SafariLyssaOnVMK
09-30-2007, 06:27 PM
Hey! This is a story I wrote. I don't have a final name for it so for now I'm just calling it "Disney Story". It is set in the magic kingdom at WDW Florida. Feel free to comment! Here it is:
Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness
Chapter 1:
Some people might call her Alice in Wonderland, since that’s what her movie is called. But she went by Alice. Alice thought of herself as an average girl even though she was a Disney character. After all, it’s not like she go a lot of attention like Cinderella or Stitch or Tinker bell. Anyway, Alice was in the Magic Kingdom. But it didn’t like the Magic Kingdom at all. First of all, the Magic Kingdom was usually sunny and not dark like it was now. And second of all, the Magic Kingdom usually had people coming from place to place. Now Alice seemed to be the only person there. Of course, the park was closed. But this was usually the time all the characters come out. “What’s happening in the Magic Kingdom?” was all Alice could say. “I need to go to someone who knows a lot about Disney.” Alice thought. Almost immediately, Alice knew who to go to. Alice ran towards the Haunted Mansion. She was going to Madam Leota.
Alice wasn’t exactly “excited” to go to Madam Leota. Not many people trusted her. Trusted, or not Madam Leota was probably the only person who could find out why this was happening. When Alice walked into the Haunted Mansion, she dodged all the cobwebs and spiders lurking around and headed for the Séance Room. As she approached the Séance Room, could hear Madam Leota’s voice echoing through the room. At first it was kind of blurry, but then she could hear exactly what she was saying:
“Serpents and spiders
Tail of a rat
Call the Spirits
Wherever they’re at!”
“Uh, hi Madam Leota.” Alice said. “Hello, Alice, need anything?” Madam Leota said. “Something is wrong in the Magic Kingdom. The entire sky is black and there’s nobody around.” Alice said worried. Madam Leota didn’t say anything for a while. For a second, Alice didn’t think she was going to help. Then, after a few minutes, Madam Leota finally said:
“The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop”
After hearing that, Alice got really scared. “What could all this mean?” Alice thought. “This doesn’t make any sense!” Alice ran out of the Séance Room and out of the Haunted Mansion.
Chapter Two
The meeting
Alice ran as fast as she could to Cinderella’s Castle. That’s where all of the good characters live. Well, most of them live. In Cinderella’s Castle, there is also a room called the Meeting Room. It’s a room with a long, long table and dozens of chairs. It is at the bottom of the castle near the Dungeon. When Alice came in her best friend, Kanga was setting up things. “Hi, Alice.” Kanga said. “We’re about to have a meeting.” “Good. I have something I need to talk about.” Alice said. “Is it about the sky? Nobody knows why it’s like that.” Kanga said. “I think Madam Leota knows something.” Alice said. “Madam Leota?” Kanga said surprised. “Well the meeting is about to start. You can be one of the first people to explain.” Then they sat down. Characters started coming in the room. At the one end of the table were three chairs. Mickey, Minnie and Cinderella sat there. At the other end of the long table, were all the fairies of Pixies Hollow. Even though there were dozens of them, they were small enough that they could fit in only three chairs. Tinker Bell, one of the most stubborn fairies ever, was getting really impatient. “Hurry up, already!” she kept on saying. Finally, the meeting started. I think you know why we’re having a meeting.” Cinderella began. “It’s about the sky. Anybody want to say something?” Nervously, Alice raised her hand. Alice almost never raised her hand. She usually just listened. “Alice?” Cinderella said. “Well, um, when I saw the sky like that I went to Madam Leota for help. I thought that maybe she knew something that most people wouldn’t. Then I asked for her help. I didn’t think she would help. But she did. Well, kind of. This is what she said.” Alice took a deep breath.
