Ok this is my new idea I need to write a script you can volunteer to help more details later here is the cast so far

Jackthorn : Jackthorn ( Debonair Daredevil )

CL_Jacky : CL_Jacky
__________________________________________________ _______________
Hiring:

Guest1 : auditions sometime soon

People on street :
MarathonMan, Tinklover, CL_ChrisR, SteelerYOYO, Signalcorps, CL_Jacky, Conrad, RogerRabbit, Olga, ( need 1 more )

Inappropriate Boys: Need volunteers ( need 3 more )
coolwatup, DFreak1989, barfrownz

Inappropriate Girls : Need volunteers ( need 5 more )

Slave Girls : ( I am not hiring Slave Girls until pirate costume comes out or halloween whichever comes first )

Cast Member : ( I am not hiring a regular person to play a cast member until I know for sure that none of the real cast members will do it )

The Phantom : Hiring Soon

Warp : Hiring Soon

one : Hiring Soon

Walt Disney: Hiring Soon
__________________________________________________ _______________

The Script

VMK
the Movie
Directed by: Jack Thorn
Copyright 2005 Jackthorn

Prologue: It is the future of VMK everyone wears virtual helmets to maximize the fun of the game. While many if not all of the original players quit Jackthorn has returned to make good on a personal promise to see how VMK would be 5 years after he quit…




Scene 1

(A bunch of people are standing around talking)

Person 1: Hey guys did you here about the “phantom “

Person 2: oh please dude it doesn’t exist it’s just some rumor somebody made up

(Everyone in group starts arguing)

Rich Girl: AH

(Everyone runs over to girl)

Person 3: What Happened?!

Rich Girl: I just had all my credits stolen!

(Everyone makes emoticons such as @_@, -_-, -.-, O_O, <_<, >_>)

Person 4: Oh come on people why would we believe her she lies about everything

Rich Girl: B-B-But

Person 5: ya you’re right she does... but I say that we just go about and collect our credits so this doesn’t get into a big fight
(Everyone agrees except Rich Girl who is crying)

(Guest 1 walks in)

Guest 1: Oh dear now that wasn’t very kind was it how could they possibly treat you like that!

Rich Girl: I d-don’t know

Guest1: Come with me I can help you

Rich Girl: Ok! 

End Scene 1

Scene 2

(Meanwhile)

(Jackthorn enters)

Jackthorn: so then this is how VMK turned out… well I admit it’s not as bad as I thought it would be but still I mean I didn’t think that this much could change in VMK in just a couple of moons.

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: hello

Jackthorn: who are you?

Guest1: I am the superior being, the one who is to rule VMK

Jackthorn: WHAT?!

(Two slave girls enter)

Slave Girl: What is your bidding master?

Guest1: Get rid of him

Jackthorn: well this is new…

(Slave girl uses weird magic)

(Magic passes through Jackthorn)

Jackthorn: So is this like a new fad or something?

Guest1: (scowls) come you worthless lump

Slave Girl: Yes master.

(Slave Girl and Guest1 leave)

Jackthorn: Ok…

End Scene 2

Scene 3

Person 6: all right time to check up on Esmerelda

Esmerelda: The time of doom is upon us all soon we shall all be slaves to the dark will of an evil king.

Person 6: rrrright

(Person 7 comes in from jungle teleport)

Person 7: Ah Ned’s gone Haywire!!!

End Scene 3

Scene 4

(Person 6 and 7 walk in through teleport)

(Ned is bouncing around the room)

Ned: Ow Ow I’ve been beheaded

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: RUN AWAY

(Everyone starts disappearing)

(No one is able to get on VMK)

End Scene 4

Scene 5

(VMK Forums)

(Various members are arguing about what to do)

Person 8: Arg can’t you guys see it it must be the phantom!
I mean can’t you see that ever since the rumors started strange things have been happening all over VMK

Person 7: Ya you’re right

(Everyone starts urging Person 8 try to go back into VMK)

Person 8: well it can’t hurt to try

(Person 8 gets on)

Person 8: Wow I can’t believe I managed to get on well to business then most of the NPC’s are acting funny so I guess I should check out the Matterhorn.

( Person 8 enters Matterhorn)

(The Yeti’s fur is gone and he is shivering on stage)

Yeti: Hey is it just me or is it cold in here somebody turn on a heater!

Yeti gr I am so calling my lawyer!

Person 8: Ok this is definitely not normal but it’s to bad the phantom couldn’t make the yeti’s jokes a little less cheesy…

Guest1: What happened?!

Person8: The Phantom!

Guest1: Gr that Phantom has really been messing with VMK!

Person8: Hey wait why are you titled Guest1?

Guest1: Follow me all will become clear soon.

Person8: Well ok...

End Scene 5

Scene 6
(VMK forums)

Person 9: This is getting ridiculous I might even quit VMK!

Person 10: Oh chill out it’s just a few bugs

Person 4: A few bugs!!! Didn’t you hear what happened to that club! It was destroyed!!!

Person 2: It doesn’t matter the staff doesn’t believe any of it they think it’s just some other hacker who’ll get caught by their security system…

Person 9: If who ever is doing this is just a hacker then they aren’t gonna get caught think about it clearly they have already outsmarted VMK’s system!

