Ivan and his friends have been invited to go in an underwater submarine and go on a VMK Journey to get a glimpse of the real Titanic. But strange things are happening to them. The closer they get to the Titanic, the more thrilling stuff happens to them. All of his Submates got haunted by ghost, on the same night. What is happening to them? Are they being haunted by the ghosts of the people who died on the Titanic? Is someone playing a trick on them? What will happen? Ivan and his friends are gonna get to the bottom of this! They are gonna have to solve the mystery of the chaos on their Submarine underwater! But what will really happen? To find out, read the story and see. You'll never know what happens next!!!!

Chapter 1, The Idea:

Yavn was walking through the halls, and saw VMK_Willa walk past him. He said "Hi!" to her, and kept walking, with HOST_Hula follwoing. "Hula, can you get me some water as soon as we get to the room?" he asked. "Sure, sir!" replied Hula. Yavn saw the doors to his office in front of him, probably about a few inches. Then he pushed the doors and fell back and stumbled onto Hula. "Oof!" he said. Then they both fell, and Hula dropped all of her papers. "Oops, my bad Hula." He said. "I forgot to unlock the door, how dumb can I get? Lol" "Can you just do me one favor?" Hula asked. "Sure, what's that?" asked Yavn. Then Hula looked at the floor next to her, and then to yavn rapidly. "Oh!" said Yavn. Then he picked himself up, and took Hula's hand, and helped her up. Hula picked up all of her papers. "Ugh! Where did I put my key?" Yavn asked himself. "Ah! Here it is!" he said while lifting it up from his pocket. He unlocked the door, and let Hula in first. "I think we should try to have something more fun for all the VMK players this year." said Yavn. "Here's your water, sir." said Hula while handing him the cup of water. He took the cup and had a little sip. "Hula," said Yavn. "What would you prefer to have for all the players of VMK to enjoy sometime soon?" "Well I guess they would like something like something outside the game!" said Hula. "Something that they will have to do in real life." "I like your thinking..." said Yavn. "But I guess we should make something that they would prefer as sca-" then Yavn accidently spilled his water. "Oh, snaps! I spilled my water." he said. "Water?" Hula asked herself. "Hmm..." Then the phone rang on Yavn's desk. "One second!" he said. "Hello? VMK Inc. This is Yavn speaking!" answered Yavn. "Oh so it's true?" asked Yavn, to the caller on the phone. "True?" Hula askled herself. She was coming up with an idea. Then she was looking at a picture on Yavn's desk, of Yavn with a baseball player signing Yavn's baseball bat. "Bat....... Boat!!!" shouted Hula, it came up to one big idea, The VMK Players Taking A Trip to The Titanic! "Ah!!!" shouted Hula. "Yavn!!!" "What?" asked Yavn. Then Hula hung up the phone for Yavn. "Hey, I wasn't done with my conversation!" said Yavn. "It doesn't matter!" said Hula. "Because I just came up with a great idea!" "Really? What is it?" "We can make a huge adventure for all of the VMK players taking an underwater trip to the Titanic!" "Whoah! Great Plan!" Then they were both jumping around and souting with joy! Then HOST_Phinny came in and asked. "Yavn, I was thinking maybe I can have a rai-" then she saw Yavn and Hula acting crazy. Then she slowly walked away while still looking at them. Then she closed the door slowly and ran down the hall.

LOL! Very cool! LOL it was funny when he fell and he was like "Oof!" Rofl! Good story! Cant wait for more! ;)

cool, exect you posted this twice.

Chapter 2, The Invitation:

The doorbell rang so many times to Ivan's house. "I'm coming!" said Ivan. He walked to the door and put his soda on the table. The doorbell kept ringing. "I'm coming!!!!!" he yelled. Then he opened the door and a letter flew into his house. "Whoah!" he shouted, while watching the letter fly right past him. The letter landed on the table next to his soda. He closed the door and walked to the table. Then he picked it up and opened it. The letter read:

" VMK Player,
We are proud to invite you to a journey with so
many other VMK players. A journey to the famous
Ship of Dreams, The Titanic! If you are proud to
join us, then please sign the pink slip that came
with this letter. Thank you

- Yavn

PS. If you would like to bring a camera or any
other supply, please do, and take a picture or
even video ta- oops! My mother is calling me!"

Then Ivan had a confused look on his face when he saw the last line on the letter. Then he ignored it, and looked for the pink slip in the envelope in which the letter came in. He found the pink slip, and looked at it. "Sure!" he said, after a while. "You bet I'm going on the trip with everyone! I can't wait to see what the Titanic is like!" Then he quickly got a pen, and signed the pink slip. He ran to the_phoenix's house and showed him what he got. "the_phoenix!" yelled Ivan. "Look what I got in the mail!" "I got one too!" said the_phoenix, while droping the water hose onto the flowers. "But you don't even know what I got yet." said Ivan. "I know, but my invitation to the Titanic is so cool that I just wanted to rub it in your face!" said phoenix, while laughing and waving the invitation in Ivan's face. "But phoenix, I got one too." said Ivan. Then phoenix stopped waving it in Ivan's face and had a shocked expression. "Well, I guess the only thing better than rubbing it in your face, is going with you on the trip!" said phoenix. "I know! It's just that i don't get the last part, weird..." "Yeah, weird... but I think that we should really not try to panic about si- .... MY FLOWERS!!!!!" yelled phoenix. he ran to his flowers and removed the water hose from soaking the flowers. "What have I done?!?!?!" yelled phoenix. "Pipe down phoenix, you can always plant another garden." said Ivan "But whatever happens, I'm still gonna go on the trip of dreams, to the Ship of dreams! Nothing can stop me!" said Ivan while knealing on a boulder in front of phoenix's house, and raising the ticket up in the air. Then a trash truck past by really fast and took the ticket along with it. "My ticket!" yelled Ivan. Then phoenix finally fixed his garden. "Phoenix!" yelled Ivan, while stepping all over phoenix's garden. "We need to stop that truck!!!!" said Ivan while jumping up and down and stomping all over phoenix's garden without knowing he was messing it up. "You're ruining my work!" yelled phoenix. "Whatever!" said Ivan while running into phoenix's backyard. "Hey! That's my Backyard! You Can't Go Back There!" yelled phoenix while chasing after Ivan. Then Ivan took phoenix's bike and followed the truck. "Ivan get back here!" yelled phoenix while watching Ivan pedal away. "Urrrrrrr!!!!!!!" screetched phoenix.

Chapter 3, The Chase:

