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PezDude
03-22-2007, 10:40 PM
Part 1:

-Main Street-
PezDude: Aw. What a wonderful day in Vmk
CubbyDoggie: Oh like what?
Pez: Well the sun is shining
Cub: It always does
Pez: The trees are alive and tall
Cub: They always are
Pez: The flag is standing tall and proud
Cub: It always is
Pez: And look some one put balloons out
Cub: Those are always there
Pez: -.- Why do you always have to ruin the moment
Cub: Because that’s the price you pay for switching to Geico
Pez: -.-

Part 2:

-Blue Bayou –
Pez: Yo Gator waiter over here
Gator: What could I get you
Pez: umm… a burger and some frys
Gator: …
Pez: Hello?
Gator: Call me over when you deiced what you want
Pez: Wait…
Pez: …
Pez: I hate the service here
CuteCookieMaster: Hi, Hi
Pez: Uh Hi…?
Cute: I’m a wittle bay be.
Pez: I see that
Cute: Will you be my duh duh
Pez: No
Cute: Meeney, I goona eat ya
Pez: But babys don’t have teeth
Cute: *Changes hair*
Cute: Now Im an adult, Im going to eat you now
Pez: I reported you
Cute: So
Pez: So your going to get banned
Cute: O RLY?
Pez: yeah
Cute: O RLY?
Pez: yeah
Cute: O RLY?
Pez: yeah
Cute: O RLY?
Pez: yeah
Cute: O RLY?
Pez: Yeah Really!!!
Cute: *Changes hair*
Cute: Crows away
Pez: Strange Much

Part 3:

-In pirates game-
Pirates: Pezdude and Chettersabc
Port Royal: MeMeTiki and Basketball_Star
-Begin-
-Bang-
MeMe: Haha Roflol I just hit you Chettersabc
Chet: Well that is so mean
MeMe: Uh it’s part of the game
Chet: Ugh I hate this part of Vmk, why are there so much mean people, and this baby issue, and taken, and slow games with little credits, and no rides, and mean Cl’s, and dumb host events that take hours and hours to get in then the game closes when it your turn, also these compentitions no one can win if your not a member of Ebay. Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla Flag sitters bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla blal bla bla Inferno bla bla bla!
Pez: Please quit complaining and play
Chet: !!! You can’t tell me what to do! And what about these scammers, Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla blal bla bla Scammers! bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla blal bla bla Last night bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla blal bla bla Unmannered people bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla blal bla Complain Complain Complain!!!
-Bang-
*Chettersabc has just been shot down by her own teammate!*
MeMe: Thanks pez
Pez: No problem
Basket: Gosh I hate complainers so much, I could just complain!
Pez: Don’t make me shoot you
Basket: Sorry

Part 4:
-Main Street-
Yavn: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WHAT A AWESOME DAIEE.
- PezDude walks up -
Pez:ZOMG Yavn Im your biggest fan
Yavn: O RLY?
Pez: YA RLY.
Yavn: O RLY?
Pez: YA RLY.
Random owl: NO WAI!!!
yavn: >_>
Pez: i hav ben wonderin,, wil u fix dc problems?
Yavn: um... erm. maybe?
Pez: yay? :Oranges
- yavn opens the dc monster's cage -
- DC monster eats pez -
yavn: yayz.
DC Monster: RAWWWWWWRR GRWAAARR SNARL*
*Ok, i diced someone, wheres my credits? *
yavn: oh fine..
- yavn gives the DC monster 5000 credits.-
Moral of the story: the DC monster gets 5000 credits every time someone gets d/c'd.. erm.. diced.
Thanks for the part ChrisR

Part 5:
-In Vmk-
When there’s evil afoot one group of 5 will stand there and do nothing.
But they all have one thing to help the players of Vmk…



I take that back
This team consists of…
Pezdude The leader, and the one who try’s to keep everything in order
Pez: Yes, this is a strange game, with even stranger things and I would just like to thank my parents and uhh… That’s it.
Chettersabc The complainer
Chet: What!!! You’re calling me a complainer! That’s so rude! I’m going to complain about it!
Dudetteroxs The short attention span dude
Dude: What I do not have a short atten… ZOMG Plox
VMKJen the eager one
Jen: So is this done yet? Huh huh huh huh. I hope it’s done. I can’t wait for this to be over!!! [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 17 seconds]
And last we have CubbyDoggie the girl who can always find away to break the moment
Cub: This is boring. And I don’t care what your mom says pez, You Do Not Look Good In Those Pants
Well I’m bored now. These players are so pathetic it makes Barney the Dinosaur the best thing in the world! See you soon folks!
-The next day the announcer quit because of his awful job-

Part 6:
-And now for a word from are sponsors-
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-Now back to the show-

Part 7:

-In Jungle Cruise Game-
Jen: Over there Pez! Get its pic! Quick before it gets away. Hurry, hurry, hurry!!! [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 19 seconds]
Pez: Quite! I’m trying to get the pictures
Chet: You can’t tell my friend to be quite. And these dumbo animals go by to fast! And the dumbo 20 credits for winning! Complain!
Nic: This is boring; Pez you’re an awful photographer and Dude you can’t drive to save your life can you?
Dude: Yes I can wat… OMG an elephant!
-Ship takes damage for driving into a wall-
Nic: Why are we even doing this again?
Pez: Duh, Yavn said that if anyone beats his score in this game gets a reward. And I thought if we work together we could do it
Nic: Aye Aye, captain Pez head
-Fifteen hours and 29 games later-
Pez: ZOMG We won We won!!!
Jen: Woot we won, we won, we won, we won, we won, we won! Woot woot!! [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 6 seconds]
Chet: Ouch the noise of your cheers hurt my ears! I must complain now!
Dude: Woot, where’s are priz… Awesome!!! A trashcan!
Nic: Oh here comes Yavn, probably to ban us for disturbing the peace
Yavn: Wow, you guys actually beat my record
Pez: Yeah, now where’s are prize
Yavn: Well I never thought someone would beat it because I programmed it but… um… Your reward is 20 credits for each of you!!!
Pez: Stop right there. We did something amazing! We deserve a bigger reward.
Yavn: Your right, Ill find you something
-Digs in pocket-
Yavn: Ok here are some coupons to the Blue Bayou!!!
Nic: Gee thanks.
-At the Blue Bayou-
Nic: The food here makes me sick, ill pass
Pez: I would like some lobster and pickles
Chet: Are you a certified waiter? Of not I’m going to have to complain
Dude: Oh I would like a piz… Omg you’re an alligator… oh wait I knew that already
Jen: I would like some fry’s, no wait some tacos, nah, Ill have the chicken legs, oh wait Ill have water, no wait Ice tea and… [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 18 seconds]
Gator: …



Gator: I can see your not ready yet, call me over when you’ve made a decision!
Pez: Hey guys, have I told you I hate the service here!!!

