View Full Version : *No* ~A New VMK Story~ {:.Fiction.:}


GenieLovato
05-30-2007, 10:25 PM
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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*


This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter One: The Search for the Stitch Hat
The 3 friends go down town to look for Lana's missing stitch hat.

Ann: I found it!!
Lana: Uh-huh you always say that.
Ann: I meant to say, I found my feet they were on my legs all this time!
Jack: Were hopeless with misses lost her feet here.
Wack: Hello, brother.. look at this stitch hat I found.
Lana: Hey thats mine! Give it back before I report you!
Wack: What are staff gonna do banned me? Well to late I have 2 people. So that stitch will go to the other one MUCHAHAHAHAHA!
Ann: Omg you laugh like MUCHAHAHA and I laugh like HAHAHA!
Jack: Lets report him.

Report Message:
Reporting: Wack

He stole my stitch hat! You need to banned him and make him give it back

~Lana.
Message Sent.

Lana: What should we do to pass the time?
Ann: Dance! Dance! Dance fever!

They all danced the night away. LOL Just joking.

Staff Message:
Do you have proof that he did this.
Please stop sending us fake reports,
or we will have to banned you.
Message Closed

Lana: Oh, no they didn't.
Ann: What did they do?
Lana: Jack try to find out your brother's username and password so we can get it back.

While he was trying to figure it out.

Wack: Suckers! I got a Stitch hat!
Host_Hula: Stop right there! You need to put that stitch hat in the lost and found.
Wack: Oh, okay who is gonna stop me?
Host_Hula: Me!
Wack: Well, since you said that I push my red evil button.

Vmk starting shaking.

A Message poped up:
Come to Main Street fast
Yavn,

Jack: What happen?
Lana: Something smells like Wack.
Ann: Really I don't think it smells like Wack maybe Apples?
Lana: Oh, boy lets just go!

They go to Main street.

Yavn: Everyone, clam down everything is okay. Well not everything our system has lost everyones names, usernames, and password. So vmk is now gonna be 24 hour game so if you get off. You can't play again for now. We will get it fixed hopefully by a week or 2.

Jack: Guys I found his.. ah!


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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 2: Jack Banned

Jack: Where I'm I?
Wack: Brother, I'm sorry here give the stitch hat back to Lana.
Jack: Wow, you really do have a good side.

They traded.

Jack: Thanks!
Wack: Staff!!! Jack stole my stitch hat!
Jack: What?!
Host_Hula:*Takes the stitch hat, and gives it back to Wack.* For your stealing you must have 2 weeks without vmk.
Jack: But .. but but.

But before Jack could say something else he was banned.

Lana: Jack?
Ann: Wack?
Lana: Ann, its Jack not Wack!
Ann: Huh?
Lana: Wack is the person who stole my stitch hat.
Ann: Uh okay...
Lana: Nevermind just help me?

Lana, looks on Jack's profile.
Jack: Player Since Beta
Simbling: Wack
Banned: 2 Weeks
For: Stealing Wack's stitch hat.

John: Lana.. its me Ja..
Lana: Jack??
John: No.. Jase I had to start a new person my other one got deleted.
Lana: Oh.. hey Jase can you help us?
John: With what?
Ann: Saving vmk from Jack!
Lana: Ann .. its Wack!!
John: What happen?
Lana: Wack stole my stitch hat, and some how caused Jack to get banned.
Lana: We got to get to staff!
Ann: Alright where is the waffle?
Lana: I said staff..

She went over to Host_Hula.

Host_Hula: Hey, guys whats up?
Lana: You banned Jack.
Host_Hula: Because he took Wack's Stitch hat.
Lana: No, that was my stitch hat. Wack stole it from me, and Jack tried to get it back.
Host_Hula: Oh.. sorry I would unbanned Jack and banned Wack, but..
Lana: But what?
Host_Hula: Jack's records his username and password we have to type it in to get him un-banned, but we lost them remember what yavn said?
Lana: Why can't you banned Wack?
Host_Hula: I can't get him I have to see him in a room then instead of report, I click banned and type how many days or weeks.
Lana: Oh..

