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Blossomflower 09-08-2007, 09:32 PM Chapter 20: Get out of the sewer!!
The friends were still having a good time (and Yokatherine yelled at hikoik for being in the way)
The cheering stopped when they heard a clattering noise from below.
The friends looked down and saw that 2 guests had escaped, and guestalina groaned once more.
“Let’s get out of here asap.” said LightningBrutus.
“And we still gotta save Roy_The_Boy and encyclopedia…” said SoccerRach.
The friends ran as fast as possible back to where they sealed the manhole with gum.
They left hikoik sleeping on the ground.
2 seconds later, Yokatherine came back and dragged hikoik by the feet.
“Get yer sleeping butt over here! The guests are starting to escape!” yelled Yokatherine.
hikoik groaned “adjejll… I duhn fell lick et.”
AthleticAisha, SassaFrazz and Blossomflower ran back.
“The sooner we get out of this sewer, the sooner you can eat a chocolate cake and sleep next to your Sora action figure!! XD” yelled SassaFrazz.
“Which is probably lost in the stars by now..” continued Blossomflower.
“Oh, who cares!? We’ll buy him a new one!” yelled AthleticAisha, grabbing hikoik’s hand and pulling him more.
hikoik refused to move.
“hikoik, not only you’ll get to eat chocolate cake.. but I’ll buy you a giant chocolate chip cookie?” said SassaFrazz, smiling.
hikoik suddenly woke up, swallowed his spit, and said “Let’s go!” even though his eyes were slightly drooping.
AthleticAisha and Blossomflower smirked.
The friends ran and ran and ran… making splashy footsteps.
At last, they reached that area where guestalina had caught on and Roy_The_Boy and encyclopedia were lost.
The friends searched around (using that lighter.. which strangely still worked) but the 2 boys were nowhere to be found.
“Oh No, they’re gone…” said Straws.
iRaccoon was pleased.
“Maybe guestalina and her goons…!” said LittleTinkFairy.
“ROAR!!!!” yelled an awakened guestalina.
“Oh shoot! Let’s worry about them later! Run! Double-timing! Double-timing!” yelled dabaseballking, who was standing next to coolJamz.
The friends ran as fast as possible.
Finally, they reached the ladder, and saw the manhole lid with the broken blocks of wood.
The friends started to climb up slowly…
Everyone was hungry, dizzy and tired from everything...
They climbed up the ladder slowly and wobbly…
“No need to rush, guestalina is far… take your time.” said tiger_girl_me.
“ROAR!!!!! MY FELLOW FRIENDS, LET US EAT THESE PITCHFORKS AND CHASE AFTER THOSE VERMIN!!!!!” boomed guestalina. Some of the ceiling things fell off, but missed guestalina.
The friends could hear the guests munching up the pitchforks.
“Now, let us fly up and smash the ENEMIES!!!” yelled Guestalina.
“AHH!! Hurry up let’s go let’s go quickly now!! My grandma is faster than you all hurry hurry!!” screamed tiger_girl_me as every friend was pushing each other to get out.
tiger_girl_me was at the bottom, and she heard guestalina’s approaching footsteps.
Every friend had gotten out safely, except for tiger_girl_me.
The friends pulled her up, and they ran as fast as possible.
“AHH! the sweet moonlight, the dry land, and the aroma of fresh air!!” yelled coolJamz, as she hugged dabaseballking.
The friends kept running and running as far as possible from the manhole…
“Well it looks like it’ll be a while before guestalina catches up…” yelled lil_rockerangel, smiling.
“I want my chocolate cake now!!!” yelled hikoik.
“Calm down, bird brain…” replied Blossomflower.
The friends sighed in relief as they ran under the midnight stars and the cool crisp air.
Ahh.. that chapter just give you a sense of relief, doesn’t it? LOL
OK more to come soon MUAHAHAHA…
SassaFrazz 09-08-2007, 09:41 PM pitchforks? XD
Blossomflower 09-08-2007, 09:42 PM Yes soda.. dont u remember? LOL
PITCHFORKS.
i want to eat 1 too. LOL
Straws 09-08-2007, 09:50 PM well i guess the kids would wat anything by now even the guest i mean even tho they are guest they still have to eat..
LatinKreationz 09-08-2007, 10:47 PM Now...
Where do I began?!?! I'm going to say this once and consider this your first and last warning! We have just cleaned out this thread that was full of violations, ie. spamming, personal info, trolling, backseat modding...you name it! It would have been easier for me to just trash this thread and case closed. But I don't want to do that. I understand you guys like writing stories and that's fine. But, there is no need to comment every 2 seconds with non sense. Stick to the story!!! This thread has gone off topic way to many times. Now before you start posting again, please read the site rules again! I say again because I'm hoping you read them before. When you signed up, you agreed to the terms and conditions. So I don't want to hear "I didn't know". If I see anymore violations here or anywhere else on this forum, you will automatically be banned for 3-7 days. Now, stick to the topic and have fun!
Thank you for your cooperation!
PS....DO START REPLYING TO THIS POST!
Blossomflower 09-08-2007, 11:03 PM :D Tyvm for opening this thread up again
I'll try not to spam anymore
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I am now typing chapter 21...
I feel like typing a lot of chapters today.
MUAHAHAHAHAHA
(but first, i need to go get a snack)
Straws 09-08-2007, 11:03 PM i cant wait till maext chapter..... .-. -.- Rawr!! -..-
u cant reply to her post!! didnt u ready?? ok get snack..
Moderator Note: I'm a him, not a her! =)
food52012 09-08-2007, 11:30 PM hello this is a great story..
cant wait to here more!!
Blossomflower 09-08-2007, 11:32 PM Tyvm... :D
LatinKreationz 09-08-2007, 11:39 PM Again, you are going off topic in this thread! Stick to the topic or I'm shutting it down!
food52012 09-08-2007, 11:40 PM so can u plz write next chapter.. ?? :D
Blossomflower 09-08-2007, 11:43 PM Sorry i'm eating more spaghetti (i keep getting hungry)
I'll type it later LOL
besides, chapter 21 won't be that exciting.. now that they got away LOL
hold on im almost done, then i'll type it
food52012 09-08-2007, 11:45 PM ok tyvm.... i cant wait to here the story!!!
is this a double post?
MODERATOR NOTE: No, but it's SPAM!!
AthleticAisha 09-09-2007, 12:14 AM nice story flowa =]
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 12:16 AM Tyvm :D
I finished my spaghetti...
- slowly types chapter 21 -
LOL
Beautiful 09-09-2007, 12:19 AM Hope Your Having Fun Writing The Story! You Write Like J. K. Rowling! Well Good Luck On The Next Chapter!
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 12:21 AM LOL!!! the harry potter peep? :D
Tyvm LOL
its fun to write stories and see how people like them... LOL
food52012 09-09-2007, 12:55 AM flowe your story is so amazing!!!! i just love it can u make the story go on for days weaks months years decades centuryies light years omg this is the best story ever can we have the next chapter!!!!!!????? :D :D :D
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 02:01 AM LOL thanks food
Chapter 21: Escape guestalina and her goons… again!
The friends ran as far as possible.
It was dark and difficult to see, but the lighter lit the entire way, and the stars and moonlight above helped…
The friends heard and saw Guestalina from away. She had popped out of the sewer, roaring and throwing another tantrum because the “vermin” got away.
The friends gasped and continued running silently.
Guestalina saw a little light in the distance.
She immediately remembered the lighter, and yelled out “Charge towards that accursed light!!!”
Guestalina and her pals ran as fast as they could towards the friends, strangely not turning into another tornado.
The friends let out an “eek” and ran faster.
-- 2 minutes later --
The friends had reached the inner city, which was less damaged, but there were a few buildings broken in half.
Strangely, there were no other people running around. The place must’ve been evacuated.
Guestalina and her goons were catching up, and the friends were slowing down…
The friends haven’t had anything to eat, and they were getting really sleepy.
It was now 2:54 in the morning.
The friends turned a corner, but the next thing they knew, they were in a dark, dead-end alley.
The friends panicked as they heard guestalina’s approaching footsteps.
walnutfudge looked around, her mind racing as she rushed to form a plan.
She looked to her right and saw a tall wire fence, about 10 feet high.
She looked to her left and saw the glistening of the streets and guestalina’s approaching shadow.
She looked at the ground and saw shadows of unidentifiable stuff.
“Quick, Tink, turn off the lighter and everyone lay on the ground!” whispered walnutfudge to everyone else.
LittleTinkFairy shut off the lighter and everyone lied on the ground, next to the walls.
It was now pitch black, except for the faint moonlight.
Guestalina and her goons had caught up.
They slowly searched around the dark alley.
The friends tried to stifle their deep, panting breaths, but it was no use.
Guestalina and her goons were getting suspicious.
slycooper_lo had been panting a lot.
Guestalina and her goons approached his face.
The friends bit their lip as thoughts like “Oh this is it, it’s over!” raced through their minds.
iRaccoon had the same thought, but he was rather happy about it.
Skyana bit her nails as she knew that it was going to be over for the friends.
teddyfruitgirl felt an uncomfortable lump under her.
She slowly reached for the annoying item, as the guests were interested in slycooper_lo and didn't notice anything.
It was a rock, about 2 inches big.
She thought quickly and threw it over the fence.
For a girl, she had a good arm…
The rock clattered and the guests’ attention was diverted.
Skyana, who wasn’t paying much attention to slycooper_lo and was more into worrying, noticed movement from where the rock got thrown.
She realized that someone had thrown that rock.
The guests ignored it and approached slycooper_lo’s face again.
“Uh, I think the vermin jumped over the fence!” yelled Skyana, trying to stop them.
Guestalina and her goons turned their heads to look at Skyana.
“OK… you’re probably right. Let’s go over the fence then!” yelled guestalina.
Skyana smiled and knew that her lie was a success.
The guests slowly floated above the fence and landed gently.
They ran deeper into the darkness, and made a turn.
“Phew” said all the friends in relief, as they jumped up and dusted off their clothes.
“That was close…” said slycooper_lo, who was very glad.
“You rock, bear.” added Straws.
“Thx :)” replied teddyfruitgirl.
The friends got up and walked out of the dark alley, slowly and happily.
Skyana was behind the fence, eavesdropping. She floated over the fence and slowly followed them.
I wanted to fit more in this chapter!! LOL
Fine I’ll make another 1. Muahaha
(Wow time flies by fast… it’s already been an hour?! Egad that felt like only a few minutes to me)
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KH FANS KEEP AN EYE OUT
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I wonder how long this story is gonna last. LOL
what if... what if it reaches chapter 50!!! AWESOME!!!!
*no copy! roar*
CyanTara 09-09-2007, 02:17 AM nice chapterr
love your storyy
♥lexii
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 02:20 AM MUAHAHAHA ty..
