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ivanbyte9 02-24-2008, 03:37 AM Invade The Aliens. Answer The Call. Scream All You Want.
Chapter 1, Beginning:
"I'm just not so nosy to her. She has so many problems and she's complicated, so we should just cut her a break." said Karin as she and Mandy were sitting down in Karin’s house, talking. "I know, It kind of makes you feel sad how she just automatically fainted." said Mandy. "It seems that everyone always wants to just pick on her. They can never leave that girl alone!" said Karin. "Well, Lucy does seem to be a little bit of a bother and a sensitive little brat." said Mandy. "Mandy, please don't say that. She's my sister, and if she goes, I'll have no one there to be my best friend." said Karin in a sad and soft voice. "Yeah, let's just cut her a break." said Mandy. Karin nodded her head and rested her shoulder on her lap with her hand over her forehead. She crossed her other arm and just thought about how things might turn bad with her sister in the hospital. Mandy just put her hands together and put them between her knees and leaned forward a bit. Then Mandy’s cell-phone rang. Mandy just looked behind her looking at her phone on Karin’s kitchen counter. The ring-tone was weird and sounded scary. "That's not my ring-tone." said Mandy. Karin moved her hand from her forehead and looked over at Mandy’s cell-phone. "I'll get it, it's probably Josh, and I know you don't want to talk to him after he made your sister end up in the hospital." said Karin while walking over to the counter to get Mandy’s cell-phone. "That's not my ring-tone tho, Karin." said Mandy. "And?" asked Karin while opening up Mandy’s phone. "You Have, One New Message." said the phone. "Mandy, that jerk left you a message." said Karin. Then Karin listen to the message. "NO! STAY AWAY FROM ME! GET AWAY!" said the message. Karin was confused after hearing the disturbing message. "NO! LEAVE! AH!!!!!" said the message. Soon the message was over and Mandy went over to Karin. "What did the message say?" asked Mandy. Then Karin replayed the message and put it next to Mandy's ear for her to listen to it. "NO! STAY AWAY FROM ME! GET AWAY! NO! LEAVE AH!!!!!" said the message again. Then the message was over again. "That's your voice. That's you, .” said Karin. "Is that from Josh?" asked Mandy in a scared voice. "No, it doesn't say who it's from." said Karin. "That was kind of scary." said Mandy. "Why did this call come in?" asked Karin. "Give me the phone, I'm going to call back." said Mandy. Then Karin handed the phone to Mandy and Mandy pressed the top right corner button on her phone to operate 'Call Back'. But then when Mandy tried to call back, the phone just went back to the screen saver on Mandy's phone. The two girls were frightened. Then the grandfather clock in Karin's living room stroke twelve and it made the two girls jump. "Oh dear! It's twelve! My mom told me to be home before twelve fifteen." said Mandy. "Come back tomorrow then?" asked Karin. "OK, I'll be sure to bring the ro-" "HEY!!!!" interrupted the clock. "WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP AND GET HOME ALREADY? GOSH!" said the clock. Both of the girls looked at the clock and then at each other. "Well, bye!" said Mandy while exiting out of Karin's house. As Mandy walked home, the streets were deserted. There was only a few cars on the road. Then Mandy saw something that caught her eye. A woman. A woman with three mouths. One where it's supposed to be, and one where her eyes should have been on each side. Mandy was scared and shocked. The woman smiled at her after three seconds. Then a circus passed by about seven seconds after Mandy saw the woman. There were clowns, animals and people walking on stilts. Then the circus left leaving nothing behind. By the time the circus people moved, the woman was gone. Mandy continued walking and was scared. She looked around and saw the woman again. Mandy turned around and ran the other way. But then she saw the woman again when she made a turn around a street corner. Mandy then ran in an alley where the woman couldn't get her. "NO! STAY AWAY FROM ME! GET AWAY!" said Mandy. The woman walked toward Mandy faster and faster holding her suitcase up ready to throw it at Mandy. "NO! LEAVE! AH!!!!!" screamed Mandy. The next day, cops were investigating what had happened to Mandy. They found no sign of a victim. The only thing they found was Mandy's purse on the floor with the stuff fallen out. When a Cop got Mandy's cell-phone that was open and thrown on the ground, he was shocked and had a fast heart rate when he saw what it said on it: The Orsens Scary Movie.
