View Full Version : The day VMK closed. - the story of an addict -


prinsess_chloe
02-12-2008, 10:11 AM
Here is my story, my other one got boring so im scrapping that idea and doing this one:

*at school*
I, Miss Becca Redtree, am going to do this! My hands ached and ached as i climbed up the rope. Ow! Rope burn! Ah, finally the whistle blows! I jump off. Right gym's finished, now hometime!

It was friday, the whole weekend left, great! All weekend, knowing me, i was going to play VMK. I'm so obsessed! Ever since i went to disney in 2006, and heard about vmk, i couldn't stop playing it! I gave up great offers like going bowling and stuff just for spending my time on vmk! I would be so bored if VMK closed but luckily that proabally wont happen in ages! Well, i hope is doesn't any way.

*at home*
"Hi mum" I cried running into my room.
"Hi sweetie, off to play Vmk?" My mum said knowing i was.
"Of corse!" I said back to her, closing my door.

My mum always knew my routine: Go to school, come home, play VMK, eat dinner, Do homework,Play VMK, Then bed at 10:30.I was, well... different to my family-they went out and about to zoos and shopping, while i sat indoors playing Vmk.

*In my room*

I threw my school bag onto my bed and logged the computer on. I typed in my user name, Lil_VMK_gal, and password.Ok,so i was logging in, just like everyday, but something was up... Hayley and Jake was saying some mumbo jumbo like "VMK will shut down soon, muahahaha" But i thought it must be some bug or something. But they might be right... VMK only had 6 people online... Including me! I was going to find theese people and we were going to find out what was happening!

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

Chappie 2:

*In main street*

"Hello?" I typed anxiously "Anyone here?"
Suddenly almost out of no where a girl called CuteTabithia appeared.
"Hola! Im CuteTabithia!" The girl called out.
"Oh, Hi. Im confused where is everyone?" I Asked
"Oh.. well,, Uh, well when vmk first opened i was playing cute or boot and i saw someone at the door and he was saying all strange things a-"
"A bit like Hey.i and jk?" I said inturrupting her.
"Wait.. Yer,,"
"Spooky!" I said doing spooky magic
"Rofl, ok lets get too it.. Hang on, wait a second!"
"Why.hers?"
"I wanna give this: trade me"

*In trade*
Cutetabithia:Okay
addict_of_vmk:what are ya going to give meh?
VMK Administator: Cutetabithia puts in a princess minnie hat and sparrow pants.
addict_of_vmk: No,, I cant take them
CuteTabithia: Please? as a sign of new friend ship?
VMK Administrator: addict_of_vmk puts in a brown cowboy shirt with vest and explorer boots
addict_of_vmk: now were fair, we both have matching outfits;)
- we both accept -

*Out of trade*[/FONT
"Right.i.oh, lets go and find the other peeps" I say.
"Okay.hers" She says

[FONT="System"]TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

Please post some comments and if you want to be the other 5 people just pm me and include the topic of it as: The day vmk closed story.

dabaseballking
02-12-2008, 11:39 AM
IT's quite good for the first few chapters.
Remember to space after commas and periods ;)

prinsess_chloe
02-12-2008, 12:20 PM
oh ok;) my bad, lol

TheMagicWithin
02-12-2008, 12:22 PM
The family is very approved of you to play VMK and not hang out with them.. I see

prinsess_chloe
02-12-2008, 12:26 PM
well they got used the person playing it so they just didnt bother purswading (sp:) ) her not too, lol

AwsomeAdrienne
02-12-2008, 01:03 PM
Awesome Start! :)

:tink:AwsomeAdrienne:tink:

prinsess_chloe
02-12-2008, 02:24 PM
thanks awesome;) I will do the next bit tomorrow, and remember pm me if you want to be those people

prinsess_chloe
02-13-2008, 09:45 AM
BUMPeroonie!!!

Ok we have our first other person! CuteTabithia:) Remember 4 more places are open:)

Stemaboat_Tyler
02-13-2008, 12:12 PM
I want to be in it! Cool story so far.

TheMagicWithin
02-13-2008, 12:13 PM
I want to be in it! Love the story

prinsess_chloe
02-13-2008, 05:43 PM
okayerz, and thankies;)

CuteTabitha
02-14-2008, 10:18 PM
I got your pm, thanks for letting me be in your story!
This is how you can desribe me..
dark brown curls, tan skin, princess minnie hat, sparrow pants, pink princess top and shoes.

Thankies!

prinsess_chloe
02-16-2008, 10:21 AM
okay dokie;) Next chappie will be soon

VMKJen
02-16-2008, 12:34 PM
This is good (:
Good start, can't wait for more!

CuteTabitha
02-16-2008, 01:28 PM
MY princess minnie!! NO! LOL
LOL hola!
Great chappie!

Stemaboat_Tyler
02-16-2008, 01:37 PM
When will the next chapter be open?

PopCicleAye
02-16-2008, 01:42 PM
If I was on then, I would be completely scared.
Haley and Jake might make me close out vmk and call my friend and warn her not to get on. :Taking:

Also, I love your story!

~*~Pop~*~

Centurey
02-16-2008, 02:00 PM
Can i Be in it? xD


Nice.

prinsess_chloe
02-17-2008, 09:09 AM
thanks guys and sent, sure.
Cute in this story ya had 2 minnies and 2 sparrow and i had 2 brown cowboy and 2 explorer boots, so we did a swapsies, lol.
NEXT CHAPPIE LATER OR TOMORROW!!!

prinsess_chloe
02-18-2008, 04:44 PM
Bumperoonie!!

Emerald.Star
02-18-2008, 06:03 PM
Ooh!! Great story!! Write more soon :D

King_King
02-19-2008, 12:36 AM
i want in it!!!!!!!!!!!! my vmk name is Pjgirlforever

Beautiful
02-19-2008, 12:50 AM
Can I Be In It My VMK Title Is Beautiful

.:.Beautiful.:.

prinsess_chloe
02-19-2008, 08:23 PM
sure and thats it lol;) ppl tell me a bit about u before i put u in it;)

Emerald.Star
02-19-2008, 09:57 PM
If you can, i'll be in it.

My VMK Name is Emerald.Star

I am wearing red dance top, flip hat, jeans, and some shoes.

On VMK I say dude alot. ^_^

2starTagregory
02-19-2008, 10:04 PM
Me is Whispered!

prinsess_chloe
02-20-2008, 02:36 PM
fine and thats it lol:)

iImagine
02-20-2008, 03:31 PM
<sorry> I'll have to pass.

Princessweelow
02-20-2008, 04:41 PM
i like it plz type more

prinsess_chloe
04-06-2008, 09:05 AM
wow, i forgot bout this >_< I will post another chappie:)

EDIT:Nooooo! I was writing then my mouse went funny ( im on my laptop) and it clicked X... I will post some later, probally, but dont get mad if i dont.

prinsess_chloe
04-10-2008, 08:33 PM
people. seeing as vmk really is closing I might not write the rest. I will have too see though