Chapter 1, An Odd Start Off:

As SecretMagicIvan got home, he noticed something was wrong, his computer was on and was logging him in. "Huh?" he asked himself. 'HELLO IVANISBACK! YOU'VE GOT MAIL!' a message said. "Uh.. actually my name is SecretMagicIvan now..." said Ivan. After about four seconds, the message changed and said 'HELLO SECRETMAGICIVAN, YOU'VE GOT MAIL!' Ivan opened the window and clicked the messages. There was one new message so Ivan decided to open it.

'Hello SecretMagicIvan:
As you may know, VMK has had some technical difficulties. We need your help. Get online as soon as possible. We have no time to spare!' Ivan clicked VMK Pal and logged himself into VMK. Once logged in, he had a message there too.

'Welcome. We are in need of your help to save Yavn and all the other creators and designers. Our information indicates that they have been kidnapped and are being held inside one of WDW or DLR's rides. Respond as soon as you can." Ivan began to respond the second the message was over.
"What in the world is going on?!?!?! Who are you and why do you need ME?!?!?!" he typed. He sent the message and had expected a reply asap. He waited five minutes, no reply. He waited ten more minutes, no reply. He waited fifteen more minutes, no reply. He went to burger King and left the computer and came back home after twenty minutes, no reply.
"Oh Come On!!!!" he shouted out loud. He began to reply again. "HURRY UP!!!! HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN WAITING HERE?!?!?!?! YOU'RE LUCKY I HAVE THE PATIENCE TO WAIT FOR YOU!!!!!" he typed. He sent the message and waited five minutes, no reply. Ten more minutes, no reply. Another fifteen minutes and finally a reply!
"You're the only hope VMK has, but are you willing to save us and every VMK player?" He typed back to the message.
"What do you mean I'm the only hope?" asked Ivan. Ivan got a response after a short wait.
"Why don't you come see for yourself then?" He decided to do as the messager said.
"Where do I go?" he asked.
"To the White Sisterhood." the messager said.
"Who are you tho?" asked Ivan.
"I'll tell you later, but are you willing to save us or not?" replied the messager. Ivan had typed two letters. Two letters that had changed his life forever:
NO
"WHAT!?!?!? YOU HAVE TO!!!!" replied the messager.
"Sorry, I'm just not ready." said Ivan.
"Fine then! You don't get your own free complimentary Hotel Suite!" replied the messager.
"OH!!! COUNT ME IN THEN!!!!" replied Ivan.
"Nope, you already made up your mind." replied the messager.
"Fine Then! Be Like That!" messaged Ivan.
"HUH?!?!?! COME SAVE US!!!!" replied the messager.
"Fine! I Will!" said Ivan.
"Nope! Not You! Sorry!" said the messager.
"Dude! Make Up Your Mind Already! My Gosh..." messaged Ivan.
"Fine Then! Come! I'll Be Waiting... Huhahahahaha!!!" said the messager.
"What? What do you mean you'll be waiting?" asked Ivan. Then the face of a girl appeared on Ivan's computer and screamed at him. "AH!!!!" shouted Ivan while falling off of his chair. The face had jumped out of the computer screen and into Ivan's bed-room with a girl's body! "MUAHAHA!!!!! You're Mine Now!!!!" shouted the girl while pulling Ivan by his legs. "NO!!!!" shouted Ivan while trying to get a grip on the floor with his finger nails. But then the girl got Ivan and threw him into the computer screen and vanished him. "MUAHAHA!!" screamed the girl. Then she zapped the computer and smashed it into Ivan's wall. "He Won't Be Leaving Now!" said the girl. Then the girl flew away and left Ivan's house while leading Ivan to an adventure, and adventure so epic and big that not even he can handle himself. An adventure called:

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Tip: Use different paragraphs, especially when someone else is speaking. Very difficult to read otherwise.

