Chapter 1: a new beginning
One day pal was walking around VMK espanalade, bothereing guests. Then a guest yelled out 'Oh My Gosh, there is an evil hat! Then BestLester ( my closest vmk friend) said " Um.. right. evil mad hatters. Then Vienna came. ' i feel like wearing my mad hatter. Then Best said " No! dont wear it!!! YOU WILL BE EVI- but it was too late. "AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed i and best. Vienna's eyes turned red. Then princess_monique said " what is wrong with Vienna? im going to wear my mad hatter hat." "NOOO!!!!!!" then monique went evil. then the mad hatters are spreading. camomann weared it too. then... SEE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

hard to follow but I like it!

Chapter 2: The beginnning of the end
Then when people started to wear the mad hatters, they turned evil. Then they were also selling mad hatters on the emporium. (to make VMK worse). Then BestLester wore his black ears so he wont get caught by them. I, pal wore my referee hat. Then a girl called Harley_Qtie came. "RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!! AHH GET OFF ME GUEST!!! NOT MY GOLD PRINCESS!!!" she yelled on the top of her lungs. "The girl is crazy." said Best. "But she's not evil! C'mon we gotta help!" I said. So then me and Best went there to help. So I bravly (yea right i was freakishly SCARED) and Kicked a guest off Harley. The Mad Hatter fell off the guest and exploded. "Thanks for saving me and my rare! My name is Harley_Qtie! What's yours?" the girl asked. "My name is palkiasurfergirl." I said. "My name is BestLester!" Best said. "Well Best and Pal, since I'm not Madified yet, can I join up? By The Way, I know this guy who's not Madified either!" Harley said excitedly. "Sure and sorry for calling you crazy." said Best. "Welcome! So who's this guy?" I said. "AwesomeOldNight." replied Harley. Then we made a team against the mad hatters.

UMM Why didn't TheBestLester sell the Mad Hatter hat??

It exploded duh! Nice Story Pal, just need to fix your grammer!
~ Vienna

I like the story a lot and... umm... can I be in it please?

Chapter 3: the real adventure begins( BuzzBoy133 is in the story.)
So then the guest got kicked bc of the mad hatter. But the problem is Vienna. Vienna is still controlled by the hat. Then a guy named BuzzBoy came. But Vienna knew he would be a trainer. So she got monique with her and asked if one of the good ppl to battle her. So I equipped me keyblade on my palkia.http://www.p-pokemon.com/dp/poke18.jpg then BuzzBoy used his torterra. http://tractor.centerblog.net/rub-pokemon--5.html Then we started the battle at main street. Vienna had Darkrai, http://www.pokemex.com/imagenes/ArtDarkrai.png a strong pokemn, and princess_monique got a suicune.http://pokedream.com/fans/fanart/suicune.png Then we started the battle. Suicune got out first bc of torterra, then darkrai defeated torterra, then palkia beated up darkrai for 2 hours. Then Vienna said, "It's not over left." Then Vienna and princess_monique left to the madhattermobile. "Great work BuzzBoy." i said. "thx." he responded.

Chapter 4: Looking For Awesome and Phinny's Appearance!
"Hello! We're Still Here!" yelled Best and Harley_Qtie. "Oh Yea! I Forgot we had to look for AwesomeOldKnight!" I yelled. "Well Let's Get Moving!" said Best impatiently. "Lets Go! Sorry BuzzBoy133, but wanna come?" I asked only to see that he had already left. Pal read the note that he had dropped before he left. "A Trainer's Job Is Never Done." it read. "Lets Go." I said finally. As we walked to the Dungeon, we saw that the Fight With the Mad Hatter's had spread. And there was AwesomeOldKnight, fighting with princess_monique, his so called 'amigo'. "OMG! LOOK ITS BELLA!!!!" Best yelled at the top of his lungs. And yes there Bella was, with a Mad Hatter on, Kung Fu Fighting with HOST_Phinny. "Hey guys! A Little help?!" yelled the guy who we thought was Awesome. "OK!" yelled Harley_Qtie and slammed princess_monique off him. "Sorry Ray, but you're evil." said Harley. "OMG." Harley yelled and that was all it took to see the HUGEST MAD HATTER HAT ON THE FACE OF EARTH. Then we all heard Vienna's voice. "If you want to save VMK Pal, you'll need to come the the castle! MUAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Vienna yelled evily on the magic microphone she stole from Yavn, who was unfortunatly for all of us, a Mad Hatter! "What WILL WE DO!!?!!" yelled Harley, she had lost it completly. "We Go!" I said as bravly as possible. But on everyone's mind was this, "We're Doomed."

