Chapter 1: The bored friends..

Once upon a time, there were these very BORED friends.

Blossomflower,
AthleticAisha,
SoccerRach,
SassaFrazz,
hikoik,
lil_rockerangel
and Yokatherine.

The other half of these bored friends were playing pirates...

So these bored friends that I just mentioned, were hanging around in town square.
When suddenly there was this weird guest who walked up to Blossomflower...
and asked "Hi i'm new can I have some free?" Flower, who wasn't as mean as usual, said "No, sorry." and walked away...
The guest girl followed her... as the rest of us friends were eating popcorn (boredom made them go nuts)
She went up to Flower's face and said: "You're ugly I will report you!"
and Flower let out a : >_<
SassaFrazz, being herself, let out a: "If you report her, you're gonna get in trouble."
The guest girl said: "Who?"
AthleticAisha replied: "U."
The guest girl replied: "Why? She's mean and ugly as him!" as she said that in the face of hikoik...
hikoik, being himself, yelled out: "Look who's talking..."
Yokatherine, the pirate lover, said: "Why don't ye just leave us alone?"
The guest girl went NUTS and started going "NEVER! I SHALL RETURN AND GET REVENGE ON YOU ALL!!" and disappeared.
The friends were going.. "oK..." As SoccerRach and lil_rockerangel were dealing their own problems though, as this crazy guest dude chased them asking if they wanted to go out with them.
The friends didn't take this seriously though; they thought they were never to see that crazy girl again... and they thought she was just crazy... but they thought WRONG

Isn't this so cheesy?
I'll post more soon :D

nice chapter flower:D

o-o

put us in it!! PLEASE (-Me and light -)

nice chapter, what are you going to make the guest do i wonder? .-.

interesting...... :Smiley - Harump:

Chapter 2: the return..

One day, the friends were staying AthleticAisha's, .:Coolio Candy:. room.
It was on friends only...
when that same guest girl came in o_o
She yelled out a: "I Will Eat You All!"
The friends had clearly forgotten who she was...
SoccerRach let out a: >_<
LittleTinkFairy, who wasn't there when this guest girl went NUTS... let out a: ??
LightningBrutus, who had been playing with tink, said: o_o
Dabaseballking, who was with them, let out a: “-_-“ as he changed his gold ears into a bird hat.

The guest girl immediately went up to hikoik, and yelled at his face: YOU'RE THE ONE WHO'S UGLY WITH ALL THAT STUPID SPARROW OF YOURS!!!

The friends remembered who she was in a blink of an eye...
AthleticAisha yelled out: How did you get in my room?!?!

The guest girl gave out a smirk, and said: I told you I'd get revenge... Muahaha!

She did her BoomCrash! Magic (and they were wondering how a guest like her got magic)... but they didn't take her seriously o_o

She went up to hikoik again... who said: Away Ugly!
The guest girl started yelling out some: ### ### words..

AthleticAisha was about to boot the annoying guest... everyone said NO! because her craziness was the closest thing to real entertainment, as the friends suffered from boredom...

The guest went up to AthleticAisha, and said: "You can't boot me..."

AthleticAisha said: "Oh yeah? We'll see about that!" and she clicked the "Boot" button. Nothing happened...

AthleticAisha was puzzled. "Omg. I can't boot her!" said AthleticAisha as she frantically clicked the boot button over and over...

The guest girl yelled out a: MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
And then this weird storm thingy started appearing in the sky... which has Never happened on vmk before..
The friends went "WHOAH"
But Blossomflower added an "Awesome! :D" after that... she must have enjoyed looking at the storm.
Her eyes glowed red and she zapped dabaseballking with this lightning ray. He fell backwards, burnt to a crisp, his bird hat on fire. “Ow.”, said ash black dabaseballking.

and then...

I'll post more next time :D
Isn't this Soooo cheesy? :D

I get burned to a crisp? - cries -

nice!! is it true!?

guests who actually can not get booted? evil red eyes burning me? I don't think so..

lol what if guests were really like that. that would be creepy

Hmm. Interesting :D
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HEHEHE thanks peeps...

I'll post a third chapter soon :D

lol what if guests were really like that. that would be creepy

if guests were like that i would make a new account every time my other one got the name...

i seriously want to rule the world(but thats impossible because im really really really really crazy...)

Nice story so far Blossomflower.

thats pretty entertaining :)
and yea if guests were like that i freak out!!

well.. i'd be scared of that guest..... I would leave the room... hehe :)

Oh put me in it! Pretty good story.

yeah put me and Kitri in it!!

OK :D

Thanks guys, I've never had so many fans for a fanfic before.. :D

- writes down princesgirl and kitri -

thanks!! :)

Chapter 3: An army of guests!

dabaseballking was yelling on the floor, black, ashed up, and almost lifeless. His bird hat was nothing but dust.
LightningBrutus, hikoik, SassaFrazz, and Blossomflower came to support him.

The sky was dark and gloomy, and a hint of thunder filled the sky. Rain was sprinkling around like it was the beginning of spring. The wind was blowing hard, and strangely, it appeared as if though the friends’ hair was virtually blowing with the wind. In fact, the wind was so strong, that AthleticAisha frantically chased her flip hat around the room, Blossomflower’s crown flew off and cut SoccerRach’s top hat, which flew into LittleTinkFairy’s face, whose princess shoe crashed with hikoik’s airborne bird hat, phillip.

The guest girl, who was floating in the air, gray, with fangs and weird tentacle looking things sticking out behind her, yelled out: “MUAHAHAHAHA You’ll never stop me!!!”
lil_rockerangel snarled at her: “Whatever, you d—“ she was cut off, as Yokatherine’s pirate hat stuffed her mouth.

The guest girl laughed evilly once more, as she waved her hand, and sent out a STRONG wind burst, which drove SassaFrazz’s upcoming black ref hat away. The guest girl smiled evilly, showing her large, rotten fangs, and then she said: “Guests, unite!!”
Zombie gray guests with red eyes walked into the room, lifting their arms up and moaning.

The friends were terrified, especially Yokatherine, who had just watched a scary movie.

The guest girl roared at her follow zombie guests: “Guests, the time has come to step up and fight against these so-called ‘rich’ people who have scolded us for 2 years! Who’s with me?!!?!”
The zombie guests cheered, as the friends who were no longer bored, but frightened to death, stared at them with their jaw touching the floor, completely white, except for dabaseballking, who was ash black.

“All hail queen guestalina!” yelled out the gray, zombie guests, as they bowed to the evil smirking guest.

tiger_girl_me, who had just entered the room, said “Whoa! And what kind of name is ‘guestalina?’ o_o”

All of the guests rose into the air, all with tornados filled with lightning, swirling around them.

The friends swirled around with the tornados, screaming and yelling for help.
The wind was so strong, that even the ash on dabaseballking sort of came off.

Blossomflower held on to SassaFrazz as they swirled around, but SassaFrazz let go of her hands, grabbed a barf bag, and threw up in it. She handed it to Blossomflower and muttered: "Here, give that to hikoik, a present from me."
Blossomflower immediately threw it at the evil guest girl, aka “guestalina”, and blurted out: “Soda (SassaFrazz’s nickname), this is NO time for jokes!!!”
SassaFrazz replied: “What joke?! I didn’t get to give hikoik a Christmas present last year!”
Blossomflower let out a: “O_o egad..”

tiger_girl_me’s bird hat flew away, and it approached the evil guest girl’s face. She immediately zapped it with her lightning ray; it caught fire, and turned into ash.
tiger_girl_me bellowed: “No!! My bird hat!!”


How do you like it so far? :D
(princesgirl and kitri you’ll be in the next chapter)

Where's me in the second part? *Sobs* XD

:SodaSmiley:

am i like the only 1 whose hat didnt blow away? lol

LOL yours did, but I didn't mention it.. LOL

haha that was... interesting

i cant wait to read part 4 and 5. PUT IT OUT ASAP!!

Oh very intersesting! :P Can't wait for the next chap. :0

now you can post it!

and move all chapters to first post.. its hard to find all stories

Put meh in it!! Kaa!! xD

Chapter 4: The evil guests released!

The friends were still flying around in circles, all turning green, but not one friend has threw up yet (except for SassaFrazz). They had managed to hold hands together, into a one big line. After twirling in the sky, screaming for help, and struggling to hold on to each other for about 15 minutes, the friends were very exhausted.

“Come on,” said the evil guest girl to her fellow evil guests “Let’s go take over VMK!!” They started to leave the room one by one.
“Oh no you won’t!” blurted LittleTinkFairy, who was looking very nauseous.
“Ye will never get away with this!” yelled Yokatherine, who was greenish.
“Yeah! We’re not afraid to take you on!” bellowed LightningBrutus, whose hair was sticking up all the way to its end.
“Bring it on!!” screamed SoccerRach, who almost let go of dabaseballking’s (whose skin was hurting badly after getting burned) and hikoik’s hand, trying to shake her fist at the evil guest girl.

The evil guest girl smiled devilishly, and shot the line of friends with a lightning ray. It just zapped the edge of AthleticAisha’s bangs, and trimmed the edge of dabaseballking’s crisp hair.

“Hey! Like I don’t have less hair already!! I have bald spots, for goodness sakes!” yelled out dabaseballking, as few tears streamed down his face.
hikoik stifled his giggles.

“Hah!! You missed!!” roared lil_rockerangel at “guestalina.”

Growling, the evil guest girl send out another zap at the friend chain, and hit lil_rockerangel’s foot.

“OWW!!!” screamed lil_rockerangel. “My poor, burning, aching foot!! Well, hah you still mis…” lil_rockerangel’s voice faded as she saw the friends glaring at her.

SassaFrazz let out: “Don’t push your luck, rocker.”
Blossomflower added: “The next bolt she pelts at us might zap us all…”
dabaseballking continued as he bit his lip: “And you don’t want to feel this kind of pain! :(!!”
lil_rockerangel put on a guilty face, and looked down.

The guests in the room were starting to clear up, and the wind began to die down.
The friends were hovering about 1 inch from the ground.
Another guest left, and the friends fell.