Part 7:
Pez: Hey, sorry we haven’t played in awhile…
Cub: Yavn… Well… Let’s just say The Dc… monster was… accidentally let loose
Pez: And it was not are fault at all
Cub: Wait what? Yes it was! You’re the one who left the key in the l…
Pez: Hehe, don’t listen to here, you know how she tells lies all the time
Cub: No I don’t
Pez: Shut up
Cub: Sheesh you don’t have to be so rude.
Pez: Well for today’s story I though we should show you what we think about the new Fantasy Land! Starting with the Peter Pan ride!
~~~
Pez: Peter Pan, I always loved that ride a WDW, and the VMK staff did an awesome job recreating it.
Pez: I love the scene where you can fly over the city it was so beautiful!
Pez: I can’t wait for what you think of next
~~~
Cub: Well it was ok.
Cub: Not your best work Vmk
Cub: There was no originality, it was dull, and the sound effects were off.
Cub: All and all, you could do better.
~~~
Chet: Well, I expected more for 10 credits! I must go complain now!
~~~
Jen: It was so awesome. You were like in this amazing boat, flying, and you were all like WEEEEEEEEE!!! Then you go whoosh into never land and it so awesome and then… [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 11 seconds]
~~~
Dude: Oh yeah the ride… So your like on this ship thing, in the beginning your going through the… OMG… I have feet!!!
~~~
Pez: Hmm… Yeah, so on to the Alice ride.
~~~
Pez: I thought this was brilliant.
Pez: I don’t live by DL, so this was my first time experiencing the ride… and I loved it!
~~~
Cub: It stunk! That’s all!
~~~
Chet: The pots in the tea party room sounded and looked like they were shooting at us!
Chet: That’s not child friendly, now to complain!
~~~
Host Hula: Don’t worry about ears hurting, well stop before it even starts…
Jen: [You typed to fast! You can chat again in 89 seconds]
~~~
Dude: Well my favorite part was when… Did you know firefighters… I like pie!
~~~
Pez: Well that’s it for now. Hope to see you soon.

Part 8

Pez: Yo, guys, I’ve come to proudly announce the arrival of our new team member! ReMix!
ReMix: [: )]
Pez: Oops I forgot to tell you that ReMix’s keyboard is broken except for a few keys, so for now he talks in smiles.
ReMix: [; )]
Pez: The bad part is, I haven’t introduced him to the rest of the team… I hope they like him…
-Later-
Pez: Hey guys, I want you all to me are new partner ReMix
Nic: Lol, He’s ugly!
ReMix: [> , <]
Jen: Omg, omg, omg, He’s not talking is he hurt is he nice! Omg, I’m scared. He may over run the world and go… [You typed to fast! You can NEVER chat again]
ReMix: [0 : )]
Chet: He’s using smiley’s to communicate. I don’t like people who don’t use proper grammar… I Must Complain!
ReMix: [o . 0]
Dude: Yo, Man what’s up… OMG You have feet too!!!
ReMix: [- ___ -]
-Later-
Pez: !!! I think they <3 you!
ReMix: [@_@]

Part 9
Pez: Bored
Cub: Your always bored
Pez: Yeah so!
ReMix: [$_$]
Pez: That’s a great idea! Come on gang; let’s go get some credits!
Crazycrazyfrog: Hi! What are you doing?
Pez: Um… Hi? Were going to get some credits
Crazy: Why?
Pez: So we can become richer
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Because we want to be able to afford new stuff coming out
Crazy: Why?
Pez: So we can sell it in the future for a bigger profit
Crazy: Why?
Pez: So we can make more money
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Would you just be quite and leave us alone
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Because you scare me, and are getting on my nerves
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Because of your constant questions. Now Vamoose!
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Go!
Crazy: Why?
ReMix: [- , -]
Crazy: Why?
Pez: Do you want to join us?
Crazy: Sure!
Pez: Yes, you didn’t ask a question
Crazy: Why?
Pez: ARG!

Part 10

-In GroovyGrl’s room-
Groovy: Wow, Pez, thanks for coming and bringing friends to my Vmk Idol room!
Pez: Not like we have anything else to do
Groovy: Well anyway lets get this thing started!
-Later-
Groovy: Hello everyone in the audience! And Welcome to VMK Idol
Groovy: First of all say hello to our three wonderful judges… Pez!
Pez: Hello all!
Groovy: Chet!
Chet: Just start the dumb thing!
Groovy: And ReMix!
ReMix: [: )]
Groovy: Ok, and now for a first contestant…
Groovy: Cub!!!
Cub: Hey, everyone, listen up, your attention if you please
We wanna give you a warning
'Cause I found out this morning
About a dangerous, insidious computer virus
If you should get it, an email with the subject, 'stinky cheese'
Better off protecting your chances
Under no circumstances, should you open it
Or else it will…
Decide to give you a permanent wedgie,
legally change your name to Reggie,
Even mess up the pH balance in your pool

Pez: Wow… Nice, You just got to love Weird Al songs!
Chet: Wow, you really stunk at that song. You were off the whole song, your voice sounds like a duck call, and your dress is horrible!!!
ReMix: [ $ _ $] *I loved it*
Groovy: Thanks for that awesome performance Cub… Next we have…Jen
Jen: Buy it, use it, break it, fix it,
Trash it, change it, mail - upgrade it,
Charge it, point it, zoom it, press it,
Snap it, work it, quick - erase it,
Write it, cut it, paste it, save it,
Load it, check it, quick - rewrite it,
Plug it, play it, burn it, rip it,
Drag and drop it, zip - unzip it,
Lock it, fill it, curl it, find it,
View it, coat it, jam - unlock it,
Surf it, scroll it, pose it, click it,
Cross it, crack it, twitch - update it,
Name it, rate it, tune it, print it,
Scan it, send it, fax - rename it,
Touch it, bring it, Pay it, watch it,
Turn it, leave it, stop - format it.
[You typed to fast! You can chat again in 17 seconds]

Pez: You have a wonderful way of words…
Chet: That was an awful song to begin with, and you made it worse!
ReMix: [ : - )] *You sang perfectly!*
Groovy: And now please welcome…Dude!
Dude: Wake up!
Miss Toadstool, it is I, your one and only King,
Bowser Koopa
I'm a turtle as you see
A little slow and a little green
But I'm the whole I'd say
Supa Dupa
Princess Toadstool, I know you're frightened
But if you knew just why you're here
Your fear would just be heightened
So let's just say
Ignorance is bliss
Well, I'd wait to be a bummer
I've brought you here to bring me plumbers
You know those brothers
Oh, what's their name?
Oh yes, Mario and Luigi
Just sound of them makes me queasy
I'd like to take that monkey wrench
I'd play my own game
Prince Toadstool, you're so misguided
I've never found of bookworms
But then again this one does make good Mario bait
I can't wait
Ignorance is bliss!

