my old thread got deleted cause it wasn't G-rated so im making this 1 and no its not a rip of of hokage_summers vmk high alright i even asked if i could do this ill post chapter 1 soon

id mind. :P

~ah haven school is back in the runs and what school year it will be~ *a school bus had just aproached a house and an alarm clock had gone off* saw:oh no my alarm didn't go off right, ice! we gotta go now! ice:aww alright! *ice and saw had just caught the bus and sat down in the back* random kid:hey have your wings grown out yet? random kid2:no there still little tiny 1s my mom says they're cute. *the bus hit the school campus* saw:ice wake up were here *all the new kids had gotten off the bus and gone to the cafeatorium* principal:welcome new students of haven middle school, as you know this is a school for angels of the ages of 10-17 and i want you to know that you are the new 1s for us the new bread of angels. At any rate we expect you to be as good as your uper classmen, speasking of which i want you to meet 1 of the guids for around the school you will get. *a boy with black hair and black wings had steped foward* dragon:thank you princpal, i want you to know im not that far from any of you but i jumped to the 5th year class because of my grades now we will take you though out the campus and to the nurse for physicals and wing spans for the school uniforms. *crowd mones* dragon:dont worry the 7th year picks the outfit and plus they can change once you earn this amulet *holds up a blue 1* once you go thought years you get different colors i own a red 1. principal: now we will pair you with a guide and he or she will take you around. *in dragons group was saw ice summer brave and beta* dragon:brave did you fail last year? brave:uh huh so what? dragon:nvm alright lets go let out you wings *all of there wings were small except dragons*dragon:never mind well be walking i dont want to out run you guys. ~end of chapter 1 next exploring the school~

great now im small..

id really mind at least im not THAT old. :P

summer you 10 lol its not like i made you 4

o_o ok... i guess.

chapter 2s going to be up soon i wish more then just my friends commented come on people i need support

=O

Nice story.

~lol here comes the tour and a few other charectors and more of the plot~
*the groups had walked out of the cafeatorium and walked to random locations* dragon:this is the wall of shame! *groups goes uuuuhhhh.. and aww... dragon made an O_o face* dragon:alright lets go to the gym.. *at the gym entrence* dragon:and now as you can see.. *he gets tackled by a random person* ??:hey dragon what you doing here? dragon:hope i thought i told you not to do that anymore.. oh group this is my little sister hope. hope:hey your only older by a year. dragon:and im in 3 grades over you hey has tinks group came though yet? hope:why? you got a crush on her? *dragon gives her a noggie* no okay.. hope:ow.. stop that hurts! *he stops and a figure appears behind him* ??:dragon.. what are yo doing to hope? dragon:eh..nothing tink its just she was being annoying.. ~tink was a black haired tall girl who got along with dragon often~ *there groups had walked to a 1st year hall way* dragon:listen tink i got to tell my group about the thing well at least the girls brave beta you stay here. both:mmk i hate being with those girls anyway. *dragon took the three girls into a corner and sat down with them* dragon:girls there is something i have to tell you, each 1 of you may be an agel of leagend. the angel of balance between dark and light is 1 of you.. *his wings had gone out* Dragon again: there are 4 of the angels of leagend i am the darkness angel and tink is the angel of light, one of you is the angel of balance.. ice:do you need to tell us this? dragon:yes now quiet down and listen 1 of you is the angel of balance and then after to years we will see who is the angel of nothingness. *all the girls were speachless except summer* summer:i knew there was something weird about me and i mean it in a good way *saw and ice had laughed they were twins so they wouldn't mind 1 of them being it* dragon:well the point is who ever it is will have to learn they're powers, ice:powers? dragon:watch *his cloak had turened into a shadow and it was now covering over him it crinched twords the girls* dragon:ill state your not a threat or else these will attack. *the cloak backs off and the girls sighed* ice:so show us a power *a black fog had appeared around his hands and a beam of energy hit the wall in the form of a hand* ice and saw:cool.. summer:anytrhing else *his body was engulfed in flames when they passed he disappeared* summer:omg where'd he go? ice:look weird how he just disappead. *he appeared behind saw and poked her on the shoulder with the fog after this they rejoined the group and went thought out the school* dragon:well there is 1 thing i forgot to say at the gym we will have fencing which is like sword fighting for sport. all:cool tink:lol its not that fun it actually is hard dragon:i think its cause they get to use wepons right? ~end of chapter 2 lol pretty long for me to write oh well its a good story so far~

i better own in the near future chapters dragon!!

ill make part 2 more about you..