ivanbyte9 03-09-2008, 06:13 PM I finally posted a chapter! Sorry it took so long, tho Lol Enjoy :)
Gorams 03-09-2008, 06:59 PM ah.... now im gonna have nightmares! LOL
iRaccoon 03-09-2008, 08:32 PM Grrr You Copied ONE-MISSED-CALL..
and i bet the call said. "OMG! GET AWAY FROM ME!! NO!! LEAVE!! AH!!" because of the recording of someone's future PASSING AWAY is in ONE-MISSED-CALL
ivanbyte9 03-09-2008, 10:17 PM Grrr You Copied ONE-MISSED-CALL..
and i bet the call said. "OMG! GET AWAY FROM ME!! NO!! LEAVE!! AH!!" because of the recording of someone's future PASSING AWAY is in ONE-MISSED-CALL
Lol Yup :D that's why it's called Scary Movie and that's why it says in quote: Answer the call! :D
ivanbyte9 03-09-2008, 10:42 PM Chapter 2, Karin Joins Mandy:
"Gosh Carly, get a life! It's not like you can't finish that project tomorrow!" said Alan while eating an apple and sitting next to his sister on the kicthen table. "Well I want to make sure it's done perfectly and done before next week! This project of the galaxy isn't easy you know?" asked Carly. "Look, just use magic to put it away already!" said Alan. Carly froze with a shocked face at Alan. "Do it..." said Alan. "Fine then! >_<" said Carly. Then Carly tapped the project and the project put itself together in perfect order. "You see? Was that so hard?" asked Alan. "Come on! Let's walk over to Hillary's." said Alan. As the twins approached Hillary's house, they saw hillary and her Mom and Dad outside about ready to go somewhere. "Hey Hillary! Where are you guys going?" asked Carly. "You guys, there's some weird news I have!" said Hillary. "What is it?" asked Carly. Then Hillary looked around to see if her parents were near by and took Carly and Alan to the side of her house. "What is it? Tell Me!" said Alan. "My cousin Mandy was hurt yesterday from a weird voice mail that was left in her phone." said Hillary. "What?!?! Aww Man!!!! She Was So Hot!!!!" said Alan. "Shut up!" said Carly while punching Alan on the arm. "I called her friend Karin who was there with her last night at Karin's house. I thought maybe Karin would know something." said Hillary. "Hey Hillary!" said Karin while climbing out of Hillary's Tahoe. "Oh hey Karin, I was wondering if - ........ wait, how did you get in my car?" asked Hillary. Then Karin looked behind her and looked at Hillary's car and turned back around. "I really don't know." said Karin. "So what's the catch?" asked Hillary. "OK, I was with Mandy last night when we were talking about my sister ending up in the hospital of a faint because her boyfriend dumped her." said Karin. "We were talking and all of a sudden her phone rang. There was this earie ring-tone and I answered it and heard a message of Madny screaming. Then when Mandy left into the streets, she was gone." said Karin. "And look, this call came to my phone this morning!" said Karin. Karin handed her phone to Hillary while the message played. "nda weird tho because all I did was just talk and then all of a sud- EEEEEEEEERRRRRMMMM!!!!!" said the message. The message was over. "Wow, sounded weird from over here!" said Alan. "Same here!" said Carly. "The worst part is that some people even think it was me who was responsible for her accident!" said Karin. "Well, maybe the police are just crazy." said Alan. "I know, but it's kinda weird tho because all I did was just talk and then all of a sud-" EEEEEEEEERRRRRMMMM!!!!! sounded a car as it came and hit Karin and pushed her into the evening sky. "OMG!!!!" shouted Alan. "That sounded exactly like the voice message!!!" said Hillary.
ivanbyte9 03-09-2008, 11:08 PM Chapter 3, To See A Scary Movie:
As Alan and Carly walked home from Hillary's they were listening to their iPod each listening to Low. "Shorty got Low low low low low low low low low low low low." said Carly. "Huh? It doesn't say that!" shouted Alan. "Yes it does!" said Carly. "Nuh Uh! You said Low low low low low low low low low low low low, it actually goes Low low low low low low low low." said Alan. "Well then sorry Mr.I'mCorrectAndCoolAndCanDoWhateverIWant!" said Carly. "Hey! Look!" yelled Alan while pointing at a plane in the sky writing something. "S-C-A-R-" said Carly and Alan while spelling out what the plane pilot was spelling. "Y-M-O-V-I-E" said the Twins. "Scary Movie..." said the twins at the same time and taking their iPod head-phones out of their ears. "I want to see it!" said Carly. "Me Too! We Should Go When It Premiers!" said Alan. But then the plane pilot passed by again and wrote 'Rated R, So Hah! You Can't Go!' "NO!!!!!" shouted the twins. "Mom and Dad will never let us see a Rated R movie!!!!" said Carly. "Unless we convince them somehow..." said Alan.
