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MasterMario
02-23-2008, 01:19 AM
I wouldn't say I have the perfect life like a popular kid. But, I do have a wierd dreams. I don't know what they mean, but I expect someday I will figure out what they mean. In my dreams, There is this leprechuan named Jerry. He was my guide through this place. He didn't tell me what the place is named. But, he mentioned an evil ruler wants to rule the land. By the way, My name is David.

Crazy.Maddie
02-23-2008, 06:42 PM
yahhh;
continue<33
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MasterMario
02-23-2008, 06:55 PM
Thank you!

Chapter 1

It all started like this...

"David! Wake up!" My mom yelled. It was the first day of the Eighth grade. "Uhh.." I moaned. I got dressed and went downstairs. "Ready for eighth grade, son" my dad said. "No..." I said. "I'll drive you to school." He replied. I finished eating breakfast and went downstairs. We got into the car and left. Without David knowing, there was something watching him. "I think I found the guy..." it said into a walkietalkie. "Good..." Someone replied back to him. Later, they arrived to school. Kids were outside talking to their friends and saying good byes. "See ya son" My dad said then left. I went into the school.


The bell rang for Homeroom. "Welcome class! I am Mrs Sweetwater" the lady said in a sweet voice. She was very beautiful. She had long dark brown hair and a nice dress on. "Good Morning Mrs. Sweetwater!" we all replied. "I am going to take attendance. "Timothy..." she started. Back outside. The thing was still watching David. "The teacher's name is Mrs. Sweetwater..." It said in the walkietalkie. "She sure is purrty" said his partner with him. He just looked at him. "What?" he asked. "Why did I have to be stuck with you?" he said. "The boos told me to go with you" his partner replied smiling. He rolled his eyes. "David.." Mrs. Sweet water said. "Here" I answered quickly. "So his name is David..." his partner said. "Weren't you even paying attention to the boss, Steve?" He said. "No, Jerry" said Steve. "That's what I thought.." Jerry said.

MasterMario
02-23-2008, 09:51 PM
Chapter 2

After Homeroom, we all went to our lockers. The School Bully, Ivan was leaning against the lockers. I have known him since the fifth grade and he was always mean to me. "Watch this..." Ivan said chuckling. He tripped David and he fell flat on his face. Everyone laughed. "Ivan, That's enough!!" Mrs.Sweetwater said. "Sorry Ma'am" He said. He left. "Are you ok David?" asked Mrs. Sweetwater. "Yeah" I answered. "Why that...!" said Steve. "Don't!" said Jerry. "He can't see us yet". He went home. "How was school?" David's Mom asked. "It was good" he answered. "Should we tell him?" asked his mom to his dad. "Not now..." said his dad. David went up to his room. "Hello David" said Jerry. "Ahhh!" He started screaming. "Ahhh!" Steve started screaming too. "Ahh!" He continued. "Ahhh!" Steve went on. Jerry was getting fed up. "QUIET!!!" He yelled. He was red faced. "Anyway, My name is Jerry and Sir Screams Alot is Steve" Jerry said. "Howdy!" said Steve. "Now is not a good time to tell me what you need to tell me" said David. "Just go..". "Fine... we'll tell you later" Jerry said. "But it is important". They both left.


"What could those two leprechuans need?" said David to himself. Back downstairs, Jerry and Steve went to their parents. "So... Did you tell him?" asked David's Dad. "He wouldn't let us..." said Jerry sadly. "We are sure he is the prophet..". "We are too Jerry..." said David's Mom. "We are too...". The Next Morning, He woke up and got dressed and went to school. "Your Mom and I need to talk to you when get home" said his dad. "Ok" David answered. He went in to the school. "What could they want to talk to me about?" He thought. "Hey Buddy!" said Ivan. "Ready for your swirly?". David ran but it was too late. "I hate eighth grade..." said David. David went home early that day. "David... In here" His mom said. He went in. He saw the two leprechuans again.


