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AlphaGoldFrog
03-11-2007, 10:13 PM
http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/pokebalopenl.png

If any of you remember i had made a comic before called Sir Totodiles Adventure. This is a better comic that kept the main character. I hope you enjoy reading!

Preloge (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/preloge.png)(SP?)

EP1 (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/EP1.png)

EP2 (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/EP2.png)

EP3 (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/EP3.png)

EP4 (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/EP4.png)

EP5 (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/EP5.png)

Also if anyone was wondering i used gimp and paint to make everything.

GatorGreen
03-11-2007, 10:37 PM
Great comic, but your grammar could use some work.

Preloge should be prologue.

Preloge (http://i57.****************/albums/g209/GoldFrog_2006/preloge.png)(SP?)


Nameed should be named.

Disagrease should be disagrees.

In episode 2, Lugia says "he was here a can see the marks in the dirt."

Tooned should be tuned.

But your backgrounds and effects are great.

AlphaGoldFrog
03-14-2007, 03:56 AM
bump! when i get a post i'll make another episode:)

AlphaGoldFrog
03-15-2007, 11:49 PM
Bump adding the next episode!

AlphaGoldFrog
03-17-2007, 06:21 PM
bump! I will make another ep soon

AlphaGoldFrog
03-21-2007, 11:23 PM
Bump i'll make the next episode soon. :)

AlphaGoldFrog
03-23-2007, 03:26 AM
Bump!! :)

kryon2
03-23-2007, 06:03 AM
nice story

AlphaGoldFrog
03-25-2007, 10:29 PM
Sorry I have not updated in a while I have been very busy, anyway here are 2 new episodes!

AlphaGoldFrog
03-29-2007, 09:42 PM
bump! The thread.

pinprophet
03-30-2007, 04:30 AM
cool i really like it, nice effects!

AlphaGoldFrog
03-30-2007, 05:27 AM
Thanks, yeah i like the effects.