LOL XD yay chapter.

flower i made a fan thread about your story is on story forum

O_O wow.. thx LOL
- goes to find it -

just.. please dont make a second story involving mine LOL
well. idk, u prolly could (MAYBEH), when it's finished (which will be a while) but for now.. please dont LOL

CHURRO!! *eats stick thing on ship*

rofl zoo
i dont know.
that was the first food item that came into my head when i wrote the chapter
LOL

thats a very crazy guest ( i would be creeped out if that happened to me ) can i be in it plz?!

If you read the previous posts, ull c im not accepting anymore people.. sorry
Nowhere to put them LOL

and if I accept you, and found a place, the other people who asked before and got rejected.. it would be unfair to them also

HUH? BlossomFlower i didn't undertstand a word you just said..

O_o?
LOL

I'm not accepting anymore people, because I have nowhere to put them.
And if I do accept people who just asked, even for just a little part like.. some person running in the background, i can't do that either, becuz it would be unfair to the people who asked before, and got rejected.

LOL

Where is Hiccup?? (Hikoik) I call him Hiccup alot because i cant pronounce his name XD.

Mandalay Beach.
It's pronounced hi.quick

uhhh.. what do you mean by.. where is hiccu-- hikoik? LOL like in the story? or... what?
(HICCUP. ROFL)

Lol good one!

WOOT i like this story a lot :P

I can't pronouce his name either. I'm gonna call you hikoik (hik-oi-k) o_O

it's
hi.quick

LOL don't call him .. hik-oi-k it's just.. weird LOL

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fyi peeps, on my previous chapters, you can see some parts it goes "******** out"

really, it's just a word saying that they were spazzing.
sooo it was just saying "(insert name here) was spazzing out" in a different way LOL

not sure why the other word's not allowed on the forums.
but ya thats what it is.. for some of you who didnt already assume that LOL

meaning they were "Freak.ing out FAR OUT MAN!" XD.

yes.
that.
that might get edited though
LOL
- looks around -
LOL

Abrahaman-Man is saying VMK-Zombies sounds like your story. Mine ISN'T in the real world. MINE TURNS INTO the REAL WORLD. Inform your little guardian Abrahamman

... wait. what?
LOL

When ya gonna make another chapter?

idk, but there will be 1 by monday.

Great!!!! :)

YAY!!!!!! i knew it was a pirate ship..! hah.. heh. anyways, great chapter!!! :D

Guess what.
I had nothing else better to do.
And nothing’s here to distract me.
you know what that means.
NEW CHAPTER (plays potc music from the potc lobby… - sniff -)
LOL

Ok. this is the pirate chapter. now.
I hope.
well they already saw the ship come, I mean, what else could there be to stop it from getting to the potc chapter?

LOL

(I STINK AT PIRATE TALK. so if any pirate experts out there [YO!!!] spot a “piratey” phrase that could be more piratey than it is now, tell meh and I’ll edit it, if I think it’s a better phrase than the one before LOL)
(also. I am not a potc fan. so I have no idea how jack sparrow would talk. LOL well i kinda do, i didn't make him say "thar" or "t'" cuz... he doesnt really talk TOOO piratey in the movie. sooo it just... doesn't fit the way i see it. LOL)
(oh. and also give me nice phrases for him to say in later chaps.
could be useful xD)

Well. Being in the play treasure island might help me. and vmk’s “pirate talk” lessons o.o (wow, never thought I could use those)
LOL

k. (imma call the friends the “gang” now. just sounds better that way. idk what I was thinking back then. LOL)

(this chapter is gonna beh stupid.. o.o oh well LOL bear with the stupidity T_T)


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Chapter 37: Jack Sparrow and his crew of… kids?


(1:04 PM)

As the ship drew near, the gang swam towards the ship, and occasionally waved their hands, screaming “HELP!!!”
The gang swam up to the ship, being careful not to get run over, and started knocking on the hull.
They heard heavy footsteps approach forebodingly.

“…. Like I said earlier, they’re gonna cook us…” whispered slycooper_lo, his voice whimpering.
“Shush.” replied hikoik.

“Can’t believe I’m actually near… a pirate ship…” squealed Yokatherine.

A voice called out from on top of the ship.

“Who goes there?” asked the voice, with an englishy, piratey accent.

The gang looked up, to see a dark figure, with mangled hair and a weird shaped hat. He was redolent of the sea.
The kids squinted their eyes, for they couldn’t see his face; the sun was right behind him, shining brightly from behind like he was some kind of angel, but he certainly didn’t smell like one.

“Hold on a second. I know that voice… I know that hat…” mumbled Yokatherine.
“It be… CAPTAIN JACK SPARROW????!” she continued, panicking in the water.
“Aye, Captain Jack Sparrow is the name. What do ye want? My compass? My hat? No, ye can’t have my hat.” he said in a piratey manner, starting to turn on his heel to continue to steer the ship.

The gang was too shocked to say anything.
Thoughts raced through their head.

Finally, AthleticAisha blurted out “Sparrow? What the… I thought that was just a movie. How the heck… well… a guest going out the computer, flying, and zapping us isn’t possible either. Well, apparently it is. But still. WHAT???”

“Aye, I be Captain Jack Sparrow. Disney found me roamin' the waters, thought it’d be nice to make a story about me. In exchange, they gave me this brand new ship. When me eyes first laid sight on it, I instantly yelled ‘We have an accord!’ She’s a beauty, ain’t she? Better than that crummy old Black Pearl. Problem is, I don’t gots a crew to help me. I just steer the boat meself, raise the sails, swab the deck. I wish I could have the satisfaction of yelling at lackeys to do all the dirty work. Oh well, can’t have everything, eh mate?” said Jack, straightening his hat.

“Well, can you give us a lift back to Riverdale’s shore? We’re… kinda stranded out here.” asked SassaFrazz, giving Jack the “puppy dog eyes.”

“Well, I would. But what have I got to gain? Surely you little pests don’t have any gold to spare. Look at yer outfits!” retorted Jack, as the kids looked down at their torn, muddy, wet clothes.
“Most atrocious sight I’ve ever seen. I’m just going to lose time by dropping you kids off at that…Ribersale of yours… it will delay me further in succeeding in my current quest.” continued Jack, turning around and beginning to starting to walk away.
“Which… is what?” asked LittleTinkFairy.

Jack flipped his head back sharply in an angry manner. He took a few steps back towards the gang.

“Why, getting to my little island of course, where I have stored a year’s supply of drink. Me drink perishes too fast… I finished me last bottle yesterday.” replied Jack, putting on a solemn face.
“Why is the drink always gone?” he continued, turning around again.
“Oh ok, sorry for bothering you Mr. Sparrow.” said iRaccoon, innocently, and swam away, pulling the two people beside him with him, who were Yokatherine and teddyfruitgirl.

Yokatherine, who had been staring at Jack with her eyes wide open and mouth smiling in a way that nobody has ever seen before, whacked iRaccoon’s hand away sternly, swam back 2 feet, and said “Well, what if we give ye something in exchange for bringing us back to Riverdale?”