I'm gonna type another chapter soon.. MUAHAHA
CookyHalie 09-09-2007, 02:28 AM I first saw this story and ignored it cause it didn't seem interesting but today i finally clicked on it and read the first chapter and couldn't stop reading! Keep it up I love your detail and writing style! It's very interesting and i shouldn't judge a book by it's cover:D
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 02:34 AM LOL!!! Ignoring it was the biggest mistake you ever made... LOL Jk
Tyvm ^_^ (wow first time i actually used that face)
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OK I'm typing... chapter 22
(I honestly thought this would only reach 15 chapters LOL... but at the rate that it's taking, it will be about ya... 50 chapters. SWEET! LOL)
food52012 09-09-2007, 02:48 AM omg this was the best chapter i love the part when straws talks :)
wait huh??
SassaFrazz 09-09-2007, 03:24 AM I still like this story! ... :D
food52012 09-09-2007, 03:25 AM yea me to!! its the best i cant wait to hear next chapter!!
AthleticAisha 09-09-2007, 03:33 AM me neither
its getting exciting ;)
CyanTara 09-09-2007, 03:39 AM it is!
Good story flowerr.
you are a amazing writer.
♥lexii
SassaFrazz 09-09-2007, 03:53 AM ╔╗╔═╦╗
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╚═╩═╩═╝ It is getting more exciting!
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 04:36 AM Thx y’all!
Prepare for a long chapter :P
Chapter 22: Helicopters…
The friends jogged down the sidewalk, getting as far as possible before the guests realized that they have been duped…
They passed by a McDonald’s. hikoik drooled and stopped to stare at the building.
“hikoik? hikoik!!” yelled CyanTara, waving her hand up and down in front of his eyes, which were stuck on the fast-food joint..
hikoik started walking towards the building, resembling a drooling zombie.
LittleTinkFairy grabbed his shirt and pulled him back.
“I want a burger!!!” yelled hikoik.
“hikoik, this town has been evacuated… nobody is there…” said CyanTara.
“and it’s 3:17 in the morning.. I doubt that McDonald’s is open 24 hours.” added LittleTinkFairy.
hikoik put on a disappointed gaze as CyanTara and LittleTinkFairy dragged him down the street.
“Don’t worry, let’s keep going to a different city to find a restaurant that’s still open, and hasn’t been evacuated…” said lil_rockerangel, grasping her empty, growling stomach.
“Uggh, preferably someplace that’s not totally carby! I’m trying to lose weight here peoples!” yelled princesgirl.
Kitri stayed quiet, and put on a disappointed gaze similar to hikoik’s.
The friends continued to jog down the street.
-- 3 minutes later --
“WHERE ARE THOSE PESTS??!!!!” yelled Guestalina from faraway.
The friends looked back and gasped.
They ran as fast as possible, with LittleTinkFairy in the lead, holding the lighter.
Guestalina roared, and the friends turned their heads.
Guestalina floated up above, with evil black tentacles behind her again, yet she didn’t seem so big to the friends, because they were far, far away.
She strained her eyes and started looking for any sign of the ‘vermin’.
7 seconds later, she saw a small, moving light.
She growled in anger, for she realized the “pests” were now far away.
She summoned her guest pals up with her and she pointed at the running light.
“ATTACK!!!!” yelled Guestalina, looking angry yet happy.
Guestalina and her pals flew over the buildings to escape the dark alley they were recently in.
Strangely, Guestalina landed right after she flew over the buildings, and ran towards the friends. She didn’t just fly towards them.
The friends looked back and saw little tiny shadows running towards them.
The friends came to another dead end. There was an unfinished bridge with a sign “Dead end. Bridge unfinished. Please take another route.” Under the unfinished bridge was just bottomless darkness.
“Unfinished bridge?! More like unstarted bridge.” said LightningBrutus. It appeared that the bridge was never even started…
Guestalina was kinda far away, so there wasn’t much pressure…
iRaccoon was very pleased with the fact the friends didn’t have anywhere else to go.
AthleticAisha looked around. Next to the unfinished bridge was a tall building. It was a parking lot building. She looked above and saw that there were 5 helicopters. It was a landing pad/parking lot building.
“Come on, let’s go up there and ride away in the helicopters!” whispered AthleticAisha, pointing at the helicopters above.
“Are you crazy candy?! We’re kids and you expect us to work helicopters?!” yelled SassaFrazz.
“Oh so you just want to jump into the darkness?” replied AthleticAisha.
SassaFrazz was speechless.
So the friends ran into the parking lot and ran up the swirly way.
“Once we escape, I want to go into a restaurant and order some chicken…” said Cool-Dolphin.
-- 1 ½ minute later --
The friends finally reached the top, and guestalina was about 5 yards away from the building.
“Now what?” asked a panting CuteTabitha.
“Ok 5 people go into a helicopter each!” yelled AthleticAisha.
The friends frantically split up and ran to a helicopter.
Guestalina had entered the building, roaring.
CyanTara slowly entered helicopter number 1 and sat on the pilot seat nervously. (There were numbers on the helicopters :D)
Blossomflower followed and sat in the back.
“No way do I want to help control a helicopter…” muttered Blossomflower.
A pushing SassaFrazz came in with them, and sat in the back too.
hikoik followed and sat with Blossomflower and SassaFrazz.
SoccerRach followed and sat in the passenger seat.
Meanwhile,
tiger_girl_me entered helicopter number 2 and sat in the passenger seat.
lil_rockerangel sat in the backseat.
LightningBrutus sat on the pilot seat.
slycooper_lo sat in the back with rocker.
While all this was happening,
iRaccoon entered helicopter number 3, planning to crash it gently and let them be captured by guestalina.
Straws followed and sat in the passenger seat.
CuteTabitha sat in the backseat.
Cool-Dolphin followed and sat next to her, giving her googly eyes.
CuteTabitha backed away and scooted to the window seat.
Mizz.V followed. She picked up iRaccoon and tossed him into the backseat.
“What the..?” yelled iRaccoon, who was upside down in between CuteTabitha and Cool-Dolphin.
“I’ll control the helicopter…” said Mizz.V, who looked at him in a “you’re not cut out for this" way.
iRaccoon, who was acting like he was a goody 2 shoes, didn’t want to fight back and cause suspicion. He sat back up the right way.
During this,
princesgirl climbed up in helicopter number 4 and sat in the backseat.
“I don’t want to handle all that stress in the front seats. My pores will get huger!” yelled princesgirl.
Kitri followed and sat next to princesgirl, and gave her a really goth-like gaze.
AthleticAisha followed, and sat on the pilot seat.
“Why do you get to be the pilot?” asked walnutfudge, hoping to fly a helicopter.
“Because this was all my idea…” retorted AthleticAisha, giving her a sour look.
walnutfudge hushed up and sat in the passenger seat.
Meanwhile,
dabaseballking jumped up in helicopter number 5, and helped coolJamz up with him. They both sat in the backseat, cuddling each other.
Yokatherine climbed up and sat in the passenger seat.
LittleTinkFairy sat in the pilot seat.
teddyfruitgirl climbed in and slowly sat on the backseat.
Guestalina was half-way through. She roared “I’m coming!!!”
The friends eeked once more, and tried to get the choppers starting asap.
Roar!!! I was trying to fit a lot into this, when I noticed that it was wwaaay too long so I just cut it in half. awww…
Oh well.
MUAHAHA more to come soon.
CyanTara 09-09-2007, 04:40 AM good chapterr
good storyy
it fits ;)
♥lexii
SassaFrazz 09-09-2007, 04:43 AM LOL candy would probably be the best one suited for driving one... XD
i like this chapter.. i like it alot. :D
hikoik 09-09-2007, 04:46 AM what am i? the comic relief? LOL
i wanted to drive the helicopter .-.
CyanTara 09-09-2007, 04:49 AM too bad hikoik :D
♥lexii
AthleticAisha 09-09-2007, 04:50 AM why do u think that soda? lol
n i like it :D
SassaFrazz 09-09-2007, 04:51 AM idk, just that moment in the story suited you. LOL
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 04:58 AM LOL hikoik
you didn't say "me" so i didn't let you drive the copter. your loss.
LOL
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thx y'all. LOL
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MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA...
I'm feeling very chaptery today.
Don't you just <3 me?!!?
Chapter 23: Fly away!
The pilots – CyanTara, LightningBrutus, Mizz.V, AthleticAisha, and LittleTinkFairy, were frantically switching on random switches. They had no clue what they were doing whatsoever.
-- 1 minute later --
All 5 pilots had figured out how to start the choppers, and the blades were spinning perfectly.
teddyfruitgirl noticed a spider on her pants.
She screamed and jumped up to make it fall off.
Guestalina had reached the top. The pilots frantically tried to make the choppers fly.
Amazingly, the 5 pilots figured out how to operate the choppers at the same time. They rose from the ground quite rapidly and roughly.
“BOOYA I operated the copter say what!” yelled AthleticAisha.
“Yay I got my wish, I’m flying! :)” screamed LittleTinkFairy.
“Copters Are Go!” yelled Mizz.V
“:D!!” smiled LightningBrutus.
“Haha! I’m doing it! I’m flying!” screamed CyanTara.
“Oh Ya. We’re airborne! chicka-whicka-whack word!” screamed Blossomflower.
SassaFrazz and hikoik gave her a O_o look.
"What? I'm happy!!" retorted Blossomflower.
teddyfruitgirl, who was panicking from the spider, fell and flipped unto her seat. She was now sitting upside down.
Guestalina growled and commanded her minions to attack the flying choppers.
The guests ran towards the choppers, which were about 6 feet from the ground now.
They jumped up and grabbed on to the “legs” of the helicopter.
Helicopter 1 opened their doors.
hikoik kicked a guest off.
Blossomflower on the other side, spit on a guest. The guest screamed and let go.
“Booya..” muttered Blossomflower.
Helicopter 2 opened their doors.
slycooper_lo flicked a guest’s nose hard. The guest screamed and let go.
lil_rockerangel punched a guest in the face. Her eyes criss-crossed and she let go also.
Helicopter 3 opened their doors.
Cool-Dolphin yelled at a guest: “Give me chicken!!!” the guest ignored him and continued to climb up. Cool-Dolphin pushed him off.
CuteTabitha simply pinched a guest’s fingers. The guest let go.
Helicopter 4 and 5 didn’t have to do anything; the pilots, LittleTinkFairy and AthleticAisha, just did a fancy swerve, and the guests simply flew off.
The helicopters flew into the moonlight.
Guestalina roared as the friends began to make their escape.
Oddly, she didn’t turn into another tornado or fly or anything.
She got on her knees, threw a tantrum, and started sobbing.
The friends gave her a O_o look from above.
