Hey i loved ur story so far. is possible if u can put me in the next chapter. i love that im boy thx alt

nice story blossomflower

Ive Deleted All My Posts In This Thread To Prevent Future Arguments
Good-Day People :)

Sorry avast, i'm not adding any more people...

and guess what guys?! I GOT HALF OF THE CHAPTER DONE.
but now, i need to sleep or i will be in big trouble.
so tomorrow i'll finish the chapter, and i'll finish it before going on VMK :D
[so i wont get distracted. LOL]

I just made raccoon do evil things in this chapter :D

o.o SOOOO THERE WILL BE A CHAPTER TOMORROWWWW
coz i'll do it before i log on vmk. OK?!!!

tyvm for waiting. and please. dont yell at me cause i didn't write the chapter tonight. NOW I G2G OR I'LL GET IN TROUBLE

nite.

yay flower!

MUAHAHAHA.

- I don’t feel like putting a little intro here LOL -
- But wow, we’re already up to chapter 30! O_o Yep this is definitely gonna reach 50 chapters. -
- Oh and in the chapter below, you’ll realize I’m a big fan of DP and Archie comics (for some of you that don't already know that hehehe) -
- and sorry it aint that long. -
- LOL I said I wasn’t gonna put an intro, but I did anyway O_o -



Chapter 30: iRaccoon betrays them again…


iRaccoon deceitfully stepped into the bathroom. It was a pretty decent one, and not the revolting kind. He walked into the second stall, locked the door, and leaned on it.
He took out a walkie-talkie, and pressed a button.

“Lowly worm to evil queen, lowly worm to evil queen, do you read me?” spoke iRaccoon into the walkie-talkie.
“THERE YOU ARE!!!!!!!! I’VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!!!!!” screamed Guestalina, who was in an alley, her evil minions asleep.
“B-“ said iRaccoon, but got cut off…
“OH PUT A CORK IN IT I DON’T CARE ABOUT YOUR STUPID BACKTALK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST TELL ME WHERE THE PESTS ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” retorted Guestalina.
“Well we’re here at Domino’s pizza hut, and we’re gonna be sleeping in helicopters at a park nearby …” replied iRaccoon.
“WHAT CITY IS THAT?!?!?!?!” screamed Guestalina, as her evil minions started to snore loudly.
“Uhm… wait hold on.” replied iRaccoon.

He walked out of the bathroom, and looked out the window. He saw the friends slowly walking back toward the park, and the sun rising. There was a calming, blue-ish sky.
iRaccoon smiled and found it very peaceful and relaxing.
In the distance, iRaccoon spotted a sign in the park that read “Fenton Park”.
An “*AHEM*” could be heard from the walkie-talkie.
iRaccoon suddenly woke up from his trance, and walked towards the counter.

The boy was now sitting on the chair, swiveling himself around carelessly, listening to his iPod. He thought the friends had already gone home, and he felt like a load had been lifted off his shoulders.
Closing his eyes to feel the beat, the boy hardly noticed iRaccoon was waiting at the counter.

“Excuse me!!!” bellowed iRaccoon.

The boy leaped up from his chair, startled, and shakily stood up correctly.

“Uhm, how may I help you sir?” asked the fidgety boy, straightening his tie.
“Uh, what city is this?” asked iRaccoon.
“Oh, this is Riverdale.” replied the boy.
“OK… thank you.” replied iRaccoon, and briskly marched back into the bathroom.

The boy sighed in relief, and rubbed the back of his neck.

iRaccoon walked into the second stall again, took out a walkie-talkie, and said “Me and the pests are in Riverdale…”
“Riverdale, eh?” replied Guestalina, smirking evilly.
“Yep…” replied iRaccoon.
“OK thank you for your help.” replied Guestalina.
“No problem, heh just promise me that position of power…” said iRaccoon, giggling evilly.
“Yeah sure whatever. Over and out.” said Guestalina.

iRaccoon hid the walkie-talkie and walked out of the bathroom.

“Position of power… in his dreams…” said Guestalina, rolling her eyes.

She grabbed two trashcan lids and banged them together, waking up her evil minions.

“MINIONS, THE PESTS ARE IN RIVERDALE!!!! LET US GET A MAP, AND TRACK THEM DOWN!” screamed Guestalina.

The guests all cheered.

- Meanwhile -

iRaccoon ran to catch up with his friends, who were just about to enter the helicopters.

“Hey raccoon, what took you so long?” asked SassaFrazz.
“Ate a little too much, eh?” asked hikoik.

iRaccoon just smirked evilly.

“It’s already Kitri 7:36 in the morning, the sun is shining, and NOW we’re going to bed?” asked Kitri.
“Our schedule’s gonna be whacked…” said LittleTinkFairy.
“We’ll just sleep for a few hours, just so we can rest a little.” said LightningBrutus.
“And a few hours is just enough time for Guestalina to come… hehehe.. MUAHAHAHAHA…” mumbled iRaccoon under his breath, chuckling evilly, and showing a devilish grin.
“What?” asked a startled Yokatherine.
“Nothing.” replied iRaccoon, clearing his throat and looking the other way.

The friends gave him a suspicious look.
iRaccoon started to panic.
He looked around and saw Straws opening the back door of a helicopter.

“Coming Straws!” he yelled.

Straws turned her head to see what the hubbub was about.
iRaccoon ran toward her.

“I didn’t call y--” said Straws, looking at him in a suspicious way, but barely finished her sentence.

iRaccoon just ran right past Straws, not caring about what she tried to say.
He rapidly crawled his way into the helicopter, pushing Straws aside.

”Wha--??” asked Straws.

iRaccoon shut the helicopter door, and sat in the backseat.
He took breaths of relief.

“That was close.” he said, panting and hugging his legs, then started to slightly rock back and forth.

The friends stared at the helicopter door where iRaccoon went through, and gave off a O_o look.

“Weird…” mumbled SoccerRach.
“Very weird…” added Cool-Dolphin.
“Eh, he’s just probably really sleepy.” commented lil_rockerangel.
“His exhaustion must have gone to his head.” replied tiger_girl_me.

The friends let it go, and started to climb into their helicopters.



Hehehe.
I found that funny. LOL
Oh, and if you want to know what helicopter you went in and who you are with…
Just look at that guide thing I posted a few chapters ago O_o LOL
O_O do you want me to copy and paste it?! - eats -
anyway. tbc.

nah. you don't have to. LOL

funny chapter!!

FUNNY CHAPTER! :D! especially in the end there lol

Hehehe nice chapter, Flower! =D

awesome chapter, cant wait for more (but i'm not pressuring u in any way)

I wasn't in the chapter..
oh well, i guess i have to wait a few more weeks for the next chapt :rolleyes:

Fenton park ROFL

told ya i was a DP nut. LOL

LOL jam, i'll try to make another one this friday :D

q: im glad you all like the chapter. i found it really weird. LOL

Blossom, can you make me in it too!! plz??
~ dddj ~

o_o i'm not letting anymore people in...
sorry...
and i can't put you in even if i wanted; I already turned down a lot, and if i put you in, they'll eat me. LOL

are you going to type the story anytime soon?

o_o i'm not letting anymore people in...
sorry...
and i can't put you in even if i wanted; I already turned down a lot, and if i put you in, they'll eat me. LOL

lol :) whatever u say

cooky, there was already a new chapter yesterday O_o
lookie at last page O_o

domino's pizza hut............................................... ...
LOL

hehe yay for the next chapta!!! it was good!

um hikoik, what's so funny about domino's pizza hut?? LOL

and thx cookie :D

cool chapter. And I know you're probably not going to answer this question but, when are the friends going to find out that iraccon(sp?) is a double agaent?(sp?)

you combined two pizza joints LOL

Safari if BlossomFlowet told ya then he wouldn't be a double AGENT now would he ;)

LOL yo..
and im not a fan of domino's..
or pizza hut. XP
eh. im making my own story... but not posting it..
one chaptah is 8 pages (front and back) long in a five subject notebook! @_@
my friends are all like, 'LEMME SEE THE BOOK!!!' and im like, '0_o SHOO!'

LOL cyan
and hikoik.. what else should i call it? "domino's pizza palace"? LOL

and they'll find out soon, safari.. but im not telling when :)

Lol! Nice story, even though i don't know you, can i be in the story? It's just so good! It's even better than the_phoenix's stories! (No Offence)

oh nvm, i just read your post about not adding anymore ppl. Don't worry, it's ok.

lol i was in the story :) hey can u post the helicopter list again :) dont feel like looking back..

Helicopter 1:

CyanTara - Pilot
SoccerRach - Passenger
Blossomflower - Backseat
SassaFrazz - Backseat
hikoik - Backseat


Helicopter 2:

LightningBrutus - Pilot
tiger_girl_me - Passenger
lil_rockerangel - Backseat
slycooper_lo - Backseat


Helicopter 3:

Mizz.V - Pilot
Straws - Passenger
iRaccoon - Backseat
CuteTabitha - Backseat
Cool-Dolphin - Backseat


Helicopter 4:

AthleticAisha - Pilot
walnutfudge - Passenger
Kitri - Backseat
princesgirl - Backseat


Helicopter 5:

LittleTinkFairy - Pilot
Yokatherine - Passenger
dabaseballking - Backseat
coolJamz - Backseat
Teddyfruitgirl - Backseat
LOL Since BlossomFlower is not on here it is!

tyvm maybe your not evil... lol

rofl.
the helicopter list reminded me of something.
Um. is it safe for a dumb blonde to drive a helicopter? 0_o.
Eh. id crash it :l

LOL!
well you were lucky you didn't cyan. LOL

and ivanbyte, ya sorry about that
but thx :D and LOL hey phoenix's story is pretty good LOL

and phoenix.. we're good friends? LOL jk

next chapter. possibly on friday.. but most likely saturday cause i found out that i have to do something on friday. o_o LOL

but if i do post it on friday... yay meh... LOL

>_< I will remember that, Blossom....

give me an F-L-O-W-E-R.. go flower. yay, good story so far!

i think everybody on meh plane should be terribly afraid.
spooky halloween much?