(A huge argument erupts)

End Scene 6

Scene 7

(3 days later everyone is able to get into VMK without any trouble so far…)

Person 4: WOOT I’m finally on!

Person 5: Ya! Hey wanna go check out Captain Blackheart to celebrate?

Person 4: Sure why not lol

(Person 4 and 5 enter Pirate Tree House)

Captain Blackheart: Steal my credits ay? Well I’m not gonna take it no more!

(Captain Blackheart throws his sword at Person 5)

(Phantom enters and grabs the sword)

Person 5: Hey you’re the phantom!

Phantom: Hey you’re somebody I’ve never heard of…

Person 4: That’s not funny you’ve been sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Wow so the new way to thank people for saving their lives is being tacky I’ll remember that

Person 5: Shut up everyone knows you’re sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Uh where exactly is the proof?

Person 4: Because people are saying so all the time!

Phantom: … - cough lousy excuse cough-

(Phantom hurls sword straight at Captain Blackheart scraping his arm and exits)

Person 5: what an idiot.

End Scene 7

Scene 8

(Jackthorn enters esplanade)

Guest1: I’ve been waiting for you Jackthorn

Jackthorn: Oh great it’s you.

Guest1: I have been waiting for a long time to do this ATTACK!

(Slave Girls appear and use the strange magic)

(One appears in front of Jackthorn)

One: BACK WITH YOU I WON’T LET YOU HURT HIM

(One sticks out hand and the weird magic forms into a ball in his hand)

(The magic is deflected to the left and right)

Guest1: GAH I WAS SO CLOSE

(Guest1 and the slave girls disappear)

Jackthorn: What is happening, and why does it seem to happen to me?!

One: It’s a long story

Jackthorn: I got time.

End scene 8

Scene 9

(People are having a discussion in VMK)

Person 2: I don’t get it ever since phantom came everything is going wrong but how could he have possibly managed to hack VMK and not get busted unless…

Person 3: Wait you don’t mean?!

Person 7: What are you talking about?

Person 9: Here let me explain when VMK was first made there was a producer named Yavn he was the top he knew everything but in the technology jump of 2008 he didn’t get how to work the machines so he was fired… but it’s said that he planted some sort of program before he was fired allowing him access to top secret stuff.

Person 7: So then you guys think that the Phantom is Yavn

Person 2: Exactly

(Phantom steps out from the doorway)

Phantom: I still don’t get why you people think I did it… I mean as cool as it would be to have mad powers I don’t.

Person 6: Shut your face Phantom!

Person 10: boot time.

(Phantom disappears)

CL_Jacky: You know I’m not so sure if he is the bad guy.

Person 6: What do you mean?!

CL_Jacky: Well if he was the hacker then wouldn’t he ha-

Person 10: Humph if you aren’t with us your against us!

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: indeed I’m getting tired of that Phantom messing with VMK!

Person 10: Hey who are you?

Guest1: A friend.

End Scene 9

starts with everyone meeting in town square. ppl start talking about the new news letter of a phantom stealing everyones credits. someone extremely wealthy runs in and shouts "i just got all my credits stolen!!!!!" everyone is like "omg!@!@!!11!!" then when everyone starts to leave,a strange person walks in titled "Guest1"

more on the way

starts with everyone meeting in town square. ppl start talking about the new news letter of a phantom stealing everyones credits. someone extremely wealthy runs in and shouts "i just got all my credits stolen!!!!!" everyone is like "omg!@!@!!11!!" then when everyone starts to leave,a strange person walks in titled "Guest1"

more on the way

That's ******** ingenious you should write it!

u think i should? that idea just popped into my head. i will start typing more right away :):):)

EDIT-next part

They then head into the emporium to get their daily credits for the day. Someone (need name) clicks on esmerelda first. To his/her surprise esmerelda has no credits!! Her info box says “I see the future,and it is dull for I have no more free credits to give out” “omg!” another great player comes out of the jungle cruise teleporter saying “ned has gone hay wire!” they move on through the teleporter to see what is up with our friend ned.

EDIT-next part

They get in and ned is bouncing around! Someone cut the string that was holding his head up near the roof. And also the cash register was smashed into many many pieces. All of a sudden a player in the group of ppl loses connection. Guest1 then walks in through door way and says “stop following me…” they all lose connection

EDIT-next part

They could not log in for several hours. While on vmk fan site they started a thread about this phantom stealing credits and what happened to ned and esmerelda. Someone(okay player) suggests trying to log on again and report the guest,so the leader (w/e person) logs on and goes to the matterhorn,where he/she find the yeti with out any fur! He is now saying things such as “turn up the heat its cold in here!” and “I wish I would not have gotten that haircut before” and “im calling my lawyer” guest1 is dancing on stage with the yeti. Person that went into vmk loses connection again.


that is all i have for now jackthorn,i will make some more later

this is good!

next part

room a club somewhere

Boys in a line singing inappropriate song

Girls in a line sing inappropriate song

Cast member : this is pathitic i'm shutting this place d-falls on floor -

People in Club : haha sucker you are a loser haha

Slave girls emerge from entrance

Slave girl 1 : You're souls belong to our master!

Slave girl 2 : - Uses wierd magic -

( People in club panic and drop on floor one by one )

Slave girls together : muahahaha

this is what will happen in the future lol

i want to try out this is so good have u should be like movie writers.