They were glad to be finally out… and they gently flew far from guestalina.
The pilots were surprised themselves that they could operate a helicopter…
They went up high into the sky, and saw hikoik’s trashed neighborhood and the sewer they were in for like 2 hours…
They kept on flying together for about 10 minutes…
“Whoa… this is so awesome… hikoik don’t you just want to take over my spot and fly somewhere? :D Muahaha” said CyanTara, grinning.
There was no response.
“hikoik? hikoik??” asked CyanTara.
Still no response. CyanTara turned her head and looked back.
Blossomflower had fallen asleep on SassaFrazz, who had fallen asleep on hikoik, who was drooling on the door.
“Aww… how sweet… Soda and hikoik! :D” said CyanTara.
The 2 instantly woke up and yelled “AHH!!!”
Blossomflower flew off SassaFrazz, who sat up straight, and smashed into the window.
“Owww…” groaned Blossomflower.
“Cyan!!!” yelled hikoik and SassaFrazz, looking at each other and groaning.
“What happened….” asked Blossomflower.
“Nothing!” replied SassaFrazz and hikoik in a harsh tone, while CyanTara did it in a giggly tone…
Meanwhile,
coolJamz and dabaseballking had fallen asleep, still cuddling each other, with big smiles on their faces.
And..
iRaccoon was fuming and looking down at the city, wishing for everyone else to magically fall off.
Also..
teddyfruitgirl, who was panicking with the spider, fell asleep upside down on her seat.
All was peaceful for the friends… (except in helicopter 1 where Blossomflower tried to get an explanation, and CyanTara started to spill, which caused hikoik and SassaFrazz to act up… and ya it was chaos in there..)
but it wasn’t over yet... not according to Guestalina, who yelled out:
“THIS ISN’T OVER YET!!!” as she drowned in her hysterical (and mental) tears.
Skyana looked up and gazed at the small flying dots.
She smiled slightly, and let out a sigh of relief.
LOL I will post more…
This chapter was really relaxing too.. well at least the ending was LOL
Muahaha more to come soon..
CyanTara 09-09-2007, 07:32 AM haha
nice chapterr
:D
strange... who was flying the plane as i looked at hikoik and soda?
*plane crashes*
:D
oops
♥lexii
tikisrule 09-09-2007, 02:12 PM i would probably crash the helicopter lol:D:D:D
food52012 09-09-2007, 02:24 PM lol :) i think this is a great story can you but meh and straws in it..... <3 <3 <3 <3 <3.......she wanted meh to tell u flower
PancakesWithSyrup 09-09-2007, 02:32 PM Heh.. great chapter. :)
coolJamz 09-09-2007, 03:52 PM LOL nice chap! this is so funny!
LittleTinkFairy 09-09-2007, 05:54 PM i Can Fly!!!!!!!!!!! Wooohooo!!!!!!!
this story rocks my sox!!
tink is a good minded one... most I know are like you said soda LOL
thx again for anyone who said anything like this :)
SassaFrazz 09-09-2007, 08:49 PM LOL XD Mental tears... ROFL!
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 09:19 PM LOL! rofl thanks guys
and food, straws is already in it... and as you will see in my previous posts, im not accepting any more peeps sorry
coolJamz 09-09-2007, 09:42 PM Next Chapty
food52012 09-09-2007, 11:22 PM yes i know straws told meh to tell yeh
this is great so far!!
AthleticAisha 09-09-2007, 11:37 PM woohooo i didnt crash it? LOL
idk who the peoples are in my helicopter o_o
:D
Blossomflower 09-09-2007, 11:52 PM .. read it again LOL
(I can't remember myself) LOL
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I'll do the next chapter later
first I did a siggie for this person,
and then I'm playing potc atm
later. MUAHAHAHA
Straws 09-10-2007, 12:39 AM im back in forums!!! nice story so far ;) i want to have a liking to tacos pie and straw ;) like how people say chicken and blablabla
hikoik 09-10-2007, 02:22 AM this is the first chapter that made me actually laugh.. LOL
Straws 09-10-2007, 02:38 AM lol meh to :)
Blossomflower 09-10-2007, 02:58 AM LOL hikoik
huzzah it was a success? LOL
(what part made you laugh anyway? rofl)
Yokatherine 09-10-2007, 04:55 AM Rofl funny chapter! :D!!!
tikisrule 09-11-2007, 03:04 AM - wants a new chapter :D -
purpleangelcutie10 09-11-2007, 05:20 AM Flower,
this story.
Is.
So.
Awesome.
Nice chappys. Or Chappies. whatever. :D
Hehe. I punched someone. Cool? :th000000508oc:
Again, Awesome new chapters.
Keep it up! :woohoo:
Straws 09-11-2007, 08:23 PM hey!!! can you write the next chapter? you've done good so far..
CookyHalie 09-11-2007, 09:12 PM :D i love it so much i check back everyday for more this is like an actual story im reading from a book. keep it up!!
dabaseballking 09-11-2007, 10:28 PM Dont rush flowa or she will make terrible mistakes :)
This thing should get turned into a book, published by vmk or vmkf!
runends 09-11-2007, 11:27 PM am i still in it?
SassaFrazz 09-12-2007, 01:09 AM -.- *Sigh*
LOL i still think that The chapter is funny
dabaseballking 09-12-2007, 01:25 PM You were in it, I think you got trampled like poor encyclopedia ROFL.
Straws 09-12-2007, 09:07 PM lol and they forget them didnt they because they went to save them then rushed away??
tikisrule 09-12-2007, 09:12 PM i think so lol :D
Straws 09-13-2007, 01:56 PM iracoon u quit @_@??
Blossomflower 09-14-2007, 02:39 AM HEYYY y'all im back
Sorry i've been gone for a few days, I was almost done with a chapter, then i had to go to bed, then i kinda got busy with.... life :l
and now after a FUN day, flowa has returned!!
me
very
good
mood
MUAHAHAHA
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Here’s a little guide to help y’all:
Helicopter 1:
CyanTara - Pilot
SoccerRach - Passenger
Blossomflower - Backseat
SassaFrazz - Backseat
hikoik - Backseat
Helicopter 2:
LightningBrutus - Pilot
tiger_girl_me - Passenger
lil_rockerangel - Backseat
slycooper_lo - Backseat
Helicopter 3:
Mizz.V - Pilot
Straws - Passenger
iRaccoon - Backseat
CuteTabitha - Backseat
Cool-Dolphin - Backseat
Helicopter 4:
AthleticAisha - Pilot
walnutfudge - Passenger
Kitri - Backseat
princesgirl - Backseat
Helicopter 5:
LittleTinkFairy - Pilot
Yokatherine - Passenger
dabaseballking - Backseat
coolJamz - Backseat
Teddyfruitgirl - Backseat
That way, you know which helicopter you are in, who’s with you, and where you’re sitting!
LOL
Chapter 24: At last!
The friends were making their long-waited getaway.
AthleticAisha, being the “leader” of the 5 helicopters, was in the front, and leaded the others where to go.
AthleticAisha planned to keep going until she saw a town with city lights and moving cars.
-- 19 minutes later --
Every friend had fallen asleep, except for the pilots, who were getting jealous of the sleepers…
Things were very quiet, and rather dull.
(except for the snoring, which wasn’t quiet or dull, but rather annoying…)
-- 38 minutes later --
It was now 4:40 in the morning, and the pilots were exhausted after their long adventure.
AthleticAisha’s head started to droop… but she suddenly picked it up when she noticed city lights ahead and a few small moving items. Her eyes got big when she realized that they had reached a city.
She quickly put her earphone/walkie-talkie things, and said “Guys, can you hear me? Come in!”
Every pilot’s earphone thingy started to make distinct noises of a speaking person.
Each pilot became curious, and put on their earphone things. The pilots broke out of their sluggish trance, and suddenly perked up.
“Sup?” asked Mizz.V, curious at what AthleticAisha was gawking about.
“Yep?” replied LittleTinkFairy, brushing her bangs away from her eyes.
“What?” said LightningBrutus in a slightly harsh tone.
“Huh..?” asked CyanTara, who sounded drowsy and under a spell.
“There’s civilization ahead, at 1:00!” yelled AthleticAisha, slightly turning and going towards the city, daydreaming about food and a cozy bed.
“Omg YAY!” yelled LittleTinkFairy.
“At last!!” squealed LightningBrutus in delight.
“Success!” said a grinning Mizz.V.
“.. what? 1:00? But it’s 4:42..?” asked a bewildered CyanTara, who wiped away the drool from her face.
AthleticAisha, who was too lazy to explain, retorted “Ugh, never mind just follow me. Tell everyone there! Over and out.”
The pilots took off their thingies and tossed them in the side.
“Wakey, wakey, eggs and bacey!!” yelled CyanTara to her group.
“Guys, great news!” screamed Mizz.V.
“People wake up!!” yelled LightningBrutus.
“Guys, wake up I have something important to tell you!” bellowed LittleTinkFairy.
“Hey y’all, wake up!!” boomed AthleticAisha.
Each of the friends awakened with a shock…
The pilots announced their good news, and they were extremely excited to tell it, after more than an hour of piloting…
There was a 5 second silence… filled with shocked faces.
The friends let out faces with faces of delight, and they opened their mouth as big as this: :thahggeek27fz:
They started jumping (actually more like bouncing... a helicopter isn't big enough) and celebrating…
So the pilots followed AthleticAisha in her flashing helicopter.
As the seconds ticked away, the city lights were getting brighter and bigger.
- 3 minutes later -
The helicopters were very close to the city, and AthleticAisha circled around, trying to find a decent spot to land in.
There was a big open space at the park, so she started to land there…
She landed with a very loud THUD.
The rest of the pilots did worse, and the passengers inside bounced.
Helicopter 5 and 1 tipped over...
Screams could be heard.
hikoik was smashed by SassaFrazz and Blossomflower.
“UGGH guys get off of me!!!” yelled hikoik.
“Don’t you think I’m trying?!” screamed SassaFrazz in his ear.
“Would y’all shut up!? As if my ears aren’t in enough discomfort already! They’re still not popping!” screamed Blossomflower.
teddyfruitgirl was smashed by coolJamz and dabaseballking…
She groaned and yelled “Off please…”
coolJamz and dabaseballking were busy asking each other if they were ok.
teddyfruitgirl rolled her eyes…
- 2 minutes later -
Blossomflower and dabaseballking had opened the door above them and climbed out.
SassaFrazz and coolJamz followed…
Nobody helped SassaFrazz, but dabaseballking pulled coolJamz out.
teddyfruitgirl and hikoik were stuck at the bottom…
- 30 seconds later -
The 2 had climbed out, and the friends were finally ready to unwind.
The streets didn’t have many cars, and the friends just jaywalked… actually, more like jayran… they were starving and rushed to find the nearest open restaurant.