Pal's Group Right Now:
Palkiasurfergirl (ME)
BestLester
AwesomeOldKnight
Harley_Qtie
HOST_Phinny

Vienna's Group
Vienna
cammoman
princess_monique
PenguinWarrior
Host_Bella!

Can i be someone who is mad and then eats candy and then is good and keeps putting the hat on ( the dumb, crazy, one:) )

Cool story

Pal... Where's the new chappy?! anyways... i need a bigger Mad Hatter Castle, one thats biggest one on the face of the universe?!

Here's The New Chapter!!! and No Vienna, you're going to have to stay happy with the face of the world...

Chapter 5: Getting There
"So, do any of us know where the Mad Hatter Castle is?" asked Phinny. "Hey look a sign!" yelled Harley. "Mad Hatter Castle: To The Right" read the sign. "It looks happy! Let's go that way!" said Awesome. We All gave him @_@ looks. “What?” he asked. “Well, that’s the only sign…” said Best. “Well fine, we’ll go that way…” I said. So the group went on toward the way the sign directed, but no one saw that there was two signs and that the first one fell off revealing these words, “Doom, Right!”
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“So, Vienna… what do you plan by keeping my in here?” asked Yavn. “Well, my revenge of course! After all those guests took all my stuff, I decided to get it all back, and I did, but there was one flaw in my plan. You, you had to destroy me dream.” Vienna said. “What?! Me? Dream?” he said. “Yes, my dream of a happy VMK, but no, you had to close the dang site?! No, taking you was an answer, that I could save the site, but I wasted so much time that my heart turned cold. I wanted VMK, for my own needs. Well Mr.Yavn, any last words?” I stated. “What?!” he exclaimed but the ice beam froze him and he was thrown into a chamber. “Penguin_Warrior, stall Pal’s group. Lead them to my trap…” I said. “Yes, Vienna,” he said and ran off. “Perfect.”
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“Oh My GOSH!!!!” yelled Harley. “What?!” we all said. “My Sparrow Top is getting wet!” We all gave her @_@ looks. “I guess we found it but I wish we didn’t!” yelled Best, and there it was the Castle, princess_monique and cammoman standing in front of there. “Uh oh,”

