Charmed
By Tmkttt

Verse

When I was a little girl,
I always watched and read stories like Cinderella,
And always dreamed of finding,
My prince charming...

Chorus
We all want a fairytale ending,
We all want a perfect match,
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna beeee....
Chaaaarmed...

Verse

Now that I'm older,
I know that it isn't the easiest thing,
To find your perfect match.
You'll find him when you least expect it...


Chorus:

We all want a fairytale ending,
We all want a perfect match,
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna beeee....
Chaaaarmed...


We all want a fairytale ending,
We all want a perfect match,
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna be...
Charmed!
Charmed!
We all wanna beeee....
Chaaaarmed...

Please comment!
Thanks,
~Tmkttt♥
XOXO

I sang it and it sounded good. I think it's one of those songs where it depends on how you sing it.

In this case, I would think it would be in the tune to like R-E-S-P-E-C-T, that 80's song, only because you have to sing that song with power.

But, it was good, it was a tad like, "I Don't Want To Be Like Cinderella", but it was a good concept, no less.

I can't sing this aloud, it's too difficult for me. I don't understand how it fits together. =/
Sorry

Well, in the beginning verse it's really slow,
The chrous it gets fast, it's like:
We all wanna be:
CHARMED!
CHARMED!
And then the next verse gets slow,
Same thing with the chrous,
Then at the end,
it's really slow.

Ah good, I sang it right. Sounded good when I sang it. Nicely done.

I think it's good but here is what I think:

I needs more flow
Longer verses in between chorus
Change the chorus up a bit
Needs a bidge between thrid and last chorus (Bridge is a more tension building part than the other verses)

Hoped that helped!

It's okay.

I liked;
-- The theme, stuck with the same theme instead of covering abajillion topics at once.
-- Rythmn

Needs work;
-- It's very repetitive and not really deep, it needs to be more indepth, and longer.
-- It's not very original, and I think there's many other songs saying the same thing.
-- More verses.

!Bluejalepeno

i think it was OK considering it reminds me of that song cinderella and how the lyrics were kinda close to it
like dude said
make a bridge

I thought that was a good song!!
But I thought it could use a Bridge... But the rest is AWESOME
=]]

I sang it too. Rofl. ;]

The lyrics are good, but if you sang it to yourself [depending how and to what tune/beat/rhythm and stuff] you may wanna change some words to make it flow more. Great job. ^_^

~ Sparky ~

i think it was OK considering it reminds me of that song cinderella and how the lyrics were kinda close to it
like dude said
make a bridge

Except the girl in the song wants to be like Cinderella, kinda like all the pre-teens that want to be just like Hannah Montannah.