“hikoik, we already told you! McDonald’s is not open 24 hours!!” yelled CyanTara to hikoik…
LOL
OK that’s enough.
Tbc.
PancakesWithSyrup 09-14-2007, 12:25 PM :D Great Chapter. :) Funny, too. :Doom-a-soar.
Straws 09-14-2007, 11:29 PM lol i like it...
DONT MAKE IT END!!!!!!! :)
tikisrule 09-14-2007, 11:34 PM if that was real i would probably be grumpy bc im grumpy when im
tired and in the morning :D
CookyHalie 09-14-2007, 11:35 PM I want to read what they eat!
SassaFrazz 09-15-2007, 12:34 AM yay. funny chapter!!!!! my friend likes it. XD
purpleangelcutie10 09-15-2007, 02:59 AM -.-
Anyways.
Good chappy flower!
Keep it up! :D
Yokatherine 09-15-2007, 03:55 AM Rofl! funny chapter flower!
Blossomflower 09-15-2007, 06:14 AM LOL :D thx y'all
and straws...
the ending is... sweet and LONG. LOL
and in one of the earlier chapters, didn't i make a character say something like "this is the last straw?"
and yay light, I had totally made you do what you would do! rofl
Soda.. who's this friend of yours? Is she a vmk player? Cause if not... LOL that would be kinda strange
oh well yay i attract non-vmkers too! LOL
Friend of soda, if you're reading this right now... hi! ty for liking my story. rofl
and cookyhalie... they haven't gone to the restaurant yet...
I type down almost everything they do so dont worry LOL
CyanTara 09-15-2007, 01:57 PM LOL
nice chapterr flowaa
tikisrule 09-15-2007, 01:57 PM lol i came to read this this morning and i was reading about the food and it made me hungry - goes to get breakfast -
runends 09-15-2007, 03:47 PM im not in the story it ok for me and good story flower keeep going
Blossomflower 09-15-2007, 06:33 PM Roy_The_Boy, aka runends
you will return
nobody gets out of the story permanently unless you made me mad or somethin'
To Y'all:
Once again... DON'T KEEP ASKING WHERE YOU WENT, OR WHY DID YOU GO AWAY, OR IF YOU'LL EVER COME BACK
CAUSE NOBODY DISAPPEARS FOREVER UNLESS YOU MADE ME MAD BY BUGGING ME A WHOLE LOT...
and asking doesn't really have a point cause I won't tell what's gonna happen to you... :D
and LOL straws, he didn't get ran over... encyclopedia got ran over... LOL
are you sure I didn't use "this is the last straw?" OK i have a perfect spot for it at the end of the story... MUAHAHAHA
Chapter 25: Ordering…
The friends jogged down the street, no longer using the lighter; for it was bright… the town was filled with city lights.
It was now 4:57, and the friends couldn’t last much longer…
A while later, they finally found a restaurant that was still open.
“At last!!” screamed walnutfudge.
“Hallelujah!” yelled Blossomflower.
“Oh yeah!” blurted out Straws.
“Ugh… I’m so hungry I’ll eat carbs if I have to!” screamed princesgirl.
Kitri remained quiet, but smiled for the first time in a few hours.
The friends ran towards the restaurant, screaming in joy. They ran under a neon sign that read “Domino’s Pizza Hut” and entered.
The friends shoved each other to the counter to order.
SassaFrazz had gotten there first.
“Hi, welcome to Domino’s pizza hut. What would --“ asked a young teenage boy at the counter, when he was cut off.
“Give us 8 large pizzas!!” screamed SassaFrazz, panting and leaning on the table, with her hair sticking up.
The boy at the counter seemed shaken, and started to push buttons on the cash register as fast as he could.
“Will that be--“ asked the boy as he got cut off again.
hikoik pushed SassaFrazz out of the way, and bellowed “10 bottles of rootbeer!!” The poor boy at the counter bit his lip and thoughts like “Ahh I hope these people with issues leave soon!” flashed through his mind.
He rapidly pushed the buttons.
“Is that --“ asked the boy, and once again, he hardly even finished his sentence, when tiger_girl_me grabbed hikoik’s shirt and pulled him out of the way.
“Give us 6 boxes of cinnamon sticks!!!” screamed a distraught tiger_girl_me at the poor boy’s face.
He started to break out drops of sweat and quickly pushed the buttons, almost smashing them in the process.
“A-are you --“ asked the nervous boy as he got cut off AGAIN.
lil_rockerangel shoved tiger_girl_me so hard, that tiger_girl_me crashed into a “2 for 1 deal!” sign.
“5 boxes of cheese sticks!!” yelled lil_rockerangel, her clothes tattered and torn.
The disorientated boy pushed the buttons once more.
“I--“ said the boy, but he stopped as he figured out that he would be cut off again anyway.
There was a 3 second pause.
The boy looked around, and all the friends were just panting, groaning, and some had fallen asleep at the booths.
He thought they were finally done ordering, so he knew it would be safe to ask if they would order any more, even though he knew they wouldn’t.
He looked down to his cash register and gave out a sigh of relief. He asked “Will that be a--“ when he got cut off again…
LightningBrutus had picked up lil_rockerangel and tossed her to the side.
“Put every topping ever known to man on the pizzas!!!” screamed a panting LightningBrutus, like a wild ape.
The boy expected that it would be over, and he was kind of stunned that LightningBrutus had come out of nowhere and yelled at his face.
The boy pushed more buttons again, panting in fear.
“And get me a chicken!!!” screamed Cool-Dolphin.
“Right… chicken, gotcha!” whispered the fretful boy as he started to push more buttons.
“Ok the grand total is 84.23.” said the boy, worried what the friends’ reactions might be.
Every friend, including the ones that were asleep, took out plenty of dollar bills and shoved each other to the counter, screaming, and waving the money in the air.
The owner of the pizzeria had gotten annoyed by all the yelling, and when he heard the screaming, he stuck his little bewildered face out the door of his office, and gazed at the counter.
His eyes grew big as he saw every friend, waving money in the air, and his pupils turned into dollar bill signs.
He let out a devilish smile and a giggle as he slowly pulled his head back in.
Every friend had given their money, and the total was of their money combined was 84.22.
The friends were short one cent.
Each friend looked around to everyone else, as they pulled out their empty pockets.
About 2 minute had passed, and nobody found any more money.
The boy at the counter was about to cancel their order, and bit his lip as he was about to do it, afraid of what the reaction of the friends might be…
Just as he was about to hit the button to get their cancel erased, Yokatherine saw a little bowl of tips and it only had 1 penny in it.
She quickly grabbed the coin and gave it to the boy.
“Ok, your order will be ready in a moment.” replied the boy, relieved that they were finally done ordering…
“YAYYYY!!!!!!!” screamed the friends, and they had a little mini party.
The boy got even more bewildered, and thought “Those freaky people are partying like they have never tasted pizza in their lives… @_@” and moved as far away from them as possible.
The friends put 3 long tables together. One side next to the window were booth chairs, and the other side facing the window were just regular chairs.
They sat down and started chattering.
At the window next to the friends, Skyana passed by, and smiled.
Nobody noticed her.
LOL this chapter made me laugh…
MUAHAHAH more to come soon.
tikisrule 09-15-2007, 09:46 PM i bet hikoik would eat all the pizza :D
Blossomflower 09-15-2007, 09:48 PM LOL yep he would
He'd eat it all in one bite rofl
Then soda would smack him LOL
"hikoiK!" rofl...
Straws 09-15-2007, 10:28 PM lol that was funny!! and no u didnt use thats the last straws but i want people making fun of meh name as weird as that sound...
tikisrule 09-15-2007, 10:42 PM woo another chapter :D - sorry im bored - :D:D:D
SassaFrazz 09-15-2007, 10:44 PM LOL PIZZAS. ew..... hikoik ordered rootbeers. I HATE ROOTBEER. i like the normal sodas.... ANYWAY, FUNNY CHAPTER!!! XD
Blossomflower 09-15-2007, 10:45 PM you.. you you dont like rootbeer?!?! - cries - i like rootbeer.
Fine you LEARN to love rootbeers. you dont have anymore money, you cant buy orange soda. :P
LOL
SassaFrazz 09-15-2007, 10:47 PM eh..what you talking about? I GOT A LOT MON-(saves herself from trouble) i- i mean... I LOVE THE CHAPTER FLOWER! XD
Blossomflower 09-15-2007, 10:48 PM LOL rofl
luckily Yo saw that penny, EH? LOL
Straws 09-16-2007, 12:09 AM :) i like my place in the story :D
purpleangelcutie10 09-16-2007, 01:15 AM Cheese sticks? Man, my friend loves cheese...Wonder what'd she do with five boxes of those cheese sticks....
Anyways.
NICE CHAPTER FLOWER!
Soda you don't like rootbeer? I like rootbeer. And yes that's true hikoik would probably eat all the pizza :P
tikisrule 09-16-2007, 01:17 AM hehe dont give lighty rootbeer:D:D:D:D
Straws 09-16-2007, 01:32 AM uh umm no ty ill stick with soda :D
purpleangelcutie10 09-16-2007, 01:34 AM rofl light.
- gives rootbeer to light just to experiment? -
Blossomflower 09-16-2007, 02:13 AM Chapter 26: A grand feast!
About 2 minutes later, everything was ready, and the poor boy ran as fast as he could to serve the friends. The friends felt like every second was an hour, and 2 minutes was a very long time for them… they started to get really angry.
The teenage boy made sure that the chefs would cook as fast as possible… he shuddered to think what the friends would do if the food took long.
Anyway, the boy placed one box of pizzas. The moment he removed his hand, the friends nearest to that pizza, CuteTabitha, Cool-Dolphin, Mizz.V, LittleTinkFairy, and SoccerRach, suddenly jumped up and attacked the pizza like dogs.
The boy trembled at the sight, and moved away as fast as he could…
- 1 and a half minute later -
The boy was done placing pizzas (and then moving away as fast as he could… for he feared that his hand was going to get eaten too.)
He looked back at the friends. They were all smiling and had faces of relief… like “Ohhh!! Finally.. food!! Ahh…” faces.
They were all silent, and all you could hear was “Hmm! Yummy! - gulp - - chew - - swallow -“
Pieces of pizza were flying everywhere.
CuteTabitha was handling her pizza femininely, but ate it like lightning.
Cool-Dolphin ate his pizza with a “Sigh… CHEESE..” face.
Mizz.V ate hers at a regular speed.
LittleTinkFairy folded hers back and ate it from the middle.
Blossomflower was eating a trail of cheese that stretched about 2 and a half feet from her mouth to the pizza.