LOL

Summer and I could pwn people! :P

( Why are me and Ice twins? Not saying that as a bad thing or anything... * whistles * )

wierd wired wierd i siad that a lont of times cause thias doesnt allow the things to be to shotr

wat the hedge is haven sckewl hyuh? lost

alright beatiful_lily haven is another word for heaven so put 2 and 2 togather its a school in heaven, queen this is not weird its from my mind when i got bored also cause my old story got deleted T_T i had 35 posts in it.. oh well guess this and song will have to jump up
oh saw i forgot to tell you, cause you to are the same age and your sisters takes 9months to you know and well theres only 12months in a year

Ok?..

Why did you make us twins though? LOL

LOL

Summer and I could pwn people! :P

( Why are me and Ice twins? Not saying that as a bad thing or anything... * whistles * )

HEY U BUTT! >.< Ah, whateva..

Dude, why can ICE pwn ppl!? I mean, IM the totally awesome dragon shape shifter!! *hits Dragon in the face with pink hand bag, snaps, and walks away*

alright beatiful_lily haven is another word for heaven so put 2 and 2 togather its a school in heaven, queen this is not weird its from my mind when i got bored also cause my old story got deleted T_T i had 35 posts in it.. oh well guess this and song will have to jump up
oh saw i forgot to tell you, cause you to are the same age and your sisters takes 9months to you know and well theres only 12months in a year

Aghem! I have to protest about this! Im Saw's younger sister and Summer is our older sister O_o And we're all in the age range, so i dont get it... In VMK/stories were supposed to be 14,15, and 16 or somethin'.. But along with our brothers in the picture.. Nvm, this conver. is going nowhere o.o

* cough * Correction;

LOL

Ice, Summer, and I could pwn people! :P

( Me and Ice are awesome twins! :D Now to practice my whistling... * whistles * )

Aghem! I have to protest about this! Im Saw's younger sister and Summer is our older sister O_o And we're all in the age range, so i dont get it... In VMK/stories were supposed to be 14,15, and 16 or somethin'.. But along with our brothers in the picture.. Nvm, this conver. is going nowhere o.o

Actually, Ice, remember.

In the VMK thing you're 14, I'm 16, and Summer is 18... WO I REMEMBER LOL

This story is... interesting, give me more of the story please!!

Zomg im an angel, yipee!! :D

@_@ gawd do people only post when im grounded or do i have to just not post for 8 days

Write MMMMMOOOOORRRRREEEEE!!!!!.... pretty please! :D

~don't know why im doing this bored and i dont wanna go out to the movies.. im not a no life loser people im just bored, alright chapter 3 is actually the first week lol~*in the 5th year art class we find dragon and tink dragon had been listening to his iPod* tink:dragon look what i drew *it was a snowy feild with an angel with black wings and overcoat on standing in the middle* dragon:hey pretty good heres mine *the best 1 he had done by far it was a picture of the goddest angel with the heavens shining in its prime, the goddest's rainbow wings were out and the sun and moon had combined tinks eyes shined* tink:omg dragon thats great how did you draw that? dragon:hey i can draw but i think its cause i focus best with music. *in the first year class it was gym* summer:aww we have to climb the rope and then fly down.. ice:my arms feel sore just looking at that and so does my but *saw laughed at this* saw:ice just focus what if you are the angel of balance you'll do great. brave:will you three pipe down im trying to climb here! beta:yeah so but out and go talk in the corner! saw:your just sore cause you have no friends but brave ice:yeah! *in the second year history class hope was asleep and druled on the desk* teacher:and so... we have this... ill pass out the amulets now for those of you paying attention *hope woke up and filled out her paper* teacher:very nice hope here you go it was your brothers amulet two. hope:O_o thx i guess *in gym the 5th year class* tink:aww we have to do fencing dragon:wow cool i hope i get paired with ace again, we have a score to settle tink:dragon just let ace fight anyone okay no cheating this time dragon:fine.. *the wheel stoped and dragon and a black haired boy with blue wings had steped up to the other end* dragon:i guess fate likes pitting us against each other huh ace? ace:i guess *the 2 boys grabed the fencing swords and raised into the air* teacher:begin! *they connected swords, in the first year magic class* saw:ice do you get this potion cause i dont ice:no i dont even know what newts leg looks like.. summer:i got it and i got an A already lol. *by hope in latin class* teacher:blah blah blah... hope thinking:aww i wanted to be out of school already. *back at the gym dragon and ace had hit the ground they were exasted* dragon:heh.. good fight ace ace:same to you mate *tink was smiling at them because they were still friends*~end of day and or week 1 lol chapter 4 will be up later

Nice chapter. .-.

