SonicBoom
03-28-2008, 09:39 PM
Well, I got bored and I needed to finish an assignment so I wrote a story!
Here it is...
All around me, people running, laughing, getting hurt, just terror.
A strange man comes up to me and says, "Kid, you look distressed, what is wrong?"
I reply and say, "Nothing is wrong with me, just what's wrong with the rest. They've wore out their welcome, and those people laughing are just insulting others."
"You are destined for great things kid, you've got something... Something we can't see," He replies.
"Thanks," I say, walking away.
The next day I come outside, less people out there, then I walk into the store, picking up a video game.
The man comes back up, looking happy, and says "Nice game, last copy of the shop, could you compare a video game to life itself?"
"Definately, life is fun, so is a game, but we wore that out and I even think the town central's flowers arent blooming, it's Spring! What's up witht that? Apparantly people are taking life too much like a game."
"Kid, you could be a great writer!" He replies.
"Thank you, now, I hope people will come back to their senses, and feel reality." I say again, walking away.
"See ya later," he replies.
"See ya!"
Now it is a Friday, I'm on my computer, friends are chatting with each other (including me) and yet I look outside, watch the grey clouds move unsatisfied, and then I look at a picture of a special someone, everything goes back to normal, and all I say is, "Now really, how do I expect to get real after that? But then again, thanks for brightening my day."
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So... How do u like? Yeah its a bit sad toned, but I was also listening to a sad and angry song at the time, guessed to rubbed off to my story lol.
-Thunderwind-
Here it is...
All around me, people running, laughing, getting hurt, just terror.
A strange man comes up to me and says, "Kid, you look distressed, what is wrong?"
I reply and say, "Nothing is wrong with me, just what's wrong with the rest. They've wore out their welcome, and those people laughing are just insulting others."
"You are destined for great things kid, you've got something... Something we can't see," He replies.
"Thanks," I say, walking away.
The next day I come outside, less people out there, then I walk into the store, picking up a video game.
The man comes back up, looking happy, and says "Nice game, last copy of the shop, could you compare a video game to life itself?"
"Definately, life is fun, so is a game, but we wore that out and I even think the town central's flowers arent blooming, it's Spring! What's up witht that? Apparantly people are taking life too much like a game."
"Kid, you could be a great writer!" He replies.
"Thank you, now, I hope people will come back to their senses, and feel reality." I say again, walking away.
"See ya later," he replies.
"See ya!"
Now it is a Friday, I'm on my computer, friends are chatting with each other (including me) and yet I look outside, watch the grey clouds move unsatisfied, and then I look at a picture of a special someone, everything goes back to normal, and all I say is, "Now really, how do I expect to get real after that? But then again, thanks for brightening my day."
__________________________________________________ _______________
So... How do u like? Yeah its a bit sad toned, but I was also listening to a sad and angry song at the time, guessed to rubbed off to my story lol.
-Thunderwind-