John takes Ann.

Ann: Wack what are you doing?
John: Wait.. how did you know?
Ann: I guessed.
John: If you still want to play vmk you need to go take Lana's cowboy pants.
Ann: But those are hers, and she spent alot on them.
John: Do you wanna play vmk?
Ann: I do.. okay fine!

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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 3: Rock Star Kidnapped

Yavn: Guys, I know everything has been bad, but in a few days vmk will be okay. Anyways to cheer you up Tmkttt is gonna sing us a few songs!
Tmkttt: Hey everybody! Here I go.

After Tmkttt sang her songs everyone cheered.

Lana: Go Tmkttt!!

Then suddenly she was grabbed behind the stage.

Ann: Here you go John, I got tmkttt as you told me to.
John: Peferct, now go get those cowboy pants.
Ann: :-( Yes master.

Ann goes to Lana.

Lana: I been looking for you where have you been.
Ann: Tmkttt, I got her auto-graph.
Lana: Awesome!
Ann: I just got a messaged, I'm playing cute or boot can I use your cowboy pants?
Lana: Sure, your my best friend.
Ann: .. Thanks

They traded

Lana: Don't lose them, they costed me ALOT!
Ann: I'll try not 2.

Ann went to John.

Ann: Here you go Wack.
John: Perfect.
Ann: While I'm gonna go.
John: Uh.. no your not your my prisoner.
Ann: What??
Tmkttt: You got tricked.
John: Did you think I was gonna let you go? Your in to deep. If you go I will tell Lana, and she will never be your friend again.
Ann: ...No No!!

Meanwhile were Ann was crying Lana found a new Friend.

Mazzy: Hey I'm Mazzy.
Lana: Hey Mazzy. Want to be my friend?
Mazzy: Sure!

Host_Phinny: Were having a host event for Inferno.
John: Ann did you here that go there.

Ann went there, and didn't win, but she did what she was suppose to.

King: I got Inferno!
Ann: Are you trading it?
King: I guess.
Ann: Can I try it on to make sure it fits?
King: Okay.

They traded.
Ann left.

King: Hey that was my Inferno :-(!

Ann: Here you go John.
Tmkttt: John why are you making Ann do all your dirty work for you?
John: I don't want to get banned.
Ann: You are a crimnal when Jack gets back on.. y
John: What will happen I'm not on Wack. Wack will get banned, but I won't.
Ann: Why are you making me do this?!
John: I have my reasons.

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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*


This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 4: The Truth.

John: Now, Ann she is holding my banned brother flips.
Ann: .. Who is?
John: Jack!
Ann: Wack?
John: Jack!! Go get them from Lana.
Ann: Uh huh be right back going to get them.

She goes to Lana's Haunted Mansion Room.

Lana: Where are my cowboy pants?
Ann: Gone, I need to tell you the truth.
Lana: What?
Ann: John has been contorling me.
Lana: Oh.. did you see the news paper?
Ann: Don't change the subject.
Lana: No.. Tmkttt has been kidnapped.
Ann: Yeah.. about that I took her
Lana: What?! Why did you.
Ann: John told me to.
Lana: Jase?
Ann: No Wack he fooled you with Jase.
Lana: Oh.. why didn't you tell me?
Ann: Because he told me, he would tell you and you would never be my friend again.
Lana: Thats never gonna happen where best friends!
Ann: Yeah.. I thought that, but how can I tell Lana the Horrible Truth I just told you?
Lana: Ann.. I'M LANA!!!
Ann: Oh.. forgive me?
Lana: Of course, but we need a way to get him back.
Ann: Jack?
Lana: No Wack?
Ann: Don't call John, Wack or he will know I told you.
Lana: Okay, his name is Jase.
Ann: I'm gonna go tell.

Ann goes to John.

John: Where is it? Where are the flips?
Ann: No where near you. *Un-ties Tmkttt*
Tmkttt: Thanks *Runs*
John: Why did you do that?
Ann: Because I told Lana the Truth!
Lana: *Walks In* Yes she did.
John: Oh.. sorry to break you up, but Ann we had a deal. *Pushes Evil Button*

Vmk starts to Shake once Again!!

