after the mad hatter one, im gonna make a story about the game. the main two characters are: Pal, the mudkip and Vienna the torchic. if u want to be in story, then post fast bc i wont accept any on June 25, 2008.
NOTE:eevees,mudkips,torchics, and turtwigs are not pickable because they are already used so people who wanted to be a eevee,mudkip,torchic,and turtwig,then too bad.

so i herd u liek mudkipz?

yea i like mudkips...

sneek peek:
In the sunny city of Los Angeles or AKA Pollution to a new degree city, there was a girl named Marina. But she hated that name, and changed it to Pal, no one knows why she chose that name besides her. Ok, well Pal was with her best friend Layla, talking about the super cute Matt, who was Pal's crush.
"Pal, you're going to tell him sooner or later!" Layla said shaking her head.
"Lay, I already told you, NO!" I snapped.
"Ok, then!" Layla said.
RING!!! The Bell Rang! School Was Out
"I'll see you later Lay, Bye!" I said running toward the direction of my house.
One Hour Later...
One New Message, the screen read on my computer. The message read:
I Love You
********
If You Dont Forward This To Your Crush, You Will Be Turned Into A Pokemon!
This One! ---------->http://weblog.powerweb.nl/images/2007/04/26/mudkip.jpg
~ Layla!

"Whatever!" I said, deleting the message.
Later That Night...
"You're going to a new world, one with need of your help." said a voice. Then Pal, without herself knowing was drowned in a ball of light and lifted to the air.
At Pokemon Square.
Pal wakes up.
"Where am I? And What Am I?!" Then the Scream came.

Nice sneak peak. Pokemon rocks, its about time someone made a story about it!

I have one tiny little suggestion. The way you're telling the story is in two different points of view, and kinda hard to read. Try putting it JUST in your point of view or JUST in Pal's point of view.

~*Ice*~

Hey, umm can I be in it. I want to be a Turtwig named Brian! BTW, your story is comming out great! Keep up the good work!

Yay readers! And Ok You could be in it! Ok since that was the sneek peak/ prolouge, im gonna start with chapter uno! once im done with Mad Hatters!

Cool!!! I bet it will be AWESOME!!!!!

or actually, i dont need to finished mad hatters. i can do it now.


Chapter One: The Beginning
Once In my sunny city of Los Angeles (or AKA Pollution to a new degree city), there was me, Marina But I hated that name, and changed it to Pal, no one knows why I chose that name besides her. Ok, well I was with my best friend Layla, talking about the super cute Matt, who was my crush.
"Pal, you're going to tell him sooner or later!" Layla said shaking her head.
"Lay, I already told you, NO!" I snapped.
"Ok, then!" Layla said.
RING!!! The Bell Rang! School Was Out
"I'll see you later Lay, Bye!" I said running toward the direction of my house.
One Hour Later...
One New Message, the screen read on my computer. The message read:
I Love You
********
If You Dont Forward This To Your Crush, You Will Be Turned Into A Pokemon!
This One --->http://pokedream.com/pokerep/images/sugimori/258.jpg
~Layla

"Whatever!" I said, deleting the message.
Later That Night...
"You're going to a new world, one with need of your help." said a voice. Then I, without myself knowing was drowned in a ball of light and lifted to the air.
At Pokemon Square.
I woke up.
"Where am I? And What Am I?!" Then the Scream came.

Nice sneak peak. Pokemon rocks, its about time someone made a story about it!

I have one tiny little suggestion. The way you're telling the story is in two different points of view, and kinda hard to read. Try putting it JUST in your point of view or JUST in Pal's point of view.

~*Ice*~

ok i changed it to Pal's point of view.

