what
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LOL

LOL
Chapter 8
Camp Back Break

The friends went really stiff when they heard him say that.
" WHO THE HEY AE YOU WEIRDOS? " The guy said.
" Im Monkey, this is Flower- "
" Did I say you can talk?!?! "
" No but- "
" BUT WHAT?! "
Monkey grew silent.
" Mr... where are we? " Teddy asked.
" Camp Sunshine. But people call it Camp Back Break! Now drop and give me twenty! " I have a feeling this isn't good. " Berry whispered to Monkey.
End of chapter 8!

Chapter 9
War!! Part 1

Teddy was doing push ups when the sky turned a dark grey.
Lightning was appearing.
It was raining.
Black dots were far way, but they were coming closer and closer.
Sticklin!
Dora!
And Lucky!
Around Lucky was his VMK character, his pirates character, his maplestory charachter, and his club penguin character.
Dora had easy buttons that she was going to throw at them, Sticklin had a zapper, Lucky has pencils that he was going to throw at them, the club penguin guy had snowballs, maplestory guy had a blue flower, that was normal spped, and did 51 damage ( i really have that formy maple character ), and his pirates character had a sword.
" Wait! " the guy from camp said.
He took of his mask, and said, " Monkey, I am your father. "
" HI DAD! I HAVENT SEEN YOU IN AGES! " Berry and Monkey said.
They went over to their dad and hugged them for a short while.
" Dad, can you help us defeat these weirdos? " Monkey asked.
" Okey Dokey. " He said.
End of part 1 of chapter 9!

LOL maplestory..

*zaps with wand*? i'm only a lowly level 15 magician o.o
LOL

Part 2 of chapter 9!
Guitar Hero Saves The Day

The heroes were surrounded by bad guys.
Berry took out a guitar hero guitar and started playing it.
" Berry! This is no time to be playing guitar hero! " Monkey yelled.
" I know. But this is my special guitar. "
" So? "
" Youll see. "
He started playing it, and lazers zapped out of it.
Ok folks. This scene is going to be way to violent for this website to handle. Ive been working on it WAY to hard for the thread to explode so... wait until the fights over.
End of part 2 of chapter 9!

Part Three Of Chapter 9: End of book 12... i think?

It was the end of the battle.
Monkey had no ear, but it looked as if he wasnt hurt at all.
He found his ear, took out some tape, and re-attached it.
" We destroyed Sticklin and everybody else, so i guess we should end this thread. " Silver said.
" What? Are you crazy? We worked so hard on this story! " Hikoik yelled.
They got in to a fight. Again.
" Dont lock this thread just yet. " A voice behind them said.
It was Sticklin's ghost!
" I told you were indestuctable. Youll never win Monkey! NEVER! "
End of Book 12

LOL "We should end this thread."
"WHAT? R U CRAZY? WE WORKED SO HARD ON THIS STORY!"

LOL

i still enjoy the randomness LOL

Book 13
---------------------```````````~~~~~~~ The Cat Named Tink ( Tis my real cat. :) )

Chapter 1
The Mysterious Cat Tht Really Doesnt Like Hikoik

Somehow, the enemies got back in their bodies.
" Mail! Come get your mail! " A guy in his underwear with an eye on his leg screamed.
He gave Sticklin a package, Monkey a letter, and everybody else got dirt.
Sticklin's packge said To: Sticklin From: Grandma.
He opened it and there was a cat.
Sticklin took the cat out of the box and it hissed at Hikoik.
" Tink! Your here! " Lucky33325 said.
" This is your cat? I guess it got labeled wrong then. " Sticklin said as he gave Tink to Lucky.
" Who's my kitten? " Lucky asked Tink.
" Meow! " Tink answered.
The cat picked up nearby chair and threw it at Hikoik.
" Tink... dont you remember me? " Hikoik asked.
" Me too? " Teddy asked.
" Meow! "
Tink went over to hikoik ad slapped him.
" I guess she doesnt. " Hikoik said to teddy.
End of chapter 1! :D

Tink.

rotfl.

No kidding. I really have a cat named tink. No i wasnt thinking of LittleTinkFairy. Teddy made up the name.

tink.
hehe.
hehehe.
LOL i find it amusing cuz it reminds of littletinkfairy LOL

Lol. What happened to her anyway?