Dragon omg.. You arent a year older for goodness sakes!!! youre only like a month.. gosh .. and btw.. this is for the noogie - kicks him hard in the shin - HMPH!!

hope what part of the baby thing dont you get come on your smarter then saw at least i think you are so you should get it like she did

I get it but still :- Drooling - at least let me have sooome pride will ya? lol and hopefully im smarter than saw @_@ no offense saw - I am older ( hopefully wiser ) ya know? lol anyways making a story (hopefully) if i have time b4 my doctors appntmt for my wrist - Hopefully finding out what in the world i did to it! Yay!!

@_@

Well, I have to say, Hope is smarter than me.

You can tell by how many bans for a month I've had this year o_o

( Cough: 3 )

But anyways, write more o_o

*clickes the shut up butten on both of them* alright now what else to talk about

Don't talk, just write!! :D

( i so overuse that smilie, haha )

*raises hand and waves it wildly* Which Ace? My buddy Ace or another Ace!?!?! Dont beat up my Acey if so ='{ He's my best buddy next to Dipsee and Sawy

ice i meant hes my rivel like we are good friends but try to beat eachother at everything we just had a feancing match thats all its like a freach sword match

New chapter coming soon?

yeah lol ill post it soon

Zomg write more already! :P

~hope ill get you to not bug me about this saw already nows what i will be doing in this part well half of it anyways~
*the PA had gone on* attention students attention! will a miss hope and saw and ice come to my office plz! *PA goes off and in prinipals office* principal:ice and saw wait outside the dorr i need to talk to hope first *they go go outside* hope:am i in trouble? principal:no hope deary actually the oppiset you are getting bumped up 2 grades. hope:really! omg ty *she hugs the principal* prinipal:dont worry about it even your brother suggested it.
can you send ice and saw in now, hope:sure mrs. kelser(sciance teachers name in real lol) *she walks out and the 2 walk in*ice:whatever it is its saw's fault saw:uh un its ices shes the bad seed.. mrs.kelser:girls please your not in trouble. ice and saw:really? mrs.kelser:yeah didn't dragon tell you about the angels, saw:so 1 of us is the angel or is it summer? mrs.kelser:eh well its not summer, it turns out that your both the angel the DNA split somehow/ i have to assign dragon to teach you about how to use your powers. ice:why we gotta take lessons from him! saw:ice whats wrong you dont like dragon? ice:not really he acts like a jerk to me! *dragons fire had appeared in the corner of the room* you wanted me mrs.kelser? he said. mrs.kelser:yeah i want you to teach the angel her powers. dragon:okay which 1 is it? mrs.kelser:both dragon:wah!!?? *saw and ice laughed at him* dragon:fine ill teach them but dont blame me if they cant do it mrs.kelser:fair enough *in the courtyard* dragon:alright first i want to make sure they didn't mess up both of you stick out your wings and focus energy in your hands *they do it and dragon touches tips of there wings and they both turn red and grow 3ft.*dragon:darn it you guys are the angels *saw and ice stick out there tounges* i can't believe a blood line can split that way, i can't believe that they dont have to be alone ever. ice:what are you blabbing about? dragon:oh nothing lets get started, you to need to turn into angel life forms saw:huh? dragon: watch okay *a dark light appears around his cheast and it engulfs his body he re appears with really long black wings and a black over coat with a black blade in left hand and another in right* ice:wow awesome! saw:you want us to do that dragon:it will look different plus you have to learn somethings before that.. ~end lol will saw and ice learn there powers what happened to the rest of the school its empty find out in chapter 5~

Wo :P Nice chapter.

Ah haha. Me and Ice pwnz you peoplz O_o

i bearly talk now -.- gwad -.-

look what i drawn!! - hold a stick person picture up -

Sweet, more more more! :D

summer i told you the next parts more about you this is about the angels okay when i make part 2/4 it will be on you and the others like brave and stuff

Shweet, im pwnin' u all o.o! Dont we rock Sawsee?

AND SUMMER! WOW! Great picture, but mine is bestester!! *holds up a scribbly drawing of me and Saw beatin' someone up* SEE?!?!