Lana: Ann? Ann? Ann!!
John: MUCHAHA, don't waste your breath.
Lana: What did you do to Ann?
John: Banned her for 2 Weeks.

Message:
Yavn:
Come to Main Street!
Vmk is fixed!

Lana: I will deal with you later Wack!

Lana leaves and meets up with Mazzy.

Yavn: 2 Weeks are over and vmk is Better.
Lana: Did he say 2 weeks? Jack!
Jack: Hey, guys sorry my brother Wack got me banned for 2 weeks.
Lana: Well atleast your here.
Mazzy: Uh.. hi?
Jack: Hi. What where is .. Ann?
Lana: LOL, funny story.. your bro
Jack: My brother banned her?
Lana: Yeah. Want your green flips back?
Jack: Sure.
Lana: He was trying to take them.
Jack: Great..

They traded

Jack: I gtg go eat Lunch bye!
Lana: Bye!
Mazzy: He seems odd.. you told me all about him, but it doesn't seem to fit.
King: Tell everyone this girl stole my inferno! *Runs Off*
Lana: Something smells like Ann\Wack.
Mazzy: I guess, want to go play falling chairs.

Meanwhile ..

John: MUCHAHAHA!!!
Jack: Hi me! Here is my green flips.

They Traded.
Jack logs off

John: Its so good when you know you brother's password and username. My next part breaking up Ann\Lana\Jack.

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* King * .. * Mazzy *


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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*


This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 5: The Fight.

Lana: Hmm.. Mazzy I'm I a pink girl, or blue girl.
Mazzy: Well lets see your skin color is blue so I have to say blue girl!
Lana: Thanks, I'm blue, all my rare is gone.
Mazzy: Not if I can help it!
Lana: Mazzy wait don't ..

But before Lana could say anything else Mazzy was gone.
Lana went to King's room.

Lana: Hey.
King: Hey :-(
Lana: My friend stole your inferno.
King: I'm reporting you!!
Lana: Stop! I'm getting it back, I promise.
King: Thanks I guess...
Lana: She was tricked by this guy. He told her to steal it, or he will banned her.
King: Oh, thats pretty low tho.
Lana: I know it is wanna be my friend.

Mazzy entered the room.

Mazzy: Look I got inferno,stitch hat, cowboy pants, green flips, and Ann.
Lana: Ann?
Ann: Ann?
Mazzy: Ann?
Ann: Ann!!
Lana: But you were banned..
Ann: I used contact us, and told them about John and Wack.
John: *Runs in* Don't report me the worst has not came yet don't!
Lana: Uh-huh says boy who is a scammer!

Report Message:
Reporting Who: John\Wack
Report Messager: Lana

He stole everyones stuff. He is really bad.
Message Sent

Host_Hula walks in

Host_Hula: *Banned Wack\John for 10 years* He's gone.
John: No! The worst hasn't came yet! Vmk is in danger.
Mazzy: Hehe I mean yeah he is nuts!
Lana: My stuff back Mazzy.
Host_Hula: *Takes Mazzy's items, and gives them to there owner* Bye Guys!
Lana: Bye!
Jack: *Walks in* Lana I need to talk to you in trade.
Lana: Okay.
Jack: I wanted to say that I don't want to ever be your friend again.
Lana: What?!?!
Jack: You didn't listen to my brother! He was right! He had this plan now vmk is doomed.
Lana: I'm sorry whats the plan? Please be my friend.
Jack: I can never stay mad at someone here is the plan.
Lana: Mazzy... a..... y....s..?
Jack: Yes keep it your self.
Lana: Wow..
Jack: She can't be trusted.

They exit out of trade.

Mazzy: HAHAHA! Thank you! You helped my plan! Vmk is gone, and ...

