Chapter 1:
Orangina was just relaxing at her cafe. "It's starting to get so boring here. We can't even say words anymore! People are saying bad things and doing bad stuff! I can't take it anymore! Maybe I should just quit.." And then it happened. "What is that?" A glow came from the corner of the room. It looked like when you used magic. "Hello? Is that you magsd? It's not funny you know." And then a book came swirling toward her. "Ah!", she said,"What is that thing?" Suddenly a book was place in front of her on her photo book. She read the cover. 'The First Day Of VMK: Yavn's Journal'

nice prelude, i would love to read more.

Chapter 2:
She opened the journal. There was no date, but there was a description.
'First Day of VMK:
I have just logged in. There isn't that much people. I think if we spread the message, more people might come.
Later:
There is now much more people. However, I think someone is following me. And the CLs and AIs are acting strange. When I asked one of the community leaders what was up, they said nothing. It's like they're robotic! Someone's opening the door, what the?? I'm calling the.. HELP!'
When she turned the next page, there was a glowing green light. It sucked her in. Not just Orangina, but HER. She heard a voice. "It's time."

Heh,the chapters could be a bit longer. But,other than that,I like the idea. It kind of goes with my Guest3000 story. I hope Orangina sees Guest3000! (Maybe that's another idea,but don't forget about his friend Kupo/Lily!)

Chapter 3:
When she woke up, she was in a diffrent world. There was a bunch of people carrying things. They looked like builders, and it looked like it was on Main Street. But the strange thing was, it was like a photo. Everything was still and yellowish. When she turned around she saw the computer den in real life. "Omigod. I've been sucked into the computer! I knew I was playing VMK too much! This must be a crazy dream." Then the photo started swirling. And she just happened to see a message on the photo. 'Time is wasting, Orangy.' Now she was mad. "I hate being called that!" Then VMK had a message saying no bad language. "Ugh!"