NO MINE'S BETTER

*holds up a picture of my grandma as santa giving a little boy a pink sock with the sock saying: I'm a pretty princess! BARBIE'S PWN!* LOL

Anyways, Dragon Dwagie (okay? o_o), post post :D

His nickname is Dwagie! NOT Dragony! Get it right, sista!!

LOL

I edited my post O_o LOL

Good girl =P..

WAIT! Only the all famous Icely can call him that!

mines way better * holds up a pic of a dot * i pwoned you all!!

Hmph! - frowns at draggy and stomps foot - Im grumpy.. And thanks for moving meh ups! - kicks him in the shin again - OoOoH sum sum is endangered "_"

yuppers. o_O

Make Dwagie post mores!!!

0_0 alright god people calm down and hope stop beating me up! i was grounded yesterday so ill post chapter 5 tomorrow

I can beat u up if I feel like it :) Thats what *little* sisters do


* Even though im not little :)

~dragon had taught saw and ice they're powers even though it took about 4 hours~ dragon:alright now take your form *a red light and, lotus petals were everywhere the 2 girls had come togather and they were about dragons height, they had an red battle outfit on and had 2 blades 1 shining steel the other a dark blade that was cerved* dragon:hmm.. i wonder what i should call you lotus flower:lotus for right now. dragon:okay lotus lets go find tink and show her your form put the life form energy in your hand and spread it out *they do so and split and back to normal height, they run into the school and see the doors bursted open and the lockers broken into* dragon:what the heck? *they ran up to the 7th year hallway and spotted a group of kids sitting on the ground with a younge angel in the center and 2 people standing up* ??:get down you 3 or will open fire *they pointed guns at them* dragon:heh.. *his aireses were red he was waiting for a threat* dragon:try me.. *his fire burned at his finger tips and on the threats back* ??:ah what the.. oh right your 1 of those angels i forgot they are real oh well lets take down his friends first *dragons eyes opened wide at this he ran stright into 1 of the guys and his blade had appeared* dragon:what was that? you might want to be carful what you pick to say now. *the other guy had lifted his gun at dragon and opened fire but dragon was gone and he hit his friend instead* ??:what the.. *dragon grabed his arm and twisted it behind his back* dont threaten any of us or you'll regreat it *the young angel stode up and look at dragon* strike:hello angel of darkness my name is strike, i dont know if you know this but im am an angel of leadgend as well. dragon:so your the angel of nothingness the last of us.. so what are you like 9? strike:yeah but my powers have devloped *the 2 threats had been consumed by darkness and appeared on the edge of the school knocked out* we have to go find the others ice saw turn into lotus *dragon ice and saw changed to angel life form, there stode dragons darkness and lotus's balance. dragon:lets go.~end of chapter 5 next time we try and save all of the angels and the rest of the students but not all on our team are trustworthy~

Nice .-. =O

lol thanks saw

Shweetness Dwagon! Write more, buddy :D

thx ice i think ill post new chapter in like 2 days. we gotta save hope, tink, brave, beta, ace and the rest of the school

Omgsh you've gots to write more!! ^_^

Yeah, what she said!!

~sorry its late peoplez and my 100th post woot alright~ *they had ran into a crowd of people on the next floor this time dragon could see tink* dragon:lets go *they started running faster and both drew there blades* lotus:dragon let me take care of this 1 *she ran ahead and hit the threat but he revebed it and was aiming at lotus now. dragon ran up and knocked him away and move lotus out of the way* dragon:agh.. *he put both his blades togather and they formed a lance* lorus:whats that i thought his wepon was those wepons *dragon swong foward and the treat was taken outside to where the other threats were* tink:dragon are you alright? *he grabed his side* i've been better tink change to your angel form we have to save the others *the school that they had already saved were now in a classroom* all of you wait here we will place an enchantment on the door that only we can break *strike stood up* strike:dragon let me help dragon:no strike your to young i dont want to lose any1. strike:alright ill watch over the room then dragon:you protect them all but dont risk to much if things get close to out of control run. strike:understood. dragon:ice saw you to rest here me and tink will take the next 2 floors while you rest. lotus:okay *they split* we will. *tink and dragon ran to the next floor. dragons wound was healed* ill go first you transform while i go take them.. *a threat had flowen past them* ace:that will teach you to know there is others to fight then the angels, dragon:ace hey nice job show me where they all are so i can knock them out of here *they are all on the outside and the proceed down the corridor with lotus appearing next to them* lotus:hey ace and tink lets take them down now. *they all nodded at this statment* dragon:let me get hope if she is here it might be risky if more then 1 of us go for the group at once. *dragon walked forward and saw students laying all over the ground* dragon:they aren't dead but im guessing the leader of this is last but wheres hope? *dragon heared a noice at the front entrence* dragon:im going you stay here and look after the kids. *he flew stright to a giant man who was holding hope by the arm* dragon:let go of her now! *he drew the lance at once and flew into the man pushing foward he droped hope for a second but shoot dragon off and flew into the sky with hope being held by the arm* dragon:hope! *he flew at the man once more but got knocked to the ground* ~end like it,think its good,think it has a certain quality well tell me what you think okay~