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* King * .. * Mazzy *


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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 6: The Cliff

Lana: And what..?
Mazzy: My new town! Bye bye VMK! Hello Maze Town!
Lana: Were gonna stop you.
Mazzy: Oh, is that right..?
Ann: Yeah! Wack where gonna stop you!
Lana: Wack is banned this is Mazzy not Wack!
Jack: Uh..
Mazzy: Your out numbered!
Ann: Uh.. there is 4 of us and 2 of you.
Jack: No Ann! There is 3 of us, and 1 of you.
Mazzy: Oh .. is that so?
Lana: Yeah..
Mazzy: *Types something in* Uh-huh now your Out Numbered

Vmk started shaking.
Robots starting coming from the ground.

Ann: There is like a 100 of them.
Mazzy: Not even close a 1,000.
Lana: You picked a bad day.
Mazzy: How is that?
Lana: *Points to the clouds* Clouds!

It starts to ran heavy.
The robots were gone.

Mazzy: Well.. I will do my plan *Pushes a Button*

Cliffs started coming up.
Ann was holding on to the rock.

Ann: Guys help!
Lana: Oh no Ann! *Holds Ann's hand*
Lana: Ah! Jack help!
Jack: Coming guys! *Gets Lana's hand*

Jack slips.

Jack: Ah! Don't worry guys I'm strong enough.
Lana: Then pull us up!
Ann: No, Pull us down!
Lana: Up!
Ann: Down!
Lana: Up!
Ann: Down!
Lana: Down!
Ann: Up!
Lana: Okay fine up!

Jack pulls up.

Jack: We did it!

They started hugging.

Mazzy: *Pushes them off* MUCHAHAHA!
Ann: Omg she Laughs like MUCHAHAHA, and I laugh Like HAHAHA!
Jack: Were falling!
Lana: Help!
Jack: Were falling in a black hole!
Ann: Ah!!

It started to get foggy

Mazzy: MUCHAHAHA! There gone forever!
Host_Hula and Yavn: Mazzy .. we heard them, you pushed them off a cliff your banned for LIFE!
Mazzy: But you can't do that it was my plan!

Mazzy Banned.

Host_Hula: I hope there okay.
Yavn: Me to.

Meanwhile a New story comes up.

Ghostgally: Did you hear about those people falling off a cliff?
CookyHalie: Yeah
Special Guest 2: That was Really bad.
Ghostgally: Hmm.. how about ... we try to go find them?
CookyHalie: Sounds dangers.
Special Guest 2: Sounds fun!
Special Guest 2 and CookyHalie: Were in!
Ghostgally: Yes!

iWhippedCream
05-30-2007, 10:31 PM
Ooooo,Jezi likey!!

GenieLovato
05-30-2007, 11:02 PM
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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 2: Jack Banned

Jack: Where I'm I?
Wack: Brother, I'm sorry here give the stitch hat back to Lana.
Jack: Wow, you really do have a good side.

They traded.

Jack: Thanks!
Wack: Staff!!! Jack stole my stitch hat!
Jack: What?!
Host_Hula:*Takes the stitch hat, and gives it back to Wack.* For your stealing you must have 2 weeks without vmk.
Jack: But .. but but.

But before Jack could say something else he was banned.

Lana: Jack?
Ann: Wack?
Lana: Ann, its Jack not Wack!
Ann: Huh?
Lana: Wack is the person who stole my stitch hat.
Ann: Uh okay...
Lana: Nevermind just help me?

Lana, looks on Jack's profile.
Jack: Player Since Beta
Simbling: Wack
Banned: 2 Weeks
For: Stealing Wack's stitch hat.

John: Lana.. its me Ja..
Lana: Jack??
John: No.. Jase I had to start a new person my other one got deleted.
Lana: Oh.. hey Jase can you help us?
John: With what?
Ann: Saving vmk from Jack!
Lana: Ann .. its Wack!!
John: What happen?
Lana: Wack stole my stitch hat, and some how caused Jack to get banned.
Lana: We got to get to staff!
Ann: Alright where is the waffle?
Lana: I said staff..

She went over to Host_Hula.