But Why Not?!?! Please?!?!?" begged the twins to their parents as they got home. "No! You are not going to see a Rated R movie! I told you that every time you guys go somewhere you have to take Max and he may not see a Rated R movie!" said Mom. "Please Dad?" asked Alan. "Sorry Alan! But I Said No!" scolded Dad. "URRGH! This is so unfair!" said Carly while pouting. "What's unfair?" asked Max while coming down-stairs from his room. "YOU ARE!!!!" yelled the twins at Max. "Whoah! What did I do?" asked Max. "They're mad because you are the reason why they can't see that Rated R movie! They have to take you and you are not allowed to see it without our permission!" said Dad. "Now get your plates! I'm about to serve your dinner." said Mom. Then Alan and Carly went to the sink to wash a plate for each next to each other. "You know we're gonna see that movie, right?" asked Alan. "But Alan, Mom and Dad said no!" said Carly. "Stop being such a loser and follow my lead! Who cares about Max anyways?" asked Alan. "Alan, Carly, ,aybe you guys can see Horton Hears A Who with Max at the theater instead." said Mom while serving Max and Dad's dinner. "No way! That's even worse than not going at all!" said Carly. "You're Going And That's It!" yelled Dad. "Well, I guess we'll just have to accept the subject that we cannot see that Rated R movie without permission from Mom and Dad as the court of law gives them privelages to discipline us in their own way." said Carly. "Gosh! You're such a nerd!" said Alan. "We're gonna see that movie, and Max is not gonna stop us..." said Alan.
Vienna 03-09-2008, 11:45 PM Wow. Coolio! Its like wicked. So Karin and Mandy Are Gone? And One Last Thing. Why did Mandy Go By Getting Hit By A Suitcase?!
Awes:cap:me Story
ivanbyte9 03-09-2008, 11:52 PM Wow. Coolio! Its like wicked. So Karin and Mandy Are Gone? And One Last Thing. Why did Mandy Go By Getting Hit By A Suitcase?!
Awes:cap:me Story
Lol Mandy didn't only go by the suitcase, but the woman attacked her! Lol the suitcase was just a beginning of her atack :)
Palkia 03-11-2008, 01:28 AM Sweet! Lol Love the Story!
ivanbyte9 04-10-2008, 05:21 AM Chapter 4, Beware The Stare:
The next day, Alan and Carly got to school and saw their friends hanging out by the palm tree in the parking lot that they always hang out at. "Hey Guys! What's Up?" asked Alan. "There's some weird things going on..." said Micheal. "What is it?" asked Carly. "I was looking through my old books and found this binder on my book shelf with all kinds of ventruiliquist dolls in it." said Christi. "Take a look at it." said Hillary. Christi handed the binder to Alan and Alan looked through each page seeing alot of perfect designs. "Christi, what is this?" asked Carly while looking at the book with Alan. Once Alan turned to a page, a note fell out and fell to the ground. Carly picked it up after seeing it fall. "What's this?" asked Carly while unfolding the note. Alan read it as Carly guided him with her finger under the words.