Chapter 2
Lucky... A Good Guy?

" Wait a sec, didnt Tink dislike you because you played to rough with her? " Hikoik asked.
" Heh heh... maybe? " Lucky said.
Tink started growling at Lucky, and Tink attacked Lucky's head.
" Get the hey off meh! AHH! " Lucky yelled.
Lucky started to walk over to Monkey and them holding Tink.
" I think its time I joined your team. " Lucky said with lots o scratches on his face.
5 new good guys added: Lucky33325, Lucky33325's Maplestory Guy, Lucky33325's VMK Guy, Lucky33325's Club Penguin Guy, and Lucky33325's Pirates Online Guy.
" Great. Now we hav like 6 million good guys. " Hioik said.
" Yeah right. " Silver said.
They got into a fight. Again.
End of chapter 2!

Chapter 3
Lucky's And Bear's B-Day

It was July 16th, which was his b-day ( its really me and bear's b-day. )
And they celebrated it... FIN
End of chapter 3! :D

LOL the cat attacked you LOL

happy b-day XD

Six Flags! More Flags! More Fun! :D

Chapter 4
To The Maple Land

Sticklin got mad at lucky for joining the good side ( where they have oatmeal instead of cookies ) so Sticklin chased them all the way back to Monkey's house.
They went over to his computer.
" Hurry Hurry! Log in to Maplestory! My Username is - CENSORED -! My Password is - CENSORED - and my pin number is - CENSORED -! " Monkey yelled to flower, who was typing in the info.
The freinds disappeared into the game.
They where in Henesys, the town of the bowmen, and the town of drop game.
End of Chapter 4!

I've been reading this and ♥ it, just didn't wanna post. 5 stars; and DUUUUUUDE! MAPLESTORY!! Can they, like, meet Bluanna in Heneseys, who is, like, a wicked strong warrior in a rad and white tube top, a red bandana, red skirt, and red boots, and fights with a gigantic axe?! ....what?! I'm in Heneseys now! GEEZ!

.:Blue:.

Rofl. you wanna be in the story?

Chapter 5
Balrog! RUN AWAY! ( Part 1 )

Sticklin got in Maplestory, and he looked really funny.
Sticklin chased them into Sleepywood, which was one of the dungeons in Maplestory.
It was a dangerous place with really powerful monsters like wild karko, which is a giant purple dog that takes out 300 health, and the friends only had 1000 health. Monkey was running with all the friends.
Monkey was running so fast, he fell over a rock and fell in an abyss.
" Monkey!! " Berry yelled.
When he got to the bottom, he saw a strange monster. It was brown, it had wings, and it was furry.
" I think this is a balrog... RUN! " Monkey yelled.
End of part 1 of chapter 5!

LOL Balrog...and yeah! I would! LOVE the new chapter!

YAY
MAPLESTORY

WOOOO!

LOL

BALROG
RUNNNN LOL they smell my face a lot o_O and fyi, i only have 552 health, so um, aheheheh.

rofl. ill put ya in this chapter... somehow.

Chapter 6
The Girl That Popped Out Of The Balrog's Mouth

As Monkey watched in fright as the Balrog was about to swipe at him with his paw, the Balrog started making a sound that sounded like a cat was coughing up a hair ball.
He did caugh something up, but it wasnt a hair ball, or a mcdonalds toy.
A little girl came out.
" Who are you? " Monkey asked.
" Im CuteDeeBlue, but you can call me Blue for short. "
" Ok. But there's one problem. Were stuck in an abyss with a anime man eating Balrog. " Monkey said.
End of chapter 6!

Someone, please rate this story!

5 stars!!

Oh, but I'm Bluanna. xD

LOVE IT!

"The Girl Who Popped Out Of The Balrog's Mouth"

xD

.:Blue:.

I didnt mean tell meh the rating, rate it in da corner.