“Such as… what? Yer atrocious outfits? No.” retorted Jack.

With a “-_-“ face, CuteTabitha pushed Yokatherine aside and blurted at Jack, “HEY LOOK BUDDY, BEFORE LAST NIGHT, MY OUTFIT WAS BEAUTIFUL, I PAID 120 DOLLARS FOR IT, AND IT WAS EVEN ON SALE, BUT YEAH I PAID 120 DOLLARS FOR IT, although there was this other outfit that looked similar, but it was only--“

“WE DON’T CARE!!!” screamed the others.

“……. And you’re calling MY outfit ugly? I’m wearing the same thing as you, buddy boy.” commented hikoik.
“Aye, but it looks better on me.” retorted Jack, giving hikoik a glare.

“No, not our outfits… we could be yer temporary ‘lackeys’ and ye would boss us around to do anything … until ye drop us off at Riverdale?” asked Yokatherine, hoping that Jack would accept. Being Jack Sparrow’s crew would have probably been Yokatherine’s lifelong dream.

“Hmm. I suppose wasting just a few moments of me life for enjoying a limited crew would suffice. And me rum will always be there on me little island. Fine, I shall take you to Ribersale, but only if ye agree to do everything I say. Do we have an accord?” replied Jack, stroking his braided beard.

The gang let out remarks of reluctant agreements.

“Well, I guess being your crew would be way better than being stranded out here forever…” mumbled walnutfudge.
“ARE YE KIDDING? IT’S BETTER THAN ANYTHING!” screamed Yokatherine.

“Well, climb aboard me hearties.” said Jack, throwing down a net.

“Still don’t trust him… what if he commands us to cook ourselves?” mumbled slycooper_lo as he climbed up the net.




OK.
that was a bad chapter.
LOL
and as u can c, I stink at pirate talk

this is like
REALLY
CHEESY.

eh… o.o ah well I hope u guys like it LOL

aww no randdomness
good chap. but not exciting

dude! i love it LOL
and ur pirate talks not bad at all.. wayy better than mine rofl
ahahah u know me too well.
POST MORE I LOVE IT :)

EDIT: Abrahamman are u crazy? her story has a plot to it, its not random.. u just dont get it o_o

Uh, this story never was random... O_o
there has been a plot the entire time?

guest got mad, chased the friends down a manhole, they escaped, went to a pizza parlor, guestalina found them, flew away in the helicopters, and crashed in the ocean...

now they're using sparrow to get back to riverdale..

so err its not rlly random?

but thx tho LOL

im not saying plot i mean the ppl to be random.


it like it were happenin right now and someone just says something random

Ah LOL

eh, it depends if I can fit some randomness in it...
really, i just go with the flow... don't really plan it out advanced. the main plot, yes. the randomness of the ppl, no. so i guess it depends.. on how i feel? or... wherever the flow takes me.

LOL

u a natural!!! i love u(as a friend) im your #1 fan w00t

u my favorite vmkf writer


i think my story the worst nobody likes it wven though just added chapters

awww thx LOL - hugs -

and no, ur pretty good...
keep goin :P

i love this chapter :]
what are youu talking about, it's not stupid, it rocks!
anyways, i agree with candy. yer pirate talk isn't badd, it's wayyy better than mine. LOL
whens the next chaptah gonna be up? q:

*off topic: what's stupid is my writing. =P

LOL thx
but
my pirate talk still stinks, especially compared to yo.
LOL
and how do you know? uve never talked pirate b4. or.. at least i haven't heard u do so LOL
LOL

you asking about his chapter or mine?

mine... ya, another 1 by monday, will start working on it when i feel like it
LOL

dude. cant believe i typed that proper.
like right now im typing all crummy and then in the story i'm like a total... properish proppy.. properson.. person. 'specially on jack's lines. i didnt even know i could write THAT properish propery proper.
LOL

major transformationnn

my dream has been fullfilled! :D!!!! sparrow ahhhhh!!! and flower ye be a pro at your pirate talk!!!!! lol and.. i will adore this story 20000000000/10000 more if i become best friends with sparrow :D! lol sorry..

nice story :P even though i have not read the full chapter yet... LOL

JACK SPARROW?!!?! *squeal* o.o

LOL zoo

and fine yo, he'll like you better, only cuz you're pirate obsessed and thinks he's awesome.
LOL

and im a pro at pirate talk? o.o r u sure
LOL

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Awww... got edited.... the parts where it says "Drink", really it's... jack sparrow's favorite drink that makes him go loopy.

You all know what it is. starts with a R, ends with a M.

got edited T_T - runs away sobbing -.... k im done with that LOL


(twitch of insanity) read the story over...
why did i ever
write it like that
sooo
cheesy
and
corny
and
- explodes -

-screams shrilly-

That. Was. RADICAL!!!! O_O;;

BLOSSOMFLOWER LIVESSSSS! :Cool:

:37:

Woot! We got a new chappy! YAY!!!!

-screams shrilly-

That. Was. RADICAL!!!! O_O;;

BLOSSOMFLOWER LIVESSSSS! :Cool:

:37:

didja read the chappy b4 that? LOL cuz i posted 1 a few days ago before the pirate one too...

you asking about his chapter or mine?
yours, LOL, but the question was answered anywayy.:mickey:

lol thanks you flower!! and aye ye be fine at pirate talk

Aye lass. Ye must be drinkin' too much bottles of koolaid! If ye think there was any pirate talk there, Savvy? I ain't sayin' that it weren't a good story Aye? But Ye need to brush up on yer pirate talk Aye Yokatherine, Blossomflower?

LOL

i didn't want too make it TOO piratey, since.... idk, to me jack sparrow doesn't talk much like a pirate..

that's more like, captain barbossa's area.
LOL

i just typed it, with a "englishy" accent type thing stuck in my head.
idk it just seemed to fit

LOL

English=NOT PIRATE!!
English=THE EVIL PORT ROYAL!!

LOLL
but i mean, have you heard sparrow talk? he doesn't really talk as piratey as captain barbossa..

LOL

LOLL
but i mean, have you heard sparrow talk? he doesn't really talk as piratey as captain barbossa..

LOL

True. Shortness.

ya so thats why i didn't add too much piratey stuff... the entire time i was typing it, jack sparrow's voice played in my head...

if he was captain barbossa though, i'd make him say stuff like "thar" or whatever.. totally pirateyness LOL

OOH MAYBE I SHOULD ADD BARBOSSA IN THE STORY....... eh idk

LOL

*gasp* i just thought of something
awesome.

for ze story. XD XD XD XD XD

- muahahaha -

May I PM you an idea or shall I shout it out loud? :D

errrr pm me so that way, the "audience" wont know whats gonna happen.
LOL

LOL. I pmed. Oh kewl yer story has 800 posts! Well 801 now.

lol jack sparrow isnt known for his pirate talk.. he is more known for his.. moves ( like how he walks ) and his cleverness.. =D idk why i just said that but yeah, and if you notice if you put too much pirate talk it kinda just makes it seem dumb and you will be a cheesy pirate.. so it's more on how you would put sentences really, not words. O_o did that even make sence?? =D lol.. i know off subject.

it did.
LOL

well.. that's a problem.
im not good at making his very long sentences that r confusing but make sense in a way...
LOL

your right, but i like barbossa because he does talk pirate alot, but i love his sentences!! =D im weird.. but they dont call me pirate freak for nothing!