Wonder if this story added some halloween SpArK...... like some scary things but its yer story just a suggestion
_________
Meanwhile...
Nice BlossomFlower Wonder If The Story Will Become Published When Your Bigger

LOL "i will remember that blossom"
reminds me of terminator

omg this is so awesome!! lol and funny

uh idk if i can but can i be in the story? lol its sarathefrog not moch4476 awesome story btw! i wish they posted it on the vmk homepage lol

uh idk if i can but can i be in the story? lol its sarathefrog not moch4476 awesome story btw! i wish they posted it on the vmk homepage lol
sorry but she isnt letting anyone else in the story

Where Is The Story? I Thought Ya Said Ye'd Do It On Friday Which Past Already
-- smacks you with 556 Gummi Worms --

Dont Be So Heartless Raccon.
Sure, She's Buzy, But Everybody's Buzy.
Sure, I Want A Story Too, But I Can Wait!

sorry, on friday i was busy.. i wasn't in the house alot..
and on saturday, i spent the entire day watching a hannah montana concert O_o

know what would be cool? If you did an extra spooky one then posted in on Halloween. It's in only two days!

lol my birthday was on sunday can u mention that in there to :P

Happy Halloween!!!! :laugh:

yay post a halloween chapter plz!!!!!!!!!

o_o sorry i didnt post one on sunday
i made like the first part, then i had to sleep.
on monday, no time O_o
tuesday, no time.
wednesday... trick or treating. LOL

i'll make one on the weekends O_O

tisk tisk, or maybe you're just playing pirates... XD LOL


eh. that would be cool if there's a piratey chapter. XD

i totally forgot about this story and it just popped into my head.. post the chappy soon !!!

Great story :) LOL my favorite part is when they order. For some reason, they remind be of baboons ( don't ask )

LOL!!!! baboons

sorry i didn't make a new chapter, i have just been real lazy...
after dance class all i wanna do is go talk to my vmk pals LOL

I WILL FORCE MYSELF TO MAKE A NEW CHAPTER THIS FRIDAY, AFTER SCHOOL
I WILL FORCE MYSELF DUDE, FORCE MYSELF... so there will be one by friday. and if not, saturday. I WILL FORCE MYSELF

I already wrote the first part.. but that's it LOL
q: anyway.
FORCING MYSELF..

OH AND IF THERE'S NOT A CHAPTER BY SUNDAY NIGHT....
YOU CAN SPAM ALL YOU WANT HERE AND MAKE ME MAD T_T LOL

Anyway...
ehhhh i'm gonna listen to potc orchestra.. and DO IT
- cackle -

and soda, i could make a piratey chapter... o_o they fly the helicopters when guestalina comes, run out of gas, and board a pirate ship... engage in a battle against port royal...
YEAH THE STORY IS BUILDING IN MY HEAD MAN, BUILDING!
then soon-- HOLD UP I AIN'T GIVING YOU ANY SPOILERS. LOL

anyway.
whee there might be a piratey chapter

and no, i couldn't make a halloween chapter... i can't think of any way on how to make it seem halloweeny. what, while they're running from guestalina, they trick or treat? ROFL that would make no sense. well this entire story makes no sense anyway. ehhh... LOL

LOL well of course, cause everyone eats candy while running for their lives. You should also make a undersea one, where they meet Ariel or something

LOL well of course, cause everyone eats candy while running for their lives. You should also make a undersea one, where they meet Ariel or something

Hmm.. I wonder how the fish would react to them... They've been pretty mad at humans lately since we've been overfishing.

BTW flower, what if they were running from guestalina and she was thinking of using this power she never tried before and she's like "Hmm... I wonder what this does". Then she zaps them with her power and they (the friends) find them self in the online Pirates of the Caribean game on the Black Pearl wearing clothes like the ones they do in the movie and the only way to get them selves out of the game is to defeat the kracken....? Sorry, not in a very creative mood right now.

yay!! a pirate chapter, now ye know yo will LOVE that one!!! :D

LOL XD Enjoy writing. XD

LOL safari, that would be cool, but I don't want it to be back in the computer... that's why i had them go out in real life...
cuz in computer, u can't do much q:


and ariel... i could add her, but she's a cartoon and it's weird having a cartoon mixed with real-life people
that's why i didn't add danny phantom LOL

and yes yo, you will be so delighted. LOL

maybe try to keep stuff idk in this CENTUREY
oops that came out wrong thats my friend
in this CENTUREY
oops
in this CENTUREY!
oops man i cant spell "century" right

- muahaha - yay next chapter….
Idk if the piratey scene will be in this one, cause it might not fit…
but anyway. chapter 31 already! woot…? LOL


Chapter 31: The arrival of Guestalina


-- 7:50 in the morning! Sun is shining, birds are singing… and actually, still a bit chilly but who cares!? --

Each friend was in their helicopter.

Everyone greeted each other good night… “Actually it’s more like good morning…” mumbled lil_rockerangel.

iRaccoon closed his eyes, smiling devilishly… and fell into a world of sleep.

It was slumber time in every helicopter…

-- 3 hours later: 10:50 in the morning. --

All was peaceful… (not counting the snoring.)

iRaccoon woke up from a dream where he was ruler of the world.
He rubbed his eyes and looked out the window. He looked at a tower that had a giant clock on it. It read “10:50”.
His eyes got big, and his drowsy feeling went away.

He mumbled to himself, “What the-- it’s 10:50! Guestalina should be here by now!”

He put his face to the window and looked around.
Guestalina was nowhere in sight.

“Oh well… she’ll probably come soon. MUAHAHAHA, these guys will never suspect a thing… they’re so totally gonna die.” chuckled iRaccoon silently.

He put his head against the seat and began to fall asleep again… when he heard muffled yells, and banging.
He put his head by the window, and noticed the helicopter nearby was fidgeting and rocking side to side.
He raised his right eyebrow. He could see a fracas through the window of the helicopter.

Not surprisingly… it was helicopter 1.

“UGH HIKOIK YOU MOVE!!!!!!!!” screamed SassaFrazz.
“NO YOU!!! YOU SMELL!!!!!!” replied hikoik.
Blossomflower stifled her giggles.
“I’M OLDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAWRRRRR” yelled SassaFrazz.
“WOULD YOU TWO SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ISN’T IT ME AND HIKOIK THAT ALWAYS FIGHT?!!!” yelled CyanTara from the pilot’s seat.
“Egad…” mumbled SoccerRach.

hikoik and SassaFrazz slapped each other, like little kids…
Blossomflower was choking from laughing…

“GIVE ME SPACE TO SLEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” yelled hikoik and SassaFrazz at each other.

The windows practically cracked.

“Flower, you’re the one back there, make them shut up.” said CyanTara, yawning.
“Fine. Hehehe I know how to shut them up…” giggled Blossomflower.

She crawled over to the two (who were practically throttling each other.) and clunked their heads together.

They both stopped their fighting, and Blossomflower smirked. They pulled her in by her shirt.

”AHHHH!!!!!” screamed Blossomflower… as SassaFrazz and hikoik were fighting, and including Blossomflower.

iRaccoon saw the scene through the window…

“Ooh. Man I wouldn’t want to be Soda at the moment. hikoik got her in a fierce headlock there…” twitched iRaccoon.

The helicopter was shaking, rocking, and fidgeting… it felt like an earthquake for CyanTara, SoccerRach and Blossomflower.
Soon, the helicopter tipped over.
Screams could be heard… and when it landed…

“OOOF!! UGH… MY RADIUS.” a voice from a weary hikoik could be heard.
”You geek.” replied a SassaFrazz with her usual “o_o” face.
“AT LEAST I DON’T GET F’s LIKE YOU!” screamed hikoik, wishing he had a keyblade at the moment.
”RAWRRRRR!” replied SassaFrazz, as if someone said that Tom Welling was stupid.

And the fighting resumed… while the helicopter was tipped over.

“Um um, hello… can you not fight ON ME?!?!?!?!?!” screamed Blossomflower as she kicked the two.

And now, the three were fighting.

“Hey Cyan, don’t you wish there would be sleeping gas right now?” asked SoccerRach.
“Yes…” replied CyanTara, sighing.

iRaccoon kept watching the scene, and giggling.
”If they always fight with each other… there’s no way they’ll be able to work as a team to escape Guestalina.” said iRaccoon, as he cackled loudly.

CuteTabitha groaned in her sleep.
“Mom, why are you wearing my shirt?! And no I don’t want to go to the mall with you…” she mumbled, wiping drool from her face.

“Oops.” whispered iRaccoon as he covered his mouth.

He looked out the window again, and saw a pleasant sight.
Way more pleasant than hearing “FLOWER LET GO OF MY HAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” from a SassaFrazz.

“OH YEAH… it’s time :)” mumbled iRaccoon.