“‘The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop’”
“Interesting...” Cinderella replied. “Well, it sounds like the Magic Kingdom is in trouble. We have to do something about it. But the Magic Kingdom is about to open. So, the meeting is over.” Characters start running out the room. Today was Halloween, and the Magic Kingdom was having a special Halloween parade that included almost all of the characters. And by almost, that meant only the popular characters. Which, annoyingly, didn’t include Alice. Alice ran up the spiral staircase outside of the Meeting Room that went up to the entrance of Cinderella’s Castle. She wanted help. And she wasn’t talking about a Disney character. She was talking about a person.
Chapter three
“At Fright Night The Lights Will Stop….”
Disney Characters didn’t avoid people, but they didn’t become close friends. It wasn’t like they didn’t want to be friends, but most people that came to Disney was for vacation, and they lived far away and didn’t come very often. But some of the people at Disney lived near by. But the point was that, they shouldn’t become close friends with someone they might not see again for a very, very, very long time. But Alice didn’t care. “This should only last about a week, right?” Alice asked herself. “Hopefully.” She added worried. When she got out of the Cinderella’s Castle, she walked toward the place in Main Street were the parade was going to start. When she got there she looked around. She didn’t see any people. Then she heard a girl’s voice say, “Hi! Are you the real Alice?” Startled, Alice turned around and saw a girl about her age. She had long brown hair that was in pig-tails and was wearing an Alice in Wonderland costume the looked just like her dress. “I’m surprised you noticed me.” Alice said. “Why?” the girl asked. “You’re like the coolest Disney character ever!” “No I’m not.” Alice said stubbornly. “There are a lot more Disney characters cooler than me.” “Well I think you’re the coolest.” The girl said. Alice smiled. At least somebody thought she was cool. “Anyway, I’m Allie.” The girl said. “I live in Orlando. I don’t live very far from here so I get to visit here very often.” “Good. Because I need someone’s help and I think you’d be just the right person.” Alice said, still smiling. “Okay.” Allie said. “What do you need help with?” “Well…” Alice began. But then she was interrupted by a speaker that said the Halloween Parade was starting. “I tell you after the parade.” She finished quickly. After the parade, Allie and Alice sat down at a bench. “Now can you tell me?” Allie asked impatiently. “Sure.” Alice replied. “Well, first it’s the sky. It’s completely black. But that’s not what I’m worried about. I went to Madam Leota for help, and this is what she said.” Alice stopped.
“‘The sky is black and there are no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop’”
“Well,” Allie said. “I’m think the first one already happened. But the second one is happening tonight.” “Why do you think that?” Alice asked. “Well when Madam Leota said ‘fright night’ I think she meant Halloween. And Halloween is tonight.” Allie answered. “Then we’ll have to find out the rest of the riddle tonight.” Alice said. “Okay.” Allie said. “But I don’t get what she meant by ‘the lights will stop’. Lights can’t stop! They either turn on or turn off.” “Well there are some lights that stop. Like there’s...” Alice stopped. “What?” Allie asked. “The fireworks.” Alice finished. “What! The fireworks can’t stop! We’ll have to stop who’s ever doing this.” Allie said. “How? It could be anyone!” Alice said. “Besides, how could they stop it?”
At Mickey’s Not-So-Scary Halloween party, the speaker said it was time for the fireworks. “Here it goes.” Alice said. Allie was wearing an Alice dress and a blond wig, so they looked almost like twins. Then, the fireworks show began. Halloween music came on. Five lights appeared in the sky. Three were black, and two were orange. Then the sky was covered with black fog. Allie started coughing. “What is that?” She asked. Alice tried to look through the fog. “Oh, no!” She cried. “Something is happening to the fireworks! It’s this fog. It must be stopping the fireworks from going on!” “We have to get this fog out of here!” Allie said, still coughing. “But how?” All of a sudden, the fog disappeared. And so did the fireworks. “Okay…” Allie said confused. “I guess that’s over. But never found out the last part. It said, ‘the birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop.’ What do you think that means?” “I think it means it isn’t over yet.” Alice said.
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Hope you like it!
