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iRaccoon 08-09-2007, 06:38 AM There's Super Powers In School
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West Merlin Side School 2:00 AM The Future......
~ Chad wakes up ~
Chad: *Yawning* time to get up for school
~ Chad goes to the kitchen and eats breakfast ~
~ At School ~
Chad: Lets see i got my...
~ Chad feels something behind him ~
~ The Room goes silent ~
Chad: Whoah.. i feel like i'm being watched
~ In Class ~
~ Chad sees something a UFO flying outside the window and it flashes ~
~ Chad raises his hand ~
History Teacher: Yes Chad?
Chad: umm... yea i saw a UFO out the window
History Teacher: ok stop joking chad and pay attention
~ Kids Laugh ~
Ryan: i believe you chad
Chad: Thanks
~ Chad And Ryan go to there job for extra money to eat and Chad goes home at 3:00 PM ~
~ chad walks past a dark alley and he cant move ~
Chad: what in the world i... Ah!
~ chad feels like he gotten pulled into the alley then he lands into a garbage can then it tips over and he flies out into a puddle of water ~
Chad: What was... Ah!
~ A Mysterious Figure walks toward Chad from the darkness and chad crawls away ~
Mysterious Figure: Wait!
Chad: That... That Voice!
Chad: is.. is that you Ryan!?!
Ryan: Yes its me
Chad: You... have super powers!?
Ryan: Yes i do raised with them..
Chad: Awesome!
Ryan: Most People Run Away From Me
Chad: Not Awesome
Ryan: i'm human too right??
Chad: Yes You Are Human too
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Narrator: not spoiling it well ok here is the next chapter
but here is a Moral the writer made up... am i getting paid!
iRaccoon: No remember its in your contract ( Sigh )
Narrator: oh yea and i'm humilating myself aint i...
iRacoon: yes yes you are ( Shoves Moral into camera )
Moral: Accept Your Friends for who they are do not
make fun of them because there different
were all the equal we share earth
so we should not make fun of our friends
its like making fun of planets or rocks
because there different
~ From The Desk Of iRaccoon
iRaccoon 08-31-2007, 04:37 AM Chapter Bump: Revenge Of The Bump
Bump, Bump Bump Bump Bump!!!!!
iRaccoon 09-01-2007, 08:09 AM Chapter Two: The Mysterious Student Named Ryter
~ As iRaccoon entered the class he looked suppicous ~
~ iRaccoon was silent ~
~ After School On The Roof ~
Narrator: Unknown pressed a Black button on his belt and he had this suit on like this 28771..
Chad: pssst... Ryan look at the Ryter he's... in a Elite Soldier Costume
~ Ryter flew ~
Chad: Hmm...
~ Ryan pushes Chad off the building ~
Chad: You'll.... be sorry!.. * gasp for air *
~ Chad saw iRaccoon getting away he soon jumped onto his back ~
Unknown: Hey! Get Off!
Chad: Never!
~ Chad turned off iRaccoons Boot Jets while Ryter kicked Chad off they flew toward a building wall ~
Chad: oof!
Unkown: ow....
~ Unknown fainted onto the wall ~
Chad: hmm...
****White transition*****
Chad: Wake Up Unknown you have alot of explaining
Unknown: its.. its.. Chad??
Chad: Yep its me tell me who are you working for??
Unknown: its.... its.... The Master Of Lighting called Thundera..
Chad: Great now dont tell anyone
~ Unknown gets thrown out the window and remembered how he met with Thundera ~
****Flashback....****
Ryter Remembers:it started with me meeting with Thundera when i was little i became his student i studied in a Hideout underground first the Climbings, Then the Flying, ect.. ect... then then i became a LightingStormer Soldier and then a LightStormer Honor Roll Soldier but i needed one more task to complete for me to become the leader of all lightingStormers...
****End Flashback*****
Ryters List Of Things To Complete:
Take Over VMKVille
~ Ryter got up ~
Ryter: hmm...
~ Ryter jumped into the Sewer Manhole ~
~ In The Sewers ~
Ryter: Which path leads toward the hideout hmm...
~ Ryter looks at his Map ~
Ryter: Right!
~ Ryter when right and opened another Manhole ~
~ In The Hideout's Plan And Maps Room ~
Ryter: Back Home!
iRaccoon 09-02-2007, 09:16 AM **** Season Two Ended *****
Extras!!:
Ryter: Hey Check This Mix Master Wave Remix
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*Drum Beats*
Here's how my story goes.. i'm having foes with a boss with a pet doe yo making the plan breaking the fan like hip hop rock berry-laban
its moving large, moving low, its moving everywhere, *Disc Scratch* its time for the move, just like taking the lows of the lows who needs
land when i got my band *Drum Beats* I'm out Yo
iRaccoon 09-08-2007, 06:26 AM [QUOTE=iRaccoon;1714714]There's Super Powers In School
~ Dates Fly By ~
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West Merlin Side School 2:00 AM The Future......
~ Chad wakes up ~
Chad: *Yawning* time to get up for school
~ Chad goes to the kitchen and eats breakfast ~
~ At School ~
Chad: Lets see i got my...
~ Chad feels something behind him ~
~ The Room goes silent ~
Chad: Whoah.. i feel like i'm being watched
~ In Class ~
~ Chad sees something a UFO flying outside the window and it flashes ~
~ Chad raises his hand ~
History Teacher: Yes Chad?
Chad: umm... yea i saw a UFO out the window
History Teacher: ok stop joking chad and pay attention
~ Kids Laugh ~
Ryan: i believe you chad
Chad: Thanks
~ Chad And Ryan go to there job for extra money to eat and Chad goes home at 3:00 PM ~
~ chad walks past a dark alley and he cant move ~
Chad: what in the world i... Ah!
~ chad feels like he gotten pulled into the alley then he lands into a garbage can then it tips over and he flies out into a puddle of water ~
Chad: What was... Ah!
~ A Mysterious Figure walks toward Chad from the darkness and chad crawls away ~
Mysterious Figure: Wait!
Chad: That... That Voice!
Chad: is.. is that you Ryan!?!
Ryan: Yes its me
Chad: You... have super powers!?
Ryan: Yes i do raised with them..
Chad: Awesome!