SoccerRach ate the pizza in about 10 bites, and then swallowed it.
iRaccoon, although angry that they got away, was very delighted to enjoy pizza, and he grabbed a piece of Canadian bacon that had fallen off his pizza, and threw it in his mouth.
Straws ate in quite a messy way, and lots of cheese was hanging out of her mouth. She grabbed a straw and drank her rootbeer.
hikoik practically swallowed his pizzas whole, and ate faster than anyone else.
tiger_girl_me folded hers up into a burrito-style roll, and finished the pizza off in 3 bites.
lil_rockerangel stuffed the entire slice into her mouth, and chewed loudly.
LightningBrutus took big bites, and then chewed with a heavenly look on her face.
Yokatherine put her leg up like Captain Jack Sparrow, and chewed loudly.
Kitri ate quietly and politely, but a big smile returned to her face.
princesgirl ate rapidly, and didn’t seem to mind that she was eating carbs.
slycooper_lo ate just like his brother, although more slow.
AthleticAisha ate like a dog, and her face was extremely greasy.
walnutfudge choked a bit… she ate a bit too quick.
CyanTara noisily chewed, with her mouth open.
teddyfruitgirl ate just like her 2 brothers… except MORE slow.
dabaseballking and coolJamz were feeding each other pizza…
SassaFrazz had really loud gulps as she scarfed down her pizzas. Due to the fact that she was so hungry, she didn’t notice that she took a sip from rootbeer, the ONLY soda that she hates. She spat it out and yelled “hikoik, you bought rootbeer, and I hate rootbeer!!”
“So…? You didn’t say anything when I ordered it…” replied hikoik, turning his head to SassaFrazz, as he slurped up a long trail of cheese.
“Cause I was too hungry to pay attention! Now buy me some Sunkist!!” retorted SassaFrazz.
“Dude… I don’t have any money. We were even short one cent! And besides, if I did have money, I wouldn’t buy you any Sunkist anyway…” replied hikoik, tossing a pepperoni disc into his mouth.
SassaFrazz remained silent, and she saw an unopened bottle of rootbeer.
walnutfudge was about to grab it. SassaFrazz yelled out “NO!!!!” in slow motion. (Once again.. you can imagine it in fast motion. I just like slow motion!)
She went for it as fast as she could… and her greasy hand was first on the bottle.
“VICTORY IS MIINEEE!!!” yelled SassaFrazz, as walnutfudge looked at her like she was some kind of freak.
She quickly grabbed the bottle and went back to the counter. The boy saw her and hid behind a chair.
SassaFrazz rang the bell rapidly. The boss stuck out his head and gave the boy a harsh look. He had no choice but to show himself…
He stood up, putting on a fake smile, and approached the counter as he nervously fixed his tie. “Who knows what’s gonna happen now…” thought the boy.
SassaFrazz tossed him the bottle of rootbeer and she screamed at his face: “I WANT SUNKIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” it was so loud, the ground practically rumbled, the boy’s hair blew away, and it stood on end, and his tie came off. It was strangely similar to how Guestalina yells.
Fixing his glasses, which now had a crack, he nervously took the rootbeer back, and grabbed a Sunkist. He gave it to SassaFrazz, who now had a really big smile on her face. She ran back as quick as possible.
She sat down and opened up her favorite orange soda, and clumsily poured it in her cup, spilling a few drops.
She drank from it and 3 loud gulps could be heard. The soda was all gone.
She threw the cup behind her, almost hitting the boy at the counter. Fortunately, he ducked.
SassaFrazz grabbed the Sunkist bottle and drank from it directly.
“This is MINE, MY SODA!!!!!!!” screamed SassaFrazz, wiping her mouth with her sleeve. The friends ignored her, as they were lost in their own cheesy world.
The boy was flabbergasted to see how messy the friends ate. He thought her little baby sister was the messiest person in the world… but when he saw the friends, it was like a whole new level of appalling.
The boss noticed the cheese sticks and the cinnamon sticks still sitting at a table.
“Hey, why aren’t you serving their sticks?!” boomed the boss.
“I don’t want to go near them while they’re eating. They’re going to eat me alive! Alive, boss, ALIVE!!!” screamed the boy, crying at the boss’s feet.
The boss rolled his eyes and went back in his office. The boy glanced over at the friends, who were almost done.
37 seconds later, the friends were done, and they leaned back in their chair, sighing and burping loudly. They were as full as ever, and had really big stomachs… and hikoik was the fullest one of all, for he ate more pizza than anyone else…
They finished 8 pizzas in record time.
The boy was relived to see that the “beasts” had calmed down, so he grabbed all 11 boxes filled with sticks and walked over to the table slowly.
Walking zig-zaggy as he tried to prevent the boxes from tipping, he made it to the table, and put down the boxes. This time the friends didn’t attack the boxes, for they weren’t as hungry as they were before.
When the boy left, and let out a relived sigh, they slowly opened the boxes, and chewed once more… this time slowly and politely.
They were now discussing about their adventure, and their focus was no longer limited on just food.
LOL this chapter was… revolting rofl
tbc… and I just realized.. the story is almost over! :(
But it’ll take a while…. :) LOL
tbc!! MUAHAHAHA
LittleTinkFairy 09-16-2007, 04:12 AM the awesomeness just keeps coming :D
Blossomflower 09-16-2007, 04:33 AM hehe ty y'all...
and i made hikoik eat the most. xD
hikoik 09-16-2007, 05:08 AM well... that makes it realistic then LOL
btw soda, rootbeer is awesome o_o
Straws 09-16-2007, 02:27 PM I hate roootbeer!!!!! rawr!!!! also no u didnt use the straws line...
anyway make the guest return come on its all getting gooy love like now where is the action!!!!
tikisrule 09-16-2007, 03:00 PM straws.. its flowers story... she can do what ever she wants to do :D
purpleangelcutie10 09-16-2007, 05:22 PM .....
Nice chapter flowa! Except for the fact that im practically a pig in this part of the story.... :I oh well.
And soda and straws, rootbeer rox. XD
coolJamz 09-16-2007, 08:47 PM Rotfl!!
well, at least im not a slob, and base feeds me the pizza! :D
ROTFL
Blossomflower 09-17-2007, 02:26 AM LOL thx? LOL
btw, sorry y'all for turning you into slobs. LOL
I can't write another chapter atm, I'm not using my computer... it's a long story..
I think I can though by tonight.. :D
and by that time, there'll be a little excitement...
MUAHAHAHAHA
I have no idea how long this story will go up to LOL
btw, how in the world do you pronounce da word pwns??? NOBODY here ever says that, they only say "owns.." so HUH? Pawns? Pones? Punes? rofl
hikoik 09-17-2007, 02:36 AM i say it like pones
.-.
Blossomflower 09-17-2007, 02:41 AM oK then.
ON TOPIC:
I think I will type another chapter :D
IDK if i can yet. :l
But I can promise you tomorrow there WILL be a chapter. :D
SassaFrazz 09-17-2007, 03:41 AM yay. another chapter!
Blossomflower 09-17-2007, 03:46 AM :D
this chapter is gonna include more action this time...
Now that the friends are done eating :l
this story just gets cheesier and cheesier and at the end, lots of twists, and an explanation for everything strange... but still cheesy! :D
Hmm.. should I add danny phantom?
But everyone hates him. oh well nvm then. LOL
SassaFrazz 09-17-2007, 03:52 AM LOL but its your story, you're the almighty writer... XD
Blossomflower 09-17-2007, 04:06 AM LOL
well this story takes place OUTSIDE of VMK... so it's weirder...
and even if it was in VMK, danny phantom is a different kind of cartoon.. not the 3-D type... LOL
byes Yo :D
and if he was in the story, I'm worried that some Danny Phantom haters would say "Omg this story is lame i hate him"
ARGGGH i hate it when people say those words LOL
I'm letting KH in the story cause the characters aren't flat like danny is... LOL
I wish danny was 3-D style... :(
Yokatherine 09-17-2007, 04:28 AM yeah i know what you mean flower
AwesomeM 09-17-2007, 06:32 AM I've been reading all of it and so far it's.. totally.. AWESOME!!!! More more more!!
P.S.: Bring Back Guestalina, Please with -enter what you like- with a cherry on top!!
Blossomflower 09-17-2007, 06:35 AM Yaaaaa of course she will come back but FOR NOW, the kids have escaped her and enjoyed a happy meal LOL
and tyvm... LOL
I will make another one tonight or tomorrow. OK it's gonna be tomorrow... I just glanced at my clock and it's.. late LOL
- enters what i like - a strawberry pie.
LOL
you don't know me... im your worst nightmare BWAHAHAHA .-.
My goodness hikoik.. I just got that!
I just understood why you said that.... @_@ :Embar:
I always thought you were just bored and you randomly posted that... LOL
After seeing my last post.. i'm like "OH!!!"
rofl I'm so slow. :Tongue::Embar:
tikisrule 09-17-2007, 03:14 PM - wants another chapter :D -
LittleTinkFairy 09-17-2007, 11:32 PM i want more!!! - but in no way, shape, or form am i pressuring flower to write ;) -
Straws 09-17-2007, 11:46 PM please more plz :)
purpleangelcutie10 09-18-2007, 04:41 AM I used to watch Danny Phantom in the morning until they stopped showing it....I mean they have like some new shows and all I THINK but they don't show it often anymore....Idk...I'm guessing.
And that WOULD be kinda weird if we were like walking down the street or whatever and then Danny Phantom comes out of nowhere and is all "GET OUT OF THE WAY THERE'S A GHOST COMING! - shoots his little ghost ray - "
....Wow i just thought about that.....WEIRD....Rofl!
Yokatherine 09-18-2007, 05:23 AM lol yeah that would be pretty weird lol :D
tikisrule 09-18-2007, 11:48 AM that would be interesting
PancakesWithSyrup 09-18-2007, 12:11 PM Nice new chapters! :) I cant wait to read the rest. :D
That would be..... interesting.
Giant Webkinz should jump out of nowhere and be all happy and then transform into Guestalina and the Guests and capture the friends. :Pm
LittleTinkFairy 09-19-2007, 08:27 PM this is such a great story!!
Yokatherine 09-19-2007, 11:34 PM lol tink, i like ye story so far flower!!!!!! lol
purpleangelcutie10 09-20-2007, 02:09 AM YOUR STORY IS AWESOME...I probably already said that... did i? oh well. I'm sayin it again. YOUR STORY IS AWESOME.