“UHH!!” groaned the friends.
“I never thought I would have been so delighted to be on the ground again!” yelled a dizzy AthleticAisha.
“You know how I always say: ‘I wish I could fly’? Uh huh… NOT gonna happen anymore!” screamed a cross-eyed Blossomflower.
LittleTinkFairy ran zig-zagged to the edge of the room, and threw up.

All of the guests left the room, including guestalina, who left with a “MUAHAHAHA”.
SoccerRach yelled: “Omg they’re out to take over VMK! We’ve got to stop them!”
hikoik muttered.. “And how the HECK are we gonna do that?”
SoccerRach replied: “Idk…”


:D LOL
(Kingdom heart fans, keep an eye out…)
(princesgirl and kitri, you were supposed to be in this chapter, but it was way too long so I decided to cut it in half.. so for sure you’ll be in the next chapter :) sorry for postponing your scenes!)
(coolJamz, before I can post you in the next chapter, I need to make sure what gender you are… :D)

oh so fun i get to throw up in the story -.-

*Spazzes* IS SORA COMING?! o_o

(coolJamz, before I can post you in the next chapter, I need to make sure what gender you are… :D)

-_- a girl -_-

K good, I looked at your profile and then I saw that you liked to do a lot of boy stuff, but then I saw you say "Sparrow Is Hot" or something like that, so I kinda got confused and I didn't want to do the wrong thing. LOL

:D you'll be in the next chapter

*Spazzes* IS SORA COMING?! o_o

You'll see soda.. you'll see
You might even meet the man of your dreams :D

Oooh, can I be in it? :)
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heh i always do me pirate talk '.'. <------->- behold me wonderful, yet weird sword!!!!

i wonder how the story will end!!

Walnutfudge,

you can be in the 6th chapter, there's nowhere to put you in the 5th one at the moment :D

wouldn't it be cool if there really was a person titled guestalina?

flower... ENTERTAIN YOUR TEXAN FRIEND WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

*puts on a cowboy hat and starts dancing to country music*

T-T... im bored......

Rofl tink that would be really scary...

and FINE soda.. fine O_o

(y'all better be happy I posted another chapter after yelling at me in VMK)

Chapter 5: Chaos in VMK!!!

The friends immediately went to VMK esplanade, to try and stop the guests with an “I’ll make it up along the way” plan.
Just as the friends thought, the guests were wreaking havoc, picking up people and swallowing them up for fun.

“Whoa!” yelled dabaseballking, whose pain was starting to subside.
“Oh wow…” added Yokatherine, who lifted up the eye patch from her pirate hat, so she could see the mayhem clearly.
“Hey!!” screamed SassaFrazz to guestalina, who was grasping kitri and princesgirl, with her giant, ashy hands. “Put those random people down!!” continued SassaFrazz as she approached guestalina.
“Never!!!” bellowed the evil guest girl.

“HELP!!!!!” screamed kitri and princesgirl, who were ******** out and turning white.

“Let go of my friends!!” bellowed coolJamz, as she ran up to guestalina. She looked her straight in the eyes with a very strong expression.
Guestalina looked down at her and shot a lightning ray towards her. She flew backwards and smashed into the “Buy a new quest kiosk!” sign. She was in the same condition dabaseballking was…

“Uh! This whole ‘guests turning NUTS with static filled lightning' thing, is totally ruining my new hair-do! HELLO!?” scoffed princesgirl, who was trying to fix her hair, that was standing on end.
kitri, on the other hand, was yelling: “princesgirl! Who cares about your ******** hair-do?! We’re gonna get eaten if we don’t get out of here! Besides, why should people care about that hideous hair of yours that can’t be put in ANY hairstyle, when my fresh manicure has been smudged all over my fingers?!”
princesgirl replied: “Omg you take that back you fashion crash and burn freak!” The 2 girls screamed as they tried to choke each other.

SassaFrazz put her hands on her hips as she rolled her eyes.

The evil guest girl was about to eat kitri and princesgirl, who were still bickering, when SassaFrazz blurted out: “Wait a minute! You can’t benefit by eating VMK people!” Guestalina looked at her with interest, as she dangled kitri and princesgirl above her open mouth, revealing her rotten fangs. Her breath was really bad, that kitri and princesgirl, who were turning purple from all their loud bickering, passed out after about 10 seconds. “Gosh we’re just virtual things,” SassaFrazz continued, sort of relieved that the 2 loud annoying girls who were giving her a bad headache, were finally unconscious. “It won’t do anything if you eat everyone in VMK!! You can’t harm us or hurt us. We’re not afraid of you. It’s not like this is actually real life, that you can actually hurt us.”

“You’re right…” replied the evil guest girl. SassaFrazz smiled triumphantly, for she thought she had succeeded with that corny speech of hers.
“I’m going to attack every VMK player with a name… outside of VMK!” continued the evil guest. SassaFrazz’s smile faded, as she turned pale.
“MUAHAHAHA!!” yelled the evil guest as a lightning bolt struck her and she disappeared.

“Oh nice going, Soda, now she’s going to attack us in real life!” bellowed hikoik as he approached her and ‘smashed her with a keyblade.’

Everyone’s computer started shaking, the electricity was going NUTS, every electronic item started to do strange things...

LittleTinkFairy screamed: “Soda what have you done?!?! My computer is going NUTS!”
SassaFrazz replied: “Uh… meh bad? o_o.”

Every VMK players’ computer exploded. Lightning streaks danced around the computers. Smoke rose from their desks. A bluish smoke sort of came along with it too…


Uh oh… find out what happens next! :D
Getting good :D
(walnutfudge, you’ll be in the next chapter :D)

wouldn't it be cool if there really was a person titled guestalina?

hehe maybe we can make that person, and then act out flower's story? o_o LOL

Uh u guys? Do u know if this place is censored?
Btw this is slycooper_lo

haha thats what i was thinking when i made a person title guestalina!! haha i'm not kidding

Nice..
Btw, this is slycooper_lo..

hmm... this should be interesting considering you don't know what our places are like outside of vmk... is it going to be about just you outside of vmk flower? .-.

o_o... LOL that would be funny, if somehow we all went to WDW where we happened to find guestalina... O_o, but, how do we stop a person outside of vmk? what if she's like.... 2? LOL.

*wants to read the rest*

I got an idea!! *takes out a spork* THE ULTIMATE WEAPON!!! *chunks it at guestalina*

KAA BOOOM! XD

Dudes, Idk why chapter 5 isn't out yet?!

- explodes -

anyway, hikoik, she's gonna be at your place :D

LOL

and shark, what's with the dancing banana? LOL

OOPS, my mistake o_o chapter 5 is out. LOL I must be blind! O_o

Anyway... isn't this getting sooooo cheesy!? LOL

o_o... LOL that would be funny, if somehow we all went to WDW where we happened to find guestalina... O_o, but, how do we stop a person outside of vmk? what if she's like.... 2? LOL.

*wants to read the rest*

I got an idea!! *takes out a spork* THE ULTIMATE WEAPON!!! *chunks it at guestalina*

KAA BOOOM! XD

How do we stop her outside of vmk? O_o

You'll see :D

If you need an enemy that doesn't blow up, I'm the man. ;)

O_o monkey O_o

oK....

hmm... this should be interesting considering you don't know what our places are like outside of vmk... is it going to be about just you outside of vmk flower? .-.

hikoik's right... o_o we don't know what the other's places are like outside of vmk... (unless you live by them.. which, nobody lives by me o.o)

for all you know, i could live by the ocean, or in the desert like area of Texas, or the grassy Hills of Central Texas... or in the Pan Handle where the flat plains are.. or near the wooded areas... you'll never know. Texas is too big. heh. heh heh. >_<

*throws a book at flower*

ENTERTAIN ME WITH YOUR STORY. :1poke: :lachen70: :thf471fd564zf:

im bored again... :SodaSmiley:

heh.. *imagines herself at WDW or something where we go to fight guestalina*

OMG WDW!!!! * runs off to all the rides* Have fun fighting that girl!!

soda.... you're forgetting about the TRUE ultimate weapons, PENCILS, muahaha (im bored if you can tell)

... As you can see people who are reading this right now, my friends are VERY strange.. LOL

I already wrote the 6th chapter. Not posting it yet :D

(shark gets to be in it) LOL

Pencils are the ultimate weapon.. i guess? LOL

(looks at pencil sitting on desk) It's green and so pwetty! MUAHAHAHA!

sorry. ._.

LOL it's a smashed face...

and I dont care if i dont know about the place where you are, it doesn't matter O_o

besides i've been to where hikoik is I know what it looks like...

soda.... you're forgetting about the TRUE ultimate weapons, PENCILS, muahaha (im bored if you can tell)

why don't you get on ilikemacdonaldsheh? since your banned? :SodaSmiley: btw, do you know why you got banned? and for how long?

LOL that would be funny if flower put me in the story where i freaked out and rode all the rides and forgot about guestalina since i've only been to Sea World, Six flags, Volente Beach (its a small water park in my home town), and schlitterbahn (http://www.schlitterbahn.com) (put a link so you weird people can see the water park voted America's best on the travel channel...you weird people. GO IT IT ONE DAY!!)!!

LOL XD (is EXTREMELY BORED)

*throws a spork at hikoik* did you forget about key blades?!

... As you can see people who are reading this right now, my friends are VERY strange.. LOL

I already wrote the 6th chapter. Not posting it yet :D

(shark gets to be in it) LOL

Pencils are the ultimate weapon.. i guess? LOL

(looks at pencil sitting on desk) It's green and so pwetty! MUAHAHAHA!

sorry. ._.

LOL it's a smashed face...

and I dont care if i dont know about the place where you are, it doesn't matter O_o

besides i've been to where hikoik is I know what it looks like...
But i bet you don't know what my City (fine, thats my hint for you. CITY. C-I-T-Y) looks like!!! ^^ :SodaSmiley:

O_O People, yes my friends are very weird but I'm happy to have them.. LOL

Soda, he's been banned from his ENTIRE computer.