“UGH!! I NEED FRESH AIR…” screamed hikoik.
He climbed up and stuck his head out the door.
His eyes grew big.
He became speechless.

“Um…” he mumbled.
“COME BACK HERE AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN!!!!” screamed SassaFrazz, as she twisted Blossomflower’s arm.

hikoik didn’t reply.
SassaFrazz became concerned, and all her anger melted away.

She climbed up to where hikoik was…

“What are you lo--“ said SassaFrazz as she was cut off when hikoik pointed at the direction.
She turned her head and became paralyzed for a moment.

“AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”



- that concludes the end of the friends. tune back next time (which is never) to see what happens -
LOL jk they’ll make it out alive… or will they? DUHN NAH NAH.
and you can probably guess what soda saw… LOL
.:tbc! maybe tomorrow if I feel like it :):.
(sorry for the late chappy LOL)

and you guys..

Who do you think could have won the fight?
Soda, hikoik, or me? ROFL

LOL!! XD and i don't make F's. XD

LOL ROFL Nice chappy!!! hehe they fight like Hoffk and Bow Wow. ^^

LOL!!
They do? ROFL
except bow wow in yer story is like.. evil
and hoffk is annoying. LOL

Anyway thx q:

and if i'm not lazy, maybe another chappy tomorrows q:
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LOL yo, how does it remind ya of the little mermaid? ROFL
and thx. LOL

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Soda.. (LIAR! LOL)

hahah!! when soda said " come back here and face me like a man " it reminded me of the little mermaid rofl!!!!! and nice chapter! :D

Great chapta!! i think SassaFrazz would of won LOL

LOL nice chapter. Fine, no Ariel, maybe a Magical Periwinkle Pony!!!!

Cool! (chapter) Hmm... Who would win? That seems like a question that can just not be answered...
Safarilyssa♥

hahah!! when soda said " come back here and face me like a man " it reminded me of the little mermaid rofl!!!!! and nice chapter! :D

ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the little mermaid??!?!? LOL!

LOL you think soda woulda won, cookie? rofl
(i think so too!)

LOL safari.

rose/blue/glass (whatever u want me to call u) .. no ponies O_o LOL


'nyway, thx y'all q:

I havent read all of it yet, ive only read up to the 7th chapter. But so far, it's awesome!

LOL!!
They do? ROFL
except bow wow in yer story is like.. evil
and hoffk is annoying. LOL

Anyway thx q:

and if i'm not lazy, maybe another chappy tomorrows q:
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LOL yo, how does it remind ya of the little mermaid? ROFL
and thx. LOL

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Soda.. (LIAR! LOL)

i think i would have won. -.- AND I DO NOT MAKE F'S! D:

Blue is fine,
Oh and I don't know if your still not accepting people in the story, but if you aren't, I could people an evil person :)
Your probably not, but hey Lol, it was a try

Yey! Nice chappy flowa :D

Soda ~ Liar but ya u would've won.

Blue ~ LOL i'm still not accepting anymore peeps, sorry..

Rocka ~ thx q:

Blue ~ LOL i'm still not accepting anymore peeps, sorry...


LOL np np :D lol I wasn't really expecting you to say ok anyway

Soda ~ Liar but ya u would've won.

Blue ~ LOL i'm still not accepting anymore peeps, sorry..

Rocka ~ thx q:

thank you. but me no liar. XP LOL

great new chapter:)

i wont be able to be on vmk for a while. my brother says i am making his computer slow, so until my computer gets fixed, i cant play. :(

aww tinky.

I JUST READ THE PART WHERE THE PITCHFORK ALMOST FELL ON STRAWS AND HIKOIK SAVED HER *gasp* I wrote that? OMG I AM CRACKING UP RIGHT NOW LOL

um anyway. new chapter will be on friday.
ILL FORCE MYSELF, ONCE AGAIN...
this is to make up for all the weeks i havent posted a new chapter! LOL

lol you know flower your right.. i started craking up myself when you said that!!!!!! :D

Whee new chappy..
PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN RULES! Sorry, I’m listening to it LOL
AND I BET YOU ALL THOUGHT I WASN’T GONNA MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER?! WELL GUESS AGAIN! LOL


Chapter 32: Flight of the helicopters!


SassaFrazz’s ear-splitting scream woke up the rest of the friends.
iRaccoon smiled devilishly… until he saw everyone wake up.

“What is going on?” yawned Mizz.V.

iRaccoon bit his lip.
“DRAT! Everything was going well! Guestalina would just come and smash the vermin while they were asleep! So easy! That accursed SassaFrazz had to foil my -- er I mean Guestalina’s plan… with that stupid scream of hers...” thought iRaccoon, fuming.

Every friend looked out the window, and saw Guestalina and her crew.
Gasps and screams all around.

“What happened? What’s going on?” asked a bewildered Blossomflower, who was at the bottom of the tipped helicopter, and couldn’t see what was going on.

“Hello my sweeties… didn’t you miss me?” she asked, smiling devilishly and showing her rotten teeth. She approached hikoik, who was still poking his head through the tipped helicopter door.
“No.” replied hikoik, looking at her with a burning glare.

Guestalina grinded her teeth together, and gave a dirty look.

“ATTACK, MY FELLOW GUESTS! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Guestalina screamed, once again.
“AHH! TURN ON THE HELICOPTER PRONTO! PRONTO!!!!” yelled dabaseballking.

SassaFrazz and hikoik jumped back inside the helicopter and landed on Blossomflower.

”OWWWW I know we’re in a hurry but can’t you please… not do that?!” she screamed.

SassaFrazz jumped up to close the door, right when a guest tried to go in. His face got smashed against the window, and he slid down with a funny face.

CyanTara, LightningBrutus, Mizz.V, AthleticAisha and LittleTinkFairy rushed to get the helicopters starting.

About 10 seconds later, every helicopter rose in the air, with guests hanging on to them, except for helicopter 1, which was tipped over.

“YEEHAWW!!!” yelled LittleTinkFairy, flying towards the sun.

They flew off; not realizing that helicopter 1 was still on the ground…

“HURRY, YOU STUPID HELICOPTER!!!” screamed CyanTara, trying to get it to start. Guests jumped on the doors, which were thankfully, were locked.

iRaccoon looked down and smiled as the tipped helicopter was being covered with guests.

“They’re doomed…” he smirked.

“CYAN!” screamed SoccerRach.
“Yes, CYAN!” bellowed SassaFrazz.

The blades began spinning, and the guests near the blades got whacked away.

”AHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhh!!!” screamed the little guests, as they flew farther and farther.

The helicopter stood upright, and rose off the ground, with guests falling off of it.
The backseat was a jumble.

“WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!” yelled CyanTara.

She flew towards the rest of the gang… when Guestalina screamed “GUESTS! LET US TRANSFORM!”

They grew into giant swirling tornados again, and rose into the sky.

“Um, Cyan… could you make the stinkin’ helicopter go faster?!” yelled SoccerRach.
“I can’t… what’s going on?” CyanTara asked herself.

SoccerRach, SassaFrazz, Blossomflower, and hikoik looked back.

They were being pulled into the mouth of Guestalina’s giant tornado.

“Uh oh. This ain’t good.” mumbled SoccerRach.
“AHHHHHH!!” they all screamed, as Guestalina ate them.

The rest of the friends heard their screams, and looked back. They saw all the swirling tornados heading for them.

“Oh shoot.” yelled princesgirl.
“We’re doomed… we be losing power…” mumbled Yokatherine, as the helicopter began to go backwards towards the tornados.
“Base, hold me!” screamed coolJamz, as she hugged dabaseballking.
“ROAR! How dare they pull us back in after making a great escape?! LET ME THROW STRAWS AT THOSE STUPID TORNADOS!!!” yelled Straws.

iRaccoon laughed evilly.
“YES! I thought we had escaped for good… I forgot that they can be tornados. MUAHAHAHA WE ARE SO DOOMED!” yelled iRaccoon out loud.

Mizz.V, Straws, CuteTabtiha and Cool-Dolphin stared at him.

“You’re… happy about that?” asked Cool-Dolphin.
“Um.. uh-- only cause I didn’t want to leave without a fight!” replied iRaccoon, panicking.
“OH OK! Hehehe that makes complete sense!” replied a dim Cool-Dolphin.

The tornados completely ate up the friends.


DUH NAH NAH….
Is this the end for the friends? We’ll see! We’ll all see! LOL
(the piratey chapter will be coming soon.)
.: TBC! :.

cool. i thing the friends are starting to get suspious..

Nice Chap Blossomflower i agree they are getting suspicious

great chap i home this ends soon cause i love a happy ending LOL

ROFL GUESTS GETTING WHACKED OFF AND SCREAMING "AAAHHHHHH!!" LOL!!
I was cracking up when I read this chapter!! My sister came barging in while I was laughing and yes. I fell out of my chair. BUT THIS CHAP WAS HILARIOUS!!
MORE MORE! ;D

nice chapter :turkey5::tg21::turkey3:

We Have All Perished A Doomful Death
Ahh! Run!

finally im in a chapter!
....base.,..... -__-
LOL

ye should of made me sing the doom song! i mean whenever i say doom i have to sing the song.. but yay pirate chapter comeing soon! yo be on very happy pirate freak!! :D

Can You Put JACK SPARROW in it and have him sail you guys off from the city?

LOL interesting

SassaFrazz jumped up to close the door, right when a guest tried to go in. His face got smashed against the window, and he slid down with a funny face.


