Hi im making a story based on vmk most of it is fiction but its going to be fun to read.

Characters:


Abrahamman
Cat-Gyrl
ACCEPT.Rich
PMURZ-p
MichealJ

Chapter 1: Its a nice day in Vmk... Until...

Abrahamman, Cat-Gyrl, ACCEPt.rich, and PMURZ-p were all hanging out in Abrahamman's Big Spinning Pool Park room. Everyone was having fun doing the quest.

" Wow Crazy Abrahamman You Are Really Crazy" said PMURZ-p because its part of the quest. " LOL Abrahamman i like saying Crazy Abrahamman all the time its fun to say :)"

"Thx PMURZ-p" said Abrahamman while seeing ppl do his quest.

"Hey excuse owner im going to vote this quest for best quest because this room is really cool and the quest is awesome!!" said guest14873329.

"Thx but i already won best quest award but thx for saying that"

"Hey Abrahamman want to play Mansion" said Cat-Gyrl sad because she needs a lot of credt to buy everything that is new on sale.

"ok, Cat-Gyrl" said abrahamman "Follow me. Wait Hey guys want to play Mansion?"

"Sure!!" said everyone at the same time.

"Ok follow me, guys" said abrahamman.

But before abrahamman went to the Vmk map a Host came and said...


(To be continued) i have to write more ill be writting the next chapter right now it may take a while.

Im now going to say how the main characters are..
Cat-Gyrl: the patient 1 and always happy
PMURRZ-p:the very crazy an d random guy you'll meet in VMK
Abrahamman:Crazy, sometimes patient or tired, and always makes random jokes.
ACCEPT.rich: Kind of like Abrahamman
MichealJ: kind of like a clone of Abrahamman LOL:P

Chapter 2: When the Unknown Host enter the room...

"Hey look!!Guys look a host!!!" shouted PMURRZ-p without noticing which host was it.

"Hey look at that Host's title!!" cat said looking at it with a weird face.

"Why is that host titled Host_Unknown" said MichealJ confused.

"Hi Host_Unknown im PMURZ-p. Are you a new host" said PMURZ-p with a funny face.

"SILENT!!!" shouted the unknown host

"Hey!!Why did u shouted at me??!!!" said PMURZ-p

"SILENT!!or face your consequences!!!" said the host

"You shutup!! said PMURZ-p

"YOU ASKED FOR IT!!" Host raises his hand and points at PMURZ-p and a short
electric waves comes out of the host's hand and hits PMURZ-p.

"Hey that hurt!!Why you did that for!!" shouted PMURZ-p
Abrahamman clicks on PMURZ-p and notices that all of his super rare pins are gone " Hey PMURZ-p all of your pins are gone!!

"Hey what happened to my pins!!!" shouted PMURZ-p

"You ask for it" said the host " Now!!! For shouting at me I will visit you and your friends at random times and take all of your stuff. But be careful ill be in different accounts!!! Muahahahahahahahahaha" Host disappears out of room.

"What just happened??" said abrahamman confused

"The weird host just stole my pins and he says that he is going to take all of our stuff too!!" said PMURZ-p

"What?? Grrr I missed when they took all of your pins. I was distracted watching that guest walk stupidly" said abrahamman

(To Be Continued)

I know is not that good but plz comment

Chapter 3: Waiting in line for Host Hula

"We have to find to find out from where did that host came from and why is he even a host." said MichealJ very mad

"Hey Host Hula is having a Hula party at her room. Lets get in line for it" said ACCEPT.rich getting in line for the room.

Everyone start leaving the room for a moment so thbey go get in line for Hula's room. PMURZ-p stays in the room thinking of what just happened and then starts to cry.

Everyone comes back and see that he is crying.

"Hey, buddy. Why are you crying?" said MichealJ to him "Don't worry we'll find a way to get your pins back"

"Really?" asked PMURZ-p crying

"Sure we will. We are good friends and friends dont leave there friends back" said MichealJ very emotional

"So.. What are we going to do while we wait in line?" asked abrahamman that was sitting and was very bored.

"Hey! Lets go to my room and do my race car quest" said Cat-Gyrl very exciting because she just made that quest and her friends are going to be the frist ppl to do it.

"Ok!!" said everyone but PMURZ-p that was very sad.

"Ok. Follow me!" said Cat-Gyrl still very excited

Everyone enter the room and get all surprise of the room that is so pretty.

They all start doing the quest all very happy

"So guys are you having fun?" asked Cat-gyrl

"Yes!!" shouted everyone at the same time

Then a person titled KingofWings enters and...

(To be continued)

ppl i need more characters in the story if you want to be a character plz reply to this post

Id love to be in your story!!



P.S: I Usually Play A Villian In Stories Like This.


Can i be the man controling the hosts, staffs, and VMK??

Iracoon i know you get parts of villains
especially in blossomflower story of guestalina

you are going to be in chapter 7 or 8
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Chapter 4: The First Attack...