LOL
yes
yes you are. LOL

so eh..
ya. the nxt chapter will be up by monday.

lol ok, cant wiat to read it :D!

New chapter is all my idea. She just read my mind o.o

http://xs127.******/xs127/08210/tabithalip240.gif

CuteTabitha is so silly..
LOL

http://xs127.******/xs127/08210/tabithalip240.gif

zoozoo.
i thought of it first! LOL
and also, it was a forgotten thought i had back then when I was still working on the story a lot.... and then I remembered it, and i'm like "MUAHAHA I JUST GOT AN IDEA"

you're the one who read my mind.
LOL

and tab, i just made her as girly as you :D LOL

I can't wait until the end!!! Awesome story! I always check back to see if you've updated, and thankfully, you did! Keep it up:)

and u read the one before the pirate chapter right? :D

and thx for checking all the time, even if this story was gone for a while LOL

Write more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or else I'll hit you with my lightsaber! lol

whoah.... flower works at her own pase. be patient, it will be out soon :)

Sorry.....

Well, Flower I really DID read your mind. Same idea. And when you said MUAHAHA I HAVE AN IDEA and I didn't even know, my PM said MUAHAHA IDEA 0.o Scary.

LOL.... it looks better on me..... sparrow don't kno nothin. LOL

Hey ZooZoo.. I Pmed Flower a message two for the plot and she said that we had the exact same plot with the exact words O.O

hmm.
i thought out what's gonna happen in the next few chapters.
i'll be able to fit in abe's, raccoon's, and zoozoo (actually it was also mine before zoozoo's but we think alike) idea...

also, hikoik helped me a bit into thinking how i would fit it all in.

XD

thx y'all
LOL

(note: this is not totally solid yet... my mind might change along the way or theres something i realized that conflicts with what i wanna do... yeah.. lots of ways LOL so don't eat me if i didn't fit all the ideas)

ALSO-

idk if i can write a chapter today...
My relatives from cali are over today.. and it's my dad's birthday.. we're gonna eat out..
So if i can't do it today, i'll do it on monday
LOL

Hey ZooZoo.. I Pmed Flower a message two for the plot and she said that we had the exact same plot with the exact words O.O

EXACT?! 0.o Scary!! I'M A NON-EVIL GENIUS!!

Err..
it wasn't exact..
but I thought of the same idea, but didn't really consider it much as the first one i had (zoozoo's) LOL

ohmygosh... ROFL!! i havent posted a comment on this chapter.. it rawks, LOL and slycooper_lo with the cooking themselves... ROFL! love this story!

We Want A New Chapter New Chapter New Chapter!
Off Topic: cookies cookies like cookies..

Sorry I’m 2 days late.
Monday, I messed with maplestory (DON’T BLAME MEH…. SOME PEOPLE TEMPTED ME!) LOL
And Tuesday, had singing class.

okk.
these next few chapters, got some ideas from Abrahamman and iRaccoon…
(and zoozoo’s idea, which was my idea first! LOL)
and some help from hikoik……. kinda helped me to figure out how to fit all the ideas… and he also gave me an idea for the “finding out vmk closed” chapter… (and I also had the same idea… but he added a small lil twist to it. LOL… WHY DO YOU GUYS HAVE THE SAME IDEA AS MEH?! AM I TOO PREDICTABLE?! LOL)

Abrahamman’s idea will kind of change what I originally planned… just by a little bit…
iRaccoon (in the story, not the real one) will find out something..
WAY BEFORE I WANTED HIM TO KNOW..
oh well.
but the story will take a different course after the incident. just a tad different. but still the same, basically. LOL


ok.. - scrolls up - what chappy is it?.. ah 38.. xD

**just so you guys know… obviously you see, this story doesn’t makes sense for all the powers, and the weird things that will happen soon, but there’s a reason for all of this. you’ll see at the end of the story. so don’t think it’s just random nonsense. Been planning out the plot for a while now. LOL.. well the reasons aren’t really… logical reasons…. such as Jack Sparrow actually being a real character… and Disney just made a story about him… I mean.. the reason makes sense but… not in a realistic way. LOL**

and yo..
not sure if I can make you and sparrow bfs. idk if I can fit it in. We’ll see… LOL

(I just realized something.
I made guestalina capture roy_the_boy and encyclopedia as a trap for the gang. and I forgot to plan that thing out.. I completely forgot. oh great. now I’ll have to squeeze it in somewhere. LOL)

- blasts potc music -






Chapter 38: Smooth Sailing …?



The gang climbed up the net, soaking wet.
Naturally, they got in a straight line.

”Well, ye cretins certainly aren’t pirates, but ye sure do smell like one.” mumbled Jack, his eyes circling their appearance. He made the famous Jack Sparrow “Ew” face, and wobbly walked past them.
“So, me new crew… let me test ye all… see if ye have what it takes to be me temporary lackeys.” said Jack, pacing across the line, eyeing them all one by one.

Jack slowly stepped away, and faced them… slowly.

He stared at them for quite some time, grinning slightly, and stroking his braided beard… slowly.

The gang stood there, nervously.

A few moments later during the awkward silence, lil_rockerangel quietly spoke up. “So wha--“

“RUN TO STARBOARD!” Jack screamed.
In a jolt of panic, the gang shrieked and started mumbling words of confusion, running around to get to starboard, wherever that is…

LittleTinkFairy and Kitri crashed into each other, which made SoccerRach trip on them, and then SassaFrazz, and then AthleticAisha… and so on.

Jack observed the chaos… and a few seconds later, there was a huge pileup in the middle of the boat.

“… That was… just… appalling. Never me eyes have seen such turmoil when asked such a simple command… none of ye are worthy… I am most certainly not bringing ye all to Ribersale.” mumbled Jack, giving them a disappointed look.

“What about me?” screamed a voice from afar. Jack and the gang turned their heads.

It was Yokatherine, standing on the starboard side.
Jack walked up to her, giving her a direct look in the eyes.

“Go to port.” he whispered.

Yokatherine walked to port.

“What is starboard and port?” asked Jack.
“Right and left of the ship…” said Yokatherine, nervously.

Jack turned around to face the rest of the gang, who were still lying on the ground. “Hmm. OK, I will let ye all go to Ribersale, only because of this young lass, who can comprehend the simplest of all directions.” said Jack, putting his arm around Yokatherine.