Ryan: Most People Run Away From Me
Chad: Not Awesome
Ryan: i'm human too right??
Chad: Yes You Are Human too
Chapter Two: The Mysterious Student Named Ryter
~ As Ryter entered the class he looked suppicous ~
~ Ryter was silent ~
~ After School On The Roof ~
Narrator: Unknown pressed a Black button on his belt and he had this suit on like this Attachment 28771..
Chad: pssst... Ryan look at the Ryter he's... in a Elite Soldier Costume
~ Ryter flew ~
Chad: Hmm...
~ Ryan pushes Chad off the building ~
Chad: You'll.... be sorry!.. * gasp for air *
~ Chad saw iRaccoon getting away he soon jumped onto his back ~
Unknown: Hey! Get Off!
Chad: Never!
~ Chad turned off Ryter Boot Jets while Ryter kicked Chad off they flew toward a building wall ~
Chad: oof!
Unkown: ow....
~ Unknown fainted onto the wall ~
Chad: hmm...
****White transition*****
Chad: Wake Up Unknown you have alot of explaining
Unknown: its.. its.. Chad??
Chad: Yep its me tell me who are you working for??
Unknown: its.... its.... The Master Of Lighting called Thundera..
Chad: Great now dont tell anyone
~ Unknown gets thrown out the window and remembered how he met with Thundera ~
****Flashback....****
Ryter Remembers:it started with me meeting with Thundera when i was little i became his student i studied in a Hideout underground first the Climbings, Then the Flying, ect.. ect... then then i became a LightingStormer Soldier and then a LightStormer Honor Roll Soldier but i needed one more task to complete for me to become the leader of all lightingStormers...
****End Flashback*****
Ryters List Of Things To Complete:
Take Over VMKVille
~ Ryter got up ~
Ryter: hmm...
~ Ryter jumped into the Sewer Manhole ~
~ In The Sewers ~
Ryter: Which path leads toward the hideout hmm...
~ Ryter looks at his Map ~
Ryter: Right!
~ Ryter when right and opened another Manhole ~
~ In The Hideout's Plan And Maps Room ~
Ryter: Back Home!
Chapter 3: The Suspicious Student Named Ryter Part 2
~ Ryter walks in through the door and sees soldiers hurt ( Non Violent They Got in a Bar Fight that's all )
CommanderOho: The... Kids named... .Agh... Ryan and... Ah... Chad.. they got in a bar fight with me
Ryter: i know exactly were to find them...
SoldierTowai: Ryter follow me let's go toward the Teleport Room
~ Ryter goes in the teleporter and follows Ryan and chad ~
~ At The Easy-Breezy Cafe ~
Ryan: Ok what would you...
~ Ryter breaks in through the window ~
Aura Link From The New Orleans Story: Omg!! Ryan its Ry... Ry... agh...
~ Aura Fainted ~
Ryan: Ryter what do you want!!
Ryter: i want.... YOU!!! and CHAD!!!!!!!!!
~ Ryan kicked Ryter toward the roof ~
~ Ryter flew on the roof hitting through the wall and Ryan backflipped on the roof ~
Ryan: Bring it!
~ Ryter used his Lighting Powers 19 times and it missed ~
Ryan: That's the Best you got!?!
Ryter: Oh No... its not...
Ryan: Uh Oh...
~ Ryter took a Heat Seeking Knock-Out Ray and shot it at Ryan and he knocked out and Ryter put Ryan on his arm ~
Chad: Let Go Of Ryan!!!
Ryter: i wouldn't count on it...
~ Ryter threw Ryan at the edge of a trashcan ~
~ Chad hit Ryter 19 Times Without Missing ~
Ryter: You Fight Hard... Not As Hard as this!
~ Ryter used a POWERFULL POWERSURGE KNOCK OUT PUNCH on Chad ~
~ Ryter took them to base ~
To Be Continued....
iRaccoon 09-09-2007, 12:56 AM Growl... its Rude what you said -_-
iRaccoon 09-09-2007, 09:34 AM Chapter 4: The Prison-Break, The Loss Of A Friend, The Last Stander
Chad: Wh... Where am i??
Ryan: Were in ah!!
~ Ryan get's pulled on a robot arm ~
Ryan: Chad Help Me!
Chad: i cant! Ryan!
Ryan: Chad!
~ Ryan tried using his powers but he got shocked and knocked out ~
Chad: Ryan.... Narrator: Remembering his friend and a few emotions and things they did together Emotions: :bnindifferent: :sadd2:|:hug:<-- Memories:bawling:<-- Emotions..:lachen70::lachen70:<--- Good Time Laughs...----> Scary Movies Night:PopcornSmilie::sofa:>---- When In Need:ththerethere6il:..
Chad: Sigh... i miss Ryan already
~ Chad heard screams ~
Ryan: Chad!!! Help He's!!! ----
Chad: Ryan! You Ok!
~ Chad gets tossed into a Arena ~
Ryan: i'm ok Chad... very.... ok...
~ 1 Hour Later ~
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Chad: We Gotta Stop Fighting!!!!
Ryan: ...
Chad: Our Friendship is down!!!!
Ryan: Friendship is a unknown word in my programming....
~ Chad Knocked Out ~
~ Meanwhile 7 Days Later..... ~
Chad: Where... Where am i???
Chad: Phew.. just a bad dream... wait a type recorder??
~ Chad turned it on ~
Ryter: Yes... Ryan is here with me.... and he's a lightingstormer.... look out the window....
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Chad: Oh... My.... Gosh...
Narrator: The Town was filled with lightstormers burned down buildings red cloudy, poulted skies.....
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iRaccoon 09-27-2007, 05:29 AM bump! Bump! Bump! Reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nobody Ever Replies~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
iRaccoon 10-02-2007, 04:54 AM Chapter 5: The Running And Meeting With The Resistance...
~~Chad Felt Sad And Angry he felt Angsy~~
~~ Chad Felt A Certain Vision Surge He Never Felt Before~~
****OLD FASHIONED GUITAR AND VOICE MUSIC: Avatar The Last Airbender: The END OF THE GAME*****
~~~GOING through burned down buildings through a Alley into a NON-Runned Down Hideout~~~
Ryter {i'm Guessing blow up all the escape routes in the city except my private helicopter no?? Do you agree Ryan??}
Ryan: I Agree It Will Be A Good Honor To Grasp At
Ryter: Exactly Ryan....... Rest Down At Your Bed Now....