LOL funny chapter

LOL thx guys, there shall be another one... friday, or sooner :D (BUT THERE WILL BE ONE ON FRIDAY.)

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Rofl Jam, sorry I didn't include you more (that's why in this chapter I started to make other people speak) :D.

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LOL raccoon, yeah that's gonna happen soon... shhh. :D (BUT ITS GONNA BE MORE INTERESTING THAN THAT, I GOT IT PLANNED OUT MUAHAHA)

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Base, no, we're not dead. of course. we rule. :D

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Cooky, yes, there will be a happy ending. :)

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Safari, ya they're getting suspicious

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LOL TAY, that part made me laugh (but not as much cause I wrote it o_o. But in a few months, I'll forget about it, and once I read it again, I'll die from laughter! LOL)

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Thx lighty. :D

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LOL YO, I'll make you sing that in the next chapter... O_O LOL
(and it might be the piratey chapter.. :O LOL

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LOL hikoik, you always say that :D

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LOL SODA, I wonder, in that situation, would you have been laughing if the guest did that? (if it really happened, i mean. LOL)

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TBC! :D (thx for reading.)

lol yay sparrow gonna be in it, ok quieting it up now. :D

O_o, anyways woot and btw nice chapter flower

cant wait for pirate chapter, ( not trying to push flower )

anyways again flower nice chapter

WHEEE time for the... - drum roll - next chapter! LOL

OK, I bet you are all wondering…
“OMG ARE THE FRIENDS !!??” LOL we’ll see. :D
(in the previous chapters, you’ve seen what the inside of a guest tornado, so this will be easier to imagine. LOL)
(OH AND THIS UPCOMING CHAPTER, BEWARE. IT’S SUPER CHEESY. LOL)



Chapter 33: Escape the deathly tornados!


Each helicopter was in a separate tornado, but helicopter 1 was inside Guestalina, the most powerful tornado of all of them.
The friends all screamed as they were being swirled around in a circle, their helicopters smashing into foreign items.
It was a jumble inside the helicopters.
They saw flying bikes (with that cackling witch again), flying kids, a house, flying trees, and one of the flying trees had a screaming cat on it.

“Hey, this is like an awesome roller coaster ride!” screamed Cool-Dolphin, as the helicopter he was in went upside down.

“MUAHAHAHAHAHA GUEST FRIENDS, LET US MAKE OUR TORNADOS EXTRA STRONG, SO THE PESTS WILL SMASH INTO BITS FROM FLYING TOO FAST AND SMASHING INTO CACKLING WITCHES ON BIKES!!” screamed Guestalina, who was very elated.

So the guests did what Guestalina said.

”Um… is it just me… or are we going way faster?!?!?!” screamed tiger_girl_me.

Louder screams could be heard, as the friends were disintegrating into their seats because of the speed the tornados were going.
They smashed into flying computers and more.
The helicopters were getting dented and cracked.
They were in very bad shape, but they were still good enough to fly.

Skyana, who was in helicopter 4, was appalled, but didn’t know what to do to stop Guestalina.
Guestalina didn’t even know that Skyana was no longer with her, and she was trying to smash one of her guest fellows.

“We’re doomed! I shall now sing me doom song! Doom doom doom doom doom doom doom doom doom!!” sang a frightened Yokatherine, as rapid winds blew through her hair, making it look like a zombie’s hairstyle.
The friends in her helicopter were surprised she could even sing in that state of great fear.

iRaccoon just cackled, thinking that Guestalina will spare him.

coolJamz and dabaseballking were hugging each other.

“Jam, just in case if we don’t make it, I want to tell you something!” said dabaseballking.
“What?” asked an anxious coolJamz.
“I l--” continued dabaseballking, but stopped…

Just when Guestalina was close to victory, she and her crew of tornado guests began losing power.
The tornados began to slow down.

dabaseballking stopped as he noticed they were beginning to move slower.

“Oh save your mushiness! We’re gonna make it out!” screamed LittleTinkFairy.

“WHAT’S HAPPENING?!?!?!?!” boomed an angry Guestalina, as she looked down at her swirling body.

Skyana smiled happily.
“We have a chance!” she screamed.
“WOOOOO! The tornados are starting to slow down! MUAHAHAHA we’re gonna make it, yeah!” yelled walnutfudge.

iRaccoon frowned.
“NO! IT WAS SO CLOSE! ARGHHHH I HATE THE FACT THAT GUESTALINA RUNS OUT OF POWER IF SHE USES IT TOO MUCH!!! LIKE A CHEAP CELLPHONE!!!!” thought iRaccoon, fuming.


“WE’RE LOSING POWER!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!” screamed Guestalina.
Luckily, she only has a limited supply of power she can use at once.

As Guestalina screamed and started sobbing, the friends inside the helicopters cheered.

Soon, the tornados were too weak to keep the friends in…
Every damaged helicopter flew out of the tornado.

“YEAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” screamed the friends.

lil_rockerangel stuck her head out a broken window, and looked back at Guestalina, who was now normal, along with her guest crew.
She was kneeling on the ground and crying hysterically, once again, screaming “I WAS SO CLOSE!!!!! I HAD JUST HAD TO LOSE POWER AT THAT MOMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! STUPID SMARTKID!!!!! I’LL GET YOU ALL ONE DAY!!!!!!!!”
She waved her fists at the dented helicopters that flew away. They looked like balls of crumpled paper.

“Yeah right, you could have just spat us out and zapped us with lighting bolts when you had the chance! You’ll never get us with a brain as pea-sized as yours!” screamed lil_rockerangel, making faces at Guestalina.

“DOH! I SHOULD HAVE JUST DONE THAT!” Guestalina yelled.

hikoik stuck his head out a broken window and yelled out “NICE GOING ROCKER, now she knows what to do the next time she sees us!”
“Oops. Ahehehe.” giggled lil_rockerangel, aware of the mistake she made. She put her head back in the window, her cheeks turning red.
“Hmm. I wonder what Guestalina meant by ‘Stupid Smartkid.’ I think I know him… that name sounds oddly familiar. How does this all have to do with him? How does Guestalina know him? Something’s fishy…” mumbled hikoik to himself, as he put his head back in the helicopter.

LightningBrutus grabbed her radio walkie-talkie thing to talk to AthleticAisha.
It didn’t work.
“Oh yeah, I forgot how much damage this helicopter took… I wonder how long we can even stay in the sky with this thing…” mumbled LightningBrutus to herself.

She stuck her head out another broken window, and screamed “Hey candy! Where are we going?”
“I don’t know… let’s just fly someplace far away.” she replied.
“OK then…” replied LightningBrutus, putting her head back in the helicopter.

They all flew towards the ocean, following AthleticAisha, when their helicopters started beeping.
Apparently, all that damage made the helicopter leak the limited supply of gas it had left, and the needle was on E.

“Someone please tell me that means ‘Enough’.” cried CyanTara.
“Well, at least this answers my question when I said ‘I wonder how long we can even stay in the sky with this thing…” mumbled LightningBrutus, biting her lip.



DUHN DUHN DUHN….
Uh oh, looks like the friends are in another situation!
Will they make it out like they did with the tornados?
.:TBC!:.

good chapter flower lol! i sang the doom song woot!

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“NO! IT WAS SO CLOSE! ARGHHHH I HATE THE FACT THAT GUESTALINA RUNS OUT OF POWER IF SHE USES IT TOO MUCH!!! LIKE A CHEAP CELLPHONE!!!!” thought iRaccoon, fuming.
The bold had me laughing for hours seriously XD Cheap Cellphone XD

nice chapter i like that you doing chapters like every two days! lol Great chapter!!

LOL, I felt bored this morning that's why :D

Fyi, I won't be on as much because I'm moving tomorrow.. no internet connection! So don't expect a chapter over the week. LOL

haha! LOL great chapter flower!!

Like The Chappy!!

huzzah.
the dumb cyan accually crashes a plane!!! (wait... did i?)
anywayy, cute chaptah.
Cyan's gonna go hop up and down because there is a new chaptahh.
P.S. 'E' does mean enough right? RIGHT?!?!?

huzzah.
the dumb cyan accually crashes a plane!!! (wait... did i?)
anywayy, cute chaptah.
Cyan's gonna go hop up and down because there is a new chaptahh.
P.S. 'E' does mean enough right? RIGHT?!?!?

LOL i laughed at E means enough

and you crashed a PLANE!?! when!? i thought it was a helicopter!

xD yes Cyan it does mean Enough or does it??
anyways...
BlossomFlower it was halirous when that "Certain person" gave Guestalina a idea what to do on how to destroy us have a happy day!

Great chapter!

LOL i laughed at E means enough

and you crashed a PLANE!?! when!? i thought it was a helicopter!

see?!?! i told you i was dumb. somebody else needs to fly the plane/helicopter thing. and no. im too dumb to crash a plane... which is sssaaaddd.

lol i find it so funny how we know that it is raccoon but we dont in the story it makes ye just want to scream it to your face.. lol!! anyways <3 the story!

LOL yo that's true LOL

Hey guys, you know how now I make a chapter every friday?
Well, I'm moving, and by Friday I don't think there's gonna be internet connection at the new house...
so there won't be a chapter until the next possible time I can make a new one o_o

Sorry guys!
But no worries, my family already called the internet guys, and I think they're coming on Monday or something o_o

Soooo.. you don't need to wait that long. :D

lol ok flower :D

okay ill wait!!