And I'll make you ride... then I'll make you go to DLR, and make you ride screaming california, then when it goes upside down i'll make you fall and get run over by another roller coaster ;) LOL

still want to ride? :D

the best weapon ever is a crown :) LOL

And what "hint" are you talking about O_o

fine. keyblade=ultimate weapon
pencil=ultimate weapons's brother :)

Sorry i spelled some things wrong in that post o_o

Flower did u read the Monkey Man story yet..? o_o
its mine.

interesting.....

O_O People, yes my friends are very weird but I'm happy to have them.. LOL

Soda, he's been banned from his ENTIRE computer.

And I'll make you ride... then I'll make you go to DLR, and make you ride screaming california, then when it goes upside down i'll make you fall and get run over by another roller coaster ;) LOL

still want to ride? :D

the best weapon ever is a crown :) LOL

And what "hint" are you talking about O_o
HINT WAS C-I-T-Y. sad to admit, there is only like.. five MAJOR cities in Texas... and i was bored enough to give you a hint.. o_o

AND GAH.. but you do know thats how i would react if something like this really happened... no matter if im 13, 14, or 10 o_o (10?)... i'd still do that. BUT NO I WILL NOT LIKE IT IF I GET ******** RUN OVER A ROLLER COASTER... o_o and actually... i do ride roller coasters, but there's a few im too scared to get on...... and will probably never get on.


fine. keyblade=ultimate weapon
pencil=ultimate weapons's brother :)


Spork = ultimate weapons sister? LOL XD

crown (fine flower.) = ultimate weapons cousin. heh... heh heh

LOL. cousin :D

(i can tell you guys are Really bored)

I made chapter 6 already! :D

Sorry about the delay! I was just needing one comment from someone I don't know... LOL

Sorry iRacoon. I was gonna post it asap but then I went to the board and nobody had replied (except for soda and hikoik, the 2 crazy people)

The star of this one is mostly shark;
and yes shark I read monkey man
LOL

Chapter 6: Out in the real world (thanks to Soda!!)

The bluish smoke coming out from everyone’s computers, turned into the form of a gray, red eyed, zombie guest.
“Omg!! Get out of my house, you stalker!” screamed walnutfudge in her bedroom.
The guest suddenly rose into the sky, and turned into a giant gray tornado once again.
“Ah!!"
All the friends were horrified, as a different guest in each of their houses, blew all the land away, including them.

Guestalina appeared in hikoik’s bedroom though.

“MUAHAHAHA!!! All I need now is for to destroy all you VMK players and my plan will be complete!!” yelled out guestalina. She didn’t turn into a tornado quite yet.
“NO, what you need is a breath mint. Away, Stinky!” replied hikoik, pinching his nose.
“RAWR!!!” yelled out the guest as she rose into the sky AGAIN and turned into a tornado.

Slycooper_lo, a VMK player, and hikoik’s real life brother, came running into the room.

“hikoik, hikoik! You should have seen the TV, it was sca… whoah.” said slycooper_lo, who looked up at the giant ‘Muahahahing’ tornado.
“.. a-and I thought the ‘horrorfest’ movies were sc-scary…” stuttered slycooper_lo.

Guestalina liked to see fear, and started to chase slycooper_lo, while ‘muahahahing’.
“AHH!!!” screamed slycooper_lo as guestalina started to “float” towards him.

He ran as fast as he can, straight into his bedroom, and shut the door.
“Open the door or I’ll huff, and I’ll puff, and I’ll blow your bedroom down!!” said a grinning guestalina.

Slycooper_lo didn’t reply, for he was putting everything he had in his bedroom against the door.

10 seconds later, guestalina ‘huffed and puffed and blew the door down.’
“Muahahahaha!!!” yelled guestalina.

Slycooper_lo ran to the corner of his bedroom and screamed, “No!! No!!! Ah!! What do you want from me you evil beast!? Away!! Away!!”

Guestalina grabbed slycooper_lo with her big ashy hands, held on to his feet, and hung him upside down.
“Ah!!!!!” screamed slycooper_lo as guestalina dropped him inside her mouth.

Slycooper_lo saw her purple tongue as she went in.

Then he saw the insides of a giant tornado, and oddly, he saw an evil cackling witch, riding a bicycle.

hikoik was in there too, and apparently, he had found a nice rocking chair flying in there, so he sat on it and held on as he spun and spun around.

“hikoik? You’re in here too?” asked a flying slycooper_lo.
“Well duh, didn’t you see her eat me up?” replied hikoik.
“No, I think I was ******** out too much.” said slycooper_lo.

5 seconds later, the brothers saw their entire house in the tornado, including their baby-sitter, who was still asleep on the couch ‘watching’ TV, and their little sister, teddyfruitgirl, who was ******** out like slycooper_lo was…

Guestalina… (to be continued)


LOL rofl
People who asked to be in the fanfic, don’t worry, you’ll get more scenes.
CHEESY :D

soda.... you're forgetting about the TRUE ultimate weapons, PENCILS, muahaha (im bored if you can tell)

omg the guest was u!!
used pencils as weapons, said .-. alot, ate a kick, and used a key blade!!

o_o... if that happened actually, and my family was all gone, i would do this:

Go grab my dad's bat, swing it really hard, go get my brother's fireworks, and my dads gun in his closet, find some matches and run.

Then, once the zombie guest gets to me, I'll take some of the fireworks, aim them all at the zombie, get ready to light it (after I shot the zombie like crazy), and then i would take my two cats and run once i lighted the fireworks hoping it would blast into bits! ^^ the end. LOL!

interesting soda....LOL

stinky mcstinky? wow flower that is THE cheesiest comeback i've EVER heard. i would NEVER say that LOL

stinky mcstinky? wow flower that is THE cheesiest comeback i've EVER heard. i would NEVER say that LOL

:Smiley - Harump: Soda agrees. thats the most CORNIEST comeback ever.

I know.. but i thought about that too :D i wanted to just put Stinky instead but I thought it would be empty and I couldn't think of anything else....

don't worry I'll edit it

and DUH i'm flower, all my comebacks are corny... y'all should know that by then....

Ok flower, WHY Do I Get Eaten?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

MUAHAHAHA I like to do evil things to poor people.... :D

I haven't written the 7th chapter yet, just so you know.

Already got it planned out though

Heh :D

this story is getting interesting :Pop

HEHEHE chapter 7th has been typed down! Boo ya! :D

For you other people out there, just so you know, I don't post another chapter until someone that I don't know posts a comment....

Just so I know that you guys are out there listening too....

So if you're dying for another chapter, post something :D

ok i posted im dying to read again

Chapter 7: REAL guests unite!


Guestalina, with hikoik and slycooper_lo still inside of her giant swirling tornado, walked towards hikoik’s front yard, as the power lines hit her head.

“Roar!!!!” yelled out guestalina as she pulled the power lines that disrupted her evil smile. She tore the power lines to pieces, and cackled evilly.

“My fellow guests!!! Let us unite!!!” Roared guestalina into the sky, as the clouds began to turn gray and approached guestalina. They swirled around, and in the middle, lightning rays began to strike.

All the evil guests heard this call, from walnutfudge’s bedroom, to SassaFrazz’s loft.
So the evil swirling guest tornados hopped from state to state, until they reached hikoik’s front yard.

“MUAHAHAHAHA!!!” screamed guestalina as she gave this hand signal.
3 seconds later, all of the guests, including guestalina, stopped their tornados, and everybody who got eaten up, including the people who aren’t VMK players, fell to the ground.

“UHH!” said the friends, as they landed all together in a pile.

hikoik’s babysitter, landed next to the friend pile, still asleep, and still on the couch. 5 seconds later, a TV featuring laughing clowns landed in front of the babysitter.
“Strange…” muttered LightningBrutus, giving a O_o look.

The guests were now normal sized kids, their ages about 10 to 13 each, still gray with red eyes though, and floating 7 feet from the ground.

Guestalina was just a normal, 14 year old girl, was about 5’5…

The friends, including walnutfudge, coolJamz, princesgirl and kitri, all lied down next together, watching the evil guests smile devilishly above.

“Well, my fellow friends are you ready to crush these so-called cool people!?” screamed guestalina.
“Yeah!” replied the zombie guests, in a monotone-like sort of way.

“For too long, these people who think they are better than everyone else have been sitting on us!! Tonight, we shall crush them all!!!” continued guestalina.
“Yeah!” replied the zombie guests again, in the same monotone-like sort of way…

4 seconds later, the friends and their new friends, noticed they were the only people left (not including the baby sitter) and everyone else had fled…
So the friends quietly tried to make their escape, but guestalina grew big again once more and kicked them back to their spots.

Walnutfudge yelled out “Hey, why did you let them go but not us?!”
“Uh! Totally not fair!” screamed princesgirl.
SassaFrazz gave her a: >_< look, for she didn’t like girly girls.

Guestalina didn’t reply, for her and her zombie guests (who turned into giant evil “clouds swirling above them” guests again) were ready to crush them.

As guestalina and her fellow zombie friends’ foot was about to land, the friends got up and ran, but Blossomflower’s long hair got stepped on; she fell backwards as she tried to make her escape.
“AH! Help!” screamed Blossomflower as Tiger_girl_me ran back and snipped Blossomflower’s hair off with some portable scissors.

”NO!!” cried Blossomflower, as 6 years of hair got cut off.
Tiger_girl_me pushed Blossomflower out of the way, as guestalina tried to smash her.

They ran as fast as they could to catch up with the others... as guestalina yelled out: “Fools! You didn’t try to stop them!! After them!!!”

The guests turned into giant swirling tornados again, and started to hop towards the friends…



AWWW MAN I wanted to fit more in this chapter! Grrrrr…
Once again, kingdom heart fans, keep an eye out :D

CHEESY STORY EVER! YA BABY!

funny one!! :Dopey

.....Loft? i dont have a loft....?


O_O. HOW IN THE WORLD DID I TRAVEL PAST idk.... 3 or 4 STATES? O.o

how did i travel.. past like.. 4 to 9 states.. o_o

>_< the stupid tornados carried you.. DUH

>_< the stupid tornados carried you.. DUH

Thats.... impossible. to go straight through the grand canyon? or through mountains?? O_o

how did i cross the country (if i'm even there lol)???