Ryan: :2:
~~~~Out The Door Over The Roof Go 10 Blocks into a abandoned blown up hotel into a Poker Room~~
hone:Minz how we gunna fight against da army of Ryter?? or should we say "The Enterrunningly Strong Army Of Ryter??" (TESAOR)
Minz: It'll Be A Peice Of Cake Hone we'll just steal da keys and escape out this place but.... we need help to leave with our family,children, and loved ones......
Hone: We'll Get Through This But What About That Prisoner Chad They Held Prisoner???
Minz: We'll Free Him....
Hone: Awesome!
Minz: Yes Very Awesome Indeed.....
~~~BOOOOOM!!!!!!!!! BACK INTO Chad's Eyes!!!!!!!!!!~~~
Chad: I Gotta Do This Stuff On The List Gonna Keep This Folk Waiting For Me So READERS!!! Wait please and be patient here's my list enjoy it!
END
Help Ryan {If Not Able To Complete Head To Plan2}
Convince Ryter To Take Me Prisoner
HAVE THE RESISTANCE ARMY FREE ME
Have Minz stay at my apartment
Make Minz Get A Job For Ryter
Get Ryter Public Helipcopter Enterance Key
Get A Pass To Get Through The Shields Of The City with Ryter's CITY PASS CODE304003
Enter Password: 94949
iRaccoon 10-07-2007, 12:06 AM THE MOVIE: Time Machine Mania :23:
~~Chad starts the time machine~~
Chad: If i'm gonna save Chad i gotta go save his past-self from Ryter....
~~Chad Jumps Into The Time Machine And Falls into a Future Car of his Civic~~
Chad: Erm... is that a WANTED poster??? is that?? that's me!? omg i'm in the future!
~~Chad Looks Around~~
Chad: Is That A??? A??? PAID Tron Bounty Hunter And A HIGHLY TRAINED Tron Ninja in a Tron Speeder!?! oh my gosh!
~~~~Movie Scene~~~~
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~~End Movie Scene~
~Chad is driving against the speed limit of 20 and he's going 90 MPH while the Tron Members are going atleast 24 MPH~~
Chad: Oh Shoot... i know!!
~~Chad Pulls Into A Dark Alley~~
Chad: hey.. isn't this the Dark Alley ryan told me about his powers of??
TronNinja: There He Is!!! Surrender!! Chad Liners!!
~~Chad then drove back onto the No Road Space Travel Highway~~
Chad: Hey?? i know this part of this place! it was in my vision...
TronBountyHunterAndTronNinjaInUnison: SURRENDER!!!!!!!!!
Chad: NO!
~~Chad reaches a mysterious shooter with no ammo in it~~
Chad: What The... heh...
~~Chad shoots the Tron Brotherhood Members PowerLauncher X-UV3~~
TronBountyHunterAndTronNinjaInUnison: AH!!!!!!!! WE'VE BEEN SHOT! WERE HIT! WERE... screaming to special effects??
~~Chad is already gone~~
TronNinja: Wherever he has gone we'll find 'em
~~~Into The Highway 34.9 Eastern Serveway Alley with a dim bulb light in the "Chef LeZone's Pizza Hotel" is now broken saying "Chef Le Zza"~~~
Chad: Here's that hideout where Minz and Hone are....
~~Chad creeks open the door~~
Chad: Hello!? Minz? Hone?? You Here??
~~A Figure appears in front of Chad~~
Minz: Hello Chad ive been expecting you....
Hone: Sup Chad
Chad: Hello heard around town that your looking for me??
Minz: I Heard That You Have The Mysterious Powers Gift...
Hone: I Heard That Ryter doesn't have Ryan under control by Ryan himself want's to be evil....
Chad: No... that can't be Ryan
Minz: i'm afraid its true
Hone: Listen... We've arranged a meeting with someone in a city we'll listening online and they scared the hat off a boy worked at Coffe Shop!
Minz: Yep they also met enemy of Ryter... Skuller
Hone: They Have.... but we also have to finish this city and plan with our "Meeting Person"...
Chad: i'll do it... but i guess i failed at saving Ryan
Minz: its ok.. Chad convince Ryter to take you prisoner at once
Chad: i'll do it for the sake of the team Minz
Minz: Good! but you must fight ALL the lightstormers until you get the key to sell #490 they'll put you in there
Chad: this place was followed by the Tron Brotherhood pack up and go toward my apartment my home is guarded by lightstormers but my Apartment isn't because the elevator in my apartment is shut off PERMANENTLY and the stairs are long like 30403490 steps and my Jet-Packs have UNLIMITED fuel
Minz: maybe we could use them to get into your apartment... but i must get a job with Ryter to free you Chad...
Chad: Good Point... Hone you sneak in steal a lightstormers suit and follow me and Minz got it??
Hone: Got it!
Minz: i must get Ryter's key but i can't follow you and Hone due to me getting a job
ChadAndHoneInUnison: Good Point
The Two Put up a face: O_o
Chad: i'll get the shield pass and enter code 94949
Minz: Ok were good to go!
~~A Few Hours Later....~~
Chad: Darn prison is so low down now
Minz: Ya Ready To Be Free'ed?
Chad: as ever...
~~Minz runs toward the apartment~~
Chad: Ok now i must call Hone...
~~Chad dials Hone's Phone Number~~
<Chad> Ok Hone almost done...
<Hone> K.
~~Chad closes his cell phone~~
~~Dials Minz Number~~
<Chad> Erm... Yeah come back..
~~Few Mints Later~~
~~Chad puts in code 94949~~
Chad: Ok Go To The Helicopter!!!!!
~~The Friends run toward the Helicopter and fly near the city the "Mystery Person" is in~~
~~Hone goes on his PC and chats with "MysteryUser309" online~~
<Horns-R-US> You There??