Pez: Lol, that’s an awesome song!
Cub: Bleck, songs based off of video games, what a shame!
ReMix: [# _ #] *Encore, Encore! *
Groovy: And now for are last contestant… Crazy
Crazy: Fish heads, Fish heads
Rolly polly Fish heads
Fish heads, Fish heads
Eat them up, Yummm
Fish heads, Fish heads
Rolly polly Fish heads
Fish heads, Fish heads
Eat them up, Yummm
In the morning
Laughing, happy
Fish Heads
In the evening
Floating in the soup

Pez: Man I love it when crazy sings!
Chet: Why???
Pez: Because when he’s singing he’s not asking questions…
Crazy: Um… Pez… What’s the next verse?
Pez: Excuse me while I go smash that brick wall… With my face!
-Later-
Groovy: So everyone, the judges are done voting and it’s time to reveal the winner!
Pez: It was a really close match…
Chet: I didn’t like any of them
ReMix: [: ) ] *It was a hard choice!*
Pez: Yes… Well we would like to announce the winner now…
Pez: The winner is…
-Everyone Dc’s-
Vmk Staff: Please Pardon our Pixie Dust. Vmk will re-open soon.

Pez’s Notes:
1. ReMix’s computer is still broken, the *Insert text here!*’s are just what the smilys mean. I
2. If you want to listen to your songs, the list is as followed.
Cub: Virus Alert, By: Weird Al
Jen: Technologic, By: Daft Punk
Dude: Ignorance is Bliss, By: Jellyfish
Crazy: Fish Heads, By: Barnes and Barnes