O_o the tornados hopped and jumped over things. O_o
While you were in it... O_o

So what if it's not possible? A guest that couldn't be booted isn't possible either. O_o

Hey nice story!
Could you put something about Energizer batteries in it? Or maybe... Titanic? Like... Rose comes in and wants to know if they've seen Jack? Or like Cal comes in with some Duracell batteries and demands them to throw away their Energizer and replace them with Duracell and then the evil guest comes in and....
Hehe XP
If you haven't seen Titanic....Nvm then

umm... LOL
Energizer batteries rofl

Titanic.. you mean like the movie? LOL

I watched it when i was little... I don't remember the story now except for the ship broke in half and they died O_o

heh sorry. LOL

titanic has R rated images.. but it is a good film @_@ I think its the top grossing film?

umm... LOL
Energizer batteries rofl

Titanic.. you mean like the movie? LOL

I watched it when i was little... I don't remember the story now except for the ship broke in half and they died O_o

heh sorry. LOL

O_o. The movie's a made up story, but its extremely good. O_o you should try watching it again (SORRY FOR GOING OFF SUBJECT OF YOUR STORY. XD).
o.o you can fast forward that one scene base is talking about...

And not everyone died. only about three of the people who got left on the Titanic survived, while others were on lifeboats and the rest died. >_<. and speaking of the people who died, there actually was a ship that could have saved some of them, but for some reason, they didn't come. i forgot why. but i learned like a BUNCH of stuff about the stories of the Titanic.


titanic has R rated images.. but it is a good film @_@ I think its the top grossing film?

"The top grossing film?" O.o its a love story, based on the actual titanic, and it also shows how the snobby rich people left behind most of the second and third class people even when their boats were almost HALF EMPTY. those snobs. they could have saved more than that. but its actually a realistic fiction movie cause of the two main characters. its so sweet. :D i watch it over and over and over, when its on TV. XD LOL.
its only the scene where she's......... " An artists model...." (ew?)

but i think you dont exactly see much... unless its only bc the TV version was edited...

but just cause of that on scene, we got stuck watching documentaries... of the titanic.



Great.. now i have to release all i know about it from my crazy teacher who's OBSESSED With the Titanic to where we spent most of a 6 weeks period where our only grades were all about the Titanic. -.-

LOL rofl soda
Ya you just gave me the flash back of that.. scene O_o

I thought it wasn't made up -_- wasn't there an actual ship called the titanic and then it sunk and they made a movie about it? Just without the love thing? LOL

LOL rofl soda
Ya you just gave me the flash back of that.. scene O_o

I thought it wasn't made up -_- wasn't there an actual ship called the titanic and then it sunk and they made a movie about it? Just without the love thing? LOL

No, the actual story in the movie, the main movie story of Jack and Rose was completely made up. There were two people named Jack and Rose, but Jack was a first class passenger, and was a second with her family. Her father was a missionary in India. she also had a mother, a younger sister, and a brother. they we're going to NY for the younger brother who had a medical issue. And Jack, was a seventeen year old boy who was in the first class with his family and their maid. But neither ever meet one another. Rose got a life boat with wither her family, and also, i just call her rose, but her real name is actually Ruth Becker. LOL!!!! and Jack didn't get a life boat, but he found an over turned one, and they all lived happily ever after while thousands of people died?

i've only seen the end of that movie lol

I've typed down the 8th chapter now :D

Awaiting one more comment from someone I don't know! :D

. : You think you know me. :.

grossing as in making most money.. :Fool.

Fine soda fine -.- at least someone already replied.

AHHHH what’s gonna happen to the friends (who aren’t bored anymore..)?!?!

Chapter 8: Running and hiding!

The friends (who looked like black little ants, for it was night, and they were small in the eyes of the guests) ran across the street, into the empty yards (the houses flew away already) as guestalina and her companions were roaring as they hopped into the sky.
Guestalina and her pals landed right next to the “ants”… but just right when guestalina was about to grab SoccerRach and LightningBrutus, they disappeared.

“What?!?!” screamed guestalina. She focused her eyes at the spot where SoccerRach and LightningBrutus disappeared.
Her eyes grew big in anger, for coolJamz (who totally forgot of the pain from when guestalina had zapped her) had found a manhole, and the friends were going in as fast as they could for their lives… who knew what guestalina was going to do to them? Besides crush them, I mean.

Guestalina moved as quickly as possible, and kitri jumped into the manhole as quick as possible. She saw her friends at the bottom, and had a moment of relief when she thought she was going to be safe… in a split second that moment was shattered, for she felt a really sharp pain WHAMPED into her head…

Apparently, guestalina had grabbed the edge of kitri’s hair.

“MUAHAHAHA!” roared guestalina, as kitri was screaming “Help!!!”

The friends quickly jumped up and grabbed her feet, and pulled her down.
Kitri’s hair tore right in the middle, and a split second later, she fell on her friends, and they were groaning in the dirty water.

“Aww man, I just got my hair highlighted, and now I’m going to get split ends?! Totally not cool.” grumbled kitri, as she looked at her hair.

“You just better be happy we jumped up to save your butt…” replied walnutfudge, who gave her a “Why did I save you if you weren’t gonna even thank us?” look.

“Don’t complain, I just got 6 years of hair cut off.” continued Blossomflower.

“Phew that was close!” panted princesgirl.
“I know, but at least now we’re safe in here. No more panicking. Who knows what she could have done to us, besides crushing us…if she actually got us? Close escape…” replied AthleticAisha.
“No, I’m not talking about that! I almost broke my nail when I jumped in this stinky place!” screamed princesgirl.
AthleticAisha gave her a @_@ look, and rolled her eyes.

The friends all leaned by the wall and gave a relaxed sigh.

Yokatherine grinned and yelled out “Hah, she can’t get us in here…” Yokatherine continued as she talked to the opening of the manhole above. “Can ye?! No ye can’t! Nah nah nah…” her taunting faded away as she saw the guests turning back normal sized.

”What?” asked LittleTinkFairy, as Yokatherine slowly pointed outside.

The friends looked up and saw all the guests turning back to normal size. They were approaching the manhole quickly.

Panic restored in the air, and it had felt like an alarm had been sounded.

“AH!! Red Alert Red Alert Close The Manhole ASAP!!!” screamed dabaseballking. It appeared he was “dancing” in the dirty water as he panicked like a girl.

The friends were panicking, as everyone scurried to the ladder.

coolJamz got up first, as she saw Guestalina’s evil normal face, grinning devilishly and approaching the manhole, and quickly pulled the manhole shut.

“Oh Man how do we keep it closed?!” yelled coolJamz, who looked like she was going to faint.

The friends looked at each other with fear in their eyes, not knowing what to do.



BUMM BUMM BUMM!!! Uh oh. LOL
Woot, it’s getting scary… I just checked my pulse and it’s beating really fast. O_o
Comment, reply, etc so you can get the next chapter asap! :D

RED ALERT RED ALERT GUESTALINA IS IN HERE OPEN THE STORY MANHOLE COVER ASAP!
said dabaseballking as he yelled like a buff, macho man.

LOL, i am such a minor character

cool, is this going to go on forever or will it ever end?

:tink: tink

ummm
woot i found it?
LOL


mhm mhm mhm
look what soda did.. lol jk
MORE.

rofl "Look what soda did" hehe all of the blame falls on soda.. LOL

rofl "Look what soda did" hehe all of the blame falls on soda.. LOL

Thats nice to know that i dont really care? :D

LOL, i am such a minor character

cool, is this going to go on forever or will it ever end?

:tink: tink

o.o sodas a minor character too. LOL

Just so you know, I'm working hard to keep the story balanced, with equal parts...

some people just get bigger lines and stuff because in those cases, it fits their personality more...

(still can't get over it) buff macho man. LOL!!!

and hikoik, "my foot"? that sounds a little.. strange.

buff macho man. rofl

yup, buff macho man..

flower just a reminder about

if anyone else but flower reads it i shall report you to the cia

phillip is a piece of kfc and guestalinas "hair problem "

flower.. the ' my foot ' thing means that theres no way it could be true LOL
and base... *kicks*

hikoik... isn't that supposed to be something else other than your foot? @_@

but this site is rated G so nvm :D

and baseball -_- how did you create that cool black looking thingy?

btw baseball, hikoik already killed phillip so there's no use really LOL

Who's ready for chapter 9?!!? Ya ready y'all!?

Awaiting one more comment, from anyone! (doesn't matter if I know you! :D)

Someone's messaging me about the story, so that counts! :D

Great Keep Writing!

Who’s ready for chapter 9 and see if the friends made it?!!?
You ready to READ?!
I Am. Who’s with meh?!!?

Ok enough warming up LOL it’s time for the 9th chapter, where the fun begins! :D
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Chapter 9: Seal the manhole!

(Previously in chapter 8: coolJamz… aww forget it just go back to the next page and read it.)

coolJamz pulled the lid of the manhole cover down (using these 2 small little things that stuck out of the bottom) as guestalina and her friends started to pull on the lid.
“Guys anybody have Anything with you?!” screamed coolJamz as she was practically hanging from the lid.
Everyone emptied their pockets. Nobody had anything except…

CyanTara.
She had a pack filled with 30 pieces of gum.

“Anything else you can find over there?!” screamed coolJamz.
The friends frantically looked around, searching the dirty water, except for princesgirl and kitri, who didn’t want to ruin their hands with old, muddy water.

Tiger_girl_me screamed out “Hey look, I found something!” as she jumped up from the water, holding up 2 blocks of 1 foot long wood.
2 seconds later, lil_rockerangel jumped up screaming “I found something too!” as she held up a lighter in the sky.

The friends looked at each other, not knowing what gum, 2 blocks of wood, and a lighter can do... while coolJamz was screaming as she used her own weight to prevent guestalina and her pals from coming in… amazingly, she held on that long…

CyanTara yelled out as she snapped her fingers, “I’ve got it!!”

The entire group of friends turned to her in amazement.

“First, we chew up the gum; stick it to the manhole lid, and stick some to 1 edge of either block of wood, stick the 2 blocks together, and stick that 2 foot block to the gum on the lid. Then we use the lighter to make the gum harden!”
CyanTara quickly passed out her strawberry mint gum.