Chapter 7
Pie Is Good ( Didnt Know What To Name It )

They got out somehow. :D You thought that it was gonna be a big part huh? Well you thought wrong.
They met up with the friends again.
" Who the heck is she? " Hikoik said.
" Her name is CuteDeeBlue, but call her Bluanna. " Monkey answered.
" Okey Dokey. " Hikoik said.
The friends were walking and they ran in to a giant purple dog thing.
" What the heck is that? " Silver asked.
Hikoik took out his laptop and looked on HiddenStreet.com.
" It says, its a level 58 monster hats takes out 300 health, and its name is... ( i forgot the name. get over it ) " Hikoik said.
End of chapter 7!

It says, its a level 58 monster hats takes out 300 health, and its name is... ( i forgot the name. get over it ) " Hikoik said.

LOL!!! I forgot the name, get over it. xD

.:Blue:.

Is Monkey Man me? You should know Flower and I are enemies! xD

No, I'M the Monkey Man!

No, i started making monkey man stories when I was really young, so... im not sure if your trying to say i copied, or just trying to be funny.

It's probably just a coincidence.

I'm also called 'The Monkey Man' on TTC Forums. AND another forum, which I had been on since 2001.

It's been my lifetime nickname, since I was a kid. You can still use it in the story, though ;)

K, just dont assume i copied.

Chapter 8
Leafre Warriors

All the people got destoyed because of the monster, so they all got teleported back to the Sleepywood hometown.
Everyone went to Leafre, because they thoght theyed level up faster.
But Leafre is the town of Horned Tail, which Horned Tail is a boss thats like level 150.
And they were only level 30.
They didnt know.
They got to Horned Tail.
" Umm... do you think we can destory him? " Hikoik asked.
" Maybe if some miracle happened, wed be able to. But i dont think anyones gonna let us have a miracle. " Monkey answered.
" RAGGLE FLAGGLE! " Horned Tail yelled.
It swipped at Flower, and she disappeared back to the hometown.
" Everbody. Dont get hit. " Berry said.
End of chapter 8!

HEY!
- eats horned tail -
LOL

let's eat it and get the entire...

"To the team that conquered horned tail after numerous attempts, I salute thee! You are the true heroes of leafre!" or.. something like that.
LOL

Off topic:

f
y
i,

happy birthday to you and bear, i told your bro to tell you and bear that, he didn't, but he claims you were reading the screen. i don't trust him.
LOL

so......
HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
AGAIN.
can't wait for you to transfer to scania. LOL

LOL!!!! Blossomflowa, you just got SERVED!!

And happy happy birthday Lucky! Here's your gi---

Oh, wait, I already gave you the fruit basket 3 days ago. xD

LOL
and heyyyyy i still havent found on you on maplestory!

k, getting offtopic here..

SHARK
MAKE
MO
STORY

i know you havent found me, cause i didnt get the nx card yet. :D

Chapter 9
Darkside

There was this power theifs could use im MS, called Darkside.
It makes it so you cant get hit.
Candy was one ( i think ) so she did that power.
Horned Tail swiped at candy, and she got deafeted.
" Wha...? " Hikoik asked.
" I think this means we cant do anything except move or hit. No power-ups! " Monkey said.
End of chapter 9! :D

LOLZ!!!

I love your sig!!

I shall give a picture of my character, but I warn you... I have mezzed up hair. xD

rofl i made that signature rofl
and shark,i meant cutedeeblue.. but i met her now.
LOL

and it's dark sight LOL and candy ya shes a thief

Chapter 10 ( End Of Book 12 )
Battle on the Ship

Horned Tail swiped at everyone.
Everyone was teleported back.
Everyone forgot ALL about Sticklin.
And you know what?
Sticklin was right behind them.
And you know what?
The ship was about to leave.
And you know what?
Monkey got a rash fighting Horned Tail.
" Were gonna miss our plane/flying ship! Run! " Hikoik yelled
They all got on the ship.
Sticklin got on too.
The ship started, and Monkey was at the bottom part of the ship.
Something poked Monkey's foot with something sharp.
Monkey looked down and saw Sticklin poking his foot with a fencing sword.
He got up with his sword.
He looked like a big threat.
Monkey picked him up, and threw him off the edge.
But dont worry, a Balrog caught him.
End of Book 12!

Preview For Next Book:
The friends get teleported out of Maplestory and go into !@#$ ( Not really a bad word, just covering it up ).

It's probably just a coincidence.