Part 10 (Part 1)
???: Yavn… Yavn… Yavn… How long until you realize you can’t continue
Yavn: I will not give up, to the likes of you
???: Oh, you think your such a strong man… Well you aren’t
Yavn: You will never win…
???: Oh come on now. I already hacked the system… now it’s time you paid
Yavn: No, Please don’t!
???: Oh do you want a second chance…
Yavn: If it’s one more chance to stop you I’ll take it…
???: Good. I hacked your friend list and Pm’ed your little friend
Yavn: Pezdude! Is he ok?
???: Yes, anyway I set him some tests. If he fails them… You’ll pay…
Yavn: …
~~~
Pez: So, Remix, your keyboard is fix!
Remix: Yep!
Pez: Sweet…
Pez: Oops hold on, I got a pm!

Pez: OMG
Remix: What?
Pez: Round up the gang, We have a mission to complete…

10 (Part 2)
Pez: Dear Pezdude and Co.
I have your beloved Vmk Producer and Friend. He has miss-used his rights and now must pay.
I have given him a second chance… and that is you.
I have set a series of tasks for you. Complete all of them before Vmk’s closes for the day,
You get Yavn back, and he won’t pay. So up to the challenge?
Good. Because you don’t really have a choice.
Your first task is win a game of capture the flag. The only members allowed to play this time around are Pez, and Cub.
The clock is ticking…
Cub: So that is exactly what the message said
Pez: Yep…
Chet: It sounds to easy… I don’t like this
Pez: But this is Yavn! We don’t want anything to happen to him
Chet: Why not?
Pez: I don’t know, but we have to save him.
Remix: Ya, whatever, Lets go!
-Elsewhere-
???: And that’s their first task
Yavn: LOL, LOL, LOL
???: What’s so funny!
Yavn: Wow, your hard, task is winning a game of capture the flag. Trust me, I’ve seen them play, they’re going to zoom past this one.
???: This task is not for failing… It’s for the lost of time
Yavn: What?
???: Another way that you would have to pay is if time ran out.
Yavn: Yeah…
???: Well I have learned how to hack staff messages!!!
-Back to Pez and Co.-
Pez: Hey look a staff message
Staff: Attention Vmk, Credits won in Capture the flag are now tripled. But this is only for a short time… So hurry
Pez: Oh shoot…
Pez: It’s been 3 seconds and all the rooms are full!

10 (Part 3)
Pez: Yes! Were finally in pirates. Come on Cub let’s play!
Pez: …
Pez: Cub?
*New Private Message Received*
Cub: PEZ WHERE ARE YOU!
Pez: I’m in the pirates lobby
Cub: So am I!
Pez: … Oops I think were in different lobby’s!
Cub: You think!
Pez: Just calm down! I’m coming to your lobby
*Your are in line behind 2,000,396 players*
Pez: -.-
*2 hours later*
Staff: Attention Vmk Members the extra credit’s for pirates is over!
Pez: Yes I’m finally in cub hurry!
*Pez enters game*
*Cub enters game*
Pez: … We need two more players
Cub: Well if you didn’t notice everyone else left
Pez: Well let’s call Remix and Chet
Cub: We can’t remember! The thing said that only we could play…
Pez: Oh yeah… so what do we do know…
Cub: Hm…
*Later*
Cub: Simon says dance!
Pez: Simon said dance the last twenty five times!
Cub: Well what else can we do?
CuteCookieMaster: Hi, Hi
Pez: Oh don’t tell me that’s who I think it is!
Cute: Hey! Yoo the mean man oh won’t be my duh duh
Pez: And you’re the annoying child that is about to get banned!
Cub: No wait, … umm cute… We’ll be your parents if you play pirates with us!
Cute: KK!
*Cute Joins*
Pez: Um… Cute, Do you have any friends that want to join so we can start?
Cute: Yes Yes! A boy I met in a box on main street!
Pez: … Um, Ok, can you call him!
Cute: Already did Duh Duh!
Acesoccer: Hi Hi!
Cute: Hey bother
Pez:… can we just get on with this!
Cute: Fine!
Pez: Ace please…
Ace: Don’t call me ace… Title me Cookie!
Pez: Cookie?
Ace: Yes?
Pez: Just join the game!
*Ace joins*
*Game Begins*
Game: Ready… Go!
Cute: *Shoot’s twenty gold cannon balls at cub*
Game: Cub has been sunken
Cute: You like them? My old mummy gave them to me!
Pez: Oh Shoot…

10 (Part 4)
Game: *Pez has been sunken! Round one goes to Port Royal*
Pez: Ouch… That was mean Cute and Ace!
Ace: COOKIE!
Pez: What Ever!
Game: *Round Two! Begin!*
Pez: Cub, I’ve got Cute, Just watch out for Ace!
*Pez Kamikaze’s Cute, and they both blow up*
Pez: Ha! What now!
Cute: That was mean you big fat meeny!
Pez: Well I don’t care about you! Or Ace either!
Ace: COOKIE!
Pez: SHUT UP!
*Cub destroys Ace, Round two goes to Pirates!*
Game: *Ready Begin*
Cub: Bring it on Ace
Ace: For the last time TITLE ME COOKIE!
Cub: No!
*Both ace and cub shoot at the same time killing each other*
Pez: Well it’s just you and me now cute!
Cute: … I go do do on your deck!
Pez: Ew… But for that you’re going down!
Pez: *Shoots 3 cannonballs at Cute bringing her down to 1 health*
Cute: *shoots a single gold cannonball at pez bringing him down to 1 health*
Pez: Uh Oh! *Starts sailing around a tower looking for more ammo*
*A few minuets pass and both cute and pez are still circling around the tower trying to shoot each other*
Game: 5… 4… 3… 2…
*Suddenly the tower shoots a cannon at cute destroying her*
Pez: Wow… How ironic was that?
Game: *And the winners are pez and cub*
-Back in the pirates lobby-
Cute and Ace: Whaaaaa… Your so mean I hat you both!
Pez: Oh and by the way kids… I reported you both!
Cute: Come on Ace lets go away from these bad people *Crows*
Ace: IM COOKIE! *Crows*
Cub: I hate babies!
*Suddenly Pez received a new private message*

10 (Part 5)
*This spot is dedicated to one of my good VMK friends Cub, who got in trouble with her mom and won’t be joining us again… A moment of silence please… Ok on with the story*

10 (Part 6)
Private Message: Well done kid, you made it pass the first test but time is running out fast! To get your Yavn now you must get through the 5 levels of evil I set up! Now BEGONE!
*Everyone Dc’s*
*Everyone sign’s in again in a strange narrow room*
Cub: Where the heck are we?
Remix: Hey guys look! A sign… “Welcome foolish players to the 5 levels of evil! Please keep everything on your body… ON your body at all points… That means NO wiping your nose on the walls, we just repainted them. Oh yeah, and welcome to floor 1 of evil… The Notorious Green Team!
Dude: The Green Tea… Cool, It’s written in green text!
Pez: Um, Nice find their Dude
Chet: So where’s this green team so I can complain about them.
Green Speed: Right here sweet thang
Chet: Love is not allowed in this game… COMPLAIN!
*Suddenly four players dressed in the green super hero suits appeared along with a piano being played by Giant Brownies*
Remix: ZOMG! THEY HAVE A PIANO… AND SINGING PASTRIES!
Green Dog: Yes… Evil aren’t we…
Pez: No… just strange
Green Shock: Hey Were not strange…
Cub: Says your mom
Green Time: Oh no you didn’t…
Cub: Oh yes I did…
Green speed: Then bring it! We can beat you easily as 1.. 2.. 3..
Brownies: *Singing* Abc…, Easy as 123, Or as simple as…
Green Speed: Shut up you annoying baked goods!
Green Dog: Now just try to get past us… Lets us show you are real power
Remix: And how do you get that power?
Green Time: We conjure the power from deep inside us…
Brownies: *Singing* I have got this feeling, deep inside of me, Girl you just don’t realize what you do to me, when you hold me in your arm’s so tight you let…
Green Speed: I though I told you to shut up!
Brownies: So continue?
Green Speed: No, no, no!
Brownies: *Singing* No, no, no! Stick to the stuff you now, if you want to be cool follow one simple rule, don’t mess with the flow no, no, Stick the status quo…
Pez: Are these guys really that pathetic.
Cub: Yeah I think so…
Remix: Quick guys, before they realize where still here.
*Quickly Pez and Co. Sneak out of the room to the next floor of evil*
Pez: Look another sign… “Welcome to the second floor of evil, please if you have the chance visit our Evil Snack bar located to your right. Oh yeah, and welcome to the Dc monster’s domain.”

10 (Part 7)
“The following is a disappointing action scene…”
Jen: OMG, it’s the Dc monster with the teeth and the powers and the rawer and the scary and the…[You typed to fast! You can chat again in 17 seconds]
Remix: He.. Hey… Pez, what’s that sign on the cage say?
Pez: … Out for Lunch be back in 30 minuets…
The whole gang: O_O;
*Pez and Co. follow the path to the next room*

10 (Part 8)
Pez: “Welcome to the third floor of evil. Bathrooms are located to the right and bay be changing areas are to the left. The floors of evil are not responsible for any lost or stolen items. Oh and Welcome to Ban monsters room. The Monster who can ban anyone in three seconds or less!” Wow what a nice sign…
Cub: So where’s this monster?
Ban Monster: *From Behind Cub* Rarwar geraaaa, shhh!
Chet: OMG, you scared me… COMPLAIN!
Ban Monster: Now to ban you al… *Giant piano drops from the ceiling and crushes the monster*
Green Speed: Hi guys, you think you could get away so easily! Well think again…
Remix: Oh great it’s lameo and the lamets!
Green Dog: WE ARE NOT LAME!
Dude: Are you sur… I’ve got nothing
Green Time: Well feel a wrath… Time trap
*Everything Freezes except the Green Team*
Green Shock: Ha ha, since we are all so powerful that time stop will last so long you will never make it past us… EVER!
*Three Seconds Later*
Pez: Wow… you must have so much power… the time stop is already over!
Cub: Yeah! The only thing bad about your group are those awful brownies!
Chet: Where are they anyway? I want to complain about them…
Green Time: We ate them because they didn’t listen to use. You aren’t either so prepare to pay the price!
Pez: … so what happened?