There was an awkward pause of silence, as the friends looked her, amazed by how she thought up that brilliant and complicated plan.

CyanTara continued, “What are you all staring at! Everyone start chewing gum!!”
The friends quickly unwrapped their pieces of gum.

“Hurry up, I haven’t got all day!! I’m starting to slip!” screamed coolJamz.

Everyone chewed like the wind, as hikoik blew a giant bubble and giggled, “Hey look I made the biggest bubble in the history of bubbles!”
SassaFrazz nudged him in the ribs as she chewed like the wind.
“OW! Ok I’m chewing, I’m chewing! Gosh…” replied hikoik, folding his arms and rolling his eyes as he popped his giant bubble and chewed it up again.

“Rawr!!!” yelled guestalina from the outside, as she shook the manhole to make coolJamz fall off.
“AH!!! Hurry up!!!” screamed coolJamz.

5 seconds later, CyanTara yelled “Ok, everyone spit out your gum and put it on the manhole lid, except for SoccerRach, walnutfudge, and me!”
Everyone scurried up to the manhole lid, where coolJamz was grunting and screaming, as guestalina was yelling “Open up!!! It’s me!! Muahahaha!”
Curiously, she didn’t turn into a tornado… she must’ve been tired or something…

Everyone pushed and shoved each other as they all held unto the ladder using one hand, while their other hand was sticking their giant piece of gum on the manhole lid.

Meanwhile, SoccerRach, walnutfudge and CyanTara put their gum on the edge of one of the blocks, and stuck the other one to it. CyanTara quickly tossed the block at the friends. They scurried to put it on the lid.

“Rocker!” screamed light, putting her hand out at rocker, who had already stuck her gum, and had jumped off the ladder.
She looked clueless and asked “Huh?”

“GIVE US THE LIGHTER!!” yelled out the friends in unison.

“Oh!” replied lil_rockerangel as she clumsily pulled out the lighter from her pocket, frantically trying to keep it in her cold, wet hands as it kept bouncing out.


Rawr it’s getting too long. Oh well find out what happens in the next chapter :D
Getting good! Yay!
Isn’t this SO CHEESY!? :D
(LOL about the intro, this chapter was gonna be able to let you see if they made it… but oh well it got too long again so… heh wait for the next one LOL)
(iRacoon, I’ll find a place for you in the next chapter; and I honestly don’t remember you asking. Sorry)
(Btw, CyanTara is one of my friends that I forgot to add, and now she's got an account here.... so if you wondered where she was in the beginning of the story, she was there all along and she just didn't just say or do anything! :D)

Still dont want to use fireworks to blow them to bits..... * puts them back in her brothers room* aww... LOL *walks off*

Rofl soda...

i.... GIGGLE? *twitch*

ROFL hikoik...

I should do this to you more often LOL

hehe ... he has no idea yet, does he?

LOL soda, I already sent it to him, but he's won't be on for a little while, so for now, he has no clue yet LOL

i.... GIGGLE? *twitch*

LOL. you sounded like my friend jillian there. ( bill.i or billy... or jilly. XD)

:o that billy girl you always talk is about is actually a JILLY? LOL!!!

hikoik, you need to say - twitches - more in vmk, it cracks me up :P

o_o uh.. duh?

Good, cause billy is a bad name for a girl...

Waiting for next chapter. and flower, FLOWER ONLY! NO PEEKY PEEKY! hikoiks bird not phillip can be uh.. the man's chicken no wonder what his her name is :) and HAIR PROBLEMS :)

Some Random Person Of Whom Idk Post A Post So I Can Read The Next Part Of The Story.


Cause, I Want Entertainment....

Good! Write more please, it's soo cheesy!!!!

its nice and cheesy, you would make mickey mouse proud.

I LOVE YOU RANDOM PEOPLE! :'D

*gives them a cookie*

LOL!! I need to write the chapter first, soda... I'll do it asap! (writers block)

CHEESY :P ty ppl for commenting. LOL

(LOL xigbar, your avatar looked strangely familiar to me. In my head: "Pokemon? Nah... there's no guy in pokemon that looks like that. KH? But - but... that's a cartoon. -_- What is it?! digimon?! i don't watch that! - explodes -" and I just clicked on your page, saw your profile pic, and I noticed that he was holding a KEYBLADE.... "Sora? hmm..." looked at your signature, "KH ROCKS!"... meh face went :O.. "SORA!? It is sora.... i guess... cartoony... WEIRD... is that japanese writing? :o..." LOL)

EAt popcorn and listen to lindah, it's the poverty that counts!

uh... lindah? (coughs)

fyi peeps, meh typing like the wind on the story....

I sorta stopped for a while cause nobody was commenting... LOL

ok we'll comment later...

sorry marge it's been a long day huh? lol

i can always crack somebody up ;)

POP IT!

- pressure building - Y'all are viewing this page, it's making me type with pressure.. LOL
(don't leave just because i said that.)

Omg you said that? yeah ok WE'RE LEAVING!

LOL can I be the comment? Very good story so far.. :)

NICE JOB!!!!!

:P so many people commenting :')
- cries in happiness -

OK drama show over. I'm almost there, they have sealed the manhole now.

tyvm guys!

I'm almost done, but base won't be happy about it.. :P

LOL!! I need to write the chapter first, soda... I'll do it asap! (writers block)

CHEESY :P ty ppl for commenting. LOL

(LOL xigbar, your avatar looked strangely familiar to me. In my head: "Pokemon? Nah... there's no guy in pokemon that looks like that. KH? But - but... that's a cartoon. -_- What is it?! digimon?! i don't watch that! - explodes -" and I just clicked on your page, saw your profile pic, and I noticed that he was holding a KEYBLADE.... "Sora? hmm..." looked at your signature, "KH ROCKS!"... meh face went :O.. "SORA!? It is sora.... i guess... cartoony... WEIRD... is that japanese writing? :o..." LOL)

That's because kingdom hearts was made into a manga (Japanese comics) when it became a popular video game. i have the first set... but I'm waiting for the next time i go to the book store and chain of memories books are all there (and lol it's probably at KH2, i'm too lazy to look at the bookstore LOL) . One is always sold out D: and i finish them quickly... (cause its all i do for a while.. LOL)

COMICS?!
Maybe I should read them along with archie comics (do you know those? I <3 those!) and i'm not lazy about reading... :P

OK the chapter is now done, and I shall just clean up a few things, re-read it and edit mistakes, and hope the mods and baseball won't scream at my face. :)

BOOYA I HAVE OVERCOME MY WRITER’S BLOCK. LOL
Avastkeith… you can come back now! LOL
(and you have anyway so.. LOL)

@_@ I hope this next chapter fits everything I want into it..

Chapter 10: Keep running!!

lil_rockerangel tossed the lighter at LightningBrutus.

The wet lighter was twirling in the air, flying towards the friends on the ladder… in slow motion, with background music going “BUMMM.. BUMM BUMM!!! DUH NAH DUH NAH..” (sorry my imagination.. LOL)

LightningBrutus reached for the flying lighter (in slow motion… ok ignore that; think about it your own way! LOL) it was bouncing out of her hands…

All the friends were on their toes, ready to catch the lighter if LightningBrutus dropped it...
coolJamz was screaming as she was slipping, ready to fall in a few seconds…

(Ah feel the pressure! LOL)

LightningBrutus finally caught the wet lighter, no more slipping…
She tossed it to LittleTinkFairy, who was at the top of the ladder.
She quickly and frantically flicked the lighter on and started “roasting” (LOL) the gum. coolJamz fell to the ground, spraining her ankle…
“OWW!” she screamed, but nobody seemed to care because they were all focusing on LittleTinkFairy, who was almost finished…

dabaseballking took over coolJamz’s job.

“Careful, don’t burn the wood…” commented walnutfudge. LittleTinkFairy stayed quiet as she bit her lip.

3 seconds later, “Done!” yelled out LittleTinkFairy, as the friends sighed in relief.

dabaseballking jumped down, nearly smashing coolJamz.

“Hey!” screamed coolJamz as she kicked dabaseballking in the shin… (:D)

The friends could hear guestalina yelling, screaming, and pounding outside.
Once again, it was strange that she didn’t turn into a giant screaming, muahahing tornado.

“Let’s find a way out of here before guestalina opens up the manhole,” said SassaFrazz, panting.

The friends ran deeper into the sewer.
coolJamz was limping along slowly. dabaseballking noticed her struggling, so he ran back to help her. He put his arms around her and helped her hop along. They looked into each other’s eyes… they felt a spark between them…
They both grinned as they continued to waddle along with the rest of the group…

“So how in the world are we gonna get out of here?” asked slycooper_lo.
“Omg. That question is SOOOO easy! Duh! We’ll just… umm….” replied Kitri, whose hair was still looking very uneven…
“You don’t even know do you…” retorted princesgirl, rolling her eyes.
“Not a clue…” replied Kitri, looking a little embarrassed.

The friends kept running, for they knew that the manhole lid wouldn’t stay closed for long… they had about only 2 ½ minutes left…

They saw a person in the distance… and the friends looked at each other, wondering who that is…

(LOL baseball and coolJamz, have mercy on meh! – cries -)
(anyone have suggestions on how to get them out? That’s a question I asked myself that I haven’t really answered yet…)
(sorry mods if this is inappropriate)
(iRacoon your name will be mentioned in the next chapter :P)
(:D soda happy? LOL)

It's posted! Hooray! Party? - blows those party horn thingies -

coolJamz, baseball, have mercy on me!! - cries -

nah dat was a goood story.

:P tyvm... sorry it's short, i wanted to get it done asap.

MUAHAHAHA i'm just gonna type the next chapter and post it today. LOL

Ummm.. iRacoon, before I can post the next chapter with you in it, I'm gonna have to know if you're a girl or a boy.
LOL

i want to be in the story :) - im a girl - :D

ok straws :P LOL

tyvm for telling me in advance, so I can edit chapter 11 and add you to it

I just figured out what bumps are! LOL... you comment to bump your topic up to the new posts list :P I think that's what it is?

