Introduction: Max and Elizabeth are Best Friends and have been for two years. The first day of summer Max has a surprise for Elizabeth. What will happen nobody knows.



♥~Chapter 1~♥
"Best Friends Forever" Max said putting his arm around Elizabeth. Elizabeth smiled at Max then looked down the hall of the high school. Max's green eyes glittered in the sun light comming from the window next to their lockers. "I can't believe this is the last day of school!" Elizabeth said excitedly. "Yeah! Next year we'll be seniors!" Max said smiling. "Seniors..." Elizabeth muttered to herself. As the bell rang Elizabeth and Max ran to the cafeteria where they would have a party till school got out. When they entered the cafeteria music came over the speakers, people were asking their friends what their phone numbers and e-mail addresses were. Some people were dancing, some even doing the chicken dance! Max smiled and grabbed Elizabeth's hand and walked over to the middle of the dance floor. Elizabeth and Max talked, danced, and sang. Time flew by fast all of a sudden the bell rang and shouts filled the air as people ran out the door full of excitement. "Get on your IM ok?" Max said to Elizabeth as they got in their cars.

Should i keep writing?

Ooo i like it :D keep goingg.




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I'll write more if i can get three more post plz :)

keep on writing! I need to know more!

Great so far! Keep going! :)

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Keep writing. That's all I have to say.

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♥~Chapter 2~♥
ElizabethLaughs2Hard has signed on. Elizabeth scrolled down her buddy list and looked for Max."That's odd..." Elizabeth muttered."He must be getting a cookie...". MaX♥'sCookies has signed on. Max clicked on Elizabeth and a window popped up.

ElizabethLaughs2Hard: You're Late
MaX♥'sCookies: Calm down i was getting a cookie! :)
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Ok ok...so what did ya want to tell me so badly?
MaX♥'sCookies:Ok well your parents are out of town and they didn't want you to stay home all alone....I have already talk to your parents about this and they said i could.... ;)
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: You could what?!
MaX♥'sCookies: Elizabeth your comming with me to Disney World!! :)
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Awesome!!! LOL you rock Max!
MaX♥'sCookies: We're driving there tomorrow so get packed up and ill pick you up at 7:00 am ok?
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Ok! What Hotel are we staying at?
MaX♥'sCookies: We're staying at the Nickelodeon Hotel....
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Aren't we a little old for that Hotel?
MaX♥'sCookies: Your never 2 old to have fun ;) Besides you know it will be fun :)
ElizabethLaughs2Hard: I guess your right...g2g pack mister spongebobsquarepants...
Max♥'sCookies:Ok Bye see ya tomorrow!
ElizabethLaughs2Hard has signed off.
Max♥'sCookies has signed off.



I Hope you like it....It's a short chapter...Can i get five comments then ill post more if ya want!

PLEASE POST MORE!! its good!

Sounds good so far, keep writing!

♥~Chapter 3~♥
Elizabeth couldn't sleep that night she was so excited! Max didn't sleep much either he kept going over the directions to Disney World in his head. Max was afraid he would take the wrong turn tomorrow. In the morning Elizabeth grabbed her suit case, locked the front door to her house and sat in the grass till she saw Max's car pull up. "Im tired" Max yawned as he got out of the car. Max grabbed Elizabeth's suit case and put it in the back of the car then pulled her car door open. Max and Elizabeth got in and looked around. Elizabeth smiled at Max then turned down the radio. " How many hours will it take to get their?" Elizabeth said with a sigh. " Five hours at the most..." Max yawned and looked at Elizabeth then back at the rode. Elizabeth pulled out her portable DVD player and watched Potc1. Max couldn't watch the movie but he could listen and imagine the picture. At eleven a clock they stopped for lunch at McDonalds. Elizabeth ordered a salad while Max stuffed his face in his quarter pounder. Elizabeth Smiled at Max she knew they would be at the hotel very soon. At eleven thirty they pulled up to the Nickelodeon Hotel. "Stay here ill go get the key to your room and my room and ill help you carry your stuff up." Max said walking away to the front entrance. Elizabeth looked around and sat straight up with excitment. Max came back to the car shaking two keys in his hand. Max opened Elizabeth's door and got her stuff out. They took the elevator up to Elizabeth's room which was on the very top floor and Max's room was right underneath it. Elizabeth told Max to go take a nap till three a clock because he was starting to be grumpy. While Max was sleeping Elizabeth thought she should walk around the hotel and see what all was there.

LOL hope you like it,It took a while to type but it was worth it! Any comments?! :)

It awesome! most deffinately keep writing!!

keep on writing!! you know you should publish it.. I would buy it..

Keeeeep wriiiiiting...@_@

Nice.