"Beware The Stare Of Mary Shaw
She Had No Children Only Dolls,
And If You See Her, Do Not Scream
Or -"
Alan couldn't read the rest bc the last line was smugged onto the paper. "What was that?" asked Micheal. "I don't know." said Alan. "This is too starnge, Christi what the heck have you been buying at the stores these days?" asked Alan. "I never remember buying or receiving that binder!" said Christi. "Well it's yours now, now you're a weird Alien with a weird book to go with yourself!" said Carly. "This isn't funny, I'm kind of scared." said Hillary. "Well, it's probably just a prank from Loretta." said Micheal. "What is?" asked Loretta while walking up to them with Arnold right behind her. "Loretta did you put this binder into Christi's house to scare her or something?" asked Carly. "Huh? No! I don't even own any binder! Their way too ugly for my beauty!" said Loretta. "Well, it sure wasn't me who did it. I've been gone all week at my grandparents house helping them remodel their home." said Arnold. "Whoever put it in Christi's house needs to confess right now!" said Hillary. Everyone stayed silent while only hearing other kids getting picked up from school in the cars behind them for about seven seconds. "Well I guess I'll see you all later." said Micheal while Hillary and Christi followed him. "Me too, I'm too beautiful to be near you geeks anymore especially when you weird-o's are discussing a haunted book!" said Loretta while flipping her hair and walking away with Arnold. "Well, I guess that leaves us to go home." said Carly to Alan. "Hey did you get the movie tickets yet?" asked Carly. "Yup!" said Alan while handing their movie tickets to Carly. "Sweet! I'm kinda looking forward to goi- HEY! ALAN! THESE ARE TICKETS TO SCARY MOVIE!" shouted Carly. "Hmm... oops? Teehee!" said Alan. "Alan How Could You?!?!?!" scolded Carly.
ivanbyte9 04-12-2008, 01:08 AM Chapter 4, Popcorn:
As Hillary, Loretta, Christi, Micheal and Arnold had approached the cinema, Arnold Loretta and Hillary approached theater 2 to watch Scary Movie while Christi and Micheal went in line to buy popcorn and soda. "Gosh! The line takes forever!" said Micheal. "You Bet! Let Me Move Us Up To The Front!" said Christi. As Christi walked through everyone in line and approached the front with Micheal, she opened her wallet and began to ask for the popcorn and soda. "Hi! I'd like to buy two large popcorns and five sodas please!" said Christi.
"Heh... whatever." said the register guy in a gloomy mood. He filled the two buckets of popcorn and filled the five sodas and placed them in a cup-holder.
"Here... don't expect me to have put extra salt." said the guy. "Oh that's OK! I don't like real salty popcorn anyways!" said Christi. "I meant in the soda." said the guy. Christi and Micheal both looked at the strange guy and then slowly made their way back to the theater without saying a word. As they passed by a man and a woman with hats on sitting on a bench, Christi and Micheal entered the theater.
"About Time They LEave! I Was Sure They'd Catch Us!" said the man while removing his mustache and hat. As he removed his disguise you could see Alan had just disguised himself to get passed his friends without being seen. As Carly removed her wig and rubbed off her make-up, she rolled her eyes and said "Alan, This Is So.... Stupid! Who would eve rdress in a costume to get passed Micheal and Christi?" asked Carly. "I Don't Know! You're Just Lucky I Got Us Here!" said Alan. "Alan, this is a very bad thing to do! I'm going home right now!" said Carly. "OK Fine Then! But I Heard Shia Labeouf Is In Scary Movie!" said alan in a teasing voice. "I LOVE HIM!!!!!" shouted Carly. "Good! Now Let's Get Our Snacks And Head Over To The Theater! We'll Have To Sit As Far As Possible Away From Christi And Them!" said Alan. "Max! You Can Come Out Now!" said Alan while yelling at his stomach. Then Max walked out of Alan's long coat and breathed the air.
"GOSH!!!!! I WAS AFRAID I WOULD SUFFOCATE IN THERE!!!!!" yelled Max. "There's no line for the snacks, let's go buy something while we have the chance." said Carly. "Alan! I'm Scared To Watch Scary Movie!" said Max. "Psshhtt! Cry Baby..." said Alan while contuing on walking to the snack counter. "Can we have two drinks and one large popcorn please?" asked Alan. "Coming right up I guess..." said the guy while looking at Alan and Carly.
"HEY!!!!! YOU'RE JOHNY DEPP!!!!" yelled Carly. "Yes, that's me... sadly I got fired from the show biz and ended up here..." said Johny while putting popcorn into the bucket and handing it to Alan. A few more people joined the line waiting for their turn to buy stuff. "Oh, can you check if there's butter in it? I'm allergic." said Max. "Let me check..." said Johny while getting a bit of popcorn and throwing it into his mouth. More people got in line and waited for Alan and Carly to finish.
"Hmm... I don't taste any butter." said Johny. Soon after, Johny's arm got longer and started getting more loose. "Oh Shoot! Johny! Your Arm!" said Carly while pointing at Johny's arm.