Host_Hula: Hey, guys whats up?
Lana: You banned Jack.
Host_Hula: Because he took Wack's Stitch hat.
Lana: No, that was my stitch hat. Wack stole it from me, and Jack tried to get it back.
Host_Hula: Oh.. sorry I would unbanned Jack and banned Wack, but..
Lana: But what?
Host_Hula: Jack's records his username and password we have to type it in to get him un-banned, but we lost them remember what yavn said?
Lana: Why can't you banned Wack?
Host_Hula: I can't get him I have to see him in a room then instead of report, I click banned and type how many days or weeks.
Lana: Oh..

John takes Ann.

Ann: Wack what are you doing?
John: Wait.. how did you know?
Ann: I guessed.
John: If you still want to play vmk you need to go take Lana's cowboy pants.
Ann: But those are hers, and she spent alot on them.
John: Do you wanna play vmk?
Ann: I do.. okay fine!

Alligator
05-30-2007, 11:06 PM
that waack guy is really bad

GenieLovato
05-30-2007, 11:09 PM
Thats why he is Wack. His real name is John, but he never uses it. Until now and nobody knows, but Jack. And Ann is figuring out 2, but we all know she is gonna forget it.

SherrytheFairy
05-30-2007, 11:11 PM
Ohmigosh Wack is so eviiiilllll...:(

Can't believe Ann is actually gonna do that!

AvastKrazy
05-30-2007, 11:21 PM
thisz is a cool story

GenieLovato
05-30-2007, 11:37 PM
We are having 2 special guest.
I choosed Tmkttt because she is a rock star, and something bad is gonna happen.
Tell me what your gonna do and Chapter 3 is coming Tonight with our special guest tmkttt

crazycrazyfrog
05-30-2007, 11:39 PM
Really great story! I suggest, though, instead of posting your chapters all around the thread, you could just edit it all into your first post. That way, you don't have to hunt to read the chapters, and it's all in one spot.


This story is starting off amazing, though!

GenieLovato
05-31-2007, 12:00 AM
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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 3: Rock Star Kidnapped

Yavn: Guys, I know everything has been bad, but in a few days vmk will be okay. Anyways to cheer you up Tmkttt is gonna sing us a few songs!
Tmkttt: Hey everybody! Here I go.

After Tmkttt sang her songs everyone cheered.

Lana: Go Tmkttt!!

Then suddenly she was grabbed behind the stage.

Ann: Here you go John, I got tmkttt as you told me to.
John: Peferct, now go get those cowboy pants.
Ann: :-( Yes master.

Ann goes to Lana.

Lana: I been looking for you where have you been.
Ann: Tmkttt, I got her auto-graph.
Lana: Awesome!
Ann: I just got a messaged, I'm playing cute or boot can I use your cowboy pants?
Lana: Sure, your my best friend.
Ann: .. Thanks

They traded

Lana: Don't lose them, they costed me ALOT!
Ann: I'll try not 2.

Ann went to John.

Ann: Here you go Wack.
John: Perfect.
Ann: While I'm gonna go.
John: Uh.. no your not your my prisoner.
Ann: What??
Tmkttt: You got tricked.
John: Did you think I was gonna let you go? Your in to deep. If you go I will tell Lana, and she will never be your friend again.
Ann: ...No No!!

Meanwhile were Ann was crying Lana found a new Friend.

Mazzy: Hey I'm Mazzy.
Lana: Hey Mazzy. Want to be my friend?
Mazzy: Sure!

Host_Phinny: Were having a host event for Inferno.
John: Ann did you here that go there.

Ann went there, and didn't win, but she did what she was suppose to.

King: I got Inferno!
Ann: Are you trading it?
King: I guess.
Ann: Can I try it on to make sure it fits?
King: Okay.

They traded.
Ann left.

King: Hey that was my Inferno :-(!

Ann: Here you go John.
Tmkttt: John why are you making Ann do all your dirty work for you?
John: I don't want to get banned.
Ann: You are a crimnal when Jack gets back on.. y
John: What will happen I'm not on Wack. Wack will get banned, but I won't.
Ann: Why are you making me do this?!
John: I have my reasons.

NothingHere
05-31-2007, 07:10 PM
Nice story, keep the/m coming

GenieLovato
05-31-2007, 08:08 PM
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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*


This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 4: The Truth.

