TheBird
11-25-2007, 02:36 AM
This is the un-told story of the Safari animals at the Animal Kingdom; about how they feel, with the giant trucks full of noisy tourguides and littering tourists.
Chapter One: The Realization
Samson was walking through his edge of the forest. No one ever came here, and he preferred it that way. As the head of the pride, he liked his space. But soon he could hear the pounding of footsteps, probably that wretched monkey Afii, he thought. As the footfalls got closer, he realized it was Matriarch, the last person he'd expect to actually come looking for him.
"Samson, we have a problem," the giant African elephant said.
"What would that be?" Samson replied.
"The humans are creating new touring routes," she said, "and it affects you directly."
"If it affects me directly, that can only mean it comes right through here," Samson said, seething, "what're we going to do about this?"
"I say we hold an animal council, but we'll have to meet tonight, when the zoo-keepers are gone and the park is completely empty." Matricarch said with confidence.
"I'll see you tonight then," Samson replied with pride.
The two leaders of the Walt Disney World Safari set off into the seering sunlight, read to rise against this new park developement.
Chapter Two: The Invitation
Afii was jumping throught the trees, as usual. He liked to stay out of trouble, but that was hard-pressed around here, especially with Samson on his case. Last time he got in trouble, he had just been looking for another banana tree in Samson's so called "private corner". It's not that he didn't like Samson, he was a great leader, he just was a bit on the cranky side every so often. Actually, forget often, all the time. He stopped to think about this flame on his fellow Safari. As he thought about it, he looked down and saw Samson himself looking up at him.
"You can't hear my thoughts, can you?" said Afii, with a guilty laugh.
"No Afii, and I don't think I want to," Samson said, again seething with anger.
"Whatcha' doin' in the part of the grasslands, Sam?" Afii ask, pounding himself inside for calling him Sam, he hated that.
"I'll disregard that title Afii and get on with it. I'm looking for you. If you don't already know, the humans are creating new tours though my corner of the Safari. Don't only does this anger me, but it puts some of our food sources in danger. We're calling a animal meeting, and we want everything there. Be at the old tree when you hear the Matriarch calling. And don't be late." Samson said, stalking off.
"I guess he didn't get enough sleep last night," Afii said as Samson walked away.
"I heard that Afii!!" Samson roared.
What do you all think? Should I write more? This is my first story, and I was having trouble with ideas and stuff.
Note: It's ok to leave comments, good or bad. I don't care what you say about my story, as long as it's not rude, because I'll strive for improvement.
Bird
Chapter One: The Realization
Samson was walking through his edge of the forest. No one ever came here, and he preferred it that way. As the head of the pride, he liked his space. But soon he could hear the pounding of footsteps, probably that wretched monkey Afii, he thought. As the footfalls got closer, he realized it was Matriarch, the last person he'd expect to actually come looking for him.
"Samson, we have a problem," the giant African elephant said.
"What would that be?" Samson replied.
"The humans are creating new touring routes," she said, "and it affects you directly."
"If it affects me directly, that can only mean it comes right through here," Samson said, seething, "what're we going to do about this?"
"I say we hold an animal council, but we'll have to meet tonight, when the zoo-keepers are gone and the park is completely empty." Matricarch said with confidence.
"I'll see you tonight then," Samson replied with pride.
The two leaders of the Walt Disney World Safari set off into the seering sunlight, read to rise against this new park developement.
Chapter Two: The Invitation
Afii was jumping throught the trees, as usual. He liked to stay out of trouble, but that was hard-pressed around here, especially with Samson on his case. Last time he got in trouble, he had just been looking for another banana tree in Samson's so called "private corner". It's not that he didn't like Samson, he was a great leader, he just was a bit on the cranky side every so often. Actually, forget often, all the time. He stopped to think about this flame on his fellow Safari. As he thought about it, he looked down and saw Samson himself looking up at him.
"You can't hear my thoughts, can you?" said Afii, with a guilty laugh.
"No Afii, and I don't think I want to," Samson said, again seething with anger.
"Whatcha' doin' in the part of the grasslands, Sam?" Afii ask, pounding himself inside for calling him Sam, he hated that.
"I'll disregard that title Afii and get on with it. I'm looking for you. If you don't already know, the humans are creating new tours though my corner of the Safari. Don't only does this anger me, but it puts some of our food sources in danger. We're calling a animal meeting, and we want everything there. Be at the old tree when you hear the Matriarch calling. And don't be late." Samson said, stalking off.
"I guess he didn't get enough sleep last night," Afii said as Samson walked away.
"I heard that Afii!!" Samson roared.
What do you all think? Should I write more? This is my first story, and I was having trouble with ideas and stuff.
Note: It's ok to leave comments, good or bad. I don't care what you say about my story, as long as it's not rude, because I'll strive for improvement.
Bird