I will be a what ever in the movie!

meh, i will be a communitly leader on the block helping people. then i join the group then i can tell them about what is going on


it is for the random person or the ???

I can be anything! Count me in!
~!STEELERSYOYO

I can be a random bystander.

Plea tell me what I can be but if I read right I want to be a VMK_ person!

Plea tell me what I can be but if I read right I want to be a VMK_ person!

On my first post I have put you and other people as random bystanders me XschmoofyX (sp?) will put together some stuff for you guys to say just be patient this is gonna take awhile.

I would like to volunteer to join this if there is still room to join.

LOL
As weird as this sounded at first, I read it.. and I actually like it ALOT :)

Love
Britta

Lol this script sounds real good I like the part the most when the slaves come out of nowhere stealing there souls. I would love to do anything in this movie pure genius. :wave2:

sign me up!

I'll try out for Guest1 and if I don't make it, I'll try ???. (And if that even fails, I'll try out for a person on the street.)

Also, can there be/are there twin people? (Because I kinda always wanted to be somebody's twin in VMK. :D)

LOL I'll be an innappropriate boy. LOL :lachen70: :lachen70: :lachen70:

I'll try out for Guest1 and if I don't make it, I'll try ???. (And if that even fails, I'll try out for a person on the street.)

I'm not casting guest1 or ??? yet if you want to be them you need to wait until me and XschmoofyX finish it. ( sorry )

I'm not casting guest1 or ??? yet if you want to be them you need to wait until me and XschmoofyX finish it. ( sorry ) Oh, okay. (I get confused after homework and can't understand a thing. O.o)

starts with everyone meeting in town square. ppl start talking about the new news letter of a phantom stealing everyones credits. someone extremely wealthy runs in and shouts "i just got all my credits stolen!!!!!" everyone is like "omg!@!@!!11!!" then when everyone starts to leave,a strange person walks in titled "Guest1"

more on the way
i can be the rich person i have four grand!

can i make some of the movie

If anybody wants to be Guest1 or ??? the auditions are open it is not popular so instead type try outs

i want to try oput for Guest1

ill be in it

If anybody wants to be Guest1 or ??? the auditions are open it is not popular so instead type try outs


i will be inoppropiate boy

How will we try out for guest1 or for ???

I would like to try out for one of them when tryouts are open :)

can i be at least the guest1 or the leader that says lets try and go back on etc. ?

can i be at least the guest1 or the leader that says lets try and go back on etc. ?

try outs were held nobody came so i will do my own casting

try outs were held nobody came so i will do my own casting
When were the try outs held??

The try outs weren't posted in this thread thats not FAIR! :mad: :mad:

Where were they posted? I was hoping to try out..

By the way, how would we be trying out anyway?

Down With JACKTHORN! he should be banded from the forums for this!

Why on earth would they ban him for this? He just didn't tell us when the try outs were. Its not a crime, and its really not that big of a deal. You still have a chance of getting the part. Its just that there won't be try outs like he originally said.

Down With JACKTHORN! he should be banded from the forums for this!

No you should be banned from the forums for flaming chill out would you I am rescheduling but if something so small sets you off then chances are you won't be in it...

oh and by the way

If anybody wants to be Guest1 or ??? the auditions are open it is not popular so instead type try outs

look familiar? I am holding them when i finish the script so in a week at the very least

No you should be banned from the forums for flaming chill out would you I am rescheduling but if something so small sets you off then chances are you won't be in it...

When will you be rescheduling it to? And I just though of this, are the roles of guest1 and ??? for girls or boys only?

EDIT: I just saw your last post. How do we try out and where?

When will you be rescheduling it to? And I just though of this, are the roles of guest1 and ??? for girls or boys only?

try outs are now see post above you ( btw they are in try outs that is the name of the room )
Guest1 I want to be a boy
??? I want to be a girl.

OK I'm coming now :)

I would like to be a slave girl when the parts are avalible(sp?)

I want to be an innappropriate girl. I always wanted to be bad.
hehe :fly:

Can i be like a detective kind of guy?

Can i try out? i be anyone i dont care

can i be a slave girl?

i will take the screens for it jackthorn,if nobody says anything but thwta they are supposed to say it will work out,or then photoshop comes in handy ;)

anyway u mentioned costumes,
phantom-pure white
main characters-VMK clothes,such as the vmk tees and such
innopropriate boys/girls-skull shirts
staff member-staff clothes

o yah,and heres the next part i thought of,its not in form yet just ideas-
captain is making all his swabbies walk the plank for stealing his credits,the dragon is actually flaming ppl. then the club,those boys/girls singing are mule accounts of guest1 AKA-phantom

i will hvae more later i need to go to school,ttyl :wave2:

I think the slave girls would look great in the upcoming pirate costumes..

Btw i would like to be a slave girl

I think the slave girls would look great in the upcoming pirate costumes..

Btw i would like to be a slave girl

That is why I am waiting lol I can't be on monday- thursday i'll explain later don't ask questions g2g

I so so want to have an important part, i am a real actor in real life

and im a fast typer lol

Ah I just saw the update! I'm me! :D hehe...