"Huh? What?!?!?!" asked Johny in shock while looking at his odd arm. His arm kept getting longer and more loose and soon was like a rope on the floor. "Oh Dear! Someone Get A Doctor!" yelled a woman in line. "Johny! YOUR OTHER ARM!!!!!" yelled Carly as Johny's other arm starting to trnasform into a fish. "OH SNAP!!!!!" said Max. "OH My Goodness!" said a man in line.
"AH!!!! SAFETY EVERYONE!!!!" yelled Johny. "Ah!!!!" shouted the people in line while panicking and jumping into the air away from the counter. Just then, Johny exploded behind the counter and made an erruption throughout the theater. "Oh, My, Gosh..." said Carly. "Hurry! Let's Get Out Of Here!"
ivanbyte9 04-18-2008, 05:49 AM Chapter 5, Lindsay At The Movies:
"Look Carly, there are some seats over there." said Alan quietly. As the three kids walked over to the seats they accidently had sat on someone already sitting in each seat. "Oh, Sor- AH!!!!!" screamed all three kids at the same time. "AH!!!!!" screamed the people already in the seats. "Ssshhh!!!!!" said a woman behind the row. "
What Are You Guys Doing Here?!?!?!" asked Micheal softly. "Look! We came to watch Scary Movie but our parents didn't want us to see this movie so we tried to hide from you guys so we wont get caught." said Alan. "Well, there's three seats right here next to us! Enjoy!" said Hillary while grabbing a hand-full of popcorn and tossing it into her mouth while crossing her legs and watching the previews.
"YES!!!! Yes, yes. I know we can't, but hey! Who Says There Aren't More To Go?!?!?!" said Lindsay Lohan walking into the theater talking on the phone with her friend Suzan beside her. "Hey! Lindsay Lohan!" said Loretta. "Oh My Gosh! Take Me a Picture! Hurry!" said Christi. Christi tossed the phone to Alan as he almost dropped it and Christi popped right into Lindsay's face and interrupted her phone call.
"HI!!!! LET'S TAKE A PICTURE!!!!!!" shouted Christi. "Smile!" said Christi while bringing Lindsay's face closer to hers and facing alan while he took the picture. But Alan accidently held the phone backwards and flashed the light into his eye. "Ah!" said Alan. "Oh, Lindsay if I could just get my friend Hillary to take it..." said Christi. "Wh- Who- Whoah-Whoah Miss! I'm a celebrity, not some person dressed up in a Minnie Mouse costume at Disneyland!" said Lindsay while sitting with her friend Suzan. "I'll call you back, OK?" said Lindsay as she hung up her phone. Christi sat back down and just watched the screen. "Alan! I'm Gonna Have Nightmares!" said Max.
"You'll be fine! Just relax..." said Alan. "Relax..." said Max while relaxing. "Think of everything that you would need to calm yourself in the mi- OH MY GOSH!!!!! IT'S STARTING!!!!" said Alan. "EEEEPPP!!!!" squeeled Max while covering his eyes. "Suzan, I bet you anything this movie is gonna be same as the last one we saw!" shouted Lindsay outloud. "Umm, Yeah!" said Suzan. "Never Turn Back, Embrace The Fear." said a small sentence at the begining of the movie. "How do you pronounce that word?" asked Lindsay outloud while interrupting the movie. "Is it like imbrazing? Eembrasing? Umbraseing? Emprasinck?" said Lindsay. "It's em-bray-sing I believe." said Suzan. "Oh, THANKS SUZ!" shouted Lindsay. As the movie started, there was a short clip of the camera view walking through dark halls of a haunted theater. "You know what? That's what I always hate! In the begining of every movie there's always just some boring little scene or whatever they call it! Never any action or love, or drama or anything! Sheesh! How Puthetic!" said Lindsay. "Ssshhh!" said Carly.
"Uh, WHAT?!?!?! I!!!! I, AM A CELEBRITY!!!!! YOU DO NOT 'Ssshhh!' ME!!!!!" said Lindsay to Carly. "Well then, sorry to hear!" argued Carly. "GOSH!!!! THIS IS BORING!!!!!" yelled Lindsay as she punded the seat. Soon she spilled Suzan's drink and it flowed all over the floor. "Like, Eeewwwmagosh! I'm So Sorry!" yelled Lindsay. "Oh, It's OK Lindsay, I'll just go get another one." said Suzan. "Ugghhh!!!!! Well Hurry Up!!!!" said Lindsay. As a man stuck his legs out blocking Suzan's way in the walk-way of the row, Lindsay yelled at the man. "Let Her Through!" yelled Lindsay while throwing a hand-full of popcorn at the man. Soon the man moved his legs and Suzan walked through. "GOsh, you people need to clean up your act!" said Lindsay.
