The New Girl

chapter one:
"What?" Alex asked while eating her cereal.
"Were . . . moving," Her mom said while sliding her wedding ring off and on.
"Great, I just started making friends here." Alex mumbled.
"Its gonna be great, its the last day of school, and by the way get ready," Alex mom said while looking at the ground.
"Forget about daddy's accident!" Alex yelled while running to her room.
Alex put on her white dress, and black leggings under it. She put a white headband in her hair, and put on some white flips. Then she put on some make up, and her finish touch Chanel sunglasses. Her hair was natural straight, and it was long.
She ran out of the house, and got on the bus with her friend Anna.
"Anna guess what . ." whispered Alex.
"Oh my gosh, I love your outfit, and what?" Anna said while filling her nails.
"I'm . . I'm . . I'm MOVING!" cried Alex.
"Aww . . well tootles!" Anna said not even caring.
Some friend.
The school day went slow, after school she headed toward the stable.
"Brownie?" Alex said while looking in her stale, "Oh there you are you scared me! Only a short ride today."
Ugh . . my clothes are all dirty, better head home.
"Mom?" Alex said while looking for her.
She saw her mom, and froze in fear.
Her mom was on the ground . . not moving.



chapter two:
"Mom. . are you still here?" Alex said while looking pale which she is usually tan.
No answer.
"Mom . . Mommy?" Alex sobbed.
She checked for a pluse. Nothing.
She rused to the phone and dailed 911.
"Honey, the more we know the better we can figure out on how she passed." a fat officer said while eating a donut.
"I don't really know . . I'm getting a plane ticket also." Alex muttered.
Great. My whole summer, wasted.
Well at least the officer didn't make me stay here.
I'm moving to a new school. Great.
I didn't do anything, why are the people I love passing away?
Ellen is a very close family friend, she will be the one I'm staying with.
Thats what I thought until this sunday's paper.

Missing Women:

Ellen Parker went missing 2 days ago.
She went on a cruise ship, but never came back.
Nobody on the ship remembers she was there.


I have no where to GO! Now.
Gosh, can live getting any better.
Someone told me life was easy.
Yeah well so is College.
I have to go to my grandma. Ew with a captail W!
The summer is over, and I'm living with my grandma.
Now school starts.

"Hurry up, dear, the bus is waiting" My grandma said while shaking.
I hurried, got ready, and ran to the bus.
I heard whispers when I entered.

Sounds good. Keep going

It sounds very interesting! Keep it up! One thing I would like to see: it is hard reading along, the story jumps from one thing to another. I was sort of confused in reading the last part.
~Chaelle:)