I'M BACK I MISSED THE COMPUTER SO MUCH, MY RPG PROGRESSED A LOT.. AHHH I NEED TO CATCH UP ON A LOT OF THINGS

Now.. new chappy on friday! :D

awww man why friday :(

AHHHHH I forgot to do the chapter! SORRY! I can't do it on Saturday, completely busy that day...

Probably Sunday then. Sorry! EEK. I was like "OH NO THE CHAPTER" LOL

ROAR!!!!!! make the chaptah SOoN!! when do you think you can make it?

P.S. Im not pushy :D lol

LOL sorry I didn't make it on sunday..
I kinda got myself in a bad spot.. O_o. long story. eh.
erm anyway... the nearest day when I don't have to do anything is...

FRIDAY again.
sorry.

I got 2 performances this week.. sorry. LOL

BUT I'LL MAKE ON FRIDAY I PROMISE :D

I'll keep your word on it

NIIICCCEEE.
I forgot to make the chapter today.
>_<

ARGH ILL DO IT TOMORROW, first thing on the computer.

SORRRYYY

haha.
its okay flower.
some of us arent as creative as you [and i confess, me]
so it must be hard making a hard hittin' storah.
take as much time as you need.
:]

Thx cyan XD (I’m using that face a lot now.. ignore me. LOL)

THE NEXT CHAPTER! DUHN DUHNN

(listening to potc orchestra, dead man’s chest ending credits XD)

This MIGHT be the pirate chapter, we’ll see.
Either this, or the next one. XD

(Oh, and you may wanna use that weird guide I made so you can see who’s with ya in the helicopters. If you want, I’ll add it to this post.)
(Beware, the happy meal thing in this chapter may not make a lot of sense… you will only get it if you watch this funny video LOL)



Chapter 34: Crash of the helicopters!


The helicopters’ blades started to slow down.
The friends began drifting lower and lower …

“This is not good.” teddyfruitgirl mumbled to herself.
“Ye think?” said Yokatherine, holding on to her seat.

The blades completely stopped spinning, and the friends fell faster than ever.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” they all screamed.

“OBVIOUSLY, E DOESN’T MEAN ENOUGH!!!!!” screamed CyanTara.

Each helicopter was heading towards a jagged mountain that was in the middle of the ocean.

“This is it, we’re done for!” screamed LittleTinkFairy.
“Now you guys can be mushy.” she added, looking back at dabaseballking and coolJamz.

The two were too frightened to be mushy, as they rapidly approached the mountains. They just hugged each other tightly, screaming, and the only thing they managed to spit out was …
“I LOVE YOU BASE!”
“I LOVE YOU TOO JAM!”

Every helicopter was quickly approaching the sharp mountain, and loud screams could be heard.

Two men were stranded on an island.
As the screams caught their attention, they turned their head to see 5 “things” falling.

“Look Robbie!” screamed one of the men.
“What, Steve?” Robbie replied.
“5 shooting stars! Let’s make a wish!” bellowed Steve, jumping happily and pointing at the helicopters.

iRaccoon was happy, yet sad.
“Well, this takes care of the vermin, but… what about me?” he mumbled to himself.

“KITRI I’M SORRY I WAS MEAN TO YOU BEFORE!” screamed princesgirl.
“ME TOO!” she replied.
They hugged each other, bawling.
“IT’S OVER DAWGS… you apologize to each other right when you’re about to … what’s the POINT?!!??!” yelled a frustrated, stressed-out AthleticAisha.

Just as the helicopters were about to crash into the mountains, hikoik yelled “THIS IS IT, WE’RE GONERS!!!!!!”
“It’s time.” he added, giving a very serious stare to Blossomflower.
“Time for… what?” she replied.
“The… sentence.” hikoik replied, keeping his serious look.
“Oh!” replied Blossomflower, suddenly remembering.
“What are you two talking about?” asked SassaFrazz.
“… I WANT MY STUPID HAPPY MEAL!!!!!!!!” hikoik shouted to the sky.
“hikoik, we’re about to be goners … THERE’S NO TIME FOR THAT!!!!!!!” yelled SassaFrazz in his ear.
“Soda, that sentence DOES mean we’re goners.” replied Blossomflower.

SassaFrazz shot a O_o look at Blossomflower.

“Flower, why do you seem so calm?” asked SoccerRach, looking back at Blossomflower.
“You think I’M calm? I was screaming, and I still am on the inside, for goodness sakes!” replied Blossomflower, twitching.

The four turned their attentions to the front of the helicopter, and saw the mountains right in front of them, the helicopter about to smash into the sharp rocks.

“AHHH!!!” they screamed.

- boom.. -



the end.
well OF COURSE I’M NOT GONNA END IT LIKE THAT… what do you take me for? LOL
It’s a short chapter.. but I decided to end it here… cause if I continue it, it’ll be too long… I like to cut it into separate segments that have the same topic… ya get what I’m saying? LOL
and besides, it’s the perfect cliffhanger. XD
TBC… or will it? DUHN DUHN duhnn…

P.S, hikoik said before he goes, he'll say that happy meal thing.. just so u can understand it better.
LOL

put on le list! LOL

o_o. fine. LOL

- goes to copy and paste -

Helicopter 1:

CyanTara - Pilot
SoccerRach - Passenger
Blossomflower - Backseat
SassaFrazz - Backseat
hikoik - Backseat


Helicopter 2:

LightningBrutus - Pilot
tiger_girl_me - Passenger
lil_rockerangel - Backseat
slycooper_lo - Backseat


Helicopter 3:

Mizz.V - Pilot
Straws - Passenger
iRaccoon - Backseat
CuteTabitha - Backseat
Cool-Dolphin - Backseat


Helicopter 4:

AthleticAisha - Pilot
walnutfudge - Passenger
Kitri - Backseat
princesgirl - Backseat
Skyana - backseat


Helicopter 5:

LittleTinkFairy - Pilot
Yokatherine - Passenger
dabaseballking - Backseat
coolJamz - Backseat
Teddyfruitgirl - Backseat


REMEMBER WHO UR WITH, PEOPLES! LOL

woo nice chappy hehe
rofl

I want my happy meal? LOL!

@_@....


I know i'm in the funny copter. :D

heh.... This is so random... I love it. XD

LOL soda
yes, you are in the fun copter. it pwns the other copters XD

thx XD randomness is me. LOL

eh.
gushy :P
LOL
WRITE MORE NOOOOOWWWWW





rawr

aww noes i gonna go bye bye in da copter lol Flower i definatly laughed hard when someone said "I WANT MY HAPPY MEAL!!" it'd be more funny if he grabbed a happy meal from outside that got caught in the tornado

LOL raccoon...
and I know jam, it's gushy. GUSHY IS AWESOME. You don't know how gushy I can make. I make weird soap operas that are too dramatic for VMKF. LOL

i started wondering... why does the story called (weirdest cheesiest story ever) if it should say (Best VMKF Story Eva!)

ROFL XD

nice chapter. ;D

haha love the chapter flower espcially when robbie and steve are starnded on an island! i laughed hard at that part, keep up the awesme work flower!! :D yay potc!

hate to break it to ya but i'm guessing since a mod editted it because of non-g-ratedness they replaced it with Robbie and Steve

Um robbie and steve were already there... the mod just took out a few words that weren't appropriate, and replaced it with something more g-rated... well to be honest, it sounds cooler that way, i like the word "goners" LOL

LOL thx raccoon, but this story is cheesy, and changing the title would be kinda weird for me. LOL

i like the chessyness of this story! it's funny! :D

Yay! i finnaly caught up from when i last left off before halloween and read all of it in two days!but you know what...its only two days in the story but it has been months in real life LOL! hurry with the next chapta! i cant wait!

LOL i know acefredfred, 2 days in story but it has been months XD..

It's cause I'm so lazy rofl

anyway, the next chapter will be tomorrow (friday)

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...

hi so wat was the point of the story i didn't really read it.

OH SHOOT,

I thought today was thursday for some reason O_o. its friday? duhhh. rofl

OK I'LL DO THE CHAPTER TOMORROW, SATURDAY.. I PROMISE. XD

this is a really cool story cant wait till the next chapter!

lol flower, anyways i hope next chapter the pirates one!! and i spelt cheesyness wrong lol :D!

Blossom :( Its Sunday wha... wha... what happened *SNIFF SNIFF*

ARGH i didn't make the chapter again cuz on saturday I didn't even have time to get on the computer... very long interesting day O_o my mom had to call 911. long story.
and today's sunday, and I was off all day long too.. until now O_o sorry

I'll make it on..

Tuesday.

Sorry y'all!

it's ok flower :D! anyways what's the chances of the next chapter being the pirate one?? just asking

LOL yo, the chances are very high XD

i just read the last chapter! you thinking of making a christmas theme one? i remember reading a christmas story i children lost.. well they were kidnapped but got free.. but they went to the park where a giant christmas tree was and .. so yea.. CHRISTMAS!!Merry Christmas!

O_o. ok ill make one later on, like.. a miracle happens or whatever.

anyway, i'm gonna make the new chapter now, but I only have two hours or less so I might not be able to finish.