My first acting job!! lol. thanks again Jackthorn! :)

Inappropriate Boys: Need volunteers ( need 3 more )
coolwatup, DFreak1989, barfrownz

Inappropriate Girls : Need volunteers ( need 5 more )

Slave Girls : ( I am not hiring Slave Girls until pirate comes out or halloween whichever comes first )


Why are you having innappropriate girls, innappropriate boys, and slave girls in the movie? I don't think those three are nessacery.

can i add a part to the play(guest2)

no guest2,guest1 is freaky enough.

next part(already posted but added on)

captain is making all his swabbies walk the plank for stealing his credits,the dragon is actually flaming ppl.

then the club,those boys/girls singing are mule accounts of guest1 AKA-phantom. VMK_(name here) walks in and empties the room. guest1 comes in and boots VMK_(name here)

well can i be a cast member VMK_billy-hill

Why are you having innappropriate girls, innappropriate boys, and slave girls in the movie? I don't think those three are nessacery.

LOL the inappropriate boys is just something to make fun of the stupidity of some of the fads you will see slave girls play a very intricate part of the movie you will see..

yah,just read back some,lol...jackthorn,i have more made but i am watching lost so i will post it tomorrow

Funny Script.. lol.

jackthorn!!!!!!!!!

omgz i <3 the way u wrote up the script!!!!
awesome work dude!!!

I'm working on a movie too.

This one sounds cool though!

jackthorn!!!!!!!!!

omgz i <3 the way u wrote up the script!!!!
awesome work dude!!!

Thank you and I would also like to ask your permission to change some of the things you wrote ( if you don't like it say so and i will change it )

u can change w/e u want,but if it sounds stupid or it changes to omgz how bad,i will tell u

I would like to be walt disney!

I am making this post my heres what I added post so I will edit here when I add stuff to the script.

i want to be an inaproppiate boy or a cast member

Ok now since this movie will require costumes I am making a note: get your own or borrow one I don't know whether I can provide them or not.

Ok now since this movie will require costumes I am making a note: get your own or borrow one I don't know whether I can provide them or not.

Any idea of what I will need to wear?

Ok this is my new idea I need to write a script you can volunteer to help more details later here is the cast so far

Jackthorn : Jackthorn ( Debonair Daredevil )

CL_Jacky : CL_Jacky
__________________________________________________ _______________
Hiring:

Guest1 : auditions sometime soon

People on street :
MarathonMan, Tinklover, CL_ChrisR, SteelerYOYO, Signalcorps, CL_Jacky, Conrad, RogerRabbit, Olga, ( need 1 more )

Inappropriate Boys: Need volunteers ( need 3 more )
coolwatup, DFreak1989, barfrownz

Inappropriate Girls : Need volunteers ( need 5 more )

Slave Girls : ( I am not hiring Slave Girls until pirate costume comes out or halloween whichever comes first )

Cast Member : ( I am not hiring a regular person to play a cast member until I know for sure that none of the real cast members will do it )

The Phantom : Hiring Soon

Warp : Hiring Soon

one : Hiring Soon

Walt Disney: Hiring Soon
__________________________________________________ _______________

The Script

VMK
the Movie
Directed by: Jack Thorn



Prologue: It is the future of VMK everyone wears virtual helmets to maximize the fun of the game. While many if not all of the original players quit Jackthorn has returned to make good on a personal promise to see how VMK would be 5 years after he quit…




Scene 1

(A bunch of people are standing around talking)

Person 1: Hey guys did you here about the “phantom “

Person 2: oh please dude it doesn’t exist it’s just some rumor somebody made up

(Everyone in group starts arguing)

Rich Girl: AH

(Everyone runs over to girl)

Person 3: What Happened?!

Rich Girl: I just had all my credits stolen!

(Everyone makes emoticons such as @_@, -_-, -.-, O_O, <_<, >_>)

Person 4: Oh come on people why would we believe her she lies about everything

Rich Girl: B-B-But

Person 5: ya you’re right she does... but I say that we just go about and collect our credits so this doesn’t get into a big fight
(Everyone agrees except Rich Girl who is crying)

(Guest 1 walks in)

Guest 1: Oh dear now that wasn’t very kind was it how could they possibly treat you like that!

Rich Girl: I d-don’t know

Guest1: Come with me I can help you

Rich Girl: Ok! 

End Scene 1

Scene 2

(Meanwhile)

(Jackthorn enters)

Jackthorn: so then this is how VMK turned out… well I admit it’s not as bad as I thought it would be but still I mean I didn’t think that this much could change in VMK in just a couple of moons.

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: hello

Jackthorn: who are you?

Guest1: I am the superior being, the one who is to rule VMK

Jackthorn: WHAT?!

(Two slave girls enter)

Slave Girl: What is your bidding master?

Guest1: Get rid of him

Jackthorn: well this is new…

(Slave girl uses weird magic)

(Magic passes through Jackthorn)

Jackthorn: So is this like a new fad or something?

Guest1: (scowls) come you worthless lump

Slave Girl: Yes master.

(Slave Girl and Guest1 leave)

Jackthorn: Ok…

End Scene 2

Scene 3

Person 6: all right time to check up on Esmerelda

Esmerelda: The time of doom is upon us all soon we shall all be slaves to the dark will of an evil king.

Person 6: rrrright

(Person 7 comes in from jungle teleport)

Person 7: Ah Ned’s gone Haywire!!!