Yokatherine was as happy as ever, thinking “THIS IS THE BEST MOMENT OF ME ENTIRE LIFE.”
Jack turned to face Yo, who was still grinning, and asked “What is your name, lass?”

Yo, who had just forgotten what her name was, slowly replied “Yo….kat….”
“YOKAT. OK Yokat, ye shall teach yer other hideously dressed mates how to comprehend simple directions. As of now, ye are my favorite.” continued Jack, smiling happily, and walking off.

Even though Jack had gotten her name wrong, Yo was still too happy to complain.

“TO RIBERSALE!” screamed Jack.
“Actually it’s Riverdale.” commented dabaseballking.
“Like I care. TO RIBERSALE!” Jack continued, raising his fist up high, and then grabbing his map of the Pacific Ocean.

“Raise the sails!” screamed Jack, and walnutfudge, coolJamz, Blossomflower, tiger_girl_me, Cool-Dolphin, CuteTabitha did so… even though CuteTabitha wasn’t really sure how.

LittleTinkFairy was stuck in a barrel, trying to grab the last apple at the bottom, and hikoik walked past her, ignoring her screams for help… while eating an apple he had gotten from the other barrel, which was plentiful, and apparently, Tink didn’t see that one.
As hikoik walked past, Jack swiftly grabbed him by the shirt, and said in his face “YOU. The lad who’s wearing me outfit. Aye, it still looks better on me. But ye, go swab the poop deck.” said Jack, giving him a stern look, trying to hide his smile of amusement.
“Poop… deck?” replied hikoik, twitching, obviously misinterpreting what “poop deck” meant.

Just then, CyanTara yelled “LOOK… THERE’S SOMETHING UP AHEAD… LOOKS LIKE ANOTHER SHIP!”

Jack, concerned, let go of hikoik’s shirt and walked up next to CyanTara, who was pointing to something in the distance.

“Saved by the bell…” hikoik whispered.

Jack pulled out a telescope, and looked through it.

“Aye… it’s a ship… not just any ship… it’s…. the… Black Pearl.” said Jack Sparrow, slowly and nervously.






Wheeeee…
prepare for battle?!
and yay, I was able to fit in the sparrow/yo thing! WOOOO
eh.
hope ya liked it.
NEXT CHAPTER, NEXT TIME! XD

--screams-- THE BLACK PEARL?!?!?!?!? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAH! GO HIDE UNDER THE POOPDECK!!! AND NO, NOT THAT KIND!!!!

Rofl LOL

YES. NOT THAT KIND.
- hikoiks luckier than he thinks he is - LOL

Yeah, LOL! If I had to do that, with the other kind, I don't know if I'd live to see the next day... --twitches--

Rofl
neither would i.
LOL

yah i was laughing when i made the poop deck part of the story.. heh.
hehe.
LOL

ROFL!!! the poop deck! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Black Pearl!!! EVERYONE'S DOOMED!!!!!!!!! LOL yokat!!!!

LOL YoKat. rofl
and thats so like hikoik to walk past someone screaming for help LOL
poop deck. rofl
love itt

wow lol i liked this chapter it made me happy lol

Bad
Lot of bad
A lot of bad
Crazy amounts of bad
Ka-razy amounts of bad

Possibility: NONE amounts of bad
Extatic amounts of badness
A lot of badness in the SEAAAAAAA
Ridiculously BAD
LOT. OF. BAD!!!!!!

Cutedee... huh?
LOL

LOL candy yesh yesh thats hikoik for ya

How Cheesy!!!! Lol Lol!!!! Lol

rofl, i love it.
LOL yokat
aww poor tink. that's hikoik for ya tho. LOL
rofl poop deck
PREPARE FOR BATTLE!
can't wait to read the next chapter XD

LOL i love it! Yokat =P great chapter flower :D

we want more >_<

o.o
ok.
u asked in time, i just finished dinner.
LOL

i already wrote half of it.
so it shouldnt take too long.
unless if i have another flow block... can't think straight sometimes.

- puts on earphones -

xD

Yay The Writing (Typing) Master Is Back! Hip Hip! Boo.. Hip Hip! Boo Hip Hip Boo You Stink!!! Sorry Flashback .-.

o____o chapters. yay.

Eh.
this is like, the 4th time I got told to do the chapter… or more. so um.
here it is. LOL

um
lately… I’ve kinda had… a flow block.
writer’s block. (I call it flow block. LOL) I know whats gunna happen but idk what to do for the little things so it’ll be long enuf to be a chapter.
so um
this chapter wont be really good
in fact. I put like, random stuff in it to make it long. o.o
LOL

chapter…. 39? I think. - scrolls up -
Yes. 39! XD

ok. I have a feeling this is gonna be past 50 chapters. LOL




Chapter 39: Prepare For Battle!


The gang gathered around Jack, who was staring worryingly at the Black Pearl.

Jack awoke from his daze, and screamed “LOAD THE CANNONS!”
His crew of kids just stood there.

“………………….. How?” asked princesgirl.

Jack stared at her with a look of annoyance.

Then he looked around, and mumbled “Yokat? Where ye be?”
“HERE!” screamed Yokatherine, who was actually just right next to Jack.
“Do ye know how to load the gunpowder and ammo?” Jack asked.
“Aye.” replied Yo.
“Go tell these foolish kids how.” said Jack, looking back to see how far away the Black Pearl is.
“Aye, aye, captain!” said Yo, excited to obey her idol.

She ran off, leading the kids down to where the cannons are.

“YOKAT!” screamed Jack.

Yo stopped in her tracks, and looked back at Jack.

“Do ye know where the gunpowder is stored?” he asked.
“In the cargo hold…?” replied Yo.
“……. Did I mention ye are my favorite?” said Jack, smiling. “Now go load the cannons.” he continued, then he looked back at the Black Pearl. It was drawing near.

“MAKE HASTE EVERYONE! SHE’S GETTING CLOSER!” yelled Jack. “Oy… with a crew like these kids, I don’t know if we can survive this…” he mumbled to himself as he ran to the steering wheel, and grabbed a hold of it.

As the gang loaded the cannons, Mizz.V commented “If we survive this battle, we could use these cannonballs, and have a bowling tournament.”
“Random much?” said lil_rockerangel in a snooty tone.
“Wow, such a snooty tone for a shorty like you.” retorted Mizz.V.
“……. what did you just call me?” replied lil_rockerangel.

The two bickered, until Yo pulled them apart.

”What’s all the squabbling about? Now load the cannons! The Black Pearl is coming.” she said, glaring at them.

They put on a sour face and continued to load the cannons.

Meanwhile, as Jack was steering the ship, staring at the Black Pearl, which was closer than ever, he heard muffled cries of help. He raised one eyebrow, and turned his head slyly. He took a few steps to see where the fuss was coming from, and he saw LittleTinkFairy, her top half still stuck inside the barrel, and her legs kicking frantically.

