Forever Violet

Well... I have attempted doing a story I have already written on here, and... I didn't really feel like writing something nobody is going to see. I thought about it for a while... about writing a story I haven't already written. You see, my hope is that I will be able to add something truly unique to this forum, and it's been running out. If I can't find anything you all don't like well- I don't know what you like. Here is a vampire story I have already outlined and went through the whole process, now I just have to write it out. I hope you enjoy it, because I'm gonna be working hard on this. Also, your comments are greatly appreciated.

Chapter 1:
Restart

"Please, please, please remember what I told you," My "mother", Victoria begged as I was stepping out of the car, gathering my things, and was about to close the door. I simply rolled my eyes.

"Yeah, yeah, I think we get it," Lucile murmured, getting out of the backseat. Already, eyes were on us. The people coming from all the other cars already noticed the strange new people coming from the black Chevrolet. Ha ha... be inconspicuous, that's a joke, good one father!

"Be on your best behavior, Violet!" Victoria commented directly to me. I groaned, and closed the door. I faced the new school, all of the people were hurriedly coming toward it.

"Wow," I simply stated... there were so many people. I'm pretty sure we'll get more then enough attention. Not something I enjoy what-so-ever. It was just going to be like the last school we went to... the one we already graduated, but now we have to come back. I've been following this process for the past fourty years, more then the rest of my family.

"We better get a move on then..." I heard Nicholas say to Lucile. I walked ahead of them, and calculated how long we can stay here until the sun shows up.

We came near the school, and went inside the dull building. I heard many teens groaning about the first day here. Many girl's whispers were very audible to my sensitive ears, all were saying how good-looking my brother is.

We went inside a small office with brown chairs spread along the wall, along with a small table holding magazenes about some colleges, and flyers for whatever events were coming.

My brother gave his smile to the secretary sitting at the desk, and began introducing us.

"Hello, um... We are the Sharpes, I believe our father already filled out the paperwork, we just came for the schedules." He announced openly. The secretary stared down to me and my sister, obviously stunned, and I heard Lucile giggling under her breath. She was just getting used to this way of life, let me add.

"... Oh, yes, well..." She got up from her seat and found three pieces of paper, and handed them to the three of us. "Here you go. The locker number is on the bottom left, and the combination for the gym locker is on the top right. If you have any questions ask the guidance, the room next to here." She explained warily. I almost had to laugh myself...

"Thank you," Nicholas said, and we walked out. I took a look at my own schedule, not liking it at all. I'm not in anything musical, because Alexander and Victoria were wary of my voice. I'll explain that to you later. They said I shouldn't sing anymore for the humans, I can tell you that. The first hour was going to be the advanced Language Arts, with Mrs. Wilson. I waved goodbye to my siblings, and went up the stairs to wherever the locker was supposed to be.

I put all the things I wasn't going to need in there quickly. I found almost about every male pair of eyes upon the beautiful new girl. I could just say right now, have fun with your little fantasies. Many girls would just put their noses up and keep passing me, but then eventually looking back to see if it was true what their own eyes came upon. No... I'm not being sarcastic... I seem to have this appeal to humans, being supposedly beautiful. I guess I was, but once people see my eye color is when the start inching away from me. Anytime I give a friendly smile... they start moving away. Therefore I stay with my family, but unforetunatly, they split us up in this school.

I went into the designated room for language arts. I came quietly, trying to be unnoticed. I sat in the very back desk, just so people wouldn't gaze at me again. I never like that feeling anymore.

The bell rang, signalling the start of the day. I sat there still, looking at all the people, who weren't watching me, yet.

"Welcome class, I'm sure you had a fine weekend away. We have a new student who has just moved here, her name is Violet Sharpe, and she will be joining this class." I can tell that I don't like this teacher anymore.

Now all of the eyes were on me, including the teacher's and the girl who sat next to me. She wasn't very skinny, but not very large either. She had layered brown hair, that went to her back, almost like my black hair, except a bit shorter. Her eyes matched her hair, and she was tanner then me which doesn't say much at all. I'm white as, literally, a ghost.

Evidently, her name was Elizabeth White, and she was the only one staring at me in this twisted way. Immeadiatly, I didn't very much like her at all.

"Hello, I'm Elizabeth." She announced strangely. I gave a slight smile, crossed my arms, and leaned back into the chair, "watching" the teacher. My mind was really somewhere else. Her eyebrows knit together, angry that I didn't say anything.