Alice looked up at the sky above. Complete darkness. Not the kind of darkness you get when the clouds are covering the sun. There were no clouds. There was nothing in the sky.
Nothing accept complete darkness
Chapter 1:
Some people might call her Alice in Wonderland, since that’s what her movie is called. But she went by Alice. Alice thought of herself as an average girl even though she was a Disney character. After all, it’s not like she go a lot of attention like Cinderella or Stitch or Tinker bell. Anyway, Alice was in the Magic Kingdom. But it didn’t like the Magic Kingdom at all. First of all, the Magic Kingdom was usually sunny and not dark like it was now. And second of all, the Magic Kingdom usually had people coming from place to place. Now Alice seemed to be the only person there. Of course, the park was closed. But this was usually the time all the characters come out. “What’s happening in the Magic Kingdom?” was all Alice could say. “I need to go to someone who knows a lot about Disney.” Alice thought. Almost immediately, Alice knew who to go to. Alice ran towards the Haunted Mansion. She was going to Madam Leota.
Alice wasn’t exactly “excited” to go to Madam Leota. Not many people trusted her. Trusted, or not Madam Leota was probably the only person who could find out why this was happening. When Alice walked into the Haunted Mansion, she dodged all the cobwebs and spiders lurking around and headed for the Séance Room. As she approached the Séance Room, could hear Madam Leota’s voice echoing through the room. At first it was kind of blurry, but then she could hear exactly what she was saying:
“Serpents and spiders
Tail of a rat
Call the Spirits
Wherever they’re at!”
“Uh, hi Madam Leota.” Alice said. “Hello, Alice, need anything?” Madam Leota said. “Something is wrong in the Magic Kingdom. The entire sky is black and there’s nobody around.” Alice said worried. Madam Leota didn’t say anything for a while. For a second, Alice didn’t think she was going to help. Then, after a few minutes, Madam Leota finally said:
“The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop”
After hearing that, Alice got really scared. “What could all this mean?” Alice thought. “This doesn’t make any sense!” Alice ran out of the Séance Room and out of the Haunted Mansion.
Chapter Two
The meeting
Alice ran as fast as she could to Cinderella’s Castle. That’s where all of the good characters live. Well, most of them live. In Cinderella’s Castle, there is also a room called the Meeting Room. It’s a room with a long, long table and dozens of chairs. It is at the bottom of the castle near the Dungeon. When Alice came in her best friend, Kanga was setting up things. “Hi, Alice.” Kanga said. “We’re about to have a meeting.” “Good. I have something I need to talk about.” Alice said. “Is it about the sky? Nobody knows why it’s like that.” Kanga said. “I think Madam Leota knows something.” Alice said. “Madam Leota?” Kanga said surprised. “Well the meeting is about to start. You can be one of the first people to explain.” Then they sat down. Characters started coming in the room. At the one end of the table were three chairs. Mickey, Minnie and Cinderella sat there. At the other end of the long table, were all the fairies of Pixies Hollow. Even though there were dozens of them, they were small enough that they could fit in only three chairs. Tinker Bell, one of the most stubborn fairies ever, was getting really impatient. “Hurry up, already!” she kept on saying. Finally, the meeting started. I think you know why we’re having a meeting.” Cinderella began. “It’s about the sky. Anybody want to say something?” Nervously, Alice raised her hand. Alice almost never raised her hand. She usually just listened. “Alice?” Cinderella said. “Well, um, when I saw the sky like that I went to Madam Leota for help. I thought that maybe she knew something that most people wouldn’t. Then I asked for her help. I didn’t think she would help. But she did. Well, kind of. This is what she said.” Alice took a deep breath.
“‘The sky is black and there’s no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop’”
“Interesting...” Cinderella replied. “Well, it sounds like the Magic Kingdom is in trouble. We have to do something about it. But the Magic Kingdom is about to open. So, the meeting is over.” Characters start running out the room. Today was Halloween, and the Magic Kingdom was having a special Halloween parade that included almost all of the characters. And by almost, that meant only the popular characters. Which, annoyingly, didn’t include Alice. Alice ran up the spiral staircase outside of the Meeting Room that went up to the entrance of Cinderella’s Castle. She wanted help. And she wasn’t talking about a Disney character. She was talking about a person.
