View Full Version : Adventures Through VMK:Book 1


PepsiOwns
03-09-2007, 12:16 AM
Chapter 1: The Beginning.
The sun peeks over the horizon.Jake, a boy with blonde hair and blue eyes, wakes up in his Briar Guest Room.The room is depicted with basic furniture:A table, 4 chairs, a bed, a side table with a lamp on it, and a few pictures on the wall.He walks out of his room and drives in his green car to VMK Gallery.He notices his friend: Haley, a brown haired girl with green eyes who always wore pinktails."Hey, Jake!" Haley said."Hey, Haley."Jake replied with a smile.They began talking about different stuff as the day drifted by very quickly.It was now 5:30.Jake and Haley said bye.Jake rode in his car to his room, unlocked the door, and when he opened the door, he dropped his keys and gasped.

Chapter 2: A Newcomer?
Standing in Jake's room was a man in a black suit and a top hat with purple hair."It's amazing..." The man said."What's amazing?"Jake asked.The man stood there.Jake wanted to see his face but the man just faced the other way.The man paused then walked forward saying, "It's amazing how when you think you have a friend, but you really don't..."Jake saw a problem with this.3 problems actually.1:He had no clue who this man was, 2: He had no clue how he got in, and 3:He had no complete idea what the man was talking about.Jake's mind went blank for a couple seconds.Then, he said,"Why are you here?"The man replied with a strange laugh, and left.Unable to see his face, Jake was puzzled.Haley walked in at this point.Jake told her what happened and Haley had a surprized look on her face."That man was in my room before too..."Jake looked at her."Tell me what happened..."

VMKJen
03-09-2007, 11:23 PM
Wow more please

PepsiOwns
03-10-2007, 12:17 AM
I'm adding more as I'm writing.So far I have 10 chapters.I'll add the rest soon.BTW, BUMP!
~Inferno~

cutiemorgan
03-10-2007, 01:18 AM
This story has gotten my attention.. Need to have at least a chapter a day posted lol. Inquiry minds wanna know

PepsiOwns
03-10-2007, 01:47 PM
Chapter 3:Haley's Story
"It happened about 2 or 3 weeks ago.I was in my room, sitting alone, reading a book.The door creaked, and then opened.I thought I locked it.The man entered the room and said the same thing, 'It's amazing how you think ya gotta friend, yadda yadda yadda.'Then he just left."Jake stared at Haley."So, you're saying he said the same thing?"Haley looked at Jake puzzled and replied,"Didn't I say that?"Jake said,"Yea, just asking again.Did he say ANYTHING else that could be helpful?"Haley answered,"No...Should we ask a staff member in her room, say, HOST_Hula?"Jake looked at her."OK.It would be a good idea."

PepsiOwns
03-10-2007, 02:04 PM
Scratched:Chapters 4-10 (They were cheesy...sssh, don't tell)
Written:New chapter 4.
~Inferno~

VMKJen
03-10-2007, 03:18 PM
Please post chapter 4

CuteGirlAcey
03-12-2007, 02:31 AM
Very good ( Too short )

VMKJen
03-12-2007, 10:31 PM
Please, Please post more!!