Anyway, I won't be able to post chapter 11 until iRacoon gives me the info... :P

I just figured out what bumps are! LOL... you comment to bump your topic up to the new posts list :P I think that's what it is?

Anyway, I won't be able to post chapter 11 until iRacoon gives me the info... :P

ok thx hey what is your user name in vmk could we be friends.
Also could u think you could check out my story - The Adventure of Stick Man

it would be nice if u could give it a boost on views thx.

i get only one line since my last line was like... CHAPTERS AGO!?!? *emo corner* ( KIDDING. XD)

Can I be in the next chapter? Pretty please? LOL Oh and nice story btw! :princess:

NIce story it was great

Soda: Huh?
CuteTabitha: Of course! Ty for telling me before it was posted.
Brave_Gogeta: Tyvm :P
Straws: My vmk name is still Blossomflower :P what's yours?

wow, it's soo chessy, yet so god and cool, i'd luv to be in it, but i want a weird role, btw i'm a guy, good story, keep up the cheeseness

Soda: No i know it means "bring up my post", but I didn't really understand WHAT it brings up... because I thought it meant the posts in the topic -_- and you can't rearrange them... so i'm like "huh?" now i get it. it brings up the TOPIC on the new posts list :P

Cool-Dolphin: OK :P your signature is pretty self-explanatory that you're a boy. LOL

CHEESY! :D

Btw, I can't post chapter 11 any time soon unless iRacoon tells me the stuff...

If he or she doesn't do so for a very long time, I'll just post-pone his or her appearance.... :P but I PMed him/her so I think I'll be hearing from him/her soon...

ok :P :D :P :D (I need to come up with a smiley that is smiling at the same time sticking its tongue out LOL)

I'll PM you then :P :D (rawr evil smileys)

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Straws: can't PM you... it says that you chose not to recieve PMs...
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Soda: I just understood what you meant by "I only have one line? since my last line was like CHAPTERS AGO?!!?" and then something about an emo corner.. LOL you meant your Speaking lines... I thought like vertical lines so I'm like "Huh?" LOL I feel so dumb... cause I am.. anyway sorry 'bout that I'll give you more lines then... you had big parts before so I was trying to even it out by giving the new people who just joined the story more lines.

But anyway, if anyone here feels uncomfortable with not having many lines, and they wish to have more...
Tell meh (no PM pls :P)
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Cool-Dolphin: If you want a weird personality, you gotta tell me what are your hates, likes, attitude, how weird do you wanna be, do you like being weird with chickens or girls (LOL?)... etc; so I can make you weird... like what you want to be weird....

Unless you just want me to make you weird and you don't really care what kinda weird then that's fine too... :P

(btw, <3 the siggie)

Last chapter please!!! this story is like addicting!!

LOL it's not the last chapter yet; the last chapter will be like 600 chapters away :P

I can't post the next part yet because I need to know if iRacoon is a girl or boy

but if he/she takes too long I'll just postpone his/her scene so the chapter can be posted :D

LOL it's not the last chapter yet; the last chapter will be like 600 chapters away :P

I can't post the next part yet because I need to know if iRacoon is a girl or boy

but if he/she takes too long I'll just postpone his/her scene so the chapter can be posted :D

Ok, if he doesn't answer can you put me in the story ;) i want to figure out the nexxt plan of escaping ;)

LOL ok i'll try

may i be in it my name in vmk is Roy_The_Boy

and im a boy!! like in my name!

LOL ok
so do you want Roy_The_Boy to be your name in my story?

of course:)

OK MUAHAHAHA

I think I'll post the next chapter, postponing iRacoon... he/she is taking forever.. LOL

I'll post it later today.

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I'll post it tomorrow, I had dance class so... ya

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iRacoon has responded, he is a boy!
The story can go on now!! MUAHAHAHAHA
I need to type it first. LOL
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!
- cries -
stupid computer!
It crashed, and now the entire new chapter I wrote is gone!!!!!!!!! Egad
I can't remember exactly what i did!
I'M NOT HAPPY.

Oh well :( type your new chapter like the WIINNDD FLOWA TYPE LIKE WIINNNNNDD
Until the paper is gone with the WIINNDDD

ROAR THIS CHAPTER ISN’T REALLY PERFECT ANYMORE, THE OTHER ONE GOT ERASED!!!!!
and yes i typed like the wind. LOL

Chapter 11: A whole different group of friends!

There was no longer a lot of light, for the friends have left the manhole lid, which had a few small holes in them… (where guestalina peeked a couple of times with her red/yellow eyes...)

LittleTinkFairy took out the lighter and flicked it on… and saw a boy walking towards them, who was signaling behind him. Then came out 6 other people… running as they looked terrified and worried.

The group was kind of shocked to see a whole new different group of people, obviously running from guestalina too... the friends could tell by the horrified looks on their faces, and their messed up hair.

The 2 groups ran towards each other, excited to be with more people… with LittleTinkFairy being the leader, carrying the “torch” (LOL)

Except for dabaseballking and coolJamz, who stayed behind… staring at each other…
They didn’t really notice the situation…
Until it got dark, for the rest of the group was straying from them, along with the only source of light…
So they waddled along with the rest.

“Omg there’s people down here!” commented people from the other group.
“Hey what are you guys doing down here?” asked LittleTinkFairy.
“We’re running away from those evil tornados outside. They have faces!” replied iRacoon, the boy who was signaling to the others.
“No duh, they’re evil guests that turn into tornados. They want to smash VMK players that aren’t guests because we were ‘mean to them‘.” retorted SassaFrazz.
“They claim that they're out to get EVERY vmk player that isn't a guest, but strangely, they’re only chasing US.” said teddyfruitgirl, who was strangely quiet through the entire adventure…
“Well anyway let’s run from them together! The more, the merrier!” said iRacoon.
“Let’s introduce ourselves FAST. We’ve only got a minute until guestalina comes and smashes us all…” said SoccerRach.
“Who’s guestalina?” asked iRacoon.
“She’s the leader of those evil tornados with ‘faces’. By the way, if you join our group, you will all be in more danger…” replied tiger_girl_me.
“@_@ Ok… well I’m iRacoon, nice to meet you all…”
The group turned their heads to the next girl in line.
“Oh, uh hi I’m Straws :)”
“Hi, I’m CuteTabitha! – giggles- ”
“Hey girl, your outfit is sizzling hot!” blurted out Kitri.
“Why thank you! Hehe” said CuteTabitha.
The group of friends ignored the 2 and continued.
“Hey peeps, I’m Cool-Dolphin. I LIKE CHICKENS :D”
The group looked at him in a O_o way.
“I’m Mizz.V! Peace!”
“I’m encyclopedia. Greetings.”
“I’m Roy_The_Boy! Wassup!”
The other group was done, and it was time for the other group of friends…
“Hey I’m LittleTinkFairy aka tink.”
“Meh Blossomflower, or Flowa! :D”
“I’m SoccerRach.”
“SassaFrazz or soda! Eggs eggs Riku Riku!”
The group gave Soda a O_o look.
“hikoik… sup? Phillip says hi.”
The other group who didn’t know who phillip was, looked at him with another O_o look.
“tiger_girl_me.”
“lil_rockerangel, but you can call me rocka.”
“LightningBrutus, or lighty!”
“Yokatherine, how ye be doing?”
“Kitri. Don’t hate just cause I’m fabulous.”
Once again, another O_o look from the group.
“princesgirl.”
She approached Cool-Dolphin as she flipped her hair, and sang badly:
“Hey Hey, you you, I don’t like your girlfriend! No way no way I think you need a new one!”
The group looked at her with Another O_o face, and tossed in a -_-.
hikoik was about to make another rude comment, but stopped himself.
Ignoring their painful ears, the group continued:
“slycooper_lo, or shark.”
“AthleticAisha, or candy :D”
“walnutfudge :P”
Everyone drooled in hunger.
(It’s nighttime and nobody had dinner yet. Too busy running..)
“CyanTara!”
“teddyfruitgirl :)”
”dabaseballking.”
“coolJamz. Ow my ankle!”
“Sorry.” replied dabaseballking.


@_@ the introducing was too long… it took a whole chapter! LOL
If I didn’t mention your name, please tell me (too much people.. @_@)
I’m gonna add another chapter after ANY comment (doesn’t matter if it’s from my friends) since this was such a lousy chapter. LOL

that was a interesting chapter :D

LOL tyvm :P

Yay! XD My favorite Line! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!


"Eggs Eggs. Riku Riku!" :D

LOL Soda!!
I know you <3 that line so I made you say it. Now gimme a hug LOL

LOL yeah.. i am prone to do the stupidest things! ROFL!

interesting

rofl
(interesting is like the most common adjective for this chapter) LOL

lol, this story is getting good flower!

Tyvm
egad I just forgot that I said that I will post another chapter when ANYONE comments!

Ok i gotta type it down first. LOL

HEY my comments aren't rude unless the person is stupid :)
btw thats probably EXACTLY what soda would say in that part LOL

LOL she acted stupid; she sang off key... of course you would make a rude comment LOL

true.. LOL i probably would
people like that kinda annoy meh

LOL see... like i said: i can predict almost everything you do
LOL

Last time, there was this annoying girl singing via the karaoke machine
I think my ears got up and ran away
I couldn't concentrate on anything i was doing
video games couldn't help it
i practically exploded LOL

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Egad i really need to write the next chapter
OK i'm typing like the wind.. again @_@ LOL

Some Concept Art i kinda did i could make some chracters on real life paper right now and make some of Guestalina's Torn Down Buildings she broke down in the real world
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Warning: Do Not Use May Change Overtime For More Blah Blah Blah please follow this link to Blah Blah Blah Here (http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/member.php?u=21754)

LOL iRacoon, that's cute
But I'm gonna alter your suggestion a bit... make it more interesting :P
ty for it though I will post it saying that you gave me the idea

Heh sorry for the delay. I forgot that I said that I will post another chapter LOL


Chapter 12: You better watch out, you better cry, you better pout, I’m telling you why! Guestalina is coming to the sewer!


