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PrincessKala
02-28-2007, 12:14 AM
Hey! I wrote an ode to Disneyland, Because I had to write an ode to something, for school. I Chose Disneyland! I LOVE Commetns, so Tell me what you think! Here it is:

ODE TO DISENYLAND:
Disneyland, the happiest place on Earth you see,
It's the wonder fullest place in you can be,
Full of magic, surprises, and fun.
Really.....it's cool for everyone!
Wishes, and smiles, and tears of joy.
It's fun for every girl and boy!

Mickey, Minnie, and Tinkerbell too!
At Disneyland, there'll be fun for me and you!
Fireworks, rides and Disney Characters, galore!
You'll have magic and fun and so much more!

Tell me how you liked it!

Hope ya did! :)

~Carrie

suitealex
03-01-2007, 09:03 PM
Hey! I wrote an ode to Disneyland, Because I had to write an ode to something, for school. I Chose Disneyland! I LOVE Commetns, so Tell me what you think! Here it is:

ODE TO DISENYLAND:
Disneyland, the happiest place on Earth you see,
It's the wonder fullest place in you can be,
Full of magic, surprises, and fun.
Really.....it's cool for everyone!
Wishes, and smiles, and tears of joy.
It's fun for every girl and boy!

Mickey, Minnie, and Tinkerbell too!
At Disneyland, there'll be fun for me and you!
Fireworks, rides and Disney Characters, galore!
You'll have magic and fun and so much more!

Tell me how you liked it!

Hope ya did! :)

~Carrie


wow i am suprised disney does not even use it

GREAT WORK

PrincessTmkttt
03-01-2007, 09:26 PM
Awesome! Question, what is an Ode? (;), I've lost my mind, it probobly is something simple! >_<)

PrincessKala
03-01-2007, 11:40 PM
Wow, Thanks Everyone!

Here is the Definition of an Ode: Ode (Classical Greek: ὠδὴ) is a form of stately and elaborate lyrical verse. A classic ode is structured in three parts - the strophe, the antistrophe and the epode but different forms such as the homostrophic ode and the irregular ode exist.

AND IT IS ALSO

A lyric poem of some length, usually of a serious or meditative nature and having an elevated style and formal stanzaic structure.

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