Chapter three
“At Fright Night The Lights Will Stop….”
Disney Characters didn’t avoid people, but they didn’t become close friends. It wasn’t like they didn’t want to be friends, but most people that came to Disney was for vacation, and they lived far away and didn’t come very often. But some of the people at Disney lived near by. But the point was that, they shouldn’t become close friends with someone they might not see again for a very, very, very long time. But Alice didn’t care. “This should only last about a week, right?” Alice asked herself. “Hopefully.” She added worried. When she got out of the Cinderella’s Castle, she walked toward the place in Main Street were the parade was going to start. When she got there she looked around. She didn’t see any people. Then she heard a girl’s voice say, “Hi! Are you the real Alice?” Startled, Alice turned around and saw a girl about her age. She had long brown hair that was in pig-tails and was wearing an Alice in Wonderland costume the looked just like her dress. “I’m surprised you noticed me.” Alice said. “Why?” the girl asked. “You’re like the coolest Disney character ever!” “No I’m not.” Alice said stubbornly. “There are a lot more Disney characters cooler than me.” “Well I think you’re the coolest.” The girl said. Alice smiled. At least somebody thought she was cool. “Anyway, I’m Allie.” The girl said. “I live in Orlando. I don’t live very far from here so I get to visit here very often.” “Good. Because I need someone’s help and I think you’d be just the right person.” Alice said, still smiling. “Okay.” Allie said. “What do you need help with?” “Well…” Alice began. But then she was interrupted by a speaker that said the Halloween Parade was starting. “I tell you after the parade.” She finished quickly. After the parade, Allie and Alice sat down at a bench. “Now can you tell me?” Allie asked impatiently. “Sure.” Alice replied. “Well, first it’s the sky. It’s completely black. But that’s not what I’m worried about. I went to Madam Leota for help, and this is what she said.” Alice stopped.
“‘The sky is black and there are no clouds around
No one is there and you can’t hear a sound
At fright night the lights will stop
The birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop’”
“Well,” Allie said. “I’m think the first one already happened. But the second one is happening tonight.” “Why do you think that?” Alice asked. “Well when Madam Leota said ‘fright night’ I think she meant Halloween. And Halloween is tonight.” Allie answered. “Then we’ll have to find out the rest of the riddle tonight.” Alice said. “Okay.” Allie said. “But I don’t get what she meant by ‘the lights will stop’. Lights can’t stop! They either turn on or turn off.” “Well there are some lights that stop. Like there’s...” Alice stopped. “What?” Allie asked. “The fireworks.” Alice finished. “What! The fireworks can’t stop! We’ll have to stop who’s ever doing this.” Allie said. “How? It could be anyone!” Alice said. “Besides, how could they stop it?”
At Mickey’s Not-So-Scary Halloween party, the speaker said it was time for the fireworks. “Here it goes.” Alice said. Allie was wearing an Alice dress and a blond wig, so they looked almost like twins. Then, the fireworks show began. Halloween music came on. Five lights appeared in the sky. Three were black, and two were orange. Then the sky was covered with black fog. Allie started coughing. “What is that?” She asked. Alice tried to look through the fog. “Oh, no!” She cried. “Something is happening to the fireworks! It’s this fog. It must be stopping the fireworks from going on!” “We have to get this fog out of here!” Allie said, still coughing. “But how?” All of a sudden, the fog disappeared. And so did the fireworks. “Okay…” Allie said confused. “I guess that’s over. But never found out the last part. It said, ‘the birds won’t sing and the bunnies won’t hop.’ What do you think that means?” “I think it means it isn’t over yet.” Alice said.
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Hope you like it!