"Shut Up!" qhispered a woman in front of Lindsay. Soon after, Lindsay kicked the woman's seat to show how she felt. "HEY!" yelled the woman. "Is for horses you dumb hag! TURN AROUND AND WATCH THE MOVIE!" yelled Lindsay. "Wow! I'm gonna keep this in case it's good!" said Lindsay while video-taping the movie. Soon someone sat next to Lindsay in Suzan's seat. "Finally You're Back! You didn't miss anything!" shouted Lindsay while video-taping. It wasn't Suzan in the seat, it was Micheal Myers sitting down next to Lindsay that nobody could see in the dark theater. Then Lindsay's phone rang and she answered it right away. "Ughhh..." said everyone in the theater. "Hello?" answered Lindsay.
"YES!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!" shouted Lindsay. "No, I don't got that money." said Lindsay. "For Goodness sake, will you just SHUT YOUR TRAP!!!!" yelled a man. "GOSH!!!!! GET OUT OF HERE!!!!" yelled two ppl at Lindsay. "Wait, OK?" said Lindsay on the phone. "What is your problem people? I payed my money like the rest of you all in here!" said Lindsay. As Micheal Myers picked up his vase about to attack, a man grabbed it and smashed it on Lindsay's head. Then Lindsay fell to the floor and tried to pick herself up. "Sit Down!!!!" yelled a woman while pushing Lindsay out of the row.
"Gosh! MOVE!" yelled a guy as he threw a pineapple at Lindsay. "AH!!!" shouted Lindsay. Soon the theater started an angry mob and started hurting Lindsay. "GET OUT OF HERE!!!!!" yelled Alan while dumping his popcorn bag all over Lindsay. "This Is What You Get For Messing Up Our Movie!" yelled everyone while hitting Lindsay. Then a woman tripped Lindsay down the stairs and Lindsay fell to the front of the screen and looked at everyone. "AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" screamed Lindsay. Soon she fell the the floor and the crowd started cheering and Micheal Myers took her drink and watched the movie in peace.
Gobbles 04-19-2008, 02:00 AM 1/5, hard to read.
ivanbyte9 04-21-2008, 12:56 AM 1/5, hard to read.
How? You mean I mispelled the words, or I need to double space?
Vienna 04-21-2008, 01:01 AM ooh so Lindsay isn't Minnie Mouse! LOL hey... ivan, am i ever getting my avatar...? if not can you tell me that... i like this story =D
ivanbyte9 04-21-2008, 04:27 PM ooh so Lindsay isn't Minnie Mouse! LOL hey... ivan, am i ever getting my avatar...? if not can you tell me that... i like this story =D
:oh Snapsies I Forgot! Lol what kind of theme do you want your avatar to be?
Vienna 04-21-2008, 11:16 PM like theme? there's a theme? uh how about something cool in Aqua and Black! idk!!!
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Vienna 05-01-2008, 12:13 AM nice! Lol! thx
1/5, hard to read.
Sorta hard because there aren't many "enter" things. It's just sort of cluttered. But nice story!
ivanbyte9 05-07-2008, 03:32 AM Sorta hard because there aren't many "enter" things. It's just sort of cluttered. But nice story!
:o Lol don't worry,I'll be sure to fix that!
ivanbyte9 05-07-2008, 03:50 AM Chapter 6, Lights Out:
"My GOSH! Thia movie is so great!" said Alan cowardly while eating hand-fulls out of a bucket of popcorn. "Alan! Would you stop it? You're making a mess!" scoded Carly. "Could I uncover my eyes now?" asked Max. "Not now Max, the lady is about to get her leg bitten off!" said Micheal. "Micheal! Don't Scare Him!" Shouted Hillary.
"Ugh! You guys are such losers, this movie isn't even scary, it's funny." said Loretta.
"Umm, Loretta? Let me tell you something. You only say it's funny because you figure it will make it look like you're all brave but you don't want to say ' It's Not Scary. ' because it just makes you look stupid and so you plan to just make yourself say that in another way and force yourself to watch the terrifying flick in peace without having to worry about what others think of you." said Alan.