Fine then. I edited it. Better? Lol

Fine then, I edited it. Better? Lol


It's easier to read now ;)

Hmm... not sure what to put in chapter 2! Lol

i think you should put.. um... wait let me see my book Chaos And Conflict really quick! Lol

Chapter 2, Surfing The Web:

As Ivan had woken up in a surrounding of bright light, he couldn't see at all! "Where am I?" he asked himself. "AM I PASSED AWAY?!?!?!" he asked himself. "You're not passed away, you've been played against your will! Muahahahaha!" said a voice. "Who is there?!?!?!" asked Ivan. As the light seemed to go darker, a source of wind and beams surrounded the place and had let out a bunch of words speeding past Ivan. So fast that his hair flew back a little and Ivan covered his face by burrying them into his arms and kneeling forward. After the speeding stopped, the words slowed down a bit, and there were thousands and thousands of words moving past Ivan. "WOW!!!!!" he glanced. "Welcome To Google. You May Now Choose Your Path To A New Experience Of Online System And Requirements Of Sources To The Electricity Waves." said a voice again but in a more welcoming tone. "Wait, what? That didn't make sense, did it?" asked Ivan. "Please Choose A Path." said Ivan. He looked all around and saw names of all kinds of websites floating through the air. "Hmm..." said Ivan while looking at the website names. He grabbed onto one and looked at the sign. "seekinggardens.com" said Ivan quietly and slowly. Ivan tapped a blue circular sphere next to the sign and a description appeared under it. "Seeking Gardens. The Online Therapist Service For Failing Marriages." read Ivan outloud. He tapped a link on the description and read outloud. "Super Dare, Cook him his favorite food all week until he approves to the next round of Popcorn at a dark movie theater." said Ivan. Just then, his eyes were amazed and he looked around. "Shew..." said Ivan while throwing the website over his shoulder. He looked around and saw another site. He grabbed it and read 'wehatetsl.com' by the sound of it, Ivan really wanted hop into the site! But then the name of another site pushed 'wehatetsl.com' out of Ivan's hands and took its place. "Hey What Giv- aye?" said Ivan while looking at the site. He read outloud 'vmkforums.com' As he looked into it he saw the glow of a shining white light cross over the words. "Hmm..." all of a sudden, the site started to grow bigger and bigger and the words started chasing him! Action-packed choir music started playing and Ivan tried to run! But the 'V' in 'vmk' expanded and grabbed Ivan and brought him into the site. "WoaAAHHH!!!!" shouted Ivan. The Choir music still played until 'soaring.com' hit 'choirsymphony.com' and soon the music stopped. Through an opening crack in the bright, large, building or whatever it was, watched an eye. A scary looking evil eye that looked around and saw Ivan gone. Soon the sound of a short evil laugh appeared and the eye moved away.

Finally thought of making it since I copied last time.

Chapter 3, The Real Begining:

As Ivan flew into vmkforums.com he had saw more linkes flying around. He saw a "Trading Stitch Hat!" link, and a "Help Me! VMK Won't Start!" link. "Ugh! How Annoying!" said Ivan. "Hmm..." he said while looking at a Chaos and Conflict link. As he looked into it, he heard a voice behind him. "Go on, take a spin inside!" said the voice. "Whoah!" shouted Ivan while turning around and looking at the myster girl. "Ehahahaha!" laughed the girl evily. "Ah!!!!!" shouted Ivan. "Hahaha!" shouted the girl. "Ah!!!!!" screamed Ivan. "Hahaha!" shouted the girl. "Ah!!!!!" screamed Ivan. "Hahaha!" shouted the girl. "Stop, that's getting annoying." said Ivan. Then the girl pulled Ivan with some sort of mind powers and tossed him against the 'Chaos and Conflit' link. Soon Ivan was in a school looking around seeing a girltyping Fashionista Diaries into a computer.

'Dear Diary,

MY SCHOOL IS MESSED UP!!!!!

Sincerely Yours,
Vienna.'

Wrote the girl. Ivan went over to the girl and read the document. As the girl looked at Ivan next to her shoulder, she backed away a little and tried to remind him that she was next to him. "Umm... can I help y-" "NO!!!!! THIS IS SO DUMB!!!! THAT'S ALL THE JOURNALISM YOU GOT?!?!?!?" interrupted Ivan while making Vienna jump a little because of the explosion of his voice. "Look, I'll help you write!" said Ivan.