That was awesome, dude! :D Write more soon ^^

Congrats on your 100th post! LOL

Yay good job write more .-.

Yay 100th post for Dragon! :3

ty ty ty lol

Yw yw yw! Write more soon! .-.

Writes more! Somebodies got to save Hope!

Happy 100th post! :D :woohoo: :fireworks:

alright my friends. your all so hyper lol i might do a special for halloween or something later like next year if i still have thew thread it wont be connected to the thread at all just a special

Yeah!!!! Woot! Dwagons Awethome!!

you spelt weapons wrong :ascol: its not wepons its weapons!! happy ' 100th ' post o_o :TheWaveSmilie

Yay happy 647 post for meh!! LOL offtopic :P


Writes more!! :P

you spelt weapons wrong :ascol: its not wepons its weapons!! happy ' 100th ' post o_o :TheWaveSmilie
Yeah but you could still understand it right?

She doesn't really understand nothin'...

rikublade thanks for being someone who comments that i dont know really okay for all you that read this story and dont just click it cause its on the new posts i have a sneakpeak of book even though i wont make this about a year probly it gives you all something to look foward to all right

"in the shadows the group walked to find a lance, dragon drew out his lance at seeing this lance to compare them and as soon as he did a beast of great mass appeared next to the lance to duel. dragon wondered what this was about and the beast attacked, the group of friends had gotten out of the wsay all but dragon who was locked in combat as he pushed the lance back at the beast he felt a sharp pain in his back. somehow the lace that he was fighting had gone above his shoulder blade by an inch after this dragon blankedout"

lol nice sneakpeak i would say its a good storyline to my friends are getting other preveiws and its funny how they react to it

I like it! Writes more :D

Write mores!! .-.

Hmph.. Why am i the damsel in distress :- 16 days until my birthday - Lucky 13 :) Lots of luv

Hope

i do understand.. im just saying, anyways.. who knew it was braves birthday a week ago? lol i did o_o.

I did from VMK Magic .-.


he told me to shut the (uhm...yeah you get the point) up about it @_@

Oh well, back on topic, write mores!!! .-.

Make sures you keep it going for eh 15 more days :) hehe :) Plzz write more

~i made this part up a while ago when i was bored it also includes an anime i watched before its the past of me and hope~ *dragon woke up the next day to find his friends cowared around him and his mother next to him* mother:dragon where is hope. dragon:i guess it wasn't a dream then. idk that big guy knocked me out and i flew into space idk where i went. mother:dragon what happened tell us so we can understand *he explained about chasing after hope and then about why he was knocked out* mother:dragon save hope as best as you can, thats an order. dragon:yes my mistress.. saw:mistress? dragon i thought that was your mom. dragon:not exactly, she is my master. tink:master what are you her slave? dragon:yep.. i am a DearS after all we are born slaves and owned by slave masters which this planet is infested with. *dragon placed his hand up and it glowed white* ill show you my past as early as i can.. *the room had lit with light* dragons mom:hello little dragon.. *she smiled at an infantain that the other thought were dragon* dragon's father:he is a cutie lol *his father looked like dragons twin and they all noticed they had odd necklesses on that resembled dog collars* dragons mom: its to bad he was born to be a slave as soon as hes old enough want to find him a master? *a couple days passed and dragon was now in a cribe* dragon's mom:nishino save the baby! *a bunch of wolfes had attacked the house and dragon was knocked on the floor* nishino:ae you alright.. i cant find dragon! im going to serch the floor. *he checks and sees no1 and the wolfs attack him dragon had appeared as a white wolf from under the craddle and was now following the other wolfs. 4 years later* wolfs:bark *there was a scar on dragons nose and he had ran away from the group* girl:its a wolf aww he looks really cute. *the girl rubbed dragons head and he bit back at her hand once but then licked it* hope:aww cutie its okay, my name is hope. *dragon jumped onto hopes head* hope:want to go home with me? *dragon nodded and fell asleep on her head, he woke up moments later around hope her father and her mother* mom:hope you can keep him but you have to keep him in check he cant destroy anything okay. hope:alright *dragon ran outside and ran into bushes all of a sudden he was human again and hope had seen him change* hope:who are you and where'd that cute wolf go to, gross your filty come with me *she grabed dragons hand and pulled him back to his parents and told them about what she saw* mom:so whats his name? dragon:its dragon. can i take a bath or something? mom:sure ill run a bath for you and get some clean cloths out for you *after dragons bath he got dressed and found hope's mom* mom:what is it dragon. dragon:i was told by my parents that i am a slave when i was little and well offers the right of certification andm she accepts* your my master now.