Green Shock: We can’t here you! We are now ignoring you so when it gets to quite you’ll snap and quite vmk! We’re so diabolical!
Cub: Wow I’m quaking in fear! Lets go guys.
Green Dog: Hey get back here… I mean *Silence*
*Pez and co. burst out laughing and leave to the next room*
Green speed: Wah! It’s not fare! We worked so hard on that evil plot and it failed!
Green Time: Hey what’s that sound?
Ban Monster: So you’re the guys who dropped a piano on me?
Green Dog: Uh… Uh… No?
Ban Monster: Liars!
*The Green team was attacked and banned from Vmk*

10 (Part 9)
Chet: Hey another sign… “Have you liked are free trip through evil so far? If so please make a credit donation. Every credit give will go towards my pocket… I mean, more improvements to this cave of evil! Welcome by the way to my staff room. All your own staff members hacked to the dark side… Watch what you say!
Remix: Well that is strange… Ah! Oh it’s only you Host_Lilly, you scared me!
Lilly: *Looks Like a Zombie* Helllllloooo… Remix…
Remix: Um you’re scaring me Lilly, and you look kind of ugly with green skin…
Lilly: Your making fun of some one because of how they look! BAN!
*Remix was banned*
Cub: OMG that’s so scary…
Hula: *Looks Like a Zombie too* Dictionary dancing religious words! BAN!
*Cub was banned*
Chet: Banning people for such little things is wrong! Complain!
*Pez and Co. race towards the exit*
Phinny: * I think you get the Zombie picture about now!* Running from the law? Well Ban’s for you all then! Ban! Ban! BAN!
*Everyone was banned… Except for one!”

snowgalsnow
03-22-2007, 10:46 PM
Keep Going Keep Going

Skylar
03-22-2007, 10:57 PM
Hah! That is a very funny story indeed :D

LRGoalie
03-22-2007, 10:58 PM
By any chance, did you read VMKChrisssy's and my story, Trouble in the Mushroom Kingdom?

CubbyDoggie
03-22-2007, 11:01 PM
XD Geico. Niice..

spot41414
03-22-2007, 11:04 PM
Bring Chettersabc in. XD

I can be the complainer! Hehe.

~Spotty

VMKJen
03-22-2007, 11:27 PM
Oh, I like this story! I hope that girl gets banned.

PezDude
03-23-2007, 12:30 AM
Part 3 is now up staring Chettersabc as the complainer

Dudetteroxs
03-23-2007, 12:32 AM
LOL, these are pretty funny. Write on. ;o)

CubbyDoggie
03-23-2007, 12:35 AM
Nice, Pez. XD

PezDude
03-23-2007, 12:53 AM
Suggetions and Ideas are welcomed

ChrisR
03-23-2007, 01:40 AM
well um.. i know..
heres a idea: OMG I WANT FREE PL0X. ;D

spot41414
03-23-2007, 01:42 AM
Exaggerate much? XD


I like my part.

Complain, complain, complain!

~Chetters

PezDude
03-23-2007, 01:44 AM
Part 4 is up, Also thanks for letting me you your stuff ChrisR

ChrisR
03-23-2007, 01:45 AM
no problemo.
amazing what i can do with a 3 sentence idea, huh? lol.

PezDude
03-23-2007, 01:46 AM
Exaggerate much? XD


I like my part.

Complain, complain, complain!

~Chetters

Don't make me shoot you XD

spot41414
03-23-2007, 02:54 AM
^Bang bang.


Gaah. X_X
(Make more. XD)

~Spotty

PezDude
03-23-2007, 03:08 AM
Any ideas? Or does anyone want to make an apperance in this?

VMKJen
03-23-2007, 12:35 PM
Any ideas? Or does anyone want to make an apperance in this?

Oh, I want an apperance! :pinkbun:

Dudetteroxs
03-23-2007, 09:42 PM
Could I make an appearance? ^^

PezDude
03-25-2007, 02:34 AM
Part 5 is up

Dudetteroxs
03-25-2007, 02:37 AM
So true... I do have a short attention- OMG CHEESE.

- Roxs : o)

Thanks ^^

padme123
03-25-2007, 02:47 AM
i want to see part six

PezDude
03-25-2007, 09:49 PM
I need another name for this so if anyone wants to make an apperance they can. Also they'll be a staff member

CubbyDoggie
03-25-2007, 09:59 PM
I ruin.. moments. Yay? XD Awesomeness.

MadCrazyTurtle
03-25-2007, 10:19 PM
veryy nice short stories :) soo funny :P

PezDude
03-25-2007, 10:25 PM
Fine then I need a name for another charecter

VMKJen
03-25-2007, 10:42 PM
Fine then I need a name for another charecter

Wow, Its so true! I am eager, hehe. Here is a vmk title you could use: JenifferJen.

spot41414
03-25-2007, 11:09 PM
You can use Vitani, my other vmk character..

PezDude
03-26-2007, 01:25 AM
Part 6 is up

PezDude
03-26-2007, 02:13 AM
Part 7 is up!!!

CubbyDoggie
03-26-2007, 02:19 AM
Lolz. XD Awesome!

Dudetteroxs
03-26-2007, 02:40 AM
LOL, what is that thing in part 6?!

Anyhow, I love part 7. "OMG you're an alligator... wait... oh yeah, I knew that!"

VMKJen
03-26-2007, 11:58 AM
Haha, I talk to much! Hehe but I always get 'your talking to fast' I only get that because I type to fast ;)

PezDude
03-26-2007, 10:21 PM
Oh, yeah, If anyone gets offended by any of this Ill gladly change it.
I kinda want to keep the cast if thats allright with all of you. Also I NEED IDEAS!!!

spot41414
03-26-2007, 10:30 PM
Vitani can be the questioning one. XD


Chettersabc can become depressed and stop complaining for two or three episodes. :o

CubbyDoggie
03-26-2007, 11:23 PM
And Cub will continue to ruin the moment.

ChrisR
03-26-2007, 11:36 PM
hum.. how about this..
- idea, no actors yet -
in the fantasyland coutyard..
1: hey dude you look like a sufer
2: yea, the new hair is awesome
- 3 comes up -
3:OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG UR TROY OMG OMOMG OMGOMGOMGOMG OMG
2:...
3: omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgogmomgomgomgomgomgom gogmomgomgomgomgom liek u de best! cane i be wit u?
2: um.. no.
3: criez
- 3 runs away -
2&1: o_o;


(btw, pez, your commercial is the same as my profile pic.. just larger and not animated. lolz.)

PezDude
03-26-2007, 11:43 PM
Wow I never knew that Lol, anyway, what does sufer mean

spot41414
03-26-2007, 11:44 PM
I'm going to add to that and suggest the actors. ;)

- idea, no actors yet -
in the fantasyland coutyard..
Chet: Hey, dude, you look like a surfer.
Pez: yea, the new hair is awesome
- 3 comes up -
CuteDoggiePuppy:OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG UR TROY OMG OMOMG OMGOMGOMGOMG OMG
Pez:...
Cute: omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgogmomgomgomgomgomgom gogmomgomgomgomgom liek u de best! cane i be wit u?
Pez: um.. no.
Cute: criez
- 3 runs away -
Pez: o_o;
Chet: Oh goodness, I hate this. The taken issue, the bad grammar.. Complain, complain, complain..

ChrisR
03-27-2007, 02:15 AM
Wow I never knew that Lol, anyway, what does sufer mean

whoops, i made a little typo. lolz.
surfer* :D

VMKJen
03-27-2007, 11:33 AM
I've got one! - idea no actors -

- in frontierland hub, just walking around -
Guest. Hi
Pez. uh hi
Jen. omg omg omg who is that omg omg omg omg
Guest. uh... im nice
Pez. ok...
Jen. omg omg omg he's nice!
Chet. I hate when people who dont know come up to us!!

Skylar
03-31-2007, 01:17 AM
- in frontierland hub, just walking around -
Guest22968594. Hi
Pez. uh hi
Jen. omg omg omg who is that omg omg omg omg
Guest22968594. uh... im nice
Pez. ok...
Jen. omg omg omg he's nice!
Chet. I hate when people who dont know come up to us!!
Guest22968594. Wait..i though i knew you..?

PezDude
04-05-2007, 12:59 AM
Sorry, I havn't posted in a while... But maby I can put something together tonight, involving force 5's look at the new fantesy land

SherrytheFairy
04-05-2007, 02:32 PM
OMG. XD

Your stories crack me up. LOL.

PezDude
05-03-2007, 01:13 AM
Sorry for the big deley... Blame school, Anyway part 7 is up!

CubbyDoggie
05-03-2007, 01:48 AM
LOL. Nice Pez!

MasterMario
05-03-2007, 02:07 AM
It's so funny!!! I couldn't stop laughing my head off!! Good job!! Write more!! Can i be in it?? I wish

PezDude
05-03-2007, 02:48 AM
For some reason I feel like adding CaptainOrland or ReMix as a charecter ;)

BunnyToast
05-03-2007, 02:59 AM
Wow these were hilarous. My brother and I was cracking up and he doesn't even play VMK. If I think about something I'll make a little part for you :)

PezDude
05-06-2007, 01:04 AM
Um... Part 8 is up!

crazycrazyfrog
05-06-2007, 01:11 AM
Lol, make me in one of them!

MasterMario
05-06-2007, 02:30 AM
OMG!!! I just love it!! and I'm not ugly... I can't stop laughing!!!

Dudetteroxs
05-06-2007, 02:52 AM
LOL, awesome two newest installments. :D

Scarlet_Princess
05-06-2007, 03:20 AM
Pez, that is so awesome!! I loved it!! Makes me want to be in a story (*hint hint*) just kidding.Keep writing!!

SherrytheFairy
05-06-2007, 11:45 AM
Omg! HILARIOUS! XD

PezDude
05-06-2007, 08:11 PM
Part 9 is up!

MasterMario
05-06-2007, 09:42 PM
Write more!! Why? Cuase I love it! Why? It'd funny! Why?

SVU_Girl_Elphabet
05-08-2007, 10:54 PM
omg LOLZ! I love "Why?" "Why?" "Would you like to join us?" "Yes" "Aha you didn't aska question!" "Why?" "Ahhh!!!:mad: " LMHO (LMHO= Laughing my head off)

crazycrazyfrog
05-08-2007, 11:07 PM
Haha! Great Stuff!

You actually almost came close to capturing how annoying I really am!

Lol, keep me in!

Here's an idea... Pirate Tree House. Make the complaner offended by Blackheart, and then I'll just keep talking to blackheart, wondering why he isn't talking back to me. Lol. Just an idea...

VMKJen
05-09-2007, 01:43 AM
Haha its funny, But aww I can never talk again!

PezDude
05-11-2007, 10:51 PM
Sorry, I've been really busy with 7th grade. But mabey I can dish out something little for chapter 9 later tonight. Hint the word Maby

crazycrazyfrog
05-11-2007, 11:11 PM
Okay. It's so awesome. I'll be waiting, Pez....Why am I waiting?

Why?
Why?
Why?
Why?
Why?!

GenieLovato
05-11-2007, 11:30 PM
LOL Funny!!

PezDude
05-11-2007, 11:37 PM
Im not sure if this will be done by tonight but heres a littel hint...


Celebrity Spider - Paula Abdul

Celebrity Spider - Simon Cowell

Celebrity Spider - Randy Jackson
~~~~