A second later, she managed to tip over with a grunt, and squirmed out of the bucket, pulling out the apple and grinning. As she was about to take a bite, Jack rapidly grabbed the apple and tossed it off the ship.

Tink, bewildered about where her apple went, looked up to see Jack, staring at her with a raised eyebrow.

“What were ye doing in there?” asked Jack.
“I was trying to get the apple…” said Tink.
“I know that.” replied Jack sassily.
“Then why’d you as--“
“Hush.” interrupted Jack. “Now go down with the rest of ye mangy scallywags, and load the cannons. The Black Pearl is approaching, and we must prepare for battle. Yokat shall be there to help ye scurvy scums. Savvy?” he continued.
“Uh… aye?” replied Tink, and went with the rest of the group.

Jack walked back to steer the ship.

“As dim-witted as these kids may be, these upcoming bilge rats will still suffer defeat from Captain Jack Sparrow! ... I hope.” said Jack, steering the ship. He reached for his telescope, and viewed the Black Pearl with it again.
He saw Captain Barbossa, grinning evilly, showing off his rotten teeth, and steering the Black Pearl.
Jack gritted his teeth as he saw Captain Barbossa’s mouth move.

Captain Barbossa was yelling to his crew, “JACK SPARROW WILL TASTE DEFEAT! He thinks that he and his new ship be better than me and me Black Pearl. I think not.”

Jack turned his head as he felt something tap his shoulder.
It was AthleticAisha.

“What?” asked Jack sternly, setting down his telescope.
“Um…. do we really have to fight? Can’t you just turn the ship around?” asked AthleticAisha.
“I’m afraid not, lass. The Black Pearl is close at hand.” replied Jack, looking up to see how far the Black Pearl was. Sure enough, it was close at hand.
“If we do, they will still catch up and fire at us.” he continued.

“Well… why didn’t you just turn the ship around earlier?” asked AthleticAisha.

Jack stared at her for quite some time in a menacing way, with one eyebrow raised.

“Why didn’t I do that earlier?” thought Jack to himself.

He continued staring at AthleticAisha, as if he were mad at her for bringing up a wise suggestion.

“Well. Because. It would be just disgraceful to just sail away from a fight, now wouldn’t it? Eh, lassie?” said Jack, giving AthleticAisha a look that just practically screamed “GET AWAY BEFORE I SLASH YOU WITH MY CUTLASS.”

“Um… ok…” said AthleticAisha, with a o_o face, and ran back to the cannons.

Jack sighed uneasily, and looked up to see the Black Pearl real near.
“PREPARE TO FIRE…..” he yelled.






ok.
that was.
long. but boring.
o.o
Idk why I’ve been kinda.. canthinkingish lately.
LOL

LOl great chapter flower! =D keep up the good work. jack is awesome =P!!!!!

OMG
I ARE NOT SHORTY

ok. im good.
good chapter =D can't wait to read the next onee
keep it up!
bahaha, yokat. that always gets me.

YESH
YE A SHORTYY
LOL

o.o yokat. yokat. yokat. um. how does it always get u
LOL

Hey I hope Jack gets mutineed by my character and Jack is left on Rum Island with the rest of the gang :D

rofl thats a good chappy
for some reason i actually like the pirate ones..LOL
and yokat...it always gets me too, rocker. rofl

lol what a cheesy story O_o

woot nice chapter

i cant wait for my idea in the next chapter

Lol... More chappys!!! Please!!

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Cool chappie Blossom!

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um........
Simon Says: Let Me Sum Up that Chapter in Two Words
Got Milk?
lol and no the ? does not count as a word lol anyways great chapter

got..
milk..
wha?
LOL

thx
y'all.

and yes, i know it is cheesy, which is why i posted "weirdest cheesiest story ever" in the name.
LOL

it gets me because...i find it funny...? LOL.
- can't wait for the next chapterr -

LOL, Yokat =D.... did yo ever et to you? O.o =D

Anonator Chapor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok.
i will make one on wednesday (tuesday... eh i have something on that day LOL)

soo.
i hope i wont forget.
LOL

i cant wait for the next chapter

i cant wait for the 1000th post woot!!

can u put me in storry plz

No Sorry, Blossomflower is not accepting anymore people. Because If she accepted you then it wouldn't be fair to the others who asked. She also stated that she cannot even put you as a cashier or any small or HUGE roll in the story... Sorry..

LOL I read the other chapter.
“What were ye doing in there?”
“I was trying to get the apple…”
“I know that.”
“Then why’d you as--“
“Hush.”

LOL. I like that part. LOL

eh anyway.

40TH CHAPTER!!! - duhn dunn duhn duhnnn… -

This could be like, a TV series…. it’s already in its second season. LOL

I really don’t know if flaming cannonballs exist, especially for pirates…
or the other gizmos imma include.
I am not a pirate expert. I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT PIRATES. NOTHING. N-O-T-H-I-N-G. LOL

um anyway.




Chapter 40: Fire!



Jack gulped as the Black Pearl approached.

“3….. 2………” he whispered to himself, watching the Black Pearl sail into the shooting range.

“FIRE!!!!!!” Jack screamed, and the gang fired the cannons.

15 cannon balls went whistling through the air.

The Black Pearl’s hull was damaged, and the impact of the shots rattled the ship, causing 3 pirates who were standing near the edge to topple over into the water. “AUGH!” they screamed.

“YEAH!!!” screamed the gang, cheering and celebrating.
“Much too early to celebrate down there…” yelled Jack, hearing Captain Barbossa scream “FIRE!”

The gang looked out the “windows” where the front of the cannons were inserted, and saw firey balls of doom speeding towards them.

“AHHHHH!!! TAKE COVER!!” screamed Yokatherine, and everyone ducked as the flaming cannonballs whooshed through the ship, going out through the other side, making holes in the wall, and setting part of the ship on fire.

walnutfudge and Straws rushed to put the fire out, while everyone else continued shooting.

Jack steered the ship, trying to get a better angle of the Black Pearl to cause further damage.
He got up close to the Black Pearl, that they were now side by side with only a gap about 30 feet between them.

lil_rockerangel and hikoik were loading more ammo into one cannon, and as they were about to fire it, they saw that the cannon right in front of them was being controlled by Pintel and Ragetti, with Pintel whispering “’Ello Poppets. Goodbye Poppets.” and Ragetti trying to stick his eye back into his face.

”Ew.” mumbled lil_rockerangel, watching Ragetti.
“We ain’t no poppets! Or at least I’m not.” yelled hikoik, about to fire the cannon.

“HURRY RAGETTI! FIRE THE CANNON!” screamed Pintel, slapping Ragetti, which caused him to let go of his eye when he was so close to reattaching it perfectly. His eye jumped out of his hand, rolled down the cannon, and plummeted into the ocean, with a “plop.”

“ME EYE!” cried Ragetti, reaching down towards the water.

“Bye-bye.” said hikoik.
“Poppets.” continued lil_rockerangel.