MysteryUser309: Ready So When Ya Coming
Horns-R-US: In A Few Days So Stay Somewhere and keep me updated~~
MysteryUser309: K
Blossomflower 10-07-2007, 04:19 AM >_< please dont use my character, guestalina.
the_phoenix 10-07-2007, 04:28 AM I agree with Blossom, Do not use someone else's character UNLESS you've asked them and they said yes.
iRaccoon 10-07-2007, 07:33 PM Chapter One: The Meeting
~~Minz is flying the helicopter~~
~~Hone is asleep on the window~~
~~Chad is asleep on the seat~~
Narrator: it was silent for a while but.... only Chad had the courage to break it....~~
Chad: So? What's the name of mysteryuser309?
Minz And Hone In Unison: Unknown
Chad: Unknown?
Hone: No were saying we don't know their name yet
Chad: oh....
~~Minz lands on in the alley, takes the keys out and locks the door~~
Chad: ok now let's go toward the--
~~Chad was cut off by a dark figure just standing at the end of the alley~~
Chad: Erm.... that cat is weird...
THE FRIENDS VISUAL VIEW:
:42: :beret::6z::6z:
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~~Chad walks into the Coffe Shop place~~
Chad: Excuse Me Wor--
~~Chad was cut off by the working boy saying "GO AWAY!!!!!!!!!!"~~
Chad: o_o
Boy: GO!!!!!!!!!
~~The Boss walked in~~
Boss: Boy Your Fired for 9 Weeks and 4 Months Now GET GOING!!!!!
Boy: Erm.... eh.... bye....
Chad: o_o
Boss: What would ya like?
Chad: have you seen a pack of wild-a-beast... erm.. i mean eleves shouting for alot of food??
Boss: Hahah! Of Course i have! there back there!
~~Alvvy The Elf shifted an eyebrow~~
~~Chad walked toward the table~~
Chad: Hello
~~The Friends#2 Were Busy talking to the guest~~
Chad: Hello???
~~The Friends#2 Were Busy Talking To The Guest~~
Chad: QUIET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Elvy: What!?
Chad: Who's MysterUser309!?
~~The Friends#2 raised all there hands~~
Minz: Erm You Guys Share The Same Account o_o
Erviers: Yeppers
~~Minz slapped Erviers silly with a wet rag~~
Erviers: OW!!!!
Minz: Heh...
Ersonary: LOL i guess only most of the girls slap Erviers like that ROFL!!!!!!!
~~Minz The Girl And Erviers The Girl were laughing looking like they'd knock Erviers out~~
~~The Friends#2 (Except: Ersonary) looked: O_O~~
Alvy: Ok........
Chad: Ok Now lets---
~~Chad was broken off by a helicopter flying~~
~~Chad takes the Equipment to defeat Ryter~~
~~Chad looks at iRaccoon HIS EVIL EVIL TWIN and sees his suit~~
Chad: Erm.....
~~iRaccoon His EVIL EVIL Twin hissed :42: HISS! HISS!!!! HISS!!!!~~
~~Chad ran scared remembering one of Ryters Elite Lightstormers Costumes~
~~Flashblack~~
iRaccoon THE EVIL EVIL TWIN The Friend Or Lightstormer OR stole a lightstormers suit
What Evil Could Beat Elite Lightstormers??? Why Was iRaccoon THE EVIL EVIL TWIN the only one to hiss at me??
~~END FLASHBACK~~
~~Chad running toward the helicopter to reveal it was being stolen by a thief~~
~~A Mysterious Figure lit up in front of Chad~~
Chad: Erm....
CP: My Name's Calenster but you can call me CP....
Chad: ok now we need a ride
CP: i got a ride...
~~VROOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~
CP: LITTLE FAST AIN'T IT!?!?
Chad: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
CP: WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Chad: YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CP: COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~THE SPEED Limit is 20 and CP is going 999~~
~~VRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM~~~~~
CP: OK HERE COMES THE BRIDGE SO WERE GONNA LAND INSIDE MY FRIENDS AIRCRAFT AIRPLANE OK!?!?!!?!?
Chad: OK!!!!!!!!!!!!
Minz: OKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hone: DOOOOOOUGHNUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chad and Minz: o_o
~~ They land inside the helicopter and sparks fly~~
~~~SCREEECH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~
ECK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
~~THE TIRES BURN OFF~~
Chad: ugh....
Blossomflower 10-07-2007, 09:14 PM >_< why is this story going into my story now? >_<!
iRaccoon 10-08-2007, 05:17 AM BlossomFlower i'll make yer characters elves in a cofe shop....
Blossomflower 10-08-2007, 06:06 AM cool LOL thx...
iRaccoon 10-08-2007, 11:13 PM CONTINUED...
Chad: Ugh....
Minz: Erm....
Hone: Ghooo.... st chee......se.... crackers.....
Minz,Chad, And CP put up a face: O_O
~~Shalin walks in~~
This Is Shalin he was the only one to beat a Super Commander Elite Soldier in the Skullins Army his reputation of a Ace Flier makes him famous but also makes him good at getaways and constructed CP's or as you call him Calenster's Vehicle the X-Monarch Getshow. He's made everything in Ripens City Gates....
~~Back To The Show~~
Shalin: Ah... hello Callenster i see your the only one with a X-Monarch Getshow in the city right?? hahah! who are your friends? You get chased by cops again ;) Hahaha! i crack myself up! he he!
CP: No...
~~CP whispered to Minz: He Forgot To Take His Pills today heh...~~
Shalin: I Heard That CP!!!
CP: Darn... he has good ears...
Shalin: indeed...
Chad: So How Are We Gonna--
Hone cut chad off: ok we need a ride to Pumpkiner City were Ryter rules now.. so can you pull it off Shalin??
Shalin: No... i can't...
Hone: Why???....
Shalin: Because..... THIS AIN'T THE RIGHT MOBILISATION TO USE!!! hahah!
Chad: erm....
Shalin: Listen let's make a deal... You scratch me back and i scratch yours
~~Hone scratched Shalin's back~~
Shalin: ah.... that's better now let me scratch yours
Chad: He's So literal....
~~Hone and Shalin where scratching each others back~~
Minz: JUST DRIVE TO THE OTHER PLANE!!!!!
Shalin: What Plane... ;)
_______________6 Hours Later____________________
Chad: I Spy a huge head....
Minz: For The Last Time its Hone and Shalin's head....