Find out what happens in Chapter 3!! I hope you like the story so far

punkpat
02-23-2008, 10:38 PM
cool story

MasterMario
02-23-2008, 11:00 PM
Thank you! Chapter 3 coming soon

Chapter 3

"What are they doing here?" asked David. "We need to tell you something" Jerry said. "Your parents want to tell you first". "You Knew?" asked David. "Yes" said his mom. " Your mother and I were the king and Queen of the Kingdom. We were in love at that time. We have known Jerry and Steve for a while." His dad started. "We knew trouble was brewing" David's Mom continued. "So... we moved out of the kingdom and gave it to a wise man who is now king. He is a very nice man. I was pregnant with at the time.". "The King also knew trouble was coming." Jerry started. "He sent us to find you. We have been watching you since you were born. We didn't come to you until we thought you were ready. Now, you are ready". "I don't think I can do this" David said. "David, We know you can" his father said. "Believe in yourself.". "I come upstairs and pack with you David." His Mom said.


"Mom, Why me?" asked David. "You need to save the kingdom. We know you can save the kingdom from great danger" his mom said. "Let's start packing...". David started to pack. He went downstairs. "Ready" He said. He put on his backpack and said his Good Byes. "How are we going to get there?" David asked. "Warp.." Jerry snaped his fingers and they were gone in a flash. They were going through a warp hole. They landed in a wonderful place. "Welcome to Great Halloway!" said Jerry and they were on their way to the castle.

MasterMario
02-24-2008, 02:23 AM
Chapter 4

"Grrr..." someone evil said looking into his fortune ball. "They are bringing a kid to stop me?!" he yelled. "That wimpy kid can't even beat me. "Soldiers!! Up front!!". They came. "Stop them, Do anything!!" He yelled. "Sir, yes , sir" they all said and left. "Muahahaha!!" he laughed. Back in the castle the leader Leprechaun was worrying. "Aye, Where can they be? They are late!" he said. "Calm down Samus" said the King. "There will be here soon, I can feel it.". "The evil lord probably already sent his army after them" said Samus worrying. "Your Majesty, They are here with the boy." said his servant. "Thank you" said the King. "About Time!!" said Samus. "I am going to yell at them". "Relax" said the King. The three of them came in. "Aye! Jerry and Steve, what took ye so long?" said Samus. "Sorry, Boss" said Jerry. "We had a tough time Convincing the boy.". "Yeah" agreed Steve.

"You must be David..." said the King. "Y-Yes your majesty" David said. "I am King Harold. I met your parents. They are pretty nice" said the King. "Enough with the Chitter Chatter! Let's get down to business." said Samus. "Alright then." said the King. "You will begin Samus". "Thank you your majesty" said Samus. "Anyway, Us leprechuans and the King are trying to form an army to defeat the Lord Ivan---" Samus started. "Whoa! Wait... Ivan?" David said. "That is the name of a bully at my school.". "Jerry will explain everything to you later." said the King. "As I was saying, He has a huge army at his command. They have been attcking us for about five months now. We want to attack back. That is where you come in." Samus started again. "I will take it from here Samus..." said the King. "We need you to gather up people to join our army. You will meet many magical creatures on the way. Good and/or bad. We need your help". "I'll do it..." said David. "Are you sure?" asked the King. "I am sure" repeated David. "Give him the armor and wepons" yelled Samus. "You already have Samus and the leprechuans on your side." said the King. David recieved the armor and wepons. "Jerry you go with him...." said Samus. "Yes Boss..." said Jerry.



They were on their way. "Your Majesty! We forgot to tell him about---" said Samus. "He will figure it out..." said the King. "Ready... Go!!" yelled one on Lord Ivan's soldiers. They all went out and attacked them. "Ahh! What do we do??" said David nervously. "Fight them!!" yelled Jerry. David faught his way through. "Good job David..." said Jerry. "What did the King mean you will tell me everything on the way?" asked David. "What he means is... Some people in your world are in our world." said David. "Huh?" David said. "For example, the bully at your school, Ivan, he is a lord here. An evil lord. You will find more people on your way.." said Jerry. There, They had begun their Journey

MasterMario
02-29-2008, 01:48 AM
Bump! Please tell me what you think...

xoop
05-30-2008, 10:30 PM
I really like it. Why'jya stop writing it? :P