan also known as Lightning Crash
prinsess_chloe
defre
Acefredfred
Tagmann
Jake
Haley
Sparky

( The Cast Mentioned above does a roll call with the whale behind, saying good by to all of you, mean while, PMFan turns into Lightning Crash and spells in the sky:

Thank's for Reading

~PMFan :fireworks: )

Vienna
04-21-2008, 11:15 PM
this should be fun! Lol

vmkstar99
04-24-2008, 04:48 PM
If you want to be it: Figure out this Riddle:
This was Host Exclusive
but now it's Player Exclusive, What is it?

Green Ears!
Or, as titled now, Earth Day Ears.

PMFan
04-24-2008, 11:07 PM
Originally Posted by vmkstar99
Green Ears!
Or, as titled now, Earth Day Ears.
Wow My riddles are easy.. Congatulations! You are the person who is impersinating staff, LOL!

now, you have until tomorrow to decline being in the story!

2starTagregory
04-24-2008, 11:19 PM
Can I be in as the person impersonating him?

vmkstar99
04-25-2008, 12:15 AM
Wow My riddles are easy.. Congatulations! You are the person who is impersinating staff, LOL!

now, you have until tomorrow to decline being in the story!


Nope, I'd like to be in the story.

PMFan
04-26-2008, 01:23 AM
Can I be in as the person impersonating him?
You were put in the story.. impersonating a Host..!

Lost_Yet_Found
04-26-2008, 06:35 PM
HOST_Lily: Silly Lily is..
Yavn: - pulls out wig but it's really lily! -
HOST_Lily: Dont do that!
( Yavn gets banned )
PMFan: Awkward..

LOL That Was So Funny :) Poor Lily Getting Her Hair Pulled Like That

the_phoenix
04-26-2008, 06:39 PM
Might want to double-check your spelling...

tiedyenaj
04-26-2008, 10:26 PM
this is very funny i cant wait for more

PMFan
04-28-2008, 04:42 AM
This is a special Message from PMFan! That Club 33 special is posted Sunday May 4th and if you want to be apart of it then fill out this form!

VMK Title:
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33?
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do?
( Note, Not everyone will be chosen )

vmkstar99
04-28-2008, 06:20 PM
VMK Title: Alphagarry
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? at club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? Have everyone scream at me, "HEY, YOU'RE THAT GUY WHO IMPERSONATED VMK_Opal!"

XD

spaced_out
04-28-2008, 08:18 PM
VMK Title: spaced_out
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? CLUB 33!
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? get Yavn back on, then have a huge fight between me and whoever decided to close vmk (the player VS: the boss).
space

EDIT: 300TH POST!

Vienna
04-28-2008, 10:56 PM
VMK Title: Vienna
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? at Club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? hellO! first of all i would go and get Jake's 10 star inferno

StitchMayhem
04-28-2008, 11:33 PM
VMK Title: StitchMayhem
Club33 Queue or at Club33? At Club33
If Club33 is chosen what do you want to do? Find Yavn's warehouse of Unreleased items

acefredfred
04-29-2008, 12:27 AM
VMK Title: Acefredfred
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? At Club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? I would like everyone to make fun of me like what actually happens to me. But only 1 person and the staff will talk to me.
- acefredfred

tiedyenaj
04-29-2008, 02:46 AM
VMK Title: tiedyegirl
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? at club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do?
i want to be a crazed fan of the hosts and begging everyone to let me get a picture taken with them and then i get booted out of club 33

PMFan
04-29-2008, 04:20 AM
VMK Title: spaced_out
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? CLUB 33!
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? get Yavn back on, then have a huge fight between me and whoever decided to close vmk (the player VS: the boss).
space

EDIT: 300TH POST!

Yavn will be unbanned before if you want to know

Tris-Remix
04-29-2008, 12:12 PM
VMK Title: Tris-Remix
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? Any1
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? be involved in something with staff like an assiant or somethin like that


Great story by the way, it's funny and good

BuzzBoy133
05-02-2008, 10:37 PM
VMK Title: defre (keep "d" lower-case)
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? Club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? I would like to recieve inferno and flaying carpet magic from a Host and try to convince "the man" to keep VMK open.

StitchMayhem
05-04-2008, 02:58 PM
PMFan, could you please edit the Captain-Yarr part please? the pirate penguin is really named Rockhopper, his pet Puffle is named Yarr.

PMFan
05-05-2008, 12:22 AM
PMFan, could you please edit the Captain-Yarr part please? the pirate penguin is really named Rockhopper, his pet Puffle is named Yarr.

:O ! Thanks for telling me, ill do that right now

meanwhile, Episode 33 is cancled until further notice, sorry but take it as an advanage because the deadline had been extended ;-)

Edit:
Special will premiere but half of it is prosponed making it a REAL special so keep sending in those forms

StitchMayhem
05-05-2008, 03:23 AM
:O ! Thanks for telling me, ill do that right now

meanwhile, Episode 33 is cancled until further notice, sorry but take it as an advanage because the deadline had been extended ;-)

aww.... Well i guess i could wait a little longer

BlazinBeats
05-05-2008, 03:24 AM
I love every story about VMK!
This is great!
Write more!