I'm also called 'The Monkey Man' on TTC Forums. AND another forum, which I had been on since 2001.

It's been my lifetime nickname, since I was a kid. You can still use it in the story, though ;)

I could of even if you said i couldnt, because I started making them like 5 years ago. I never copied. And i didnt even know you were on the forums until like book 10 was made, and 12 books were mad. Sorry if im getting to into this.

OOOOOOOH! YOU SAID A BAD WORD!!!!

...kidding!! Kidding!!

Seriously, I wanna know! Is it...Toontown?! POTCO?! Eggplant?!

EGGPLANT! THAT'S IT!!!!!

xD .:Blue:.

-------------........ Into Vmkforums........---------------

Chapter 1
Teleported Again

All of a sudden, the friends teleported into a room.
It was black, and they were flying.
A giant head apperared.
" What the heck do you want ya weirdo? " Hikoik said to the head.
" You noobs have to get out of here. Youve been destoyed WAY too many times. " The big head said.
They got teleported out of Maplestory, back in to real life.
And so was Sticklin.
So he was RIGHT by him.
" There you are! Get hi- " Sticklin was interupted.
Flower still had her wand from Maplestory, so she froze him.
" Go! It doesnt last long! " Flower yelled out.
Candy typed in Vmkforums on the computer.
They were teleported into VMKforums.
End of chapter 1!

coool i can still freeze stuff LOL oh yeah i own. LOL

Lol.

Chapter 2
A Chapter Thats Chapterish

The friends looked around, and noticed, they were flat.
They also noticed they were standing on an V.
" Where the heck did you lead us candy? " Berry asked.
" Vmkforums, the place the story were in was published.
" What? Were in a story? Huh? " Monkey asked.
" I think so. " Candy asked.
" Then, who's reading us? " Flower asked.
They looked in front of them, and saw Fireball ( main character in Penguin Power: The French Fry Dragon ) playing on the computer.
End of Chapter 2

hmm.
im reading about myself.
that's just weird.
LOL

I know, Huh? and have you ever thought that were video game characters? And kids are playing us right now? Rofl.

Chapter 3
Coming To A Burger King Near You

" Hey, lets go to Burger King. " Candy said.
" Yeah! I LOVE Burger King! " Lucky yelled.
They jumped out of the computer and drived to Burger King.
They found out Sticklin bought out Burger King.
" OMAGOSH! " Berry yelled.
End of Chapter 4!
ROFL.

I know, that chapter was exteamly random.

Chapter 4
The Truth

The friends were eating at Taco Bell because Sticklin bought out Burger King.
All of a sudden, half of the resturant exploded.
They looked up, and saw Sticklin riding on the Balrog, terrorizing the city.
" When will those idiots stop? " Hikoik asked.
" When were destroyed. " Monkey said.
" Why is Sticklin trying to destory us anyway? "
" Well, a few years ago we were friends. " Monkey said.
Everyone gasped.
" We went to a baseball game one day. There was this guy that was playing who got a home run everytime he hit.
So it went up, up, and up, and then it got stuck in the middle of our seats.
We fought over the baseball. And thats why we dont like each other. "
" Hey Monkey, come over here and let me see you finger. " Hikoik said.
" Ok... why? "
Hikoik grabbed the finger and twisted it.
" Ow! What was that for? " Monkey yelled.
" YOU COULD OF GIVIN' IT TO HIM AND NONE OF THIS WOULD OF HAPPENED! " Hikoik yelled
End of chapter 4!

heyy. remember me? pink? or i guess you could sayy surfoceanchelsea
ahahaha

LOL. I read the whole story. It took a long time. It was hilarious, but a great story. You should keep on writing. :D

I rememeber you surf... i think. :D Im slycooper_lo from vmk? you remember? And hikoik and them say hi.
And thanks Violona.

Chapter 5
I Got A Pocketful of Darkness - End Of Book 13... i think -

So, lets recap. Im losing track of the books, so lets just say this is the thirtenth.
I wish i remembered stuff better. @_@.

