The story will be writen in a few minutes or so. Its actually pronounced "Burning to the Ground" but i thought Banning to the Ground would be better ;)


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Ah.. Another regular day in VMK.. I got out of bed and looked
out the window. I saw a staff banning an innocent new guest.
The guest was my friend. I met him a minute ago.. I emailed him and he had a picture of the banning.

Dear Player,
You've just received your first permanent ban. THIS BAN IS FINAL. You were banned for: <(?STAFF?)>.
~TheDarkBanner

This was a sign.

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Good start on the story :) Lol note how it says your first permenant ban. How many more will the guest recieve..... I must find out! :)

Wat wat wat cud he be banned for! I wanna kno, that'sa gud story, leaving suspense, but dont do it for too long ;)

Chapter Two: : They know what!?!


It was a lazy morning of Saturday for Thomas. He remembered his friend getting banned. He went on VMK, He went on his Internet Explorer and heard a "YOU'VE GOT MAIL!". Thomas openned the browser up and noticed.. THE MESSAGE!! It was from DarkSpades. It was TheDarkBanner.. He E-Mailed Thomas this..

To: Thomas
From: DarkSpades

Yes "Thomas". I know who you are.... Your Thomas Phifler.. You live on FreedomsBell Ave! Your birth is in a leap year. Your house is entirely black.. I'm after you Thomas.. Now you better run.. Move away.. NOW. And your account is now deleted..

~DarkSpades...
P.S : : Drop the laptop and run...

Dear Player,

You've just received your first permanent ban. THIS BAN IS FINAL. You were banned for: <(?STAFF?)>.
~TheDarkBanner

On VMK when he logged in it said the exact thing for the guest..



Thomas had blank eyes. His heart sank and he got scared. All this was true.. Thomas had no friends except for the guest on VMK.. No enemies at his school.. No friends at his school.. This was a major Staff-Stalker-BanMan.. Only thing is.. Who could help Thomas go.. He was alone. No family history. His last-name was a random name he named himself.. What could this mean? A new School Enemy?? The creepy janitor at RustyRockspeed High School?? A new friend?? This wasn't a friend.. Someone was out to get him.

He could go to ~~~~



;) Leavin` Ya` Hangin`

wow, that was weird (in a good way :)), good story, keep it up

So wait when you said it was supposed to be Burning instead of Banning, it's like you saying Burning in a british way... Banning to the Ground!

Chapter Three: This is gone too far!

He had to find the real V-M-K Headquarters.. He had to find this person first. But he checked his account.. He was banned! He looked at the V-M-K Player Count and it said "13 Players Online". Those 13 players lowered!

12...
11....
10...
4!?!
2...
1...
0.

They were.. BANNED..

"This has gone too far!" Thomas said.

Thomas ran toward the train station. .
He turned on his iPod while riding his skateboard to the Train-Station. He played Whip it by DEVO. He dropped change into the Guard-Fence. The train-doors were closing. He threw his ticket at the Ticket-Collector, He flinched. Thomas looked for Train-Bedroom #12. He walked in it. Turns out people had
to share..

There was 3 beds. Thomas told the Train-Stewartists there was a mistake. He said "Sorry! This was a room you have to sleep on the floor yourself!"

He got handed a blanket and a pillow. The window was jammed open too.. 3 Kids entered the room. Ryan, Max, and Richard. They woke up and got off the train. There was DISNEYLAND. Now he..


CENSORED *Censored because of sharing of Personal Information about the actual V-M-K Headquarters because i know where it is*

I dont get the CENSORED part... Why is it in the spoiler BBC code anyway?

The censored part is because i couldn't CAN'T post the real location which i know because i will put the staff in danger.

Yea I bet everyone who has a complaint will run to VMK HQ and ur to blame :Tongue: Anyways keep up the work :) GJ

RockenSpeed high LOL. Nice story.. Suspenseful!

I like your story, it's very cool!

Nice story!

Like the story! It also gave me the ideataught me how to make cross-outs and black-outs with mouse appearances. Well,this thread did.

Kind of confusing to follow.

Cool Story! it's fun to read all these stories that everyone writes

its nice, how did you make cross outs and black outs?

[ s] <-- first for the cross out. [/ s] for the end :) *NO SPACES

[ Spoiler ] BLAHBLAHBLAH [/ Spoiler ] *No spaces

Sorry to keep you guys waiting.


Chapter Four: An Organization Of Stalker-Banners?...

I marched toward the "Offices Of Disney" I marched inside.. I was surprised while i marched toward there.. It seemed like over Nine-thousand-million players where there to fight for their rights. I recognized some players.. There was Kate from school. Jack from school. Gregory from school. Tom from school and Hank from school. And other millions from different schools and places. We smiled and pushed down the doors of the Offices Of Disney. We saw pictures of the millions of players on the wall. A big plat said "Hall Of The Stalked" We put on lab-coats and a hat. We crowded the place. I went to look for Yavn. I entered the hall. Some guys where carrying suitcases with labels "Personal Information." I covered my face and saw Yavn's office. Door was locked with a chain. The guard saw my coat. It had a patch i didn't notice! The patch said "SECURITY". The guard gave me the keys and he went off to get a TurkeyChurro. I oppened the door and slid inside. Yavn said "Wha- Wha do you want?.." I bent down to Yavn and helped him up. I asked "What happened Yavn??" Yavn explained it all. Kate, and Tom were in confusion. Yavn called the Disney-Guards. I can't believe stalkers took over VMK.. Yavn crawled out the window. Three Guards showed up. "Heh Cheif what should we do with this boy?" One said. The cheif replied. "Put them sailing in a boat.." The guards showed up and Tom was merely on the floor fainted. While the chief could only put Kate and Thomas on the boat. Kate escaped the boat but Thomas was left on the boat. Kate was rescued but Thomas was never seen again.. Some say Thomas landed on some land and lived there. Others said he sinked.. Others say he drowned.. No one knew the answer.. Of course except for Kate who didn't bother telling anyone for some weird-pay reasons... Could Kate be part of the Stalkers??

THE END..


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