John: Now, Ann she is holding my banned brother flips.
Ann: .. Who is?
John: Jack!
Ann: Wack?
John: Jack!! Go get them from Lana.
Ann: Uh huh be right back going to get them.

She goes to Lana's Haunted Mansion Room.

Lana: Where are my cowboy pants?
Ann: Gone, I need to tell you the truth.
Lana: What?
Ann: John has been contorling me.
Lana: Oh.. did you see the news paper?
Ann: Don't change the subject.
Lana: No.. Tmkttt has been kidnapped.
Ann: Yeah.. about that I took her
Lana: What?! Why did you.
Ann: John told me to.
Lana: Jase?
Ann: No Wack he fooled you with Jase.
Lana: Oh.. why didn't you tell me?
Ann: Because he told me, he would tell you and you would never be my friend again.
Lana: Thats never gonna happen where best friends!
Ann: Yeah.. I thought that, but how can I tell Lana the Horrible Truth I just told you?
Lana: Ann.. I'M LANA!!!
Ann: Oh.. forgive me?
Lana: Of course, but we need a way to get him back.
Ann: Jack?
Lana: No Wack?
Ann: Don't call John, Wack or he will know I told you.
Lana: Okay, his name is Jase.
Ann: I'm gonna go tell.

Ann goes to John.

John: Where is it? Where are the flips?
Ann: No where near you. *Un-ties Tmkttt*
Tmkttt: Thanks *Runs*
John: Why did you do that?
Ann: Because I told Lana the Truth!
Lana: *Walks In* Yes she did.
John: Oh.. sorry to break you up, but Ann we had a deal. *Pushes Evil Button*

Vmk starts to Shake once Again!!

Lana: Ann? Ann? Ann!!
John: MUCHAHA, don't waste your breath.
Lana: What did you do to Ann?
John: Banned her for 2 Weeks.

Message:
Yavn:
Come to Main Street!
Vmk is fixed!

Lana: I will deal with you later Wack!

Lana leaves and meets up with Mazzy.

Yavn: 2 Weeks are over and vmk is Better.
Lana: Did he say 2 weeks? Jack!
Jack: Hey, guys sorry my brother Wack got me banned for 2 weeks.
Lana: Well atleast your here.
Mazzy: Uh.. hi?
Jack: Hi. What where is .. Ann?
Lana: LOL, funny story.. your bro
Jack: My brother banned her?
Lana: Yeah. Want your green flips back?
Jack: Sure.
Lana: He was trying to take them.
Jack: Great..

They traded

Jack: I gtg go eat Lunch bye!
Lana: Bye!
Mazzy: He seems odd.. you told me all about him, but it doesn't seem to fit.
King: Tell everyone this girl stole my inferno! *Runs Off*
Lana: Something smells like Ann\Wack.
Mazzy: I guess, want to go play falling chairs.

Meanwhile ..

John: MUCHAHAHA!!!
Jack: Hi me! Here is my green flips.

They Traded.
Jack logs off

John: Its so good when you know you brother's password and username. My next part breaking up Ann\Lana\Jack.




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* King * .. * Mazzy *

iWhippedCream
05-31-2007, 08:24 PM
That Horrible Wack!! Ann is too funny!!

SherrytheFairy
05-31-2007, 09:00 PM
LOL.
Hi me! XD
Aww...hope things get better. :[

princesgirl
05-31-2007, 10:04 PM
cool story! write more

GenieLovato
05-31-2007, 10:15 PM
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*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*


This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 5: The Fight.

Lana: Hmm.. Mazzy I'm I a pink girl, or blue girl.
Mazzy: Well lets see your skin color is blue so I have to say blue girl!
Lana: Thanks, I'm blue, all my rare is gone.
Mazzy: Not if I can help it!
Lana: Mazzy wait don't ..

But before Lana could say anything else Mazzy was gone.
Lana went to King's room.

