View Full Version : Not So Short VMK Stories


Shartruse
03-15-2008, 07:54 AM
Okay well i decided to make random not so short stories about me and my friends in vmk. Give me some feedback because I'm not really good at not so short stories. I'll be using my real VMK friends and what I call them. Characters at the moment: Shartruse(Cookie), Mz.SodaPop(Pop), Shadow.of.Sunsets(Shadow), Green.Eyeliner(Surf), Komplicationz(Desire), Saval(Savvy) AutumnBlossom(Lily)
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Three Wishes. Part One

On a sunny and I mean really sunny as in blinding sunny day in the land called vmk, Cookie was hanging out in Storybookland under a shady tree with her buds Pop and Shadow.
"Omg! Like I am so popular and cool! I am also prettier then all you people." said a brunette girl that had shown up in the room while Pop and Shadow were discussing their daily schedule.
"Well, like i am totally prettier and positive that I am so much more popular than you!" Shadow squeaked out in a girly voice as he made his hair girly looking. Everyone gave him stares as if he were crazy and suddenly imagined him as a girl which made them all shiver.
"Um Shadow, stick to acting like a guy," Pop said in a criticizing voice.Suddenly a weird genie like person popped out of nowhere.
"You have activated the genie effect Mz.SodaPop. Now make three wishes," the genie shouted in a booming voice.
"Okay I wish that Shadow would act more of a guy." Pop said as she scolded Shadow with a glare. There was a poof of black smoke around Shadow and as the smoke faded away the new more guyish Shadow stepped out. He had food stains all over his shirt and his hair was a mess under the ragged baseball cap he wore. Suddenly the room shook as Shadow let out an ear bursting burp.
"Ah bad wish Pop!" Cookie screamed as she covered her ears and tried to plug her nose.
"We'll just have to train him to get some manners," Pop replied with a glare.
Pop grabbed Shadow and dragged him to a room called 'Training Quarters'.
She immediately grabbed a few cloth napkins and placed one in her lap to show dining etiquette. Pop handed Cookie one and directed her to do the same.
"Now Shadow your going to dine with us tonight and learn some manners." Pop said in a threatening tone. Shadow looked up and shrugged as he grabbed a napkin and threw in next to a shiny plate in front of him.
"Shadow put that napkin in your lap like us," Pop said as she refered to Cookie and Pop's own doings.



~~~~~~~~Two Hours Later~~~~~~~~


"Finally he's got it all down!" Pop shouted loudly as she watched a tidy Shadow putting the napkin on his lap and leaving his elbows off the table.
"Pop you still have two wishes you know," Cookie asked with her eyebrow raised.
"I'll save them for a rainy day," Pop said with a smile as Shadow had given her his own wallet with all his money.
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How did you all like it? Part two will come soon. You may ask to join in on a story. Please do not leave me harsh comments. I did try my best.

Vienna
03-15-2008, 03:51 PM
I like it. Nice, three wishes always back fire! Lol

Shartruse
03-20-2008, 06:30 AM
Characters at the moment: Shartruse(Cookie), Mz.SodaPop(Pop), Shadow.of.Sunsets(Shadow), Green.Eyeliner(Surf), Komplicationz(Desire), Saval(Savvy) AutumnBlossom(Lily)
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Three Wishes: Part two

After the first wish Pop was still holding onto the last two wishes for a 'rainy day'. Well it was a freezing icy rain day.
"Arg I'm sooooo bored!" Lily said as she stared outside.
"Lily we all are!" Surf shouted frustrated. Pop was not listening to the conversation. She was boredly staring outside daydreaming of a sunny day. Suddenly a thought popped into her head.She quickly snapped her eyes shut as she said loudly outloud, "I wish for a sunny day!" There was a giant poof of smoke and the previous magical genie poofed in coughing.
"Your wish is granted!" He boomed out with a slight cough. The room shook and a ray of light appeared through the clouds. Rays of lights were popping out of the sky. As the last cloud was pierced through with light the whole entire room was bright. The sun was warm and had radiated heat through the windows making everything burn. The room started to become less visible through the bright sun rays.
"Ow! My eyes!" Surf whined as she tried blocking the light from her eyes.
"Hide behind something!" Pop shouted before diving behind a pirates wall.
"Ow my arm!" Lily shouted as she tripped over a chair.
Pop found three pairs of sunglasses behind the wall she was hiding behind. She quickly put on the sunglasses and she stepped out into the bright lights which turned out to be quite dark through the sunglasses. She rushed over to Lily and Surf handing them both a pair. They all left the building to play POTC and ended up winning all the time since everyone else was still being blinded by the sun rays. It was night time and the sun light finally disappeared. It had also started raining again.
"Finally no more sunglasses!" Lily said as she widened her eyes. They all had went to bed hearing the sound of rain. :eggbluegreenpurple:

xoop
03-29-2008, 01:12 PM
Cool how you did this all :-D

acefredfred
03-29-2008, 04:06 PM
Nice story. :P

Shartruse
03-31-2008, 01:33 AM
UPDATE: Taking a small break from these to work on my chapter story. Your welcome to leave ideas for the next part.