The class was learning about Shakespeare. I already knew it like the back of my hand, which hasn't changed much in a few centuries. I probably know every line in Romeo and Juliet, which every school I have been to performed. Unforetunatly, the lighting of the stage isn't ideal for my weird skin, meaning everyone will be looking more at me then anything else. So I took my grateful place, in the backstage, painting, sometimes designing, the set.

Before I knew it, the bell rang, and I quickly got out of my chair and gathered all my books.

"Would you like help finding your next class?" Elizabeth suddenly offered, actually being kind for once.

"No thank you," I said, venting out any emotion, I didn't want her to get the idea I was going to talk to her again.


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Well, what do you think? Long chapter huh? Well, that happens a lot with my writing because I can't ever write short stories. I hope you comment, and I will post the second chapter soon.

~Chorustwo~

Very Nice. Keep it up!

Chapter 2:
Somewhat Friends


The next day was almost just as bad, except today they were speaking. Yeah, that would be right, they do have curious notions. Elizabeth White espeacially.

"Did you enjoy your first day of school here?" She questioned kindly, her expression blank. I gave a somewhat welcoming glare at her.

No, I absolutely detested it, thanks for asking, I thought, but really said, "Oh yeah, um... sure. It was okay," I spat out. Was it nervousness that caused me to say "um," I don't usually say that.

"Oh, that's good," She simply said, putting her books inside the desk. I blankly watched her sit down into the seat, she was sweating. I almost had to laugh out loud, but instead, I put my black, thin hair over my right shoulder and ignored her reactions.

About halfway through the class hour, she was still in the same position, simply looking out the window now. I was kind of angered that she was this uncomfortable. I was kind angered that anyone was this uncomfortable around any of my family. We try our hardest to remain normal, even though we will eventually skip school for either the sun or... hunting. And we don't eat at lunch either.

Yesterday, Lucile dared me to eat human food. I cringed at her when Elizabeth was looking over from the table next to ours. And she gave this confused expression. There always has to be one.

"Who's she?" Lucile said, looking back to Elizabeth.

"This girl in my class, she acts stranger then the rest of the class. I don't get her." I explained blankly.

"But you're still going to eat that." Lucile pressed. I kicked her leg, even if she couldn't feel it.

"I refuse." I said, crossing my arms to my chest.

"Do it!" Nicholas smirked. I resisted the urge to stick my tongue out to him.

"I'll bet her closet," Lucile started, smiling grandly.

"I'll bet her books," Nicholas said, hitting her arm.

"Ok fine!" I boomed angrily. I grabbed the apple that was sitting on my plate, looking at it as if it was going to bite me. My teeth came closer to it, inhaling the disgusting scent, and took a small bite of it. For the first time in a while I felt as if I was going to throw it back up, and I almost did, but drove it further down the dormant throat of mine.

"Gross! Gross!" I exclaimed a little too loudly, making Elizabeth stare at me again. I put the apple down, and turned around to glare at her back.

"You should say something!" Lucile murmured.

"No." I rebelled again too loudly. I tossed the idea around a little bit. Maybe I should go talk to her, and get her off my back. I got up from the table, and moved closer to where Elizabeth was sitting, which only had three others there, sitting away.

"Hey, Elizabeth!" I called.

"Hello!" She said weirdly.

"I was just thinking, I mean, I'm the new girl here, but... it's weird. Do you feel uncomfortable? By all means... oh this is a stupid question, but you just keep looking over here... and just... oh never mind!" I stated.

"I just don't get used to new people easily, that's all." She calmly said, looking into my eyes, and her's narrowed.

"Weren't they lighter yesterday?" She suddenly asked.

"What?" I said, looking at her indifferently.

"Oh, never mind." She said. Her whole table was now watching our conversation. I turned around to head back to mine. "It's just your eyes, do they always do that?"

"Do what?" I said, unbelievingly.

"Change color!" She admitted. I gave her another glare. "Never mind," she replied through nerves.

"I'll see you later," She pressed.

"Yeah." I simply said, and sat back down to the table. "Weird girl." I simply said.

"We should be talking." Lucile said inaudible to human ears.

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Yeah, I was bored so I wrote quickly. Comment!

~Chorustwo~

It's really good. ^^ Keep writing.

This is a good story. You didn't just spit out the whole point of the story and didn't just reveal the hidden attributes about the main character. Keep it up :)