Shartruse
03-15-2008, 07:54 AM
Okay well i decided to make random not so short stories about me and my friends in vmk. Give me some feedback because I'm not really good at not so short stories. I'll be using my real VMK friends and what I call them. Characters at the moment: Shartruse(Cookie), Mz.SodaPop(Pop), Shadow.of.Sunsets(Shadow), Green.Eyeliner(Surf), Komplicationz(Desire), Saval(Savvy) AutumnBlossom(Lily)
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Three Wishes. Part One
On a sunny and I mean really sunny as in blinding sunny day in the land called vmk, Cookie was hanging out in Storybookland under a shady tree with her buds Pop and Shadow.
"Omg! Like I am so popular and cool! I am also prettier then all you people." said a brunette girl that had shown up in the room while Pop and Shadow were discussing their daily schedule.
"Well, like i am totally prettier and positive that I am so much more popular than you!" Shadow squeaked out in a girly voice as he made his hair girly looking. Everyone gave him stares as if he were crazy and suddenly imagined him as a girl which made them all shiver.
"Um Shadow, stick to acting like a guy," Pop said in a criticizing voice.Suddenly a weird genie like person popped out of nowhere.
"You have activated the genie effect Mz.SodaPop. Now make three wishes," the genie shouted in a booming voice.
"Okay I wish that Shadow would act more of a guy." Pop said as she scolded Shadow with a glare. There was a poof of black smoke around Shadow and as the smoke faded away the new more guyish Shadow stepped out. He had food stains all over his shirt and his hair was a mess under the ragged baseball cap he wore. Suddenly the room shook as Shadow let out an ear bursting burp.
"Ah bad wish Pop!" Cookie screamed as she covered her ears and tried to plug her nose.
"We'll just have to train him to get some manners," Pop replied with a glare.
Pop grabbed Shadow and dragged him to a room called 'Training Quarters'.
She immediately grabbed a few cloth napkins and placed one in her lap to show dining etiquette. Pop handed Cookie one and directed her to do the same.
"Now Shadow your going to dine with us tonight and learn some manners." Pop said in a threatening tone. Shadow looked up and shrugged as he grabbed a napkin and threw in next to a shiny plate in front of him.
"Shadow put that napkin in your lap like us," Pop said as she refered to Cookie and Pop's own doings.
~~~~~~~~Two Hours Later~~~~~~~~
"Finally he's got it all down!" Pop shouted loudly as she watched a tidy Shadow putting the napkin on his lap and leaving his elbows off the table.
"Pop you still have two wishes you know," Cookie asked with her eyebrow raised.
"I'll save them for a rainy day," Pop said with a smile as Shadow had given her his own wallet with all his money.
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How did you all like it? Part two will come soon. You may ask to join in on a story. Please do not leave me harsh comments. I did try my best.
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Three Wishes. Part One
On a sunny and I mean really sunny as in blinding sunny day in the land called vmk, Cookie was hanging out in Storybookland under a shady tree with her buds Pop and Shadow.
"Omg! Like I am so popular and cool! I am also prettier then all you people." said a brunette girl that had shown up in the room while Pop and Shadow were discussing their daily schedule.
"Well, like i am totally prettier and positive that I am so much more popular than you!" Shadow squeaked out in a girly voice as he made his hair girly looking. Everyone gave him stares as if he were crazy and suddenly imagined him as a girl which made them all shiver.
"Um Shadow, stick to acting like a guy," Pop said in a criticizing voice.Suddenly a weird genie like person popped out of nowhere.
"You have activated the genie effect Mz.SodaPop. Now make three wishes," the genie shouted in a booming voice.
"Okay I wish that Shadow would act more of a guy." Pop said as she scolded Shadow with a glare. There was a poof of black smoke around Shadow and as the smoke faded away the new more guyish Shadow stepped out. He had food stains all over his shirt and his hair was a mess under the ragged baseball cap he wore. Suddenly the room shook as Shadow let out an ear bursting burp.
"Ah bad wish Pop!" Cookie screamed as she covered her ears and tried to plug her nose.
"We'll just have to train him to get some manners," Pop replied with a glare.
Pop grabbed Shadow and dragged him to a room called 'Training Quarters'.
She immediately grabbed a few cloth napkins and placed one in her lap to show dining etiquette. Pop handed Cookie one and directed her to do the same.
"Now Shadow your going to dine with us tonight and learn some manners." Pop said in a threatening tone. Shadow looked up and shrugged as he grabbed a napkin and threw in next to a shiny plate in front of him.
"Shadow put that napkin in your lap like us," Pop said as she refered to Cookie and Pop's own doings.
~~~~~~~~Two Hours Later~~~~~~~~
"Finally he's got it all down!" Pop shouted loudly as she watched a tidy Shadow putting the napkin on his lap and leaving his elbows off the table.
"Pop you still have two wishes you know," Cookie asked with her eyebrow raised.
"I'll save them for a rainy day," Pop said with a smile as Shadow had given her his own wallet with all his money.
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How did you all like it? Part two will come soon. You may ask to join in on a story. Please do not leave me harsh comments. I did try my best.