"Hi and welcome to the race car quest" said Cat-gyrl very happy

"This room is so ugly!! My room is better!! And it doesnt even have stuff in it!!"screamed KingofWings

Hey don't be mean!!" said Cat-gyrl really mad

"Silent!!" said KingofWing really angry with his eyes really red like a monster

"Sorry, sir, but I'll have to boot you" said Cat-gyrl looking at him with a sad face. But as she looks for the 'boot' button and click on it and a message appears saying:

'Are you sure you want to boot this person'

She click 'yes' and another message appears. But that message looks kind of different from the other messages that vmk staff send. The message said:

'HAHA!! You can't boot me. And for trying to boot me, you are getting punish!!

KingofWings raises his hand and PMURZ-p remembers that KingofWings raised his hand just like Host_Unknown did.

"Cat-gyrl!!!" screamed PMURZ-p... but it was too late. KingofWings already cleared the room and deleted the stuff.

"Omg!! That Host_Unknown was serious about getting in other accounts and stealing our stuff." siad MichealJ surprised.

"Huh??What happened? I missed what happened!! said abrahamman angry and with a stupid face and getting distrsacted by a fly

"Abrahamman, what's wrong with you? Are you crazy!!??" said ACCEPT.rich

"LOL He is always crazy, ACCEPT.rich" said MichealJ laughing

"Oh yea... Just like we are!! said ACCEPT.rich and they both started laughing

"Stop joking around, Cat-gyrl is really sad" said PMURZ-p looking at her

"Hey look. We can now enter Host_Hula's room" said ACCEPT.rich

"Lets go!!" shouted MichealJ to Abrahamman

"Ok.Ok" said abrahamman that was tired and was using a low voice

Eveyone entered Host_Hula's room and see everyone dancing with Hula

"Hey Hula!!" shouted PMURZ-p to Hula. Hula stopped dancing and stared at him

"Hi PMURZ-p, may I help you" said Hula very happy

"Hi is that..." PMURZ stops and looks at the door and sees...

Chapter 5: The return of Host Unknown

"Hey its Host_Unknown!! screamed Cat-gyrl

"Hey Hula that host..." said PMURZ-p but Host_Unknown raised his hand, zapped Hula, and became like a zombie

Zombie closed the room and booted everyone... but.... Instead of all of us appearing in the Vmk map we were all in a room with a lot of computer bugs

"where are we?" asked Cat-gyrl

"Idk" said MichealJ really scared

"Hello.." said a mysterious voice

"Who are you?!" shouted PMURZ-p

"Well it's me..." a person was floating in the roof and he was lowering to the ground and then.. everyone notices that it's... Host_Unknown

"Host_Unknown, why are you doing this??!!" screamed ACCEpt.rich

"Huh!!??" abrahamman waked up and scared his bird hat and it went flying to the left part of the room and disappears "What just happened?? Where are we?" abrahamman notices that Host_Unknown is in front of him " I remember what happenend... Hey where is my the bird that was in my..." abrahamman disappears and everyon gasped

"What did you did to him??" asked really loud Cat-gyrl

"Idk what just happened but it wasn't me" said Host_Unknown with an angry face

"Where are we??" asked PMURZ-p really angry

" This is the room here I create computer bugs and viruses. I will put them all over Vmk and if you fall on 1 of them.. well you'll find out." said Host_Unknown. He takes out his phone and shouts.. "KingofWings!!! come over here right now!!!

"Ok, sir" said KingofWings

KingofWings enters the room and says....

(to be continued)

I have to write more tomorrow in school and plz make a comment say somethin.

Can I be in it? Im not evil and my vmk name is TheBlueLlama :P

Ppl im trying to write all of the chapters so i can put some of them. Everyday im trying to get more ppl

I'd Love to be in this story! I really dont care if im good or bad but i would like to be in it!
btw my VMK name is Vienna! :)

im back!!!!!!

i have to write more ill be writting the next chapter right now it may take a while.

That took you 20 minutes.

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Great story! May I be in it? I want to be a nice character, but she is girly but not stuck up.

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ok i was in a long break i stopped writting writting for almost 5 months

W00t im back from my long long long break here is the next chapter w00t!!
Ppl i need more ppl to be added in my story need vmk title and i need villains

Chapter 6: KingofWings' Mission

KingofWings enters the room and says " Hey, boss, when i was in Town Square I saw this bird hat fly through the room that came out of nowhere. And I verify that the bird hat is Abrahamman's"

"Are u sure?" asked Host_Unknown very surprised

" Yes...sire, yes..." answered KingofWings very nervous " And..."

While Host_Unknown and KingofWings were discussing, Cat-gyrl had an idea

"Hey, PMURZ-p, I have an idea on how to escape this room" Cat-gyrl whispered to PMURZ-p

"You do? What is it?" PMURZ-p whipsered to Cat-gyrl

" Well, you know that Abrahamman's bird hat went flying over there," Cat-gyrl points at the left part of the room, "and then disappeared, right?"