If i don't, I'll finish it tonight xD

EDIT:

ARGH I'LL MAKE THE CHAPTER TONIGHT, I AM SO MAD RIGHT NOW, THESE RANDOM KIDS CAME IN MY HOUSE, DUG THROUGH ALL MY PERSONAL ITEMS WITHOUT PERMISSION, BEGGED FOR ALL MY STUFF, KEPT ASKING TO PLAY EVERY GAME I HAVE... NO MANNERS -.-

I CAN'T WRITE A STORY LIKE THIS, MY HEAD NEEDS TO BE CLEAR.

I ALREADY GOT HALF OF THE CHAPTER DONE, AND I GOTTA GO IN LESS THAN HALF AN HOUR... SO I'LL DO IT WHEN I GET BACK HOME, OR TOMORROW.

ARGHHHH - twitches -

Wowz.
Kids these days.. PSSHHH.
I did my chapter.. Your turn! ;D

Sorry, I'll do the chapter tomorrow (it's almost done anyway).. cuz today I'm gonna do something else on vmk, i'm doing this project thing xD

then I have to play pirates cuz I NEED MONEY TO BUY GINGER PARTS FOR THE COMPETITION.

Eh anyway, I'll do it tomorrow after school, and it won't take as long because it's almost finished. About an hour or so.

Sorry guys! OH WAIT. Tomorrow... shoot. Idk if I can do it after school. O_o.
OK, probably tomorrow... at... 8:00 my time.

(dont worry, when its winter break, ill have lots of time! xD, i can make chapters every other day! until school starts again.)

SORRY! u can now hit me with 343343 gummy worms.
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EDIT:

I'm stuck here using a different computer... I can't write the chapter until I can get home, and that will be like... yeah... way late O_O
But, I WILL MAKE IT TODAY (unless if I get home later, then I'd have to go to sleep o_O... otherwise....) ILL MAKE IT TODAY - superhero music plays -

Back-Story on those "Scallywags?" - http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=135616

Yep, evil kids. -.-
When I'm angry about something, all I can think of is the thing that peeved me.... can't think straight..

Anyway, right now I can't make the chapter... I'm at my mom's work again o_o

This time, I'll be going home earlier though (not like yesterday, cuz i had a performance) and I can make the chapter... I'm not sure though, I might be going shopping o_O

If I don't do it tonight, FOR SURE I'LL DO IT TOMORROW, CAUSE TOMORROW IS FRIDAY AND I'M TOTALLY FREE FOR THE DAY!!!!! xD

btw, it's the piratey chapter, 99% sure. I think. Well I already wrote half of it, and it's not into the piratey part yet... so maybe only like 5% of it is piratey? idk yet.

Anyway
please wait
my life is kinda busy o_o
It's not like VMKF is the only thing I care about...

Winter break is a-coming... then I'll be free, cuz I won't have any dance/acting classes either.

S O R R Y

its okay flower.
hehh.
-music plays- WE WILL SURVIVE!
q:

"YA GOTTA GO FASTER KEEP UP THE PACE"

Yeah its ok BlossomFlower my life isn't that much of a free time day ya know

i was gone, and you never posted a chapter.. LOL XD ah well, it's still a GREAT story!! ~^o^

SORRY I DIDN'T POST ANOTHER CHAPTER
I'm making this video thing, and I wanna finish it first. LOL

xD, i think i'll be done with my video thing by the 26th. that if is nothing distracts me.

LOL

JUST PLEEEEEASE WAIT UNTIL WHEN I'M DONE WITH THE OTHER STUFFS I'M DOING. LOL

Hey guys great story!

im back :D great chappy with jam rofl happy meal!!!!

omg! that is soooooo cool!!!!!!!
if guest where like dat...
i would just start cracking up at that guest!!!!

HAHA I LOVE IT FLOWER!!!!!!!!!!!! I could seriously picture u guys reacting like that Lol ;) [~.:Panda:.~]

LOL Happy Meal...

OK
NOW
I WILL POSTPONE THE STUPID THING IM MAKING.. LOL
and I'll make the chapter on friday (forcing myself o_o)

not today, cuz im lazy.
not on thursday, cuz im getting an impression for braces T_T. and i think they'll do something else terrible to me but idk.

LOL


FRIDAY, PEOPLES. this chapter will be fun too, and yoyo will love me for it :)

thx y'all

AND OMG PANDA WHEN DID YOU GET A VMKF ACCOUNT?!?!?! ok sorry offtopic.

FRIDAY. friday.

YAY!! im gonna love flower :D lol.. im weird :p

i love the part when Soda says "Im not going there! I would if it was to save Roxas or Tom Welling!" If i was there i would ONLY go to save Roxas and push walnutfudge out! LOL luv the story!

It's Friday!!!! Where Is Flower!!!!! lol come on push yourself

I spent the entire time on my computer today (friday) making the chapter
when I was almost done, my uncle asked me to play ping pong and i did for 4 hours rofl

now im back (with my hand sore, BUT I AM SO AWESOME NOW YEAHHHH ILL PLAY IN THE TOURNAMENT! LOL jk) and i really wanna play vmk and this other game i like.... IVE BEEN WANTING TO DO THAT but i did the chapter first so..

ILL DO IT TOMORROW FIRST THING ON SATURDAY
it'll be fast tho, cuz the chapters almost finished.

and

MY TEETH SO SORE so take pity on me. LOL
(spacers for da braces next week.)

i like the name of this next chapter tho
its...
not as stupid. LOL
well it still is.
eh.
idk.
LOL

??? about chappy?
______

hahaha u got spacers like now u have to go through the pain that i went through 1 year ago rofl
________________

nice story? rofl

WHEE…. time for the next chapter… the 35th. Holy cow….35th already. LOL
I’m listening to this Japanese… medley of songs… so if someone says “arigato” in the story, forgive me. LOL

Anyway, now let’s see what happened to the friends…


Chapter 35: Stranded in the deep blue…


“Ughhh. Where am I?
Blue.
Blueness… is what I see.
A light from above.
Bubbles.
Why do I feel so cold?
I feel like I’m… flying.
Am I in heaven?
What exactly happened anyway?
Why… can’t I breathe??
Where the heck am I?
OH LOOK, A CLOWNFISH! I’M IN THE MOVIE FINDING NEMO! Or am I? Oh wait. I don’t think so. Never mind.
Something’s touching me…” thought slycooper_lo, lying in his helicopter seat, slightly floating.

He weakly lifted his head up and looked around him. He saw bubbles, blueness, and the inside of the helicopter, with empty seats.

”Where is everyone?” he thought to himself.

His eyes looked around some more until they met with a floating LightningBrutus. She was wide eyed, staring at slycooper_lo, tapping him and frantically signaling him to a direction.

“What are you--” tried to say slycooper_lo, but all that came out from his mouth were bubbles.
“What the….” thought slycooper_lo as he looked around once more, and saw another clownfish.

“I’M UNDERWATER! I CAN’T BREATHE. NEED. AIR!!!!” he thought out loudly in his head, grasping his throat.

LightningBrutus pointed to the direction once more, and slycooper_lo looked at what she was referring to.
Trying to see through the cracked window, slycooper_lo caught images of dabaseballking and coolJamz swimming upwards, and Kitri pulling princesgirl out of helicopter 4.

Gasping underwater, slycooper_lo tilted his head up to see more of the friends, floating on the surface. Nearby was the rocky mountain that they almost crashed into. The helicopters just barely hit the rocky points, scr.aped down the vertical mountain, and into the ocean.

LightningBrutus signaled slycooper_lo to come with her, and she swam out of the helicopter door.

Soon, all of the friends were at the surface, gasping, coughing, and soaking wet.

“Well, we’re wet, once again.” mumbled princesgirl, angrily staring at her flat hair.
“Everyone ok?” asked iRaccoon. “I hope not.” he mumbled to himself, giving everyone a dirty expression.

Replies with positive results came flooding back.

“Darn.” mumbled iRaccoon.

“Are we missing anyone?” asked walnutfudge.

The friends looked around.

“Don’t think so.” said tiger_girl_me.
“WAIT! WE’RE MISSING TWO!” screamed SoccerRach.
“Who?” asked CuteTabitha.
“S--“ began SoccerRach, as she got cut off.

SassaFrazz rose from under, gasping and flipping her soaked hair.

“Sorry I took so long, I had to pull this, argh, hate this word, NOOB up with me.” said SassaFrazz, out of breath.
Blossomflower popped up, spitting out water and screaming “AIRR!!!!!!!!!!! HALLELUJAHHHH!!!!!!”

“Errr… never mind.” continued SoccerRach.

“Dude, you weigh like a COW.” said SassaFrazz, rolling her eyes.
“Not as much as you do…” coughed Blossomflower, looking at the opposite direction, as SassaFrazz gave her a dirty look.

“Darn, I said that happy meal thing… when it wasn’t the time yet!” yelled hikoik.
“Well… you’ll get to say it soon… considering the situation we’re in…” said Blossomflower, looking out to the wide open ocean, and not an island in sight.




AWW MAN I THOUGHT THIS WAS GONNA BE THE PIRATE CHAPTER.
oh well NOW IM POSITIVE IT WILL BE THE NEXT ONE xD
TBC, ON FRIDAY! MUAHAHAHA.
(this is soooo cheesy O_o how are you guys able to stand the cheesiness of this story? LOL tyvm for reading. xD oh and ty for being patient with a lazy weirdo like me. LOL)

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i love the part when Soda says "Im not going there! I would if it was to save Roxas or Tom Welling!" If i was there i would ONLY go to save Roxas and push walnutfudge out! LOL luv the story!

LOL! I can tell you love roxas a lot.
LOL

tyvm!