The Balrog with Sticklin on it was stiill tererizing the city.
And all the heroes were just staring at them, too full to move.
They werent full anymore.
So they got in an airplane and started loading the shooters with corn dogs and tacos.
They started up the plane and started shooting at the Balrog.
" I Dont Like Hot Dogs And Tacos!!! " Yelled the Balrog.
Sticklin took out something REALLY dark.
" I got a pocketful of darkness! Muahahaha! " Sticklin yelled.
" Oh yeah? Well i got Krispy Cream Donuts! " Berry yelled.
He started loading the ammo with donuts.
But not just any donuts.
Jelly filled donuts! OMAGOSH!
They started firing, and one of them knocked Sticklin off the Balrog.
He fell and fell, and landed in a pile of pillows. With blocks of iron in them.
He was lucky, cause he fell on one with three blocks.
" You will never win Monkey! Never! " Sticklin yelled.
Then, the Balrog came over and snatched Silver, and took him with him back to Sticklin.
" Should we save him? " Hikoik asked.
" Yeah. Were story characters and were good. Not bad. "
" But i dont really wanna. " Hikoik said.
" Hikoik... " Berry said.
" Fine. But someone has to give me 50 bucks for a new PS2 game. " Hikoik said.
End of book 13!

LOL rotfl "YOU COULD OF GIVIN' IT TO HIM AND NONE OF THIS WOULD OF HAPPENED!" LOLL

wow so hes trying to destroy everyone cuz monkey just took his ball? greaaaaaaat. LOL

rotfl.
" Should we save him? "
" Yeah. Were story characters and were good. Not bad. "
" But i dont really wanna. "
" Hikoik... "
" Fine. But someone has to give me 50 bucks for a new PS2 game. "

LOL rofl sounds just like him.
LOL

" I got a pocketful of darkness! Muahahaha! " Sticklin yelled.
" Oh yeah? Well i got Krispy Cream Donuts! " Berry yelled.
He started loading the ammo with donuts.
But not just any donuts.
Jelly filled donuts! OMAGOSH!

This. Is. The best. Part. In. The entire story.

We used to have a Krispy Creme over near my house, but it closed because people were getting sick from the donuts. I never did, though. THEY WERE SO GOOD! --cries-- LOL jk! xD

.:Blue:.

LOL rotfl "YOU COULD OF GIVIN' IT TO HIM AND NONE OF THIS WOULD OF HAPPENED!" LOLL

wow so hes trying to destroy everyone cuz monkey just took his ball? greaaaaaaat. LOL

rotfl.
" Should we save him? "
" Yeah. Were story characters and were good. Not bad. "
" But i dont really wanna. "
" Hikoik... "
" Fine. But someone has to give me 50 bucks for a new PS2 game. "

LOL rofl sounds just like him.
LOL

Rofl. Yeah. just trying to keep the story realistic. :D

And we used to have krispy cream donuts by our house too and they shut it down i think for the same reason.

-------@@@ Savin Silver @@@-------
Chapter 1
Something ( My imagination hasent turned on yet, so im gonna post a achapter later. :) )

Sorry for double post.
Woot for 300th chapter!

Chapter 1
A Chapter Thats Very Chapterish

The friends were following the train.
The train started to make these weird noises.
It started flying.
" Great. How are we gonna follow them now? " Berry asked.
Monkey grew wings and everybody got on his back.
He flew up into the air to followed the evil people.
End of chapter 1!
Oh, and can someone tell me how many chapters its been alrogether?

Monkey Man! Chapter Packet!

Chapter 2
The Lair Thats Very Lairish

The truck lead them to Sticklin's lair, a very very bad place.
Traps and animals that attack you are everywhere.
They locked silver in a cage with monkeys in it.
There was 3 of them. The first one was named Carl, and the rest i dont feel like typing it to you.
" Youll never get away with this Sticklin. " Silver said.
" Oh yes i will. Haha! Im gonna get away with it. HAHA! Owned! Youll never win! Haha! " Sticklin said while he was dancing.
End of Chapter 2!

Chapter 3
Something

The friends were hiding behind a rock.
" Uh...why are we just sitting here? " Flower asked.
" Because. " Hikoik said.
Monkey jumped out from the rock and said something.
He ran to Sticklin and stuffedhis head in a nearby burger.
Flower ran over to Silver, and used a laser to cut the cage open.
Silver hopped out! And so did the monkeys.
End of chapter 3!