Vienna
05-05-2008, 03:53 AM
love it!!!!!!!!!! LOL this is a genius story! I <3 It! Can't wait for more!

PMFan
05-05-2008, 03:58 AM
VMK Title: Acefredfred
Club 33 Queue or at Club 33? At Club 33
If Club 33 is chosen, What do you want to do? I would like everyone to make fun of me like what actually happens to me. But only 1 person and the staff will talk to me.
- acefredfred

What did happen to you??

tiedyenaj
05-05-2008, 04:26 AM
lol i love this story very funny

acefredfred
05-05-2008, 02:07 PM
What did happen to you??
In story: I use to scam people.
- acefredfred

Vienna
05-05-2008, 08:50 PM
Me: Please?!
Jake: NO!
Me: Fine!

Wow, i whine alot! LOL

StitchMayhem
05-07-2008, 02:32 PM
What happened to part two of episode 7?

SonicBoom
05-07-2008, 09:47 PM
sounds like a play of some sort

I would understand it better if there was like some sort of thign explaining it after the dialogue like stories do

Other than that its cool

PMFan
05-11-2008, 01:38 AM
Ok. Now Im allowing access for people to ask to be in the story, just say your VMK Title and what do you want to do, I need some ideas anyway

prinsess_chloe
05-11-2008, 08:56 PM
i would like to be in it

I want to impersonate a host. I find yavn and kidnap him and turn him into a frog. I then become him and keep vmk open and everyone likes me, muahahahaha:)(:

PMFan
05-12-2008, 05:04 AM
http://www.vmkforums.com/gallery/data/500/thumbs/jakeandhaley_slastdaysonvmkposterorbanner.PNG (http://www.vmkforums.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=10542)

Episode Notices will be posted on the bottom of the original post ( where all the episodes are ) informing you about what's comming up next

Tagmann
05-14-2008, 03:24 AM
can i be in it? i'm tagmann :) oh can i have a pet monkey? oh wait pet Computer!! :)

StitchMayhem
05-15-2008, 03:01 PM
I would like to be in it. I want to be able to get 10 star Flying Carpet magic! and then have Host_Lily take it away just like she did with Jake's 10 star Inferno magic!

StitchMayhem
05-16-2008, 02:00 AM
Hmm, I don't get episode 9, it's also pretty short.

StitchMayhem
05-16-2008, 08:08 PM
sorry, i had to go but i will extend it on satarday ( and maybe change the computer to a monkey )

Ok, and thx for making the Flying Carpet episode! It was REALLY FUNNY! I even made Haley and Jake faint! :)

StitchMayhem
05-22-2008, 08:23 AM
Hmm, not many ppl responding....

PMFan
05-22-2008, 11:21 PM
Sorry guys, busy the last few days, well looks like i can extend the series to make it seem like it's still before may 21st so hold on guys, more episodes are comming

PMFan
06-01-2008, 01:12 AM
Episode 17: Sparky's Attack
Discription--Sparky has Taken enough! He is trying to make All VMK Players get hypnotised in to his POWERS! Then he can TAKE OVER VMK!

Episode 18: That Whale!
Discription--The Whale at Storybookland is acting up! He Is VMKs New Hidden NPC !

Episode 19: Haley : Trend Setter
Discription--According to HOST_Lily, She Thinks Haley Dresses in Style! Now she's Every girl's role model

Episode 20: Sparky's Warning!
Discription--Sparky's LAST WARNING! Looks Like He Wont Give Up For VMK.. or WILL HE?!?!?!?!

Episode 21: So Long VMK! 2005-2008
Discription--Jake and Haley get ready to say their goodbyes as VMK Closes

ghostbritt98
06-01-2008, 03:11 AM
Jake Rox! LOL

StitchMayhem
06-05-2008, 07:27 PM
Yay! Another Flying Carpet episode is coming! OH BTW, I've got a suggestion for an episode! You could make a glitch come to the Emporium! The Emporium is selling Gray Mansion, Purple Hero outfit, Brown Cowboy, and SIMBA HAT!! All for 1 CREDIT!!! That could be another change!

PMFan
06-05-2008, 11:25 PM
Yay! Another Flying Carpet episode is coming! OH BTW, I've got a suggestion for an episode! You could make a glitch come to the Emporium! The Emporium is selling Gray Mansion, Purple Hero outfit, Brown Cowboy, and SIMBA HAT!! All for 1 CREDIT!!! That could be another change!

That's a good idea! Thanks,

PurpleAmy
06-11-2008, 02:49 AM
HAHA this is a funny story!
Please write more!

BuzzBoy133
06-18-2008, 11:23 PM
I Can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

StitchMayhem
06-19-2008, 01:12 AM
That's a good idea! Thanks,

your welcome!

StitchMayhem
06-20-2008, 01:48 AM
LOL, Kuzco Dance Magic, how funny.

PMFan
06-20-2008, 06:18 PM
LOL, Kuzco Dance Magic, how funny.