CookyHalie 09-20-2007, 03:07 AM Nice story it's so fun to read cause i can relate to it:D
purpleangelcutie10 09-20-2007, 05:04 AM really? ...relating to a story where an evil person named guestalina who has the ability to turn into a tornado, zap people with rays, comes after you. Grey looking minions help her. Then when the peoples finally escape they go to Dominos. Wow. Kinda a weird story to relate to...lol
CookyHalie 09-21-2007, 01:02 AM really? ...relating to a story where an evil person named guestalina who has the ability to turn into a tornado, zap people with rays, comes after you. Grey looking minions help her. Then when the peoples finally escape they go to Dominos. Wow. Kinda a weird story to relate to...lol
i mean by how we eat our food and i mean her writing style:D
Blossomflower 09-22-2007, 03:09 AM LOL ROFL
sorry if I worried y'all with the long period that i have been missing.. I'm just really busy with... life once again LOL
thx to y'all who commented :D!
And LOL cooky... you eat like that? LOL!!!
LOL raccoon.. i'm back
Expect me to be offline A LOT, i'm getting busy...
don't get worried. LOL
of course, the story WILL continue, but I'll only be able to type it down on weekends.
I won't be able to make another chapter today though.. maybe tomorrow :l
Please be patient with me LOL
LittleTinkFairy 09-22-2007, 03:21 AM okey dokey :)
CookyHalie 09-23-2007, 03:47 AM I wish this story wasn't such a cliff hanger:D
I only eat like that when i haven't eaten in forever...
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 03:48 AM AWW but that's the best part! :D
And i'll make it soon... SOON
(don't rush me please. :D)
CookyHalie 09-23-2007, 03:50 AM true:D how many more chapters do you think are left? i remember you thought it would go on to 50!:)
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 04:10 AM I will...
type the next chapter soon... and it looks like there's nothing left to reply to :D
(but i still need to do 1 more thing.)
SassaFrazz 09-23-2007, 04:29 AM yay. chapter! :D
CookyHalie 09-23-2007, 04:35 AM im gonna wait for the next chapter then i can go to bed:D
I think i can picture what's gonna happen next...
skipper 09-23-2007, 11:51 AM LOL i love this story, its awesome lol
TerranceLover1 09-23-2007, 12:03 PM cool story..............thats pretty scary?
Straws 09-23-2007, 03:32 PM i cant wait - gets poped corn and sugared water (soda) ROFL
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 05:44 PM LOLZ thanks terrance (cute cat btw)
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 09:15 PM Ok i'm ready to type the next chapter
skipper 09-23-2007, 10:29 PM awesome story,
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 10:42 PM LOL
my chapter is almost done
halfway through
HANG ON....
KMSakura 09-23-2007, 10:57 PM Can I be in da story?... :l
It's awesome lol
tikisrule 09-23-2007, 10:59 PM she is not letting anymore ppl in story
Blossomflower 09-23-2007, 11:54 PM It’s what you have all been waiting for… chapter 27!!! (Duhn Duhn!!! Duhn Duhn Duhn Duhn Duhn Duhn Duhn Duhn… Hallelujah! Hallelujah!)
Chapter 27: Discussing!
Each friend was chewing on a stick, sighing contently.
“Man that was some adventure we had…” said LittleTinkFairy.
“I know… I’m bushed.” replied lil_rockerangel, sighing and leaning back on her chair.
“This has been one crazy day filled with a million questions..” mumbled LightningBrutus, sighing.
“Like for one thing, WHY IN THE WORLD DID GUESTALINA CALLED ME SWEETHEART?!” screamed hikoik.
“Yeah! That was really strange…” replied SassaFrazz, slowly chewing on her cheese stick, and slightly giggling.
“Hehehe she wants to kill you, but yet she loves you! How weird is that…” replied Blossomflower, trying to stifle her thunderous laughter inside of her.
“I know! I’m kinda freaked out now..” whimpered hikoik, biting nervously on his cinnamon stick.
“And have you noticed that she’s only chasing US? I mean she keeps saying ‘Roar I will crush the vmk players who keep mocking us guests whee blah blah’ but she’s not going after anyone else.. only US! What’s up with that?” blurted CyanTara, swinging her cheese stick around wildly as she uses violent hand gestures during her talking.
“Yeah! Like there are millions of other vmk players. Why is she only doing this to us??” screamed AthleticAisha.
“Well nobody knows… but I bet you anything she’s chasing other people at the moment.” said slycooper_lo, quietly making his brother’s hair pointy and sticking straws unto them. Luckily, hikoik was too busy listening and eating his cinnamon stick.
- Meanwhile at guestalina -
“AGRRGH HOW THIS COULD HAPPEN TO ME - sob - I’M THE ALL POWERFUL GUESTALINA WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I LET THE VERMIN ESCAPE WAAGGGH I’M A FAILURE A BIG FAT FAILURE!!! I MUST FIND THOSE FRIENDS AND SMASH THEM…!!!” screamed guestalina while she was rolling around on the floor, her thumb in her mouth.
“ARGGH WHEN IS THAT RACCOON PEST GOING TO TELL ME THE WHEREABOUTS?!?!?!” she added, her eyes turning redder than ever.
- back to the friends -
“Yeah, she’s probably torturing some other poor kids…” said Kitri, totally being ungirly. princesgirl was shocked at the new remarkable normal way she talked.
“Let’s just hope so…” commented tiger_girl_me.
“Yeah.. and OH have you guys EVER noticed how whenever it’s a good time for her to start flying or turning into tornados or whatever, she doesn’t??” asked teddyfruitgirl, helping slycooper_lo put straws on their brother’s head.
“Yeah! I was totally wondering that too!” replied walnutfudge, her eyes getting big.
“Same here! But did you hear back in the sewer or somewhere, she’s like ‘Muahaha I have regained power’ and stuff…” said SoccerRach, finishing her cinnamon stick and grabbing another one.
“Yeah! I know! It’s like she runs out of energy or something and she can’t go all powerful and stuff!” blurted out Straws.
“Omg I know… at first she’s all powerful and stuff and won’t stop being a tornado and then she zaps us and me.. (ow) and now she’s like hardly doing it anymore!” said dabaseballking.
“Yeah and when we were all flying in the helicopters, she didn’t even bother to fly up and get us!” yelled Mizz.V.
“And did you notice that when she was knocked out cold, her guest minions were very weak?” asked coolJamz.
“Yeah! It was very easy to get them and it took them a long time to pull the pitchforks out!!” replied CuteTabitha.
“Ye have very good points! She probably runs out of energy or something, and she can’t hurt us no more.. and only gets it back over time..” added Yokatherine.
iRaccoon stayed quiet, and feared that they were beginning to figure it all out.
“Well, with her like this… we could easily defeat her… and then we’ll celebrate by eating chicken!!” yelled Cool-Dolphin.
“I don’t think so, loser. She has super strength most of the time, and I can’t afford to get bruised anymore! I’m too pretty! Gahh!” replied princesgirl.
“princesgirl has a point. The only time when she didn’t have any super strength was when she fainted… and her minions didn’t have strength either.” added LittleTinkFairy.
“And I don’t think another crazy accident from the ceiling is going to happen again…” continued SassaFrazz, burping loudly.
“Well this is gonna be difficult to defeat her…” sighed teddyfruitgirl, putting her half-eaten cheese stick down.
“Hey anyone wonder where Roy_The_Boy and encyclopedia went?” asked CyanTara.
“Oh yeah I forgot about those 2! What do you think happened to them?” replied lil_rockerangel, stealing teddyfruitgirl’s half-eaten cheese stick.
“Guestalina probably got to them!” said coolJamz.
“Omg.. she probably smashed them or something!” added LightningBrutus.
“We’ll never know unless we save them…” added AthleticAisha.
“Relax, they just probably got up and ran away.” replied walnutfudge.
“Probably… I guess we’ll just leave them alone then… I mean we’ll probably never see them again. They must be long gone by now..” replied AthleticAisha.
“Hey… have you guys ever wondered how Guestalina got to us in the sewer? I mean she was going the opposite way.. and suddenly, she just reappeared!” said tiger_girl_me, watching lil_rockerangel eating teddyfruitgirl’s cheese stick with disgust.
iRaccoon’s eyes got big, and he slowly slid down his seat, trying to hide his face.
“Yeah! That was kind of strange… maybe someone here told her where we were going! A double agent!” yelled slycooper_lo, smiling at his straw head creation.
“Don’t be ridiculous shark… who would want to kill themselves by telling Guestalina where they are?” replied hikoik, not noticing what was going on with his hair.
“Yeah you’re probably right.” replied slycooper_lo, giggling with his sister at hikoik’s hair.
iRaccoon was relieved.
“Ya know.. anyone EVER wondered where those creepy people got the power to do those impossible things??? I mean… like how could a vmk person grow big and turn into a tornado, then go out of our computer.. and be a real person that can still turn into a tornado and throw lightning bolts??” asked dabaseballking, smiling at coolJamz.
“I dunno… I always thought that this just might be a dream.” said Cool-Dolphin, smiling stupidly.
dabaseballking quickly pinched Cool-Dolphin’s arm.
“Ow!” yelled Cool-Dolphin.
“Do you believe it’s a dream now?” asked dabaseballking.
Cool-Dolphin didn’t reply, and looked at his arm.
“Well we’ll never know how guestalina did those crazy stuffs… @_@.” said Mizz.V.
“Well we should probably go to bed now and deal with this tomorrow.. Guestalina is miles away. Besides, all these unanswered questions are making me more sleepier.” said SoccerRach, with a sigh of relief.
The friends let out remarks of agreement, and were getting ready to stand up…
“Wait, where the heck are we gonna sleep?” asked SassaFrazz.
“In the helicopters I guess…” replied Blossomflower.
“What?! WE’RE GONNA BE CRAMMED BACK THERE!” yelled hikoik, still not noticing the straws on his head.
“Well where else are we gonna sleep?!” retorted Blossomflower.
hikoik had no response.
Just when the friends had parted with the chairs, the door opened.
The friends turned their head and gasped…
MUAHAHA
Tbc. :) hehe
.:Leaving y’all hanging!:.
skipper 09-23-2007, 11:57 PM finally LOL awesome chap
coolJamz 09-24-2007, 12:01 AM .-. another please
Blossomflower 09-24-2007, 12:05 AM Later. LOL
I'll do it tonight if i feel like it
AthleticAisha 09-24-2007, 12:07 AM hmm
i think i know who it is.. :)
buuut i like this chappy
but its a lot of talking hehe
Straws 09-24-2007, 12:11 AM whats!!!!!! omg omg omg!!!! (can u use a straw punch line a again) i just dropped my popped corn!! this is thriller :P
Blossomflower 09-24-2007, 12:13 AM Uh no it isn't. NOBODY WILL EVER KNOW. MUAHAHA.
LOL
(who's EKB? LOL)
rofl straws...
You're now on hikoik's head. hooray? ROFL
(btw, i added that without even thinking of you.. i just realized at the end.. "oh lol.. straws is gonna be so happy LOL")
Straws 09-24-2007, 12:15 AM im sad and happy :)
sad - dropped popped corn and sugared soda
Happy - straws in story (wants more :)
Blossomflower 09-24-2007, 12:47 AM [?]