Ivan was riding to the truck as fast as he could on phoenix's bike. He was going pretty fast! "I'm not gonna let this truck take my ticket!" said Ivan to himself. The truck was coming to a stoplight and the truck stopped. But Ivan was going so fast that he thought he couldn't use any strength to push down on the brakes! He pushed on them as hard as he could! Then he came to a stop, just about less than an inch away from the truck. The bike stopped with a loud screetch. "Whew!" shouted Ivan. Then the light was green and the truck continued driving. "Oh No!" shouted Ivan. Ivan was riding his bike so fast that the wheel fell off, and he stopped right in the middle of the road. "Urrr!" he groaned. Then he quickly saw a kid riding a skateboard. He saw a kid, and took his skateboard to chase after the truck. "I'm not gonna let that truck get away!" said Ivan. Then a car slammed into a tree by trying to avoid the broken bike in the middle of the road. As Ivan was riding fast to the truck, he almost could reach the bumper and climb up to the pile of trash to get his ticket. "I'm gonna make it!" said Ivan. The truck turned to another street, but before Ivan was able to make the turn, a huge truck carrying glue crashed and the glue flooded the street and Ivan's skateboard got stuck to the glue. "No!!!!" shouted Ivan. Then he heared a parade going on, and there were people from the army that were walking in the parade with a Rhino Tank. "Yes!!!" shouted Ivan. Then he got a chinese fan from one of the chinese women in the parade, and covered his face with it. He jumped in the tank, and drove off. "Stop that tank!" shouted the cops. But then Ivan shot a huge bomb at the street, and they weren't able to get past the fire. "Suckers!" he yelled. Then he went full speed and caught up to the garbage truck. "I'm gonna have to get it this time!" he yelled. Then he chased after the trukc in every turn and hill. He didn't let anything get in his way, so he just ran over all of the stores and houses. Then Ivan accidently pressed a button, that warned him to leave the tank, before it explodes in 60 seconds. "Ah!!!!" he shouted. then he tried to find an exit. "Oh No! Oh No! Oh No!" he shouted. Then he found an emergency exit and opened it up. "Yay!" he shouted. But then his pants got stuck to the wall of the exit. "Oh no!" he shouted. He only had 30 seconds left. "Ah!!!!!!!!!" he screamed. He tried to untangle his pants from the wall. "What is it that's even holding me down?!?!?!" asked Ivan. He tried to untangle it, he was almost there! But he only had 15 seconds left. "Come on!!" he shouted. Then he only had 11, 10, 9, 8, 7, but then he untangled himself and jumped out! 4, 3, 2, 1. Then the tank exploded into a giant explosion on that whole street. Ivan was knocked out and on the ground. Even the garbage truck was in the accident. The street was on fire. Then a few fire-trucks came, and put out the fire. Then phoenix jumped out of one of the trucks, and ran to Ivan. "Ivan! Wake Up!" he shouted. "Ivan! Be Strong!" Then Ivan opened his eyes widely. "I got to get my ticket!" he yelled. Then he got up fast, and looked for his ticket in the pile of garbage from the truck that was scattered everywhere. "I found it!!!!!!" he yelled. "Hey, phoenix, how'd you even get here?" asked Ivan while putting the ticket in his pocket. "Oh, one of the firefighters gave me a ride." replied phoenix. "Well, at least we're for sure that we both are gonna go on that trip! I wonder if it's gonna still look a little nice even though it has been under-water all of these years." said Ivan. "Well, let's go back to our own city. Luckily nobody found out you're the one who caused all of this." said phoenix. Then they got a ride home from one of the fire-fighters.

It's pretty good. Pretty random though.. so tell me one thing, does Yavn live with his mom?:xshocked:

This is awesome! i cant wait until you write the next chapter! (if your going to write another)

Captain_Kool:

Are you asking me if he does in real life or in the story? If in real life, idk. If in the story, no.

moch4476:

Yes I am gonna write plenty more. If you want, I can put you in it. And this goes to everyone. Whoever wants to be in this story, go ahead and ask so I can be sure to put you in it :)

I wanna be in it

ok, i'll post the chapter right now! But do you want to be mean or good?

Chapter 4, The Airport:

As Ivan and phoenix aproached the airport, they dragged their suit-cases and went to the front. "Hold It!" yelled a security guard. "You need to be checked, you can just walk over the rails!" "Oh, we're sorry sir." said Ivan. then the man demanded Ivan and phoenix to walk through a little doorway. As they walked through, another man was behind them and followed them in. "Hey! The metal-detecting entrance says you have something metal on you!" said the security guard to the man. Then the man pulled out some weird type of pipe with red markings on it. "Nobody move!" yelled the man outloud. "EEK!" yelled Ivan. Then phoenix and Ivan ducked down behind an escalator. "I will shoot, if anybody moves!" yelled the man. "Phoenix, I'm sorry I never told you that I hit your dog!" said Ivan. "Huh? I don't have a dog." replied phoenix. "Oh, never mind." said Ivan. Then the security guard jumped on the man with the pipe. Then the man with the pipe shot something out of it, and it hit the escalator. "Ah!!!" yelled Ivan and phoenix while hugging each other like cry-babies. All of the people that were going up the escalator fell off and were injured. The escalator fell over Ivan and phoenix, but it didn't fall on them. Ivan and phoenix were still screaming tho. "Ahhhhh!!!- oh look, there's Bright." interupted Ivan. "Oh, cool! She got that new sprint phone that's 2-sided!" said phoenix. Then Ivan and phoenix happily got up, and stepped on all of the people on the floor and raced over to Bright. "Hey Bright! I love your cell-phone!" said Ivan. "Uh... did you not see what just happened over there?" asked Bright. "Not really, I just know that the escalator fell and there was a guy with some type of gun." said phoenix. "Oh, well you pretty much know everything." said Bright. "Are you here to go on the Titanic tambien?" asked phoenix. "Yeah, I can't wait to see how ugly it looks!" said Bright. "Uh, if you're critisizing it, why are you even coming?" asked phoenix. "Oh, I'm just here to get free refreshments and little souveniers for my mom." said Bright. "(Cough) Selfish! (Cough)" said Ivan. "Wow, you should do something about that cough, here, take a Halls." said Bright. "Thx, and that lady over there is selfish! You can tell I think that by the way I just said the word." said Ivan while taking the Halls. "Flight 34 Taking Off!" said a woman talking over the mega-phone. "Oh No! That's our flight!" yelled Ivan. Then Bright phoenix and Ivan raced to their flight. "Where is it?!?!?!" asked Ivan. "Oh look! A directory can help us!" said Bright. Then the three of them raced to the directory. The directory read, 'You are Here' on one point. And it also read, 'Your flight is here' on another space. Then they ran to look for their flight. "I hope we make it!" yelled Ivan. Then they ran to the flight entrance and the doors were almost closed. "Oh No!" yelled phoenix. Then they jump to the door and stepped in the way of the door's closing space. "I'm not gonna let it close!" said Bright. "Me either!" said Ivan. Then they tried to pushed it open as much as they could, but it was no use. The doors were closed. "No!!!!!!" yelled Ivan. "Well, let's go home now :)" said Ivan. Then Ivan and phoenix walked away in a happy mood. Then bright was putting the top of her head aginst the door with her hands on both sides of the door. "YOU DUMB DOOR!!!!! OPEN!!!!!!!" she yelled loudly! Then her hands were glowing, and she threw a bolt of magic at the door, and it opened. Ivan and phoenix looked behind them in amazement. "Gosh! Bright!" yelled Ivan. "Hurry! Let's get in while we still have the chance!" yelled phoenix while running to the door and Ivan following. Bright jumped in, and then Ivan went in right after. "hurry phoenix!" yelled Ivan. Then when phoenix jumped into the doorway, the plane already started going, and phoenix was hanging on the doorway of the plane. "Ah!!" yelled phoenix. "Oh No! Phoenix, don't worry, we'll help you up!" yelled Ivan. Phoenix was hanging over the plane's runway, and was scared. One of his hands let go and now he only hung on with one hand. "I knew you both well!" yelled phoenix. "Excuse me, the doors should already be clo- Oh My God!" yelled a flight attendent while walking to Bright and Ivan. "Stop, Messing WITH US, YOU BAD LUCK!!!!!! AH!!!!!!" yelled Bright as loud as she yelled before she opened the door back at the airport. Then she pulled up phoenix and the flew into the airplane. "Whew! that was close!" said Ivan. Then Bright and phoenix got up, and looked at everyone on the chairs. "Wow, these all must be VMK Players!" said Bright. "Let's go get those three seats next to sethjr." said Ivan. then Bright, Ivan and phoenix walked to the seats next to sethjr.

OMG I love you for writing this!! I'm soo obsessed with the Titanic - both the movie (the James Cameron one w/Leo and Kate) and the historical event. I've pretty much memorized everything about it... If you need any help with historical or physical facts about Titanic, (like if you need some for yer story) feel free to PM me. I'd be more than happy to help!

"My flowers!!" rofl!

Lol, gosh you have time if you can write all of that... <.<

I want to be in the story! My VMK name is Speedsonic.
By the way, I'm good!