Yay good chapter .-.

Writes mores soons .-.

awws :- try spell checking ur work draggy, LOL

hope i dont got time to spell check or else ill leave a big part out i almost said days instead of 4 years cause i was spell checking

That was awesome .-. Wolfish boy o.o lolz

Put it in microsoft word and click the spell checky button smarty


Im a sis to a wolfish boy - OH JOY

LOL Hope

Write more Dragon! ^_^

hey at least were not siblings anymore i thought you wanted that
and im not a wolf *points to the neckless* im a DearS

LOL Hope O.o


Dragon writes more .-.

the whole slave and mistress sounds wrong ( yes my sisters perbiness has gotten to me she watches hen/ta/i!! >_< ) anyways writes sums mores!

summers got an ecchi sis lol, plus im just following the story line

That's really confusing and hard to read O_o

thats what makes it special o_O

Like you Summer ^_^ Lol

Dragon write mmmooorrreee!!!

Write more soon buddy .-. LOL

i know im very speicial o_o anyways.. yo banna boy backwards is yo banna boy o_o

lets start calling dragon chippy..

chippykidaye LOL

heya chippy!

*thinks about what summer said 'yo banana boy'* I don't get it 0_0 Lol
Chippy, omg isn't that the teacup on Sleeping Beauty?! *cough* Not like i'd know or anything..

look

yo banana boy

back wards yob ananab oy look closely

yob → bananab → boy see it?

I see it now! Lol ^_^

sorry guys i made hope a promise i'd post 8 or 9 on her b-day and im still thinking up some stuff

its ok chippy we understand

thats mr.dragon to you summer-sama

LOL Summer "its ok chippy we understand" LOL


*counts on fingers*

How many have you done so far, Dragon?

7 out of about 40 chapters in 4 books/threads lol its all interesting

o.o

*says flatly* Dragon, I dont have that many fingers.


Dang that's a lot.

saw i mean 10 chaps per book..

Oh...my bad.

*holds up ten fingers* I have ten fingers! Yeah, I'm special. o.o

hopes b days in like a week so chapter 8 will be up soon and also saw your a specail lil girl lol

Anyways, two days Dragon will post eight chapters, yay. .-.

Tomorrow a new chapter :) Thanks so much for posting it on my birthday dragon. I apreciate it! Luv ya and ur story :)
Hopes

lol np hope but i got more ideas in my head now so chapter 8s got more action in it now

I might have 2 read it tomorrow - my bday has been chaotic :) SO post post post

Your best ( now 13) friend
CHEY :)