Chapter 4
The Chapter Thats After The Chapter Thats After the Chapter of Saving Silver :D

The friends were running and running for their STINKIN LIVES.
They got out, but they were running to fast, and saw a cliff as they ALMOSt fell of it.
Well, Berry did. He fell on some rocks.
g2g to bed, so ill finish the chapter tomorrow. night.

Pleasers... post. this whole page is by myself.

Nice story. Please continue!

cool nice story

im gonna continue, i was just on a week vacation. :)
Chapter 4
What the chapter was called up there.

did the first part of the chapter already....

A giant bird flew out of the sky and picked up the heroes.
The bird flew to theyre house and dropped them off.
Sticklin and the gang were following them.
The freinds ran to the computer, and typed Webkinz on the computer.
They were teleported into it.
In there, they found a giant dog, staring at them.
End of chapter 4!

this is
really random.
rofl

"Why are we just sitting here?"
"Because."

LOL.

and... what the heck, stuffed his face in a nearby burger? LOL

Chapter 5
Webkinz... evil?

The dog grabbed flower, and threw her at ping pong set.
Monkey put some sleep darts in the dog.
" That was weird. " Hikoik said.
They walked in a place nobody went into before... so they went in, and many pets threw peaches at everyone.
" What the heck! Get way ugly pets get away! Stop throwing peaches! " Berry yelled.
The pets started throwing apples.
" Oh come on! " Flower yelled.
End of chapter 5!

Chapter 6
Apple and Banana Fight

" I guess sience there fighting with apples... then we have to fight with bananas!!!! " Monkey yelled.
They took out bananas out of there pockets and started hitting the animals with them.
The heroes won, of course.
" I guess they were alergic to bananas... " Hikoik said.
They were walking out and they saw, a GIANT pitbull.
" Ive learned that pitbulls are really mean. " Flower said.
End of chapter 6.

LOL! Nice! Write more! Lol, pitbulls.

LOL a ping pong set, what the heck dude.

great. a pitbull.

- whacks with banana -
- it runs away -

mm, guess it was allergic too.

LOL

continue it.
LOL

Chapter 7
Idk what to call it. :D

Monkey ran up to the pitbull and hit him with a banana.
The pitbull stared at Monkey, and it fell to the ground.
" Uh... that makes no sience at all. It not like i stabbed him. I tapped him! " Monkey said.
The room turned black, and a voice said, " You have messed up the order of many places. You wont be anymore. Cause, im Stciklin and im unbeatable! " The voice said.
Giant bananas were falling.
" Whats with the bananas?! " Teddy yelled.
End of chapter 7.

Chapter 8
Falling Fruit

Fruit was falling from all angles.
" More fruit. Whee. " Hikoik said.
They were running for their lives.
All of a sudden, the ground started shaking, and the friends were falling.
They landed in a pile of pecans.
They got out of the pecans and looked around.
They were on a spaceship.
" Huh? How did this happen? " Berry asked
" Idk. " Monkey said.
They noticed a sign that said Sticklin's Ship.
End of chapter 8.

rofl
this sounds like an ed edd and eddy episode LOL

rofl yeah.

Chapter 9
Sticklin's Ship

Like I said, they were on Sticklin's Ship.
" Guys, isnt's this illegal? Were trespassing. " Teddy asked.
" Not really. The floor led us here. " Monkey answered.
" And the fact that your looking through Sticklin's personal items. " Teddy said.
" Heck, who cares? " Monkey asked.
" Me. " Teddy said.
Monkey started throwing weapons to the freinds, like a gumball gun ( shoots gumballs ) to Hikoik.
Hikoik shot one in his mouth.
" Ewww... they're stale. " Hikoik said.
Monkey threw a guitar to Silver.
" Hmm... how is this considered a weapon? " Silver asked.
He started playing it.
Notes flew in to the air, and attacked the freinds.
" Owww... my splean... " Hikoik said.
Hikoik hit silver with one of his gumballs.
Monkey threw a staff to Teddy.
" I guess I can wack people with this... " Teddy said.
" No, that would be non- g rated. It does spells smarty. " Silver said.
Teddy said some bliberish, then it hit Berry with lightning.
" Owww... Monkey, give me a weapon so I can hit teddy with it. " Berry said.
Monkey handed Berry a water gun.
" A water gun? Come on! " Berry said.
Then he pressed the squirt button, and a REALLY big splash of water came out and blast teddy to the wall.
" Whoah. " Berry said.
Monkey gave flower a pair of shoes.
" Does this make me run fast? " Flower asked.
She put them on and ran to Canada and back in a milisecond.
She was wearing a sombrero when she came back.
" Everyone got a weapon? And if you dont, i dont really care cause I lost track of whos in this group. " Monkey said.
" You for-" Lucky was interrupted.
" Like I said, I dont care. " Monkey said.
End of chapter 9.