Can i too! My VMK Name Is Harry.O!
Also, I(iii)'m good too!

add acefredfred! i like this story!

Lol, You love me Magazine? Lol

Chapter 5, Problems on Flight 34:

As Ivan, phoenix and Bright approached the seats, they put their luggage up and sat down. "Wow, these seats feal comfy!" said phoenix. "You're lucky, I have to sit next to Sleeping Beauty over here!" said Ivan while pointing at sehtjr as he was asleep. Then sethjr was snoring really loud, and Ivan back away from him a little. "Oh gosh." said Ivan. "Mommy! I want the dolly!" said sethjr in his sleep. Then seth had moved in his sleep and slept on Ivan. "OMG!" said Ivan quietly. "Get this guy off of me!" "Just push him off!" said Bright. "I can't! Look!" said Ivan while looking towards a sign on the back of the seat in front of them. The sign read, "Please do not push, or we'll kick you off the plane, even if we're already in the air. Oh and by the way, you may not have any food or drink because someone poisoned the food last week, and now we're trying to get other food. At least enough for everyone on this plane. You get me? Lol. @_@ Please Enjoy The Flight." Then Bright had a confused look on her face. "Uh, let's just get some other seats." said Bright. Then Bright and phoenix got up and got their stuff. "You coming, Ivan?" asked phoenix. "Uh, hello? I'm kinda trapped here!" said Ivan. Bright groaned, and then she smacked seth awake. "Ah! Tooth Fairy, is that you?" said seth when he woke up. then Ivan got up and got his things. "Let's go sit over in those three seats." said phoenix. "We can't! They're separated!" said Bright. "Who cares?!?!" asked Ivan. Then all three of them sat in the three separated seats in the row. As they sat down, they were very quiet. They each had nobody to talk to. Then Ivan forogt his iPod in Bright's suit case. (Which was way on the other side of the row.) Then Ivan leaned over a litte, and looked at Bright on the other side of the row. "Psst! Bright!" said Ivan. Bright wouldn't answer. "Bright!" saidn. "Bright!!!!" yelled Ivan in front of everyone on the plane. Then Bright looked at Ivan finally. "I need my iPod!" Ivan yelled, quietly. Then Bright searched through her suit case, and found Ivan's iPod. "Catch it, i'm gonna throw it!" said Bright to Ivan. Ivan got his hands ready to catch the iPod. Then when Bright lifted her hands up to throws the iPod, she accidently hit Speedsonic (The guy sitting next to her.) in the face. "Ow!" yelled Speedsonic. "Watch it!" "Sorry!" said Bright. Then the iPod didn't land in Ivan's hand, it hit Harry.O's head. "Hey!" shouted Harry.O "Who threw that?!?!?!" Then he got up and looked around. He saw acefredfred giggling, and thought it was him who threw the iPod. "acefredfred, you think it's funny?!?!?" asked Harry.O. "Uh, I was just laughing at my book." said acefredfred. "I think it's hillarious!" said SpeedSonic. Then Harry.O threw a granola bar at Speedsonic. "Haha! Missed Me!" said Speedsonic. But then Harry.O threw another granola bar, and it hit Speedsonic this time. "Ow!" said Speedsonic. Then acefredfred looked at both of them in shock. "Uh... can we just forget about this?" asked acefredfred. Then Speedsonic and Harry.O both sat down. Then acefredfred conitnued reading his book. Then Bright had to go to the bathroom, but the way out of the row to her right was blocked by a flight attendant and her cart. So Bright had to go all the way to the other side. "Excuse me, I got to use the lavoratory!" said Bright while getting up and out of her seat. Then she was walking all the way to the other side and was passing by everyone in the row. When she passed by Speedsonic, she got stuck in front of him. "Uh, can you please move your legs back?" asked Bright. "I am." said Speedsonic. "Well, do better." said Bright while trying to get through. "It's your pants! They're stuck to the cord under my seat!" said Speedsonic. Then Bright was struggling to get her pants unstuck. As she was trying to untangle herself, she accidently kicked Speedsonic, and he spit his gum out to the back of Bright's leg. Then Bright got unstuck, and walked past acefredfred. But then the gum was so strong, that it got stuck to the book that acefredfred was reading, and the book was attached to Bright's leg. "Hey! My Book!" said acefredfred. But Bright kept walking through. Then she walked past phoenix, and made all of phoenix's stuff fall out of his suit-case. "Oh Great!" said phoenix. Then he tried to pick up his stuff. As Bright finally got out of the row, she ran to the rest-room and slammed the door. "Oh Boy!" Now I can sit on that side!" said Ivan. Then he tried to walk to the other side of the row, and pass by everyone, just like Bright. Then he stepped all over phoenix's stuff. "Great! First my flowers, and now my clothes!" said phoenix. Then when Ivan passed by Harry.O, he accidently stepped on his foot. "Ow! Watch where your going, buddy!" said Harry.O. "Sorry!" said Ivan. Then Ivan finally made it to the other side. After a few minutes, Bright came back and saw Ivan in her seat. "Hey, I was sitting there!" said Bright. "Fine then, you come over here, and I'll go back to my seat." said Ivan. "Oh gosh, this is ridiculous! I'm leaving this row!" said Harry.O. "I'm right behind you!" said Speedsonic. "room for one more?" asked acefredfred. Then each of them got their stuff, and went to find other seats. "Oh boy! now we can each sit next to each other!" said phoenix. Then Bright, Ivan and phoenix each sat next to each other, and enjoyed the rest of their flight.

Chapter 6, Arriving to The Submarines:

As the plane landed, Bright, Ivan and phoenix had gotten their luggage and approached to the exit. "I just hope we don't drown when we get under-water!" said Bright. "We'll be fine, trust me, I've been on a submarine before." said phoenix. "Yeah, at Disneyland!!!" said Ivan. Phoenix looked at Ivan tensely. Then as they got out, Ivan pointed to the Submarines at the dock. "Oh Look! There are the submarines!" said Ivan. "Wow, there's probably over 3000 of them!" said phoenix while staring at the row of submairnes. "I can't even tell how far the row goes down both sides because there's so many!" said Bright. Then they slowly began to walk toward the submarines. As they approached the submarines, they saw Yavn on the dock and telling everyone where to go. "Omg! It's Yavn!" said Bright. "Wow, is that how he looks like? I thought he was gonna be a whole lot more looking like his VMK Player!" said phoenix. "Well, that's just the way things are. I mean, look at me! I don't anything like my VMK Player. Isn't that correct Bright?" said Ivan while turning to his side, and nobody there. "Hey, where did Bright go?" asked Ivan. "She probably went to the bathroom again or so- OMG! BRIGHT! GET BACK OVER HERE!" shouted phoenix while pointing up at Yavn on the upper dock, and Bright bugging him to death. "High Yavn! I'm BrightMoonLight! Can I have your autograph?" asked Bright while giving yavn CD's and a couple of magazines. "Uh, Vmk's Greatest Hits? There's hardly even any songs in VMK! said Yavn. "I know, I just have all of the songs I ever created at the music games!" said Bright. "OK.." said Yavn while staring at Bright and pulling out his sharpie. Then he started signing the CD's and the magazines. "Oh, can I also get a picture?!?!?!" asked Bright while getting near Yavn and smiling while holding the camera up in front of them. Then Yavn looked at the camera, and the flash had gone off. "Ah! I have sensitive eye sight!" said Yavn. "Oh, I'm so sorry Yavn! Let me get you some eye-drops!" said Bright while looking in her make-up bag. Then she took off the top of the eye-drop container, and poured the whole thing on Yavn's face. "Hey!!!!" yelled Yavn. "Oh, I'm so sorry Yavn! Let me get a towel!" then Bright got a towel out of her bag, and wiped Yavn's face, dry. "Hey! This towel has make-up on it!" yelled Yavn. "Oh, my bad! Let me get you a sponge!" said Bright. "Forget it...!" said Yavn. "Say what, dog?" asked Bright. "Just get to your Submarine!!" yelled Yavn. "Yavn, you seem tense, you must be hungry! Let me get you a sandwich!" said Bright. "Bright, get over here, now!" said Ivan from the lower dock. Then Bright slid backing away from Yavn until phoenix and Ivan couldn't see her. "Where did she go?" asked phoenix. Then Bright slid next to Ivan. "There you are, you little monster!" said Ivan. "Now let's just get to the submarines." said phoenix. Then they took the side-wayed elevator to Submarine 22.