End Scene 3

Scene 4

(Person 6 and 7 walk in through teleport)

(Ned is bouncing around the room)

Ned: Ow Ow I’ve been beheaded

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: RUN AWAY

(Everyone starts disappearing)

(No one is able to get on VMK)

End Scene 4

Scene 5

(VMK Forums)

(Various members are arguing about what to do)

Person 8: Arg can’t you guys see it it must be the phantom!
I mean can’t you see that ever since the rumors started strange things have been happening all over VMK

Person 7: Ya you’re right

(Everyone starts urging Person 8 try to go back into VMK)

Person 8: well it can’t hurt to try

(Person 8 gets on)

Person 8: Wow I can’t believe I managed to get on well to business then most of the NPC’s are acting funny so I guess I should check out the Matterhorn.

( Person 8 enters Matterhorn)

(The Yeti’s fur is gone and he is shivering on stage)

Yeti: Hey is it just me or is it cold in here somebody turn on a heater!

Yeti gr I am so calling my lawyer!

Person 8: Ok this is definitely not normal but it’s to bad the phantom couldn’t make the yeti’s jokes a little less cheesy…

Guest1: What happened?!

Person8: The Phantom!

Guest1: Gr that Phantom has really been messing with VMK!

Person8: Hey wait why are you titled Guest1?

Guest1: Follow me all will become clear soon.

Person8: Well ok...

End Scene 5

Scene 6
(VMK forums)

Person 9: This is getting ridiculous I might even quit VMK!

Person 10: Oh chill out it’s just a few bugs

Person 4: A few bugs!!! Didn’t you hear what happened to that club! It was destroyed!!!

Person 2: It doesn’t matter the staff doesn’t believe any of it they think it’s just some other hacker who’ll get caught by their security system…

Person 9: If who ever is doing this is just a hacker then they aren’t gonna get caught think about it clearly they have already outsmarted VMK’s system!

(A huge argument erupts)

End Scene 6

Scene 7

(3 days later everyone is able to get into VMK without any trouble so far…)

Person 4: WOOT I’m finally on!

Person 5: Ya! Hey wanna go check out Captain Blackheart to celebrate?

Person 4: Sure why not lol

(Person 4 and 5 enter Pirate Tree House)

Captain Blackheart: Steal my credits ay? Well I’m not gonna take it no more!

(Captain Blackheart throws his sword at Person 5)

(Phantom enters and grabs the sword)

Person 5: Hey you’re the phantom!

Phantom: Hey you’re somebody I’ve never heard of…

Person 4: That’s not funny you’ve been sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Wow so the new way to thank people for saving their lives is being tacky I’ll remember that

Person 5: Shut up everyone knows you’re sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Uh where exactly is the proof?

Person 4: Because people are saying so all the time!

Phantom: … - cough lousy excuse cough-

(Phantom hurls sword straight at Captain Blackheart scraping his arm and exits)

Person 5: what an idiot.

End Scene 7

i am srry i was flaming i shall delete it and that script is just awesome! so i'm here to say SORRY! :sadd2: :sadd2:

This thread is so BUMPtastic!

So... when is this whole thing going to start again?

that is so cool

Copyright 2005 Jackthorn

dude thats sooooooooooooooooooooooooo good of u,u were getting copied

So... when is this whole thing going to start again?

Well first I'm waiting to see if Lemony will shut down his thread by himself or if I have to get a mod on it (I still think it would be great if he could help) but I have started writing again have you seen scene 8 that's the end of my character until like the very end.

No I don't think I've seen scene 8 yet, I'll have to check after I finish this maze... Is my character in the story? lol

OK I finally added more phantom and CL_Jacky Phantom will be seen more often and YES my character is going bye bye in about 2 or 3 scenes. (Hey XSchmoofyX what happened you still helping? lol)

Hey can I help out Jackthorn?

can I help out? I would love to be in it. It sounds fun

I will be a person on street!

ok just to make people look this is my hiring post heres who I want first PHANTOM first to post "I want to be phantom" wins.

I want to be phantom

me! me! i want to be in the play!!:wave2: :Tongue:

can i be this "One" person in scene 8?

can i be an in appropriate girl plz if it is possible

actually i want to be the yeti if it hasn't already been taken

i want to be the phantom. if the phantom is yavn in disguise i can look just like him. and yes the movie i made is CANCELLED so you don't have to yell at me anyomore.

this movie sounds good!!

How can you make an movie with virtual and fan site ppl?

actually i want to be the yeti if it hasn't already been taken

srry but how will you be the yeti? when most of his words you can't say? how will you look like him (if possible plz post picture)? so just riddle me that so don't get mad if you don't get the part....

