i know the title sounds creepy but there real is a race of people with dark veins, new story im making and well its going to take a while with school and haven story but, this takes place in japan with me and my friends doing our normal ninja stuff lol, me and cut are like brothers so i thought i'd make us brothers. were also on the same team with KMSakura or saw.

this story should be interesting cause im using a movie that hasn't come out yet and my own immagention

Kewlishness xD I remember us in VMK pretending to be on a Naruto team. Good times xD. Looking forward to chapter one.

~KM

sweet I can't wait to read it! ^_^

:- Sounds okay..

~woot first chapter lol i wonder how this story will turn out, i know it was original the dark crimson liquid war but now its the dark vein war. k and on with the war!~

*dragon was running towards a shack in the backyard*

dragon: father where are you? mother said to wash up its dinner time.

*he reached the shack which was his fathers work shack and opened the door, on the table there was a falcon badge and a note, he picked it up and ran out towards his house*

dragon thinking: i gotta get this to mother!

*he dashed at a high speed so fast that he sliced through the wind and sliped and bashed into a tree, tears fell from his eyes*

dragon thinking: why father why are we fighting them now of all times

??: hey dragon-kun whats wrong?

dragon: cut-kun what are you doing here?

cut: mother sent me for you, why are you crying like a little girl?

dragon:shut up or ill leave you behind

cut: leave me behind from what?

dragon: were going to be warring now.. father and older brother were called in for servce

cut: but we've been in war before whats making you said?

dragon:not with dark veins they.. they are endangering us, so were going to have to get rid of them but i dont want to get rid of her

cut: you mean that well have to get rid of them them..

*dragon ran towards the house*

dragon: im going to go talk to hokage-sama take the note to mother

cut: alright

~ the end~

Wo good first chapter ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter!

Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Icey be in story? =3 Great beginning.

~Ice

hmm maybe i can add ice but it wouldn't be a party you'd like proably

hmm.. interesting.. add us in it!

actually summer i made up a whole part for you

Nexter chapter... =O

Seems okay so far.. Ive got alot on my mind tho .. probably will enjoy it more another day

hmm maybe i can add ice but it wouldn't be a party you'd like proably

How rude!!!

Lol Ice dont worry.

KM has got yer back! *trips over dust and breaks your back*


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Back on topic;;

Next chapter soon pleasers =O

Ouch o.o...... DR shall have your back too! *tapes her back to a board*

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Next chapter Dwagie :)

lol, its the anime squad! No offense, its just the avatars lol. Plus, you guys are my friends, why would I make fun of you lol?
~Strike

how about i make you and saw a deal you write more chapters and i will 2

Rawr, that means more thinking! Oh well, I'll start a new story or somethin'.

~Ice

~i got a good idea for whats going to happen instead of my old idea or my semi-old idea/ since we do live in the future but were still a village dont ask me why im going to make this an awesome story :D just read k?~

*dragon had jumped past a few trees by the time he was stoped*
??:dragonkidaye! halt your comanding officer has something to say to you.
dragon:your joking right. look old man i know my dad's in the ninja army and i know i said i would sign up but i never said i'd listen to an old man barking orders
*dragon's knee smashed into the old man's stomach and he continued running*
old man:that little brat..
dragon:don't make me turn back to finish you.
*dragon rushed to the hokages office and bursted through the door*
dragon:summer-sama call off the war!
hokage:its hokage-sama, dragon-san
dragon:dont push your title in my face you know im just as good as you
ice-chan:dragon-san wait, i heard you had attacked the ANBU officer we sent to get you
(ice was the hokage's assitant and she took her job lightly unless there was a fight)
dragon:he would have only slowed me down. now call off this darn war!
hokage:impossible we cant just call it off cause your made about it, so get used to it and get into service dragon you know well need ninja and alot
dragon:why should i? i oppose this war
*dragon smashed his hand on the desk and it broke*
hokage:fine then at least hang these posters all over town as a favor from an old friend
dragon:hai..
*he took the posters and left. ice look so shocked*
ice:he broke the desk with one hit..
(ice wasn't the best ninja and dragon was asked to train her once but she got ****y so he had to stop)
~the excitment happens later dont worry~

Dx Tink and I are not here yet? .-.

We must be specials. xD yays.

you remember what i said about places in haven school story well samething in here oh tink you might be mad about this but i have to tell you in private

Why would i be mad? =0
And how could i be mad at you? =P

why cant i just be called summer? hokage seems to much for me!! >_<