CP: ugh...
Chad: we there yet??
CP: Shalin?? You There??
Minz: Hone! Hone! Shalin!
~~Minz, Chad, and CP noticed that the steering wheel was rigged to steer left all the time so it just goes around the city with a huge rock on the gas~~
Minz: this is Ryters doin---
~~CP cut off Minz~~
CP: ---No.... its Skullers work.... Ryter couldn'tve done this... i mean Ryter's evil but not cold hearted..
Chad: CP's right....
~~ Minz took the rigged steering wheel off and took off the boulder~~
~~The Helicopter lost control and crashed right into an SEB Bot Factory~~
SEB's are fully programmed robots Suiation Emergency Bots must've been back-up when some lightstormers fled the city
Chad: So.... ive been gone for 7 Years through a time machine eh???
Minz: So have i...
CP: Me Too ive been here for 8 Years.....
~~They heard the marching of SER's~~
Sensor Electronic Robots
~~The Friends where surrounded by robots~~
~~Chad fell to the ground while some elite bots took Chad to a prison and locked him up with Minz~~
Minz And Chad In Unison: HELP!!!!!
CP: Shoot...
~~CP hit a robots hit off and grabbed their blaster~~
~~CP shot the lock off Minz and Chad's prison cell and ran~~
~~The Robots were shooting but they kept on missing~~
TO BE CONTINUED....................
iRaccoon 10-08-2007, 11:23 PM Chapter Two: The End Of Ryter's Rule...
~~The robots kept shooting but missed every time~~
Chad: This Way!
~~Minz and CP and Chad crawled into the air vent and made it out~~
CP: This is the.... Wo... wo...
Chad: what's wro... wro... wro...
Minz: you guys seem like you've seen a... a..... a.....
~~in front of the friends was a Restricted Un-Licensed T-Viper Exclaiser~~
Chad: Should we??
CP: Take A Ride in??
Minz: The Car....
Chad CP And Minz all shouted "Let's Go!!!"
~~CP started driving at 45 MPH then 90 MPH then 99 MPH then 9090 MPH soon the gauge broke~~
Chad: We Need A Plan to fight Ryter....
~~the hit a few bumpy rocks~~
Minz: Ok first we need to find Shalin and Hone!!
CP: i've got an insider working for Ryter's Battle Commander named TNT!!
CP: He knows where they're holding Shalin and Hone there being held into the "Jolly Dougnuts Factory" eating dougnuts!!!
Minz: Lol
iRaccoon 10-09-2007, 05:04 AM Now A Message From Our Actors....
~~losts of noises~~
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<Ryter> Hello Welcome To My Compentary where i tell you about what we did the inspiration for the UFO in our story but no its not a random prop its a camera that were video..... taping Ryan and Chad as you can see from our design on this... um... we got my suit haha! umm its special effects are like this ;)
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<Ryter> thats about it ok how about i---
<Manager> umm... its time to rap up and its time to go see ya people
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THE NEXT DAY....
<Ryter> Oh Your Back! well as i was saying 29237 thats what we used for my suit scenes and---- 29236
<iRaccoon> Erm... Ryter i know your in a commentary but erm... we have to start the show
<Ryter> Ok So B---
~~Ryter gets pulled to the Make-Up section~~
<iRaccoon> lets go.... -_-
iRaccoon 10-10-2007, 05:35 AM Chapter Three: The Awakening....
~~At The "Three-Headed Stew" Restraunt~~
Ryter: Ok Ryan Ye Da Man! DA MAN!! EYE OF THE TIGER!! RAWR!! RAWR!!
Ryan: O_O
Ryter: Erm... thats Rocky erm.... ok cut!
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<Ryter> What am i supposed to say??
<Narrator> Your Supposed to say **Clears Throught***
Ok... i need you to find Chad.... and bring him to me....
<Ryter> ok thanks
~~~~~~~~~~~~BACK ON~~~~~~~~~~~
Ryan: Yes Master...
~~Meanwhile With Chad~~~
Chad: ok Jolly John here we come!!
~~Chad busts open the door to see a NEW Member['s] and Hone and Shalin~~
Shalin: Hello Chad! Minz! like ya to meet Shaun and Aura, Shaun Liners, Aura Link!
Shaun: Sup
Aura: Hello!
Chad: Ok now wii((((Insider Joke))))) need to go to the X Mobile
Aura: Ditto! ProtonP-434 come on!
Shaun: Yeah Come on Pro!
~~ProtonP-434 The Robot beeped and walked toward the ship~~
PROTON-434 RECORDINGS AND CAMERA VIDEO TAPES ON....
TALKING MODE ON ((COMMANDED BY OWNER: AURA LINK AND SHAUN LINERS.
Proton-434/Pro: We Have Recieved Formal re--- re--- re--- re----
~~Pro explodes~~
Aura: WHAT THE!!!!!!!!!
Shaun: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chad: OHNOES!!!!!!!!
Shalin: MY GOSH!!!!!
CP: I THINK I'M GONNA BE SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hone: SUGAR LEMONADE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~Shaun and Chad And CP put the robots circuits it in Hone and hone talks robot~~
Hone: Proton-434 Activated.... Please Sit.... PROCCESSING... Proccessing..
Ryter is planning on destroying Pumpinker City made by Shalin Q. Pumpkiner III
<Narrator> WHAT TIME IS IT!?! ITS YOU DECIDE TIME!!!!!!!! ITS WHERE YOU DECIDE WHAT HAPPENS!!!
~~OBJECTIVES~~~
[LIST]
Mission Briefing...
Proccessing...
Proccesing..
Proccesing..
PROCCESS COMPLETE
MISSION STAT COMPLETE
Starting Projector
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Proccesing.. Proccesing..
ALERT! ALERT RECENT OBJECTIVE ACTIVATED BY: Anakin Verter
[LIST]
Chad: Anakin Verter?? The Jedi One!?! The Grandchild of Anakin Skywalker!?!!
Aura: he's the one!
Shaun: He's the savior of Pumpinkiner city and Riner City!
Minz And Hone: Where Saved!!
~~Meanwhile on North AV Street~~
~~Anakin Verter force jumps from roof top to roof top~~
Anakin: i feel the sense of Jedi Master Minz approaching....