Ok this is my new idea I need to write a script you can volunteer to help more details later here is the cast so far

Jackthorn : Jackthorn ( Debonair Daredevil )

CL_Jacky : CL_Jacky
__________________________________________________ _______________
Hiring:

Guest1 : auditions sometime soon

People on street :
MarathonMan, Tinklover, CL_ChrisR, SteelerYOYO, Signalcorps, CL_Jacky, Conrad, RogerRabbit, Olga, ( need 1 more )

Inappropriate Boys: Need volunteers ( need 3 more )
coolwatup, DFreak1989, barfrownz

Inappropriate Girls : Need volunteers ( need 5 more )

Slave Girls : ( I am not hiring Slave Girls until pirate costume comes out or halloween whichever comes first )

Cast Member : ( I am not hiring a regular person to play a cast member until I know for sure that none of the real cast members will do it )

The Phantom : Hiring Soon

Warp : Hiring Soon

one : Hiring Soon

Walt Disney: Hiring Soon
__________________________________________________ _______________

The Script

VMK
the Movie
Directed by: Jack Thorn
Copyright 2005 Jackthorn

Prologue: It is the future of VMK everyone wears virtual helmets to maximize the fun of the game. While many if not all of the original players quit Jackthorn has returned to make good on a personal promise to see how VMK would be 5 years after he quit…




Scene 1

(A bunch of people are standing around talking)

Person 1: Hey guys did you here about the “phantom “

Person 2: oh please dude it doesn’t exist it’s just some rumor somebody made up

(Everyone in group starts arguing)

Rich Girl: AH

(Everyone runs over to girl)

Person 3: What Happened?!

Rich Girl: I just had all my credits stolen!

(Everyone makes emoticons such as @_@, -_-, -.-, O_O, <_<, >_>)

Person 4: Oh come on people why would we believe her she lies about everything

Rich Girl: B-B-But

Person 5: ya you’re right she does... but I say that we just go about and collect our credits so this doesn’t get into a big fight
(Everyone agrees except Rich Girl who is crying)

(Guest 1 walks in)

Guest 1: Oh dear now that wasn’t very kind was it how could they possibly treat you like that!

Rich Girl: I d-don’t know

Guest1: Come with me I can help you

Rich Girl: Ok! 

End Scene 1

Scene 2

(Meanwhile)

(Jackthorn enters)

Jackthorn: so then this is how VMK turned out… well I admit it’s not as bad as I thought it would be but still I mean I didn’t think that this much could change in VMK in just a couple of moons.

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: hello

Jackthorn: who are you?

Guest1: I am the superior being, the one who is to rule VMK

Jackthorn: WHAT?!

(Two slave girls enter)

Slave Girl: What is your bidding master?

Guest1: Get rid of him

Jackthorn: well this is new…

(Slave girl uses weird magic)

(Magic passes through Jackthorn)

Jackthorn: So is this like a new fad or something?

Guest1: (scowls) come you worthless lump

Slave Girl: Yes master.

(Slave Girl and Guest1 leave)

Jackthorn: Ok…

End Scene 2

Scene 3

Person 6: all right time to check up on Esmerelda

Esmerelda: The time of doom is upon us all soon we shall all be slaves to the dark will of an evil king.

Person 6: rrrright

(Person 7 comes in from jungle teleport)

Person 7: Ah Ned’s gone Haywire!!!

End Scene 3

Scene 4

(Person 6 and 7 walk in through teleport)

(Ned is bouncing around the room)

Ned: Ow Ow I’ve been beheaded

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: RUN AWAY

(Everyone starts disappearing)

(No one is able to get on VMK)

End Scene 4

Scene 5

(VMK Forums)

(Various members are arguing about what to do)

Person 8: Arg can’t you guys see it it must be the phantom!
I mean can’t you see that ever since the rumors started strange things have been happening all over VMK

Person 7: Ya you’re right

(Everyone starts urging Person 8 try to go back into VMK)

Person 8: well it can’t hurt to try

(Person 8 gets on)

Person 8: Wow I can’t believe I managed to get on well to business then most of the NPC’s are acting funny so I guess I should check out the Matterhorn.

( Person 8 enters Matterhorn)

(The Yeti’s fur is gone and he is shivering on stage)

Yeti: Hey is it just me or is it cold in here somebody turn on a heater!

Yeti gr I am so calling my lawyer!

Person 8: Ok this is definitely not normal but it’s to bad the phantom couldn’t make the yeti’s jokes a little less cheesy…

Guest1: What happened?!

Person8: The Phantom!

Guest1: Gr that Phantom has really been messing with VMK!

Person8: Hey wait why are you titled Guest1?

Guest1: Follow me all will become clear soon.

Person8: Well ok...

End Scene 5

Scene 6
(VMK forums)

Person 9: This is getting ridiculous I might even quit VMK!

Person 10: Oh chill out it’s just a few bugs

Person 4: A few bugs!!! Didn’t you hear what happened to that club! It was destroyed!!!

Person 2: It doesn’t matter the staff doesn’t believe any of it they think it’s just some other hacker who’ll get caught by their security system…

Person 9: If who ever is doing this is just a hacker then they aren’t gonna get caught think about it clearly they have already outsmarted VMK’s system!

(A huge argument erupts)

End Scene 6

Scene 7

(3 days later everyone is able to get into VMK without any trouble so far…)

Person 4: WOOT I’m finally on!

Person 5: Ya! Hey wanna go check out Captain Blackheart to celebrate?

Person 4: Sure why not lol

(Person 4 and 5 enter Pirate Tree House)

Captain Blackheart: Steal my credits ay? Well I’m not gonna take it no more!

(Captain Blackheart throws his sword at Person 5)

(Phantom enters and grabs the sword)

Person 5: Hey you’re the phantom!

Phantom: Hey you’re somebody I’ve never heard of…

Person 4: That’s not funny you’ve been sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Wow so the new way to thank people for saving their lives is being tacky I’ll remember that

Person 5: Shut up everyone knows you’re sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Uh where exactly is the proof?