O uh oh lol nice chappy what happened to me? did i drown? rofl

o.o... so are you calling me FAT? O_o.

XD nice chapter

LOL soda
and straws, i put the word "scr.aped" but it censored the middle part LOL
and i put ALL OF THE FRIENDS was up... LOL

flower i am sorry i till try to catch up in the story:)

yay im alive!!! nice chappy btw

I like the chapters :P Happy meal xD

aww no jack sparrow yet... :I OH WELL STILL NICE CHAPTER!! :D!!

LOL YO! xD

More! @_@ *gets pencils* Or I shall poke u! :P I can't wait any longer I think I'll explode x_x

great story so far flower!


Can't wait! You know your obsessed when you read 45 pages of chit chat, jokes, and nacho cheesiness (sp?) in like 3 days O_o.




Tinkyspal!

LOL! thx guys for reading

Sorry I wasn't on the computer on friday (nor monday tuesday wednesday and thursday)
life got in the way. LOL

so ill make the chapter on sunday! tomorrow! LOL

please wait. xD

1 hour isn't enough for me to type a chapter...
and when its nighttime, i really dont feel like doing anything but just sitting down.......

flower take your time :D

hi flower im kind of a fan of you and your stories but im still really far behind in youe story im in the human ladder though lol well if your still making stories plz let me be in it

lol ok flower

1. She Isnt Acepting More People
2. She Is Still Making More Chappys Just Doesnt Have Time
3. Sorry For Using Bold
4. Go Flowa!!!

^
1. True
2. Not true, she's still talking and stuff, I think she's sick of it actually LOL
3. k.....
4. k.....

Why I'm kinda bored:

1.Got nothing to do
2.I wanna read more
3.Got nothing else to read
4.WHERE ARE YOU FLOWER!! >_< I just get so hyper when I can't wait any longer...

I Read Everything! More, I Tell You, Mooore! :d:d

let her take her Time!

maybe it's because flower is sick of writeing the story.. she will continue it when she wants, it's not the end of the world if she doesnt finish it. that's what makes flower a good writer.. she takes her time O_o

Flower you have such awesome writing skills. But not to rush you, Where Is THE Next Chapter????? But either way awesome story and i hope you continue it
~Vienna, The Tiki Princess~

Wow. I Hope Flower's OK. She's Last Visited at 01-12-2008 09:55 PM

WHERE ARE YOU BLOSSOMFLOWER!!!!!!!!!

stop being so selfish.
flower has a life too yah know.
relax. she'll make the chappy when she wants to -_-

xoxo.
cyan.

nah, i think she's sick of the forums and i didnt really excpect my one post to bring life to this thread again LOL

flower just told me to say that she will be making another chapter, the story isn't over yet. it's because she is lazy and she is really sorry for being shellfish and keeping you guys waiting.



also there were times when she could have made the next chapter, but she had to read treasure island for school.

flower just told me to say that she will be making another chapter, the story isn't over yet. it's because she is lazy and she is really sorry for being shellfish and keeping you guys waiting.



also there were times when she could have made the next chapter, but she had to read treasure island for school.

I'm sorry, I can't help myself. I'M SHELLFISH TOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
but yeah, listen to yo. teh yomeister. k im done Teh story will be here soon!!!!! (maybe >_>)
(deputy, I'm gonna beg ya. PLEEEEEEEEASE LEAVE THIS POST ALONE????)

lol you people are making so much spam which might cause her to come to an end -_-
ill just wait for the chappy then

lol hikoik ill be waiting even though i have been too lazy to read anymore of the chapters lol i have been studying a lot for school. i think the last chapter that i read that i remember is when they arrive to a pizza hut and order pizza like crazy lol

Put meh in it : D

Grrr.. please :]

Can I be in it?!

FINAL NOTICE

BlossomFlower has clearly stated she is not allowing
any other people in her story. I And The Cast of her story asked when she first made the story.


[persongonewild] Can I be in it?!

[tiger_girl_meh] Put meh in it :D Grrr.. please :angry:

The constant spamming of her thread will cause the spam level on this thread to raise. By the time Flower comes back she'll see her thread deleted due to spam. So please no spamming. I Like This Story as good as the next person but its our favorite thread. Please no spamming



:vlipsrsealed:

I have been trying to be lenient with you because you like the story but the next non-new person that posts that is not Blossonflower will cause me to close it until she's ready to post again. She will finish it when she can, case closed. Go on IRC if you so want to talk about the story. Thanks.

bahahahaha/
that's
very
cheesy?
[:

yay... i guess.. its done.. oh well great story though... they should make a movie out of this!!!

(finally got the courage to got on) YAY NO PRIVATE PMS *twitch* eh. anyway. this... has gotten out of hand... dont go nuts... ill still continue ze story... probably tomorrow, saturday... and yeah, sorry, not accepting any people..

remember, i made this story during summer break, so thats why i had a lot of time on my hands... and now i dont have as much time.

thx to meh vmk pals who posted for me.. and yes, im getting tired of making the story, especially sometimes i get brain freezes and idk what to type. but. i will still continue it. LOL

sorry tiger, sorry other people who want to join, but i cant... and IM NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON RIGHT NOW AHHHHH - logs off -

oh and also... ya, its not the end of the world, i will still continue it even tho im.. slacking. LOL
especially when summer break comes again.. ill have lots of time on meh hands...
yeah.

this story isnt over ;)... TOMORROW. i think. well if im not going anywhere. but i might go to a movie-- ER MAYBE TOMORROWWWWWWW.

and hikoik.. what's up with your "IM SHELLFISH (shellfish? O_O) TOOOOOO" post? LOL

*ahem*. i gotta get off now. bye.

EDIT:
i just realized something. TIGER, YOU'RE ALREADY IN THE STORY.. LOL

Aye. Comes to show ye there is still a Flower that blossoms every once in a while.

Aye, Welcome back BlossomFlower

thx raccoon, LOL nice saying.

well ima make the chapter now... whee, the pirates chapter (yay more cheesiness) and sorry for being slacky and lazy and sorry for being mean in the past about you guys pushing me too much.. i mean, its a good thing u do that, cuz it means u like my story, which i appreciate so much, but just dont yell at me cuz it doesnt make me happy. but yeah anyway ima post the chapter... i just have to make it first. LOL

Hooray! i thought this story was discontinued! And it's ok, I don't have to be in the story :)

yay flowers back and tiger.... i forgot she was n the story rofl!!! but yea welcome back flower

Yay!!! the storys alive!!

Blossomflower,

I just wanted to say that you are doing a great job with the story! Please, keep it up!

-Blue

Not to rush but (if you are reading this flower) your absense is scaring me. O_O

Tinkyspal

i cant wait for next chapter and for the pirate part XD

just wondering, how long is the story planned to be??

Yay, welcome back, flowa.
Hah, i just caught up on the few chapters that you posted.
Niceee.
I wanna see what happens next. xD No rush.

YAY! flower is back - i dont have to sing the doom song now! =D!

Bumping Up Story Even Though Flower Might Not Post! 0.o

you say its cheesy? look at all the people who like it!

DiamondMeme.. People don't care about the name. (Even those its cheesy and weird :D) People just care if its a good story.


BlossomFlower would take the words "CHEESY AND WEIRD" to her story as a compliment :Do

I love it! LOL really entertaining

DiamondMeme.. People don't care about the name. (Even those its cheesy and weird :D) People just care if its a good story.


BlossomFlower would take the words "CHEESY AND WEIRD" to her story as a compliment :Do

Uh I was talking to the author of this story. Not about the story. Course it's good but I'm just saying she calls it cheesy... Yea and I bet she didn't even know at first that this was gonna be a good hit! Geez...

Great job Blossom!

Haha im back! and hola people and hola Blossom where ever you are! just wanted to say that i reread your story and its SHINING WITH BRILLIANCE!! Lol Awesomeness!

Totally post more!!! Can I be in the next? I can be a popcorn seller aka the friend. Give me a part!! Just dont make me steal anything... Or make promises...

flower isn't adding anymore people to her story, PurpleCrazyLava

:)

o__o flowerrs long-term absense scares us all, but we must be patient! for she will post the next chaptah.... someday. EITHERWAY!!! its still an awesome story.

and yes, she's said countless of times before, that she isn't taking anymore people for the story :(

wow these are really good! do you like to write?

Yup she does
Hey flower, since VMK's closure, howabout on May 22, you end the story/save vmk

Wow. I've never visited the stories thread before, but you have been such a great insparation! I am writing my first story right now. :smiley-technik015: If anyone wants to be in this one, they can.