cool storry dude

omg i love your story its awesome could i be in the next chapter if u make another one
please? my vmk name is Acefunky_girl

OK, you'll be in it! I hope you like who I put you as :)

Chapter 7, Our Crew:

As the three friends approached to their submarine, they saw Harry.O, Speedsonic, and acefredfred in the submarine. "Hey! What are you doing in our submarine?" asked Bright. "Uh, this is our submarine too!" said Sppedsonic. Then Bright had a mad face and went to find her room. "Um, as you might see, Bright can be a little tense sometimes. But you'll get used to it." said Ivan. "Well, I'm sure she's really nice inside." replied acefredfred. Then they heard some loud Imao music coming from Bright's room. "Ah!!!! The end of the world is closer than you think!" shouted Harry.O. "Relax!!! It's just Bright's music!!!!! shouted the_phoenix. They all had to keep shouting, that way they can hear each other. Then they suddenly heard it lower down. "Yay! It's over! Thanks GOD!" said Ivan. Then Bright opened her door and looked around with a confused look on her face. "Who trned off my music?" she asked. "That was me!" said Acefunky_girl while holding up a remote, and walking out of one of the rooms. "Hi, I'm Acefunky_girl! But you can call me funky. I'll be controling the electricity in the rooms on our submarine." said funky. "And also, Ivan will be driving the submarine, Bright and Harry.O will be taking care of the engine, and acefredfred and phoenix will make the food in the kitchen in that room over there!" said funky. "Aww, I wanted to make the food." said Bright. "OK then, Bright and Harry.O, you both will switch jobs with acefredfred and the_phoenix." said funky. "Sounds good to me." said acefredfred. "Wait! I don't really know how to cook!" said Harry.O. "Well, I'll teach you!" said Bright with a smile on her face. "And I'm really good with engines, I helped my dad fix his boat and car engine when I was only 8." said the_phoenix. "Well that sounds good." said Ivan. "But wait! Speedsonic still doesn't have a job!" said Ivan. "Before we change the subject to me, isn't it dangerous to have electricity under-water?" asked Speedsonic. "Not on the VMK submarines. We are 85% sure that we will be safe with the electricity." said funky. "Well, at least it's not a 50% or lower." said phoenix. "So, is everyone ready?" asked funky. "Yeah!" said everyone. "Well then, here we go! ace and phoenix, go down to the engines to see if they are ok." said funky. "I'm ready to drive this sub!" said Ivan while putting his hand on the steering wheel. "It's really cool how you could put a steering wheel in a submarine! It's just like a car, only you can go up and down, and you are under-water!" said Ivan. "The engine is good, funky." said acefredfred while he and phoenix were walking up from the bottom of the ship. "Ivan, start the submarine! Let's go!" said funky. Then Ivan started the submarine, and it started to drive into the far ocean.

Chapter 8, Haunting acefredfred:

It was 9:00 at night, and everyone was asleep. The submarine was safely planted to some part in the ocean. Everyone but acefredfred was asleep. He was still reading his book. He read it really quietly and enjoyed it. But something interupted his interest. He heard a thud on the window in his room. He looked in front of him over his book, for a couple seconds. Then he looked at his window. As he got up, he set his book down on his bed, and went to the window. He removed the short curtain that covered the window, and looked outside. He looked outside and saw nothing but some nemenies, coral, and oddly, three fish playing guitars. He slowly covered the window with the curtain again, and went back to his reading. But then he heard another thud. He looked behind him and at the window. He slowly walked to the window and removed the curtain again. Still nothing. There was something strange going on. He ignored it and went back to his reading. And then again, he heard the thud. He put his opened book against his face and closed his eyes tightly, and then he jumped right out of his bed and to the window. He opened the curtains and saw something that shocked him! A strange looking creature was starring at him. He hadn't had said a word until he gasped. Then the creature opened up it's mouth and made a shout noise. ace had screamed and ran to his door. On his way to the door, he slipped on the rug on his floor. He was on the floor and looked at his closed door as another thing shocked him. He could hear someone outside of his door, and see their shadow through the little space under the door. Then he heard them hitting the door, and running away. "Who's There?!?!?!" he yelled. Then the drawers to his dresser were rattling and trying to open up. It sounded like if there were cats meowing in the drawers or something. "Help!!!!" he shouted. He quickly got up and tried to open his door. But the door wouldn't open up. He was trying to open it and unlock it, but it wouldn't work. He was scared and heard something outside of his room, but ignored it as he tried to escape his room. Then he saw a hammer next to the drawers in the room. He went and grabbed it quickly. As he picked it up, he smashed it against the door, and the door opened. He dropped the hammer, and looked at the doors to everyone's room. He randomly went to Harry.O and Speedsonic's room and pounded the door with his fists. "Harry! Speed! wake up!!!!" said acefredfred. Then Harry woke up and opened the door. As ace was still pounding his fists, he accidently socked Harry in the nose. "Ow!!!" shouted Harry. "Oaps." said ace. "What is going on?" asked Speedsonic while entering the scene. "There was something in my room!!!!" said acefredfred. "What do you mean?" asked sonic. "I'm serious! And there was even something outside of my door!" said ace. "And then there was a fish that screamed at me from outside of my window!" said ace. "Wait, what's that on your door?" asked Harry. He walked over the door and read the writing on it. "You guys, come here!" said Harry. Then sonic and ace went to see what was on the door. There was something written on the door, it read. 'Do not' "What do you think it means?" asked ace. "I don't know, but we should talk about it to the others in the morning." said Harry. Harry and sonic approached back to their room. "Wait!" said ace. "What?" asked sonic. "Where are you going?" asked ace. "To bed." said sonic. "Well, can I sleep in your guys' room for tonight?" asked ace.

Chapter 9, Haunting The Girls:

It was 10:00 at night. Everyone was asleep again, they way they were before. (Except for the fact that acefredfred is sleeping in Speedsonic and Harry.O's room) InBright and funky's room, there were two beds, one on each side of the room. As they were sleeping, Bright's bed was shaking. She woke up and the shaking stopped. She got up and looked around, still half asleep. She saw nothing, and went back to sleep. Then the shaking started again. She got up again, and looked around. Still nothing. She looked over at funky's bed and called out to her. "Funky." she said. "Funky?" she said again. Then she had a 35% mad look on her face. "FUNKY!!!!" she yelled. Then funky woke up in shock, and fell out of her bed. "Finally you wake up! Are you shaking my bed?" asked Bright. "No, what are you talking about?" asked funky. "Something was shaking my bed." said Bright. Then funky saw some kind of smoke under Bright's bed. "Bright..." said funky while looking at the smoke float into the air. Thenk funky got closer to the smoke. "What?" asked Bright. Funky ignored her and kept moving towards the smoke (Or, whatever it was.) As she looked at it, she was right there by the side of Bright's bed. "What!?" asked Bright. Then funky slowly moved her hands towards the skirt of the bed. Then she grabbed onto the skirt, and quickly lifted it and saw the smoke turn bigger and bigger. The smoke fromed into a floating ghost of a woman. "Ah!!!!" screamed funky and Bright as funky jumped onto Bright's bed. "Well, it looks like we have double today!" said the woman ghost. "Ah!!!!" screamed Bright and funky while running off the edge of the bed, and running to the door. Then the girls tried to unlock the door, but it wouldn't open. "Open it Bright! Hurry!" yelled funky while screaming. "I can't I need he- Ahh!!!!" screamed Bright while the ghost caught her. The drawer on the dresser opened up and water was flowing out. "Well, looky here! There's your ticket to death road!!!" said the ghost. Then the ghost carried Bright to the drawer, and dunked her head in. "Muahaha!" screamed the ghost. "Leave her alone!" screamed funky. Then funky ran to Bright, and pulled her out of the water filled drawer. Bright was coughing, and was wet all over her face. Then they were screaming again, and trying to open the door again. They heard someone outside of the door, and hitting it, then running. Then the ghost tried to take Bright again. "Ah!!!" shouted Bright. Then funky went and got a fire extinguisher and sprayed it all over the ghost. "Ah!!!" screamed the ghost while letting go of Bright. Then funky threw the fire extinguisher and tried to unlock the door. "Why won't it open?!?!?!?!" shouted Bright Then funky saw the sword that was hanging on the the desk and ran to get it. "Stand back!" yelled funky while pointing the sword at the door. Then she slid it through the lock. "Roar!!!!" screamed the ghost while jumping towards the girls. But then they opened the door and the ghost flew through the door way and smacked into a wall. "Whoah..." said funky. "Look!" said Bright while pointing at the back of the door. It had a writing on it that read, 'Disturb Us' Then Harry.O, Speedsonic, and acefredfred came out from their room. "What's going on?" asked Speedsonic. "There was a ghost in our room, and it attacked us! Well, actually it attacked Bright." said funky. "And it left something on our door!!" said Bright. Speedsonic, acefredfred and Harry.O looked at the door, and saw the writing. "Hey, earlier, something attacked acefredfred and left a writing on his door." said Harry.O. "It read, 'Do Not'." said acefredfred. "Well, if you put them together, it will read. 'Do Not Disturb Us'." said Bright. "But what does it mean?" asked acefredfred. "i don't know, but it's scaring me alot." said Speedsonic.

Great story!

About the love comment - Lets just say i get excited very easily. And i was wondering : Could you put Jack Dawson in here? xD

can i be in it

omg its like you know me!!!!! i love to read and i get scared easily!!!

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OK, I'll make it into a funny part!!!!!

acefredfred:

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Uh, no, but I do worship him :)

hah !! I laughed SO HARD when it said: EEK! yelled Ivan.............LOL!! GREAT STORY :. uhmm if its too much trouble don't worry about it but it would be COOLIO if i be in it ;) Meh VMK Name is Astropinkpanda :) cough* I'm a girl if ya can't tell by my icon :) THANKS !!

Sorry, it's a little too much trouble to fit you in the story.

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YEAH RIGHT!!!!!!

Lol I'll put you in it as soon as I write the next chapter :)

lol thx ivanbyte

Can I be in the story too? My vmk name is ZeenaZeena. But call me Zee or Zoo o_o

i love the story put me in it name GreenStitch

lalala waiting for next chapter.....

Chapter 10, Haunting Everyone:

It was 11:00 at night. As phoenix and Ivan were asleep in the room, the light in the room was flickering. Phoenix couldn't sleep well bc of the flickering light. As phoenix woke up, he was mad, and pushed his blankets off of him. He couldn't reach the light fromthe ground to turn it off, so he stood on Ivan's bed and stretched over to the light. As he was blowing air to the lightbulb to cool it off, Ivan woke up. "Yahoy!!!!" said Ivan with a shriek. "What are you doing on bed? You stepped on my leg!!!!!" said Ivan. "Sorry, I'm trying to take out the lightbulb." said phoenix. "Do it on your bed! I'm trying to sleep!" said Ivan. "My bed is too far from the light than it is from yours!!!" said phoenix while trying to pull out the bulb slowly. As he pulled out the bulb, the light stopped flickering. "Got it!!!" said phoenix with a smile. "Woo, hoo... now go to bed!!!" said Ivan. Then phoenix got off of Ivan's bed, and threw away the bulb. But as phoenix turned to look at his bed, something caught his eye. There was a form of a person lying under the blankets of his bed, staying stiff. He was scared and threatened. "Ivan...!!!" he said quietly. "What?!?!?!" asked Ivan. "Look at my bed...!!!" said phoenix. As Ivan looked over at phoenix's bed, the same thing caught his eye. Phoenix jumped onto Ivan's bed and sat down while looking at the figure. "Go see what it is!" said phoenix. "What?!?! No!!! It's your bed!!" said Ivan. Then they both walked up slowly, and went toward the figure. As they crept closer and closer, and closer, they were walking toawrds it. Then Ivan slowly reached his hand out to the sheet over the figure. Then he slowly grabbed it... and as he pulled open the sheet. A person with their eyes closed, woke up, and right away stood up looking at the two friends. "AH!!!!!!!!" screamed the two friends. The figure smiled evily, with black shadows around it's eyes and small puipils. Then it got a hammer from one end of the room, and tried to hit Ivan and phoenix with it. "Ah!" they shouted while trying to avoid the hammer. As they tried to open the door, they could hear someone outside the door, locking it and then hitting it, then walking away. As phoenix tried to open it up, nothing would happen. Then Ivan looked around for something to open it with. "Watch out!!!" shouted Ivan while pushing phoenix out of the way of the person trying to hit him with the hammer. The person opened it's mouth with an evil face and had the scream as if a jack-hammer were pounding into a building wall. "That is a scary sound!!!!" said Ivan. The person took Ivan and was about to knock him out. "No!!!" shouted phoenix while pushing the person. Then Ivan got up, and ran to the door. "Stand back!!!" shouted phoenix. Then phoenix got the person, and used him as a door ram to open the door. The door opened, and they all flew out. As they were all hurt on the ground, everyone came out of their rooms and looked and phoenix and Ivan. "What is going on out here?" asked funky. "There was a thing in our room that was trying to attack us!!!" shouted phoenix and Ivan at the same time. "Uh, what thing?" asked Harry.O. "Well he's right h- @_@ where did he go???" asked Ivan. Then the thing was gone outta sight. But the thing was behind Bright and took her. "Ah!!!!!" shouted Bright. "Get her!!!" shouted acefredfred. They all went to go get Bright from the thing. Then the cabinets under the sink opened, and the woman ghost that attacked funky and Bright had slid out. And then the fish that scared acefredfred outside of his room, had climbed out from the bottom stairs. And a bunch of ghost creatures were entering the scene out of places in the submarine. "We're gonna get it!!!" shouted phoenix. "Phoenix!!! Toss me that telephone!!!!" shouted Ivan. Then phoenix ran to the telephone, but the ghost fish had guarded it. "Hssssss!!!!!!" slithered the fish. Then phoenix picked up the fish, and threw it against a book shelf. Phoenix grabbed the phone, and threw it to Ivan. "I'll be right back!!!!" shouted Ivan. Then the ghosts were attacking everyone. As Ivan carried the phone, he slid into the closet and locked it. He was trying to dial 0-0-0-1 as fast as he could. After he dialed it, he held the phone to his ear. "Come on!! Pick Up! Fast!!!" said Ivan. Meanwhile in The Emergency Submarine, Astropinkpanda, and ZeenaZeena were asleep on their desk. The phone rang loud and woke Zeena and panda up at the same time. They woke up screaming, and shouting. Their screams got smaller and smaller. They both looked at the phone. "Like, OH My Gosh!!!! It's Just A Phone Call!!!! How Fabulous Is This?!?!?!" said panda. "Oh my gosh, Like, The Best!!!!" said ZeenaZeena. "Answer for me, will ya?" asked Zeena. "Uh, hello? Like, the phone is way over there on your side! You answer it!!!" said panda. "Excuse me? We're on the same bench chair!!!! You're right next to me!!!!! Answer it, NOW!!!!!" shouted Zeena. "Ugh!!! Story of, Our Life!!!!" said panda. Then they both started cat fighting, and avoiding each-other's hits. "Would you both stop??!!??!! I'll Answer It!!!!" said GreenStitch while walking into the room with papers in his hands. "Hello? you Have Reached The Emergency VMK Submarine! How May I Help You?" asked Green to Ivan on the phone. "Help Us!!! We're In Submarine 22!!!! You Gotta Send Help Right Away!!!!!!" shouted Ivan on the phone. "Like, OMG!!!!!" said Zeena. "I know!!!! Who would have thought that we would get a caller at 11:13 at night?!?!?!?" said panda. "Ugh!!! I was talking about how totally awesome I look in these shoes, dimwit!!!!" said Zeena. "Well, For Your Airheaded Information, that is the most unfabulous pair of shoes that I have ever seen on you, my whole life!!!!" said panda. "Uh, we've only known each other for like, seven totally hours!!!" said Zeena. Then they started another cat fight. "What seems, to be the problem?" asked Green to Ivan on the phone. "We're being haunted by ghosts, and they're trying to take us!!!" shouted Ivan on the phone. "We'll send help right away!!!" said Green. As green hung up the phone, he broke up panda and Zeena's fight. "Girls, we've got to get to submarine 22!!!" shouted Green. Meanwhile at Ivan and the gangs' submarine, Ivan was still in the closet and hung up the phone. "Oh God, please be here, quick!!!!" said Ivan. Then he opened the door to the closet to the mayhem in the submarine.