Hehe, yeah, I Watch that show when there's COMPLETELY NOTHING on...

and anyway.. NEW EPISODE ADDED!! 15th EPISODE! It's Orange, It's White! It's a VMK Holiday


NOTICE: Last Episode to be posted this July: So Long VMK! 2005-2008!
NOTICE: Tommorow's Episode is the last of the streak!

BuzzBoy133
06-20-2008, 06:21 PM
Cool!!! Hipp-hip..... horay!!!! WOOT! Go new chappys!

PMFan
06-20-2008, 06:24 PM
Cool!!! Hipp-hip..... horay!!!! WOOT! Go new chappys!
*rings buzzer* CONGRATULATIONS! You have won my contest for the 50th poster: REWARD: Main Part in My New series to be posted this July! and thank you, I Like adding new chappys/epppys!

BuzzBoy133
06-20-2008, 06:25 PM
YAY!!! I get to be in the story, I get to be in the story..... YAY!!!

fabkimi
06-21-2008, 02:01 PM
wow. That was really long. Lol Keep on writing!

PMFan
06-21-2008, 09:52 PM
LAST EPISODE TO BE POSTED TODAY!
Episode 21: So Long VMK! 2005-2008 (July 2nd)
Discription--Jake and Haley get ready to say their goodbyes as VMK Closes

StitchMayhem
06-21-2008, 10:43 PM
Before you make the whale story, i have to tell you this. The whale's name is Monstro.

Tagmann
06-22-2008, 02:54 AM
aww i wanted to be in this story as a returning charicter - cries - its ok :(

PMFan
06-27-2008, 08:00 PM
UPDATED :-) Now Jake and Haley is Color Coded, More Details ( Character Profiles ), and uh.. more colour

BuzzBoy133
07-01-2008, 12:25 AM
You missed 2 of the episodes! Please post them! I REALLY want to see 'em!

PMFan
07-01-2008, 04:42 AM
You missed 2 of the episodes! Please post them! I REALLY want to see 'em!

I Did, Ah! I Forgot to post the Next Episode, ( Look for Episodes 17, 18, and 19 )

Tagmann
07-01-2008, 05:48 AM
can i rejoin as a returning charicter o.o if i can it would be great

PMFan
07-01-2008, 03:47 PM
can i rejoin as a returning charicter o.o if i can it would be great
Well This series is ending but.... There is another story comming up after it ends so technicaly yes ( I'm also letting people be in the last episode )

BuzzBoy133
07-01-2008, 04:15 PM
LOL!!! Nice episode, PMFan!

StitchMayhem
07-02-2008, 08:14 AM
Can I be in the last episode PMFan? I really want to have something happen in the story to StitchMayhem that I have ALWAYS wanted to happen to me in VMK, get a Best Game Award! for my Video Game Falling Chairs game! Plz? :D

PMFan
07-02-2008, 04:11 PM
Can I be in the last episode PMFan? I really want to have something happen in the story to StitchMayhem that I have ALWAYS wanted to happen to me in VMK, get a Best Game Award! for my Video Game Falling Chairs game! Plz? :D
Video Game Huh?? PM me what's it about please, the last episode will be posted in a few hours but that could change

BuzzBoy133
07-02-2008, 04:19 PM
Woah! Already? Well, we can still look forward to the next story! Oh, and you still need to put up Chapter 20: Sparkys Warning...

PMFan
07-02-2008, 04:46 PM
Woah! Already? Well, we can still look forward to the next story! Oh, and you still need to put up Chapter 20: Sparkys Warning...
Actually, i just did, now get ready for the....


:firewrks3: LAST EPISODE :firewrks3:

BuzzBoy133
07-02-2008, 04:52 PM
WOOT!! YAY!! We'll finnaly know what happens!

PMFan
07-02-2008, 11:27 PM
In about 30 MINUTES, Jake and Haley's LAST EPISODE will be posted!

BuzzBoy133
07-02-2008, 11:29 PM
OMG! OMG!! I can't wait for it!!!!

Brave_Bloom_Kiari
07-02-2008, 11:30 PM
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

PMFan
07-02-2008, 11:42 PM
still excited for the new episode?? 20 MINUTES!

BuzzBoy133
07-02-2008, 11:50 PM
YEEEEESSSSSS!!! Finaly!

PMFan
07-02-2008, 11:52 PM
Yay! 10 Minutes! We're SO CLOSE

Sorry for double posting but... 5 MORE MINUTES!

BuzzBoy133
07-03-2008, 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Awesome!!

PMFan
07-03-2008, 12:03 AM
YAY! It's POSTED! *dances*

BuzzBoy133
07-03-2008, 12:19 AM
YAY!! Great story! I almost cried at the end... "Thats a lot of fireworks" "I know right?"

LOL! Again, great story!

Tagmann
07-03-2008, 01:41 AM
i thought i was cast :(
aww its ok

PMFan
07-03-2008, 03:29 AM
i thought i was cast :(
aww its ok
You are, look at the Whale episode