Anakin: Squadron 501st of Clone Trooper Jedi Masters follow me!
~~The 559th force run toward the prisoners~~
~~Anakin verter lands in the middle of the street~~
~~A XV3 RIPTVVS stops in a SKREEEECH!!!! in the street~~
EliteTronNinja: WHO ARE YOU!! REVEAL YOURSELEVES!!!!!
TronBountyHunter: OR BE TAKEN TO PRISON FOR QUESTIONING!!
TronNinja: NO CO-OPERATION EH!?! Then Here some---
~~Tron Ninja was cut off by himself~~
TronNinja: Wait... i know that guy... he's... he's Anakin Verter!
TronBountyHunter: he'll make a good trophy indeed...
~~Anakin Verter force knocked them out and stole there XV3 RIPTVVS and drives off~~
~~~They park at the prison~~
Anakin: There here... i sense their presence.... Clones plant a bomb on this wall....
CloneJedi: On it sir!
~~The Bomb was planted~~
~~Meanwhile INSIDE the prison~~
Chad: So??? Anakin Verter's coming eh?? so i sup---
~~The wall blew up~~
Anakin: Everyone in the car now....
~~The Friends except Chad and Shaun left into the car~~
Anakin: GET INSIDE!
Chad: i have a bad feeling about this dude...
Shaun: Me too....
Anakin: fine where leaving without you to Pumpkiner city where safety lies apon us!
~~they started the vehicles airplane mode~~
~~A tear dropped from Minz eye missing her home Pumpkiner City but she cracked a smile~~
~~Aura simply looked at Shaun and Chad wondering why they stayed...~~
~~5 Days Later.....~~
~~In SOLITAIRE PRISON~~
Chad: Ugh.... why did we have to stay!
Shaun: it was your idea Chad....
Chad: i'm soooo dumb......
Shaun: now where gonna be gone from earth forever!!
Chad: No where gonna be trained to be lightstormers....
Lightstormer: o_o guys your in the hockey room O_O
Chad: THE HORROR!!
Blossomflower 10-10-2007, 06:26 AM >_< ok. LOL
TomorrowAlpha 10-12-2007, 01:49 AM Well... uh, it's.... uh....interesting Racoon! Keep up the, uh.... good work!
iRaccoon 10-14-2007, 04:28 AM ~~Anakin Verter smashes down the hockey room door~~
Anakin: HOLD IT RIGHT LIGHTSTORMER!!
~~Anakin force gripped the lightstormer and threw him at an IceStormer playing hockey~~
Minz: Yo Chad!
Aura: Hey Shaun!
Shalin And Hone: Grab The Lightstormers weaponary!!
~~they grabbed their weaponary~~
Shalin: In the Blueprints#4 the short-cut to the main power source is... is... EXACTLY RIGHT HERE!!
~~Shalin charged the rocketlauncher~~
~~Chad loaded the small weapon~~
~~Minz steaded the cannon~~
~~CP ate a burrito~~
Shalin, Chad, Minz,: FIRE!!!
~~they blew a opening inside the wall and there it was the power source the crystal it powers all the robots in the city but... alongside the crystal was EliteStormers~~
EliteStormer: There They Are GET THEM!!!
~~Chad, Minz, Shalin, and Hone put down the weapons and ran~~
~~Chad ran next to CP and grabbed a burrito from the car~~
~~a EliteStormer ran next to Chad and CP and took a burrito out of nowhere and started eating it~~
Shalin: MINZ DISTRACT THEM!!
~~Minz distracted them~~
~~Shalin grabbed the crystal~~
~~Robots barged into the place~~
~~Shalin threw the crystal on the floor and it broke~~
PICTURE THIS IN SLOW MOTION:
ff..... ff.... ffff.... f..... f.... BING!!! ~IT BREAKS~~
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~~The robots fell down~~
~~the EliteStormer walked toward his fallen EliteStormers (NO THEY'RE NOT DEAD THERE TIRED OF CHASING MINZ!! DARN MINZ CAN RUN!!)
~~The EliteStormer said "Erm.. ok....~~
~~The EliteStormer fell down~~
iRaccoon 10-29-2007, 05:24 AM Chapter Four: The Escaping
~~Chad, Minz, CP, Hone, Shaun, Aura and Shalin all ran~~
Minz: Hey Where Is Anakin Verter??
Chad: I Don't Know....
CP: He Must've Ran Off
Shalin: Well Atleast We've Escaped And Its Morning While The Sun Is Rising
Chad: We Have To Split Up
Chad, Shalin, CP, Minz, Shaun, Aura: Got It!
~~They Split Up~~
Shaun's Pathway:
Shaun: Shoot upcoming wooden gate ahead...
Excuse Me Yeah But Light Blue means slow motion Mmmkay..
Shaun jumped over the wooden gate with his hands first then feet last but he didn't touch it with his feet..
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Chad's Pathway
Chad: Almost There....
~~GR's popped out at suprise at Chad (GR: Generator Robots: These Robots Do Not Need The Crystal To Function)
Chad: AH!!! GR'S!
Chad jumped onto each of their heads to get to the other side they all broke down when he landed on them
Chad: Take That! Onlu Inches Away Toward The Helicopter XSD-59!
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Aura And Hone's Pathway
Aura: Look Hone! Its Our Familiar Path Which We Took To Get Off The XSD-59!
Hone: Yeah!
Aura: But there is a wreck of bricks in the way we gotta jump them!
Aura And Hone ran up the walls with their boots called "Sticky Boots" And They Landed Into The Helicopter's Pilot Seats
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EVERYONE HAS NOW BEEN FORMED TOGETHER AT THE HELICOPTER
Chad: Guys Come On!
Aura: Right Behind You Guys!
~~The XSD-59 started to rise off ground and only CP wasn't on~~
Shaun: Where's CP!?!
Minz: Shoot! He's Still On Ground!
~~Just Then CP was running toward the helicopter~~
CP front-flipped over the barrel then he threw a bucket full of water at the big fire wall then he front flipped over the bricks then he landed into the helicopter
Chad: Wow!
CP: Thanks Man
Aura: Well Atleast We've Lost---
~~Aura was cut by Ryter's voice~~
Ryter: Hello Did You Guys Miss Me?