But, every time a new person talks you make a new paragraph.

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Write moooorrreeee!!!

Plz write more =]

♥~Chapter 4~♥

Elizabeth looked at her watch. She knew that Max could only sleep for about one hour so she had time to sneak about the hotel. A guy in a SpongeBobSquarePants costume waved at Elizabeth. While Elizabeth waved back at SpongeBob she bumped into someone. "Oh sorry miss..... Elizabeth!?" Elizabeth got up she didn't see who she ran into but his voice was very famialiar. "Jack!?" Elizabeth was surprised. She never thought she would see Jack again! Elizabeth and Jack were best buds in 7th grade but then he moved to Orlando when his Dad got a new job. Jack opened his arms wide open and Elizabeth ran right in to give him a hug. "I never thought i would see you again!" Elizabeth said still hugging Jack. Jack and Elizabeth stopped hugging and went to sit in front of the little lake outside. "What's new?" Elizabeth asked. "Well i work at WDW" Jack said and gave Elizabeth a smile. Elizabeth and Jack had made a promise the night Jack was leaving. The promise was that they would both work at WDW for as long as they could stand it. Elizabeth and Jack were both Disney freaks. "Me and my friend are going to WDW tomorrow." Elizabeth said while looking into the water. "When I'm not working maybe we can hang out and the days im not working i can get you and your firend in for free." Jack said pulling on Elizabeth's hair. Elizabeth laughed, Jack always liked to pull on her hair like it was a chu-chu-train's horn. "Who is your friend anyway?" Jack asked while Elizabeth looked at her watch. "His name is Max and he is really nice you want to come meet him?" Elizabeth said standing up and pulling on Jack's hand.

Hope you like it i'll try to write more later

Sounds like a cliffhanger to me;)

I like it keep up the goooooooooood work!!:D

Glad ya like it! At least three comments before i write more peoples! :)

I like this story so far! :)
Can't wait to read more! :D

1 more comment and i'll write the next chapter :)

Very good, now write more!

~♥ Chapter 5~♥
"How long have you known this guy?" Jack asked as Elizabeth grabbed his hand and ran to the elevator. "Two years i think you two will get along just fine!" Elizabeth said a little worried. " What ever you say Liz." Jack said while Elizabeth pushed the elevator button. While they ran out of the elevator Max heard Elizabeth's voice and wondered who she was talking to. He looked outside and saw her with a boy. " Oh, great! She found a boyfriend." Max said rolling his eyes and he closed the blinds as fast as he could while Elizabeth knocked on the door. " Come on in Liz." Max said while getting three sodes out of the mini fridge. Elizabeth slid the card in the door and opened it. "Max meet Jack." Elizabeth said smiling half nervous half excited. "Wazup?" Max said taking a drink of his soda. Elizabeth sat next to Max on cough opening her soda. "Nothing much..." Jack said sitting next to Elizabeth. Jack's phone rang and he said he had to go. As Jack left Max couldn't help but be a little mad. "Where's your boyfriend going?" Max said raising his eyebrows at Elizabeth. Elizabeth looked at Max. "He isn't my boyfriend just my friend that i bumped into while you we're asleep."


Hope you like it it's a little short because i'm tired and i can hardly stay awake!

Bump! anyone want to comment?

Unless somebody comments I'm going to quit writing....

I love it, is this your first story you have ever wrote? :)

Ah!!! Write more!!! It's SOOO Awesome!!!! XD!

-:pirate: Simba :pinch8:

I'm addicted to yer story. o_o
It fascinates me! Who knew reading was so fun! :D
I think i'll go read it again! XD

~Destiny

♥~Chapter 6~♥
"Well then who was he?" Max asked still a little confused. "He was my best friend in 7th grade but then he moved and I bumped into him down stairs in the lobby. "Ok...." Max said sitting down on the couch. " Just give him a chances he's not a bad guy i promise you." Elizabeth said a little worried. "Alright! I'll give him a chance..." Max said looking up to the celeling. "Thanks Max." Elizabeth said while she sat down next to Max and gave him a hug. Max and Elizabeth got up and went down stairs to the lobby and walked around for a while. "Hey! Hey!" Someone said from behind them. Max whipped his head around and there stood Jack hanging up his cell phone. "That was my boss he said i can skip work tomorrow!" Jack said smiling and looking from Elizabeth to Max. "Will you excuse me for a minute?" Max said turning to go to the boy's room. As Max washed his hands he said to himself under his breath ''I will not let him ruin Me and Elizabeth's vacation."

Hope ya like it can i get 3 comments please? sorry its so short i had to go somewhere....

Sounds good, keep writing, but I would write a lot at a time.

Yep, good so far! :) Keep writing!

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