Celebrity Spider - Cubbers

Celebrity Spider - Chetterbac

Celebrity Spider - Pezdude

crazycrazyfrog
05-12-2007, 12:35 AM
Ooh. I have this one figured out... This is going to be themed all around the idea of....

Increasing Cardboard Production.

Knew it, I was right!


Hope I'm in this one!

PezDude
05-12-2007, 12:40 AM
sample 2:
Pezdude: Aw... I love it when Crazy sings
Cub: Why?
Pezdude: Because he's to busy singing to as questions
Crazy: Um... Whats the next verse again?
Pez: Excuse me while I got hit a brick wall... With my face

crazycrazyfrog
05-12-2007, 12:44 AM
Ah...

I got it entirely wrong...

It was about trying to Sell more Laptop Computers to Charity. I'm so smaaaa-aart.


(You know I'm messin' wit you, man...)

PezDude
05-12-2007, 12:45 AM
Ah...

I got it entirely wrong...

It was about trying to Sell more Laptop Computers to Charity. I'm so smaaaa-aart.


(You know I'm messin' wit you, man...)

You are !!!

(:P)

MasterMario
05-16-2007, 12:39 AM
When will you post the next part?

VMKJen
05-18-2007, 08:24 PM
Please add the next part!

PezDude
05-18-2007, 11:25 PM
Bleh... Sorry, Last days of school are hetic... And probley tonight I have to "WORK" at the 8th grade dance... Bleck... Ill try to get one in soon.

spot41414
05-18-2007, 11:28 PM
That's so-o me!

~Spotty

Grooveygrl
05-18-2007, 11:46 PM
Lol I'd love to make an appearance :).

VMKJen
05-19-2007, 12:03 PM
Can you post the next part now?

PezDude
05-19-2007, 10:10 PM
I finally have some free time!!!!
But I'm going to go swiming first....