"Wow, you're such a nerd." said Lorreta. "He may be a nerd, but he's also fun to poke at! See?" said Christi hile pushing popcorn into Alan's eyes. "AAHHH!!!!! MY EYES!!!!!" said Alan. Soon at that moment, Loretta's cell-phone rang with an eerie tone. It was also not the one she had put for herself to recognize. "Loretta, is that yours?" asked Carly. "Yeah, but it's not my ring-tone." said Loretta. "Hmm. Maybe it changes sometimes when you don't charge it, who knows?" asked Micheal while watching the movie. "It says it's from my friend Karin." said Loretta. "But she passed away last week! I knew her." said Hillary. "I know, I did too! But who could be calling me from her phone?" asked Loretta. "Just answer it." said Alan. As Loretta answered her phone, the caller left a voice message. "It's dated later today, 12:00pm." said Loretta.
Loretta pressed one and listened to the voice-mail. "Voice Message Received Friday, April 11 2:00pm: You guys, hurry! There's Someone Down Here GONNA GET ME!!!!! AAHHH!!!!! (SSSSLLLLUSSSSSHHHGGGGGG)." "What was that?" asked Arnold. "I don't know, some weird voice-mail." said Loretta. "But, that was my voice screaming and talking..." said Loretta.
At that moment, the theater screen started blinking and getting bad quality and the lights in the theater flickered on and off. "Hey! What's going on?" asked Max. "I don't know!" said Micheal. Everyone in the theater could see nothing on the screen. But they did see something, they saw a woman floating in the air and out of the screen putting her hands out in front of her wearing a long black dress with a scary face. "Lights... OUT!" said the woman. Soon, all of the light-bulbs in the theater exploded and everyone screamed. "AAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" screamed the eight friends all together in the dark.
ivanbyte9 05-09-2008, 01:47 AM Chapter 7, Loretta's Passing:
"Omg! Who turned off the lights?" said Alan quietly in the dark and silent theater. "I don't hear anyone or see anything!" said Arnold. "I think I'm passed!" said Hillary. But soon the lights in the theater were all back on. The movie was not playing again tho, and that's when things went wrong. "Omg! Did You Guys Notice That We're The Only Ones Here?!?!?!?" asked Micheal. "We are?!?!?!" asked Max while uncovering his eyes.
"Where did everyone go?" asked Carly. "Omg! What's Going On?!?!?!" asked Christi. "I don't think there's anyone here!" said Carly. "What time is it?" asked Arnold. "It's 11:56am" said Hillary. "You guys, let's go see if there's anyone here!" said Alan. Everyone got up and out of their seats and exited the theater wondering around the cinema. "There's no candy counter person!" said Micheal. "Or a soda guy!" said Christi. "There's nobody here at all!" said Max.
"Look! We need to send someone down below to go see if the power is off or something." said Alan. "Well who's gonna go?" asked Carly. Soon everyone pointed to Loretta silently. "What? Why Me?" asked Loretta. "Because you're the least favorite of all of us!" said Carly. "Fine Then!" said Loretta while going down the fire exit to check the switches. As Loretta approached the basement by herself, the lace was dark and full of boxes. "Ugh, can't ever let me free for once..." said Loretta while walking over to the light switch.
Once Loretta turned on the switch, the lights burned out and shut off. Loretta tried to turn on the lights again but nothing worked. "Umm, OK..." said Loretta. As Loretta walked over to the power supply, she heard someone behind her. She turned around and there was nobody there. "Huh?" she asked herself. Loretta looked around the room searching for anyone and found that she was still the only one down there.
When she approached the power supply, she didn't know what to do so she called Alan on her cell-phone.
"Alan, your cell-phone is ringing. Said Carly back on the upper floor. "Hello?" asked Alan while answering the phone. "Alan, I don't know what to do! There's a whole bunch of cords and switches down here and it's dark!" said Loretta. "Try looking for a switch that says lights." said Alan. "Can't find anything that says it, there's just buttons and stuff." said Loretta in the basement. "Just come down here and help me, I'm really not good at this stu-" soon Loretta's attention was caught when she saw a woman standing in front of her with a scary looking face. "Loretta? Are you there?" asked Alan.