Lana: Hey.
King: Hey :-(
Lana: My friend stole your inferno.
King: I'm reporting you!!
Lana: Stop! I'm getting it back, I promise.
King: Thanks I guess...
Lana: She was tricked by this guy. He told her to steal it, or he will banned her.
King: Oh, thats pretty low tho.
Lana: I know it is wanna be my friend.

Mazzy entered the room.

Mazzy: Look I got inferno,stitch hat, cowboy pants, green flips, and Ann.
Lana: Ann?
Ann: Ann?
Mazzy: Ann?
Ann: Ann!!
Lana: But you were banned..
Ann: I used contact us, and told them about John and Wack.
John: *Runs in* Don't report me the worst has not came yet don't!
Lana: Uh-huh says boy who is a scammer!

Report Message:
Reporting Who: John\Wack
Report Messager: Lana

He stole everyones stuff. He is really bad.
Message Sent

Host_Hula walks in

Host_Hula: *Banned Wack\John for 10 years* He's gone.
John: No! The worst hasn't came yet! Vmk is in danger.
Mazzy: Hehe I mean yeah he is nuts!
Lana: My stuff back Mazzy.
Host_Hula: *Takes Mazzy's items, and gives them to there owner* Bye Guys!
Lana: Bye!
Jack: *Walks in* Lana I need to talk to you in trade.
Lana: Okay.
Jack: I wanted to say that I don't want to ever be your friend again.
Lana: What?!?!
Jack: You didn't listen to my brother! He was right! He had this plan now vmk is doomed.
Lana: I'm sorry whats the plan? Please be my friend.
Jack: I can never stay mad at someone here is the plan.
Lana: Mazzy... a..... y....s..?
Jack: Yes keep it your self.
Lana: Wow..
Jack: She can't be trusted.

They exit out of trade.

Mazzy: HAHAHA! Thank you! You helped my plan! Vmk is gone, and ...

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* King * .. * Mazzy *

Dudetteroxs
05-31-2007, 10:23 PM
Wow, this is actually... really good. VMK fiction stories rock. xD awesome :)

Deeda
05-31-2007, 10:29 PM
Not bad! Can I have permission to write stories like that? I mean, with the whole
Blah: Blah
Lalala: Lalala
And stuff like that?

CrazyPotatos
05-31-2007, 10:48 PM
Awesome story you should puplish it :D

GenieLovato
05-31-2007, 10:48 PM
6 Chapters per a Thread.
Are you Ready FOR THE LAST CHAPTER?
It rocks!
Coming soon to a thread near you.

Next thread is a whole new story searching from them.
Seeing the past of Mazzy, Lana, Jack, and Ann.

Special Guest.
For our new Thread we need a few special guest so if you want to be in it tell me. Tell me about yourself. Like tmkttt she was the rock star in a few chapters.



Not bad! Can I have permission to write stories like that? I mean, with the whole
Blah: Blah
Lalala: Lalala
And stuff like that?


Could you explain more? Lol sorry

SherrytheFairy
05-31-2007, 11:24 PM
Ooooooooooh I'll definitely see your sister's story. :)

Bad Mazzy!

CookyHalie
05-31-2007, 11:43 PM
Could I be in it? :D I want to be a new friend! that likes cookies... Have me an old friend that had lost her account from a scammer and lost all her stuff( nice stuff) lol

GenieLovato
05-31-2007, 11:56 PM
http://img322.**************/img322/7508/notdonedesignoc1.jpg http://img142.**************/img142/7881/me7aj.pnghttp://i77.****************/albums/j54/bvmanzo/Picture23-2.png
*Ann* .. *Lana* .. *Jack*



This is a Fiction Story.
Please enjoy!

Chapter 6: The Cliff

Lana: And what..?
Mazzy: My new town! Bye bye VMK! Hello Maze Town!
Lana: Were gonna stop you.
Mazzy: Oh, is that right..?
Ann: Yeah! Wack where gonna stop you!
Lana: Wack is banned this is Mazzy not Wack!
Jack: Uh..
Mazzy: Your out numbered!
Ann: Uh.. there is 4 of us and 2 of you.
Jack: No Ann! There is 3 of us, and 1 of you.
Mazzy: Oh .. is that so?
Lana: Yeah..
Mazzy: *Types something in* Uh-huh now your Out Numbered

Vmk started shaking.
Robots starting coming from the ground.