Possibal line from the story...

Pez: Excuse me while I go smash my virtual head into the virtual brick wall

crazycrazyfrog
05-19-2007, 10:13 PM
Why?

crazycrazyfrog is obviously the best character in the story. :D

CubbyDoggie
05-19-2007, 10:32 PM
Pez, you keep saying Nic for Cub. XP'

"Lol, he's ugly!"

MasterMario
05-20-2007, 12:20 AM
Will I be in the next part??

PezDude
05-20-2007, 02:01 AM
I finally had some free time!!! Part 10 is up!

MasterMario
05-20-2007, 02:45 AM
Ok... That part was ok. When will my keyboard be fixed?!

PezDude
05-20-2007, 02:51 AM
Ok... That part was ok. When will my keyboard be fixed?!

Soon... Maby...

MasterMario
05-20-2007, 02:56 AM
When will the next one be up?

crazycrazyfrog
05-20-2007, 03:07 AM
Fish Heads. Nice.

Dudetteroxs
05-20-2007, 05:01 AM
Ignorance IS bliss. :D xD Nice part!

CubbyDoggie
05-20-2007, 03:25 PM
Virus Alert! Wooooot! XD

SVU_Girl_Elphabet
05-25-2007, 12:43 PM
Yay! New Chapter!

PezDude
05-25-2007, 07:07 PM
Part 10 (Part 1)
Is up...

CubbyDoggie
05-25-2007, 10:18 PM
Part 2. Now. I command you. Rawr.

MasterMario
05-25-2007, 10:50 PM
AWESOME!!! My keyboard is fixed!!! Part 2 please!

PezDude
05-25-2007, 11:03 PM
Bleck, Today is my last day of school so it's hetic. If tommorows better, Ill post the next part.

MasterMario
05-26-2007, 12:16 AM
Lucky you!! My last day is June 22nd

PezDude
05-27-2007, 12:45 AM
10 (Part 2) Is up!

MasterMario
05-27-2007, 01:05 PM
Cool! I like it

SherrytheFairy
05-27-2007, 01:40 PM
Oh my God!
This is awesome so far!
Keep going! :)

xigbar
05-27-2007, 01:42 PM
WOW! I love these! - Can I be the ????? person :) -

Mizz.V
05-27-2007, 01:50 PM
the one where the blaaaaa happened as funy and the yavn one was even funnyer! I bet u the dc monster is rich know!!

Scootz
05-27-2007, 04:10 PM
LOL, these are FUNNY story... things xD :D

PezDude
07-12-2007, 11:14 PM
Well I kinda got bored with this but I'll finish it for the fans...

10 (Part 3) is up!
And if you didn't know the baby in this part is the same one in the earlyer part!

SherrytheFairy
07-12-2007, 11:35 PM
Hilarious...at least finish chapter 10! ;) I'd like to see what happens. LOL.

CookyHalie
07-12-2007, 11:37 PM
If you still need ideas maybe have jen try to win a contest on the radio, she calls and wins but celebrates by talking to much so she couldn't claim her prize.. just an idea:D

VMKJen
07-12-2007, 11:46 PM
Great story! I love it soo much :)

PezDude
07-13-2007, 01:28 AM
If you love it so much tell me in Rep *Wink* *Wink*


Lol, just kidding!

crazycrazyfrog
07-13-2007, 01:35 AM
Great addition.


Box in Mainstreet. LOL.

PinkPinkNicole
07-13-2007, 01:49 AM
this is brilliant!
i don't really read any other stories here on vmkf but this one is amazing ^^

MagicMonkeys
07-13-2007, 02:02 AM
Nice story,anyways.

VMKJen
07-13-2007, 02:24 AM
Please post more! - does puppy dog face -

Scootz
07-13-2007, 01:55 PM
Please write more! I relally want to see it! :Tongue:

OstrichSam
07-13-2007, 02:11 PM
xDDDDD
This is great. I can't wait to see more.

PezDude
07-13-2007, 02:48 PM
I got this from wiki... You might want to read it for an upcoming joke!

The term "breaking the fourth wall" in theatre generally means when a character is showing his/her awareness of the audience. The term originated from Bertolt Brecht's theory of "epic theatre" that he developed from (and in contrast to) Konstantin Stanislavski's drama theory. Most often, the fourth wall is broken through a character directly addressing the audience, although the same effect can be achieved by breaking character, through dialogue, or by the characters interacting with objects outside the context of the work (e.g. a character is handed a prop by a stage hand).

VMKJen
07-13-2007, 03:10 PM
Ok well can you post the next part? Pretty plzzzz......

PinkPinkNicole
07-13-2007, 07:45 PM
I got this from wiki... You might want to read it for an upcoming joke!

The term "breaking the fourth wall" in theatre generally means when a character is showing his/her awareness of the audience. The term originated from Bertolt Brecht's theory of "epic theatre" that he developed from (and in contrast to) Konstantin Stanislavski's drama theory. Most often, the fourth wall is broken through a character directly addressing the audience, although the same effect can be achieved by breaking character, through dialogue, or by the characters interacting with objects outside the context of the work (e.g. a character is handed a prop by a stage hand).
They did that once in That's so Raven. Raven said "It's not like anyone's watching us" then turned to the camera (hinting at the audience).

So yea, i'm looking foward to it... those always make me laugh :D

PezDude
07-13-2007, 08:27 PM
Not my favorite but whatever!
10 (Part 4) is up!


Also If I don't wright as good it's because I quit Vmk a while back!

SherrytheFairy
07-13-2007, 08:29 PM
This is hysterical! XD

*crows*

Skylar
07-14-2007, 03:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! More :)

VMKJen
07-14-2007, 03:09 AM
I loved it!! Write more :)

Scootz
07-14-2007, 01:12 PM
It was great! xD

I need more! :Tongue:

PepsiOwns
07-14-2007, 03:29 PM
I wanna see the rest!

TiggerDude
07-14-2007, 07:25 PM
Can you add a part where me and some of my friends on VMK come in?

Me:
Speedsonic

Friends:
ChrisRocs
sillydavey
hawkboy

We all act like superheroes, here's our hero names in VMK!

Speedsonic:
Green Speed

ChrisRocs:
Green...... Dog? ( Just Green Dog. )

sillydavey:
Green Shock

hawkboy:
Green Time

We will also appear in VMK Movie Novel on VMKF, along with a villain, the Ice Queen ( Add her to the story. She isn't real in VMK. )

Also add the Brownies. If they were real in VMK, everybody would get off. They sing too much and it's annoying.-.-

PezDude
07-14-2007, 09:20 PM
I going to change your thing...

