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iRaccoon
03-08-2008, 06:55 AM
The
Guarding
Angel
By iRaccoon


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Introduction...


Summers Over..


SUMMERS OVER..




I feel like a new destiny awaits..

Like A new Destiny Awaits..

Among trees is a spacecraft..

Trees..
Spacecraft..

The true connections are.. Trees+Spacecraft=JOURNEY

Journey Journey

JOURNEY...

In my daydreams.. I see myself on a tower.. A flag.. A Flag Of Honor..

Flag Of Honor..


Flag of dreams and hope..'


Hopes and dreams...

Guarding the entirely white tower.. from Evil-Smilies..

My training was said to start in the afternoon...


Said by who??

SAID BY WHO??

My story is a journey.. My name is Zenos Sefroms..

I'M THE GUARDING ANGEL WHO PROTECTS THE WHITE TOWER OF HOPES AND DREAMS AND HONOR FROM EVIS.. MY JOURNEY STARTS..
NOW...

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Tell me if its a good plot! PLEASE I NEED FEEDBACK!

Shartruse
03-08-2008, 07:03 AM
Whoah thats an awesome plot there. :) It sounds interesting and mysterious

iRaccoon
03-08-2008, 06:23 PM
Chapter One: T R A I N I N G

Four Things Floating in mid-air.. You could only see their eyes. One spit out. "Zeno.. Your training begins now.." Said one voice with blue eyes. "Wait What? What training?" Zeno yelled. "This training.. This Training.. THIS TRAINING! SAVE THE WHITE TOWERS! THOSE FOUR TOWERS POWER PERSER! WE NEED THOSE TOWERS TO KEEP THE WORLD OF PERSER RUNNING ZENO!!" One voice said in a yell. A Thing disappeared. "WE'VE LOST ONE TOWER!!" A thing said with a concern. Banging was on the door, A blackglowing sword was being sticked into the door. "Take this Zeno! This is INFERNAL-HOPE! It is a sword that can be used to do various things! Its Strength..

iRaccoon
03-09-2008, 09:19 PM
Chapter TWO: Friends-Forever☼

Zeno woke up on a tower. A big tower the size of the empire state building.
He looked at INFERNAL-HOPE. He felt his hope stronger. He held another sword with the words engraved..

Good Paths
~Tesno

Zeno set his path looking for Tesno now. With great hope.. The backstory from Zeno and Tesno was that they met as kids. Of course Tesno and Zeno were stowaways on a cargo ship but the cargo ship got blown up. When Tesno and Zeno made it out. They found a stranged boat out of nowhere. They said "Good Paths Make Our Path.. Life Makes Our Paths. Let is flow.." They both said as they entered the boat. Zeno cried a bit in happiness remembering the time they met..


Meanwhile at Tesno's boat.

"We'll never lose-

At the tower

friendship.. Friendship

Tesno's Boat..

Friendship is forever.."

THE SAME TIME..

"AND ITS THE TRUTH!" Said Tesno in his boat.

"AND ITS THE TRUTH!" Said Zeno on the tower the exact time Tesno said it.




~We'll Never Lose Friendship.. Friendship is forever.. and its the truth... ~iRaccoon

MLKnCookies
03-12-2008, 11:20 PM
Sorry, very confusing to understand.

Stemaboat_Tyler
03-13-2008, 12:03 PM
I don't get it...