"Yes" answered PMURZ-p

"Well, when KingofWings came here he said that he saw Abrahamman's bird hat. Well..." Catpgyrl was going to finish her plan but PMURZ-p interrupted

"Yeah!! And then we can escape the same way Abrahamman's bird hat did" interrupted Cat-gyrl but that was basically Cat-gyrl's plan

"Tell the plan to everyone else" said Cat-gyrl to PMURZ-p

While PMURZ-p was telling everyone the plan, KingofWings and Host_Unknown were still talking

"...and I have a new mission for you" Host_Unknown told KingofWings

"You do? What is it?" asked KingofWings really nervous

"Well I need you to..." Host_Unknown goes near KingofWings and whispers " I need you to..."

(to be continued):Smile:

Next chapter will be posted tomorrow or the next day:)

nice story, but can you try to make host_unknown less like guestalina? thx... sorry, he/she just seems too similar with all the "cant be boot" and the "MUAHAHA" and the flying floatiness LOL :)

keep writing!

hmm this story sounds a little similar to BLOSSOMFLOWERS now doesnt it?
very interesting o_o -blank stare at abe-
-cough-
ANYWAYY
this was just a Little Kind Of harrrrd to read o_o
the... spacing n all... and grammar o_o Sorry?

hmm, now that you mention it athleticaisha, it DOES remind me of blossomflower's story.
what with the whole guestalina...host_unknown...
sorry? I just hadda mention it.
I found it a little hard to read too, with the spacing and the quotes nd grammar, and stuffles...

FANABOYA!!!!!!!!! XD.


It does sound alot like Gloss'Em Blowers story now dunt it?

~Sinbadly. FANABOYA!!!!!!!!!!!! XD.

hey now that mention i read blossom's story and does look likely

hi ppl i need more villains plz tell me if u want to be in the story

Chapter 7: Distraction Plan

"Well i need you to..." Host_Unknown goes near KingofWings' ears and whispers "I need you to... put all the bugs in every room... EVERY! then put cameras in every room in VMK and check if unexpected stuff happens"

"OK, Sir" replied KingofWings

"Oh and I'm going to leave to..." Host_Unknown goes nearer to KingofWings' ear - again @_@ - " I'm going to search for Yavn and... well, you know what"

Host_Unknown leaves and PMURZ-p and tell Cat-gyrl " HEy, don't we need a distraction to escape so we don't get caught"

"Yea but KingofWings has cameras all over VMK" Cat-gyrl said

"I know but I already planned what to do with that" replied PMURZ-p

"What's the plan?" asked Cat-gyrl

"We just change all of our clothes" answered PMURZ

"Oh, OK. I knew that:P" said Cat-gyrl

"But first we need a distraction" said PMURZ-p "We can use Abrahamman he is very random"

"Yea, let me tell him" said Cat-gyrl while she poke Abrahamman

"Hey, Abrahamman" whispered Cat-gyrl "Hey, Abrahamman"

"What?!?!" shouted Abrahamman " I'm trying to put whip cream on MichaelJ's hand while he sleeps and then tickle him"

"Hey, stop talking!! I'm trying to watch my favorite soap opera!!"

"Ok......@_@" said ACCEpt.rich

"Hey, Abrahamman we need you to make a distraction so we can escape!!" said Cat-gyrl

"What can I do to distract him?" said Abrahamman

"I dont know but think about it" said Cat-gyrl and then she took a nap

Chapter 7.5

This chapter was going to be released when the story ended to see why... (if i say why i would be telling the whole story) to see why happened in the end the sotry

Here is the uncut cut chapter:

While Abrahamman was thinking for a distraction, Host_Unknown was with Zombie Host_Hula (ZHH) in her room

"Hey Hula" Host_Unknow called Hula "I need you to go to Yavn and turn him into a zombie"

"OK, Sir" responded Hula with a groan like zombies do

Hula left the room and followed Yavn which he was in his room

"Oh, hi Hula wassup? said Yavn

"Oh, just came here to visit you" Hula lied

"Oh, ok. I'm just here trying to create new item for this summer" said Yavn

"YAVN, LOOK OUT!! THERE IS A SCAMMER BUG THING BEHIND YOU!!!!" screamed Hula

Yavn looked back and....

Zap!!!

Hula had zapped Yavn with a lightning bolt and turned into a zombie

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The story is getting interesting huh?
plz comment and we need mroe ppl to be in the story plz

I forgot I posted on this story :|

NICE STORY

i will be in it!

Can I be in it?? I am defre in VMK.. and please don't make me evil!

defre ill try to put u as a good but u may only appear in 1 chap

hey dude can u maybe have chad and I in it?

ok ill put u guys in story. does chad use vmkf?

i think ill post next chapter by Friday or someday lol

Can be a SUPER EVIL CHaracter!!!! PLASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

sorry iraccoon already has that part but ill try put as something like that

When am I in it anyway? I asked 3 months ago o_o

zoo yes u are u are going like in chapter 10

im kind of giving to the ppl who advertises this story to be a super main character