SafariLyssaOnVMK
03-23-2008, 02:28 AM
Hello! This is a rivised version of my other story. It is about Alice in Wonderland and is set in Disney World Florida. Hope you enjoy it!
Characters:
Allie: A 10 year old that lives in Orlando, FL
Alice: A Disney character that has a great imagination.
Madam Leota: A séance in the Haunted Mansion that helped Alice with her first mission.
Lilo: Alice's roommate
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Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness.
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Chapter One
The Riddle
Alice was just outside the Cinderella Castle leaning against a giant mosaic that told the story of Cinderella. She was near the gate, so she could see the sky easily. It was 8:25 and the park hadn’t opened yet. Even though she was a Disney character, being in Alice in Wonderland, she could certainly pass for a normal kid. She had been a cute little 7-and-a-half-year-old when she was in Wonderland, but when she had gone out of a looking glass a year earlier she had transformed to a 3-D non-cartoon-y girl that was 9. Her blue dress was gone and was replaced with a sky-blue tank top and a pair of blue jeans. She didn’t have anything with her except her kitten. She had found a tower and learned to deal with the fact that her roommates were Lilo and Stitch.
Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness.
What was going on? No Disney characters. Nothing cheery and happy. Somebody would know what to do.
Almost immediately, Alice knew who to go to. Alice ran towards the Haunted Mansion.
Alice wasn’t exactly “excited” to go to Madam Leota. Not many people trusted her. But trusted, or not Madam Leota was probably the only person who could find out what was going on. When Alice walked into the Haunted Mansion, she dodged all the cobwebs and spiders lurking around and headed for the Séance Room. As she approached the Séance Room, could hear Madam Leota’s voice echoing through the room:
“Serpents and spiders
Tail of a rat
Call in the Spirits
Wherever they’re at!”
“Uh, hi Madam Leota.” Alice said. “Hello, Alice, need anything?” Madam Leota said. Since she had only visited Madam Leota once, Alice was surprised that Madam Leota acted as this was a normal thing. Alice replied by saying, “Well, the sky is black, for one thing. Its… really weird and hard to explain. Don’t you already know? Are you going to recite a spell like you did last time I came?” Madam Leota didn’t say anything for a while. For a second, Alice thought Madam Leota was ignoring her. Then, after a few minutes, Madam Leota finally said:
“The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop”
“What does that mean?” Alice exclaimed. “You’ll figure it out in due time.” Madam Leota replied. “But that is all I can do to help you for now.”
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Chapter-Stats: Chapter One has been writen and revised! Hope you enjoy it!
Characters:
Allie: A 10 year old that lives in Orlando, FL
Alice: A Disney character that has a great imagination.
Madam Leota: A séance in the Haunted Mansion that helped Alice with her first mission.
Lilo: Alice's roommate
~~~
Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness.
~~~
Chapter One
The Riddle
Alice was just outside the Cinderella Castle leaning against a giant mosaic that told the story of Cinderella. She was near the gate, so she could see the sky easily. It was 8:25 and the park hadn’t opened yet. Even though she was a Disney character, being in Alice in Wonderland, she could certainly pass for a normal kid. She had been a cute little 7-and-a-half-year-old when she was in Wonderland, but when she had gone out of a looking glass a year earlier she had transformed to a 3-D non-cartoon-y girl that was 9. Her blue dress was gone and was replaced with a sky-blue tank top and a pair of blue jeans. She didn’t have anything with her except her kitten. She had found a tower and learned to deal with the fact that her roommates were Lilo and Stitch.
Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness.
What was going on? No Disney characters. Nothing cheery and happy. Somebody would know what to do.
Almost immediately, Alice knew who to go to. Alice ran towards the Haunted Mansion.
Alice wasn’t exactly “excited” to go to Madam Leota. Not many people trusted her. But trusted, or not Madam Leota was probably the only person who could find out what was going on. When Alice walked into the Haunted Mansion, she dodged all the cobwebs and spiders lurking around and headed for the Séance Room. As she approached the Séance Room, could hear Madam Leota’s voice echoing through the room:
“Serpents and spiders
Tail of a rat
Call in the Spirits
Wherever they’re at!”
“Uh, hi Madam Leota.” Alice said. “Hello, Alice, need anything?” Madam Leota said. Since she had only visited Madam Leota once, Alice was surprised that Madam Leota acted as this was a normal thing. Alice replied by saying, “Well, the sky is black, for one thing. Its… really weird and hard to explain. Don’t you already know? Are you going to recite a spell like you did last time I came?” Madam Leota didn’t say anything for a while. For a second, Alice thought Madam Leota was ignoring her. Then, after a few minutes, Madam Leota finally said:
“The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop”
“What does that mean?” Alice exclaimed. “You’ll figure it out in due time.” Madam Leota replied. “But that is all I can do to help you for now.”
~~~
Chapter-Stats: Chapter One has been writen and revised! Hope you enjoy it!