Anyway....
Next chappy will be either tonight or tomorrow or next week. idk.
coolJamz 09-24-2007, 12:52 AM ToNiGhT!!!!!!!!
Straws 09-24-2007, 01:13 AM tonight would be better or even tommorow not next week....
Grandma 09-24-2007, 01:56 AM This morning I created a thread about the forum rules and how I expect everyone to start following them. I get back on and have to delete a lot of spam posts in this thread. Please follow this link and read what I wrote before posting in this thread again. If you all want to have discussions please use pms instead of disrupting the story line of this thread. Comments about the story are allowed but that is it.
http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=128588
purpleangelcutie10 09-24-2007, 02:49 AM Nice chappy flower!
Keep it up!
SassaFrazz 09-24-2007, 03:29 AM yay nice chapter! :D
Shakani 09-24-2007, 03:51 AM Oh gosh, Blossom. I died laughing. my ghost had to finish reading the story to me. XD
Blossomflower 09-24-2007, 04:07 AM LOL!!
interesting to know, shakani.. rofl
and call meh flower. rofl
LOL what made you laugh?
thx rocker 'n soda
:P
purpleangelcutie10 09-24-2007, 05:37 AM Oh, 1 more thing, WHY DO YOU MAKE ME SUCH A PIG IN THIS STORY?!?!?!?
... - after a moments silence -
Oh fine. I'll be a pig. But i seriously wouldn't take another person's cheese stick and start eating it, unless they were part of my family. like my brother or something.
Anyways, im going to say again: Yay, nice chappy flower! (except for the fact that im a slob...even though i am sometimes) :D
Straws 09-24-2007, 08:16 PM eh..??? more plz and thats all i have to say :) Flower
CookyHalie 09-24-2007, 09:26 PM I know who it is! I know who it is! ok i don't.. but i have a feeling!! anyway great chapter flower! Can't wait to read more..
~Cooky
tikisrule 09-24-2007, 11:03 PM cool chapter :D
LittleTinkFairy 09-24-2007, 11:24 PM this story is dynamite!
Straws 09-25-2007, 12:46 AM eh me personaly or Straws ( drinks ) eww!! hikoiks takes like like, mmm chicken!! :P next chappy plz
CookyHalie 09-25-2007, 01:04 AM Not trying to be pushy;) :D but post the next chapter ASAP!!! YAY!!!
fantasydragonking 09-25-2007, 01:22 AM hey great story i just spent alot of time reading it since it was sooo good. looking forward for nex ch.
LittleTinkFairy 09-25-2007, 01:58 AM i love this story it rocks
eh me personaly or Straws ( drinks ) eww!! hikoiks takes like like, mmm chicken!! :P next chappy plz
No! hikoik tastes like burned chicken!!
fantasydragonking 09-25-2007, 02:07 AM do u think i could be a very minor character like only one line or a few?
LittleTinkFairy 09-25-2007, 02:09 AM do u think i could be a very minor character like only one line or a few?
as far as i know, flower wont let u in. if she let u in she would have to let everyone else who asked
fantasydragonking 09-25-2007, 02:12 AM i just wanna be a minor character like someone "the friends" bump into.
LittleTinkFairy 09-25-2007, 02:14 AM but if she let u be a minor character, it would be unfair to everyone else who asked to be in the story...
fantasydragonking 09-25-2007, 02:15 AM ok i guess so worth a try. oh well. im happy! =D
LittleTinkFairy 09-25-2007, 02:46 AM this is a great story i cant wait to hear more!!
Shakani 09-25-2007, 05:32 AM ......
This story makes me scared to be mean to guests. XD
Now I'm gonna be all like, "Omg you are such a cute little guest, welcome to vmk, hun!!"
instead of, "Dude stop following me!! Get out of my bubble!" and things like that... O_o
SassaFrazz 09-25-2007, 06:50 PM LOL re-reading this is kinda fun when you're bored.
Also, FLOWER did say to NOT ask her about characters and story changes. it kinda annoys her.
Yokatherine 09-25-2007, 11:33 PM great chapter so far flower! lol :D
Blossomflower 09-26-2007, 12:03 AM LOLZ yes y'all... hikoik tastes like BURNED chicken.
yep soda, i do not enjoy that.
LOL shakini!
fantasy, I am no longer accepting anyone, and if i accept you as a minor character... like everyone said, it wouldn't be fair to the other peeps who asked to be in it.
(I FINALLY FOUND SOME TIME TO BE ONLINE VMKF DURING WEEKDAYS!!! WOOT! BUT... i can't make a chapter atm. i g2g soon! Maybe tonight... or on friday. :D)
Straws 09-26-2007, 08:58 PM i cant wwait for next chappy!!
Blossomflower 09-29-2007, 05:26 AM 'Sup y'all i'm back
I'll make a chapter tomorrow promise
(if i don't, you have permission to smack me with a million gummi worms. again.)
Straws 09-29-2007, 01:00 PM how do u nkow whats going to happy racoon?
Blossomflower 09-29-2007, 08:28 PM uhh yeah, i never told raccoon anything -_-
hikoik and soda know more than he does :P
anyway
i'll type the chapter later on in the day.. :D
(DONT PUSH ME)
coolJamz 09-29-2007, 10:10 PM ( pushes)
lol your story is good, we want more!
SassaFrazz 09-30-2007, 12:03 AM LOL, yay i know something? :D
CookyHalie 09-30-2007, 01:46 AM i meant that i had an idea what happened.. and fars my arms half way to smacking flower with a gummy worm.. lol
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 01:49 AM I'll make it tonight! promise! (unless something happens that i hadn't planned on) but i'll make it! q:
(and it's gonna be LLOONG MUAHAHA)
CookyHalie 09-30-2007, 02:38 AM YAY! Looking forward to it!:D
purpleangelcutie10 09-30-2007, 03:45 AM WOOT! Go flower!
- waits for entertainment -
Yey? i like long chapters :D
CyanTara 09-30-2007, 09:48 PM flower...
be a author whe you grow up.
your storys make us happy :D
dabaseballking 09-30-2007, 10:04 PM I made some fan avatars and signatures! :) the avi is 64/64 it probabbly should work I ADDED ANOTHER AVI- TRANSPARENT http://img108.mytextgraphics.com/photolava/2007/09/30/119118733657266-4808nnd03.gif
YET ANOTHER... http://img103.mytextgraphics.com/photolava/2007/09/30/119118733657266-4808tcol6.gif
Shakani 09-30-2007, 10:11 PM Awesome graphics, base!
dabaseballking 09-30-2007, 10:11 PM Thank you :) Flower is also typing like the wind and is almost done-- i think
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 10:32 PM (eats base)......
oh well at least you didn't draw any pics :) LOL
I'M ALMOST DONE..
SafariLyssaOnVMK 09-30-2007, 10:34 PM flower...
be a author whe you grow up.
your storys make us happy :D
I agree. You should be an author when you grow up. You're really good!:)
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 11:07 PM U HAPPY STRAWS?!
AND JAM?!
AND EVERYONE ELSE?!
CAUSE IT'S TIME FOR...
DA NEW… CHAPTER!!! - magical music plays -
Anyway, in one of the previous chapters, I said Skyana passed by the window and looked at the friends. Wonder how she got there? (sorry I didn’t explain heh)
She was smart… and while the friends were flying away, she ran from guestalina, and flew in another helicopter that was sitting there on the edge of the giant roof…
And since guestalina was too busy crying, she didn’t even notice there was a helicopter there, much less notice that Skyana was gone and another helicopter rose from the roof. Her guest pals were too busy comforting her…
She sneakily landed near the park and followed the friends…
Now all I want is just my stuff back.. do you get that let me repeat that, I want my stuff back!
(sorry.. listening to potential break up song. LOL)
ANYWAY…
Chapter 28: A new friend!
- 6:10 in the morning -
The friends turned their heads and gasped… it was a guest… (Duhn Duhn Duhn!!!)
“AHHH!!!!!!!” echoed through the town…
“Whoa, whoa … relax. I’m not here to harm you! I come in peace…” said the guest.
The friends didn’t believe her, and they ran behind the counter, and the poor boy hid behind the chair once again.
The friends panicked and stormed into the pizza kitchen, where the chefs were being trampled by the friends…
The guest gave up and didn’t want to scare away the friends anymore … so she took a seat on one of the booth chairs.
The friends inside the kitchen grabbed a few pots and pans, ready to smash the guest if she ever came in ... except for hikoik and lil_rockerangel … they slowly reached over to grab a cheese stick instead of a pan…
- 5 minutes later -
A long time had passed, and the guest never came in.
The chefs grumpily made pizzas for themselves, annoyed by the worried friends.
The friends slowly crept over to the door, and took a little glance outside the kitchen.
There sat the gray guest, eating leftover cheese sticks.
“Someone go see if she’s safe! I don’t want to stay in here forever!” said LightningBrutus.
“Not me…” muttered teddyfruitgirl.
“No way ye guys…” said Yokatherine, waving her arms in rejection.
“I ain’t doing that O_o” replied SoccerRach.
“Are you guys nuts? If senty was here, I’d make him do it hehehe..” commented coolJamz.
“I’m not gonna do that unless someone paid me a million bucks .-.” added hikoik.
“I don’t want to die, I’m too pretty!” said Kitri, her girlish attitude returning…
“No.” said tiger_girl_me flatly.
“No way… I don’t want to be a smashed flower in the road…” croaked Blossomflower.
“o_o I’ll do that if I’m saving Tom Welling or Roxas… otherwise, no.” said SassaFrazz.
“Are you nuts? -_-“ bellowed dabaseballking.
“I’m not doing that, even if someone did give me a chicken…” muttered Cool-Dolphin.
“No way! I have phobia of guests now!” whined CuteTabitha.
“I’m not crazy, fyi.” retorted lil_rockerangel.
“I’m not doing that even if I could fly away..” said LittleTinkFairy.
“No… I’d choose giving up my dream ears rather than going out there…” said Straws.
“Really?! Then gimme them!!” yelled SassaFrazz as she tackled Straws for them.
“Uhh, risk my hair getting more split ends?! I don’t think so!” scoffed princesgirl.
“No… I just got my dream ears, I don’t want to die now…” said AthleticAisha.
“Uh… No thank you :)” said Mizz.V nicely.
“No thanks…” said iRaccoon, afraid that he would get hurt even though he was working for them.
“No way! Have hikoik do it, I want him to perish!” yelled CyanTara devilishly.
hikoik gave CyanTara a -_- face.
“NOooo I’m not going out, I’d rather face Elmo and his brainwashing songs…” said slycooper_lo.
The friends turned their head to walnutfudge.
“Why y’all looking at me? I ain’t doing it!” she screamed.