“OK, lets hurry up and go before guestalina catches up!” yelled walnutfudge.
“guestalina… rofl, strangest name ever…” snickered Mizz.V.

The conjoined groups started to run from the opposite direction where the “gummed” (LOL) sewer lid was.

Fortunately, coolJamz could run by herself now, although dabaseballking didn’t want to let go of her… (:D)

About 2/3 minute later, the friends heard a loud, echoy, faraway clutter.

Suddenly, a loud booming roar echoed through the sewer, and shattered the calmness of the little water dripping noises.

“WHERE ARE THEY?!!?!?! (THEY?! They? they?... they… they.. they)” boomed an angry guestalina, with multiple echos...

The friends gasped in fear, knowing that guestalina has caught up.
They had lost about 2 minutes of escaping time, due to the introducing iRacoon wanted…

The friends slowly tip-toed forward, trying to avoid making splashing echoes.

Cool-Dolphin accidentally tripped, and landed on his knees. A mild echo could be heard throughout the sewer.

Guestalina was too busy throwing a tantrum, as her buddies were listening to her.

Although one guest, named Skyana, wasn’t paying attention to their evil ruler, and heard the noises.

She looked at that direction, and opened her mouth. “Uh.. guesta –“
She suddenly stopped and looked down. She kept her mouth shut, and bit her lip.

“Guestalina?” Skyana asked.
“WHAT?!!?” yelled guestalina.
“I think I know where the traitors are…” replied Skyana. “I heard a noise coming from that direction…” continued Skyana, as she pointed to the opposite direction from where she heard the splashes of Cool-Dolphin.
“Great!! Let’s go!” yelled Guestalina, grinning evilly. “You are my favorite one, Skyana.” said Guestalina, as she patted skyana on the back, who was looking guilty.
The friends stood still as they heard the guests walking away.
“Phew, I guess they thought that echo came from the other direction…” whispered SassaFrazz.
The friends continued running quietly towards the opposite direction, looking for an exit.
Everybody’s face was relieved and glad… except iRacoon’s. He seemed to be very unhappy and angry that the guests didn’t come after them and walked off in the other direction.

“Uh guys, you just go on, I’m gonna do something here. I’ll catch up later.” said iRacoon.
The friends suspected nothing, they were just happy to be alive. They ran off.

When the splashing echoes started to fade, iRacoon took out a walkie-talkie.
“Evil queen to lowly worm, evil queen to lowly worm. Do you read me? And by the way can you change my name from lowly worm to Supreme Evilness?” whispered iRacoon in the walkie-talkie.
Guestalina’s booming voice was heard from the walkie-talkie. “NO. What do you want?!”
“Sorry, your evil highness. Anyway, you’re going in the wrong direction; the vermin is going the opposite way, here with me.” replied iRacoon.
“WHAT?!!?! WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR POINTING ME IN THE WRONG DIRECTION?!!” screamed guestalina.
The guests who were standing in the line took a step back, and Skyana was the only one standing in front. The rest of the guests pointed at her.
Guestalina approached Skyana as fire blew out her nose.
“But I actually thought the echo came from this direction!” screamed Skyana, hoping for mercy.
“Fine I’ll let you slide.” replied Guestalina.
“Phew…” whispered Skyana, as she bit her lip and looking down to her shoes.

“Drat she found out I lied…” thought Skyana, twirling her gray hair in guilt.

“Thank you for the useful information, iRacoon. Your wanting to help us is very kind. I will give you that position of power over VMK players after your help. With your own set of amazing powers of course.” said Guestalina, in a calm, somewhat evil way.
“No problem. Just give me an awesome red outfit and a cool nickname afterwards.” said iRacoon, grinning evilly.
“Yeah whatever.” said guestalina, as iRacoon slowly put back the walkie-talkie in his jacket.
Guestalina blurted out “Like that’s ever gonna happen. I’m the only ruler of the world, me and nobody else.”
“So wait, you mean you’re not gonna give him that position of power like you promised?” asked Skyana.
“Duh, NO WAY! Now let’s go get those vermin.” said Guestalina, snapping her fingers as she commanded her army.
Skyana wasn’t really happy. She put on a “Sigh what am I gonna do about this” face, and followed the rest of the group who was following guestalina.

iRacoon giggled evilly as he followed the rest of his “friends.”



BUMM BUMM BUMM
(chapter idea by: iRacoon, of course LOL)
Base, I’ll use yours later on when appropriate.
(Oh and by the way, please put chapter ideas and other stuff regarding that through PM!! Don’t post it here, spoilers no goody LOL)

i'm not in it lol

-_- i can't make EVERYONE have a line per chapter... LOL

You already had a big part in the last few ones; me trying to even it out... :P
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I'm not posting the next chapter unless someone I don't know posts a comment...
:P (and I haven't typed it down yet LOL)

you don't know me... im your worst nightmare BWAHAHAHA .-.

I like it flower!

are me in base.. like in love?,... 0_0
Rotfl.

LOL jam... yes :P - starts dancing happily -
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hikoik... did you get extremely bored or something? LOL

Jammy
happy
now?!
LOL


Chapter 13: iRaccoon is pure evil…


iRaccoon ran lightning speed to catch up with his “friends.”

coolJamz and dabaseballking were the slowest in the clump, and therefore the most behind. The 2 were hypnotized by each other… that caused them to waddle like little penguins.

coolJamz was sitting next to dabaseballking in a tropical tree. Waves crashing onto the shore and seagulls fighting for a bread crumb saying “Mine! Mine! Mine!” were creating a peaceful mood. Sweet smelling flowers instantly bloomed from the ground. The aroma of hibiscus and blossom was in the air. Happy music was playing in the background… when base muttered out the words: “Jam… I couldn’t really say this before but…” Jam’s eyes filled with glee. “Y-yes?” said an anxious Jam. Dabasebalking continued, “I L—“

iRaccoon ran past coolJamz, which caused her to awaken from her dazzling daydream about dabaseballking. The happy music suddenly went “Bzeeuiz!” like it was suddenly cut off.

coolJamz snapped back to reality.

“Hey, where have you been?” asked coolJamz.

iRaccoon didn’t reply, and he just kept on running to the area where most of the people were..
He stayed quiet as if though he was hiding something… nobody had really noticed that he had come back.

coolJamz gazed into dabaseballking’s eyes again and continued her daydream..

The group wasn’t really running that fast anymore, more like fast walking. They became calm under the impression that guestalina was searching someplace else, and they wouldn’t be seeing her in a while…

It was amazing how useful a lighter can be sometimes… :D

“Hey guys,” said iRaccoon, having an evil look in his eyes.
Everyone turned their heads to look at iRaccoon.
“Hey you’re back raccoon! Where did you go? What were you doing? Why did you take so long?” comments drowned the air.
“Oh I was just… umm…” stuttered iRaccoon.
“Never mind that. Why don’t we all take a break? We’re hungry and sleepy; it’s 1:30 in the morning according to my watch.”
“But what about guestalina? She’s gonna get us if we don’t keep moving.” said slycooper_lo.
“guestalina is long gone, I heard her go back up the manhole lid. They gave up their search!” replied iRaccoon.
“Oh really? Yes! Awesome! Sweet. Rocking! Finally! Good. I’m starving.” Comments echoed throughout the tunnel.

Guestalina heard the echoing happiness.
“They’re near!!” yelled the obsessed guestalina.
“Charge!!!” continued guestalina, who was smirking evilly once again.

The friends were leaning against the wall, chatting happily, and complaining about how hungry, sleepy, and tired they were.

iRaccoon started giggling evilly, as he ignored their loud comments, and listened to guestalina and her pals’ splashing footsteps.

Roy_The_Boy saw multiple shadows approaching rapidly.

He got curious, and creeped over to the wall. (the friends were relaxing right after a turn)

- pauses story -
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l…_____________ <guestalina and her pals
l…l
l…l
^ the friends

Get it? LOL

- plays story –

Roy_The_Boy slowly went up the right wall, and peeked in the direction where guestalina was. His eyes suddenly went big, and he screamed really loud for… guestalina’s evil face with that evil smirk, red/yellow eyes, and bad breath… was 3 inches away from his face.

His scream was really loud… for it echoed through the entire sewer, and went up the open manhole.

The friends suddenly quieted down, turned their heads, and wondered why Roy_The_Boy screamed…


OK that’s enough for a chapter :P it’s more fun to continue a different part of the story… in a different chapter LOL
Besides I like to leave y’all hanging :P
MUAHAHA more to come soon.

- pants - I was typing like the wind... LOL

Concept Art: Coming Soon!...

I don't really need art iRaccoon; it'll ruin my sight of how the story is in my head :)

make me be the hero by throwing straws at guestalina!!!!

ROTFL!!
this is so funny!

You've inspired me!
(( peaceful music sings )))

LOL straws; I'll make you do that too? LOL

Jam :P Don't you just love how base almost gets to tell you how he feels? Aww....
LOL

I've inspired you! Yay! LOL

OK next chapter:

OK after you read this; if it stinks, remember. I typed like DA WIND LOL


Chapter 14: More running… egad


The friends were staring at Roy_The_Boy. He was starting to float up. The friends didn’t see why, but guestalina grabbed him by his shirt and pulled him up. She snarled at his face.

The friends thought he was doing some kind of trick for a second.

“Whoa…” said the friends in unison.
“OK whatever you’re doing Roy, cut it out, you’re creeping us all out.” said CuteTabitha.
“I-I’m n-not d-doing a-anything.” replied Roy_The_Boy as guestalina gave him an evil smirk.
“Then what? Tinkerbell shook her thang and spread pixie dust on your face?” retorted Straws.
“Hey!” said LittleTinkFairy.
“N-no. G-g-g-g-g-uestalina… i-is…. H-here.” replied Roy_The_Boy as he fainted.

The friends were speechless in shock.

Guestalina tossed Roy_The_Boy to the ground and jumped out from behind the turn.

“ATTACK MY FELLOW FRIENDS!!!!” screamed guestalina, and strangely, she didn’t turn into another tornado.

The friends screamed, and the “psycho” theme song played.