Then I saw myself in a place. I checked the sign. It said "Pokemon Square. Go left for friend areas. Go right to go to pellipepper office. Then I was walking and all of a sudden, I BUMPED into a Torchic. "Oh I'm so sorry." I said. "It's fine, really." said the Torchic. "My name is Vienna. What is yours?" she asked me. "My name is Pal. I'm a human, aren't I?" I replied. She made a weird look. "Human, I don't think so." she said. Then I ran to the Whishcash Pond. I looked at myself. She wasn't kidding. I am a Mudkip.Then I splashed myself. Nothing was happening. "HELP!!!! MY CHILD IS IN DANGER!" someone yelled. It was a Butterfree. "My poor Caterpie fell into a hole in Tiny Woods." she said while she was getting all freaked out. "I think you can find him at B3F." she told us. So Vienna and I went to Tiny Woods. When we reached up B3F, we saw Caterpie. Caterpie was scared. "You'll be alright Caterpie, dont worry." said Vienna. Then we escaped the dungeon. "Thank You for rescuing my child." said Butterfree in a warm hearted way. "No problem." me and Vienna said at the same time. Then Vienna said, "Follow me, I want to show you something." I replied, "Ok." Then I heard someone yell, "That was excellent work! May I join your team.?" It was a Turtwig. "Sure." I said. "What's your name?" asked Vienna. "My name is Brian. Nice to meet you too." he replied warmly to us. "So, we meet up tommorrow?" I said. "Yup." said Vienna and Brian. "It's pretty dark now so we should get to rest. said Brian. "Ok. Good Night!!!" I yelled. Brian went to his friend area, and so did Vienna. "Wait!!! I yelled. "What should we name our team?" I said. "TEAM KH!!!" Vienna said. "Do we have to?" replied Brian. "Sure." I said "Then that sounds good to me!" said Brian" Then we went back to our places and slept.

Awesome story!!!

thanks! i see you like it. I wont stop the story till i get to the last legendary pokemon.
(which the story would last for a really really really long time)

O_O YES! Thank you for making a story about this! I ♥ it! :)

MORE! MORE! Write more!

**This Chapter Was Proofread and Fixed By My Editor Vienna!! lol**

Pal heard a voice, the same one she heard earlier.
"You're Here For A Reason," the Voice said.
"What? Why?" I said.
"You will find out in time to be..." then the Voice disappeared.
"What..." I said, as my mind went back to sleep.

**That Morning**
"Hey Pal!!" exclaimed Brian and Vienna.
"Hi guys..." I greeted, still puzzled about the dream.
"What's wrong?" Vienna asked. Then I told Vienna and Brian about the dream.
"That's wierd," Brian said, shaking his head.
"No duh! Of course it's strange!" Vienna said, looking down.
"But I'm sure I've heard that voice before..." I muttered.
"Pal, you said you were a human before this right, and that your memory was lost also? Maybe the dreams have something to do with it!" Vienna stated matter-of-factly.
"English please," I said, confused about she said.
"I thought you were smarter then this, maybe the dreams have something to do with Pal's transformation!" Vienna said again.
"Oh!" Brian and Pal said at the same time.
"That proves I'm the smart one in the group." Vienna said, as she tapped her toe.
"What are you waiting for?" Brian asked.
"That!" Vienna pointed to a Pelippeper, with a mailbag flying toward them.
"Hola Amigos!" the Pelipepper greeted, giving Vienna a box.
"Hey Pelipepper!" Vienna greeted as she opened the box.
"What is it?" I asked.
"Our rescue team starter kit!!" Vienna exclaimed.
"Oh yeah, we were going to make a rescue team... I totally forget," I said looking down. Was it still a good idea?
"Well now you remember!" Vienna said, giving me a box with a strap on it.
"What's this?" I said, putting the strap over my shoulder so it looked like a messenger bag.
"Its our toolbox!" Brian said.
"How did you know that?" I asked.
"I read the box," Brian said, pointing to the box which had stiched on 'Team KH Toolbox'.
"Oh," I said.
"Hey Vienna!" a voice cried.
"Oh hey Maddie!" Vienna said, then she turned back to us as an Eevee came toward us. "This is Maddie, she's one of my friends," Vienna said.
"Hi Maddie!" Brian and I said.
"Hey! So what ya'll doing?" Maddie asked.
"We're a rescue team!" I said.
"Ooh! I want to join! Can I please?" Maddie pleaded.
"Sure!" I said, it would be fun having more people.
"So what do we do now?" Brian asked.
"Well, we have to go the the Pellipepper Bulliten Board, we'll find missions there!" Vienna said, and then started running toward Pokemon Square and we followed her, since she knew alot about this place.

Oohh can I also be in it?
I can be a skitty, or evvie named maddie!

sure! i suggest you eevee.

OK. the rest of chapter 3 will be on that post... lol

Nice chapter!!

WonderfuL Chappy, even though I read it already... LOL
Awesomeness!
wow I talk alot in the story! LOL