Sorry for double post... but if you read this story, can you please post comments? i only get comments for flowa and blue...

I read some of it... Its kewl.. Can I be in it?

sorry, theres already too many people in it. I can bearly remember everyone right now!

LOL rofl...
- takes a stale gumball piece and eats - YOU DONT APPRECIATE CANDY ENUF, HIKOIK. LOL
but yay i have super shoes.
wheeeee

- runs around in circles -
LOL

although it's not really much of a WEAPON ya know? LOL
o well. idc - steals hikoik's gumball gun and shoots pieces into mouth -

why would you want to? its stale gum. ;)

because.
i eat stale gum anyway.
LOL

NEW CHAPPIEZ?!?! LOL

okey dokey. heres one for ya.

Chapter 10
Stale Gum

Flower was begging Hikoik to shoot a gumball in her mouth.
" Please? "
" No. "
" Please? "
" No. "
" Please with cherries on top? "
" No choclate syrup? "
" Please with choclate syrup? "
" Fine. "
Hikoik shot a gumball in her mouth.
Hikoik and flower turned into a snake.
" What just happened? " Hikoik asked.
" I think the gum turns you into snakes... " Monkey said.
" Great. Now I cant use my gumball gun. Its all your fault silver. " Hikoik said.
" Wha?!?! What did I do? " Silver asked.
" Everything. " Hikoik said.
They got in another back and fourth fight.
" And I cant wear my shoes... " Flower said.
" At least you can hiss at people to make them scared. " Berry said.
" Thats a dumb power. " Flower said.
" Get over it. At least you get power. " Lucky said.
Monkey handed lucky the gumball gun.
" What a baby. " Monkey said.
End of chapter 10!
:D

rofl
that made me choke LOL

Chapter 11
Back To VMK

All of a sudden, a giant portal appered.
" Should we go in? " Monkey asked.
" I guess. Do you see a different door anywhere? " Berry said.
The portal started to get smaller.
" You know what? Lets go in. It might get us out of here. " Flower said.
Everyone ran in and then the portal exploded in to a million pieces.
They ended up in The Esplanade.
But, it was ruined.
Chairs were cracked, the giraffe in the backround is angry, and the monarail was tipped over.
" Whoah. What happened here? A virtual tornado? " Hikoik asked.
" I don't know what happened. But it doesn't look like anyone is here. " Flower said.
All of a sudden, a little man with spikey hair, and red glowing eyes walked up to them.
" Who are you? " Monkey asked.
" Im your worst nightmare. "
Then they realized who it was.
End of chapter 11!

rofl who was it?

LOL the giraffe is hungry. nice

Yay. No more waiting for chapters to come up flower. LOL.

End Of Book 15
Chapter 12
The Weirdo With The Red Glowing Eyes

" Get out of my way. You have no use for me. " The weirdo said.
" Yavn, when did you get so mean? " Berry asked.
" No time for that. " Yavn said. He used the force to move flower and monkey out of his way.
Monkey noticed something red coming from the backround.
" Whats that...? " Monkey asked.
" Oh that. My army of VMK staff. " Yavn said.
The freinds jaws opened so wide, you could put 8 hot dogs in em.
Yavn disappeared into the darkness.
" Guys, im not scientist, but I think thats a bad thing. " Teddy said.
End of book 15!

LOL rotfl, it was YAVN. haha figures LOL
and he gotz an army of evil staff?