Loretta just stayed looking at the woman, and soon the woman started walking toward her. "Omg! Alan!" shouted Loretta. "What?" asked Alan. "Come Down Here Quick! There's Someone down here!" shouted Loretta while throwing boxes and stuff in the woman's path. "Alan Hurry!" shouted Loretta.
"Loretta, hold on!" shouted Alan. "Hurry!" yelled Loretta. "We're coming!" shouted Alan. "You guys, hurry! There's Someone Down Here GONNA GET ME!!!!! AAHHH!!!!!" screamed Loretta. (SSSSLLLLUSSSSSHHHGGGGGG) made a noise on Alan's cell-phone. "Loretta?!?!?" asked Alan. Soon Loretta did not reply. "Loretta, can you hear me?!?!?!" asked Alan. No reply, but the phone hung up.
ivanbyte9 05-10-2008, 05:28 AM Muahahahaha! *cholks and turns purple*
ivanbyte9 05-25-2008, 11:08 PM Hehe! Incoming chapter 8!
ivanbyte9 06-09-2008, 07:34 PM Chapter 8, A Case:
As the rest of the gang ran down to the basement to check on Lorreta, they each ran down into the darkness as the lights started to fade away from the top. "Oh, I hope she's OK...." said Hillary. Once they all approached the basement, the lights were on again and better than ever. "OH YAY! The lights are on, now we can go back up!" said Max. "Wait! We need to get Lorreta." said Alan.
We're never gonna find her, this basement is full of boxes and junk." said Carly. "Hey you guys, I think I found her." said Christi. As everyone raced over to Christi, they each saw Lorreta on the floor unconcieous. "OH MY GOSH!" shouted Carly while raising her hand to cover her mouth a little. "Lorreta! Wake Up!" shouted Arnold. "I think she's, umm...." said Max. Then Max pointed his finger and slid it across his neck while making a cracking noise in his mouth.
"Max is right, she isn't moving or responding." said Micheal. "Why aren't you so worried about her?" asked Arnold. "Well, I thought we all hated her except for you!" replied Micheal. "Oh yeah!" said Hillary. Then everyone started discussing the subject. "And without Lorreta, this world is now a better place!" said Hillary. "And now we don't get bullied!" said Alan. "Hey, how about we go get all of her stuff from her house next week?" asked Carly. Then everyone agreed.
"HELLO!?!?!?!?!? SHE'S A HUMAN, MY COUSIN TO BE EXACT!!!!!!!!" shouted Arnold. "Hey you guys, look! What's that?" asked Alan while looking at a small round hard candy next to Lorreta's mouth. "Some little red thing. Full of spit." said Carly. "Was she eating candy when we were watching the movie?" asked Christi. "She wasn't, but it looks like it came out of her mouth." said Micheal. "Ahh!!!!!! OMG her tounge is missing!!!!!!" shouted Hillary. "OMG!!!! IT IS!!!!!!!!!" screamed Max.
A few seconds later, Arnold's cell-phone rang with an eerie tone. "Hey! Nice ring-tone!" said Hillary. "Isn't that song Umbrella by Rhianna?" asked Carly. "It is, but I'm not the one who assigned it as my ring-tone." said Arnold. "Did someone change his ring-tone?" asked Alan. Once Arnold answered it, they left a voice message on Arnold's phone. "It says it's from Lorreta's phone." said Arnold.
"Wait, Lorreta's right there tho, WITH HER PHONE!!!!!!!" shouted Alan. "But look, her phone IS on." said Christi. "This is getting too weird for me..." said Hillary and Micheal at the same time. "Alan, I want to go home!" said Max. "Arnold, what does the message say?" asked Carly while Arnold was still listening to the message and ignored everyone. The message was over, and
Arnold looked at the phone and then at Carly. He handed the phone to Carly and scared out of his mind, started shaking a little. Carly pressed 1 and listened to the message. "Well, she is quite a weird-o I'd say but for all we know she'll be running to us laughing and making us look like fools t- (BBBBOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!)" soon the message was over with. "Arnold, that was your voice..." said Carly.
Vienna 06-10-2008, 05:44 PM Arnold's gonna pass away soon! LOL i really like this story... but I don't know why... lol.
ivanbyte9 06-10-2008, 08:06 PM Arnold's gonna pass away soon! LOL i really like this story... but I don't know why... lol.
LOLZ glad you like it :)
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