View Full Version : ~Before We Knew....~ a poem about vmk's closing


MyBirdHat
04-12-2008, 04:27 PM
Before we knew
Everything was fine
Everything we knew was alright

Before we knew
We were laughing with friends
Smiling
Trading
The fun never ends

Before we knew
VMK was the best thing to happen to me
Every time I logged on,
My heart would pound
Waiting to see friends

Before we knew
I had the best of friends
The best of the best
They were too cool

Before we knew
That vmk were to close
Every day
All I'd think about was getting onto vmk
And going to WDW in a few days
And buying
Trading
Many many pins

Before we knew
The NPCs
Newsletters
Movie rewards
Gave us hints
But we couldn't have known
What was to happen

After we knew....
Some of us cried
Some of us screamed
None of us thought of
Happy things
And then when I saw my bestest friend
Riding the dark rides
Trying to get that new pin
I myself cried
And cried
And cried

Yavn told us the dead truth
But why?
Why?
Why do we need to let go so soon?
All I want is to keep holding on
As long as possible
Please vmk
Don't leave yet
Not in your moment of glory
Your players loved you
Worshiped you
Played you for hours
And hours
And to pay them back....


You betray them
Ditch them
What other words
Can explain what you decided to do?
I know that you will miss us
Mocha,Phinny,Hula, and Lion
And the other staff too
We will also miss you
Very
Very
Much.


-MyBirdHat

TinkTaylor
04-12-2008, 05:22 PM
That Was A Beautiful Poem Which Is All So True

MyBirdHat
04-12-2008, 05:23 PM
Thanks :) Just my feelings on what vmk is doing, and hopefully more people can agree with me.

TinkTaylor
04-12-2008, 05:27 PM
THE PEOPLE,
THE WONDERS,
THE FUN, THE LAUGHS
THE TEARS I CRIED,
THE TIME I SPENT,
GONE..........
THE MAGIC THAT THIS GAME BROUGHT US,
THE FRIENDS THAT IT GAVE US,
THE THINGS THAT IT BROUGHT US,
MOST OF ALL THE SMILES,
BUT GUESS WHAT......
THOSE SMILES, NOW GONE,
GONE GONE, NOW THERE TEARS,
NOT TEARS OF JOY, NOT TEARS OF LAUGHTER,
BUT TEARS OF SORROW AND THE TEARS OF DEFEAT,
IT MAY BE JUST A GAME,
BUT ITS OUR GAME......
THE GAME OF PEOPLE IN MANY PLACES,
I DONT CARE WHAT PEOPLE MAY SAY,
IT WILL BE IN MINE AND YOUR HEARTS FOREVER,
NEVER FORGET THE TIMES WE SHARED WITH THIS MAGICAL GAME, VMK.........

NEVER FORGET..........

TINK*

TinkTaylor
04-12-2008, 05:28 PM
There Is Mine :(

MyBirdHat
04-12-2008, 05:32 PM
That one is very nice :)

TinkTaylor
04-12-2008, 05:39 PM
Thanks Yours Is The Best Tho......

sweet_0nyx
04-12-2008, 05:45 PM
Wow! what beautifully wrote ( or typed ) poems!
I love both poems!

- sweet-onyx

Vienna
04-12-2008, 05:58 PM
Oh My... Its Soooo Beautiful... I Made A song...

The Memories So True
To Be Gone So Soon
Sometimes We Think We
Know When To Let Go But
The Night I Knew The Cold Hard Truth
We All Knew That The Time Had Come
But I Didnt Want To Believe It

The Door Of VMK Had Slammed In Front Of My Face
Without Leaving A Trace Of Sweet Memories
Making Me Regret All Those Times
Oh How Time Flys
But What Should We Do Now? Even
though Crying Is An Option Im Not Going
Down With out a fight... Come On Riders and
Be Free with Me and Save VMK... Today

The Laughing The Living The Loving Everything Ran Through
Like Sand In A Hourglass... Time Forbidding Their Return... You Cant Change The Time Or Day But If You
Take A Chance You Might Change The Day...
VMK The Memories So True Be Reality had To be so cruel...