Pintel and Ragetti looked up from the sea, and mumbled “Uh oh.” as lil_rockerangel and hikoik fired the cannon. The ball soared through the air, as Pintel and Ragetti screamed and ducked. It made a hole in the wall, and as they got up to wreak revenge on hikoik and rocker, they were caught by surprise as another ball made its way through the ship, making the hole bigger.

They got up again, slowly, making sure they wouldn’t get hit if another ball crashed through the wall, and looked through the huge hole.

“YE DIDN’T GET US, HAHAHAHA!”
They laughed at hikoik and rocker, as they leaned out of the hole, making faces at them.

Rocker and hikoik just stared at Pintel and Ragetti, and looked at each other with a “O_o” face, then smiled mischievously.
They fired the cannon again, while Pintel and Ragetti were too busy clowning about, and it hit the Black Pearl, right under Pintel and Ragetti, and that impact caused Pintel and Ragetti to wobble unsteadly, and topple over into the ocean.

“Aww we missed. But they still fell over anyway. That’s good enough…” said lil_rockerangel, high-fiving hikoik.

”ARGH!” Pintel yelled, while rocker and hikoik just gave him a “xD…too bad, so sad.” face.

“Oh look! I found me eye!” screamed Ragetti, who rose from the water, handling his eye, and held it up high.
“Ragetti…” mumbled Pintel, with a “-_-“ face, and slapped Ragetti’s hand, making him drop his eye again.
“ME EYE!!! NOOOO!!!!” screamed Ragetti, swimming down to go find it.

Pintel rolled his eyes.





Eh ok I think that’s long enough for today.
I was planning to fit more but as you can see it’s pretty long already, and if I continue it, I’ll have to continue all the way, and not stop half thru, or else it would be.. weird. LOL
and continuing all the way through would make it the size of two chapters…. so yeah better to stop it here. LOL

eh. that chapter was weird. I felt like fitting in some weirdness. O.o cuz I didn’t know what to put.
I mean…

“the gang blasted the black pearl. - 2 hours later - whee. the gang won.”

uh………………………………… snorefest. LOL
- breathes - anyway.
more…. Saturday. if I remember.
LOL

Lol, nice chapter!

rofl, pintel and ragetti.
that's right. we own.
LOL
can't wait for the next chapter! :D

woot funny weird and "random" chapter lol

ragetti is a good person even though he loses his eye he never gives up searching for it and then he finds it

good ragetti - gives doggy treat-

- ragetti eats it-

want more ragetti?

yes

- throws doggy treat to lave and he jumps to lava -

@_@ ok....

LOL i loveee
pintel and ragetti
rofl. that made my day.
next chappy BEFORE saturday yes ? LOL

Noez. on saturday.
i have something on thursday and friday
LOL

Ok! We'll be waiting!

I have a quick question..
Uhh.. is this story EVER
gonna end?..
It's getting kinda old..
I think..
eh it was good at FIRST..
but.. it's weird now..
not to be mean or anything..
Rofl but maybe that's just me...

i love this story, pintel and ragatti however you spell his name... lol.
We'll be waiting!

"LOOK! I FOUND MY EYE!"
--slap--


...lol xD Fantastic story, Flower!!!

I have a quick question..
Uhh.. is this story EVER
gonna end?..
It's getting kinda old..
I think..
eh it was good at FIRST..
but.. it's weird now..
not to be mean or anything..
Rofl but maybe that's just me...

Actually o_o. people dissagree. and she's getting to it. Patience. And besides, it hasn't even been that long.... It's a great story, and she's a great writer! xD but let her do whatever she wants to do before just ending it..

I have a quick question..
Uhh.. is this story EVER
gonna end?..
It's getting kinda old..
I think..
eh it was good at FIRST..
but.. it's weird now..
not to be mean or anything..
Rofl but maybe that's just me...

Um its getting there.. they just have to get back to riverdale and then (not giving out the plot) but anyway im just fitting in some things along the way.

Have you even ever read the lord of the rings or harry potter? if you think mine's long... well those r way worse than my story. drags on and on and on and doesnt get to the fun part already.. and it keeps describing the environment for about 8 pages... o.o
Be glad mine ain't like that.
LOL

Technically, my story hasn't really reached 40 chapters... it's more like, 40 pages since each little page, I count it as a chapter. LOL

Lol, yeah...

Um its getting there.. they just have to get back to riverdale and then (not giving out the plot) but anyway im just fitting in some things along the way.

Have you even ever read the lord of the rings or harry potter? if you think mine's long... well those r way worse than my story. drags on and on and on and doesnt get to the fun part already.. and it keeps describing the environment for about 8 pages... o.o
Be glad mine ain't like that.
LOL

Technically, my story hasn't really reached 40 chapters... it's more like, 40 pages since each little page, I count it as a chapter. LOL

LOL okay..
and btw i wasn't trying to be mean about it..
haha your story is good :)
haha and yeah i've read those..
they are really long..
LOL i gave up on them.. haha

I know, right? Sometimes they make it too long for meh likings LOL
and i kno u werent
LOL

thx xD

Story >:-o

um.
about that.
i forgot.
LOLLLL

ok here let's see.. i could do it on monday, not sure though, cuz i'mma be outta the house and stuffz.

i'll try to do it on monday.

and fo' sure, tuesday.
(yeah i might forget so its not really fo sure.... LOL)

Do we have to send reminders to your PM box?

Wellllllllllllll
it will help.
but what if i forget to go on forums?! LOL

put out the fire... pput out the fire!!!! LOL im a fireman! firewomen?

heh.
i havent been in the house ALLLL day.
so i didnt forget to write the chapter. just couldnt do it. (well i did anyway but even if I didnt, I still couldnt have done the chapter. LOL)

HEY! Did you get my PM? Eh, eh.....

(NOTE: Just for the heck of it, I sent her a STORY!!! PM. xD)

I have a quick question..
Uhh.. is this story EVER
gonna end?..
It's getting kinda old..
I think..
eh it was good at FIRST..
but.. it's weird now..
not to be mean or anything..
Rofl but maybe that's just me...

It pwns it CAN'T end! Cuz IT'S GONNA BE A BOOK, A MOVIE, AND A TV SERIES!! @_@

It pwns it CAN'T end! Cuz IT'S GONNA BE A BOOK, A MOVIE, AND A TV SERIES!! @_@

it is also going to be a drama that is going to be shown everywhere in the world.

and you have to be in it for school for 99% of your whole school grade LOL@_@

LOL ok i'mma do it now
my mom's friend has a chicken... had nowhere to stay so the chicken is staying here... I just went outside to play with it. it's so cute!

NOW I'LL MAKE THE CHAPTER
- wears headphones -

LOL ok i'mma do it now
my mom's friend has a chicken... had nowhere to stay so the chicken is staying here... I just went outside to play with it. it's so cute!

NOW I'LL MAKE THE CHAPTER
- wears headphones -

awwwwwwwwww if i had a chicken i would paint it green and name it monkey o_o

I made half of the chapter...
i'm burnt out now..
LOL

i'll finish it tomorrow or tonight if i feel like it again.