*gasp* this story is still alive. THANK YOU FOR KEEPING IT ALIVE AND I STILL WILL CONTINUE IT (and probably add something for the vmk closing, which i didnt really plan.. grrr. WHY DOES DISNEY HAVE TO CLOSE VMK) but anyway, I will continue this, when school gets out, and i have a lot of free time XD (i'm also making this vmk video which i would like to finish before vmk closes.. LOL)

So eh anyway. THIS WILL CONTINUE AND I'M GLAD YOU ALL LIKE IT :P even though its like the weirdest story ever and I forgot why i made it in the first place. oh wait. it was summer break. i got bored. LOL

yes, this summer break i will continue it... (hopefully i will not have writers block)

tyvm all. LOL

and ty, vmk friends, for keeping this alive.. or else it woulda been in the thread of dead stories. IT'S NOT DEAD. I'M JUST LAZY LOL

O and yes, i'm not adding anymore people, cuz i dont have.. anymore spots to place you in, and even if I add you in just as a popcorn seller or whatever, it would be unfair to the earlier people who asked, and then they'd chase me with a flaming torch and pitchforks, so I'd rather not anger them :) LOL

and also, ya, I never thought this story would be a hit so I just put those adjectives so people wont post "EW THIS STORY IS STUPID AND CHEESY", and they know i'm already aware its cheesy. LOL
I was shocked when ppl liked this o_o. hmm. i guess cheesiness is a good thing.
LOL

and, sorry for being mean to you all before. i just get mad easily. bad habit. LOL

but. i assure you.... THERE WILL BE A NEW CHAPTER SOMETIME IN JUNE... or probably the end of May. and usually i break my promises but this time i won't break this one since you guys have been waiting for too long and i'm starting to get the urge to continue this story again but this month i'm busy LOL

Eh. ok. i'm done.

*off topic: AHHH I FORGOT ABOUT MY RPG. WHAT HAPPENED TO MEH IN IT.. O_O. im afraid to go check. LOL*

BLOSSOM!!!!!!!!!!! You're Alive!!!!!!!!! Welcome Back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like the !points! LOL Well I can't keep my promises either well sometimes, either way, thank Goodness you're back!

I was getting worried..

hi! good story yea... im awesome in it :d

nice story!!!!!

thx LOL
i'll continue it sometime later on in may. not today though LOL

Yesss! I missed this story! What happens next? Find out IN THE NEXT CHAPTOR!!!!!!!!!!! ....lol ^.^

My fave chapter was the one where they were bombarding that pizza guy!

Hooray for Blossomflower for continuing the story! =]

yay the story will be continued!!

wooo flowers back! LOL
wb flower, buddy :)
-random posting much?-
guess what? its almost the end of may..meaning.. story time! LOL

Yeah... probably this weekend, since SCHOOL IS OUT, BABY! - conga line - LOL

thanks for the bombarding the pizza guy comment.... (i forgot really,.. was it when they were making that kid nervous? heh. i liked that too)

ok. this weekend, (maybe), i will READ THRU ZE STORY, and the chapter's gunna have a special.. sad.. thing.. cuz vmk's closing.
(dang, this story has been up for almost a year now!)

but anyway...... i completely forgot my last chapter and the plans i made for future chapters so I'LL NEEDA RETHINK ;) LOL

WOOT
the story will be alive once more, and it shall provide entertainment!
wb flower.
can't wait for the next chapter!

heh i just realized something.
today is saturday.
i forgot to make the story.
rofl

I HOPE TOMORROW I WONT FORGET.
MUST.
NEED
REMINDER.
- looks around -

PIECE OF PAPER! ahahhaha

Blossom, since they've been running from guest_alina and all that stuff, the character people don't know that VMK is closed 0_o And usually I only read stories with me in it, but this is so good that I'm reading it anyway :D

Hey i remember this story!
Me and base are madly in love -_-
thanks flower ... rotfl

My gosh.. I remember how much my character wanted to blow up Earth and conquer everyone..

I remember how much.. I read this story 0.o

Lol. Good one. Write more!!!!!!

Guess that paper didn't remind ya huh??

And yes. I'm posting this on Sunday LOL.

Rofl
last night, i forgot to stick the paper on my computer
so i forgot til i saw the paper sitting there.
and I WROTE THE CHAPTER
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i hope u ppl love me now
LOL

AH…
FINALLLY..
THE NEXT CHAPTER (I just read this over cuz I totally forgot what I wrote) … this story. is so cheesy. O_o uhhhhh but I’ll bear with it LOL
(now………………….. I’m not sure what to continue cuz…. I forgot my plans)
uh.. also… uh… uh. I mighta lost my .. writingy… powers. - O_O -
mm
this is ze pirate chapter right? ya.
- EARPHONE TIME - haven’t done this in a while - cracks knuckles - here I go…..
and most likely, I’ll have a different writing style than I did back then. LOL
and..
also.
i…. uh.. forgot most of your guys’ “personalities” for the people that I don’t know.
uh…
well.
the story’s gonna be stupid then.
LOL
well um uh… here it is


Chapter…. - scrolls up - 36.


Chapter 36: H-O-P-E...?


(12:30 PM.)

The gang just floated there in the freezing water, for about 15 minutes now.

“Starving… need… food….” whispered LittleTinkFairy.
“So… you’d rather have food than be rescued?” asked AthleticAisha.
“……. if I get food after I’m rescued, yes.” replied Tink, grinning reluctantly.

For about a minute, the gang just stared at each other.

lil_rockerangel broke the silence. “……………. Ok it’s kinda been quiet for like, 3 years now. So….. WE’RE ALL GONNA BE GONE AND NOBODY’S EVER GONNA REMEMBER US AND I DIDN’T EVEN MAKE FLOWER AND DYLAN TOGETHER YETTTT!!!!” ((….ya won’t get it unless you’re somehow psychic :P))

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” screamed Blossomflower.

“So… who’s ready to say their last words?” asked SassaFrazz.
“Not me. I already wasted mine. I’m not going to say them again unless we actually do perish.” mumbled hikoik.

“:I Jam…” asked dabaseballking.
“Ya?” asked CoolJamz, flipping her head so fast, water from her hair hit walnutfudge in the eyes.

“OW!”

“You… realize… this might be the last time we’ll ever see each other right?” continued Base.

Blossomflower floated near, biting her nails. “WOO. THIS IS BETTER THAN THE MOVIES!”

“Yeah…” replied Jam, putting a really melancholy face on.
“Well… about what I said back at the helicopter… I…--“

Base’s sentence got cut off by a screaming Kitri.

“LIKE, OMG!! WHAT’S THAT THING OVER THERE???” screamed Kitri, pointing to something in the distance.

Everyone flipped their heads and turned their attention to the direction in which Kitri was pointing.

Once again, water from everyone’s hair infiltrated walnutfudge’s eyes.

“OW. DANGIT PEOPLE, I’M GOING TO CUT OFF YOUR GUYS’ HAIR SOON.”

“What is that… black shadow.. thing?” whispered CyanTara.
“Well… we’re in the water… WHAT ELSE COULD IT BE?” screamed princesgirl.

Cyan glared at princess.

CuteTabitha let out a girlish shriek. “OMG. WE’RE SAVED! YAY THEN WE CAN FINALLY GET SOME CLOTHES BECAUSE I’M PRATICALLY SUFFERING IN THIS HORRIBLE OUTFIT. IT’S LIKE, I BOUGHT THIS ONLY LAST MONTH, BUT NO--“

CuteTabitha found her mouth under Straws’ hand.

”We don’t really care, ok?” says Straws.

“Could it be? Are we saved? … Well how do we even know that they will save us? They might be bad people…” asked Cool-Dolphin.
“YEAH THEY COULD COOK US!!” screamed slycooper_lo.

iRaccoon let out a grin. “If they are bad people… and cook us… (what’s up with that?)… I’ll escape, leaving them to their doom. IT’S BRILLIANT. MUAHAHAHA. But… what if they get saved? Drat! Then all my plans will be foiled.” he whispered.

“What’d you say?” asked tiger_girl_me.

”Huh? Oh. Nothing.” he replied, looking away, then changing the subject instantly. “DUDE DUDE IT’S A SHIP MAYBE THEY HAVE NOODLES I’M STARVING WHO’S STARVING YAH YAH YAH YAHHHH!”
”I AM!!!” screamed LittleTinkFairy.

“I hope they’ll save us.” said Mizz.V.
“Same.… wait… what’s that… thingy sticking out on top of the ship?” asked teddyfruitgirl.

Everyone squinted their eyes to see what bear was referring to.

“It… looks like… A CHURRO STICK!!” screamed LittleTinkFairy.
“Tink… shhh.” said AthleticAisha.
“The ship’s… chimney… thing?” asked SoccerRach.
“NO. TRUST ME ON THIS, I’M A PIRATE FREAK. IT’S… A PIRATE FLAG!!!” screamed Yokatherine.
”Yeah right, what would pirates be doing in the 21st century?” scoffed LightningBrutus.

By then, the ship had drawn nearer, and everyone had begun to see what it actually looked like.

“…… I take that back.” continued Light.
”Oh goodness. AHHH WE’RE REALLY GONNA GET COOKED!!!!!!!” screamed slycooper_lo.
iRaccoon grinned. “BAHAHAHA”, he thought, “They’re doomed and I’m going to escape using my cunning skills. But since when do pirates cook people? But anyway…”




o.o
that
was
a
very
bad
chapter.
LOL

like..
BAD.
o_o

too.. cheesy.. cant.. handle.. it.. - twitch -
more.. next time..
LOL

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BAHAHA JAM.
and yep zoo, they'll realize it.. later.
sooo
it's an unexpected.. sobby part in the story.
THIS CONFLICTS WITH WHAT I PLANNED.
GRRR
LOL

rofl.
I WILL MAKE YOU AND DYLAN GET TOGETHER! IF IT'S THE LAST THING I DO! xD
whaddya talkin bout flower, that was a decent chapter, if not GOOD.
haha, "it looks like a churro stick!"
it's so cute how base and jam keep getting interrupted.

WHEE FLOWER
yay flowers alive and she made a new chappy woohoo!!
pirates oohhhh yeaaaa
keep going :D :D

LOL thx guys

i just read.. my past posts... i was so hyper and.. kiddyish O_O. - i