~happy b-day wishes to hope, mods please be warned i added fights so its not all emotional and sappy k cause i hate that stuff~
dragon:i dont think i should say the rest cause i dont remem.. *he blanked out and his friends rushed to his aid* ~in the past~ dragon:happy b-day hope *he walked next to her and gave her a present* im getting enrolled in your school but a grade higher for some reason.. hope:thanks dragon i look forward to having you at my school. dragon:i just hope i fit in cause i dont look completly human *he shows her his forhead which had a stange symble on it* hope:me and my fruiends think its cute but i dont know about boys they might not. *dragon looked down* dragon:hope you mom asked me to protect you though so lets try and not get into fights alright? hope:k. ~at school the first day for dragon~ hope:dragon your on the second floor class C dragon:k ill see you at lunch. hope:k maybe me and m friends can meet you there if not just me. dragon:alright. ~in first class~ *dragon sits down at a desk near the back* kid:hey new guy get outta my chair. dragon:oh sorry *he gets up and the kid trips huim making him smash his head the floor* kid:*laughs and rest of class starts laughing* dragon:ow that hurt.. hey whats that for!!? kid:i dont like you so deal with it. *dragon went towards the front of the class* dragon:if he does that again he'll be sorry *he said it quiet so only he could hear it* ~in gym class~ *the students were doing races and they had just started dragon had gotten to the frount and went super sonic(going past the speed of sound)* dragon:what the heck, why are they going so slow? oh well i guess a wins a win *he crossed the finish line a min. before everyone else* coach:wow how did you do that, i've never seen such talent. *dragon shugged and when the teacher wasn't looking he got hit into a wall* kid:whats the big idea making us look bad you freak!!! *dragon looked at his mouth he was bleeding* dragon:ow.. its hurts, it hurts.. *he walked to the nurses office and had to go home early* hope:its lunch so wheres dragon.. *she asked the principal what happened* hope:those stupid boys beat up dragon.. principal:we sent him home early i can let you go see him. hope:please prinicpal. ~at home~ hope:dragon are you alright? dragon:yeah i stoped bleeding so i'd say so. hope:dont let them bully you fight them back alright. dragon:alright.~at school next day~ kid:hey newbie i told you to move yesterday. dragon:make me. kid:alright *he swings and dragon catches it and shoots him across the room to a wall* dragon:dont try me alright? kid:ow.. sorry kid i didn't mean to bother you.. ~at gym~ *the fight had spread thoughout the school even the teacher knew, dragon had a look of distain on his face at every kid he say* ~at lunch~ hope:wow dragon i didn't know you were that tough. dragon:i kinda shocked myself to. ~end of chapter 8 my most exciting chapter yet i think lol hope you enjoy it ill add more action and stuff in later~

Very cool Dragon! :D But your story is kinda hard to read lately.. Maybe you could separate the dialouge some how? Luv ya buddy!

~Ice

thanks for advice ice-chan

Woot luvvs it :) Mwah! Luv ya :) Im gonna go do something random i thinks
Luv ya muches
Chey

lol hope liked her present hurray hurray!

LOL I love evrything and ya know it :) Keep writing!
Mwah!
Chey

Hopers likes her present! :D I have a brilliant present for you: *tackle hugs*
Luv ya!

~Ice

Aweshum chapter :D


Again, happy b day Hopers xD

woot im getting towards end of first book hurray

Hurray! ^^

Posty next chapter soony :l

probly in like 3 days cause then my break starts lol

Yayers! Good chapter! ^_^

gonna post chapter tomorrow peoples sorry about delay just im lazy today

Can't wait! XD
When are ya not lazy? ^_^ jk, lol

im so.. confused. o_o awshumm chapty!

lol thanks for being such great fans, wow its sad but i got fan girls lol

Yeah you have fan girls o_o
o_o Can't wait for the chapter... lol

i am not YOUR fan girl. i am SAIS!!

SAI!! ♥♥♥

next chapter!! now!!

~sorry its late peoples, i was over my cousins almost all day~
*hope and dragon were walk home from today's lecture*
hope:dragon, why do you figure the boys pick on you?
dragon:i think its cause im different and humans cant accpet things that arent alike.. or at least most humans hope you and your family are the noble people who can.
hope:thanks dragon-kun, is it okay if i call you oniisan? (brother)
dragon:sure i am kinda your brother, alright hope-chan *he smiled at her*

~at home~
mom:hope, dragon get started on your homework right away were going to a festival as soon as you finish
dragon and hope:awesome.
*they finished there homework in 20mins. and they left with there mother and father at once*

~at festival~
vender:get you smoked eel here, best eel on this side oif town
*they each got an eel*
hope:dragon are you sure this tastes good?
dragon:yeah considering i had it before when it wasn't cooked
*the festival pasted*

~at school next day~
*dragon was outside for gym when all of a sudden*
kid:there he is get him!!
*they jumped him and pinned him to the floor pounding his face into the ground*
hope:hey what are you doing!!?
*the kids jumped at her and dragon ursted into them at super sonic*
dragon:leave the girl alone..
*his voice was cold and dark and it even scared hope*
kid:we can take him come on guys lets beat him up
*they all jumped at him and he knocked them away but the kid that said it and pinned him against the wall griping his throat*
dragon:what was that? im sorry but i dont think you can.
*he shoot the kid away*
hope:dragon..kun..
dragon:gomen (sorry) hope-chan i lost control.
kid:you freak.. you monster!!