Person 4: Because people are saying so all the time!

Phantom: … - cough lousy excuse cough-

(Phantom hurls sword straight at Captain Blackheart scraping his arm and exits)

Person 5: what an idiot.

End Scene 7

Scene 8

(Jackthorn enters esplanade)

Guest1: I’ve been waiting for you Jackthorn

Jackthorn: Oh great it’s you.

Guest1: I have been waiting for a long time to do this ATTACK!

(Slave Girls appear and use the strange magic)

(One appears in front of Jackthorn)

One: BACK WITH YOU I WON’T LET YOU HURT HIM

(One sticks out hand and the weird magic forms into a ball in his hand)

(The magic is deflected to the left and right)

Guest1: GAH I WAS SO CLOSE

(Guest1 and the slave girls disappear)

Jackthorn: What is happening, and why does it seem to happen to me?!

One: It’s a long story

Jackthorn: I got time.

End scene 8

Scene 9

(People are having a discussion in VMK)

Person 2: I don’t get it ever since phantom came everything is going wrong but how could he have possibly managed to hack VMK and not get busted unless…

Person 3: Wait you don’t mean?!

Person 7: What are you talking about?

Person 9: Here let me explain when VMK was first made there was a producer named Yavn he was the top he knew everything but in the technology jump of 2008 he didn’t get how to work the machines so he was fired… but it’s said that he planted some sort of program before he was fired allowing him access to top secret stuff.

Person 7: So then you guys think that the Phantom is Yavn

Person 2: Exactly

(Phantom steps out from the doorway)

Phantom: I still don’t get why you people think I did it… I mean as cool as it would be to have mad powers I don’t.

Person 6: Shut your face Phantom!

Person 10: boot time.

(Phantom disappears)

CL_Jacky: You know I’m not so sure if he is the bad guy.

Person 6: What do you mean?!

CL_Jacky: Well if he was the hacker then wouldn’t he ha-

Person 10: Humph if you aren’t with us your against us!

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: indeed I’m getting tired of that Phantom messing with VMK!

Person 10: Hey who are you?

Guest1: A friend.

End Scene 9



I Love It!! May I Be In That Awesome Movie PLZ!?!?!

Ok this is my new idea I need to write a script you can volunteer to help more details later here is the cast so far

Jackthorn : Jackthorn ( Debonair Daredevil )

CL_Jacky : CL_Jacky
__________________________________________________ _______________
Hiring:

Guest1 : auditions sometime soon

People on street :
MarathonMan, Tinklover, CL_ChrisR, SteelerYOYO, Signalcorps, CL_Jacky, Conrad, RogerRabbit, Olga, ( need 1 more )

Inappropriate Boys: Need volunteers ( need 3 more )
coolwatup, DFreak1989, barfrownz

Inappropriate Girls : Need volunteers ( need 5 more )

Slave Girls : ( I am not hiring Slave Girls until pirate costume comes out or halloween whichever comes first )

Cast Member : ( I am not hiring a regular person to play a cast member until I know for sure that none of the real cast members will do it )

The Phantom : Hiring Soon

Warp : Hiring Soon

one : Hiring Soon

Walt Disney: Hiring Soon
__________________________________________________ _______________

The Script

VMK
the Movie
Directed by: Jack Thorn
Copyright 2005 Jackthorn

Prologue: It is the future of VMK everyone wears virtual helmets to maximize the fun of the game. While many if not all of the original players quit Jackthorn has returned to make good on a personal promise to see how VMK would be 5 years after he quit…




Scene 1

(A bunch of people are standing around talking)

Person 1: Hey guys did you here about the “phantom “

Person 2: oh please dude it doesn’t exist it’s just some rumor somebody made up

(Everyone in group starts arguing)

Rich Girl: AH

(Everyone runs over to girl)

Person 3: What Happened?!

Rich Girl: I just had all my credits stolen!

(Everyone makes emoticons such as @_@, -_-, -.-, O_O, <_<, >_>)

Person 4: Oh come on people why would we believe her she lies about everything

Rich Girl: B-B-But

Person 5: ya you’re right she does... but I say that we just go about and collect our credits so this doesn’t get into a big fight
(Everyone agrees except Rich Girl who is crying)

(Guest 1 walks in)

Guest 1: Oh dear now that wasn’t very kind was it how could they possibly treat you like that!

Rich Girl: I d-don’t know

Guest1: Come with me I can help you

Rich Girl: Ok! 

End Scene 1

Scene 2

(Meanwhile)

(Jackthorn enters)

Jackthorn: so then this is how VMK turned out… well I admit it’s not as bad as I thought it would be but still I mean I didn’t think that this much could change in VMK in just a couple of moons.

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: hello

Jackthorn: who are you?

Guest1: I am the superior being, the one who is to rule VMK

Jackthorn: WHAT?!

(Two slave girls enter)

Slave Girl: What is your bidding master?

Guest1: Get rid of him

Jackthorn: well this is new…

(Slave girl uses weird magic)

(Magic passes through Jackthorn)

Jackthorn: So is this like a new fad or something?

Guest1: (scowls) come you worthless lump

Slave Girl: Yes master.

(Slave Girl and Guest1 leave)

Jackthorn: Ok…

End Scene 2

Scene 3

Person 6: all right time to check up on Esmerelda

Esmerelda: The time of doom is upon us all soon we shall all be slaves to the dark will of an evil king.