Green Speed, Green dog, Green Shock, and Green time are hired by ??? To stop Pez and Co.

GoodPolarGirl
07-15-2007, 04:08 AM
What is the new pm!!i love that story!! keep going keep going keep going! [you typed to fast, you may NEVER type again] (love that part)

PurpleAmy
07-15-2007, 04:58 AM
Those were so funny! That was great!

TiggerDude
07-15-2007, 06:23 AM
I going to change your thing...

Green Speed, Green dog, Green Shock, and Green time are hired by ??? To stop Pez and Co.
Please include the Brownies. They're annoying and stupid. That makes it funnier.

VMKJen
07-15-2007, 06:51 AM
Please write more soon :)

TiggerDude
07-15-2007, 08:23 PM
Please write more soon :)
It's ok, he will. Did you see his latest post? My VMK character's gonna be in it! And the always annoying, made up characters, the Brownies. In fact, the Brownies should be singing in battle. Lol.:D

LaxGurl1029
07-15-2007, 09:02 PM
Haha Thats Funny And So Right! :-)

PezDude
07-23-2007, 02:13 AM
I'm not going to give you a lame excuse for the wait so I'll tell you the truth. For some reason it's be stroming on and off here. So when the storms done I turn on teh computer and it starts up again. Now my mom is strict at time and when ever it's thundering I have to have the computer off...

Anyway I'm still working on the designs and the funnys for the Green team and the brownies... You may see alot of flash songs... The lama song, The waffel song, the egg song ex.

Also when ever I think of the Green team I always rember these creepy guys from I show I watched when I was little...
http://www.emulationgalaxy.co.yu/images/manga/DBZ/Ginyu%20Team.jpg

Yes... There stricking poses... -.-

Skylar
07-23-2007, 11:47 PM
Ahh! Can I be in the next part?? :D

VMKJen
07-23-2007, 11:52 PM
Please write more :)

PezDude
07-25-2007, 02:00 AM
New excuse= Harry Potter just game out... What more do I need to say!

Also 10 (Part 5) is out, It's short but has a good point to it!

MasterMario
07-25-2007, 02:11 AM
10 (Part 5)
*This spot is dedicated to one of my good VMK friends Cub, who got in trouble with her mom and won’t be joining us again… A moment of silence please… Ok on with the story*

do do dooooo.......... We will miss you Cub!

Skylar
07-25-2007, 02:26 AM
Wow. Short. Sweet. And to the point.

AdventureGirlGo
07-25-2007, 02:30 AM
Haha! I love it! More please!!

PezDude
07-25-2007, 02:31 AM
For the full story about Cub go here ----> http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=121609

P.s. New chapter sometime tommorow!

PezDude
07-25-2007, 08:00 PM
10 (Part 6)
Sadly It's not my favorite...
Pez points if you know all the songs ;)

TiggerDude
07-26-2007, 11:37 PM
I'm evil... but I'm happy the Brownies are there! When I wrote VMK Movie Novel, I made them sing a song I made up and they went like "No...." and it had the breaks in it... but I deleted it off the computer. So much for hard work.-.- I got the link.
And also, you should make Green Time freeze VMK and take Green Team to the 2nd floor when they noticed that they left, and then I'm all like "just shu... oh, hi. Now back to what we started." Then the Brownies come up with the piano and start yodeling. Then Green Shock's all like "Do I have to put you in the microwave? Or should you shut up and let me eat you?" Rest is up to you. You don't have to do it, though.

PezDude
08-07-2007, 01:56 AM
Wow... Minds think alike! I didn't read your post but I wrote part of what you said in it! Also I've been busy with web witch is a bunch of soon to be 8th graders helping soon to be 6th graders with there first time at middle school!

3 or 4 parts added!

PezDude
08-08-2007, 02:20 AM
... No comments... Well I guess I'll start procrastinating... I mean Writing the next part!

Edit: OH SHOOT! I just noticed I didn't used the 4th wall joke ... Darn't!

TiggerDude
08-09-2007, 08:02 PM
Speedsonic : I'm banned? Curse you ban monster!
Ban Monster : Then why did you drop the piano on me?
Speedsonic : It was accident!
Ban Monster : I don't care!
Speedsonic : Shut up!

Good thing he isn't actually banned... and I have a good part for the 5th floor...
Sign : Welcome to the 5th and final floor of EVIL! Watch out for the most powerful player in VMK... ME!
( ??? appears and is now known as the Ice Queen )
You can do this part
Green Team goes out of hypnotism.
You can do this part

All that's going on is that the Ice Queen hypnotized the Green Team and fights the last person ( Which I think is PezDude ) and that person wins. Green Team also gets un-banned.

PezDude
08-09-2007, 11:40 PM
Nah... Sorry I don't think I can work that in... And here the twist... Pezdude was banned ;)

TiggerDude
08-16-2007, 08:47 PM
Nah... Sorry I don't think I can work that in... And here the twist... Pezdude was banned ;)
Then who was not banned??? That's weird...

PezDude
09-27-2007, 02:23 AM
I can't write a proper ending! I have no time to do so but I wanted people to see it as peopel are leaving all the time so heres the quick version...
...
...
Or we can have a little compention on who can make the best ending.
Sorry no prizes.
But if you want your chapter veiwed it must...
-Explains who was the last one (The one not banned)
-Who ??? Is
-Explains if Yavn Pays or not?
-Some humor
-Hot girls... I mean written like the chapters before
-You have fun making it...

Remember this is just for fun. Particpation is not required. Maby later I'll post that fast version of the real ending!

TiggerDude
09-29-2007, 04:27 PM
I can't write a proper ending! I have no time to do so but I wanted people to see it as peopel are leaving all the time so heres the quick version...
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Or we can have a little compention on who can make the best ending.
Sorry no prizes.
But if you want your chapter veiwed it must...
-Explains who was the last one (The one not banned)
-Who ??? Is
-Explains if Yavn Pays or not?
-Some humor
-Hot girls... I mean written like the chapters before
-You have fun making it...

Remember this is just for fun. Particpation is not required. Maby later I'll post that fast version of the real ending!
My head is messing up my ideas... can you include the unhypnotizing part? Green Team is not evil. If they were then my character would be ???.

runends
09-29-2007, 07:02 PM
well pez is banned the cub is alive yay!!

PezDude
09-29-2007, 08:37 PM
Jen is not banned ;)