Noooo I'm a girly giiiirrl @_@ At least I help ppls

yay i'm the super smart one!!

Dream epcotfans .-. do you know pinkmaha in vmk? and thats a good story....

i think so! call me epcot

Chapter 11, Too Late:

As chaos was running throughout the submarine with the ghosts and everyone fighting, IVan was waiting for the help to arrive. But meanwhile, he had to find a way to defend himself. "Oh Gosh, What is here that I can use??!!??!!" asked Ivan to himself. Then one of the ghosts tried to jump on him. "Whoah!!!" he shouted. But then phoenix and the fish that he was fighting ran into the ghost that tried to jump on Ivan. "Oh man!!!! My Hair, It's Ruined!!!!" yelled Bright while looking in the mirror and smashing one of the gohsts with a plate. Ivan was running around trying to avoid everything, and he tried to find something to protect himself. Then he saw that SpeedSonic's suitcase was opened up and everything was falling out. Ivan decided to find something from there. As he ran to the suitcase, he tripped over acefredfred and the woman ghost that he was tackling. "EEEPP!!!" shouted Ivan while falling to the ground. "Sorry!!!!" said acefredfred while pinching the ghost ladie's nose and pulling on it. Then Ivan crawled over to the suitcase. But then the ghost man that haunted him and phoenix threw an axe into Ivan's path. Then Ivan took the axe, flipped over the the wooden end, pushed the man into the garbage disposal with the axe handle, and pressed the red button. "That's one ghost down!!!!" shouted Harry.O, while dodging the hits of one of the fish creatures. As Ivan was looking into SpeedSonic's suitcase, he found a whole jug of Holy Water. "Yes!!!" shouted Ivan. He got the jug, and opened it. "Hey!!! Put My Watter Down!!!!" said SpeedSonic. Then Ivan had thrown the water on each of the ghosts, with not a single drop left. "Srrraaaaeeee!!!!" screamed all of the ghosts while letting go of everything they had, and melting. Before each of the monster were fully melted, they froze, and exploded into dust. "Yes!!! I Knew That Could Save Us!!!!!" shouted Ivan while putting the water jug on a desk. Then, Green, panda, and Zeena were each in protcetion suits and running up from below the submarine and holding VMK Guns. "Hey!!!! Why couldn't I be mentioned before panda in this story when we were coming up!?!?!?!?!" shouted Zeena. "Uh, like, who cares!?!?!?!" shouted panda. "I, don't, like you!!!" shouted Zeena while pointing her VMK Gun at panda. Then she shot the gun, but all that came out was a simple VMK Trading Card. "Ah!!! How Threatening, The Card Burns!!!!! Will This Be The End Of Poor Panda?!?!?! I'm mmmmeeelllttttiiinnnnggggg..........." shouted panda while dropping her gun, and everyone just looking at her. "Get Up You Fool! It's Just A Safe VMK Trading Card!" said Green. Then Panda froze, and moving nothing but her eyes looking around. Then she slowly moved back into position and picked up her gun. "Sorry." said panda. "OK, We're Here!!!! Now, Where's The Trouble?!?!?!" asked Green while he and the girls were getting ready to attack. "It's too late. The ghosts are gone." said funky with her arms crossed and looking at the ground with a small worried face. Then Green, panda, and Zeena each dropped their jaws, and put their guns down. "We were being attacked by ghosts." said phoenix. Then Green and the girls looked at the gang with a shocked look, and burst out laughing. "Blahahaha!!!!!" shouted Green, panda, and Zeena while getting laugh attack. "What? It's not funny!" said Harry.O. Then Zeena kinda stopped laughing a little while the other two were still cracking up. "You really think we would come all the way over here just for ghosts?!?!?!" said Zeena while continuing to laugh after. "Wait a minute, how did you guys get here?" asked acefredfred. Then the emergency crew stopped laughing. "Uh, to be honest, I really don't know. But all I remember is that it was Zeena's idea." said Green. "Why does it always have to be my fault?!?!?!?!" shouted Zeena while begining to sob. "Bc you are a bad person, and you are the cause of everything bad that happens on this earth!!!!!" said panda. Then Zeena, looked at panda, and started another cat fight. "Hey guys, come here!!!" said Ivan, while looking at the back of the door. Then everyone except for Zeena and panda (Bc They Were In A Cat Fight) walked over to Ivan to see what he found. Then as everyone looked at the back of the door, they saw writing that read: As We Rest;.

Next chapters will be coming soon! :)

Can I be in the next chapter or 2?

Can I be in the next chapter or 2?

Sure!!!! I have a great spot for you!!!!

I hope you guys are enjoying my story. But just to remind you, my other story called The Hours of Change is really good too. You should all read it! :) It's about BrightMoonLight the fairy and IvanIsBack the boy who travel through all Disney Channel movies and change everything in them. For example: In High School Musical, they push Gabriella off the stage when she and Troy are singing; it's kinda like an epic movie except it's not a movie. If you wish to read it, you can see it by clicking there:sign0198:http://http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=133036&highlight=Ivan!!!!

Who likes mah girliness in the story? >_< I liked the part of meh shooting a VMK trading card.. I would have used it by now o_o

why did i bust out luaghing! lol it's a rocking chapter

Chapter 12, Mystery:

"What do these signs mean?" asked Bright. "Idk, but I think the ghosts are trying to tell us something." replied SpeedSonic. "Wait a minute! Maybe all of the messages add up to something." said acefredfred. "Hmm... like what?" asked Bright. "Maybe they go together and form a sentence in some certain order!" replied acefredfred. "Well... if we start from the last message to the first, it will add to: Rest We As Us Disturb Not Do;" said acefunkygirl. "Hmm, doesn't sound too good." said the_phoenix. Then as panda and Zeena were still having their cat fight, they bumbped into phoenix and they all fell. "Yikes!" shouted phoenix. Everyone stayed silent and just looked at the girls only. "Get out of here!!! All three of you!!!" said Ivan. Then the girls got up leaving phoenix on the ground, and panda, Zeena, and Green all left. Then Harry.O helped phoenix get up. "Anyways... maybe we can start the message from the beginning...." said Ivan as his face grew a smile. "It might fit, it will read: Do Not Disturb Us As We Rest;" Then everyone was putting their minds on how the messages fell into place. "It fits perfectly! But how did we disturb the ghost? Or how are we?" asked Harry.O. "I don't know how we are disturbing them!" said phoenix. "You guys, come on! Think about it. Very many years ago, the Titanic sank. It took very many lives along with it. And only 700 out of 2200 were rescued. The rest of the 1500 had perished. And the ghosts that are haunting us are the ghosts of the souls who were left on that Ship! It is their home, and we are disturbing them as they REST in peace." said Ivan. "Wow, you're right Ivan!" said phoenix. "But shouldn't they be going after Yavn's submarine? He's the one who started the disturbance!" "But still! We are part of the whole group!" replied SpeedSonic. "I just hope we are ok throughout the trip." said funky. "You ppl need to stop panicking! We are only here to see what the Titanic is like!" said Bright. "I don't feel safe about this at all. How do we know that the ghosts haven't attacked any of the other submarines? How do we know that they're not safe either?!?!" asked Harry.O. "PEOPLE!!!!! WE'RE UNDERWATER!!!! HOW BADLY CAN WE BE HURT BY GHOSTS? THERE IS NO FIRE OR GAS OR POISON OUT HERE!!!!!!" shouted acefredfred. "Look, we just have to be aware of anything else that happens!!!" said Ivan. "How is that gonna help?" asked SpeedSonic. "Perhaps I could be of assistance!" shouted sethjr, while jumping out from a pipe. "AH!!!!" screamed everybody while running and pnicking and falling over each-other. "OMG! It's the guy from the airplane!! How did you get here?!?!?!" shouted Ivan. "Your doors weren't locked!" said sethjr. Suddenly everyone was silent. "I also found this person while I was swimming over here from my submarine!" said seth, while holding up Jack Dawson in front of everyone. Then everyone gasped with terror. "OMG!!! IT'S INFESTED WITH BACTERIA AND CRITICAL DISEASES!!!!" screamed Ivan. Then he got Jack, and dragged him into the garbage disposal, and pressed the red button. Then Ivan went and got some Lysol, and scrubbed the floor with it. Then he went and took a shower really fast, and came back out. Throughout the whole time, everyone was silent and just looking at Ivan clean the floor, and looking at the closed door in the bathroom. "OK!! Anyways..." said Ivan while coming out of the bathroom, freshly clean. "seth, I'm gonna have to ask you to leave." said Ivan. "But, why?" asked seth. "You dragged that person into our submarine!!!!" shouted Ivan. "It wasn't a person! It was Jack Dawson!" said seth. "And we were having so much fun here in the submarine." "What fun!?!? there was no fun! We didn't even invite you!" said Ivan. "Well, I'm not leaving!" said seth.

..Do I still get to be in the story even though I was made to leave? 0_o

OMG this is like COOL and i love the part that ivan screams LOL can i be in the story my name is Vienna and im just a evil person. PLZ can i be in it!!

Good story. A little innapropiate though...

Chapter 13, Titanic Arrival:

"That's it! I'm gonna call Zeena and her crew to come over here and get you out of this submarine!" said Ivan to seth. "I'm actually here to help you!" said seth. "Did someone say help?!?!?!" asked Zeena, panda and Green while coming into the submarine again. "What is with everyone coming into this submarine?!?!?!" shouted phoenix. "Well, you guys said help so we came!" said Green. "OK look, Zeena, panda, Green and seth have to leave. "What? Why?" asked panda. "We didn't really want help! It was seth who said it!" said Bright. "OK then! seth, what do you need help with?" asked Zeena. "My homework!" said seth. "Fooey!" said panda while coming in and ripping up seth's homework. "Ugh! I was like, gonna help him with that!" said Zeena. "Well, your help isn't worth any length of time!" said panda. "Ugh! Cat fight!" said Zeena. Then panda and Zeena got in another cat fight. "OK, look. Next time we need help, we'll call you on the emergency phone." said Harry.O. "Got it!" said Green while puuling the girls along with him to their submarine. "Get your diving suits on girls!" said Green to panda and Zeena. But panda and Zeena were too concentrated on their cat fight. "Seth, plz leave!" said Speed. "Can I at least help you while I'm here?" asked seth. "OK, fine then!" said funky. "Yay! OK, I might know a way to lose the trail of ghosts." said seth. "Really? How?!?!" asked acefredfred. "Scaredy cat. 6_6" said phoenix. "@_@ OH, SURE!!!! And like your the tough guy who's not scared of anything, I'd like to see you try to multiply how many ghosts can sca-" then acefredfred got interrupted by phoenix's monster mask. "AH!!!" screamed acefredfred. "Seth, tell us hwo you are gonna help us!" said Ivan. But everything stayed silent. "@_@ uh... seth?" asked Ivan. Everyone was silent. Then Ivan noticed that seth was gone. "I worry about that guy sometimes." said Ivan. "OMG! You guys, look!" said Bright while looking through the giant window in the front of the submarine. Then everyone crowded around. Everyone saw a really small ship from far, far, far far away. "It's the Titanic!" said everyone at the same time. Then the speaker on the ceiling of the sub had turned on. "Attention Everyone, It's Yavn Here! Sorry To Wake You All Up, But Just A Reminder: VMK Will Approach The Titanic By Tomorrow Morning. That Is All!" said the speaker. Then the speaker turned off. "Wow! Tomorrow morning!" said Bright. "Well, we better get to bed before we get heart attacks for not sleeping enough. Said acefredfred whie walking to the room. "Fred is right, we should get some sleep!" said Ivan. "Wait! What about the evil signs? Aren't we gonna try to find something out about that?" asked Bright. "We can deal with it tomorrow when we wake up!" said Ivan. "Meanwhile, Bright, help me wash the paint or whatever it is off!" said Ivan. "WHAT?!?!?! Why me?" asked Bright. "Well you're the one who reminded me about the signs in the first place!" said Ivan. "Fine...." said Bright. Then Ivan and Bright got Windex and cleaned off the writing on the doors and the window. Then they were finished, so they put their stuff away and went to bed. "Good Night!" said phoenix and Ivan. "Oh, and btw, tomorrow morning, THOSE PANCAKES ARE MINE!!!!!" said Speed before approaching his room. Then everyone closed their doors and went to sleep.

Chapter 14, Help From Sethjr:

The next morning, everyone woke up at the same time. Then they each got out of bed and went to the kitchen in the submarine. "What's for breakfast?" asked Bright while rubbing her eyes. "My Pancakes!" yelled Speed while grabbing a plate full of pancakes. Then he started shoving them down his throat and attacked them. "Uh.. Speed?" asked acefredfred while walking to Speed. "Maybe you could... share?" asked acefredfred. Then Speed opened his mouth wide and he grew sharp teeth with green eyes. "EEEEPPPP!!!!" yelled acefredfred. "Don't worry peeps, I'll whip us up some eggs with bacon in it." said Bright. "I'm down for that!" said Ivan. Then Bright got a frying pan out and a bowl and started making the eggs and frying the bacon. Everyone just sat down at the table. "Bright, you better hurry, because we're starving." said Ivan. "They're ready!" replied Bright. "Well it's about time!" said Ivan. Then Bright handed a plate of eggs with bacon to each person including herself. "Speed, are you sure you don't want any?" asked Bright. "My Pancake Brings All the Girls To The Yard!" said Speed while dancing and still eating his pancakes. "OK..." said Bright. Then everyone ate their eggs really fast and washed it down with orange juice. "Wow, slow down! I don't want you all barfing up the food that I made!" said Bright. Then everyone finished. "Well, that's the last time I make eggs like that!" said Bright. Then Harry.O burped. "Excuse muah!" said Harry.O. Then everyone stayed silent as they heard water running. "What's that noise?" asked Bright. "I'll go check." said funky. As funky went to go check on the noise, she stopped right when she saw a crack in the big window, leading water into the submarine. Funky gasped in terror. "Omg! Everyone, quick! We need to leave the submarine!" said Funky. "Why?" asked Ivan. "This submarine is about to sink in thirty minutes!!!!" said Funky. "OMG!" yelled Harry.O. Then sethjr came in the sub and carried a bunch of diving suits. "I Can Help!" said seth. "Everyone put these on!" said seth. "They'll help you all get to the surface!!!!" then everyone put on their diving suits. "Quick! Follow Me!" said seth. "Thx seth!" said acefredfred. Then seth had put on his diving suit and got prepared. "Everyone! Get What You Need The Most And Put It In This treasure-chest. Then he held up a treasure-chest and opened it. Everyone went to their rooms and got their most valuable needs. They filled the chest with all kinds of stuff. "It's kinda full! Let me get another one!" said seth. Then he went to the engine room and got another treasure-chest. "Two chests are too much weight on one person if they need to swim on the surface! So funky will carry the second chest!" said seth. "Got It!" said Ivan. "Don't forget to put my special recipe book in there!" said phoenix. The two chests were full. "OK! Let's leave!" said seth. Then he lead everyone to the enginge room. "Go! Go! Go!" said seth. Then everyone ran down to the engine room. Seth was last and he closed the door and sealed it shut. "There's an escape panel over there!" said seth. "Bright! You and Speed open it!" said seth. Then Bright and Speed opene up the safe panel. "First person! Go!" said seth. Then Harry.O went out first. Then funky, Ivan, acefredfred, Bright, Speed, phoenix and last was seth. The submarine was tilting to the very bellow of the under-water. As Ivan got out, he stopped and something caught his eye. He saw the giant Titanic under-water. It was so big that Ivan was scared to get near it. The sign on the side that said Titanic was half-way gone. Then Ivan imagined how it would be if it were still on water. He imagined alot of people on it and he imagined it all freshly painted and beautiful. Then his fantasy faded after he saw how much it was destroyed. He felt sorry foor the poor ship and all of the people that died on it. "Ivan! Hurry Up!" said Bright. Then Ivan turned and followed seth up to the surface. Everyone looked back and saw their submarine hitting the bottom of the ocean. Everyone tried to pass everyone elses' submarine. "We're almost there!" said seth. Then the eight people had arrived to the surface.

LOL what a suprise i argued with the_Phoenix like always :P

Only 6 more chapters ya'll!

aww why? why dont you make it all the submarines sink and we have to save ourself?

Lol I already have planed what is gonna happen! And you spoiled it! The submarines do sink! >_< FRED.... Lol

rotfl.. I am like super hero dude :)

Chapter 15, Stranded:

"Whoah! That was some stuff back there!" said Bright as the peoples peoples peeps arrived to the surface. "It sure was! I told you I could help!" said seth. "Thanks for saving us seth!" said Ivan. "Wait! Where's the_phoenix and acefunkygirl?!?!" asked Harry.O. "They're right there Harry -.-" said Bright. "Uh... no they're not!" said fred. Then Bright and Ivan looked at the spot where funky and phoenix would have been and they weren't there. "AH!!!!" screamed Bright and Ivan. "Calm down! I'm sure they're ok!" said seth. "I hope they are!" said Ivan. "Great! Now I'm stuck with a group of guys!" said Bright. "Don't worry! We'll find them! But we just need to find a surface first!" said seth. "Well, that's impossible! We're stranded like, about 30,000 or even more miles away from shore! We'll never make it out of the water alive! We're goners out here!" said fred. "Come on! Let's think of the positive! Maybe some kind of luck will fall out of the sky right now!" said Speed. Then all six of them heard something falling and looked up. Then they saw a picnic table, three tents, and food with supplies falling from the sky. "OMG!" yelled Speed. Then the items fell through the water and went all the way down. "Great! Speed was right, but one of us must have jinxed it!" said seth. "Umm, if I said that I was the one who imagined us to all go out here, would you guys let me be first?" asked fred. "@_@ It was you, wasn't it?" asked Ivan. "I'M SO SORRY!!!! HERE, I'LL USE THAT TENT TO SUFOCATE MYSELF AND DO YOU ALL A FAVOR!!!!!" yelled fred. "NO!!!!" yelled everyone while taking the tent away from fred. "Look, everyone just stop losing your cool! We need to think ossitive and at least possibly swim to shore." said seth. "How are we gonna swim dozens of miles to the nearest island? Oh wait, scratch that, there ARE NO NEAR ISLANDS AROUND HERE AT ALL!" shouted Bright. "We better get somewhere soon, bc I'm getting cold out here!" said Harry. "OK, look! We'll try to look for some other ships and boats or even islands out there and try to do our best to get to it! We can at least try to go under-water and look for the food that fell from the sk- OMG!!!! LOOK!!!" said seth while pointing to an island in the middle of the ocean. "Wow! An Island!" SETH!!! YOU SAVED US AGAIN!!!!!" screamed Harry. Then everyone started hugging seth and thanking him. "Hey! Get Away! I don't like the love of people who dislike happiness in bad situations!" said seth. "Whatever!" said Bright. Then the six people swam a mile over to the island.

Chapter 14, Abandoned Island:

As the six friends approached the island, they had tried to dry themselves off and find somewhere to live for the next, well... Idk. Probably days, weeks, months, years? "Gross! There's A Crab On My Leg!" said Bright. "Just pick it up and throw it." said Speed. "Uh... HELLO?!?! What if it bites her?!?!?!" asked Harry.O. "It's OK, I got it off for her." said Ivan. "You see?" asked Ivan while holding it up to fred's face. "AHH!!!!!" screamed fred while throwing dirt at Ivan. "HEY! STOP!" said Ivan while letting go of the crab as it walked away into the water. "Psht, humans..." said the crab as it walked into the water. "OK!!!! OK, STOP!!!!!" said Ivan while putting down fred's arm. "Look, I don't know about you guys, but we've got to find somewhere safe!" said seth. "Well, there's an island right in front of us with nowhere to go." said fred. "How about we choose to walk into the path next to the sign that says 'Somewhere Where You Can Live' and see where it leads to?" asked Bright. "Well... I don't know, the sign next to it that says 'Walk In Here If You'd Rather Not Live Instead Of Being Stranded' seems pretty attracting..." said Fred. "Oh Come On! Like If We'd Rather Not Live!" said Speed. "You know what? I don't undertsnad how you guys can keep up with this! We're on an abandoned island and you guys really think we can still live? I'M GOING TO THE NEGATAVE PATH! IT WAS NICE KNOWING YOU ALL!" said seth. "NO!!!!!" shouted everyone while pulling seth. "OK, you know what? I'm gonna start my own little island home right here!" said Ivan. As everyone argued, they had disagreed in everyone's ways and had started yelling at each other with anger. But then something interrupted them, a walking creature had come out of the water with mud covering it all over. As the creature slowly walked over to the friends, Ivan was the only one who noticed it. "Uh... guys?" asked Ivan while looking at the creature as the others ignored him and kept arguing. "You guys, we haVE COMPANY!!!!!" yelled Ivan. As everyone looked at the monster, fred had screamed loud and got a hard tree branch and walked over to the monster. "LEAVE US ALONE!!!!!" shouted fred while hitting the monster with the branch. "OW! HEY!" said the monster. "Don't Disagree With Me! I Am Fred!" shouted fred. "FRED! Calm down! It's Me!" said the_phoenix while wiping all of the mud off of him. "Oh! Sorry!" said fred as he was embarassed and tried to hide the branch behind his back. "What happened to you phoenix? I thought you were gone!" said Bright. "I survived! But now I'm hurt thanks to fred!" said phoenix. "Well, we're just stranded here!" shouted Harry.O. "Hey, how about we go to that path over there that says 'Somewhere Where You Can Live' and see where it leads to?" asked phoenix. "Hey! Good Idea!" said Speed. Everyone agreed with phoenix and started walking into the path. "Huh? But..." said Bright in a confused way. "But, I was....... never mind." said Bright while following the others.