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MsBored
03-25-2008, 03:35 AM
Meet the Characters
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:Smile:Mickey
:CrossBones:EvillyEvil
:nemo:Nemo
:stitch:Stitch
:donald:Donald
:smiley26:Peter Pan
:goofy:Goofy
:mickey-fantasia:Sorcerer
:minnie-walk-ani:Minnie
:daisy-walk-ani:Daisy
:Tigger:Tigger
:pirate2:Pirate
:stlaugh:Leprechaun
Walt

If the emotes are different actions but are the same characters it means that they're doing an action.

Chapter 1
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One day :Smile: & :stitch: were playing hide and seek, then :goofy: came to play with them.

:Smile:: Hi Goofy
Goofy: Hi Mickey, Hi Stitch
Stitch: Hi, I need to go home soon and make lunch for a party with Lilo!
:Smile:: OK

Then Tigger came who was new to Disney Village.

:Tigger:: Ahoy there!

No one listened except Mickey.

:wave2:: Hiya!
:Tigger:: Hi! No one ever talks to the new Disney.
:Smile:: Aww, well I hope they make you feel welcome! Well I gotta go help Nemo, bye!
:Tigger:: Bye friend!

Chapter 2

:Tigger: Hiya Mickey!
:Smile: Heys Tigger!

The other Disneys groaned.

:nemo:: Tigger is weird.
Goofy: Ya'eah!
:stlaugh:: He is different. He's always hopping.
Donald: Yeah!

Tigger felt sad, he didn't even hop to his house! He just walked sloppy..

:Smile:: Guys, be nice! Isn't it Walt Disney who taught us the be nice, not ice song?!
Donald: I guess..
:Smile:: Right! Be nice to every Disney, be nice, be nice, everyone is nice here, if you do your part! Be nice to every Disney, be nice, be nice, the new Disney will feel his start!
:nemo:: Well Walt Disney isn't always right..
Goofy: Yeah..

Walt Disney's spirit appeared.

Walt: Be nice to every Disney, be nice, be nice, everyone is nice here, if you do your part! Be nice to every Disney, be nice, be nice, the new Disney will feel his start!
Donald: I guess it's not so cheesy..

Walt disappeared after singing so he was sure he made his point.

Nemo got a stomach ache of guilt, but no one else did.. No one else included Tigger in any games! Only Mickey and Nemo played with him..

Chapter 3

:Tigger:: Hi Mickey, I'm sad. :(
:Unhappy:: Aww :(
Minnie & Daisy: You are not cool!
:Tigger:: Mickey is cool!
Daisy: Not him, you, you stink!

Tigger felt heartbroken, his heart pounded quicker than a soccer player doing a 200 mile race.

:Tigger:: Excuse me.

Tigger hopped very slowly away to his house.

:RedFaced:: Look what you did! Don't treat a Disney badly!
Minnie: Sorry, Mickey, I didn't know that could hurt his feelings.. I see Goofy do it all the time!
:Sleeping:: Goofy is mean sometimes, just don't follow him, guide yourself. So, play with Tigger, please?
Daisy & Minnie: OK! :)

A few Disneys like Tigger, what will happen? Will the other Disneys like him? Stay tuned to find out!

Read my other stories..

Mr. Hacker - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=143591

It's a Mystery - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=143543

This is so unfair!-Story- - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=143540

I Wish - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=142708

What a Great da-CRASH - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=143678

Mickey's Days - Series - - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=143998 - This One

Can't Stop Thinking... - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=145817

VMK's Closing?! *Story* - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=145511

MLKnCookies
03-25-2008, 03:37 AM
Cute way of using smiley faces. Sometimes it gets confusing because the smiley does not appear.

acefredfred
03-25-2008, 03:54 AM
LOL. funny funny.

iRaccoon
03-25-2008, 05:25 AM
hehehe! Nice story! Its good so far.


*Tips: : Tigger doesn't really say Ahoy. Mickey usually says "Welp! I gotta go help Nemo!" Mickey kinda uses slang.. Just tips for a better story! No argue here!

xoop
05-09-2008, 12:47 AM
I like it :) and the smilies do appear, just wait.