Ann: There is like a 100 of them.
Mazzy: Not even close a 1,000.
Lana: You picked a bad day.
Mazzy: How is that?
Lana: *Points to the clouds* Clouds!

It starts to ran heavy.
The robots were gone.

Mazzy: Well.. I will do my plan *Pushes a Button*

Cliffs started coming up.
Ann was holding on to the rock.

Ann: Guys help!
Lana: Oh no Ann! *Holds Ann's hand*
Lana: Ah! Jack help!
Jack: Coming guys! *Gets Lana's hand*

Jack slips.

Jack: Ah! Don't worry guys I'm strong enough.
Lana: Then pull us up!
Ann: No, Pull us down!
Lana: Up!
Ann: Down!
Lana: Up!
Ann: Down!
Lana: Down!
Ann: Up!
Lana: Okay fine up!

Jack pulls up.

Jack: We did it!

They started hugging.

Mazzy: *Pushes them off* MUCHAHAHA!
Ann: Omg she Laughs like MUCHAHAHA, and I laugh Like HAHAHA!
Jack: Were falling!
Lana: Help!
Jack: Were falling in a black hole!
Ann: Ah!!

It started to get foggy

Mazzy: MUCHAHAHA! There gone forever!
Host_Hula and Yavn: Mazzy .. we heard them, you pushed them off a cliff your banned for LIFE!
Mazzy: But you can't do that it was my plan!

Mazzy Banned.

Host_Hula: I hope there okay.
Yavn: Me to.

Meanwhile a New story comes up.

Ghostgally: Did you hear about those people falling off a cliff?
CookyHalie: Yeah
Deeda: That was Really bad.
Ghostgally: Hmm.. how about ... we try to go find them?
CookyHalie: Sounds dangers.
Deeda: Sounds fun!
Deeda and CookyHalie: Were in!
Ghostgally: Yes!

SherrytheFairy
06-01-2007, 12:23 AM
Hehe!
What happened to them?!

Dudetteroxs
06-01-2007, 03:39 AM
Awesome. I wonder what happened. (ponders)

GenieLovato
06-01-2007, 06:38 PM
You will find out sooner if someone will be the 2nd special guest.

CookyHalie
06-01-2007, 07:52 PM
Yay im in it! and somebody should be that 2nd special guest;)

TheMagicWithin
06-01-2007, 08:05 PM
I will be the second special Guest. I want to be the one that saves everything

GenieLovato
06-01-2007, 09:24 PM
You will be in the First chapter and the last,
but sorry to say you can't be a main charcter.
I'm looking for someone who has been on vmkf for a while,
and atleast have posted 2 threads. Sorry.

Deeda
06-01-2007, 10:25 PM
6 Chapters per a Thread.
Are you Ready FOR THE LAST CHAPTER?
It rocks!
Coming soon to a thread near you.

Next thread is a whole new story searching from them.
Seeing the past of Mazzy, Lana, Jack, and Ann.

Special Guest.
For our new Thread we need a few special guest so if you want to be in it tell me. Tell me about yourself. Like tmkttt she was the rock star in a few chapters.






Could you explain more? Lol sorry

To write stories in that format...I'll be in your story! That's be cool.

TheMagicWithin
06-02-2007, 02:50 PM
To write stories in that format...I'll be in your story! That's be cool.

But I wanted to be in it too...:(

GenieLovato
06-02-2007, 06:19 PM
You are, but you wanted to be the one that saves everything. You wanted the spot light sorry thats not gonna work. Plus I would like someone who has been on vmkf longer. Your in it in the first charpter and the last one.

I really want to write the next stories, but I don't have the pictures yet.
Vmk pal isn't working still.

Dudetteroxs
06-02-2007, 08:40 PM
Wait, do you still need people for this story? If you do, I can be in it, if you want me to.

GenieLovato
06-03-2007, 03:15 AM
I'll put you in it, some how.