Chapter 6: Testing Day
“It’s nice of you to come to and join us!” said Ray (princess_monique) sarcastically of course.
“I wouldn’t say the same thing, because I’m not pleased to be here.” said HOST_Phinny.
“Oh, I see that the host actually says big words.” said Ace. (cammoman).
“Don’t offend a host! She can ban you!” said Harley.
“We’re not afraid of being banned, this is reality sorry Harley!” said Ray, laughing evily.
“So, is Vienna too good to be seen by us, is that why she sent you guys?” said Awesome.
“Oh, Miss Vienna has some important plans to take care of.” said Ace plainly.
“So, she is too cool for us to bring the fight!?” said Best.
“Are you calling her a coward?” said Ray.
“Maybe I Am.” said Best.
“You’ll see. Soon enough. But you have a spelling bee to attend.” said Ray.
All of the sudden, everything turned black. They were in the castle.
“Welcome to the Gone or Win Spelling Bee!” said the voice of Ace.
“Spelling!?” we all said at the same time.
“Yep. Here’s your first word!” Ace said laughing evily. “The word is virtual! And Harley, you get to answer!”
“Um ok. V-I-R-T-U-A-L?” said Harley.
“Correct… ok next word, for Pal. Premium.”
“Ok. P-R-E-M-I-U-M.” I said.
“Ok, correct… ok BestLester, spell Budapest.” said Ace.
“What the heck is B-U-D-A-P-E-S-T?!” said Best.
“The capital of Romania. Ok now Phinny, spell Tallinn.”
“Ok, T-A-L-L-I-N-N.” said Phinny.
“Correct… now Awesome, spell Evie.”
“E-V-E-E?” said Awesome.
“NOPE!!! WRONG!!!!!!” said Ace, at that moment, a pit of lava appeared under us, and we were hanging from ropes and Awesome fell down.
“If one of you win, all of you continue.” said Ace laughing.
So the spelling continued, and Best, Harley, Phinny all fell, leaving Pal the last one standing.
“The last word, Carioca.” said Ace.
“How much I hate spelling this! I always get it wrong!” I thought. “C-A-R-I-O-C-A?” I said.
“That is… CORRECT!??!?!” said Ace disappearing, and revealing the group again.
“Wow, that was close!” said Phinny.
“I still think we’re doomed.” said Harley.
@_@
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Vienna’s Point Of View
“What is going on?” I asked Penguin (Blake); “Well, Pal’s group got through the first challenge!” he exclaimed.
“WHAT!??! Send, Bella down there, and let her test them, Best is weak against her.” I said. “Yes Vienna.” said Blake and ran off.
“This is insane.” I said out loud.
Back to Pal’ s View
“Hello, Pal.” said the voice of Host_Bella.
“Bella!!! Why!?!” yelled Best.
“Shush. It’s my turn now.” Bella said and at that moment, five keyboards came flying in stopping in front of each of us.
“Survival of the smartest. I will ask a question, you will type it in. The wrong answerers shall be disqualified.
“I hate testing day!” I thought. [Pal]

Chapter 7: All At Once.
“First question is on the screen,” said Bella. And yes there was the question, which was ‘What color was given for the gift giving event in 2005?’

5 answers came on the screen in this order: Phinny, Best, Harley, Awesome, and Pal last. BUT these were the answers: Green, Green, Green, Blue, and Green! Pal had been saved! Awesome was out, and back into the pit of lava.
“Awesome!” yelled Harley.
“MUAHAHAHA! Now next question!” said Bella, and a new question popped up on the screen, which read, ‘In what day did VMK acquire their 1 millionth member?’
Four answers followed, in this order, Pal, Best, Phinny and Harley. The answers read: 2006, 2006, 2006, 2006, and at that moment Harley fell down with Awesome.
“Harley!” we yelled. There was three people left, BestLester, palkiasurfergirl, and HOST_Phinny.
“Hahaha, here’s the next question!” said Bella, and there was a new question on the screen. ‘In what day did VMK Central close?’ Three answers popped up. Phinny, Best and Pal. June 2007, June 2007, and June 2007. Pal was out.
“AHHHHH!!!!!!” I yelled as I fell down to the lava, but I held on the edge of the cliff. Best and Phinny were left. The last question popped up on the screen. ‘How many people have been Madified?’
Only one answer popped up. It was Best’s…
“Every single player except us, and Buzz.” said Best calmly.
At that moment Bella went down, and everyone else up!
“Yay Best! You did it!” we all said. But Best was full of melancholy, he had hurt his favorite HOST.
“Are you ready?” I asked him, placing my hand on his shoulder.
“Yeah.” he said.
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Vienna’s Point of View
“WHAT?!?!?! They escaped!!!!” I yelled.
“Yes Miss Vienna…” said Blake.
“Stop with this Miss junk! I snapped.
“Ok Vienna. But are you sure we will win by sending me down there?” he asked.
“Oh sure! But first, Blake…” I said, leaning forward toward Blake, and giving him a kiss. “Destroy them.”
“I will.”

ooh! Cant wait for more!

intense.......(i did the extra dots because my post was too short)

lol. my sister loves mad hatters and she wanted to be the evil one so ya

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