~~Ryter was in a Helicopter Jet which flew in place and there was atleast 999,999,999 troops inside there~~
Chad: No!! How Could We Miss A Boy As Evil As You??
Ryter: Ah... That's Were Your Wrong...
Chad: Say Wha......
Ryter: Chad.... there is one person in your ship that is a double crosser...
Chad: But Who??
Ryter: Try To Find Out....
~~Shaun looked both ways and pushed Chad off the helicopter~~
Chad: AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~He Landed into the fluffy pillows factory~~
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Sorry Guys Gotta Split
BLUEglassROSE 11-08-2007, 04:20 AM Interesting Story :)
Stemaboat_Tyler 11-17-2007, 12:54 AM lol nice story so far
iRaccoon 11-17-2007, 06:23 AM Continued....
~~BAAAAAAASHH~~~
~~Shaun got a disabler and threw it at their engine it looks something like this :turkey: ~~
Ryter: Agh!!!!
~~Ryter then fell and landed into the DJ Party Disco~~
Ryter: What The...
Chad: Heh...
Chad: Hit it DJ!!!
~~"I Like To Move It" Music Starts~~
~~Green means DANCE CONTEST~~
Chad backflipped 9 times in one jump and the judge is pleased:turkey3:
Ryter head-spinned and breakdanced freestyle:turkey3:
Ryter: Beat That!!!
Chad: Oh i will!
Chad jumped and wall ran up the wall and landed on his finger:turkey3:
AUDIENCE VIEW:
:musik011::musik011::musik011::musik011:
Ryter: ENOUGH!!!
~~Ryter kicked Chad toward the wall~~
Chad: Grrr....
Shaun: :turkey5::turkey5::turkey5:
Ryter: Erm...
Chad: Umm...
~~Chad kicked Ryter and threw him at a building~~
PICTURE:
:dragonball005:☻
~~The Enemies Fled And Some Even Cried And Went To Their Uncle Lightstormer ahaaaa.....~~
Chad: We'll see him ne---
~~Minz slapped Chad with a fish~~
~~Hone slapped chad with a whale~~
~~CP slapped Chad with a building~~
~~Aura slapped Chad with a monkey~~
Chad: OWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~they knocked him out with 40594059 HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE Whales~~
TO BE CONTINUED....
iRaccoon 11-22-2007, 05:29 AM Chapter Five: Topanikasana City (Toe-Pan-Ick-Ah-san-ah)
~~Chad woke up in Shalin's Bedroom Room in his Airborne Jet Frigate~~
~~Chad moaned~~
Chad: Wha... Wha... What happened??
Minz: YOU DESTROYED PUMPKINER CITY!!!!! NOW THE ONLY GOOD CITY ON EARTH IS CORNER CITY!!!!!!!!
Chad: How.. How... How long has it been??
Shalin: its been 4 Weeks.... and were heading toward Topanikasana City
~~Chad held his aching head while holding a blanket on himself because its been a cold cold winter...~~
Chad: That's my home town...
Minz: i thought Pumpkiner City was...
Chad: No i just moved there...
Shalin: WERE HERE!!!!!!!
~~Shalin landed in an alley and everyone jumped out and Chad insisted on staying~~
Chad: no i'll stay...
Hone: Fine. We'll go find a home dealer to rent a home to stay at for a few days...
Chad: Ok Good Luck!
~~Chad got up~~
Chad: WAIT!!!
~~Shunt landed in front of Chad~~
iRaccoon 11-22-2007, 08:09 AM CONTINUED...
Shunt: Hello Chad...
Chad: Hello! its Ryter!!
~~Shunt changed into Ryter~~
~Ryter pushed Chad into a portal to the Death Turkey!!!!~
VIEW ":turkey:"
~~Chad flipped on his light saber and so did Ryter~~
SMILEY FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!
• Recording
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:gewalt188:
:dragonball001: RYTER "Give Up Chad!!"
:dragonball001: CHAD "NEVER!!!!!! RAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!:dragonball002:"
RYTER "RAAAAA!!!!!!!!! :dragonball002:"
:dragonball005::dragonball014::dragonball012: Chad used all these attacks
:gewalt133:END BATTLE : RYTER " No wait wrong sign its supposed to say BROTHER!!!!!!!!
Chad: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
~~Chad falls off the railing and lands inside a ship~~
SEASON 3 COMES OUT IN 2008!!!!!!!!
Cinnamon Minuet 11-22-2007, 08:48 AM Uhm, no offense...but there's not much of a plot...DX
iRaccoon 11-23-2007, 11:51 AM Exactly. Their so weird they don't need a plot XP
Insanity 11-23-2007, 12:19 PM Cool story, but I suggest some grammar. Like "I" not "i", and some more punctuation.
iRaccoon 11-23-2007, 12:25 PM Yes Thank You For Pointing That Out
However... This Story will be out with Season 3 in the summer of 2008
For Now.... Read Hamster Story A Series That Never Ends! my story with cute little hamsters in it that are always on adventures and sometimes a little humor heh heh... that mischievous Likesy!
iRaccoon 11-25-2007, 02:47 AM SORRY IF I AM DOUBLE POSTING BUT
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I'm Kinda Doing Hamster Story everyone once a week and Powers one a week too so lets read!
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Heh heh sorry i'm going to do this on 2020 lol!!! no wait on 2008
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OH NVM
iRaccoon 01-09-2008, 10:11 PM Chapter Six: The Changing Of Life
2 Years Later..
It has been 2 Years since the incident of Skullins and Ryter, Chad and Ryan changed their names.. Minz and Hone changed their names as well. Shaun and Aura were dropped off in a village called Smear Village Of The East.. Hone changed his name to (Josp) Minz changed hers to (Liana) Chad changed his to (Max) Ryan changed his to (Arrows) Shalin changed his to (Commander Rebora) and CP Changed his to (Rosterin), Shalin started a army to fight the remaining Robots and CP is the Sargent..
And The Fight Is Returning In Spectorial City
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*Max drives a Quick-TankDriveFighter to the east of town while Arrows fires at the Robotic Cars
Max{RadioInWithJosp}: Hey Josp Were being in Persuit of Sir Skullins!