The Door Of VMK Had Slammed In Front Of My Face
Without Leaving A Trace Of Sweet Memories
Making Me Regret All Those Times
Oh How Time Flys
But What Should We Do Now? Even
though Crying Is An Option Im Not Going
Down With out a fight... Come On Riders and
Be Free with Me and Save VMK... Today

The Regrets, Tears, And The Life You Took From Me Will Never Move On....
******************************
What Do You Think?

MyBirdHat
04-12-2008, 06:09 PM
vienna that's so pretty :) and thanks for the comments people! i might send it into vmk. but i'm too scared that they'll ban my account, so someone else may do it for me! lol

Vienna
04-12-2008, 06:13 PM
Lol! Ill send it in on May 21! So If they ban me oh well LOL and thx for the comment yours was coolness

MyBirdHat
04-19-2008, 10:51 PM
Give It A Bump!!!!!

MyBirdHat
04-25-2008, 10:03 PM
giving it a BUMP!!!!!!

GenieLovato
04-30-2008, 02:50 AM
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SonicBoom
04-30-2008, 08:43 PM
Nice poems
Hmm
Heres mine

Into the night
I played VMK...
Obession and addiction.
I sorta liked it
And so did you, c'mon, dont deny it
Banned for something I didnt do
It didnt matter to me for a while,
I may have quit but friends still remember me
It tell me so much
I cant let it go
The day I decide to visit
Yavn....
Why?
So many bad things in my life already happened.
They goes another
I know he's not joking
I have many theories why they are closing it.
Time to let it all go some say
Others just cry
I just sit here alone
Trying to remember
Why....

tiedyenaj
04-30-2008, 10:05 PM
loved your poem i wrote one my self here it is

oh dear sweet vmk
it felt like just yesterday
that i would log on and play with out a care
then the news i dreaded came
that you would end the game
the gates would close forever
the 21st of may
that will a sad sad day
and now we plan to burry
vmk in the graveyard of game of the past
we all thought the fun would always last
but no they say
the magic will no longer be unleashed
they try to make us happy
with virtual stuff to get
our minds off the news
the friends we have made
the fun times we have had
the memories that will be all that we will have
soon even our memories will fade
the fun that we had on vmk
it was another life another place to go
to get our minds off reality
but we all now know the truth
vmk is over
our friendships are over
our rare is gone
our credits now 0
and our rooms gone black
vmk is no longer

MyBirdHat
05-17-2008, 01:49 PM
Giving it a BUMP!! Awesome poems people! And genielovato, may I put that in my sig? It's so pretty!

evina
05-20-2008, 09:59 PM
For 3 years we've played,
But now we're dismayed
But we can't leave it behind,
When it's memory is in our mind

Click Here (http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2013807&postcount=9) for more memories

Friez
05-20-2008, 10:29 PM
Before we knew of this tragic day,
We enjoyed every minute we played.
Now that it's closing, we're all upset,
How much worse could this possibly get?

They're kicking us out of the kingdom we love,
We have no idea what they were thinking of.
Closing the gate and burning the key,
I don't think they see what we see.

They only gave us three years to play,
And now they leave us in the dirt, dismayed.
We loose all of our items, memories and toys,
But remember the good times, girls and boys.

Written by Friez. ♥

MyBirdHat
05-29-2008, 01:45 AM
giving it a BUMP!!

cooliomoviefan
05-29-2008, 02:49 AM
Wow all so deep, this is making me so sad, its all so true!!
PAY TO PLAY

MyBirdHat
07-03-2008, 08:37 PM
Bumpidy Bump Bump

MyBirdHat
07-19-2008, 06:26 PM
Givin It A Bump