It's tomorrow!

She's gotten lazy. Trust me, i know LOL

Ok Hiccup. I trust yah Hiccup.

- points to my status -
yesh.
hikoi-- hiccup, you know me so well.

I need to do it on a day where i don't really have much to do....... probably friday or saturday, sunday the latest.

So by sunday, there will be one!
and ill force myself. LOL

(hopefully i wont forget.. hiccup here has to remind me. LOL)

And u forgot :|

^owned............

No actually she said she has important things to attend to. She said she will make one Friday or Saturday.

>: ( Friday or saturday ??? :o why then??

Idk, :flagwaver:

I replied to raccoon's PM about this...
yeah... i forgot >_< LOL

and i told him, i'll make it on wednesday (i didnt say friday or saturday! i said wednesday! LOL) when i have nothing to do, and i even set an alarm for my phone SO I WONT FORGET - eye twitch -

:) if it doesn't ring i'm going to smash it on the pavement.
LOL

um so yes. wednesday. AND MY PHONE WILL REMIND ME

What if it runs out of battery?

oh my phone's charged like 24/7 (or at least when im at the computer...) it won't run out of batteries. it only did last night since i wasnt on the computer all day LOL

If it doesn't remind you could you take a picture of your smashed phone PLEASE!!

Problem is, my phone IS my camera, so when I smash it... i would have smashed my camera also... so... yeah impossible..
LOL

well, you can get someone to take the picture of the smashed phone..
LOL

Problem is, my phone IS my camera, so when I smash it... i would have smashed my camera also... so... yeah impossible..
LOL

So take the picture as you're throwing it :D

Vienna, good idea, but i can't upload it into my computer that way, and you guys will never see it. LOL

and gorams, i could do that, but then you'd just see a blur of its surroundings.... or its life flashing before its eyes O_O LOL it'd see all my text messages XD

anyway we're getting off topic here..
so point is, wednesday, chapter, my phone will remind me.
WHEEEE

Eh ok my phone stayed faithful to me.
next chappy.

um.
*copy and pastes*
I really don’t know if flaming cannonballs exist, especially for pirates…
or the other gizmos imma include.
I am not a pirate expert. I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT PIRATES. NOTHING. N-O-T-H-I-N-G. LOL

yeah.
LOL

um.
well.
I still kinda have a flow block.
so this chapter will beh bad o_O
OH EW EW EW I just read my old chapters… so. cheesy.
- faints -
LOL
seriously I had chapters that were about the size of 3 chapters o______________o dang… LOL
my writing style was different back then.. o.o LOL
yeah I’m just stalling.. LOL





Chapter 41: Battle it out!



**3:10 PM**


Jack Sparrow and his crew continued battling against the Black Pearl. Shots were fired, debris flew through the air, screams and cheers echoed through the ocean, but nobody had won yet...

Soon, two half-sized cannonballs chained together started blasting through Jack’s ship, accompanied by flaming cannonballs.

“Why do THEY have tricked out junk? This fight ain’t fair…” mumbled AthleticAisha.

After a little while, the future looked bleak for Jack Sparrow and the gang… their ship was wrecked badly; it looked like it was about to collapse into 950 pieces.

“What are we going to do?” Yokatherine asked Jack, staying low as the ship rattled and creaked.
“Well… er….” said Jack, holding on to Yokatherine as their ship took another blow.
“He’s got nothing… we’re DOOMED!!!” screamed slycooper_lo.
“Yes… you guys are.” mumbled iRaccoon, grinning dimly, thinking that the gang will all drown while he’ll be rescued by Guestalina.
“Hold on guys, this is THE Jack Sparrow! He can do anything…” said Yokatherine, believing that they’ll get out of this mess.

Jack Sparrow stared at Yokatherine for moment, and said “Follow me… everyone…” his face glowing with positivism.

Yokatherine turned around and told the rest of the gang to follow Jack.

Jack went into the corner of the ship, opened up a little trunk, and grabbed out some grappling hooks. He gave some to the gang, and told them to load it into the cannons, and fire it at the Black Pearl.

“This is like POTCO…” mumbled CyanTara, loading a grappling hook into a cannon.
“What do you expect? That game’s about pirates. And right now, we’re posing as pirates.” said LittleTinkFairy.

8 grappling hooks zoomed through the air, and hooked on to the Black Pearl.

Captain Barbossa’s crew was startled, as huge hooks made holes in their ship. They panicked when they noticed that the Black Pearl seemed to be getting nearer and nearer.

Jack gave the kids cutlasses.

“Um… what are we going to do with these?” asked CuteTabitha, flipping her hair.
“………… what do you think, smart one?” asked hikoik, glaring at CuteTabitha.

CuteTabitha stared at hikoik with a blank face, thinking.

“…… don’t hurt yourself there…. I’m guessing we’re going to fight the enemy with these…” replied hikoik.
“OH! EW! I HAVE TO GET NEAR THOSE SMELLY PIRATES WITH HORRIBLE FASHION SENSE? JACK SPARROW IS BAD ENOUGH!” screamed CuteTabitha.
“Um... before speaking, look down at down at your own outfit and smell yourself.” said SassaFrazz, giving her a fake smile.

“Wow…. my very own pirate cutlass. This is the best day of my life!” screamed Yokatherine, fingering her cutlass.

”Follow me. We’ll show them that today shall NOT be the day of Captain Jack Sparrow’s demise!” said Jack, grabbing a rope that was hanging off from the sails of the Black Pearl, and swung across.

The gang followed, grasping on to their cutlasses.

“I GET TO BOARD THE BLACK PEARL?! THIS IS THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!” screamed Yokatherine.

Captain Barbossa stood there on his ship, giving Jack and his crew dirty looks, ready and armed with his crew.

“Ye made a large mistake there by boarding the Black Pearl, matey.” said Captain Barbossa, as Jack and the gang looked around, and realized they were surrounded by Captain Barbossa’s crew, along with Pintel and Ragetti, who got his eye back.

“This is the pitchfork scene all over again…” mumbled LightningBrutus.




YAY
OK IM DONE IM FREEEE - breathes deeply - next chapter.. on..
Friday/Saturday/Sunday LOL - seriously hiccup, remind me.. LOL -
see, I told you this was gunna be a bad chapter LOL
(and uh. ignore double post. LOL)

It wasn't bad!

IT RAWKED!!!!

They boarded the Black Pearl?! Dun dun dun...

wooo LOL
yea its just like potco rofl
tricked out junk
q:
..rofl

yesh
i dont know anything about pirates
so i modeled it after potco o_o
LOL

thx blue. LOL

its still awesome LOL
reminds me of the good ol days

No probs, bud. Oh, and check your PMs! I sent you 1.

And BTW, here's a hint about your PM...

I RESPECT YOU!!!!