The friends ran like lightning speed. The splashing water from their giant steps made it very difficult to see.
Guestalina and her evil minions kept running towards the friends, except Skyana, who felt sorry for the fainted Roy_The_Boy. She stayed by him.
Guestalina was too busy chasing the friends to care.

A “scooby-doo” type ghostly chase song started playing.

coolJamz wasn’t perfectly healed yet, but she ran faster than anyone else. Even dabaseballking (who still wanted to hold on to her) couldn’t catch up.

Blossomflower said to hikoik “MUAHAHA, bet you can’t beat get past me!”
“Oh… you’re on!” replied hikoik.
“I’m in too… I shall beat you all! Muahaha!” said SassaFrazz, who randomly came into the picture.

The friends looked at the 3, for they were the only ones not really taking the whole running thing seriously…

“Getting. Tired. Sleepy and Hungry… Ugh.” said encyclopedia, as he fainted. Guestalina left him on the ground, and she and her gray guest army trampled over him.

“Encyclopedia!!!” screamed Cool-Dolphin.

(guestalina, she’s spooky and scary, she’s comin to get you…) Sorry. This is what is in my head right now, and I can’t imagine it any other way rofl.

Omg. Did you see those?! – pauses story –

- points at SassaFrazz, whose tongue is out, while she was smiling really big during her big race with hikoik and Blossomflower –

Omg that’s hilarious! – starts laughing like crazy –

And look.. – rewinds story –

- points at encyclopedia getting trampled –

HAHAHAHA rofl that’s hilarious! What a position! LOL

OK sorry I’m done. – plays story and the weird “scooby-doo” ghost chase music plays again –

The people who were in front of the line, hikoik, Blossomflower, SassaFrazz and coolJamz, suddenly stopped and wiggled as if they were going off balance.
There was a giant pit thingy, where the water leads to.
- pauses story again –

(ignore the dots, aka periods)



-------- < hikoik, SassaFrazz, Blossomfower, and coolJamz almost falling off, behind them are the rest of the friends, and guestalina going MUAHAHAHA I SHALL SMASH YOU
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. . . .l dirty water yuck l
. . .. l dirty water yuck l
. . . .l dirty water yuck l
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Get it?

- plays story again –

The friends stared at each other; who wanted to go jump down in Gross water? Ewww…


UH OH dead end what are they gonna do?
Muahaha getting cheesier and cheesier

i want to save the day with Straws!!

- gets straw and puts tranqulizer bullet in it and fires at guestalina -

Yay i save the day lol

rofl that comment by straws in the story made meh laugh
btw flower the "pauses story" things are annoying.. LOL

rofl hikoik
Tinkerbell shook her thang! rofl
(tink's gonna smash me for that LOL)
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The "pauses story"... That's the point hikoik
LOL

i want to do my straw thing!!!

OK OK i'll make you do it in the next chapter and in the one where we fight guestalina

LOL

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good news... I'm gonna post a new chapter every time ANYONE comments
Now if you excuse me, I'm typing the next one.. LOL

now!
iw ant to here it now!!

iRaccoon, please don't do that -_-
I'm planning to merge all of the chapters at my first post when I finish the story.

anyway here's the next chapter:

Chapter 15: Swim for your lives…


The friends behind SassaFrazz, Blossomflower, coolJamz and hikoik didn’t know that it was a dead end…
They were so high up from the water.

The friends ran right into the other friends who stood there, and the 4 fell off…
Luckily they hung on to the edge.
It was like a somewhat like a backflip.

The 4 hanging friends screamed in unison.
“Oops, sorry.” said dabaseballking, who was the in the “friend clump” to bump the 4 off. He was losing his balance.

He helped up coolJamz, who was still hanging strong… even though hikoik was hanging on by one hand, and Blossomflower had already fell off when dabaseballking said sorry; she was just hanging on to SassaFrazz’s feet.

“Ugh Soda, your feet stink!” said Blossomflower.
“Hehe… eggs eggs riku riku?” replied SassaFrazz.
Blossomflower gave her a -_- look.

While this entire ruckus was happening, the friends behind dabaseballking (who were aware of the dead end) looked backwards, and saw guestalina and her pals approaching rapidly with pitchforks.
“Where in the world did they get those pitchforks?” asked teddyfruitgirl.
Nobody replied…

“We’ve got to jump in, or else they’re gonna poke us to death!” screamed lil_rockerangel.
“And I’m too pretty to be poked!!” said princesgirl.

The friends agreed, and pushed towards the exit… where dabaseballking was standing (he was still comforting coolJamz as hikoik yelled: “Yo lover boy! A little help here!” Blossomflower interrupted, “I need more help than any of them!!!” SassaFrazz screamed “Hello?! Flower is heavy!!” but dabaseballking ignored them…)

2 seconds later, a horrified look appeared on dabaseballking’s face, as he and coolJamz were being pushed out of the tunnel…

(Imagine this in slow motion it’s way better :P)

(slow motion AHHHH!!!! From all the friends is heard)

Every friend flew out of the tunnel, some upside down…

Cool-Dolphin was in a “flying position” and yelled out “Look at me! I can fly! Whee….”

SPLASH.

The friends landed in the gross water.

Kitri, princesgirl, and CuteTabitha were screaming “EWWW GROSS!!!”

The only people not in the water were the 3 hanging friends, Roy_The_Boy, (currently fainted) and encyclopedia (fainted and trampled.. LOL)

Guestalina looked down in anger.

“Oh Well, I can still smash you 2!!” screamed guestalina as she looked down at the hanging friends.
Guestalina took out a flame thrower.

“Bye!!” screamed SassaFrazz as she let go of the edge.
“AH!!!” screamed Blossomflower.

SPLASH
“One problem.. I CAN’T SWIM, SODA!!!” yelled Blossomflower as she was starting to drown…
“O_o… fine I’ll help you.” replied Soda, who helped Blossomflower.

dabaseballking saw the entire scene, and swam up to coolJamz. He held on to her, as if she couldn’t swim.
“Base, I can swim fine…” said coolJamz, enjoying his presence.
“Well… what if you have a cramp?” replied dabaseballking.
“Yeah… I do always have those.” lied coolJamz. “I’m not gonna take any chances…” said coolJamz, as dabaseballking let out a really big grin.

Meanwhile, hikoik, who was still hanging by one hand, muttered out “You’re not seriously gonna turn me into toast are you?”
“Oh Yes I am, sweetheart!” replied guestalina, batting her eyes and looking evil. She started the flame thrower.
“Umm…” guestalina slightly burned hikoik’s fingers.
hikoik let go of the edge, as he wondered why guestalina called him sweetheart…

SPLASH.

Blossomflower, who was nearby, snickered “Omg was guestalina hitting on you?!”
hikoik, who was grasping his slightly burned fingers, replied “I’d never thought I’d say this… but… Yes… I think she was @_@”

Blossomflower and SassaFrazz laughed like crazy…
hikoik replied, “It’s not funny! -_-“
SassaFrazz gasped for air, and said “It is to us!!” and continued laughing with flower.
hikoik put on a “-_-“ face.

The friends looked up, and saw guestalina, who was talking with her peeps.
3 seconds later, she looked down at the friends, grinning her usual evil gray grin, and leaped into the water.

The friends’ faces were like :thahggeek27fz: :eek:


LOL this was a weird chapter.
TO BE CONTINUED. Muahaha.
Oops I forgot to add the straw things! I'll add it next time. @_@

omg long @_@

Ty for deleting that post iRaccoon :D
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I made that chapter a little too long. oops. LOL

straws.. hey why to base and cool like each other >_< iw ant to feel loved!! - gets out straws -

Straws.. you want to be "loved" too?

OK... want me to pick a boy for you or will you? LOL

let me.. who are the boys int he story?

hikoik how about him.. he likes me but guestalina is mad and traps me and i attack with straws!!


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Straws, I don't think I can make you be "loved"... there's already 2 love thingies going on and I don't want it to be too much.. Although I'll add a little "spark" but only a few. Here are the boys in the story:

iRaccoon
Cool-Dolphin
encyclopedia
Roy_The_Boy
hikoik
slycooper_lo aka lucky33325 (im not sure if those are the exact numbers LOL)
dabaseballking

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LOL hikoik?! (why does every girl love him? it's so strange... so far your number 8, i think rofl)

oh great im a number and who are the to lovers? base+cool
and gust and hikoik?

plz... i want it to be someone who sint a weenie (roy_the_boy) but a nice caring funny tough guy :) i guess u can choose

also make it someone who wasnt run over or fainted encyclopedia or roy... no racoon he eveil.. baseball taken.. sly.. nah.. cool dolphin??? isnt that a girl??

hey what do u know?? hikoik is left! lol

straws + hikoik also i have the day with straws!!

i want to make all yer straws turn to dust in the end :)

-_- the name is flower
and i went out to go eat so I couldn't do anything..

OK Fine I'll put a thing between you and hikoik, but only 2 sparks. The end. nada. no more.

Cool-Dolphin isn't a girl... he's a guy who wears a flip hat LOL

and just so you know; hikoik is taken too... @_@ sorta...

and LOL a nice caring funny tough guy... opposite of hikoik rofl

Well it will be fun matching up hikoik with someone (Muahaha look out purple :D)

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and iRaccoon, I am not making the story like that.... and remember no spoilers...

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I am now typing the next chap! :D

what spoiler o_o

on <3 make the story already!

hurry flower!

Chapter 16: Get the pitchforks!

Guestalina was still falling, when one of the evil guests dropped their pitchfork.

By the time guestalina landed, hikoik noticed the pitchfork heading straight for Straws’ head.

“Watch out!” yelled hikoik as he rushed over to Straws and pushed her out of the way by tackling her.
“Uhh!” grunted Straws just as the pitchfork barely got her.
The 2 got up straight, and looked at each other.

“Umm—uh” stuttered the 2 in unison. Blossomflower was about 5 feet from them, her mouth opening wide.

“h-h-h-hikoik… my e-EVIL f-friend… did something N-n-n-n-nice?!” said Blossomflower, who was getting woozy..

Guestalina was underwater, and she still didn’t rise.

“Um… uh thank you for saving my life? :)