*dun dun dun* LOL

8 hot dogs? i gotz a big mouth

Book 16
****--- Saving VMK ---****
Chapter 1
Sticklin

The friends were running from the army.
" Do you really think this is gonna help anything? " Berry asked.
" Maybe. Oh dear, I think I just punned. " Flower said.
Silver tripped on a rock.
He got up.
While the freinds were running, they noticed something bright green up ahead.
It was Sticklin.
" Great. The weird guy. " Hikoik said.
Monkey ran up to him, and nudged him, making him fall on a giant rock.
" You crazy kids! Oh dear. I punned. Grrr. Theyll pay! " Sticklin yelled.
Sticklin was then running after them along with yavn and the vmk staff.
" Can it get much worse? " Teddy asked.
" Dont jinx it! " Hikoik yelled.
Giant burgers were falling from the sky now.
" Why?!?! Why did you have to say that?! " Lucky yelled.
Crackers 'n Cheese from that company Handi-Snacks by Krafts were on the ground then came alive and joined the chase.
" WHAT?!?! " Silver yelled.
They were still running.
Then all of a sudden, the ground started shaking, the floor shattered and everyone was falling.
" AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! " Lucky yelled at the top of his lungs.
Silver took out an easy button from his pocket and pressed it.
" That was easy. " The button said.
End of chapter 1!

....... rotfl
you have like
the strangest mind ever. LOL

Thanks. ;)

Chapter 2
The Easy Button Saves Us All

All of a sudden they stopped falling.
They were lufted down gently by hand from the darkness.
" Keep that Easy Button. We might need it. "
" Okay. " Silver said.
By the way, flower and hikoik have been turned back into humans by a magical... person. Oh great. I punned AGAIN.
" So, where the heck are we? " Lucky asked.
They looked at a sign that said, You are in the Forbidden Temple. But I Think You Already Knew That.
" I caertainly did not know that. " Teddy said.
Yavn, the staff, Sticklin, and the Handi-Snacks were chasing the feinds again.
" Hey look! A door! " Flower yelled.
They ran into the door.
It led them to the Monorail.
They went inside and played in the arcade and play the hip hop thing until it got to Fantasyland.
Everything was ruined.
The clouds they were stepping on were rain clouds!
End of chapter 2!!

Chapter 3
Ruins of Fantasyland

The friends were looking around, while Yavn was strangling Hikoik.
" Get this freak off me! Now! " Hikoik yelled.
Monkey pulled him off and threw him in a small pond nearby.
The friends ran again.
They went over a rainbow, and into Matterhorn.
" Why is it so slippery in here? " Flower asked.
A yeti threw a snowball at lucky and tackled him, just like a football player.
Hikoik pulled the yeti off lucky, and threw him in a pile of snowballs.
They started running. AGAIN.
They ran into a dead end.
" What the heck, I didn't think this would happen. " Berry said.
Yavn shot sleep darts with a straw at everyone.
They all fell asleep.
----====!A few moments later!====----
The freinds woke up.
" Where the heck are we? " Monkey asked.
They looked around, and noticed they were on Lucky33325's keyboard, typing this chapter.
End of chapter 3!

please post your comments, i never get comments from anyone except for flowa.

Chapter 4
Lucky's Computer

" What the heck, if im here on the keyboard, and typing this story at the same time... I don't think im following the laws of physics. " Lucky said.
The finger came and almost smashed them, but quickly jumped on the letter O.
And if I just typed on O, then they must have been squished... this chapter offically makes no sense.
They freinds jumped off of the computer.
Lucky was sitting by his TV watching Spongebob and writing this chapter at the same time, with a bottled water by him.
Over by him, was a magic kit.
There was a top hat and wand in it.
" Maybe, if we jumped into the hat, maybe we would return to the real world. " Hikoik said.
" But we have to save VMK! " Flower yelled.
There was a Playstation 2 by Lucky.
They got inside, and pressed the On button.
They reappeared into VMK.
" Get them! " Yavn yelled as he noticed them appear.
End of book 16! Please check the story forum for Monkey Man ( The VMK Version ) Saving VMK.

LOL rotfl "And If i just typed on O, then they must have been squished... this chapter officially makes no sense." LOL

LOL, and the ps2, magic set, and all that other stuff, was really by me and the stuff i was doing, I was really doing it. LOL