It was like any other day in vmk. With Dream_epcotfans and his friends: Angel_kie,TravisSch,and VMK_Cricket ( don't ask rofl ).
Key: epcot u alive?
Epcot: maybe maybe not rofl ok i'm here i'm just fixing up my pretty vmk rooms with PPR small islands Dream_epcotfans said. (Both met up with Travis.)
Epcot: hey stitch what are u doing..
Travis: - afk;) -
key: - stocks stitch - Jaws! - key see stitch start to run and she chases him -
epcot: - laugh.is to heard - ( yes i'm using vmk text in my story).
Epcot: hey lets go meet up with VMK_Cricket
both: ok!! ( all 3 walk into cricket's room )
epcot: hey cricket how are u (setting: town square room with VMK_lion,red,butterfly,song,tiger,sunny,smiles,LoL o,Mocha,bingo,and bubbles)
staff: @_@ how are u epcot.. -_- ( sunny and tiger leave )
sunny: me and tiger have a report..
Song: i forgot something.. my guest room is on fire.
Bingo ( stays and stares at epcot with dreamy eyes ( i know random part!!) )
bubbles: oh look hurry needs my help in his guest room.
Smiles: (pokes key key's hair).
Mocha: hmm bubbles and hurry need me bye!
Lolo: don't look at me i'm just watching a guest room..
Mars: gtg sorry.
Epcot: un hi bingo how are u tonight
Bingo: oh sorry what i was reading a report.. ( everyone rolls their eyes and Bingo )
Epcot: nevermind
Angel_kie: ok smiles i know my hair smells good but please stop poking it.
Smiles: oh sorry i had nothing better to do..
Epcot and Kie: yeah.. u didn't:strolleyes:
( yavn comes in )
Yavn: Hi Dream_epcotfans,Angel_kie,and TravisSch vmk needs your help we have like 50 people joining each day. We have the Max. of staff members per month so we need u 3 to help us u can be mini staff u will gave HOST_ in front of your title and will have events for the weekend please give us the time u are on and we will give u a list of event and u can chose 3.
Epcot: wait can i get a name switch before we do this?
Yavn: sure what do u want to be
Epcot: how about HOST_Mickey
Yavn: got it:)
( Travis,angel,and cricket get the message of: Dream_epcotfans's new name is HOST_Mickey.)
Yavn: ok Angel_kie what would u like to be known as. Angel_kie about about puppy.
Yavn: got it:)
( Travis and Mickey get the message of Angel_kie is now known as HOST_Puppy.)
Mickey: yay i knew u were going to be puppy
Puppy: roof rofl
Yavn: ok you to stop ok TravisSch u get to pic your name.
Travis i will go with TravisSch
( music and puppy get the message of: TravisSch is now known as HOST_TravisSch)
Mickey: nice pick for a name rofl.
( yavn gives each of them the stuff they need: Tour Guide Vest,Red mickey ears, all the magic in vmk, and there Green goofy badges!
Welcome to the Kingdom of Dreams!

ok here is the moment u haen't been waitingfor DUNN DUNN DUNN!! testing starts tomorrow at school i know i'm sorry please don't close the thread i will be gone for 8 days!!:(

Huh??? kinda hard to read

You need to go to different lines when people speak.... and use better grammar, it's kinda hard to read right now. :[

I agree with mickey.

Remember, grammar is your friend!

*Tip-

Whenever somebody is talking. Create a new line.


Also what can be helpful when posting stories on VMKF,

Use the "increase Indent" button on the bottom rightside of the Color font changer.

~Mad

Another tip:
Use different colors when different people are talking

Woot! I'm in a story. LOL

HOST_TravisSch... sounds catchy, huh? ;) Also, how can a guest room be on fire? Did VMK program a guest room to start on fire (except of Caribbean Town Square room)? @_@ And am I "afk" all the time?

Nice story so far, but as people have said, put some line breaks in it so it's easier to read.

stitch: un idk it just happened everyone: i will fix the story as soon as spring break starts but i have like 80 minutes testing tomorrow i think the next day is 2 hours!! mostly it's 80 minutes i'm am VERY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stressed out please don'tt ell me how to fix my story

Oh yeah.. In one month. Ok so Shesh.. We're giving tips! Its national free tip day! No really it is..

wait ru really HOST_Mickey now?

Nice story! Great imagination; keep writing! :)

Oh yeah.. In one month. Ok so Shesh.. We're giving tips! Its national free tip day! No really it is..

sping break starts march 31 gosh

wait ru really HOST_Mickey now?

what do u think lol

this seems so true is it really?

it's a story why would it be true and like there isn't a VMK_ or HOST_Mickey ( yet )

ok starting back on the story so bump!