~on the walk home~
kid:lets get him
*they pumbled him with stones and quills*
hope stop it!
*she jumped in frount of dragon and they keep fireing, dragon leep foward smashes all the stuff and took down the kids with his swords of dakrness*

~current time~
*dragon got up*
dragon:i have to go.. tink you can come to you were close to hope-chan
summer:dragon you need rest please dont leave yet
brave:yeah you might pass out
beta:dont be stupid
dragon:what ould you know about whats stupid!!
hope was the first person to accpet me!! im going to rescure her now!
*dragon and tink left, ace was standing there thinking about what might happe*
~lol using my new format i got chapter 9 done, so like the new style cause its easier to read now~

Very nice Dragon, I can actually read it now ^.^ Great job.

~Ice

i only said one thing and where did saw go ?!

oniichan is for older sister.. yea o_o

kewl chapter!

whatever i just used whatever i can think of plus like i got japense on my brain 24/7 oh summer i put oniisan..

I seem to have gone missing as well, Summer.

~Ice

Me and Ice magically disappeared... lol...

I can actually read the story now, good job ^^

i give you 2 a good part 9in ten so calm down, your actually the last part of book 1 exactly

Saw, we appear to me magical.. I wonder if I can make food appear out of thin air!?!?

~Ice

is the same thing.

anyways so the next is your last chapter?

till book 2 haven hero im gonna call it, it envoles you other people more then me and lotus and the other angels and stuff

=O That's aweshumly kewl xD

Haven Hero lol

Cant wait until the next chapter lol.


~KM

P.S: Ice, we're so aweshumly kewl that we make food appear out of other demensions! o_o

i think i told you guys what the big par of chapter 10 was already.. or did i?

Or did you? I have a really bad memory so.. Remind us again?

~Ice

wait till chpater 10 like everyone else then

Sweet chapter Dragon!
You gotta write more! ^_^

Do i know what chapter tens about?.. you told me one of the chapters but im not sure what one it was, lol.

i know i told

Sorry I havent been on latelys guys :- I really love the story Draggy-kun :- I wish you guys were actually on and talking :- Anyways one of yall message me when ya get on pretty pleazers :- Keep it going and ya better save meh or ya just might find ya self with virtual sticky rice in ya ears and chopsticks up ya nose :)

lol sorry i haven't been commenting busy with basketball tryouts.. i got cut and i was the 17th person outta the depth chart

Next chapter soon, then? lol.

Write More Draggy-kun. Or FEEL my rath :) hehe :)

*whistles and waits for the next chapter xD*

Anytime now Dragon XD

.. Wow, Lose you're creative train of thought ? SAVE me pretty please draggy-kun

~now the final chapter of this book~
*dragon walked out into a run as he rushed towards the monutain. tink followed close for her worrys that he might get hurt*
tink: dragon-kun wait, i want to make sure your alright
dragon: dont worry about that im fine
tink: let me check then we can go on.
*the wind got stronger and she was getting pushed towards a cliff. she got closer until she hit a tree and fell down*
tink: dragon help!
*dragon rushed down and caught her. he had her hold onto him so she wouldn't fall*
dragon: lets go see if your safe now tink
*he landed and looked at her leg. there was a big slash on her shin and her foot was sprained.*
dragon: not good, lets see if you can walk
*she couldn't even stand*
dragon: alright get on my back tink
tink: alright
*dragon flew with tink on his back to a cave where they could rest*
tink: dragon you should get some rest
*dragon laid down as he had a dream about hope and him at the beach where she was nearly destroyed from a shark but, in the dream she really was hurt
dragon: Ah!
*he shot up from this nightmare but tink was still asleep. so he walked outside the cave and saw something he would regret forever, the kidnapper*
dragon: you won't get away this time..
*his sword appeared as his wings but in his eyes a shadow had covered everything. as he chased after the ground exploded. waking tink*
tink: whats going on!?
~the next book has more action~

Wowsirs Dragon, pretty big part me and Saw had.. It was good, none-theless...

~*Ice-chan*~

Good job, Dragon-kun.

~KM

Sawsee, we gotted leaved out :sadd2: Our amazing good looks we're missing! *flips hair and trips over a log* Eh....! Put meh and Saw in the next book, Dwagie!

~*Ice-chan*~

ice-chan the next book is going to be difficult like i have places set for certen people cause everyone wants to be in me storys :P i dont know why i am such a good write :D lol:stgrin:

I hope we appear in the next book, too! *polishes a piece of wood*

im sorry if i am not on much-.. its becuase of what i told you.. keep up the great work dragony ^^

Dragon thats awesome! Nice job! ^_^