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polkadotty22
12-31-2007, 02:58 AM
Heh, Okk here is meh cheesy story....It's scary so WATCH OUT! ;)
Starring: BlossomFlower ( Flower )
SassaFrazz ( Soda )
Astropinkpanda ( Panda )
AthleticAisha ( Candy )
SoccerRach ( Soccer )
Purplepepes ( Purple)
LittleTinkFairy ( Tink )
hikoik - Uhmm hikoik?
JJsmooth (smooth)
acehalee (ace)
TADA!!
Chappy 1

So the nine friends were hanging out at Main Street just relaxing and throwing stuff at eachother... (ex: churro, popcorn, etc..) When all of them got dc all at once! Except....the window that popped up did not say: "Your connection was lost, Please login to the game again. If you are playing a game in the Tomorrowland Arcade you'll have to finish it before you sign into VMK again. It said this: Your connection was lost because of the EVIL GLITCH ..Log off now and don't dare to get back on..or ELSE! Of course, who reads the Dc window?!?! So, the nine friends logged back in again. And it was a very very big mistake.... When they got on, they were immediatly brought to the haunted mansion lobby. "Ok.." Panda exclaimed As she made a face : O_o " That was weird.." "I know.. " Soda said. " Must be a Glitch." Soccer said. So as ace tried to open his map window, it didn't work! "Omg" ace screamed. "It won't let me see the map >_<!! Will it let you guys??" So the other eight friends tried going to their map and of course it didn't work. "Hmm maybe its a glitch. lets log off and then get back on again." purple said. They all started to head for the exit when they realized that they could not get out of the game, they were in the game! Yes, it is true, the nine friends were no long in a virtual magic kingdom, they had become their characters!! "Oh no.." hikoik whispered. Then all of the sudden the ground caught on fire! The wind whistled and the three ghosts from the haunted mansion came out and started floating toward them. A scream came from the cloudy sky and a booming voice thundered from above them. "This is my Kingdom now!" And an evil laugh was let out as everything started to fade out........

Eh..First Chappy what do ya think? Shall I write more?? REPLY PLZ

strikemaster
12-31-2007, 03:39 AM
I love this story! It pwns. Just wondering, may I be in the rest? Lol, if it goes against your original story plan, then don't lol.
~Strike

polkadotty22
01-02-2008, 04:29 AM
LOL !! Sure thanks for posting :)
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Chappy 2 ---eh here it goes @_@

Tink is the first to open her eyes and find herself and her friends a dark and cold cellar. She creeps back to tap Panda on the shoulder. Panda looks up at Tink and makes a -.- face. "Great, just great!" "WE SHOULD HAVE READ THE DC WINDOW!!!!!" hikoik looks up and says,"Yeah, but who in the virtual magic kingdom reads those?!" "Eh.." ace exclaims as she takes off her flip hat and rubs her head. "I knew I should have done Homework instead..." "Well, while we're here we can play the name game!" says Soda awkwardly. "Umm no thanks. I have an even better idea!" says soccer calmly. " LETS GET OUT OF HERE!! " ( Eh not so calmly...) "Okay, okay, well let's play it by year"says smooth. "Ya never know, this might just be a cool thing yavn has decided to do." "Like a quest!" "Yeah, well where is the quit button because so far I'm not liking it! >_<" yells ace. All of the sudden the friends hear a noise. It sounds as though someone if trying to bang their way out of their cell! Then they hear footsteps. They get louder and louder and soon they sound as if they are right in front of their cell. (Of course it is too darn dark to see anything but the friends know that someone is near.) "Who,who's there?!" studders purple. Then the friends here a banging noise. Someone broke into their cell! "Hey, little dudes..." a voice calls. "I'm here to break us out!" the voice exclaims proudly. "I am moustache_mouse and I am gonna save VMK!" "Of course I'm gonna need some assistants." "I mean ya can't do this job by yourself!!" I hand reaches out and helps Panda up from the floor. "Aye.." exclaims Panda. "Are we up for the challenge?" "Yes!" says the group all at once.