:firewrks3::fireworks1::firewrks3: :flagwaver: :firewrks3::fireworks1::firewrks3:

http://media1.youshare.com/uploads/CuteTabitha/617ee7ab6e370c73.gif?1546291625

CuteTabitha is clueless LOL

http://media1.youshare.com/uploads/CuteTabitha/617ee7ab6e370c73.gif?1546291625

LOL yeah...

Uh...nice story?

=D yay chapter. LOL xD "look down at your outfit and smell yourself..." Rofl

“This is the pitchfork scene all over again…” mumbled LightningBrutus.

Eh... What chapter was the pitchfork scene.. must read it again

heheheheheheheheheeh Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

tmw, it was.. chapter 16.. somewhere there, i forgot LOL

thx guys
LOL

Awesomeness!

wooot
nice chapter flower XD

Hehe Thats a really good chapter =]

I just noticed something. In a hundred more posts, this thread is gonna explode.

I just noticed something. In a hundred more posts, this thread is gonna explode.

are you saying it's going to get too large and i'll have to start a new one? DX
NOOOOOO LOL

Aww! I never thought about that. In 79 more posts, you'll have to make a thread called "The guest you wouldn't want to annoy... (weirdest cheesiest story EVER -continued--)".

Aww! I never thought about that. In 79 more posts, you'll have to make a thread called "The guest you wouldn't want to annoy... (weirdest cheesiest story EVER -continued--)".

LOL this story is tooo longg.
I'll have to put all the chapters on that one then, into one post, one very huge long post.
when this one ends. :D LOL

Yeah... hey, have you checked in to my story? I PMed you about it. And if you're the lucky 40th poster, you win a prize! xD

And I DON"T WANT THIS TO END!! I shall bribe the thread with cookies...

:cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie:

O--h--,--n--o--!--C--o--o--k--i--e--o--v--e--r--l--o--a--d--!--W--e--'--r--e--b--r--e--a--k--i--n--g--u--p--!

...beep...

Amazing chapter!
Really amazing!
LOL

No actually i've seen some threads that have over 925 posts and its still open.

LOL this story is tooo longg.
I'll have to put all the chapters on that one then, into one post, one very huge long post.
when this one ends. :D LOL

You could just put the link to this one so people can read it. By the way, when I said explode, I meant "Go boom" :D Which also means you need to get another thread.

You could just put the link to this one so people can read it. By the way, when I said explode, I meant "Go boom" :D Which also means you need to get another thread.

OK well when I post another chapter, i'll make a new thread, and ill give you guys da link to it.
LOL

You Ares Lazies :p -smacks her with 100000000000000000000000000 gummy-worms- WHERE IS THE CHAPTER MUNG!?

- smack Raccoon with 1000000000000000000000000 gummy bears - It's hard thinking of a chapter after you posted more than 40.

plz dont do another thread if u keep going u can make a vmkf record

Duuude.. 28,929 views...

--gives cookie for that many views--

:cookie:

nice story i love Chapter 2 ;)

This could be the longest story in VMK if you continue it. CONTINUE IT!

yeah i know @_@
usually stories disappear after half a year.

..... mine has been going for 1 YEAR NOW. CELEBRATION PEOPLES?!

but anyway...
yeah i have been lazy LOL
i'll try to make a chappy... hmm. - thinks of a good day -

prolly.
WEDNESDAY
because i have nothing on that day XD and if not, the weekend, but im planning to do my laundry and stuff, soo....... yeah..
LOL

:Cool::Cool::Cool: CONGRAST!!!!! :Cool::Cool::Cool:

yeah i know @_@
usually stories disappear after half a year.

..... mine has been going for 1 YEAR NOW. CELEBRATION PEOPLES?!

but anyway...
yeah i have been lazy LOL
i'll try to make a chappy... hmm. - thinks of a good day -

prolly.
WEDNESDAY
because i have nothing on that day XD and if not, the weekend, but im planning to do my laundry and stuff, soo....... yeah..
LOL

-coughonlinecoughgamescoughcough- o_o. :D yay chaaappppyyy and congrats flower

YOU LIED!!!!!!!! THERE NO CHAPPY!!! -cries- I EVEN PM'ed you 11 times and my hand is numb now :bawling:

Have you considerd making a book?
Becaus this is GOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
and CHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZYYYYYYYYY

Yuppers! And congrats flowa!

No. I don't think she could publish it. Due to the following..

No. I don't think she could publish it. Due to the following..

Due to the following? What following?

well, this is a vmk story, and.. it's really weird.
idk.
LOL

eh
i kept forgetting/putting the new chapter off. like i'll put it off for later in the day then forget about it >_<

SOMEONE ENCOURAGE ME TO MAKE IT
MOTIVATE ME
LOL

GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKIE!
AIIIIIYAYAYAYAY!!!

:cookie::cookie::cookie:

...there you go, your motivation! xD

.:Blue:.

GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
GO GO FLOWA!
GO GO!
--duh duh duh--
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKIE!
AIIIIIYAYAYAYAY!!!

:cookie::cookie::cookie:

...there you go, your motivation! xD

.:Blue:.

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That wuz Fun-e

Yaay! Best story in the history of VMKF! No other story would still be loved after one year O.o

New Chapter Plz!!

omg i havent posted on this story for awhile but anyways
great story keep up teh good work

duh duh Duh Flower! duh duh duhhduh Flowa!
go flowa go fklowa don't forget or the mice will eat us alive in the sewers

she told me she was going to do the chapter 2 weeks ago and then she told she forgot then she told she was going to do it last week and i guess she forgot lol!

Dang... Its been like... 8 Months since the last chapter.. Is she gone? LOL! I hope not!

Blossomflower!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!1 when is the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Obviosly, flower forgets a lot of stuff.
FLOWERRR!!!! WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!!!
!

Lol... A story that was never finished... We will never know what the guest did! :P
- acefredfred

It's not cuz she's lazy (well it partly is LOL), but she's working on something else right now, she'll get back on this when she's done LOL.

Write more, Flowa!! And no, hikoik, it begins.....
Here: (LOL xD)

fun fact
its been 3 months since i poseted mylast opst on this thread

is it done? I hope not! lol!

Flowa this is ya friend Epcot we need another chappy or the guest will take over Disney World AAAAAAAAH hurry!

.... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHH

okay.
sigs or story..
sigs or story..
sigs or story?!?!?!

Story! HAHAHA!!! I'm on chapter 7.

sigs first. :D

NOOOOO!!! Story!!! Don't make me throw cake at you, Flower!

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I can't believe this story is still here. LOL.
Great job, Blossom.:D

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Story Blossom!
- acefredfred

rotfl. Im gonna read the whole story.

Flower, you should think about publishing this story. Its bookworthy. :D

ROFL! Great story!

.... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHH

okay.
sigs or story..
sigs or story..
sigs or story?!?!?!

are you gullible
o.o
STORY FOO

Story Foo.. ROFL.

I agree with King.

Come on blossom.. We are waiting for you..
- acefredfred