'Dear Diary,

I am going to my first cheer-leading practice tomorrow and I have no idea what to do. I am trying my best to create an outfit and beat Suzy May at her own game! Suzy May is my worst enemy and always will be ever since the day she poured paint all over my favorite barbie in second grade. Now she's captain of the cheerleading squad.

Sincerely Yours,
Vienna.

"OK, first of all, I don't even know a girl named Suzy May! And second of all, I'm not even signing up for cheerleading! And third of all, I hate barbies and always have!" said Vienna. "Sure you don't! Allow me to check on everyone else..." said Ivan. As he went to another computer, a kid was typing his own story and Ivan read it.

'I had looked around and the whole ceiling was a map! "This must be Yavn's headquarters." I said.'

"Uh... excuse me, what's your name?" asked Ivan. "the_kid." said the kid. Then Ivan slapped the kid in the back fo the head. "Ow! What Was That For?!?!?!" asked the kid. "Shut Up And Learn To Be a Better Writer!" said Ivan. "I'll happen to let you know I won the award of story of the year once!" said the_kid. "Wow... five out of eleven people voted you the best. There are more than 500 people on the forums and only five out of eleven voted it the best! I could have done better than that!" said Ivan. "And I'm back to you Vienna, how is your writing going?" asked Ivan. "I wrote about a woman who was fighting against the rights of men not able to serve dogs and other animals as they're supposed to." said Vienna. "That sounds beautiful!" said Ivan. "Muahahaha!!!!! I am here!!!!! Sorry I'm late everyone, did ya miss me?!?!?!" asked Adam as he walked into the room while walking with expensive clothes. "Wow Adam! Nice Clothes!" said Vienna. "Thanks I Scammed Them Off This Gi- I Mean, Uh... I Bought Them!" said Adam. "Oh! Nice Hat The_kid! Where'd You Get It?!?!?!" asked Adam while looking at the_kid. "I got it at JCPenny." said the_kid. "I'll give you $70 for it!" shouted out Adam. "Oh, OK." said the_kid. "Just place the hat right there while I get my money out!" said Adam. Then the_kid placed his hat on a desk and waited for Adam to get his money. But then Adam grabbed the_kid's hat and didn't give $70 in return. "HEY!!!!! YOU ARE A SCAMMER!!!!!" shouted the_kid. "YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!!!!!" shouted Adam while pushing the_kid and knocking him out of his chair. "Muahaha!" shouted Adam while jumping through a window. "Somebody needs to stop him!" shouted Vienna. "Vienna, you need to control stuff! The computer that you're writing on will control everything that happens!" said Ivan. "In other-words, you have to make sure to type a full story and everything that happens in it will happen to me!" said Ivan. "OK! OK!" shouted Vienna while trying to type as fast as she could. 'Then Ivan jumped out the next window and chased after the scammer!" typed Vienna. "Huh? OH!" shouted Ivan. "Timber!" yelled Ivan while breaking through the window next to the window that Adam broke through. "NO! NOT THAT ONE YOU GOOF! THE SAME ONE!" yelled Vienna. "Oh, sorry!" yelled Ivan while climbing up through the window and back into the room. "Here I Go!" said Ivan. Soon Ivan jumped through the window that Adam had crashed through and followed the trail of the scammer.

So, let me get this straight:
1) I have terrible writing skills,
2) I have a scammer in the Journilism Team
3) You Fall Out of the wrong window.
Sweet! lol i like this story...

Chapter 3 On It's Way! Muahahaha!

Chapter 3, The Real Begining
hey ivan dont you mean chapter 4?! lol!

hey ivan dont you mean chapter 4?! lol!

OH SNAP!!!!! LOL THANKS FOR CATCHING THAT FOR ME VIENNA!!!!! :D

now where would you be with out me? LOL JKJKJK still waiting for new chapter!