Person 6: rrrright

(Person 7 comes in from jungle teleport)

Person 7: Ah Ned’s gone Haywire!!!

End Scene 3

Scene 4

(Person 6 and 7 walk in through teleport)

(Ned is bouncing around the room)

Ned: Ow Ow I’ve been beheaded

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: RUN AWAY

(Everyone starts disappearing)

(No one is able to get on VMK)

End Scene 4

Scene 5

(VMK Forums)

(Various members are arguing about what to do)

Person 8: Arg can’t you guys see it it must be the phantom!
I mean can’t you see that ever since the rumors started strange things have been happening all over VMK

Person 7: Ya you’re right

(Everyone starts urging Person 8 try to go back into VMK)

Person 8: well it can’t hurt to try

(Person 8 gets on)

Person 8: Wow I can’t believe I managed to get on well to business then most of the NPC’s are acting funny so I guess I should check out the Matterhorn.

( Person 8 enters Matterhorn)

(The Yeti’s fur is gone and he is shivering on stage)

Yeti: Hey is it just me or is it cold in here somebody turn on a heater!

Yeti gr I am so calling my lawyer!

Person 8: Ok this is definitely not normal but it’s to bad the phantom couldn’t make the yeti’s jokes a little less cheesy…

Guest1: What happened?!

Person8: The Phantom!

Guest1: Gr that Phantom has really been messing with VMK!

Person8: Hey wait why are you titled Guest1?

Guest1: Follow me all will become clear soon.

Person8: Well ok...

End Scene 5

Scene 6
(VMK forums)

Person 9: This is getting ridiculous I might even quit VMK!

Person 10: Oh chill out it’s just a few bugs

Person 4: A few bugs!!! Didn’t you hear what happened to that club! It was destroyed!!!

Person 2: It doesn’t matter the staff doesn’t believe any of it they think it’s just some other hacker who’ll get caught by their security system…

Person 9: If who ever is doing this is just a hacker then they aren’t gonna get caught think about it clearly they have already outsmarted VMK’s system!

(A huge argument erupts)

End Scene 6

Scene 7

(3 days later everyone is able to get into VMK without any trouble so far…)

Person 4: WOOT I’m finally on!

Person 5: Ya! Hey wanna go check out Captain Blackheart to celebrate?

Person 4: Sure why not lol

(Person 4 and 5 enter Pirate Tree House)

Captain Blackheart: Steal my credits ay? Well I’m not gonna take it no more!

(Captain Blackheart throws his sword at Person 5)

(Phantom enters and grabs the sword)

Person 5: Hey you’re the phantom!

Phantom: Hey you’re somebody I’ve never heard of…

Person 4: That’s not funny you’ve been sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Wow so the new way to thank people for saving their lives is being tacky I’ll remember that

Person 5: Shut up everyone knows you’re sabotaging VMK

Phantom: Uh where exactly is the proof?

Person 4: Because people are saying so all the time!

Phantom: … - cough lousy excuse cough-

(Phantom hurls sword straight at Captain Blackheart scraping his arm and exits)

Person 5: what an idiot.

End Scene 7

Scene 8

(Jackthorn enters esplanade)

Guest1: I’ve been waiting for you Jackthorn

Jackthorn: Oh great it’s you.

Guest1: I have been waiting for a long time to do this ATTACK!

(Slave Girls appear and use the strange magic)

(One appears in front of Jackthorn)

One: BACK WITH YOU I WON’T LET YOU HURT HIM

(One sticks out hand and the weird magic forms into a ball in his hand)

(The magic is deflected to the left and right)

Guest1: GAH I WAS SO CLOSE

(Guest1 and the slave girls disappear)

Jackthorn: What is happening, and why does it seem to happen to me?!

One: It’s a long story

Jackthorn: I got time.

End scene 8

Scene 9

(People are having a discussion in VMK)

Person 2: I don’t get it ever since phantom came everything is going wrong but how could he have possibly managed to hack VMK and not get busted unless…

Person 3: Wait you don’t mean?!

Person 7: What are you talking about?

Person 9: Here let me explain when VMK was first made there was a producer named Yavn he was the top he knew everything but in the technology jump of 2008 he didn’t get how to work the machines so he was fired… but it’s said that he planted some sort of program before he was fired allowing him access to top secret stuff.

Person 7: So then you guys think that the Phantom is Yavn

Person 2: Exactly

(Phantom steps out from the doorway)

Phantom: I still don’t get why you people think I did it… I mean as cool as it would be to have mad powers I don’t.

Person 6: Shut your face Phantom!

Person 10: boot time.

(Phantom disappears)

CL_Jacky: You know I’m not so sure if he is the bad guy.

Person 6: What do you mean?!

CL_Jacky: Well if he was the hacker then wouldn’t he ha-

Person 10: Humph if you aren’t with us your against us!

(Guest1 enters)

Guest1: indeed I’m getting tired of that Phantom messing with VMK!

Person 10: Hey who are you?

Guest1: A friend.

End Scene 9?
and if Warp is a girl i would like to be her

Nice play I would like to be in it. Any peticular part you would like me to play???

~Music~

I'll be an original character... not betabut like i would join present day then 5 years later im still playing, helping you defeat the phantom.. (or i can be it)