I know....quite corny! hehe i got nothing better to do :) PLZ REPLY <33

polkadotty22
01-02-2008, 02:04 PM
Chapter 3!i!i!i

So now the 10 friends are on their way to save vmk. hikoik and Panda use inferno and spooky magice to let their way in the darkness of the dungeon. "Hey moustache_mouse?"Panda asked. "Can I call you strike?" "Umm yeah" replied Strike. "But, where did you come up with strike??" "Eh..idk ;)" winked Panda. When Soda discovered the friends were leaving she quickly hopped up and stuffed the rest of her unfinished popcorn in the back of her cowboy pants. "Hmm so which way do we go?" asked Smooth. "Lets try right!" Panda said."Because right is right!" "Yeah, yeah, sure whateva panda :P" said Soccer. So the 10 friends made a right out of their cell. Right after they left, The Ultimate Glitch came floating in along with his three associates, Dc, Lag, and Crash. As they past the cells of all the poor vmk people The Ultimate Glitch let out an evil laugh. "So what's the plan boss?" asked Dc. "Well, I'm going to use these twerps as slaves to remake VMK into VTK!!" "Uh.. what does VTK stand for boss?" asked Crash. "It stands for Virtually Terrible Kingdom!" The Ultimate Glitch roared. "Oh..."replied lag as if his computer were really slow. "I...get,,you!" lag said. "Good!" Shouted the Glitch. "You better!" Then the villians came across Strike's and the 9 friends cells. Pieces of the bars wer laying on the floor. "No!!" screeched the Glitch. "We cannot have these twerps roaming around!" "Crash, Dc, Lag?!" he yelled as the three scurried into a salute. "Find those kids and bring them back to me." "Yes sir!" they replied and with that the Ultimate Glitch vanished.

Blossomflower
01-02-2008, 10:22 PM
LOL! IM SO GLAD I SEARCHED MY NAME OR ELSE I WOULDVE NEVER FOUND THIS NUTSO STORY THAT HAS ME IN IT LOL ROFL

hehehe, nice story, but please... make paragraphs.. space it out.. cuz its hard to read if u dont do that
LOL

YAYYYY ANOTHER STORY STARRING ABOUT US... THE CRAZY FRIEND CIRCLE... LOL
we are so famous. - snob face - LOL jk

LOL panda if i make another story ill put u in it but i cant do that with my story right now.. i stopped adding more ppl
LOL

MORE PLEASE

SassaFrazz
01-02-2008, 10:25 PM
:O nice story~!!!

Straws
01-03-2008, 07:01 PM
why aren't i in it? :( arent i your friend - cries -

polkadotty22
01-05-2008, 08:24 PM
IM SO SORRY STRAWS I PROMISE THAT YOU WILL BE ADDED !!! LOVE U <33 and ohh thanks flower and soda for replying :) yes we are famous :D haha!

Straws
01-05-2008, 10:03 PM
- cries- i feel so unloved!!! -.-

Blossomflower
01-05-2008, 11:03 PM
FAMOUS YEAHHH LOL

please
post another chapter
(not rushing u take ur time.....)

i like reading stories about me. especially if it includes our entire friend circle :)
LOL

ZooZoo
01-07-2008, 12:15 AM
Oh! Put me! :P I like it

Call me ZeenaZeena or Zoo (or Cookie ^^)

LittleTinkFairy
01-07-2008, 12:44 PM
Great story!! its fun to be in stories :) cant wait to see te next chapter!

AthleticAisha
03-25-2008, 05:41 PM
nice story pandas!
please continue it :)
i see u haven't posted in a while LOL
but yea
nice story :D

iRaccoon
03-26-2008, 03:33 AM
What about me :( Aren't i part of the FRIEND CIRCLE :(

Vienna
04-02-2008, 11:57 PM
Awesomeness if i didnt search up for glitches i would have never found this awesome story, can i be in it? unless it messes up the plot, but can i be a evil person? havent been in a story as a evil person, lol love it!

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