Josp{RadioInWithMax}: Stop, Turn Around, Fire The Robotic Disabllier
**Max fired the Robotic Distaybler
Max: Alright!!
Arrows: Skullins is getting away!!
Max{RIWJ}: I Need Emergency Speeding Vehicles NOW!
Josp{RIWM}: I'll Get Liana and Rebora on the job!
**Rebora and Liana speed off past Arrows and Max, Rebora was driving and Liana was firing the cannons at the SWAT Team Robots
Arrows{RadioInWithReboraAndLiana}: We'll take care of them!
~~BANG BANG BOOM BANG BOOM~~
MEANWHILE..
Skullins: Ryter i need you to distract the Rokstins Army!
Ryter: Yes Sir!
**Ryter jumps out and fires the Freeze Ray at them
**The Sports Car dodges all of them
Rebora: Uh Oh..
Liana: What?
Rebora: We Be Out Of Mickey Magic!
Liana: Gas?
Rebora: Yes were out of Gas!
**Car slows down
**Max speeds past them
Rebora{RIWM}: Max its up to you!
Arrows{RadioInWithReboraAndLiana}: We have encountered some problems with those Hired TRRRRRRRROOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Max: Arrows?
Arrows: Grr... THIS IS FOR RESHUNA VILLAGE MY VILLAGE!!!!!!!!!!
**Arrows loads his private stash of Robot Disabling Explosives
Max: Whoah Arrows are you ok??
**Arrows fires at their cars, the Robot-Tron, and their tires
~~~BOOOOM BOOOM BOOM BOOMBOOMBOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!~~~
**Fire shows in the back with the two hired tron escaping and they throw their contracts to work for Skullins and Ryter inside the fire
Max: We Should Capture Them and their army.. WAIT A MINUTE.. He's boarding one of Beps (Aura) and Boors (Shaun)'s vehicles..
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<> Means Radio-Communications
<#> Means Radio-Communications with another army
<%#> Means LOUD RADIO meaning others can hear the communication
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<#Beps#> Brens we've captured the Tron and recruited them Return Us Back To The Base!
Max: Beps!
Beps: Max??
Boors: Chad!?
Max: Its MAX now
Boors: Oh sorry
<#%Brens%#> What happened what is going on over there!?
<#Beps#> We've found allies. Form the army and fire at Skullins i've heard our South has a good shot at them now order them to fire at Skullins tires and tell the troops to surround Skullins!
<#%Brens%#> Copy That.
<#Beps#> I SAID!..
<#%Brens%#> Oi not like dat gosh..
**BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM!!**
Boors: They Got Em.
Max: YEAH!
iRaccoon 01-11-2008, 02:54 AM Bumpity Bump
iRaccoon 01-21-2008, 12:13 AM Ok So here are the character names people
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"Chad" - Max
"Hone" - Josp
"Minz" - Liana
"Ryan" - Arrows
"Shalin" - Rebora
"CP/Calenster" - Rosterin
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If someone wants to be in my story go ahead and ask i'll let anyone in my story!
Just tell me what side you want your character to be on, Give me details, Give me a name for him/her, Give me a new name, Thats It!
iRaccoon 02-10-2008, 05:16 AM Special Mood Chapter One: Completely Unrealistic Fun
~~Best song to go with chapter : Orange Lounge - Mobo Moga~~
We find our heroes rolling down a rail-roadtrack hill.
Max and the team where rolling down a hill.
Ryter was following them in a jeep.
The team then replaced Ryter's wheels with themselves and they kept rolling
Ryter jumped out and hit the camera
He slid down
The team members Josp and Max had lipstick on and they were wearing dresses and saying "Does This Lipstick Make Me Look Hip?" Max then said "It makes you look weird!" Josp paused and kicked Max toward the sun.
They continued rolling off without Max.
Josp turned into a fast tractor and Max fell from the sky and drove it.
Max ran over the team and flatened them to a pancake
Rosterin was flying with Ryter and they continued and they tapdanced while flying in mid-air
They started saying "WERE GOING ON A BUS! WERE GOING ON A BUS!! WERE GOING ON A BUS!!!!!!!"
Ryter was becoming good in this commotion.
His suit and Skullins control ship exploded. His regular clothes showed and his hair turned brown then the control chip Skullins put on his suit controlled him to do battle with the team.
~Best song for Flashback- Pirates Of The Caribbean-Davy Jones or The Kraken~
Skullins gave me pizza to go tell you that Luke found out that DarthVader is his father and Skullins is still evil LOL :)
iRaccoon 02-11-2008, 04:29 AM Chapter Eight: Dancing Contest
The team arrived at Ryter's Home-town but what they found was sad.
The national dance contest took place here.. There was just buildings abandoned. A few goats walking around in this village with cottage homes.
A DJ out on the field screamed "EVERYBODY DANCE NOW!!"
The team approached the hill and saw a dance contest.
Ryter was on stage.
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ENTERING DANCE CONTEST....
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Ryter was dancing and started doing hand-stands. His competeor "Ruben" was dancing too, he clapped and barrel-rolled-frontflipped off the stage and pointed at Ryter.
Ryter was moving with a cow bell on his hand and he jumped off the 10 huge signs and he flipped 3445 times in the sky and he landed on his hand then he started hand-standing and he rolled all the way to the ground.
MAXIUM LAVA INFERNO!!!!!!!
Numbers appeared on Ryter's hand.
1
2
3
4
5
1000000000000000000000000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ryter jumped and a tale of a dragon's flame appeared and it slammed onto a pot filled with sticks. The pot lighted lava red.
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End Of Contest
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Ryter won.
Ruben wanted to follow in Ryter's foot-steps.
Max decided it. Ruben was their Map Navigator,
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aggieathlete 02-11-2008, 04:46 AM WOW!!! I so totally love this thread and all the funny pics you have made LOL see you around iRaccoon
iRaccoon 02-12-2008, 12:05 AM Thanks Aggieathlete. Who knows i might PM you a private chapter and a few oppertunities ;)
iRaccoon 03-07-2008, 03:51 AM The Road Ending
Sorry Guys! The Story Is Ended This is the last chapter! I've really come close to the imaginary cast.. The chapter is tomorrow :)
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