The friends grabbed her and shoved her out the door.
She fell flat on her face.
walnutfudge, lying on the ground, got up unsteadily and wobbly, and brushed her shirt off.
She looked back at the friends who were peeking through the door, and stuck her tongue out at them.
She slowly walked to the guest, who had already finished off the cheese sticks, and entertained herself by drawing on her gray hand.
She looked to walnutfudge and smiled.
walnutfudge panicked and ran back to the kitchen.
She loudly whispered to the friends “What do I say?!!?!”
“Tell her she’s awesome as a chicken!” yelled Cool-Dolphin.
“Don’t listen to him… say hi, I guess..” replied Blossomflower.
walnutfudge gradually waddled back up, and said “h-hi…”
“Hi!” said the guest in a very friendly tone.
“Are.. you evil??” asked walnutfudge, not sure what to say.
“Rofl are you evil…” said hikoik behind the kitchen door, falling to the ground and laughing like a maniac.
“No… that’s what I was trying to say earlier…” said the guest.
“Well aren’t you crazy like the others?” asked walnutfudge, sitting down on a booth chair.
“Nope…” the guest replied.
“Well… why?” asked a bewildered walnutfudge.
“Because… I’m not mad at you guys.. I think Guestalina is just blinded by anger because something really bad happened to her…” replied the guest.
“Oh…” replied walnutfudge, looking down at the table.
“Well go call your friends…” said the guest.
“So you can eat them?!” screamed walnutfudge.
The guest gave her a O_o look.
walnutfudge remained quiet as she walked back to the kitchen door.
“She wants you guys to come out…” said walnutfudge to them.
“We heard her…” replied lil_rockerangel.
“Then why didn’t you guys come out?” asked walnutfudge.
“Because we don’t taste good…” said CyanTara.
“Gahh. Just come out!” yelled walnutfudge.
The friends slowly came out, and sat with the guest.
OK I’ll just end it here, because if I don’t, it’ll be too long, and if I end it just right.. it’ll kind of cut in the middle.
LOL sorry it wasn’t as long as I said
I’ll make another chapter tonight…
Tbc!
MUAHAHAHA
(don’t bother me for another chapter until later on when the sun is down. LOL)
coolJamz 09-30-2007, 11:14 PM LOL senty ROTFL
is he the new friend? :D
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 11:25 PM Uhh no senty isn't coming in the story LOL
LittleTinkFairy 09-30-2007, 11:28 PM this story is the awesomest
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 11:30 PM q: thanks
"senty!" LOL
(does he read this story? :D)
Shakani 09-30-2007, 11:32 PM LOL Nice chapter, Flower!
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 11:33 PM thanks ^_^
(why am i using that face?!)
purpleangelcutie10 09-30-2007, 11:34 PM Nice chapter flower.
I ask my question once again. WHY AM I SUCH A PIG?
dude it's like being a girl version of hikoik. - shudders -
that's like the worst nightmare....
EVER.
Blossomflower 09-30-2007, 11:40 PM LOL rocker
Sorry but in the previous chapters you were already a pig so I thought i'd stick with that idea...
LOL
A GIRL VERSION OF HIKOIK LOL!!!!!
maybe i should edit you into hikoik's outfit.. but with your face.. MUAHAHAHAHA
LOL thx y'all who commented
SassaFrazz 09-30-2007, 11:53 PM WOOT! chapter!
coolJamz 10-01-2007, 12:00 AM q: thanks
"senty!" LOL
(does he read this story? :D)
no, i dont think so.. i think the entire reason he started looking at the stories thread is because i randomly poked him into my story..
CyanTara 10-01-2007, 12:46 AM great chapter flowerr.
i woulda posted earlier, by mary threw me down the steps and my mom was like, ' Hi Sweetie!! Are u feeling O.K.?! Oh.. you should be on your laptop with your hand hurting from falling!!' and she took away my laptop and i was forced to take a nap... >_< WAAHHHH! TOO MUCH CARREEEE!!! ROARR!! IM NOT A KID ANYMOREE!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHH!!!!!!!
( she's always like this :l )
cyann
SafariLyssaOnVMK 10-01-2007, 01:02 AM the story is good sofar. Well, aleast what I've read of it. Can't wait for more!
btw, I made my own story. its under the thread "the untitled story (I haven't given it a name yet)"
CookyHalie 10-01-2007, 09:02 PM Great chapter Flower!! can't wait to read the next!!
Blossomflower 10-02-2007, 03:21 AM LOL sorry i didnt make another chapter last night... i did something else and i had to sleep AGAIN LOL
(pls stop spamming i dont want this thread to get closed again :))
food52012 10-02-2007, 08:25 PM i glove love and just heart the story!!!
more plz :)
Blossomflower 10-05-2007, 05:57 AM OK i will write the chapter tomorrow, friday...
and if it doesn't happen, then there will be one on saturday...
and if it still doesn't happen, THERE WILL BE ONE on sunday, and if there isn't, you can scream and throw gummi worms at me, and kick and yell.
BUT I PROMISE YOU THERE WILL BE ONE ON SUNDAY UNLESS SOMETHING UNUSUAL HAPPENS!
Sorry i'm procrastinating so much...
>_<
fantasydragonking 10-05-2007, 06:07 AM tis ok i dont blame u i blame life for making u so busy.
CyanTara 10-05-2007, 08:53 PM yeah....
its OK
could i possibly eat a 'make blondes smarter' gummy worm?
i HOPE THEY MAKE A YUMMY ONE LIKE THAT!
:D
great story though... AND IF THESE PEOPLE WOULD HAVE PATIENCE FLOWER WONT HAVE TO READ 'MAKE MORE CHAPPTERS!' >.<
:D
cyann
Blossomflower 10-07-2007, 05:16 AM Uh i don't want you to use guestalina, raccoon..
Yokatherine 10-07-2007, 07:26 PM lol funny chapter! :D
dabaseballking 10-07-2007, 09:16 PM raccoon its copyrighted LOL oh and you cant use dabaseballking without permission of dabaseballking inc.
Blossomflower 10-08-2007, 06:15 AM hehe.. now im done replying to every thread.
TIME TO TYPE
(it may not be that long cause i only have like 30 minutes ah)
~~~~~~~~~
OH NO, i was almost done with the chapter, and now i have to sleep
so I'll finish it tomorrow heh
and it's gonna be LONNGGGG.... q: half done, and it was as long as my usual chapters heh
YEEHAW
i just stop at the part where kitri's eyes get big. LOL
SORRY FOR THE DELAY, BUT TOMORROW THERE WILL BE ONE... WHY DOES THE WORLD HAVE TO SLEEP?!
gaah..
nite!
CyanTara 10-08-2007, 01:59 PM lol flower....
i was like, that was an... ODD chapter O_o
purpleangelcutie10 10-08-2007, 09:28 PM Lol.
Flower, the world has to sleep because if we don't then we all get ugly and cranky and we get bags under our eyes and then when people are like, "What's your favorite color?" then we'd be all "GAAAAAHHH!". Sorry, I watch too much TV.
But whatever, - waits patiently for chapter -
Manchester United 10-08-2007, 09:47 PM lol good story :) Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Straws 10-08-2007, 10:36 PM more plz i cant wait for this lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng 1
Blossomflower 10-09-2007, 04:33 AM .. stop misspelling procrastinate! roar.
i'll make it when VMK closes ... and I'll have enough time heheheheheheheheheh...
heh thanks for being so patient..
this chapter gonna be LLLOOONNGGGG!
one of the longest... LOL
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MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA
t y p i n g...
the next chappy.. oh ya oh ya oh ya
and i hope i get to finish it q:
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I DID IT! AND I'M SO SLEEPY! AHH!
HALLELUJAH!!!
OK ANOTHER CHAPPY SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT…
Heh. HAPPY BASE?! LOL
GET READY FOR A LLLOONNNG CHAPTER HEHEHEHEHEH
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and potential break up song is stuck in my head
i played it while i was typing LOL
it helps me think.. idk why LOL
and I feel like the friends now.
Sleepy.
>_<
ANYWAY:
Chapter 29: A few questions answered…
- 6:30 in the morning -
As the friends sat down, the guest smiled at them, and giggled at hikoik.
“What? Back in the kitchen, almost everyone giggled at me. Why?! WHY!?” said hikoik, starting to lose it. He always could never be happy without knowing stuff.
The guest pointed at hikoik’s head.
hikoik let out a “.-.” and slowly reached for his head. He was kind of surprised that he felt something plastic. He immediately grabbed the foreign item and looked at it. “What the heck?” asked hikoik as he looked down at the straw. slycooper_lo and teddyfruitgirl giggled loudly.
hikoik rapidly pulled the straws off his hair.
He looked back at slycooper_lo and teddyfruitgirl, who immediately stopped giggling when hikoik glared at them.
“I’m gonna get you two, you little….” yelled hikoik as he started to chase slycooper_lo and teddyfruitgirl around the room.
The friends ignored the 3, and sat down comfortably.
There was a 10 second pause of awkward silence, and all that could be heard were the screams of slycooper_lo and teddyfruitgirl, and a roaring hikoik.
“So… what’s your name?” asked lil_rockerangel, being the first to break the silence.
“I’m Skyana.” said the guest cheerfully.
“And ... why are you nice again?” asked princesgirl.
“She already told walnutfudge, and we heard it -.-“ said LittleTinkFairy, talking through her teeth, afraid that princesgirl’s question would upset Skyana.
Skyana just stayed quiet and smiled happily.
“Well can you help us answer a few questions about guestalina?” asked SoccerRach.
“Sure, I’d be glad to help you guys out…” replied Skyana.
“OK!” said CyanTara, grabbing a napkin.
“What’s that? o_o” asked a bewildered SassaFrazz.
“While we were discussing, I wrote some of the questions down on the napkin heh.” replied CyanTara.
“Ooh good thinking!” tossed in CuteTabitiha.
“Heh, thx. Ok… first question.” replied CyanTara, looking at her napkin.
“Uhhh… why did Guestalina call hikoik sweetheart?” continued CyanTara, looking puzzled.
hikoik immediately came to a halt and turned his head towards CyanTara, his sneakers making a screeching noise.
“Yes, why did she call me that?!” yelled hikoik, anxious to figure out the answer. He completely forgot about his siblings, and sat down with the rest of the friends.
slycooper_lo and teddyfruitgirl let out a sigh of relief, and joined the rest of the friends.
“Well… I don’t really know… but Guestalina always talks about that hikoik guy… and how she wants to crush him the most… for breaking her heart or something.” replied a reminiscing Skyana.
“1, how could I break her heart!? I’ve never even met her before tod--“ hikoik got cut off as he thought of what time it was.
“I mean I haven’t even met her before YESTERDAY!” |